1. Replay (5 stars, 1445 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

送一分

1. Airtist: 茶太 & nayuta
   Romansed Airtist: Chata & nayuta
2. For Tags...
   Kazami Yuuka
   Gensokyo, Past and Present ~ Flower Land
   kokuchou
   usagi kinoko

1. e2.png: "歌い踊る色"
2. e5.png: "ただ佇んだ"
3. At the duet part, it is difficult to distinguish Chata's from nayuta's. it is better not to use similar colors

1. I highly recommend to add Break-Time. because of long-map, very tired. (the CUTE "section-pass.png" should be used, too)
2. 00:23:981 (1,2) - make DS larger
3. 01:27:981 (1,1) - delete the slider, and start the spinner at 01:27:981
4. 01:43:254 (5,6) - it is better not to jump
5. 02:34:527 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:35:072 (2) - NC
7. 02:56:709 (6) - ^
8. 03:02:527 (6) - ^
9. 03:09:799~03:31:618- SV 1.5x is too rapid, imo. Do you object if 1.4x same as before?
10. 04:01:254 (6,7) - I prefer the following
    
11. 04:13:072 (3) - Good!
12. 04:42:981 (1,1) - it is near-impossible to play ,isn't it?
13. 04:56:072 (1) - end at 04:57:072
14. 05:08:345~05:54:163- Do you object if 1.4x?

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for request~
I'm glad to be able to know such a wouderful map!!!

[General]

1. Airtist: 茶太 & nayuta
   Romansed Airtist: Chata & nayuta ok
2. For Tags...
   Kazami Yuuka
   Gensokyo, Past and Present ~ Flower Land ok
   kokuchou
   usagi kinoko

[Lyrics]

1. e2.png: "歌い踊る色"
2. e5.png: "ただ佇んだ"
3. At the duet part, it is difficult to distinguish Chata's from nayuta's. it is better not to use similar colors fixed thanks

[Replay]

1. I highly recommend to add Break-Time. because of long-map, very tired. (the CUTE "section-pass.png" should be used, too) OK I'll add some break
2. 00:23:981 (1,2) - make DS larger fixed
3. 01:27:981 (1,1) - delete the slider, and start the spinner at 01:27:981 no
4. 01:43:254 (5,6) - it is better not to jump I'll think about it
5. 02:34:527 (1) - remove NC fixed
6. 02:35:072 (2) - NC fixed
7. 02:56:709 (6) - ^ fixed
8. 03:02:527 (6) - ^ fixed
9. 03:09:799~03:31:618- SV 1.5x is too rapid, imo. Do you object if 1.4x same as before? I'll think about it
10. 04:01:254 (6,7) - I prefer the following
    
11. 04:13:072 (3) - Good!
12. 04:42:981 (1,1) - it is near-impossible to play ,isn't it? fixed
13. 04:56:072 (1) - end at 04:57:072 fixed
14. 05:08:345~05:54:163- Do you object if 1.4x? I'll think about it

Very nice SB and skin! That's amazing!!! ~☆ thank you
this map is too difficult for me
Sorry for poor modding. but I did my best~ thank you very much
~Good Luck~

general is very useful!!!

EmingK wrote:

专注nazi check三十年，别嫌我烦啊;w; 确实有点..

02:25:799 (6) - Ctrl-g? no
01:55:981 (4) - 柑橘需要某种clap 好
03:31:981 (4) - ^ ^
05:54:527 (4) - ^ ^

没包好系列

00:23:981 (1,2) - fixed
00:33:981 (5,1) - 这也要包?
00:47:254 (1,2,3) - fixed
01:16:890 (2,3) - fixed
01:24:163 (2,3) - fixed
01:59:254 (5,6) - 这里是故意的(保持1.2ds)
02:29:799 (3,4,1) - 包了就不好看了
02:49:981 (2,3) - 本来这个2是个短滑条(后面的5.6转个180度
03:54:709 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - fixed
04:00:709 (1,2) - fixed
05:10:527 (2,3) - fixed
05:24:345 (3,4) - fixed

没叠好系列

01:11:618 (4,4) - fixed
01:24:345 (3,1) - fixed
02:16:345 (2,3) - fixed
04:28:345 (1,2) - fixed[/notice]

