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Topic Starter
sjoy

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~ mod from queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Storyboard & Skin]
  1. Missing skin elements:
    1. reversearrow.png
    2. hit0.png
    Wrong size:
    1. spinner-background.png (1023x692)
    2. spinner-circle.png (666x666 I'll ask someone to make it )
    useless element (should be removed)
    1. star.png fixed
  2. Uncheck widescreen support since your storyboard is 4:3 based ok
I'll ask someone to fix it
[Replay]
  1. 00:43:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - looked odd a bit, i may suggest to reduce the spacing of this stream, ie ok
  2. 00:52:163 (3,4,5) - in this stanza, the triplet is not very fitful if your wanna follow vocal, or the slider 00:51:618 (1) - is not a good choice if you wanna follow drum. As my understanding, you choice may be follow drum so i'd like to change 00:51:618 (1) - to two notes. ok chang to notes
  3. 00:54:345 (6,1) - not a good flow. move the 00:54:527 (1) -
  4. 01:01:254 (5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly reduce the spacing here but i found no change of music.. make a bigger space.
  5. 01:21:254 (3,4,5) - another odd placement... actually you needn't to stick yourself to DS... make a bigger space.
  6. 01:25:072 (1) - move to 302:285 for better flow? ok and move the 01:25:254 (2) - too
  7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - still bad shape, at least i hope here could be a blanket with 01:36:345 (6) - making a blankdet is my shortcoming
  8. 01:43:799 (7) - it breaks the whole flow of this combo, i highly recommend to move it away - even stack to 01:43:436 (6) - 's end is better than current. you are right.01:43:799 (7) - just as a blanket for 01:43:981 (1) - I forgei to move it :o
  9. 01:46:163 (3,4,5) - nonsense triplet
  10. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - ^
  11. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
  12. 01:52:709 (1,2,3) - ^. How to judge if the triplet is okay or not? a simplay way is to confirm if the third note stays on a stress beat or not. I won't mention similar issues in this mod morewho not triplet? I listen it in 25% speed? :o
  13. 03:43:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - compared with 02:43:254 (6,7,8,9,1) - , it is not a good shape. I don't understand why is not a good shape :?:
  14. 03:49:618 (3,4,5) - stack is better imo ok
  15. 06:00:890 (7,8,9) - i suppose the triplet here is unnecessary, an 1/2 repeat slider is better imo ok
That's all
about the triplet issues in this kia .we are thinking about remapping it
thanks for your detail modding
I think I found a way to improve it
Topic Starter
sjoy
01:57:072~03:33:072 all problems fixed
04:22:527~05:55:618 fixed some problems
Regou
債欠了那麼久還是得拖得
在mod
[Replay]
請把一開頭那段map了吧,5:55有一點危險(雖然還是有圖5:55過了)
00:48:345 (4) - 好像漏了whistle(24 clap強逼癥發作中)
00:49:072 (3) - 我覺得除了1/2之外可以試試這種節奏,應該挺帶感的

00:49:799 (6) - 00:51:254 (5) - 之類的也可以加clap
00:58:527 (8) - 那whistle炒雞吵
01:13:981 (3) - 删了這note空一下會不會比較好啊
01:30:890 (1,1,1) - 這裡倒是沒什麽特別抖音,用這slider感覺不太合
02:00:890 (6,8) - 這樣的重疊倒是顯得圖不太乾淨了
02:31:709 (6,7,8) - 加上默認的whistle吧,另外這排列好,帶感
02:51:254 (6) - 這裡用單note效果比較好

03:59:254 開始的減速段最好不用whistle
04:32:527 (3,4) - 不如重疊的更徹底
04:46:527 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 大跳差評,明明音樂那麼安靜

最後的kiai誰做的,超難 我這麼善良怎麼能不跪呢
06:19:799 (4) - Clap
Topic Starter
sjoy

Regou wrote:

債欠了那麼久還是得拖得
在mod
[Replay]
請把一開頭那段map了吧,5:55有一點危險(雖然還是有圖5:55過了) 我叫人制作中。。
00:48:345 (4) - 好像漏了whistle(24 clap強逼癥發作中) 233
00:49:072 (3) - 我覺得除了1/2之外可以試試這種節奏,應該挺帶感的 ;w;蓝线伤不起

