Mira-san wrote:

Sorry for the late mod! :<

Also you get a ticket for guessing where my name was based from (actually old IGN).

[Easy]
00:23:775 (3) - This isn't stacked to (4)'s end properly. can u explain? o-o nm got it
00:48:602 (3) - Fix this blanket, if possible. k
01:06:395 (2) - Move this to x:200 y:156 so it creates a smoother flow within the sliders. k
01:53:154 (1) - The position of this slider can cause confusion to other players, probably. Maybe try to put it above 01:51:499 (1) since there's still available space. k

[Normal]
01:21:722 (4) - Move this to y:215 so it's collinear with (3). k
01:36:602 (3) - Is it intended to be not aligned to (2)? If it's not then I suggest to move it to y:80. k
03:06:395 (2) - Not stacked properly to (3). i don't really get what you mean. should i stack (2) and (3)? nm got it

[Hard]
01:11:567 (2) - It seems that you're following vocals and the beat. If you're going to follow the vocals, change this to a 1/1 slider, if not, then keep the current one. i like the current 1
01:22:325 (2) - Fix this blanket. ok
01:58:946 (3,1,2) - Kinda weird how the distance between these three are different. Especially (3) and (1) lol. i c what u mean. ill try to do something about it
02:03:084 (4,5,6) - Make this one similar to this: 00:45:291 (1,2,3) ok

[Insane]
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern is inconsistent. Try making this a trapezoid or something. There are similar inconsistencies within the map as well. k
00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a perfect pentagon. trying ><
00:56:463 (5) - This one isn't stacked properly. can u explain ><? nm got it
01:20:463 (2) - You could try making some of these into triples. >>suggestion only<< hmm triples won't really work here

[SB suggestions]

From 02:14:670 - 02:27:912: I suggest putting a dark BG when it's on this part, so it emphasizes the slowness.
From 02:27:912 - 02:41:050: I suggest putting a dark BG but LIGHTER from the previous one, this part is like when 'everything is going to be restored ' or something. (I hope you can get my point here lol).

ill test them out, ty
Good luck! Sorry for the late mod.

Autumn wrote:

Hi!
From my queue

[General]
Display epilepsy warning (Song setup-design-misc-toggles)

Easy is fine to me.

[pkmnyab's Normal]
some jumps like 00:56:464 (3) - are bit too far imo. fixd

[Hard]
00:32:257 (3) - Distance: http://puu.sh/6IqRi.jpg fixd
01:08:877 - Add a circle? Stack with 01:09:084 (1) - fixd
01:09:084 (1) - ^ ?
01:57:705 - Clap fixd

[Insane]
00:19:636 - Add a circle? There's a drum sound here. fixd
00:22:532 (1) - Too close to 00:22:119 (6) - move right a little fixd
02:11:774 (3) - Try Ctrl+G to get a better distance. fixd

GL~

Tsumetaku wrote:

awesome DECOOOOO

(　ﾟдﾟ)ノ☆

EDIT:
I wonder whether you seen my in game PMww so i stick it here too

drum for clap~
http://puu.sh/6DeBe.wav

No Dap wrote:

Hi M4M from modding Q~~

Very good song!! I love it <3

[General]
looking good

[Easy]
fixed all the nc and hitsound stuff
AR +1 OD+1
00:08:050 (1) - delete NC
00:08:878 (2) - NC
00:17:981 (5) - NC
00:20:050 (1) - NC
00:20:464 (2) - delete NC
00:22:947 (1) - delete clap
00:23:361 (2) - add clap
00:28:740 (5) - delete NC
00:29:154 (1) - NC
00:29:775 (3) - This sounds more fun im still a bit confused to where to put that at lol