EmingK wrote:

专注nazi check三十年，别嫌我烦啊;w;

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[notice]就一个难度我就不general了
删去改歌曲名后残留的osb文件
Chata - Yuune Zekka,Ryouran no Sai (sjoy).osb
Chata & nayuta - Yuune Zekka,Ryouran no Sai (sjoy).osb
使用了自定义的hitcircleoverlay，需要手动添加sliderborder颜色
为什么你们喜欢把物件挡在歌词上（诶有人打图的时候看歌词么
一大坨绿线真是.. ;w; 上面问题都已修复

00:29:799 (1,2,3) - 不放在一条线上么 好
00:36:345 (3,4,5,6) - 四边形梗歪了 fixed
01:06:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 六边形梗歪了 fixed
03:45:799 (5) - 往上弯跟(3,4)正好成一圈 好
04:02:527 (2,3) - 平行？ 好
04:03:618 (1,2) - 不做对称？好
04:12:345 (1,2) - 放到一条线上？或者04:11:618 (3,4,1,2) - 对称
06:03:618 (4,5) - 稍微往下一些？好

不愧是神麻婆 ;w;能RANK才是神
GL!

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M from your queue, pleas read my post ^^

[map]

00:23:981 (1) - Ctrl+G , 00:24:709 (2,3) - Ctrl + G and 00:25:072 (4,5) - Ctrl + G , imo flow better ^^ ok
00:33:254 (1,2) - Ctrl+G ok
00:36:527 (4,5) - Stack no
---------------------------------------------
00:39:981 (1) - Move in 256||4 ok
00:40:345 (3) - Move in 256||120 ok
00:40:890 (7,9) - Move in 256||256 ok
---------------------------------------------
00:54:163 (5,6) - Ctrl + G? adding a jump ^^ ok
01:10:163 (1) - Shape like this: http://d.pr/i/wtam no
01:12:890 (4) - Move to 280||164 ok
01:33:618 (7) - Move to 256||180 and make blanket with 01:33:618 (7,3) ok
01:52:709 (1) - Move to 332||32 ok
---------------------------------------------

05:56:345 (3) - Ctrl+G ok

ban22 wrote:

我怎么就能mod出来这点;_;而且不改也没问题;_;简直蠢透了

It's not helpful, sorry

M4M能给我mod么

03:13:254 - 加一个note
03:19:618 (9) - 建议缩短到红线

1. Missing skin elements:
   
   1. reversearrow.png
   2. hit0.png
   Wrong size：
   
   1. spinner-background.png (1023x692)
   2. spinner-circle.png (666x666)
   useless element (should be removed)
   
   1. star.png
2. Uncheck widescreen support since your storyboard is 4:3 based

1. 00:43:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - looked odd a bit, i may suggest to reduce the spacing of this stream, ie
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:163 (3,4,5) - in this stanza, the triplet is not very fitful if your wanna follow vocal, or the slider 00:51:618 (1) - is not a good choice if you wanna follow drum. As my understanding, you choice may be follow drum so i'd like to change 00:51:618 (1) - to two notes.
3. 00:54:345 (6,1) - not a good flow.
4. 01:01:254 (5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly reduce the spacing here but i found no change of music..
5. 01:21:254 (3,4,5) - another odd placement... actually you needn't to stick yourself to DS...
6. 01:25:072 (1) - move to 302:285 for better flow?
7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - still bad shape, at least i hope here could be a blanket with 01:36:345 (6) -
8. 01:43:799 (7) - it breaks the whole flow of this combo, i highly recommend to move it away - even stack to 01:43:436 (6) - 's end is better than current.
9. 01:46:163 (3,4,5) - nonsense triplet
10. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:52:709 (1,2,3) - ^. How to judge if the triplet is okay or not? a simplay way is to confirm if the third note stays on a stress beat or not. I won't mention similar issues in this mod more
13. 02:00:890 (6,7,8) - this jump is looked weird...
14. 02:08:527 (7) - try ctrl+g?
15. 02:12:345 (5,2,3,4) - i'd like to stack them or use low spacing
16. 02:37:436 (4) - ctrl+g & make it parallel to 02:37:072 (3) -
17. 02:42:345 (2,3) - also suggest ctrl+g
18. 03:41:436 (7) - 287:357?
19. 03:43:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - compared with 02:43:254 (6,7,8,9,1) - , it is not a good shape.
20. 03:49:618 (3,4,5) - stack is better imo
21. 04:16:709 (1) - make it smooth a bit?
22. 04:39:436 - from, i'd like to add three 1/2 notes.
23. 04:51:981 (1,2,3) - unexpected anti-stream, please re-consider here if it is possible
24. 04:56:072 (1) - spinner maybe not the best choice.. kinda waste the beats around here
25. 05:12:709 (3,4) - bad flow
26. 05:20:254 (6,7,8) - i should say the overlap here is pretty hard to read...
27. 05:35:072 (9) - ctrl+g
28. and also, the triplet issues in this kia
29. 06:00:890 (7,8,9) - i suppose the triplet here is unnecessary, an 1/2 repeat slider is better imo