00:49:799 (6) - 00:51:254 (5) - 之類的也可以加clap 故意4不下CLAP
00:58:527 (8) - 那whistle炒雞吵 我调小声好了
01:13:981 (3) - 删了這note空一下會不會比較好啊 不好;w;
01:30:890 (1,1,1) - 這裡倒是沒什麽特別抖音,用這slider感覺不太合 我再想想看
02:00:890 (6,8) - 這樣的重疊倒是顯得圖不太乾淨了fixed
02:31:709 (6,7,8) - 加上默認的whistle吧,另外這排列好,帶感 fixed
02:51:254 (6) - 這裡用單note效果比較好 不好;w;

03:59:254 開始的減速段最好不用whistle 我再看看

最後的kiai誰做的,超難 我這麼善良怎麼能不跪呢 ;w;
06:19:799 (4) - Clap fixed

感谢 MOD :)
Azure
as your request 8-)

[General]



hitcircle : http://puu.sh/4qEI9.png
直接丟進去就好囉 ;)

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補上
[Replay]
  1. 00:42:345 (5) 移到x164, y56
    00:48:709 (5,6,7,8,9,10) 試試這個,因為用講的有點複雜所以我貼code,第3列是時間點,打開osu文件找到相對應的地方蓋過去就好
    SPOILER
    56,160,48709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    164,64,48890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    276,160,49072,2,0,P|319:135|349:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    169,256,49436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    260,72,49618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    428,188,49799,2,0,P|472:200|510:222,1,90
    01:53:618 (8,1) 壓到了
整張圖我都看了,真是摸不出甚麼東西,好吧其實是我快睡著了因為我昨晚失眠
認真的看一下譜我大概知道之所以會被說爛的原因了...
在我看來應該是排列不夠漂亮簡潔,很多地方其實可以排成三角形、四邊形等多種不同的多邊型組合,然後在有些地方flow不是很好有些卡手,
還有一些更細微的地方就是可能slider壓到note、note和note可以疊起來之類的,在間距方面看起來有點亂,在版面使用率的地方有點集中在中間..
諸如此類的你再自己看看
Topic Starter
sjoy

Azure wrote:

as your request 8-)

[General]



hitcircle : http://puu.sh/4qEI9.png
直接丟進去就好囉 ;)

---

補上
[Replay]
  1. 00:42:345 (5) 移到x164, y56 好
    00:48:709 (5,6,7,8,9,10) 試試這個,因為用講的有點複雜所以我貼code,第3列是時間點,打開osu文件找到相對應的地方蓋過去就好 好的
    SPOILER
    56,160,48709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    164,64,48890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    276,160,49072,2,0,P|319:135|349:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    169,256,49436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    260,72,49618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    428,188,49799,2,0,P|472:200|510:222,1,90
    01:53:618 (8,1) 壓到了 fixed
整張圖我都看了,真是摸不出甚麼東西,好吧其實是我快睡著了因為我昨晚失眠
認真的看一下譜我大概知道之所以會被說爛的原因了...
在我看來應該是排列不夠漂亮簡潔,很多地方其實可以排成三角形、四邊形等多種不同的多邊型組合,然後在有些地方flow不是很好有些卡手,
還有一些更細微的地方就是可能slider壓到note、note和note可以疊起來之類的,在間距方面看起來有點亂,在版面使用率的地方有點集中在中間..
諸如此類的你再自己看看
好的 我会继续努力的 :) 感谢MOD
lkx_Shore
[Replay]
00:20:527 (3) - 反过来啊,趋势从↗改成↖,另外有点扭过头了,后面那个note不要叠起来比较好
01:01:254 (5,6,1) - 接起来的话,flow有点勉强
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 改成→↗↓这样的趋势如何
02:25:436 (4,5,6) - 你不觉得这里接得有点怪么
03:09:254 (1,1,1,1) - 感觉这里没有很好的表现出音乐....试试间距越来越大的梗

懒mod

我知道你很用心
但是
你这图主要问题是滑条风格太多变,正常的三点滑条弧度也太多变了,几十万种风格反而会使得图更丑。
我建议你一般的长的三点滑条,第二个描点放在滑条中间,第三个描点放在滑条尾巴的圆心里
带红点的长滑条的弧度部分,如果是短的用一个描点,稍微长点的用连个描点修饰
简单来说就是我觉得图太丑了
建议狂抄一波霜之哀伤的滑条样子
Topic Starter
sjoy