SPOILER

00:46:947 (1) - delete NC
00:48:602 (7) - NC
00:49:430 (1) - NC
00:49:430 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - too many circles all of sudden!? consider substituting sliders k
00:54:809 (5) - delete NC
00:55:223 (1) - NC
01:02:257 (3) - NC
01:12:602 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles, and ugly flow. k
01:16:740 (2,3) - blanket properly
01:20:878 (3,4) - convert to slider k. i tried but the slider looks a bit weird lol
01:38:257 (6) - NC
01:39:499 (1) - delete NC
01:42:395 (7) - delete NC
01:42:809 (1) - NC
01:43:223 (3,1) blanket
01:47:775 (6) - stack this on 4 and move the rest accordingly.. k
01:55:637 (1,2) - blanket properly
02:01:016 (4) - delete NC
02:01:430 (1) - NC
02:07:223 (5) - NC
02:08:464 (1) - delete NC
02:27:912 (1,2) - blanket
02:29:154 (3,1) - blanket
02:34:947 (1,2) - blanket
02:44:464 (1,2) - blanket
02:46:947 (5,6) - you have stacked notes on easy and hidden notes too. i dont get what u mean here lol but i stacked it better
02:57:706 (1) - move these around so 02:57:706 (1) can stack on 02:55:637 (3) k

[Normal]
fixed everything here except the hidden notes; since osu automatically shifts them over when playing, i think they're fine
HP+1 AR+2 OD+1
00:06:395 (2,3) - blanket properly
00:08:050 (5,1) - why not fill in notes? ill do that later when i feel like it lol xD
00:18:395 (7) - no hidden note
00:22:119 (1) - remove curve, make it like the previous slider
00:29:154 (2,3,4) - unify rhythm like this one 00:32:050 (4,5) 00:36:188 (2,3) ~~ im not exactly sure what u mean here lol ewe
00:31:016 (2,3) - no hidden note
00:34:326 (2,3) - ^
00:53:154 (2) - its up in the sky and looks awkward :3 change 00:51:912 (1) so you can move it to somewhere else
00:55:844 (2,3) - spacing
00:56:671 (4,1) - they overlapped
00:57:498 (5,6) - spacing
00:59:154 (2,3) - spacing
01:08:464 (1,4) - overlapped
01:09:912 (4,1) - overlapped
01:11:567 (1,3,1) - overlapped. Blanket properly
01:12:395 (2,3) - spacing
01:39:912 (1) - delete NC
01:42:395 (7) - NC
01:43:223 (1) - delete NC
01:48:602 (2,3) - spacing
01:50:464 (6,7) - hidden note
01:51:706 (2,1) - fill in notes
01:58:947 (2,3) - spacing
02:06:809 (4,5) - spacing
02:09:499 (4,5) - spacing
02:14:671 (7) - add finish
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a heck of a jump for normal diff fixd
02:41:775 (2,3) - spacing
02:43:430 (5,6) - spacing
02:45:085 (2,3) - spacing
02:49:844 (4,1) - blanket
02:51:499 (3,4) - spacing
02:53:982 (1,3) - overlapped
02:54:603 (2,3) - spacing
02:56:878 (5,6) - spacing
02:58:326 (1) - delete NC
02:58:326 (1,2) - spacing
02:59:153 (1) - NC
03:04:326 (1,2) - spacing

Sorry I have to finish up now... got something to do

[Hard]
HP+1 AR+1 k

[Insane]
HP+1 k

Hope my mod helped >~< thanks, it was a big help!

Good map and really good song!! good luck~~

Papcio wrote:

m4m here
[insane]
00:03:084 (3,4,5,6) - What about square? nah i like it how it is now
00:15:498 (5) - Spacinggg wow cant believe i didnt see this o-o
00:23:360 (1,2) - Make it so that 1 looks the part of the other. design changed
00:28:739 (1,2) - Blanket? good idea
00:50:257 (3) - This slider can be reverse of 1 and mirror-edge of 5 XD i dont quite understand :/
00:58:119 (4) - Blanket of 00:59:153 (1) ? i dont see a good way of making this working so no for now

I can't see more, it's perfect ;w; ty :3

[hard]
AR- ill change if more ppl tell me to
OD-
00:05:153 (4) - This slider can be less curve hmm k i agree
00:43:636 (1) - Spin this more kk
01:47:774 (2) - Blank this XD fixed? maybe?
01:58:946 (3) - Ugly :/ i tried to make it fit with 01:58:119 (1) ;-;
02:16:946 (2,3,4) - It isn't triangle nice catch
02:45:912 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's too hard to hard i think its ok tbh

Sorry for short mod, it's too high level of making to mod by me XD np ty for mod~

1. plz control Eazy star rating below 3 or near 3
2. spacing should be same in easy and normal diff. I’ll check it out
3. add source "Rabukarenda" (ラブカレンダー )
4. add "so18140621 Ryosuke "Dr.R" Sakai " in tags