Awaken wrote:

newbie mod
拖了两天;w;

SPOILER

皮肤赞

[Replay]
00:36:890 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - 建议正六边形 fixed
00:47:981 (3) - ctrl+g? fixed
00:58:890 (1) - 不够弯..建议包住2 先这样吧。
01:10:163 (1) - 建议这里SV搞慢点 然后这个滑条拖到01:10:436 拖拽感好玩 我考虑一下
01:56:890 (6) - 感觉跟5的距离可以远一点 毕竟你后面都拉远了. . 好
02:11:254 (6) - ctrl+g? 不了
02:50:163 (3) - 左移一点 包住2 fixed
02:51:254 (6) - 6的尾巴和5开头之间的距离可以等于4到5开头的距离 fixed
03:51:981 (1) - 这个不知道为什么打起来有点怪 感觉这个滑条的SV不怎么适合..建议慢点 我看看
04:10:890 (1) - 这个滑条可以突然快一下 爽号码 我看看
05:36:163 (6,7) - 这里的距离应该搞大点像这样鬼畜到底

SPOILER

看看

that's all
GL~
最后
你为何如此鬼畜

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~ mod from queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Storyboard & Skin]

1. Missing skin elements:
   
   1. reversearrow.png
   2. hit0.png
   Wrong size：
   
   1. spinner-background.png (1023x692)
   2. spinner-circle.png (666x666 I'll ask someone to make it )
   useless element (should be removed)
   
   1. star.png fixed
2. Uncheck widescreen support since your storyboard is 4:3 based ok

I'll ask someone to fix it
[Replay]

1. 00:43:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - looked odd a bit, i may suggest to reduce the spacing of this stream, ie ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:163 (3,4,5) - in this stanza, the triplet is not very fitful if your wanna follow vocal, or the slider 00:51:618 (1) - is not a good choice if you wanna follow drum. As my understanding, you choice may be follow drum so i'd like to change 00:51:618 (1) - to two notes. ok chang to notes
3. 00:54:345 (6,1) - not a good flow. move the 00:54:527 (1) -
4. 01:01:254 (5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly reduce the spacing here but i found no change of music.. make a bigger space.
5. 01:21:254 (3,4,5) - another odd placement... actually you needn't to stick yourself to DS... make a bigger space.
6. 01:25:072 (1) - move to 302:285 for better flow? ok and move the 01:25:254 (2) - too
7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - still bad shape, at least i hope here could be a blanket with 01:36:345 (6) - making a blankdet is my shortcoming
8. 01:43:799 (7) - it breaks the whole flow of this combo, i highly recommend to move it away - even stack to 01:43:436 (6) - 's end is better than current. you are right.01:43:799 (7) - just as a blanket for 01:43:981 (1) - I forgei to move it
9. 01:46:163 (3,4,5) - nonsense triplet
10. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:52:709 (1,2,3) - ^. How to judge if the triplet is okay or not? a simplay way is to confirm if the third note stays on a stress beat or not. I won't mention similar issues in this mod morewho not triplet? I listen it in 25% speed?
13. 03:43:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - compared with 02:43:254 (6,7,8,9,1) - , it is not a good shape. I don't understand why is not a good shape
14. 03:49:618 (3,4,5) - stack is better imo ok
15. 06:00:890 (7,8,9) - i suppose the triplet here is unnecessary, an 1/2 repeat slider is better imo ok

