1. Easy (1,58 stars, 136 notes)
2. Hard (3,06 stars, 325 notes)
3. Insane (3,86 stars, 376 notes)
4. Normal (2,21 stars, 193 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Here's some suggestions:

Normal mode:

You should lower the approach rate by 1. I've tried it, and it seems to work well! Yeah, I've tried that too, should be fine with AR4 then.
Try adding in an extra hit circle at 00:21:649, and 00:23:363. When you listen closely, you can also hear an extra beat in the song. It'll also help get rid of that awkward gap.

Also try adding in a hit circle at:
00:25:078
00:26:792
00:28:506
00:30:220
01:42:220
01:43:935
01:45:649
All those additional beats make sense.^^ I only put the last two ones into the previous slider.

At 00:22:078, why not make it a slider? Same goes for 00:28:935.
Hmmmm, you're right... Makes it more consistent at that part.

And remove the object at 01:54:435, it's too hard for a player to handle after the speed of the previous, and I can see this mode already stretching to hard mode.
Maybe i should rename the difficulty to "Normal+" then.^^ Removed that circle.

Reverse the slider at 02:06:220, and move it away from the previous hit circle to allow snap.
Good idea. Changed it.

Hope this helps!

Liiraye wrote:

From #modreqs

General:
Avoid starting any sliders on red ticks, that goes for all diffs.
I think in this case they make sense, so i will keep them.

I believe it's supposed to be "Halcyonic Falcon X" instead of "HalcyonicFalconX"?
I looked it up again, it's fine like that (without spaces)

Easy
00:40:078 (2,3) consider making this a slider instead, it's pretty hard to read for a beginner
00:43:506 (2,3) same here and the following ones like it
01:13:078 (1) This part is pretty confusing because of the transition from a higher distance snap to a significantly smaller. Try making it more even instead of such a rough transition please!
01:49:078 (3) Align this more straight maybe?
01:52:078 (2) same here
01:54:220 (1) Here's the transition problem again, it's very hard to read as a beginner so try to even it out.
02:07:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Temporarily disable distance snap and make the distance more even
Applied all of these suggestions.

Normal
Check AIMod for general distance spacing, IMO there are lots if not most notes unsnapped
Hmmm, for me there are no unsnapped notes, at least AIMod didn't say anything about that.

Also consider setting a small break somewhere in the middle or as I did in the hard mod below
I set the break similar to the hard diff, only a little bit longer.

Avoid overlaps like you have in this section 01:41:363 (2)


Hard
I noticed a lot of small distance mistakes like this all over the map: http://puu.sh/3CWxo.jpg
You can avoid it by using a smaller grid or temporarily removing it completely
Also fix the distance on these:
00:04:506 (1)
00:09:649 (3)
00:22:078 (4)
00:38:363 (7)
00:40:506 (1)
00:52:078 (1)
01:06:649 (1)
01:36:649 (6,1)
01:34:935 (4,5)
Applied.

I'd suggest placing a note here with a finish hitsound 01:13:078 and remove the 4 spinners after it to make a small break. Done.

Please consider using CS 5 at least!
Somehow it didn't look so tiny with CS6, but okay i'll go with CS5 for now.

Chronotakular wrote:

Hello! I'd like to say all these

[Easy]

00:38:363 (1) - Is this one note combo intentional? In fact, it isn't.^^
01:52:078 (3) - This note is slightly not aligned with the tail of slider 2. Done.
[Normal]

00:40:506 (2) - This stack is misleading. I kept think slider 2 occurs before it actually does. If you don't want to move this slider, maybe add a note at the half beat before slider 2? I moved it a bit down now.
00:59:792 (2,6) - I'm aware these are distance snapped, but I kept hitting these early. Consider moving them just a little bit closer to the tail of the slider. Done.
01:57:649 (6) - New combo? Done.
[Hard]

01:11:792 (5) - I would split this slider in half and make it 2 sliders. Also done.

[Insane]

00:40:506 (4,1) - This gap is misleading. I would move circle 1 below circle 2. Changed even a bit more here.
00:45:435 (1,2) - I would move these two a little bit closer together. Or move circle 1 between 3 and 2. Done.
00:58:292 (2) - Stack this note a little bit nice with the tail of slider 1. Done.
01:03:863 (6,7) - I'd spread these two notes out. Feels kinda weird as of right now. Also changed a bit more here.
01:07:935 (7,1) - Maybe spread these out a bit? (Nah. Never mind. This is fine.) ^^
01:55:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps make this sliders different shapes, just to make this a little bit more interesting to play? Haha, first i accidently thought that you meant the sliders at the very end, so i changed a bit there now. Also applied what you said here
02:04:292 (8) - I would move this up, above circle 7, and to the left of circle 1. Guess you meant to the right?^^
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These maps are excellent. I hope my mod helped! Good luck!

MeatloafCereal wrote:

Hi! From my queue
Really good mapset
I don't have much to say
There's just something about the music suddenly fading out at the end which makes me feel it's incomplete when it actually is complete. Well, that's the song.
But that doesn't affect your mapping skills though

[Easy]
Remove countdown Done.
02:19:935 (4) - Remove finish; I think having a different sound from the rest of the combo makes the song feel more finished Removed all finishes of the last combo, sounded better to me than just removing the last one.
[Normal]
Remove countdown - Especially since it's faster than Easy's countdown Done.