1. plz reduce your SB load and it is very very high(over 5X) after 02:54:395 -

1. ar-1
2. 01:17:568 (3,4) - spcaing
3. 00:12:188 (1,2) - spacing
4. 00:27:912 (4,5) - spacing
5. 00:59:361 (2) - spacing
6. 01:15:085 - add circle? and clap at 01:13:430 (1,2) - slider's tail
7. move break time to 02:14:671 - ( just for perfect )

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

1. 00:10:532 (1,2) - why not keep the same rhythm as 00:07:222 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:33:291 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad
3. 00:27:912 (5) - remove the clap on the tail
4. 00:44:463 - add something here?
5. 00:47:774 - add something here?
6. 01:01:843 - lose a necessary object
7. 01:15:084 - ^
8. 03:07:636 (1) - turn down the spinner volume

1. 00:13:636 (6,1) - too close
2. 00:16:532 (2,4) - ctrl+G
3. 00:22:532 (1,3) - ctrl+G
4. 00:23:153 (4) - keep the same spacing plz, P:1X N:1.1X now
5. 00:29:774 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G
6. 00:40:532 - add something?
7. 01:10:325 (6,1) - ctrl+G make a flow
8. 01:17:774 (4,6) - ctrl+G and you may not put these two so close
9. 02:17:360 (4,1) - this jump a "bit" big 5X and 02:15:705 (4,1) - only 0.83X
10. 02:29:153 (4,5) - too close (it may disorder your map
11. 02:33:084 (3,4) - blanket better
12. 02:37:429 - I suggest put a hit point at long white tick (like this
    
    click

    
13. 02:39:291 (1) - use two circle plz, a slider is kinda confusing (try this
    
    click

    
14. 03:00:601 (8,9,1) - keep the same spacing

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing fixed
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

looked over the map and resnapped most objects.

pkmnyab wrote:

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing fixed
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

looked over the map and resnapped most objects.

Thanks for the mod!

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~
[General]

1. plz control Eazy star rating below 3 or near 3 i think its pretty close to 3 .-. not quite sure >< uhg i hate osu's star system
2. spacing should be same in easy and normal diff. I’ll check it out
3. add source "Rabukarenda" (ラブカレンダー ) should only do this if the source made this song famous or came from it
4. add "so18140621 Ryosuke "Dr.R" Sakai " in tags

k
[SB]

1. plz reduce your SB load and it is very very high(over 5X) after 02:54:395 -

explain this a bit more pls? like how and what is a SB load lol Edit: it doesnt get over 5x o-o? Edit Edit: took out SB
[Easy]

1. ar-1 k
2. 01:17:568 (3,4) - spcaing k
3. 00:12:188 (1,2) - spacing k
4. 00:27:912 (4,5) - spacing k
5. 00:59:361 (2) - spacing k
6. 01:15:085 - add circle? and clap at 01:13:430 (1,2) - slider's tail k
7. move break time to 02:14:671 - ( just for perfect )

k
[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

[Hard]

1. 00:10:532 (1,2) - why not keep the same rhythm as 00:07:222 (1,2,3,4) - i like some variety
2. 00:33:291 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad hmm k i tried to fix
3. 00:27:912 (5) - remove the clap on the tail k
4. 00:44:463 - add something here? doesn't fit music
5. 00:47:774 - add something here? k
6. 01:01:843 - lose a necessary object k
7. 01:15:084 - ^ k
8. 03:07:636 (1) - turn down the spinner volume

did i do it right?
[Insane]

1. 00:13:636 (6,1) - too close k
2. 00:16:532 (2,4) - ctrl+G k
3. 00:22:532 (1,3) - ctrl+G k
4. 00:23:153 (4) - keep the same spacing plz, P:1X N:1.1X now k
5. 00:29:774 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G k
6. 00:40:532 - add something? k
7. 01:10:325 (6,1) - ctrl+G make a flow k
8. 01:17:774 (4,6) - ctrl+G and you may not put these two so close k
9. 02:17:360 (4,1) - this jump a "bit" big 5X and 02:15:705 (4,1) - only 0.83X k
10. 02:29:153 (4,5) - too close (it may disorder your map k
11. 02:33:084 (3,4) - blanket better k
12. 02:37:429 - I suggest put a hit point at long white tick (like this k
    