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Replay]
00:20:527 (3) - 反过来啊,趋势从↗改成↖,另外有点扭过头了,后面那个note不要叠起来比较好 好
01:01:254 (5,6,1) - 接起来的话,flow有点勉强 改了
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 改成→↗↓这样的趋势如何 好

懒mod

我知道你很用心
但是
你这图主要问题是滑条风格太多变,正常的三点滑条弧度也太多变了,几十万种风格反而会使得图更丑。
我建议你一般的长的三点滑条,第二个描点放在滑条中间,第三个描点放在滑条尾巴的圆心里
带红点的长滑条的弧度部分,如果是短的用一个描点,稍微长点的用连个描点修饰
简单来说就是我觉得图太丑了
建议狂抄一波霜之哀伤的滑条样子
8-) 感谢MOD
慢慢来不急啊半个月不到慢慢抄
Koiyuki
Test Play Request from my queue


妈的丧心病狂在最后啊,一些手累了完全就是miss的状态
感觉滑条风格好多啊
后面间距好大啊
怎么还有这种接连打的啊05:19:981 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -

卧槽祝早app啊
Topic Starter
sjoy

mtbbsben wrote:

Test Play Request from my queue


妈的丧心病狂在最后啊,一些手累了完全就是miss的状态
感觉滑条风格好多啊
后面间距好大啊
怎么还有这种接连打的啊05:19:981 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 改了

卧槽祝早app啊
感谢 试图 :)
pieguyn
00:20:527 (3) - this 1/4 jump seems really not suited for slow part, perhaps remove 1 repeat?
00:43:981 (1) - soft whistle?
00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 00:55:618 (1,2) - 1grid down and 00:55:890 (4,5) - 1 grid up for smoother curve?
01:07:618 (5) - imo standard soft whistle could fit here better than finish, matches others too, mb try it?
01:15:436 (4,5,6) - stack end of 01:15:618 (6) - on 01:14:527 (6) -
01:45:436 (1) - regular soft finish on start
01:51:618 (5) - whistle on start
02:43:345 (7,8,9,1) - standard soft whistle like before
03:21:436 (1) - standard soft finish on start?
03:33:072 - continue whistles from here plz. there's still a strong beat here so seems it fits.. currently it seems weird to have a strong kiai and then doesn't carry beat afterward :cry:
04:55:981 (8) - mb add whistle here?
05:02:345 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - rotate each one more? currently having a big angle from 05:02:709 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - feels weird cause the angle before it is so small = = example http://puu.sh/4ruTN.jpg
SPOILER
396,240,302345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,264,302436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,289,302527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,302709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,308,302799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,338,302890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
05:08:890 (1) - mb make this into a 1/4 slider? imo it creates a better lead in up to the strong part
05:43:981 (1) - finish on start instead of clap, to match 05:20:709 (1) -
05:51:618 (2,3,4) - mb move it a bit down and rotate it? as is, because of the shape of 05:51:254 (1) - , it feels too close and then 05:51:981 (5) - feels far away.. http://puu.sh/4rvew.jpg

that's it I think
nice map & song =w=
good luck :D
Topic Starter
sjoy

pieguy1372 wrote:

00:20:527 (3) - this 1/4 jump seems really not suited for slow part, perhaps remove 1 repeat? done!
00:43:981 (1) - soft whistle? I want to use the n-hit but is contradiction with s-whis? 0 0
00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 00:55:618 (1,2) - 1grid down and 00:55:890 (4,5) - 1 grid up for smoother curve? done!
01:07:618 (5) - imo standard soft whistle could fit here better than finish, matches others too, mb try it?done!
01:15:436 (4,5,6) - stack end of 01:15:618 (6) - on 01:14:527 (6) - done!
01:45:436 (1) - regular soft finish on start done!
01:51:618 (5) - whistle on start 0 0 has been added
04:55:981 (8) - mb add whistle here?
05:02:345 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - rotate each one more? currently having a big angle from 05:02:709 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - feels weird cause the angle before it is so small = = example http://puu.sh/4ruTN.jpg
SPOILER
396,240,302345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,264,302436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,289,302527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,302709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,308,302799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,338,302890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
05:08:890 (1) - mb make this into a 1/4 slider? imo it creates a better lead in up to the strong part
05:43:981 (1) - finish on start instead of clap, to match 05:20:709 (1) -
05:51:618 (2,3,4) - mb move it a bit down and rotate it? as is, because of the shape of 05:51:254 (1) - , it feels too close and then 05:51:981 (5) - feels far away.. http://puu.sh/4rvew.jpg

that's it I think
nice map & song =w=
good luck :D
thank you for detai mod .It's very useful for me :)
Autumn
很抱歉,来迟了
最近沉迷wow5.4 现在终于缓过来了 lol