[Hard]
00:13:078 (9) - NC?
00:33:649 (8) - ^
00:38:363 (7) - ^
00:42:863 (6) - ^
00:45:220 (12) - NC here and Remove NC at 00:45:649 (1)
00:45:220 (12,13,1) - Stack these notes maybe?
00:49:078 (8) - NC?
00:54:220 (9) - ^ Applied all of these suggestions.
02:19:935 (4) - Remove finish; I think having a different sound from the rest of the combo makes the song feel more finished Same with easy diff.
I think that combos should rarely get to 2 digit numbers, only allowable when there are quite long streams /personal opinion
Besides, your insane didn't have this long of combos

[Insane]
I failed playing this diff but I'll try to mod it

Squeeze streams closer together
I saw:

this

and it made me think:

this

was a stream (though looking closer now, it's clearly not, but i was still confused my first playthrough)

I think 1.1x or 1.3x would look nice
streams past 00:45:435 (1,2,1) - are fine though Okay i fixed those.

00:54:220 (5,6) - lengthen with a reverse arrow instead of a circle(I prefer to keep moving in my opinion) Done.
01:10:078 (1,2,3) - They're hard to read on the first time; they looked identical so i thought they had the same reverse arrows and spacing

Try this:

My try at it:

Changed it almost the same way as you did.^^
02:21:006 (6,8) - Ctrl+G, feels much smoother Done.

Really great map overall

Squirrel wrote:

Heyah, random mod here, cause I really like the song. :3
It's just a few suggestions, youd don't have to change anything of that.

Easy

Did you use the same distance spacing the whole time? 'cause (dunno if it's just me) it doesn't fit at the beginning. (It says 0,9 for me.)

1. 00:09:649 (2,3)
2. 00:19:935 (2,3,4) and ongoing

Please check if you used the correct spacing.. it's kinda weird. s: 0,9? It should be 1,4. o.O And i didn't find much where to fix spacing issues

Anyway,

1. 00:13:078 (4) - you could keep the "edgy" sliderstyle like the first two. like http://puu.sh/3QaVq.png Nah, for me it's fine.
2. 00:19:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to find a nice pattern, the circles look rather randomly placed to me. example: http://puu.sh/3Qb12.png and http://puu.sh/3Qb23.png Changed.
3. 01:13:078 (1,2) and the slider afterwards with the same shape - you might want to reshape a few of them to add a bit more variety. It'd look more intersting and if you can make the sliders interwine somehow. :3 Changed too.
4. 01:41:363 (3,1,2) - http://puu.sh/3Qbdb.png instead (?)

Changed similarly.^^

Also, think about the slider velocity changes, I know they kinda fit, but it might be really really confusing for a beginner if the speed just changes like that. (Maybe you could add an info text somewhere in the background as part of a storyboard.) I'll do that when i've got a bit more time.

Normal

I have the same "problem" here with the distance spacing.. :c For me it's also fine here :O

1. 00:14:363 (8) - reshape to fit the circle. like http://puu.sh/3Qbpu.png + it "prepares" for the spinner (cause of the movement) Done.
2. 00:22:506 (3,4) - reshape 3 to http://puu.sh/3Qbuv.png and move 4 to x376 y144 (you'd have to replace the sliders coming afterwards, but might be worth it..) The current shape is okay for me.
3. 01:26:792 (1,2) - slider looks better with a shape like http://puu.sh/3QbCZ.png I think It doesn't work how you linked it with only 3 points. o.O Fixed it differently though.^^
4. 01:40:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so many straight sliders.. try to use a different form or maybe change the angle of one or two of them.

Changed.

Hard

Same with distance spacing as in the other difficulties.. I'm starting to think there's something wrong with my osu. xD Probably yes

1. 00:01:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change the angle of the sliders each time to make it look like a circle all in all. Changed.
2. 00:31:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to use a different pattern. example: http://puu.sh/3QbVr.png don't know if you can see what I did there.. 2 and 4 are at the same spot, it's more interesting to play. :3 (you can use a new combo starting at 4 if you want to avoid confusion)
3. 00:33:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Both changed.
4. 01:55:078 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - needs more variety

Changed.

Aaand that's it for now, 'cause I suck at modding Insane. Dx Hope I could help you a bit. c:
(And if I phrased anything really weird and it's not understandable, pm me if you wanna know what I meant. I tend to phrase things horribly wrong.. XD)

Krah wrote:

Hi random mod.

[Général]

- Why did you have map the begining of the song only in hard and insane ? Well, in the easy and normal diffs i focused on the drums which dont occur in the very beginning. In the hard and insane diffs i focused on the crystal sounds.
- Inconsistency in timing points (bpm changes). Fix this Sorry, i don't know what you mean by that. I only have one timing point for all diffs.
- Inconsistency in combo colour. Insane don't have the same combo. Fixed that.
- Inconsistency in breaks. I don't see any problems with that.


[Easy]

- 00:40:078 (2) - Ctrl+g ?
- 01:25:078 (2) - Ctrl+g ?
- 01:19:935 (1,2) - You can try this for a better look ? http://puu.sh/3QlbR/6545f54538.jpg (ctrl+h,ctrl+j,ctrl+g)
- 01:23:363 (1,2) - Can you rework on this blanket, I think you can improve the look.
Changed.

[Normal]

- 00:14:363 (8) - Align this with 00:13:506 (6,7) for pattern logic. Done.
- 01:06:649 (1,2,3,4) - You can make a diamond with this notes. Hmm, i did something different.
- 01:33:649 (1) - 01:35:363 (3) - I have ask a bat and this sliders are unrankable. Fix this. Oh, i didn't know that. Fixed them.


[Hard]

- 00:10:506 (4) - Ctrl+g Done.

Sorry but I don't have mod the insane and the end of the hard for lack of time

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue.