    click

    
13. 02:39:291 (1) - use two circle plz, a slider is kinda confusing (try this i like the slider, fits better with vocals
    
    click

    
14. 03:00:601 (8,9,1) - keep the same spacing

k
that's all, good luck

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿

[Easy]
00:12:188 (1) - The tail would look neater if it was stacked under 00:10:119 (2) - properly. k did my best
00:29:568 (2,3) - Just make them both the same slider shape. i like the current one '^'
00:36:188 (6) - NC instead of 00:36:188 (1) - hmm ok? i think? can u recheck this? cuz you have 2 of the same timestamps
00:40:326 (4,2) - Very confusing overlap, this is can obviously be easily seen with the slow AR. Please try to remodel objects so they're less crowded together. made overlap look better
00:49:430 (1) - Remove NC? k
01:20:878 (3) - Forgot to add a clap on the tail here. oh ty
02:07:223 (1) - Change clap on the tail to finish. kk

[Hard]
00:10:532 (1,2) - I know it isn't necessary to use DS in hard diffs 24/7, but these objects are just appearing too close to each other! alright fixed, got a lot of people complaining about this part anyways lol
00:28:739 (1) - Finish on the head. damn i need to pay attention to my hitsounds more lol. all of them are fixed
00:29:567 (3,4) - Also looks to close to each other. i spaced them out a bit, not completely fixed though nevermind fixed
00:40:325 (4,5) - Should be stacked the same way as 00:38:670 (1,2) - k done
00:55:222 (2) - Finish on the head. And first object appearing in Kai time should also be a NC fixed
02:01:429 (1) - Forgot to add a finish here.
02:08:050 (4) - ^ On the head.

[Insane]
00:02:256 (1) - Finish on the head
00:55:222 (2) - ^

Colorful SB you made there Hope this helps!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:55:223 (1) - Finish on the head. removed clap and added finish
00:47:775 (4,5) - Wrong Distance snap fixed
01:08:464 (1) - Finish on the head.removed clap and added finish
02:54:603 (2,3) - Wrong Distance snapfixed
01:34:947 - Sounds very unfinished, I feel as though the objects itself comes in too late after. Try adding a note here with a finish hotsound. fixed, note with hitsound added
01:48:188 (1) - Add finish?removed clap and added finish
02:01:430 (1) - ^ On the headremoved clap and added finish
02:08:050 (1) - ^removed clap and added finish
02:27:912 (1) - ^removed clap and added finish
02:41:154 (1) - ^removed clap and added finish
02:53:981 - 02:56:671 New rhythm suggestion:
changed this in both kiai times

1. Airtist: DECO*27 feat. 悠木碧　 (according to ranked maps of DECO*27)
   http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... co*27&m=-1
2. remove "Display epilepsy warning" because you don't use Storyboading
3. remove your name "Kibbleru" from tags
4. tags suggetion:
   LOVE CALENDER
5. outro is too long. I recommend to cut and adjust mp3 file

1. 00:42:809 (2,3) - I recommend to make blanket for smoother cursor moving
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:740 (2) - how about stack on 00:51:085 (4) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:20:050 (1,2) - for easy, stack of DS 0.0x should be avoided
4. 01:34:947 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:44:878 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 02:06:395 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:14:257 (7,1) - ^
8. 02:32:878 (1,2) - make DS 1.0x
9. 02:46:947 (5,6) - same as 01:20:050 (1,2) -
10. 03:04:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^

1. I suggest to increase DS more than 1.0x in SV 1.0x part
2. 00:07:222 (1) - I prefer the same curved slider as 00:07:636 (2,3,4) -
3. 01:45:912 (2) - x:317 y:259
4. 01:47:567- add a note
5. 02:12:601 (3) - I prefer the following
   
6. 02:59:981 (6,7,8) - blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. i recommend to increase SV more than hard diff
2. 00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks awkward. how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   132,76,53567,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   236,180,53774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   213,34,53981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   146,166,54188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   277,98,54394,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:42:394 (1,2) - I prefer to exchange positions
4. 02:53:981 (5) - end at 02:54:188

