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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 25 février 2017 at 15:04:02

Artist: nano
Title: MY LIBERATION
Source: チェインクロニクル~ヘクセイタスの閃~
Tags: mugiwarasekai karia paraiso album chain chronicle hekuseitasu haecceitas no hikari op cut ver
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2685kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Download: nano - MY LIBERATION
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Image Easy - irohas
Image Normal - irohas
Image Hard - irohas
Image Insane - karia
Image Reviving - irohas

  • cutver by me, do not steal without my permission
  • thanks to Haruto for the banner <3
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nano!!!!!111!
21:06 Irohas: dude dude!! can i have your opinon/testplay about https://osu.ppy.sh/s/566537 please ;w;
21:06 Kalibe: dude dude!!
21:06 Kalibe: ofc
21:06 Kalibe: LOL
21:06 Irohas: xDD
21:06 Kalibe: the same song
21:06 Irohas: thank you :D
21:07 Irohas: oh? you're mapping the same?
21:07 Kalibe: milan style?
21:07 Irohas: dunno :o
21:09 Kalibe: NICE
21:09 Irohas: almost..
21:09 Kalibe: ya
21:09 Kalibe: ;w;
21:09 Irohas: thanks :3
21:09 Kalibe: 00:14:006 (3,4,5) - these patterns
21:09 Kalibe: reminds me of milan style
21:09 Kalibe: xd
21:10 Kalibe: 00:50:637 (6,1) -
21:10 Irohas: I didn't really study his style but maybe o:
21:10 Kalibe: somehow i almost misread it
21:10 Kalibe: i though it's just a circle xd
21:11 Irohas: arf I think you're right
21:11 Irohas: stack leniency: 3
21:11 Kalibe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7208959
21:11 Kalibe: ?
21:12 Irohas: mmh i don't know since i wanted to have a similar spacing than 00:48:743 (1,2) -
21:13 Kalibe: at least do 00:51:269 (1) - sliderpath visible
21:14 Irohas: sure!
21:14 Kalibe: don't want to map start?
21:15 Irohas: I don't know how to map D:
21:17 Kalibe: 00:53:006 (1) - why nc?
21:17 Kalibe: kinda useless
21:17 Kalibe: :c
21:18 Kalibe: and that's all
21:21 Irohas: oops D:
21:21 Irohas: thank you !!
21:21 Irohas: you can post in thread if you want kd :3
21:23 Kalibe: ok
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HabiHolic wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/552060

lololol

xd
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kul maep dud eksdee
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[A L P H A] wrote:
kul maep dud eksdee

thx eksdee
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ready for mods
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#modreq
Sorry for bad English

Reviving
01:08:164 (1,1) - i think. If you did like Akatsuki Zukuyo? like
yeah.. it's only this.. The rest stayed perfect (for me)

and its the only "extra" map because.. i only modded Extra maps.. sorry ;-;
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JoaoGMR wrote:
#modreq
Sorry for bad English

Reviving
01:08:164 (1,1) - i think. If you did like Akatsuki Zukuyo? like
yeah.. it's only this.. The rest stayed perfect (for me)

and its the only "extra" map because.. i only modded Extra maps.. sorry ;-;


ok wtf dud
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General
fine

Reviving
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*00:04:058 (4) - If you add NC here should be better since you will be matching with what you did before like this 00:00:743 (1,1) - then you can remove this one 00:04:532 (5) -
*00:20:321 (4) - same as above, but here I think you can just add NC to match with what you have here 00:22:848 (1) -. Like, I know that this sound isn't really in affluence here 00:20:321 (4) - but it kinda appears and is good to emphasize
*00:56:637 (1) - the NC here is kinda unnecessary, I would just remove it to make your pattering 1-4 more reasonable
*00:58:532 (1) - missing NC here?
*01:11:637 (2,6) - I think you can stack them without problems (this is not a problem at all, just a suggestion)

Karia's Insane
*00:05:243 - this sound is kinda triggering me, I mean there's nothing really reasonable to that 3/4 tick, I would just add an inherit point with like 15% on vol. or something to silence that
*00:53:400 (4) - what? you were following the instrumental then you just put this reverse slider on ticks where it just fits to the vocal or something, I think you know it's tricky and a bit awful, I recommend you to pull it to the red tick 00:53:400 (4) - I mean 1 tick before.