EASY

00:27:649 (2) - better move it 2 grids down, so it's at the same high of the previous slider Done.
00:48:649 (4) - maybe it's better to move it somwhere else because since it's an easy diff maybe it's better to don't make this touch with 00:46:935 (2) - Done.
01:04:506 (2) - I think it's better to make one more reverse to make it consistent with the previous sliders, also because for a beginner can be hard maybe... Nah, i think it's still easier to keep it like that because of the 1/2s coming up
02:08:363 (2,7) - stack them better
02:07:935 (1,8) - ^ Both done.
and baybe consider to set slidertick rate 1 instead if 2... Yeah you're right, it makes sense.

NORMAL

00:45:649 (1) - maybe allign it perfectly with 00:45:220 (7) - Done.
01:02:792 (1,2,3) - you can make this pattern better, like this:

SPOILER

(I copy/pasted 01:03:220 (2) - to make it) Fixed that.
01:04:935 (6,7) - make this blancket better and avoit to make them thuch Mmh, moved it a bit up.
01:07:506 (3) - if you move this to x:200 - y:236 it'll be exactly in the middle of the 2 sliders Done.
01:28:506 (2) - this form seem strange when I see this slider 01:30:220 (3) - passing through it... I think it's okay. I only moved the slider a bit.

HARD

01:06:006 (5,6) - if you move them 2 grids right and 1 up them'll be exactly in the middle of the slider Did something different.
01:07:078 (2,4) - try to stack them Done.
01:09:220 (3) - if you make the curve of this slider wider it'll be better blancketed with 01:09:863 (4) - ... I also suggest to make more wider curves because in this way you can be more free to make good slider without touching the other notes... or maybe you should think of changing the spacing because in some parts like this 01:08:792 (2,3,4,1) - they are too close to each other imo. Good idea.^^ Changed a bit here.
01:48:435 (2) - in my opinion it's better to delete a reverse and add a note at 01:49:078 - Done.
01:50:149 (2) - ^ Done.
01:53:578 - add a note here? Done.
01:55:078 (2,4) - I suggest to exchange the position of these notes, so it won't be confusing while playing because I think there should be a jump at this Point Also done.

that's all. good luck with this map

ax_pokl wrote:

Von ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[Allgemein]
Loeschen HalcyonicFalconX - Crystalis Fantasia (DarkVortex).osb
(Sie koennen SB vielleicht aendern, die Background grau und farbig zu machen) Gute Idee.^^ Ich versuch das mal.

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.6 (ganze Zahl) Passt so
AudioLeadIn: 2000 Gefixt
00:11:363 (3,4) - Am besten benutzen Sie in Easy Beatmap kein Slider, die 3-return habe. Sie koennen das zu 2 Slider trennen. Ok
01:04:506 (2,1) - Oh nein.. (Benutzen Sie immer 3-return slider oder wie?) Ich finde, die Returns ergeben hier Sinn...
01:53:792 (7,1) - Beachten Sie Distance Snap. Ok
(Benutzen Sie mehr Slider statt Circle) Hmmm, so wie es jetzt ist sollte es ausgewogen sein.

[Normal]
Sehr gut. Danke^^
AudioLeadIn: 2000 Gefixt
StackLeniency: 0.3 Ist doch bereits eingestellt o.O
00:32:578 (1,2) - Benutzen Sie am besten die Dinge nicht, die am Anfang auf die rote linie. Naja, bei dem Beat muss das so sein...
01:49:078 (5) - nc(neu combo)? Ok
01:52:506 (4) - nc? ^

[Hard]
Circle Size: 5? Joa, es kommen ja kaum Jumps vor, also sollte das kein Problem sein.
01:49:078 (3) - Am besten Sie das Circle unter Slider nicht verstecken. Geändert
01:51:220 (4,7) - nc? ^

[Insane]
StackLeniency: 0.3 Ok
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
Combo1 : 255,120,55 (Am besten gleich als andere Beatmap) ]Die Farben sind doch gleich (bis auf das Rot was nur die Insane hat) :O
Am besten beutzen Sie mehe Slider als Circle. Für die Jumps eignen sich Circles hier meistens besser, finde ich.
00:40:078 (4,1) - zu nahe, snap sie. Spacing etwas geändert.
00:42:649 (3,4) - (zu weit?) ^
01:12:435 (6,1,2,3) - schwer zu lesen. ^
Viele Dinge sind zu weit, ich empfehle Sie CS mit 5 zu benutzen. CS 5 erscheint mir etwas zu klein hier...

Gute Map, viel Glück.

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
You need to enable epilepsy warning. Oh yes, i forgot^^
The end of the music cuts out rough (I don't know how to say). Here's one: http://puu.sh/4bgkv.mp3 Mmh, it's almost the same here... Didn't change it.

[Easy]
00:59:363 (1,2) - Try to make these two a a perfect triangle. Done
01:19:935 (1) - Ctrl+G and rotate it to -129 degrees? For a flow. Yeah, makes sense^^ Changed
02:07:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you need to change this pattern. It's confusing for the beginners. Changed

[Normal]
00:33:649 (2) - Odd slider. Reshaped it
00:54:220 (6) - Don't stack with 00:52:506 (5) because it's a 1/1 beat and there's already a 1/2 beat like 00:56:792 (2,3,4) . You're right^^ Fixed it
01:26:792 (1) - The middle little square, put it at x:360 y:392 for a perfect curve. Done
01:28:506 (2) - ^ but at x:232 y:60. Also done
02:09:650 (5) - NC? ^

[Hard]
00:03:649 (7) - Put it at x:268 y:276 and rotate it somewhere at 39 degrees. Changed
02:09:649 (5) - NC? ^

[Insane]
01:06:006 - Add a note here to x:64 y:144. Yeah, sounds better than the doubles here^^
01:07:935 (7) - NC and remove NC to 01:08:363 (1) . Done
01:09:649 (7) - ^ and ^ to 01:10:078 (1) . ^

Good Luck!

