1. 5.167569% (5 stars, 307 notes)
2. Banana's Hard (4.67 stars, 213 notes)
3. Dekaane's Normal (3.72 stars, 126 notes)
4. Gamu's Easy (2.26 stars, 91 notes)
5. Insane (5 stars, 363 notes)
6. Normal (3.91 stars, 119 notes)

AzerFrost wrote:

Hi, from my queue.
How could I not mod my favourite theme ever? :O
Here goes nothing.

5.167569%

1. 00:01:287 (1) - Remove.
2. 00:09:300 (1) - EXTREMELY out of place. Was this done to rush that part?
3. 00:34:921 - The gap here really kills the flow
4. 01:27:001 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack these really, it would be better if they were spread around. (rotate 90 for each one maybe?)

Insane

1. I'll start by saying this map is extremely hard to read all around. Don't add notes where they're not needed.
2. 00:01:939 (2) - Remove fix
3. 00:13:865 (2) - ^ fix
4. 00:19:734 (3,4,5,6,7) - Rework, this is out of place and loads of unneeded notes. fix
5. 00:24:206 (4) - Snap 1/4, don't stack on previous note. sry, i felt it's suitable
6. 00:25:604 - If you want to put more 1/4s in, at least finish this stream by adding a note here.
7. 00:32:219 (9,10,11) - Very hard to read on the first play, mostly because of the skin. fix
8. 00:36:132 (6) - Remove.
9. 00:48:616 (8,9) - Remove.
10. 00:54:672 (1) - Remove.
11. 00:57:747 (3,4,5) - Doesn't fit the song at all. I don't think so...
12. 00:58:306 (7) - Snap at 00:58:492 or make the slider end 5% volume. fix
13. 00:59:796 (2) - Snap 1/2 or make the slider end 5% volume. This doesn't fit the song at all. I felt it sounds well now
14. 01:00:635 (5,6) - Remove.
15. 01:03:244 (2) - ^
16. 01:03:896 (4) - Why a slider?
17. 01:07:902 (16) - Remove. fix
18. 01:08:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hard to read and doesn't fit the song. fix
19. 01:09:672 (1,2,1,2) - ^ no
20. 01:12:467 (5,6) - A silent slider? really? This is unrankable. fix
21. 01:15:262 (2) - Snap 1/2.
22. 01:16:101 (6) - Remove
23. 01:19:175 (2) - Snap at 01:19:548 , remove circle. no
24. 01:20:480 - Missing a note here. change to a slider
25. Stop abusing 1/4 on a song that is clearly not made for it, please.
26. 01:20:852 (2,3,4,5) - Oh god, change this. fix
27. 01:21:970 (8) - Remove Clap fix
28. 01:25:697 (6,7,1,2) - Change or distance apart. Hard to read. no it's nice
29. I'll be honest and straight forward with this, this map has very slight chances of being ranked in it's current state. You aren't a bad mapper but this is very clearly not designed for this style of mapping.

kuronotsubasa wrote:

Hi! From my queue.
我是一个新的MODDER，因此你可以选择是否听从我的建议。这完全没有问题。
General

SPOILER

首先，请设置 timing-set current position as preview point 到时间点 01:01:846 - （即为歌曲的高潮）。
这个设置了歌曲预览时所播放的音乐的起始。
其次、TIMING的BPM的倍率最多只能三种、你的BPM种类太多了，请精简。