Hard
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disable widescreen support
*00:45:900 (5,1) - any reason to stack them? I mean you were doing things like these more spaced and I think you should keep it since there's also a strong sound on (1) which can be more audible with the vocal. Consider to make them also spaced as you've made here 00:47:164 (4,1) -

Normal
AiMod
disable widescreen support
Cool difficulty

Easy
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disable widescreen support
Nothing really relevant to say here

overall is good
good luck!
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@SrSkyPlayer : Fixed all, thansk for modding!

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: unchainyourlife.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57821
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:MY LIBERATION
TitleUnicode:MY LIBERATION
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:Irohas
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:チェインクロニクル~ヘクセイタスの閃~
Tags:mugiwarasekai karia paraiso album chain chronicle hekuseitasu haecceitas no hikari op cut ver
BeatmapID:1204670
BeatmapSetID:566537

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.68
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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00:02:006 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure about using a 1/4 jump in this calm section. Just using a 1/1 slider on (2) would fit more in this section imo. Besides, the spacing didn't felt to be properly indicating the rhythms in the current design.
00:05:321 (1) - You'll want to double think about using an extended slider towards a spinner. Since spinner technically isn't a clickable object, the slider end somewhat has a stronger emphasis than 00:05:795. Just using a 3/2 slider would make more sense imo.
00:36:743 (3,4,1,2) - There is a strong increase of volume this section in the song. The way you've expressed this part felt a bit too weak to properly reflect the song. There was a volume change, but it quite felt not enough.
01:22:848 (1) - Since the drum ends at 01:22:690, I don't think ending your rhythm here was a good idea along the song. If you want to express the vocals, fully expressing the ones at 01:23:164 - 01:23:321 - 01:23:637 would've reflect the song better than just mapping the start of the vocal.
01:26:637 - Here exists an intrument sound unlike 01:24:111. You'll want to express the difference in your map to properly reflect the song.
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SrSkyPlayer wrote:
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*00:04:058 (4) - If you add NC here should be better since you will be matching with what you did before like this 00:00:743 (1,1) - then you can remove this one 00:04:532 (5) - I think NC on 00:04:532 (5) - is necessary since the SV is not the same
*00:20:321 (4) - same as above, but here I think you can just add NC to match with what you have here 00:22:848 (1) -. Like, I know that this sound isn't really in affluence here 00:20:321 (4) - but it kinda appears and is good to emphasize it's more an inconsistency with 00:12:743 (5,6) - so fixed this one
*00:56:637 (1) - the NC here is kinda unnecessary, I would just remove it to make your pattering 1-4 more reasonable it's to show the emphasis of the song
*00:58:532 (1) - missing NC here? oops
*01:11:637 (2,6) - I think you can stack them without problems (this is not a problem at all, just a suggestion) okay

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disable widescreen support okay
*00:45:900 (5,1) - any reason to stack them? I mean you were doing things like these more spaced and I think you should keep it since there's also a strong sound on (1) which can be more audible with the vocal. Consider to make them also spaced as you've made here 00:47:164 (4,1) - emphasis is on 00:45:743 (4) - not on (5)

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disable widescreen support
Cool difficulty thanks!

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disable widescreen support
Nothing really relevant to say here

overall is good
good luck!

thanks!
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Reviving. sonnyc big fan
00:02:006 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure about using a 1/4 jump in this calm section. Just using a 1/1 slider on (2) would fit more in this section imo. Besides, the spacing didn't felt to be properly indicating the rhythms in the current design. for sure, fixed
00:05:321 (1) - You'll want to double think about using an extended slider towards a spinner. Since spinner technically isn't a clickable object, the slider end somewhat has a stronger emphasis than 00:05:795. Just using a 3/2 slider would make more sense imo. okay stopped it on the downbeat, i think it should be better
00:36:743 (3,4,1,2) - There is a strong increase of volume this section in the song. The way you've expressed this part felt a bit too weak to properly reflect the song. There was a volume change, but it quite felt not enough. i tried to make the spacing between 00:37:374 (1,2) - bigger cause i don't really want to make a jump in that kind of part imo
01:22:848 (1) - Since the drum ends at 01:22:690, I don't think ending your rhythm here was a good idea along the song. If you want to express the vocals, fully expressing the ones at 01:23:164 - 01:23:321 - 01:23:637 would've reflect the song better than just mapping the start of the vocal. good point, fixed this one, made a slider which stop at 01:22:769 - to express more the intensity of the clap
01:26:637 - Here exists an intrument sound unlike 01:24:111. You'll want to express the difference in your map to properly reflect the song. There's no really sound on it imo, I do prefer to keep this one since I didn't make this sound clickable in the first part, as 00:20:953 - for example.

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