[Replay]

* 00:37:072 (1,2,3,4) - 试试交换23

* 00:41:072 (6) - 包好

* 01:28:527 (1) - 可以缩一个四分拍加一个单点在前面:

* 01:58:527 (1,2,3,4) - 同样可以试试交换23

* 02:03:618 (3,4,5,6) - 尝试一下以下排列

* 02:58:163 (1) - 这个头可以用S:C1的finish

* 03:21:072 (6,7) - 这两个滑条的头尾都交换一下和前面的衔接会比较好,如果采纳的话03:21:436 (1) - 也要交换头尾(Ctrl+G即可)

* 04:16:527 (5) - 这个距离啊..最好安排一个跳不然容易被认为是四分拍

* 04:22:527 (1) - 变速,NC

总体来说没什么特别多要吐槽的
很棒的音效和皮肤以及故事版
谱面方面的话对跳跃的安排似乎有点泛滥?我觉得有点散,不过能处理成这样也不错了
加油 Star
Strawberry
discussed with mapper via irc.
18:00 Strawberry: 一开始的flask
18:00 Strawberry: *flash
18:01 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:02 sjoy: 一开始怎么了 0 0
18:02 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:03 Strawberry: 一上来就闪一下感觉会瞎
18:03 sjoy: 哦
18:03 Strawberry: 而且效果感觉不是很好
18:03 Strawberry: 别的小问题我就不提了...
18:04 sjoy: 好
18:04 sjoy: 大方向的问题
18:04 Strawberry: 00:21:163 (1) - 说实话这个spinner略莫名
18:04 Strawberry: 就算要spin我觉得也应该00:22:527 - 开始吧..
18:04 sjoy: 其实一开始从这里开始做的。发现时间不够
18:04 sjoy: 就添上前面了
18:05 Strawberry: 其实全map上也不错
18:05 Strawberry: 至少比塞spinner
18:05 sjoy: 好的
18:05 Strawberry: *个人意见
18:06 sjoy: 我主要想知道这图被RANK可能有多大 还是说需要REMAP我心里有个底线
18:06 sjoy: 先
18:06 Strawberry: 00:30:527 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种大spacing的等距梗也是可以再灵活一点..比如把(4)移到x~104 y~260
18:07 Strawberry: 我已经提这些问题了就说明基本不需要洗牌了..
18:07 Strawberry: 但是提升空间还很大
18:07 sjoy: 恩
18:07 sjoy: 我会继续努力的
18:09 sjoy: 一开始想跳就想到等间距233
18:09 Strawberry: o
18:09 Strawberry: 00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种一般都是135whistle特殊情况下24但是基本没有全下whistle的
18:10 Strawberry: 自己考虑下
18:10 sjoy: 我试试
18:11 Strawberry: 01:26:527 (1) - 这种slider
18:11 sjoy: 应该杜绝么
18:12 sjoy: 没什么经验拉描点
18:12 Strawberry: 多加一个锚点就会自然很多 i.e.http://puu.sh/4rNOg.jpg
18:12 sjoy: 一般来说红点就是在黄金比例线上么?
18:12 Strawberry: 01:30:890 (1,1) - 这里的话这两个既然是水平的01:32:345 (1) - 这个要么也水平要么换个形状..
18:12 Strawberry: 黄金比例线
18:12 Strawberry: .
18:13 Strawberry: 其实就是你怎么看着顺眼怎么来
18:13 Strawberry: 难道你每拉个slider还用尺子量去?>_>
18:14 sjoy: 比如1分1 滑条我都是选球跑到蓝线上然后取圆心下点。。
18:14 Strawberry: 没有定式.. 这取决于个人习惯和实际情况
18:15 sjoy: 哦
18:15 Strawberry: 01:52:890 (3,4) - 这里spacing又莫名缩了好多.. 而且还是在kiai段..
18:16 Strawberry: 包括后面那几个连打。。
18:16 sjoy: KIA之后不是应该减了么
18:17 Strawberry: 还没结束啊
18:17 Strawberry: .
18:18 sjoy: 我认为唱完就结束了._.
18:19 Strawberry: 02:32:345 (2) - slider的reverse箭头不要轻易遮。。
18:19 Strawberry: 很容易就unrankable
18:20 Strawberry: 不过这里勉强可以放过..因为custom skin大部分是透明区域..
18:20 sjoy: 打完也算遮么
18:20 sjoy: 必须等痕迹完全消失么。
18:21 Strawberry: 不是完全消失 到能接受的程度即可
18:22 Strawberry: 但是你这里repeat我个人感觉略无理.. 所以遮着会比较危险
18:22 sjoy: 那就移开好了。