Insane

SPOILER

即使是INSANE 请不要全篇的spacing都是不同的……一些规律性的、时间间隔相同的地方请适当用上一些DS！拜托了╮(￣▽￣")╭ 感觉有点过于随性（天马行空？XD）了，打起来比较不顺
00:06:318 - 直到此时间点前的一系列四方跳感觉很让人眼花、即使我换了AR9照样不管用（特别是紫红色的NOTE、和背景颜色相似！）。可能是皮肤或者颜色的缘故……我尝试把皮肤屏蔽掉之后再打发现就好了很多。
00:10:418 (2,3,4,5) - 此处 2和3、4 很近，4却和5很远。这种间距对于时间的间隔来说是不合理的。
00:13:958 (2) - 个人觉得这里不重叠会更好
00:20:852 (1,2,3) - 个人觉得此处时间间隔相等，应该距离相等
00:21:225 (3,4,5) - 同上、距离间隔相等或重叠，让人更易于掌握节奏。
00:21:225 (3,6) - 此处的重叠并不美观
00:22:716 (3) - NC
00:24:206 (4,5) - 此处用了1/6？感觉不恰当……我做了一下尝试：http://puu.sh/2EWO2.jpg
00:24:579 - 加一个HIT
00:26:070 (2) - 此处HIT放在这里看不清
00:27:095 (6,7) - 此类HIT都要同距离，比如和00:25:418 (9,10) 、00:55:511 (1,2,3) - 等等，这些都是比较细节的东西、要谨慎
00:36:132 (6) - 移除HIT
00:48:616 (8,9,1) - 距离不均
01:00:169 (3,8) - 建议8的尾段与3对齐
01:00:915 (7,8,9) - 距离
01:05:200 (5,7) - 点对齐
01:12:560 (6,7,8) - 音效过于突兀，一下子没有声音了=。=|||好怪
01:24:393 (3) - 这一点如果要重叠的话……其实最好不要重叠、因为之前的点的痕迹还没有完全消去，会觉得花……
01:25:883 (7,1,2) - 7 与1,2 的距离隔开一些

5.167569%

SPOILER

打了很多遍表示很棒！提不出什么问题啦XD 抱歉。我也从这些排布中学到了很多东西！

结束。差不多就是这样了XD 感觉INSANE问题比较多，另一个难度堪称完美的说！XD
Have a good time!

Banana wrote:

http://puu.sh/2Ge1N.zip
hard done 这次学的婆婆..于是音效不知道该怎么弄了 总之能把自己糊弄过去（喂喂喂..

Nagae-Iku wrote:

Red: Unrankable issues or Highly recommended
Black: Opinions

[General]
01:01:844 - 设定为Preview
Kiai time不一致 请检查normal和insane难度

[Dekaane's Normal]
OD-1 HP-1
00:54:950 (1,2) - Try not to use overlapping note in this diff
00:56:068 (4) - ^
00:56:440 (1,2) - ^
00:57:558 (4) - ^
01:01:099 (4) - ^
01:08:925 (1,2) - ^
01:15:074 (3) - ^
01:20:850 (1,2) - ^
01:26:813 (1,2) - ^
01:01:472 (1) - new combo
01:28:117 (4) - distance snap problem

[Banana's Hard]
01:05:200 (3) - 建议

其余感觉没什么问题>_<

[Insane]
insane给我的直观印象:无节操乱 特别是开头的那些四方跳 还需美化
Strack leniency与其余难度不一致
00:13:399 (8,9) - 过于牵强
00:19:921 (4) - 建议改成单点
00:24:020 (3,4,5) - 遮挡导致很难读图
00:29:983 (5) - 稍微有点丑 修改下
00:31:660 (7) - 这note是怎么拉的……
00:59:610 (3) - 建议改成单点
01:08:927 (12) - 建议变为两个slider

01:09:672 (1) - 去除这个slider 让玩家休息一下
01:09:859 (2) - 去除去01:09:672 (1) - 后这里new combo
01:14:144 (5) - 建议以note结尾 如果以slider结尾会有中断感

01:18:989 - 加一个note
01:20:666 (1,2,3,4) - 无法读图 建议4放在3后 不要和1,2重叠
01:26:163 (1,2,1,2,3) - 节奏很勉强 由于snap比较乱 读图困难 而且没有必要nc
建议而已 还需要自己斟酌

[5.167569%]
00:09:300 - 强烈建议重复一组这样的slider 00:07:809 (1,2,3,4) 然后spinner设定在00:10:790
00:44:517 (2) - 没记错的话这是Unrankable的
00:45:635 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这些遮挡有争议 需要神mapper或者mat来判断是否可取
非常棒的图 找不到什么问题了（明明是我太渣了


我对音效没有研究 需另请神mapper来看下
希望有所帮助
Nice song and good luck

• General

1. Add easy diff? The easiest map here has 2.89 stars which is too hard for beginners
2. Add anime tags

• Dekaane's Normal

1. 00:38:366 (3) - move it up a bit to x:328 y:244 to make it more symmetrical with the (1) and (2) circle.

