This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 11, 2013 at 9:52:24 PM

Artist: Vertical Horizon
Title: Everything You Want
Tags: alternative rock 90s
BPM: 93.93
Filesize: 19400kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.73 stars, 187 notes)
2. Hard (4.81 stars, 419 notes)
3. Normal (3.31 stars, 264 notes)

Download: Vertical Horizon - Everything You Want
Download: Vertical Horizon - Everything You Want (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap submission for Pending in a loooong time. Took a while to make this too because of timing issues and multiple difficulties, but I love this song, so...
10/2: FINALLY got off my ass and replaced the audio with a smaller file, resnapped the notes and checked for proper placement, and also deleted the .osb file. Will check again soon to make suggested changes from earlier.
10/8: Made wmfchris's fix and adjusted a screwed-up slider length in Hard.
10/10: Made The 08 team_Bourdon's changes.
11/2: Improved the timing, fixed a symmetry issue in Easy, made Normal's difficulty settings a little easier, and made Charles445's recommended changes.
12/10: Made lepidopodus's changes, tweaked some sounds, and added stuff to shorten the last break by half.
1/1: Made changes suggested by Mok and IceBeam.
2/10: Made dkun's changes.
3/20: Made Neko_Ray's changes.
4/10: Made changes suggested by narakucrimson and OzzyOzrock.
8/31: Made karenying's changes.
10/7: Made most of artpiggo's changes.
3/5: Back from the dead! Let's get this ranked.
5/28: Made many changes suggested by gyt and replaced video with a better-quality one he found. Thanks!
6/18: Made some changes suggested by Doodley.
8/12: Made changes suggested by HanzeR.
11/17: After a looooong break, I redid the timing and addressed many critiques left by Lizsig, Leorda, & Gens. My quest to get this map ranked begins anew!
12/8: Made changes suggested by Static Noise Bird and TheVileOne.
1/12: Made some changes suggested by Nickname128.
1/14: Made some changes to Easy suggested by Natsu.
1/25: Made some changes suggested by Kodora and replaced everything in Hard due to new timing changing the spacing.
2/11: Added some tags and slightly changed the offset per ztrot's recommendations.

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit.
You should probably remove the audio from the video to reduce filesize
320 bit rate mp3, please re-encode to a lower bitrate.

[General]
No Tags?

[Timing]
I'm not sure about the timing, dont know if it needs 4 red lines or not since i'm not good at multi-BPM
Why do you have so much kiai? X_X you should probably end the kiai section where the map ends.

[Hard]
01:01:483 - This break is too long.
01:20:646 (1) - This slider could use some more work, i dont like how the curve is barely a curve...
02:51:736 - This break is too long.

[Normal]
Didn't find anything here

[Easy]
00:21:240 (1) - No new combo?

[Overall]
Really amazing beatmap, they weren't kidding when they told me you are a very skilled mapper, you can have this star~

[hard]
1:22:598 (2) down 2 grids

I only find one spacing mistake and everything is fine. star~

Hi~
i only give some suggestion~

General
BPM:93.87
maybe better than 187.96??

Normal
01:20:683 (6) - this slider is ugly

Hard
01:18:449 (4) - right 1 grid?
01:18:768 (5) - ^
01:19:087 (6) - ^
01:19:406 (7) - ^
01:37:034 (5) - up 1 grid?
01:37:353 (6) - right 1 grid?
01:37:673 (7) - ^
01:37:992 (8) - ^
01:38:312 (1,2) - ^
01:56:835 (8,9) - right 1 grid?
01:57:794 (1) - ^
03:02:035 (8,9) - ^
03:02:995 (1) - ^
03:33:850 (8) - up 1 grid?

Nice song~
Star~~~~~~

This map is everything I want.

Normal:
I think the approach rate is too high for a Normal.
01:20:683: Remove this slider and put a spinner?
01:22:662: Finish KIAI here.

Hard:
Nice job.

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

This map is everything I want.

Normal:
I think the approach rate is too high for a Normal.
01:20:683: Remove this slider and put a spinner?
01:22:662: Finish KIAI here.

Hard:
Nice job.

If you like it, can you give it a star?

Sorry, forgot about that.

General
The timing is way off, but I can't find a good number for it.
The breaks are way too long.

Easy
01:15:895 New Combo?
02:07:056 ^^?
02:14:388 Remove New Combo
02:15:028 New Combo
02:16:629 Remove New Combo
02:17:270 New Combo
02:19:191 Remove New Combo
02:20:152 New Combo
03:12:267 ^^?

Normal
00:29:453 New Combo
01:35:437 Remove New Combo
01:35:916 New Combo

Hard
00:28:975 New Combo?
01:40:547 New Combo
01:50:768 ^^
02:11:208 ^^
02:11:847 Remove New Combo

Good luck!

Overall
- Delete .osb file and full-submit.

Easy
00:21:793 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:29:937 (4) - How about moving 2nd middle point of the slider some grids down, to make this more symmetric?

Normal
01:41:481 (4) - I just felt return point is somewhat strange to hear, how about something like a slider from 01:41:481 to 01:42:119 & a circle in 01:42:439 & a circle in 01:43:078?
02:26:240 (5) - How about moving a grid left?
02:31:033 (4,5,6) - ^

Hard
01:07:625 (4,5) - a grid up?
01:56:829 (8,9) - a grid right?
02:59:487 (8,9) - a grid left?
01:58:747 (4,5) - a grid up?
03:03:961 (4,5) - a grid down?

Kinda failed modding, I assume. Maybe I can find several issues with that 'move-1-or-2-grid-modding', but some mappers hate that...