MasterKirin wrote:

Hellow from Kirin's Modding queue

Let's begin o/

[Normal]
00:09:220 Try to add a circle here I think the circle doesn't fit here when the beats build up...
00:20:363 ^
00:22:078 ^ Didn't add those two beats to put some variety at the upcoming part.
00:27:220 ^
00:28:935 ^
00:30:649 ^ Added those 3 circles
02:16:078 ^ Added
02:17:792 ^ Didn't add this one
02:19:506 ^ Added

[Hard]
Put the CS at 4. Circles are too tiny Changed. CS 5 seems to make everything look retarded these days xD

For the rest nothing wrong o.O If you say so...

Good luck for ranking

1. L'OD de tes diffs est assez étrange tu passe de OD 3 à 4 puis 7 puis 8 ce qui n'est pas très logique. Je conseillerais de changer l'od de la easy en 2 et de la hard en 6 par exemple.

1. 00:22:506 (1,2,3) - C'est assez bizarre. Tu as 3 notes a utiliser et tu fais le début d'un carré. Pourquoi? Un triangle serait plus logique. De plus tu as déjà beaucoup de carré/rectangle dans ta map ça changerait!
2. 00:25:935 (1,2,3) - ^ (mais là c'est avec des sliders)
3. 01:19:935 (1) - Essaye d'éviter cet overlap pas très esthétique.
4. 01:49:078 (3,4) - Problème de spacing ici. C'est x0.92 au lieu de x1.0.

1. 00:11:363 (3) - NC pour montrer le changement de pattern (et parce que sinon le combo est un peu tro plong)
2. 01:11:792 (5) - NC, le combo est bien trop long.
3. 01:52:506 (4) - ^

1. Sur les 40 premier % de ta map il y a un finish par note. C'est beaucoup trop. Aucune map n'a un hitsound sur chacune de ses notes qui plus est tout le temps le même. Tu devrais recheck les hitsounds et essayé quelque chose de plus varié. Et c'est pareil pour toutes les autres diffs.

1. 01:11:578 - Rajoutes une note.
2. 01:40:506 - Multiplier le SV par 1.4 c'est beaucoup trop pour une normal. PAr 1.1~1.2 a la rigueur mais 1.4 ca passera pas.
3. 02:17:792 - Rajoutes une note. Tu en as mis une à 02:16:078 (2) et 02:19:506 (5) alors pourquoi pas ici aussi?

1. 00:09:649 (2,1) - Évite cet overlap pas très esthétique.
2. 00:24:863 (5,1) - Problème de spacing ici. C'est x0.60 au lieu de x0.80.
3. 00:29:363 (5,6) - Overlap.
4. 00:46:292 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:52:506 (5) - Essaye d'arrondir un peu plus le slider. Ça fera plus joli comme ça:
   
   
6. 00:54:220 (6) - ^
7. 00:59:363 (1,2) - Problème de spacing ici. C'est x0.90 au lieu de x1.
8. 01:01:078 (5,6) - ^
9. 01:05:363 (7) - Bouge le 2eme slider point 1 cran vers le haut et le end point 1 cran vers la droite pour une meilleure blanket.
10. 01:08:363 (5,6,7,8) - Overlap.
11. 01:26:792 (1,2,3) - Ces blanket sont largement améliorable.

1. 02:14:792 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi est-ce qu'il y a moins de note ici que dans la normal?

1. 00:01:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pourquoi est-ce qu'il y a un jump entre 2 et 3, entre 4 et 5 mais pas entre 6 et 7?
2. 00:32:149 (2,3,4,5) - A cause de l'AR faible ce genre de pattern est très confus à jouer. Espace plus les notes au lieu de les stackées comme ça!
3. 00:33:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
4. 01:04:720 (2,3) - Pourquoi le spacing passe soudainement de x0.9 à x1?
5. 01:54:649 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ici aussi l'AR faible rend ce passage confus. On a du mal a voir si l'écart entre les notes est du 1/2 ou du 1/1 du coup ca en devient presque injouable.

1. 02:21:006 (6,7,8) - Supprime les notes car tu finis toutes tes autres diff à 02:20:363.

1. 00:02:578 (7,1) - Ce jump est moins importants que les autres avec des notes rouges. Donc éloigne 1 plus de 7.
2. 00:07:935 (1) - Euh, il devrait pas plutôt être à x=296 y=312 si on suit la logique du pattern 00:06:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7).
3. 00:09:435 (3,1) - Ici aussi on a une note rouge mais pas de jump.
4. 00:34:292 (5) - 1 cran vers le bas pour éviter l'overlap.
5. 00:37:078 (1,2,3) - Encore overlap
6. 00:44:578 (2,3) - Une note cachée par un slider c'est UNRANKABLE!
7. 01:12:863 (2,1) - Essaye de stacker 2 sur la fin de 1. Ça sera bien plus joli.
8. 01:35:363 (2,3) - Rebelote Overlap.
9. 01:43:935 (1,2) - Devine!