• Banana's Hard

1. I saw a few 'unconnected' sliders and circles here (unless it was intentional) such as
2. 00:02:033 (2) - move it to x:180 y:188 to make a straight line with the (1)
3. 00:03:337 (1) - x:448 y:296 is the more connected looking pattern with the (2) slider afterward
4. 00:04:269 (3) - move the slider end to x:204 y:80 to make it linear with (1) circle
5. 00:46:567 (1) - move it to x:120 y:52 to make it more linear with the (3) slider before it
6. 01:12:467 (3) - move slider tail to x:484 y:160 to make it linear with the (1) circle
7. 01:18:430 (3) - move slider start to x:100 y:128, same as above

• Insane

1. I'd suggest on making stacks here from 00:02:033 (1) to 00:06:132 (4) to make the map nicer and less confusing to play
2. 01:05:573 (7) - why not make it stacks by moving it to x:196 y:88

• 5.167569%

1. I saw many opportunities to make stacks and blankets here and there, a few are
2. 00:15:635 (7) - move it to x:388 y:32 to make a blanket with the (3) slider afterward
3. 00:16:194 (2) - move to x:408 y:280 ^
4. 00:33:710 (4) - move to x:408 y:240 ^
5. there are still others but I think you might notice it

Nagae-Iku wrote:

[5.167569%]
00:09:300 - 强烈建议重复一组这样的slider 00:07:809 (1,2,3,4) 然后spinner设定在00:10:790 ? 我复读过了, 没更新吧
00:44:517 (2) - 没记错的话这是Unrankable的 改过了
00:45:635 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这些遮挡有争议 需要神mapper或者mat来判断是否可取 明明这么好读233
非常棒的图 找不到什么问题了（明明是我太渣了

AnreFM wrote:

• 5.167569%

1. I saw many opportunities to make stacks and blankets here and there, a few are
2. 00:15:635 (7) - move it to x:388 y:32 to make a blanket with the (3) slider afterward
3. 00:16:194 (2) - move to x:408 y:280 ^
4. 00:33:710 (4) - move to x:408 y:240 ^ hmm, if i try to blanket, the reverse end will end up too close into the slider, i think no blanket is better
5. there are still others but I think you might notice it

Well, I hope that helps, sorry if it doesn't though
Anyway, nice map, good luck!

AnreFM wrote:

Hello, I'll try to mod this map
My mods are only suggestion though, feel free to object

• General

1. Add easy diff? The easiest map here has 2.89 stars which is too hard for beginners Does it necessary to rank this map?
2. Add anime tags

fix

• Dekaane's Normal

1. 00:38:366 (3) - move it up a bit to x:328 y:244 to make it more symmetrical with the (1) and (2) circle.

fix

Nice difficulty

• Banana's Hard

1. I saw a few 'unconnected' sliders and circles here (unless it was intentional) such as
2. 00:02:033 (2) - move it to x:180 y:188 to make a straight line with the (1)
3. 00:03:337 (1) - x:448 y:296 is the more connected looking pattern with the (2) slider afterward
4. 00:04:269 (3) - move the slider end to x:204 y:80 to make it linear with (1) circle
5. 00:46:567 (1) - move it to x:120 y:52 to make it more linear with the (3) slider before it
6. 01:12:467 (3) - move slider tail to x:484 y:160 to make it linear with the (1) circle
7. 01:18:430 (3) - move slider start to x:100 y:128, same as above

• Insane

1. I'd suggest on making stacks here from 00:02:033 (1) to 00:06:132 (4) to make the map nicer and less confusing to play
2. 01:05:573 (7) - why not make it stacks by moving it to x:196 y:88

remake this part

• 5.167569%

1. I saw many opportunities to make stacks and blankets here and there, a few are
2. 00:15:635 (7) - move it to x:388 y:32 to make a blanket with the (3) slider afterward
3. 00:16:194 (2) - move to x:408 y:280 ^
4. 00:33:710 (4) - move to x:408 y:240 ^
5. there are still others but I think you might notice it

Well, I hope that helps, sorry if it doesn't though
Anyway, nice map, good luck!

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Mod~

[General]
Preview Time： 01:02:776 - 我觉得我这样就不错啊....