感觉细节部分还能再提升. 加油囖.
Topic Starter
sjoy

Autumn wrote:

很抱歉,来迟了
最近沉迷wow5.4 现在终于缓过来了 lol

[Replay]

* 00:37:072 (1,2,3,4) - 试试交换23 感觉挺变扭的

* 00:41:072 (6) - 包好 fixed
* 01:28:527 (1) - 可以缩一个四分拍加一个单点在前面:


* 01:58:527 (1,2,3,4) - 同样可以试试交换23 现在挺好的 ;)
* 02:03:618 (3,4,5,6) - 尝试一下以下排列
* 02:58:163 (1) - 这个头可以用S:C1的finish 感觉有点奇怪;w;

* 03:21:072 (6,7) - 这两个滑条的头尾都交换一下和前面的衔接会比较好,如果采纳的话03:21:436 (1) - 也要交换头尾(Ctrl+G即可)考虑一下
* 04:16:527 (5) - 这个距离啊..最好安排一个跳不然容易被认为是四分拍 fixed
* 04:22:527 (1) - 变速,NC
总体来说没什么特别多要吐槽的
很棒的音效和皮肤以及故事版
谱面方面的话对跳跃的安排似乎有点泛滥?我觉得有点散,不过能处理成这样也不错了
加油 Star 感谢支持! :)
感谢MOD :)
Topic Starter
sjoy

Strawberry wrote:

discussed with mapper via irc.
18:00 Strawberry: 一开始的flask
18:00 Strawberry: *flash
18:01 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:02 sjoy: 一开始怎么了 0 0
18:02 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:03 Strawberry: 一上来就闪一下感觉会瞎
18:03 sjoy: 哦
18:03 Strawberry: 而且效果感觉不是很好
18:03 Strawberry: 别的小问题我就不提了...
18:04 sjoy: 好
18:04 sjoy: 大方向的问题
18:04 Strawberry: 00:21:163 (1) - 说实话这个spinner略莫名
18:04 Strawberry: 就算要spin我觉得也应该00:22:527 - 开始吧..
18:04 sjoy: 其实一开始从这里开始做的。发现时间不够
18:04 sjoy: 就添上前面了
18:05 Strawberry: 其实全map上也不错
18:05 Strawberry: 至少比塞spinner
18:05 sjoy: 好的
18:05 Strawberry: *个人意见
18:06 sjoy: 我主要想知道这图被RANK可能有多大 还是说需要REMAP我心里有个底线
18:06 sjoy: 先
18:06 Strawberry: 00:30:527 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种大spacing的等距梗也是可以再灵活一点..比如把(4)移到x~104 y~260
18:07 Strawberry: 我已经提这些问题了就说明基本不需要洗牌了..
18:07 Strawberry: 但是提升空间还很大
18:07 sjoy: 恩
18:07 sjoy: 我会继续努力的
18:09 sjoy: 一开始想跳就想到等间距233
18:09 Strawberry: o
18:09 Strawberry: 00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种一般都是135whistle特殊情况下24但是基本没有全下whistle的
18:10 Strawberry: 自己考虑下
18:10 sjoy: 我试试
18:11 Strawberry: 01:26:527 (1) - 这种slider
18:11 sjoy: 应该杜绝么
18:12 sjoy: 没什么经验拉描点
18:12 Strawberry: 多加一个锚点就会自然很多 i.e.http://puu.sh/4rNOg.jpg
18:12 sjoy: 一般来说红点就是在黄金比例线上么?
18:12 Strawberry: 01:30:890 (1,1) - 这里的话这两个既然是水平的01:32:345 (1) - 这个要么也水平要么换个形状..
18:12 Strawberry: 黄金比例线
18:12 Strawberry: .
18:13 Strawberry: 其实就是你怎么看着顺眼怎么来
18:13 Strawberry: 难道你每拉个slider还用尺子量去?>_>
18:14 sjoy: 比如1分1 滑条我都是选球跑到蓝线上然后取圆心下点。。
18:14 Strawberry: 没有定式.. 这取决于个人习惯和实际情况
18:15 sjoy: 哦
18:15 Strawberry: 01:52:890 (3,4) - 这里spacing又莫名缩了好多.. 而且还是在kiai段..
18:16 Strawberry: 包括后面那几个连打。。
18:16 sjoy: KIA之后不是应该减了么
18:17 Strawberry: 还没结束啊
18:17 Strawberry: .
18:18 sjoy: 我认为唱完就结束了._.
18:19 Strawberry: 02:32:345 (2) - slider的reverse箭头不要轻易遮。。
18:19 Strawberry: 很容易就unrankable
18:20 Strawberry: 不过这里勉强可以放过..因为custom skin大部分是透明区域..
18:20 sjoy: 打完也算遮么
18:20 sjoy: 必须等痕迹完全消失么。
18:21 Strawberry: 不是完全消失 到能接受的程度即可
18:22 Strawberry: 但是你这里repeat我个人感觉略无理.. 所以遮着会比较危险
18:22 sjoy: 那就移开好了。