1. 01:11:363 (4) - Suivant la logique de 01:06:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) et 01:08:363 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) il devrait y avoir un NC ici.
2. 02:14:578 (1,2) - Pourquoi des notes rouges ici? Il n'y a rien sur le SB ni dans la musique l'indiquant.

rezoons wrote:

Salut ^^,

Voila mon mod de ma queue:

[Général]
Difficulty

1. L'OD de tes diffs est assez étrange tu passe de OD 3 à 4 puis 7 puis 8 ce qui n'est pas très logique. Je conseillerais de changer l'od de la easy en 2 et de la hard en 6 par exemple. Tu as raison Changé

[Easy]
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:22:506 (1,2,3) - C'est assez bizarre. Tu as 3 notes a utiliser et tu fais le début d'un carré. Pourquoi? Un triangle serait plus logique. De plus tu as déjà beaucoup de carré/rectangle dans ta map ça changerait! C'est vrai^^ Alors je les ai remplacé avec quelque sliders pour faire un autre pattern
2. 00:25:935 (1,2,3) - ^ (mais là c'est avec des sliders) Changé
3. 01:19:935 (1) - Essaye d'éviter cet overlap pas très esthétique. J'ai bougé le 2ème slider un peu.
4. 01:49:078 (3,4) - Problème de spacing ici. C'est x0.92 au lieu de x1.0. Tout le spacing est à x1,4 maintenant.

NC

1. 00:11:363 (3) - NC pour montrer le changement de pattern (et parce que sinon le combo est un peu tro plong) Appliqué
2. 01:11:792 (5) - NC, le combo est bien trop long. ^
3. 01:52:506 (4) - ^ ^

Hitsound

1. Sur les 40 premier % de ta map il y a un finish par note. C'est beaucoup trop. Aucune map n'a un hitsound sur chacune de ses notes qui plus est tout le temps le même. Tu devrais recheck les hitsounds et essayé quelque chose de plus varié. Et c'est pareil pour toutes les autres diffs. J'ai remplacé quelque finish avec des claps mais spécialement dans l'easy/normal c'est presque impossible de varier beaucoup plus car ca s'entend pas très bien. En plus les notes y suivent les drums. Pour les hard/insane diffs je pense que c'est bien maintenant.

[Normal]

1. 01:11:578 - Rajoutes une note. Ca serait un peu trop je pense.
2. 01:40:506 - Multiplier le SV par 1.4 c'est beaucoup trop pour une normal. PAr 1.1~1.2 a la rigueur mais 1.4 ca passera pas. Hmmm, je l'ai changé à x1,3 et pour moi c'est bien comme ca. J'espère que c'est rankable (dis moi si c'est pas rankable^^)
3. 02:17:792 - Rajoutes une note. Tu en as mis une à 02:16:078 (2) et 02:19:506 (5) alors pourquoi pas ici aussi? En fait, je ne sais pas. xD Changé

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:09:649 (2,1) - Évite cet overlap pas très esthétique. Changé
2. 00:24:863 (5,1) - Problème de spacing ici. C'est x0.60 au lieu de x0.80. ^
3. 00:29:363 (5,6) - Overlap. ^
4. 00:46:292 (2,3) - ^ ^
5. 00:52:506 (5) - Essaye d'arrondir un peu plus le slider. Ça fera plus joli comme ça:
   
   
   Changé même-si ce n'est pas aussi parfait comme ton slider
6. 00:54:220 (6) - ^ Ctrl+C / +V de 00:52:506 (5) xD
7. 00:59:363 (1,2) - Problème de spacing ici. C'est x0.90 au lieu de x1. Changé
8. 01:01:078 (5,6) - ^ ^
9. 01:05:363 (7) - Bouge le 2eme slider point 1 cran vers le haut et le end point 1 cran vers la droite pour une meilleure blanket. ^
10. 01:08:363 (5,6,7,8) - Overlap. Créé des blankets nouveaux
11. 01:26:792 (1,2,3) - Ces blanket sont largement améliorable. Haha oui^^ Changé

[Hard]

1. 02:14:792 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi est-ce qu'il y a moins de note ici que dans la normal? J'ai ajouté quelque jumps petits ici maintenant.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:01:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pourquoi est-ce qu'il y a un jump entre 2 et 3, entre 4 et 5 mais pas entre 6 et 7? Bougé la 7
2. 00:32:149 (2,3,4,5) - A cause de l'AR faible ce genre de pattern est très confus à jouer. Espace plus les notes au lieu de les stackées comme ça! Bonne idée^^
3. 00:33:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
4. 01:04:720 (2,3) - Pourquoi le spacing passe soudainement de x0.9 à x1? Ce doit être à x1,0 maintenant
5. 01:54:649 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ici aussi l'AR faible rend ce passage confus. On a du mal a voir si l'écart entre les notes est du 1/2 ou du 1/1 du coup ca en devient presque injouable. Changé le pattern.

[Insane]

1. 02:21:006 (6,7,8) - Supprime les notes car tu finis toutes tes autres diff à 02:20:363. Non, car les notes suivent les tons crystales je veux les garder

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:02:578 (7,1) - Ce jump est moins importants que les autres avec des notes rouges. Donc éloigne 1 plus de 7. Mmh, appliqué
2. 00:07:935 (1) - Euh, il devrait pas plutôt être à x=296 y=312 si on suit la logique du pattern 00:06:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). J'ai changé le pattern ici
3. 00:09:435 (3,1) - Ici aussi on a une note rouge mais pas de jump. Maintenant il y en a une
4. 00:34:292 (5) - 1 cran vers le bas pour éviter l'overlap. Changé
5. 00:37:078 (1,2,3) - Encore overlap ^
6. 00:44:578 (2,3) - Une note cachée par un slider c'est UNRANKABLE! J'ai changé le pattern ici.
7. 01:12:863 (2,1) - Essaye de stacker 2 sur la fin de 1. Ça sera bien plus joli. Tu as raison^^
8. 01:35:363 (2,3) - Rebelote Overlap. Changé
9. 01:43:935 (1,2) - Devine! Hmmmmm... overlap peut-être? xD J'ai remodelé les sliders