[Normal]
00:16:378 (4) - NC fix
00:26:068 (5) - ^ fix
00:43:583 - 我觉得这里可以用Normal hitsound 不好吧....
01:02:962 (1) - 觉得这里不适合放Spinner,这样如何 fix

01:15:074 (3) - 不要和前面重叠吧O O可能会混乱

[Hard]
00:38:741 这里绿线没用的话去掉
00:56:815 (1) - 感觉对不上歌曲
01:15:076 (1,2,3,4) - 我不觉得新接触HARD的人能打得起。。。

[Insane]
00:02:406 (3,3) - 不要重叠 有点难看。。。
00:04:828 (1,2,3,4) - 可以再方一点。。。
00:10:418 (2) - ADD NC
00:10:697 (2) - Del NC
00:22:716 (1,2,3,4) - 可以再方一点。。。
00:24:206 (4) - NC？
00:31:660 (7) - NC？
00:40:604 (6) - ^
00:49:921 (5) - ^
all fix


[5.XXXXXXXXX%]
00:16:194 (2,3) - 让2的转折点那里和3的中间重叠？


01:25:138 这里听到了畜生233 lol....

only lazy MOD。。。（捂脸

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hacking to the Gate.jpg",0,0

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hacking to the Gate.jpg",1,1

Verlaren wrote:

Hai~ request via PM in game

General:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hacking to the Gate.jpg",0,0

replace the above code on -

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hacking to the Gate.jpg",1,1

fix
Preview time: 01:02:869
01:01:474 - remove this kiai


Dekaane's Normal:
00:25:163(4) - remove clap on slider's start and add whistle
00:25:163(4) - remove whistle on slider's end and add clap
00:26:068(1) - remove clap on slider's start and add clap on slider's end
00:28:676(2) - add clap on slider's middle(reverse)
00:29:794(3) - remove clap on slider's start
00:40:229 - delete clap
00:52:155 - ^
01:09:857 - ^
01:16:192(6) - move clap from slider's start to slider's end
fix all

Banana's Hard:
DR +2
OD +1
00:12:281(1) - maybe remove this NC? IMO is better
00:16:753(1) - remove NC
00:21:225(1) - ^
00:39:672(1) - ^
00:41:908(1) - ^
00:43:399(1) - move NC on 00:42:840(5)
00:45:262 - move NC on two patterns back
00:51:225 - delete NC
The main problem of this diff - the location of NC.


Insane:
DR +1 fix
00:02:033 - 00:12:840 - spam of NC adjust those nc
00:38:741 - maybe extend this slider to 00:39:113 ? no
01:05:635 - maybe add note? ^


5.167569% :
00:07:716 - add note
00:09:206 - ^

Good luck

AnreFM wrote:

• Banana's Hard

1. I saw a few 'unconnected' sliders and circles here (unless it was intentional) such as casual arrange is my way, did some slightly change though
2. 00:02:033 (2) - move it to x:180 y:188 to make a straight line with the (1)
3. 00:03:337 (1) - x:448 y:296 is the more connected looking pattern with the (2) slider afterward
4. 00:04:269 (3) - move the slider end to x:204 y:80 to make it linear with (1) circle
5. 00:46:567 (1) - move it to x:120 y:52 to make it more linear with the (3) slider before it
6. 01:12:467 (3) - move slider tail to x:484 y:160 to make it linear with the (1) circle
7. 01:18:430 (3) - move slider start to x:100 y:128, same as above

Sun Rainbow wrote:

[Hard]
00:38:741 这里绿线没用的话去掉 然后滑条体的whistle音效就变了
00:56:815 (1) - 感觉对不上歌曲 嘛 整体都不太对的上
01:15:076 (1,2,3,4) - 我不觉得新接触HARD的人能打得起。。。 难度不是问题

Verlaren wrote:

Banana's Hard:
DR +2
OD +1 done this two
00:12:281(1) - maybe remove this NC? IMO is better
00:16:753(1) - remove NC
00:21:225(1) - ^
00:39:672(1) - ^
00:41:908(1) - ^
00:43:399(1) - move NC on 00:42:840(5)
00:45:262 - move NC on two patterns back
00:51:225 - delete NC
The main problem of this diff - the location of NC. nc is ok to me, i nc it every downbeat