Hiiiii :3

[Easy]
Why do not use Biggest Circle Size?
01:15:610 - Add a hitcircle with New Combo.
01:15:929 (1) - Remoe New combo if you do ^.

For the rest is okay for me. Good Job

[Easy]
01:07:945 (2) - 1 grid left to make it more symmetrical?
01:15:610 - Add a note?
01:34:294 (2) - Beginners may click too early,move it back to 01:34:135 / Add a note to 01:33:975.
02:06:742 - Sounds much better with this note.
03:11:951 - ^

[Normal]
As long you have another easier difficulty,you may improve your Normal,making it a little more interesting.I'd add next notes:
00:24:188 - Add a note?
00:24:668 - ^
01:43:397 - ^
01:46:431 - ^
02:38:873 - ^
02:41:430 - ^
02:44:147 - ^
02:45:585 - ^

Fine otherwise~

[Hard]
01:34:135 - Add a note here and move 01:34:294 (5) to 01:34:454?
02:14:898 - Add a note?
02:20:968 - ^

Nice map~
Star!

Star

Hey, an English map! o/

Hard
00:25:785 (6) - The slider isn't symmetrical, maybe it'd look better if you re-did it?
01:58:747 (4,5) - Are these two supposed to be a grid lower from 3?
02:46:703 (8) - What is this I don't even...

Normal
01:21:628 (6) - This slider could be constructed better.
02:22:406 (7) - I'd say move this one grid to the left to make it even along Y, but it'd mess up the prior combo. :/

Easy
Nothing to report.

Overall
I couldn't really find anything wrong with the map, and the Hard is pretty fun to play!
Have a star.

Everything seems fine to me. Only few nazi placing issues... I won't point them though. All I can do is leave a star.

aaaa... neko-mod! :3

Easy
01:39:405 (2): to 01:39:245
01:44:515 (2): to 01:44:355 - 01:44:994

Normal
02:19:850 (X): Circle ?
02:38:554 (1): If you change by Slider? (02:38:554 - 02:38:714)

its all, good song~

Hi~

[General]

1. I must say that at some points, the objects felt a little off in time. But it must be just my imagination lol~
2. Good, good. The mapping is very intuitive. I like it. Nothing to say here.

[Easy]

1. 24:348 (1) - I guess this could look more symmetrical:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 29:937 (4) - I like how a finish sounds in the beginning of this Also, slider points can always be placed more symmetricaly an in a more tidy way. But oh well you're an Elite Mapper and the result is the same, so never mind xD
3. 01:06:667 (1) - Moving this one grid right would: 1) Make a perfect triangle with the two previous circles, 2) Make this symmetric on the y axis. Consider doing it.
4. 01:33:496 ~ The hitsounds seem a bit odd, or random at some places on this part (before the kiai. I'd use clap - whistle - clap - whistle most of the time, every 2 beats. Like, in (1), use a clap, then in (2), whistle in the beginning, and clap in the end. And just keep on going like that if you like this~
5. 02:09:301 (1) ~ I smell copy&paste here xD (Never mind this, just saying )

[Normal]

1. 02:00:986 (6) - :3?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:06:199 (6) - ^ Heh

[Hard]

1. Good.

So have a star.

[Easy]
Hmm, copy pasting is generally looked down upon but it's fine.

If anything at least rotate the copy pasted parts to make it different.
[Normal]
Same as above.

Also, when making an arc-like slider, use five points rather than four. It looks better.
[Hard]
I see that here you copy pasted, but flipped horizontally. Heh.

Well, it's all fine. Starred.

Hi

Easy
01:36:690 (2) - I suggest remove whistle(end of slider
02:11:859 (1) - ^
03:37:359 (1) - start at 03:37:518 ?

Normal
02:21:448 (6) - New combo?

fine
don't kud

Hard
To tell you the truth, I think 20 second-long break is too much (for players who don't download video.) i don't know.
01:03:154 (8,9) - move left a little bit. I think
01:54:270 (8,9) - (right)
02:08:021 (8) - becuz at 02:08:661 (1) - use finish, so remove clap to reduce sound volume overload.
02:08:021 (8,9,10) - slope pattern (from left to right) is require here cuz the rhythm goes tense to the next combo.
02:39:353 (2) - don't think it should be straight slider here, maybe add some curve like (1) since the rhythm in this part goes very simple.
03:02:044 (8,9) - move left a little bit. I think
03:19:302 (1,2,3) - zigzag pattern here, it will make players get relaxed since they just pass line-up stream.

normal
add note at 00:24:668 (2) - since it has vocal, if there isn't this note, players may get confuse to click since there is vocal but no note to click. and put this note to same position as (3).
00:37:763 (3) - don't think straight-up slider is fit. since the sound used and rhythm goes soft here.
00:39:679 (5) - add some curve in it, same reason^
00:41:116 (1,2,3) - I think these three should arrange in goes-down pattern (but not straight just a little zigzag) since the rhythm goes a bit tense here.
01:03:473 (5) - try to move this to the same place as 01:04:112 (1) - since it's first kiai that makes me want to stop and listen what to listen next.
01:06:028 (5,1) - ^
01:36:690 (3) - add some curve
03:29:529 (4) - move it to same position as 03:29:848 (5)

easy
fine.

(lol thing) I think that you wanna map to be correspond with the name of artist, but I think you can map "Everything You Want".
or maybe this is the way you want to map most. i don't know.

8/10

You requested in my queue but I cant seem to find anything. :I
Its well mapped in my opinion.
Sorry I couldnt help ;/
But try to find a better quality video.