NC

1. 01:11:363 (4) - Suivant la logique de 01:06:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) et 01:08:363 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) il devrait y avoir un NC ici. Euh, oui^^
2. 02:14:578 (1,2) - Pourquoi des notes rouges ici? Il n'y a rien sur le SB ni dans la musique l'indiquant. Parce que... euh... je les ai supprimé maintenant

Ta map a beaucoup trop de ligne droite. Tu devrai essayer de faire plus de courbe. Elles sont beaucoup plus fun a jouer et toutes les maps qui sont rankées de nos jours n'ont pas autant de ligne droite que ça! Sinon, bonne chance pour le rank . Ces phrases m'ont fait penser sur beaucoup dans ma map et m'ont fait aussi remapper et remplacer quelques passages pour y faire plus de courbes. >.< J'espère que c'est mieux maintenant^^

rezoons wrote:

Voila mon mod de ma queue:

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~
Hum... It's cold around here...

• [Easy]

1. Nothing to say Sounds good xD

• [Normal]

1. 00:31:078 (7) - Move this slider right (because it's ugly with the (5) ) Changed.
2. 00:38:792 (1,2) - Blanket ? Changed.
3. 00:40:506 (2,3) - ^ ^
4. 00:55:935 (1) - Distance Snap ? Move this slider at (5) Moved it
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:03:220 (2) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down (For better blanket) Done
6. 01:11:149 (2,1,2) - Too Hard with the approachcircle Made an arc out of the circles instead
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:34:935 (2,3) - Distance Snap Ooops, fixed
8. 02:14:578 (7,1) - Distance Snap ? Maybe you can do something like that ? (Even if it's ugly xD) Done, made it a bit more beautiful though
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:17:792 (4,5) - Blanket ? Changed.

• [Hard]

1. 00:01:720 (2,3) - If the changed of distance snap is intentional, it's weird =/ It was intentional, changed it bit though
2. 00:18:649 (1) - Move it 1 grid up and 1 grid left (for Distance Snap) Done
3. 00:31:720 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ugly patern =( Changed
4. 00:35:792 (2,3) - Distance Snap !? Fixed
5. 00:38:578 (2,3) - Try a better blanket Okay, done
6. 00:43:935 (3,4,5,6) - Jump man ~ Jumps are allowed in a Hard diff Replaced it though
7. 00:59:363 - 01:06:220 Strange hitsound patern...
8. ...01:06:649 - Who disappears xD This shouldn't be actually xD Well, i made it more consistent
9. 01:11:792 (5,6) - Distance Snap... It's fine like that
10. 01:28:078 (3,4) - ^ Also fine. I can't squeeze these two patterns together (would look awful)
11. 01:29:792 (6,1) - ^ Also okay, little jumps are fine
12. 01:48:435 (2,3) - ^ That jump was intended
13. 02:16:078 (2,3) - ^
14. 02:17:792 (4,5) - ^
15. 02:19:506 (6,7) - ^ As well as these jumps are intended^^

• [Insane]
  F*cking Jump Insane xD I know, right?

1. 00:21:649 (1) - Move it here : (120 ; 256) Don't you think, (80,320) makes more sense?
2. 01:53:578 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Better Blanket Done.
3. 02:00:970 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Extra-terrorized Jump Patern xD I'll still keep it

Good Luck *u* Thanks a lot

rezoons wrote:

Voila mon mod de ma queue:

Je crois que ma queue donne pas des mods aussi bons xD (Blague de mauvais gout ~)

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
The sb is good but a bit...scary? Haha kinda yes It's awesome, no? :3

[Easy]

01:53:792 (4,1) - this sudden ds change make me confused. Changed it. There's a ds of 2,2x now but i think it's necessary.


[Normal]

nothing found. Actually good xD

[Hard]

00:04:292 - add a note here? Added.
00:23:792 (4,5,6,7) - it feels strange. maybe reduce one reverse of the slider? Done.
00:30:649 (4,1) - ^ Also done.
00:55:935 (1,4) - ^ Nah, it's fine here. The next sliders indicate when the slider ends well enough
01:00:220 (4,4) - ^ same here
01:38:792 (5,4) - ^ Changed this one.
01:51:220 (1,2,3) - not stacked properly Fixed it.
02:01:720 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed too.
01:54:220 (9) - ds should be 0.7 Changed.


[Insane]

1.8x slider is too fast. Also it plays awkward. Changed it back to 1,0x and changed the pattern there
00:58:935 (5,1,2,3,1) - not readable I think it's fine like that. I'll keep it.
01:03:649 (4,1) - stack them Done.
01:07:720 (6,1,2) - move 2 closer to 1 is more readable Changed.
02:14:792 - from here gradually reducing the volume sounds better Yeah good idea. Applied it.

Sorry for short mod. Good map with creativity, but your placement could be better. As it is my first beatmap im quite lucky to hear it's creative. :3

yachiru4 wrote:

Hey from my queue

-Can you change your combo colors? I like how you used different tones for grey for the black & white part of the SB, but when it's colors enter, the combo colors (blue, orange green) looks bad. Only the purple one actually matched the BG pretty well.
Use different shades of purple. Oh, good idea. I replaced them with some "purples" :3


Did it with double time just for the heck of it. The flow lacks style Owww, i see. Tried to improve it a bit by stacking more sliders/circles and making some edgy sliders round. Hope that helped xD

????Seriously, one miss and I get an A? Of course! You are not allowed to miss to get an S :p
This diff has some pretty weird looking sliders, remake them? Hmm, i like most of them. Reshaped a few though.