That's all

Regou wrote:

債欠了那麼久還是得拖得
在mod
[Replay]
請把一開頭那段map了吧,5:55有一點危險(雖然還是有圖5:55過了) 我叫人制作中。。
00:48:345 (4) - 好像漏了whistle(24 clap強逼癥發作中) 233
00:49:072 (3) - 我覺得除了1/2之外可以試試這種節奏,應該挺帶感的 ;w;蓝线伤不起

00:49:799 (6) - 00:51:254 (5) - 之類的也可以加clap 故意4不下CLAP
00:58:527 (8) - 那whistle炒雞吵 我调小声好了
01:13:981 (3) - 删了這note空一下會不會比較好啊 不好;w;
01:30:890 (1,1,1) - 這裡倒是沒什麽特別抖音,用這slider感覺不太合 我再想想看
02:00:890 (6,8) - 這樣的重疊倒是顯得圖不太乾淨了fixed
02:31:709 (6,7,8) - 加上默認的whistle吧,另外這排列好,帶感 fixed
02:51:254 (6) - 這裡用單note效果比較好 不好;w;

03:59:254 開始的減速段最好不用whistle 我再看看

最後的kiai誰做的,超難 我這麼善良怎麼能不跪呢 ;w;
06:19:799 (4) - Clap fixed

SPOILER

1. 00:42:345 (5) 移到x164, y56
   00:48:709 (5,6,7,8,9,10) 試試這個，因為用講的有點複雜所以我貼code，第3列是時間點，打開osu文件找到相對應的地方蓋過去就好
   
   SPOILER

   56,160,48709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   164,64,48890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   276,160,49072,2,0,P|319:135|349:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   169,256,49436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,72,49618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   428,188,49799,2,0,P|472:200|510:222,1,90

   01:53:618 (8,1) 壓到了

Azure wrote:

as your request

[General]

SPOILER

hitcircle : http://puu.sh/4qEI9.png
直接丟進去就好囉

---

補上
[Replay]

1. 00:42:345 (5) 移到x164, y56 好
   00:48:709 (5,6,7,8,9,10) 試試這個，因為用講的有點複雜所以我貼code，第3列是時間點，打開osu文件找到相對應的地方蓋過去就好 好的
   
   SPOILER

   56,160,48709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   164,64,48890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   276,160,49072,2,0,P|319:135|349:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   169,256,49436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,72,49618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   428,188,49799,2,0,P|472:200|510:222,1,90

   01:53:618 (8,1) 壓到了 fixed

整張圖我都看了，真是摸不出甚麼東西，好吧其實是我快睡著了因為我昨晚失眠
認真的看一下譜我大概知道之所以會被說爛的原因了...
在我看來應該是排列不夠漂亮簡潔，很多地方其實可以排成三角形、四邊形等多種不同的多邊型組合，然後在有些地方flow不是很好有些卡手，
還有一些更細微的地方就是可能slider壓到note、note和note可以疊起來之類的，在間距方面看起來有點亂，在版面使用率的地方有點集中在中間..
諸如此類的你再自己看看
好的 我会继续努力的 感谢MOD

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Replay]
00:20:527 (3) - 反过来啊，趋势从↗改成↖,另外有点扭过头了，后面那个note不要叠起来比较好 好
01:01:254 (5,6,1) - 接起来的话，flow有点勉强 改了
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 改成→↗↓这样的趋势如何 好

懒mod

我知道你很用心
但是
你这图主要问题是滑条风格太多变，正常的三点滑条弧度也太多变了，几十万种风格反而会使得图更丑。
我建议你一般的长的三点滑条，第二个描点放在滑条中间，第三个描点放在滑条尾巴的圆心里
带红点的长滑条的弧度部分，如果是短的用一个描点，稍微长点的用连个描点修饰
简单来说就是我觉得图太丑了
建议狂抄一波霜之哀伤的滑条样子

mtbbsben wrote:

Test Play Request from my queue

http://puu.sh/4qRxJ.osr

妈的丧心病狂在最后啊，一些手累了完全就是miss的状态
感觉滑条风格好多啊
后面间距好大啊
怎么还有这种接连打的啊05:19:981 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 改了

卧槽祝早app啊

pieguy1372 wrote:

00:20:527 (3) - this 1/4 jump seems really not suited for slow part, perhaps remove 1 repeat? done!
00:43:981 (1) - soft whistle? I want to use the n-hit but is contradiction with s-whis? 0 0
00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 00:55:618 (1,2) - 1grid down and 00:55:890 (4,5) - 1 grid up for smoother curve? done!
01:07:618 (5) - imo standard soft whistle could fit here better than finish, matches others too, mb try it?done!
01:15:436 (4,5,6) - stack end of 01:15:618 (6) - on 01:14:527 (6) - done!
01:45:436 (1) - regular soft finish on start done!
01:51:618 (5) - whistle on start 0 0 has been added
04:55:981 (8) - mb add whistle here?
05:02:345 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - rotate each one more? currently having a big angle from 05:02:709 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - feels weird cause the angle before it is so small = = example http://puu.sh/4ruTN.jpg

SPOILER

396,240,302345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,264,302436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,289,302527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,302709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,308,302799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,338,302890,1,0,0:0:0:0:

05:08:890 (1) - mb make this into a 1/4 slider? imo it creates a better lead in up to the strong part
05:43:981 (1) - finish on start instead of clap, to match 05:20:709 (1) -
05:51:618 (2,3,4) - mb move it a bit down and rotate it? as is, because of the shape of 05:51:254 (1) - , it feels too close and then 05:51:981 (5) - feels far away.. http://puu.sh/4rvew.jpg

that's it I think
nice map & song =w=
good luck

thank you for detai mod .It's very useful for me

Autumn wrote:

很抱歉，来迟了
最近沉迷wow5.4 现在终于缓过来了 lol

[Replay]

* 00:37:072 (1,2,3,4) - 试试交换23 感觉挺变扭的

* 00:41:072 (6) - 包好 fixed

Picture

* 01:28:527 (1) - 可以缩一个四分拍加一个单点在前面：

Picture

好

* 01:58:527 (1,2,3,4) - 同样可以试试交换23 现在挺好的
* 02:03:618 (3,4,5,6) - 尝试一下以下排列 好

Picture

* 02:58:163 (1) - 这个头可以用S：C1的finish 感觉有点奇怪;w;

* 03:21:072 (6,7) - 这两个滑条的头尾都交换一下和前面的衔接会比较好，如果采纳的话03:21:436 (1) - 也要交换头尾（Ctrl+G即可）考虑一下
* 04:16:527 (5) - 这个距离啊..最好安排一个跳不然容易被认为是四分拍 fixed
* 04:22:527 (1) - 变速，NC 好
总体来说没什么特别多要吐槽的
很棒的音效和皮肤以及故事版
谱面方面的话对跳跃的安排似乎有点泛滥？我觉得有点散，不过能处理成这样也不错了
加油 Star 感谢支持！

Strawberry wrote:

discussed with mapper via irc.