1. 00:38:671 (3,4) - symmetric sliders are better
2. 00:41:981- add a note and finish
3. 00:55:637- shift finish to 00:55:223
4. 00:56:464 (3) - delete?
5. 01:10:119- shift clap to 01:09:706
6. 01:51:912- why no hitsound at this position?
7. 02:05:568 (2) - x:429 y:66 (stack correctly)
8. 02:07:223 (6) - I prefer this
   
9. 02:28:326- clap
10. 02:54:809- ^
11. 02:55:637- ^
12. 02:56:464- ^
13. 03:06:395 (2) - x:308 y:126

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]

1. Airtist: DECO*27 feat. 悠木碧　 (according to ranked maps of DECO*27) k added
   http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... co*27&m=-1
2. remove "Display epilepsy warning" because you don't use Storyboading oops forgot to get rid of it after i removed my SB
3. remove your name "Kibbleru" from tags k
4. tags suggetion:
   LOVE CALENDER added
5. outro is too long. I recommend to cut and adjust mp3 file

ill look into it
[Easy]

1. 00:42:809 (2,3) - I recommend to make blanket for smoother cursor moving k
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:740 (2) - how about stack on 00:51:085 (4) - ? k
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:20:050 (1,2) - for easy, stack of DS 0.0x should be avoided fixed all
4. 01:34:947 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:44:878 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 02:06:395 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:14:257 (7,1) - ^
8. 02:32:878 (1,2) - make DS 1.0x nice catch
9. 02:46:947 (5,6) - same as 01:20:050 (1,2) - not sure what you mean by same but i unstacked them
10. 03:04:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Hard]

1. I suggest to increase DS more than 1.0x in SV 1.0x part ill look into it
2. 00:07:222 (1) - I prefer the same curved slider as 00:07:636 (2,3,4) - nah i like it like this
3. 01:45:912 (2) - x:317 y:259 nazi lol k
4. 01:47:567- add a note done
5. 02:12:601 (3) - I prefer the following changed but can you check if this is rankable?
   
6. 02:59:981 (6,7,8) - blanket? hm i'd agree too
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. i recommend to increase SV more than hard diff well it is increased a bit, just through the timing points cuz i was dumb to use the actual slider velocity changer :/
2. 00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks awkward. how about this? umm thats what i have?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   132,76,53567,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   236,180,53774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   213,34,53981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   146,166,54188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   277,98,54394,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:42:394 (1,2) - I prefer to exchange positions hmm i agree
4. 02:53:981 (5) - end at 02:54:188 k done

I like this song ty for modding!
good choice!
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]

1. 00:38:671 (3,4) - symmetric sliders are better fixed
2. 00:41:981- add a note and finish fixed
3. 00:55:637- shift finish to 00:55:223 fixed
4. 00:56:464 (3) - delete? deleted
5. 01:10:119- shift clap to 01:09:706 fixed
6. 01:51:912- why no hitsound at this position? fixed
7. 02:05:568 (2) - x:429 y:66 (stack correctly) fixed
8. 02:07:223 (6) - I prefer this fixed
   
9. 02:28:326- clap all fixed
10. 02:54:809- ^
11. 02:55:637- ^
12. 02:56:464- ^
13. 03:06:395 (2) - x:308 y:126

stacked

Mako Sakata wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:40:326 (5,1,2) - Try this rhythm? sound better imo fixed
00:41:981 - Add circle there? you missed the cymbal sound fixed
00:55:223 (1) - The finish sound should be on slider head, not on the tail and change finish sound on slider tail with clap instead fixed
01:08:878 (2) - Add clap on head fixed
01:09:706 (3) - Clap sund should be on slider head not on the tail fixed
01:10:533 (4) - Add clap on head fixed
01:21:706 (4) - Add finish fixed
01:48:809 (1) - NC? fixed
02:41:154 (1) - 02:44:257 (1) - 02:55:223 (3) - 02:56:050 (4) - Clap on tail fixed all
02:54:395 (2) - Add finish on head and add clap on tail fixed
02:55:533 - and 02:55:740 - Useless green lines, you can remove that fixed