Same suggestion as Easy....and this mode has those damn streams. Streams are awesome <3 Anyway, i'm changing the style there a bit

Sorry didn't pass Insane. Damn, i would have appreciated if you had taken NF and had told me what you think about it though... :/

Cheers!

DarkVortex wrote:

Dreaming of crystals... :3

[Easy]

1. Slides look too small :S Since your BPM - 150 isn't too fast Try increasing the slider velocity a bit to 0.7 or 0.8. After you do this, make sure you recalculate the slider lengths as shown:
   - Definitely saves you some time, but some sliders you'll have to manual fix yourself.

00:36:649 (4) - NC
00:48:649 (4) - ^
01:18:220 (2,1) - What happened to the DS? Look back at 01:13:078 (1,2) - 's DS then at these ones and you'll see the big difference.
01:19:935 (1,2) - Not very pretty imo
01:46:935 (3) - Add finish to the tail.
01:53:792 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:13:078 (5) - NC
00:22:506 (3) - Too overdone, please re model and NC here as well.
00:29:363 (5) - ^
00:31:078 (7) - Please re-model this slider too.
00:37:078 (5) - ^
00:38:792 (1,2) - There two should have a similar figure, you can form a pretty good symmetry here!
Or just try this blanket:

00:42:863 (4) - NC
01:01:078 (5) - ^
01:04:506 (5) - ^
01:30:220 (3) - ^
01:43:935 - 01:45:220 Try this rhythm?

01:47:792 (2,3) - Try not to curve these too much, it makes it hard to see and tell when it'll end.
02:18:220 (5) - NC

[Hard]

1. Try increasing the slider velocity to 1.20 or 1.40, you've used a lot of 1/2 sliders in this diff, and besides its Hard mode after all

00:09:649 (4) - NC
00:20:363 (4) - ^
00:23:792 (4) - ^
00:27:220 (5) - ^
00:30:649 (4) - ^
00:47:363 (7) - ^
00:50:149 (2) - ^
00:57:649 (4) - ^
01:28:506 (4) - ^
01:38:792 (5) - ^
02:18:220 (5) - ^

Try to keep your combos consistent.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

DarkVortex wrote:

Dreaming of crystals... :3

Aww you dream of me? ^^ Just kidding!

Anyways, just dropping by to give this map a recheck :3

[Easy]

1. Slides look too small :S Since your BPM - 150 isn't too fast Try increasing the slider velocity a bit to 0.7 or 0.8. After you do this, make sure you recalculate the slider lengths as shown:
   - Definitely saves you some time, but some sliders you'll have to manual fix yourself. Yeah, thanks for the tip^^ Took me quite a long time though, but it looks better now IMO

00:36:649 (4) - NC Well the new mesure starts one beat later... Didn't change this
00:48:649 (4) - ^ Hmm, combos before also went until 4 and are of the same style. Didn't change.
01:18:220 (2,1) - What happened to the DS? Look back at 01:13:078 (1,2) - 's DS then at these ones and you'll see the big difference.
01:19:935 (1,2) - Not very pretty imo Remodelled these (and also the following 2) Fixed the DS as well
01:46:935 (3) - Add finish to the tail. Done.
01:53:792 (4) - ^ Done.

[Normal]
00:13:078 (5) - NC Done.
00:22:506 (3) - Too overdone, please re model and NC here as well. Done.
00:29:363 (5) - ^ ^
00:31:078 (7) - Please re-model this slider too. ^
00:37:078 (5) - ^ ^
00:38:792 (1,2) - There two should have a similar figure, you can form a pretty good symmetry here!
Or just try this blanket:
Tried the blanket you proposed. Looks good to me.^^
00:42:863 (4) - NC I've put it one note earlier (mesure starts there)
01:01:078 (5) - ^ Done.
01:04:506 (5) - ^ ^
01:30:220 (3) - ^ ^
01:43:935 - 01:45:220 Try this rhythm? Good idea. The old one was quite hard anyway

01:47:792 (2,3) - Try not to curve these too much, it makes it hard to see and tell when it'll end. Reshaped them.
02:18:220 (5) - NC Done.

[Hard]

1. Try increasing the slider velocity to 1.20 or 1.40, you've used a lot of 1/2 sliders in this diff, and besides its Hard mode after all

00:09:649 (4) - NC
00:20:363 (4) - ^
00:23:792 (4) - ^
00:27:220 (5) - ^
00:30:649 (4) - ^
00:47:363 (7) - ^
00:50:149 (2) - ^ Doesn't really make sense to me...
00:57:649 (4) - ^
01:28:506 (4) - ^
01:38:792 (5) - ^
02:18:220 (5) - ^ Applied all of those NC suggestions (except for that one i marked though)

Try to keep your combos consistent. I'll try to

Hope this helps~! ^^

Tidek wrote:

Ik that Im late.
From my queue.

Insane

• 
  HP -1? Its low bpm map and you used 1/4 only few times, recovering HP with these 1/2 jumps and long repeat sliders especially with HR will be really really hard Even HP 6 looks quite harsh on HR xD But okay, fixed it.