感觉细节部分还能再提升. 加油囖.
谢谢~我会继续努力的 :)
HabiHolic
(>°_°)>

Modding reservation

Call me back~
Hanabi
Go on extra rule~


lots of mistakes...lots of fun xD

my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

thanks~
Hanabi
.
Topic Starter
sjoy

[ Sana ] wrote:

Go on extra rule~


lots of mistakes...lots of fun xD

my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

thanks~
great 8-)
HeShu

I'm not as good as [sana] but I did my best :3
Great map and too hard for my level yet (but perfect for approval imo)

There is my map :
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/116692
Topic Starter
sjoy

HeShu wrote:


I'm not as good as [sana] but I did my best :3
Great map and too hard for my level yet (but perfect for approval imo)

There is my map :
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/116692
ok
accept it 8-)
mintong89
来了来了!

[Replay]

00:13:072 (3) - 如果是我的话, 我会直接stack住 (2) 然后用直线slider. 感觉这样比较有气派. (不对
00:14:163 (2,3,4) - 一样的Spacing怎么样?
00:15:981 (3) - 这个违和感超级高, 用这个吧orz. 00:20:163 (2) - 这个slider和前两个不一样, 拉太弯了.
00:21:072 (1) - 我觉得不用NC了 因为后面是spinner.
00:41:072 (6) - 感觉太靠近 00:40:709 (5) - 了
00:41:799 (3,6) - 感觉这排发有点怪...
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 这个我建议stack住...现在的真的好奇怪...
01:22:163 (1,3) - 没包好
01:26:163 (5,1) - ^
01:46:163 - 加个note? 不然这样放着感觉很奇怪
第二个Kiai部分的好乱 感觉就像新人尝试做鬼畜图 然后做不成的感觉 (

其他都还可以 加油!
对不起烂mod orz 只能射星了
Topic Starter
sjoy

mintong89 wrote:

来了来了!

[Replay]

00:13:072 (3) - 如果是我的话, 我会直接stack住 (2) 然后用直线slider. 感觉这样比较有气派. (不对
00:14:163 (2,3,4) - 一样的Spacing怎么样? 已经一样了阿 ;w;
00:15:981 (3) - 这个违和感超级高, 用这个吧orz.
00:20:163 (2) - 这个slider和前两个不一样, 拉太弯了. fixed
00:21:072 (1) - 我觉得不用NC了 因为后面是spinner. 好
00:41:072 (6) - 感觉太靠近 00:40:709 (5) - 了 拉远了
00:41:799 (3,6) - 感觉这排发有点怪... 我再考虑一下;w;
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 这个我建议stack住...现在的真的好奇怪... 好
01:22:163 (1,3) - 没包好 fixed
01:26:163 (5,1) - ^ fixed
01:46:163 - 加个note? 不然这样放着感觉很奇怪 已改了;w;怀疑版本不对;w;
第二个Kiai部分的好乱 感觉就像新人尝试做鬼畜图 然后做不成的感觉 233(

其他都还可以 加油!
对不起烂mod orz 只能射星了 感谢 :)
感谢MOD :)
Neiji Razuiya
hi from your m4m request :)
maybe my mod is helpful or not

[Replay]