This diff still needs extra work on hitsounding and rhythm imo

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi M4M~

[General]
Remove Aoi Yuki from tags? It's already on artist name k
Video not played on pkmnyab's Normal fix that

fixed all unless else said

[Easy]
SV 1.0 on BPM 145 is pretty fast imo for an Easy i agree, i made this map when i didn't realize you could adjust sv through the actual timing panel lol
00:20:050 (1,2) - (1) is almost touch (2) slider body, maybe you can re-arrange that to avoid It
00:29:568 (3) - Maybe change into curve one? to match the next slider shape and make It more symetric
00:53:568 (3) - Add clap on head? I hear a drum sound there
01:20:878 (3) - That kind of slider is tricky for an Easy diff, maybe you can change that into something simple like curve
02:34:947 (1,2) - Almost touching each other, maybe you can re-arrange that
02:51:085 (1,2) - Move both to x:476 y:232 to make a perfect blanket for slider (2) and circle (4), like this

SPOILER

don't forget to re-arrange the rest of notes after that

Everything looks fine, except stars rating 3.5 for an Easy, I think you should re-consider about this diff would lowering SV lower the difficulty?

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:40:326 (5,1,2) - Try this rhythm? sound better imo
00:41:981 - Add circle there? you missed the cymbal sound
00:55:223 (1) - The finish sound should be on slider head, not on the tail and change finish sound on slider tail with clap instead
01:08:878 (2) - Add clap on head
01:09:706 (3) - Clap sund should be on slider head not on the tail
01:10:533 (4) - Add clap on head
01:21:706 (4) - Add finish
01:48:809 (1) - NC?
02:41:154 (1) - 02:44:257 (1) - 02:55:223 (3) - 02:56:050 (4) - Clap on tail
02:54:395 (2) - Add finish on head and add clap on tail
02:55:533 - and 02:55:740 - Useless green lines, you can remove that

This diff still needs extra work on hitsounding and rhythm imo

[Hard]
Maybe you can you 1.1 or 1.2 Distance Spacing for default spacing and make sure each notes not touching each others hmm i went through the map and fixed the almost touching sliders
00:53:153 (5) - Add clap on tail then 00:53:774 (1) - Add clap then Add clap on head, because I hear drum sound that part
02:13:015 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap on them and 02:13:843 (5) - On head same reason as above
03:01:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you can make the star shape better i tried :<

[Insane]
Maybe you can you 1.1 or 1.2 Distance Spacing for default spacing and make sure each notes not touching each others
00:53:360 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you can make this star jump larger, since It's Insane ehh nah i think its fine
00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add clap on them, I hear the drum sound there
01:34:946 (1) - Add finish on head
02:03:084 (6,7,8) - Maybe you can arrange It beter like this

SPOILER

i like mine

Sorry late, that's all

Kibbleru wrote:

Everything looks fine, except stars rating 3.5 for an Easy, I think you should re-consider about this diff would lowering SV lower the difficulty?

Mako Sakata wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

Everything looks fine, except stars rating 3.5 for an Easy, I think you should re-consider about this diff would lowering SV lower the difficulty?

I'm sure It will lowerng the difficulty

iNickel wrote:

[Normal]

00:41:981 - add a circle here (With a finish hitsound)! fixed from previous mod
01:34:947 (1) - Don't place this circle here please! fixed
00:56:464 (3) - Remove this circle and do it like this: http://puu.sh/70Pap.jpg fixed
00:30:395 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P4h.jpg fixed
00:45:292 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P7j.jpg fixed all
00:49:430 (1) - ^
01:10:533 (4) - ^
01:43:223 (3,4) - ^
01:45:706 (3) - ^
01:50:464 (5) - ^
01:56:464 (3) - ^
01:59:775 (3) - ^
02:04:327 (1) - ^
02:12:188 (4) - ^
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not recommended in a normal diff.
01:51:292 (6) - Fix the blanket, Like this: http://puu.sh/70Pfy.jpg fixed

* Don't do so many straight lines

iNickel wrote:

[General]

- You need an diff. with 3 stars or lower. Just set in easy HD and OD to 0 if you don't want to re-map it.
- You should map this to 03:34:119

[Easy]

01:03:499 (2,3,4,5) - Too many circles here!
02:03:085 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:45:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:878 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:430 (5,6,7,1) - ^
02:39:499 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:49:430 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:52:740 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:04:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^

HD - 0
OD - 0

[Normal]