18:00 Strawberry: 一开始的flask
18:00 Strawberry: *flash
18:01 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:02 sjoy: 一开始怎么了 0 0
18:02 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:03 Strawberry: 一上来就闪一下感觉会瞎
18:03 sjoy: 哦
18:03 Strawberry: 而且效果感觉不是很好
18:03 Strawberry: 别的小问题我就不提了...
18:04 sjoy: 好
18:04 sjoy: 大方向的问题
18:04 Strawberry: 00:21:163 (1) - 说实话这个spinner略莫名
18:04 Strawberry: 就算要spin我觉得也应该00:22:527 - 开始吧..
18:04 sjoy: 其实一开始从这里开始做的。发现时间不够
18:04 sjoy: 就添上前面了
18:05 Strawberry: 其实全map上也不错
18:05 Strawberry: 至少比塞spinner
18:05 sjoy: 好的
18:05 Strawberry: *个人意见
18:06 sjoy: 我主要想知道这图被RANK可能有多大 还是说需要REMAP我心里有个底线
18:06 sjoy: 先
18:06 Strawberry: 00:30:527 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种大spacing的等距梗也是可以再灵活一点..比如把(4)移到x~104 y~260
18:07 Strawberry: 我已经提这些问题了就说明基本不需要洗牌了..
18:07 Strawberry: 但是提升空间还很大
18:07 sjoy: 恩
18:07 sjoy: 我会继续努力的
18:09 sjoy: 一开始想跳就想到等间距233
18:09 Strawberry: o
18:09 Strawberry: 00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种一般都是135whistle特殊情况下24但是基本没有全下whistle的
18:10 Strawberry: 自己考虑下
18:10 sjoy: 我试试
18:11 Strawberry: 01:26:527 (1) - 这种slider
18:11 sjoy: 应该杜绝么
18:12 sjoy: 没什么经验拉描点
18:12 Strawberry: 多加一个锚点就会自然很多 i.e.http://puu.sh/4rNOg.jpg
18:12 sjoy: 一般来说红点就是在黄金比例线上么？
18:12 Strawberry: 01:30:890 (1,1) - 这里的话这两个既然是水平的01:32:345 (1) - 这个要么也水平要么换个形状..
18:12 Strawberry: 黄金比例线
18:12 Strawberry: .
18:13 Strawberry: 其实就是你怎么看着顺眼怎么来
18:13 Strawberry: 难道你每拉个slider还用尺子量去?>_>
18:14 sjoy: 比如1分1 滑条我都是选球跑到蓝线上然后取圆心下点。。
18:14 Strawberry: 没有定式.. 这取决于个人习惯和实际情况
18:15 sjoy: 哦
18:15 Strawberry: 01:52:890 (3,4) - 这里spacing又莫名缩了好多.. 而且还是在kiai段..
18:16 Strawberry: 包括后面那几个连打。。
18:16 sjoy: KIA之后不是应该减了么
18:17 Strawberry: 还没结束啊
18:17 Strawberry: .
18:18 sjoy: 我认为唱完就结束了._.
18:19 Strawberry: 02:32:345 (2) - slider的reverse箭头不要轻易遮。。
18:19 Strawberry: 很容易就unrankable
18:20 Strawberry: 不过这里勉强可以放过..因为custom skin大部分是透明区域..
18:20 sjoy: 打完也算遮么
18:20 sjoy: 必须等痕迹完全消失么。
18:21 Strawberry: 不是完全消失 到能接受的程度即可
18:22 Strawberry: 但是你这里repeat我个人感觉略无理.. 所以遮着会比较危险
18:22 sjoy: 那就移开好了。

感觉细节部分还能再提升. 加油囖.

[ Sana ] wrote:

Go on extra rule~

result

lots of mistakes...lots of fun xD

my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

thanks~

HeShu wrote:

Extra rules

I'm not as good as [sana] but I did my best :3
Great map and too hard for my level yet (but perfect for approval imo)

There is my map :
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/116692

mintong89 wrote:

来了来了！

[Replay]

00:13:072 (3) - 如果是我的话, 我会直接stack住 (2) 然后用直线slider. 感觉这样比较有气派. (不对
00:14:163 (2,3,4) - 一样的Spacing怎么样? 已经一样了阿 ;w;
00:15:981 (3) - 这个违和感超级高, 用这个吧orz.

SPOILER

好
00:20:163 (2) - 这个slider和前两个不一样, 拉太弯了. fixed
00:21:072 (1) - 我觉得不用NC了 因为后面是spinner. 好
00:41:072 (6) - 感觉太靠近 00:40:709 (5) - 了 拉远了
00:41:799 (3,6) - 感觉这排发有点怪... 我再考虑一下;w;
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 这个我建议stack住...现在的真的好奇怪... 好
01:22:163 (1,3) - 没包好 fixed
01:26:163 (5,1) - ^ fixed
01:46:163 - 加个note? 不然这样放着感觉很奇怪 已改了;w;怀疑版本不对;w;
第二个Kiai部分的好乱 感觉就像新人尝试做鬼畜图 然后做不成的感觉 233(