02:53:799 (5) - NC
05:19:981 (5) - NC
05:28:709 (5) - NC

wow almost perfect .o.
giving you star~ ;)
sorry if my mod bad..i still the amatur modder :o
Topic Starter
sjoy
fixed
thanks :D
S o a p
star~
Topic Starter
sjoy

S o a p wrote:

star~
thanks :)
ts8zs
随便来凑个数._.
00:05:254 (1) - Ctrl+g
00:17:254 (2) - Ctrl+g
00:30:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990563
00:32:709 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990575
00:33:799 (2) - move to 312,256
00:39:981 (1) - 下右移
01:02:163 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:24:345 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:27:618 (5) - Ctrl+G
>01:27:981 (1) - Ctrl+G 以及微调
01:27:981 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990583
01:33:618 (1) - move to 352,184
01:34:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990586
01:39:436 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990594
01:45:072 (5,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990597
02:10:527 (3,4) - swap
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615
03:53:799 (3) - Ctrl+G

好困 先mark
Topic Starter
sjoy

ts8zs wrote:

随便来凑个数._.
00:05:254 (1) - Ctrl+g 感觉现在挺顺的
00:17:254 (2) - Ctrl+g 好麻烦后面都要调;w;
00:30:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990563 保留先,其实我这里节奏故意空1拍
00:32:709 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990575 ;w; 继续保留
00:33:799 (2) - move to 312,256
00:39:981 (1) - 下右移 好极了!
01:02:163 (3) - Ctrl+G 和2太挤了
01:24:345 (3) - Ctrl+G 先保留 4有点不顺
01:27:618 (5) - Ctrl+G 好
>01:27:981 (1) - Ctrl+G 以及微调 好
01:27:981 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990583
01:33:618 (1) - move to 352,184 保留
01:34:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990586 ^
01:39:436 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990594
01:45:072 (5,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990597 改了一部分

03:53:799 (3) - Ctrl+G 保留
ts8zs
继续,NO kd
没回的是什么情况._.
02:10:527 (3,4) - swap
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615
04:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/991173
05:08:345 (1,1,1) - 难度突然大了
05:13:981 (3,4) - ^
以及后续的
就这样吧
chenwu

ts8zs wrote:

没回的是什么情况._.
02:10:527 (3,4) - swap
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48 no
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612 没改
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615改了下位置
这部分是咱的part..
thx for modding
@sjoy咱拿最新的改的可以直接覆盖过去
http://puu.sh/4uLt1.osu
Topic Starter
sjoy

ts8zs wrote:

继续,NO kd
没回的是什么情况._.
02:10:527 (3,4) - swap
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615
04:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/991173 还要改后面的 111 好麻烦;w;
05:08:345 (1,1,1) - 难度突然大了
05:13:981 (3,4) - ^
以及后续的
就这样吧
感谢MOD
剩下部分不是我的管的了233
CrazyErrorMan
Mod from my Que:
The only thing I could find is this slider at these time points.
01:22:163
01:22:527
The slider should be moved a bit, other then that, I have nothing else to say.
Topic Starter
sjoy

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

Mod from my Que:
The only thing I could find is this slider at these time points.
01:22:163
01:22:527
The slider should be moved a bit, other then that, I have nothing else to say.
in fact there is not any problem
anyhow.thanks for modding 8-)
HelloSCV
as M4M sorry for delay

Replay

00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider
02:59:618 (5) - ^
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else?

good luck~
Topic Starter
sjoy

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M sorry for delay

Replay

00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o done!
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here done!
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider done!
02:59:618 (5) - ^ done!
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm done!
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else? done!

good luck~
thanks for modding :)
smallboat
嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]


前3分
00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?
後3分
03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望有些MOD能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點
Topic Starter
sjoy

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]


前3分
00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?
後3分
03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點
感谢你那么细心的MOD :)
关于音效 WIS那一段我是故意之下2节奏的 ;) 4不下
关于BLANKET 并不是越多越好 :P 有时候要看FLOW的
修复了一些
smallboat

sjoy wrote:

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]


前3分
00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?
後3分
03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點
感谢你那么细心的MOD :)
关于音效 WIS那一段我是故意之下2节奏的 ;) 4不下
关于BLANKET 并不是越多越好 :P 有时候要看FLOW的
修复了一些
不知道為什麼就很專心的看 呵呵 看你做得很好 所以就慢慢看下去了
目前自己做的insane都好poor 不知該怎辦 QQ群也努力跟人請教中 希望你有空也能指點我一下 :o
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