00:41:981 - add a circle here (With a finish hitsound)!
01:34:947 (1) - Don't place this circle here please!
00:56:464 (3) - Remove this circle and do it like this: http://puu.sh/70Pap.jpg
00:30:395 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P4h.jpg
00:45:292 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P7j.jpg
00:49:430 (1) - ^
01:10:533 (4) - ^
01:43:223 (3,4) - ^
01:45:706 (3) - ^
01:50:464 (5) - ^
01:56:464 (3) - ^
01:59:775 (3) - ^
02:04:327 (1) - ^
02:12:188 (4) - ^
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not recommended in a normal diff.
01:51:292 (6) - Fix the blanket, Like this: http://puu.sh/70Pfy.jpg

* Don't do so many straight lines

[Hard]

Looks very good, but the flow is a bit bad..

That's all!

Good Luck

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[pkmnyab's Normal]
Not sure if it's just my laptop but wheres the video? hmm still need to fix this xD
Also there are a number of straight sliders that make this look bland. maybe curve some of them or tilt to add more spice to the map made some straight sliders curved, might make some more curved later
Another is try to make your hitsounds consistent. There are some parts that turn me off in terms of sound will look into this
00:08:878 (6) - move to x:180 y:224 done
00:09:085 - the break here is pretty useless and unneeded. you should map it to keep the unexpected stop from happening mapped
01:15:912 (3,4) - how about making 3 the same shape as 4. 3 has a sharp curve and plays weirdly to me. maybe delete it and copy 4 onto 3 and space it accordingly so that it plays smoothly fixed

Kibbleru wrote:

TY for mod, fixed all but i couldn't get the music to work :/
also did some big changes to improve flow

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[Easy]
Nice job keeping hitsounds consistent
00:07:637 (4) - move this to x:308 y:100 to create a proper blanket if thats what you were going for uhmm that doesn't help?
00:15:499 (1) - move this one grid down to align with 3 without messing up with distance k
00:15:912 (2) - move 1 grid to right or at x:152 y:148 to make a nicer blanket. looked off a bit to the left ^
00:54:395 (4,5) - how about adding a clap to 4 and removing the clap for 5. At 4 there is still one more beat that can justify putting a clap here and on 5 the vocalist is the only thing here being heard so adding a silent part or taking out clap sounds better and doesn't sound too loud.hmm k
01:10:119 (1) - ctrl +J and H then move it to x:164 y:116 then ctrl +G then space the next notes (2,3) accordingly. k
01:51:499 (1) - move your 2nd slider point two grids to the left to curve a bit more to make the blanket neater k
02:51:085 (1,2) - how about tilting the sliders to the right or left and align 2 with it. it seems pretty bland here i like, fixed

[pkmnyab's Normal]
Not sure if it's just my laptop but wheres the video?
Also there are a number of straight sliders that make this look bland. maybe curve some of them or tilt to add more spice to the map
Another is try to make your hitsounds consistent. There are some parts that turn me off in terms of sound
00:08:878 (6) - move to x:180 y:224
00:09:085 - the break here is pretty useless and unneeded. you should map it to keep the unexpected stop from happening
01:15:912 (3,4) - how about making 3 the same shape as 4. 3 has a sharp curve and plays weirdly to me. maybe delete it and copy 4 onto 3 and space it accordingly so that it plays smoothly

[Hard]
Can't really say anything since stuff has been pointed out by previous modders but i agree with iNickel and flow could use some work but diff overall is actually pretty great and nicely made

[Insane]
01:09:912 (5,6,7) - i don't think a jump this huge is necessary here. perhaps make them a bit closer made it closer
02:47:153 (5,6) - another big jump here isn't necessary either. changed design a bit for better flow

Flow could use just a small bit of work here as well but overall really great. I like how you kept the hitsounds consistent throughout the whole map yah i already tried to fix it once q-q

iNickel wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

TY for mod, fixed all but i couldn't get the music to work :/
also did some big changes to improve flow

Try this MP3 (This should work 100%): http://puu.sh/72aln.zip

I really like this song, but the quality is terrible

iNickel wrote:

- You need an diff. with 3 stars or lower. Just set in easy HD and OD to 0 if you don't want to re-map it.

No Dap wrote:

I just saw this



Congratzzzzzz