其他都还可以 加油!
对不起烂mod orz 只能射星了 感谢

S o a p wrote:

star~

ts8zs wrote:

随便来凑个数._.
00:05:254 (1) - Ｃｔｒｌ＋ｇ 感觉现在挺顺的
00:17:254 (2) - Ｃｔｒｌ＋ｇ 好麻烦后面都要调;w;
00:30:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990563 保留先，其实我这里节奏故意空1拍
00:32:709 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990575 ;w; 继续保留
00:33:799 (2) - move to 312,256
00:39:981 (1) - 下右移 好极了！
01:02:163 (3) - Ctrl+G 和2太挤了
01:24:345 (3) - Ctrl+G 先保留 4有点不顺
01:27:618 (5) - Ctrl+G 好
>01:27:981 (1) - Ctrl+G 以及微调 好
01:27:981 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990583 好
01:33:618 (1) - move to 352,184 保留
01:34:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990586 ^
01:39:436 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990594 好
01:45:072 (5,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990597 改了一部分

03:53:799 (3) - Ctrl+G 保留

ts8zs wrote:

没回的是什么情况._.

02:10:527 (3,4) - swap 好
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602 好
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48 no
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612 没改
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615改了下位置

这部分是咱的part..

ts8zs wrote:

继续,NO kd

没回的是什么情况._.

02:10:527 (3,4) - swap
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615

04:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/991173 还要改后面的 111 好麻烦;w;
05:08:345 (1,1,1) - 难度突然大了
05:13:981 (3,4) - ^
以及后续的
就这样吧

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

Mod from my Que:
The only thing I could find is this slider at these time points.
01:22:163
01:22:527
The slider should be moved a bit, other then that, I have nothing else to say.

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M sorry for delay

Replay

00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o done!
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here done!
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider done!
02:59:618 (5) - ^ done!
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm done!
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else? done!

good luck~

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]

前3分

00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?

後3分

03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點

sjoy wrote:

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]

前3分

00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?

後3分

03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點

感谢你那么细心的MOD
关于音效 WIS那一段我是故意之下2节奏的 4不下
关于BLANKET 并不是越多越好 有时候要看FLOW的
修复了一些

不知道為什麼就很專心的看 呵呵 看你做得很好 所以就慢慢看下去了
目前自己做的insane都好poor 不知該怎辦 QQ群也努力跟人請教中 希望你有空也能指點我一下

Garven wrote:

Did some quick IRC modding. I'll check up on the lyrics later if I get some time.

KSHR has graciously stepped up to help verify the lyrics are correct, so we'll wait on his ok.

Xinely wrote:

from m4m in my queue
Feel free to no kd my mod, this map already good and just opinion in here

• 
  General
  well because this is collab, make name mapper for collab in SB pls.. helpful to modder write who's part in their mod umm.We are the same group.We all decide not to do it

• 
  Replay
  00:01:436 (3,4) - try use this rhythm http://puu.sh/4xkMG.jpg ? follow music properly imo done
  00:06:527 (1) - 372,276? better for see based visual imo done
  00:08:163 (1,2,3,4) - try make them like http://puu.sh/4xkWd.jpg ? placement better imo done
  00:11:072 (4) - NC for consistency done
  00:15:981 (2,3) - try this overlap http://puu.sh/4y9Af.jpg ? done
  00:32:162 (5) - this placement make confuse imo, how about 152|248? keep
  00:35:254 (6) - NC because SV change keep
  00:44:344 (5) - add whistle in here because the music done
  00:51:254 (5) - ctrl+G for better flow to play? done
  01:25:254 (2) - better visual and more neat if you stacked with 01:24:163 (2) - ? done
  01:45:072 (5) - try ctrl+G this? done
  02:34:527 (7) - NC due SV change keep
  02:46:163 (7) - extend until 02:46:436 - ? sound better to me :3 keep
  03:58:890 - add note for follow vocal? I'll think about it
  04:19:254 (4) - ctrl+G for make jumpy and fun to play?keep
  04:33:436 (4) - NC for anti jump

Touhou :3
Good Luck ~