1. 00:31:613 (1) - remove NC (stay with grey circles) and make red circles here 00:31:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Hmmm, i made something similar (made these sliders red but also reworked the part until first kiai in this style)
2. 00:33:220 (3) - move to x392 Done.
3. 01:05:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - since that map looks very symmetric, make that stream look better? http://puu.sh/4D5u7.jpg Yeah, it does.^^ Changed.
4. 01:07:935 (1) - remove NC and add NC one note later Nah, i want the combo to start at the beginning of the mesure
5. 01:09:649 (1) - ^ ^
6. 01:10:720 (3) - move it further (delete overlap) Done.
   
   Suggestions
7. 00:45:649 (1,2) - I really suggest to do something with these sliders Changed the pattern a bit
8. 00:58:935 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - so many stacks and NCs, I suggest to unstack that circle 00:59:578 (1) Done.

Hard

1. 00:01:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really dont understand why DS here is higher than rest Actually i intended them to be small jumps... Well, i fixed the spacing now xD
2. 00:25:078 (8) - Unstack? to accent these 2 beats I stacked them because i wanted to put an accent onto them o.O
3. 00:45:220 (1,2,3) - unstack them, u can clearly here strong beats there, dont stack them ;_; Same here, i stacked because of the strong beats...
4. 01:13:078 - NO, I just cant listen that great guitar and do NOTHING ;<<<<< Do atleast this
   Owww this idea isn't so great i think. I made long, creative (and hopefully beautiful too xD) sliders instead
5. 01:53:792 (5,6,7,8,9) - fix spacing Done

Normal

1. 01:13:078 - Map something in that break, circles every 4/1 like I showed you on hard or long sliders. Did almost the same as on Hard
   Sry, found nothing ;< Makes me glad actually xD

Easy

1. 00:11:363 (1,2,3,4) - fix ds, for easy diff, u must stay with the same DS whole map Yeah, I know. Fixed it.
2. 00:24:863 (3) - I dont think that kind of "hold" sliders are good solution. I think that is better solution
   As it is Easy mode, okay. Changed it
3. 00:31:506 (5) - ^ ^
4. 00:55:506 (5,1) - fix DS Done
   Overall, Fix your DS on whole map, try to stay in 1,39x-1,41x gap, on easy diff its really important Everything should be at ~1,37-1,44 now

Good Luck ; )

Have a star, because I love this song.

1. maybe the storyboard has something wrong start at 00:59:363 ? after 02:07:935 it works well.Seems get Zoom in and Zoom out backwards.
2. the combo color is close to the color of BG.
3. the clap is not suit for the drum of song i think.maybe you can find some custom clap hitsound.

1. maybe you can use some random DS jump in this diff to make map funny.like 02:01:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) , although it is still "geometry" jump.but random DS make here more interesting to just left,right,left,right,left,right.....
2. all your drum note or slider is red. but it will bring some problems . such as :
   00:31:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - combo looks too long.
   00:50:149 (1,1,1,1) - these NC make here a little hard to read.
   01:40:078 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:46:935 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:53:792 (1,2,3,4,5) and - the NC is obvious on note 5.
3. 00:55:935 (7,1) - these 2 finish sounds a little strange in my opinion.
4. 01:06:649 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think it not beautiful here.if you don't use streamline layout,maybe let them symmetrical will more beautiful.
5. 01:13:078 (1) - change to inverse slider.just like 01:26:792 (1)
6. 01:14:578 (2,4) - use larger ds here in my opinion.
7. 01:49:935 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this jump is not suit for music i think.

1. 00:07:720 - add note?
2. 00:09:435 - ^
3. 00:11:149 - ^
4. 00:49:078 (1) - this slider is not beautiful , right?
5. 00:59:363 (1) - volume of hitsound since here is toooo loudly.
6. 01:01:292 (2) - remove? and same as the part after here.
7. 01:16:506 (1,2) - these 2 slider looks so strange.

Koihik wrote:

Hello. just random mod.

General

1. maybe the storyboard has something wrong start at 00:59:363 ? after 02:07:935 it works well.Seems get Zoom in and Zoom out backwards. Yeah, i noticed. Will need to talk to the one who made the sb though.
2. the combo color is close to the color of BG. That was intended actually...
3. the clap is not suit for the drum of song i think.maybe you can find some custom clap hitsound. Yeah, found one^^ Changed.

Insane

1. maybe you can use some random DS jump in this diff to make map funny.like 02:01:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) , although it is still "geometry" jump.but random DS make here more interesting to just left,right,left,right,left,right..... Changed.
2. all your drum note or slider is red. but it will bring some problems . such as :
   00:31:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - combo looks too long. Changed and recombo'ed the whole section as well.
   00:50:149 (1,1,1,1) - these NC make here a little hard to read. Changed.
   01:40:078 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:46:935 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:53:792 (1,2,3,4,5) and - the NC is obvious on note 5. Fixed.
3. 00:55:935 (7,1) - these 2 finish sounds a little strange in my opinion. Changed them.
4. 01:06:649 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think it not beautiful here.if you don't use streamline layout,maybe let them symmetrical will more beautiful. Fixed.
5. 01:13:078 (1) - change to inverse slider.just like 01:26:792 (1) No, i will keep it this way.Think it makes more sense.
6. 01:14:578 (2,4) - use larger ds here in my opinion. Fixed.
7. 01:49:935 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this jump is not suit for music i think. Replaced the last 4 circles of it

Hard

1. 00:07:720 - add note? Done.
2. 00:09:435 - ^
3. 00:11:149 - ^ I think these two don't fit well.... Also the short breaks there feel better than just keep playing through
4. 00:49:078 (1) - this slider is not beautiful , right? Hmmm... yes xD
5. 00:59:363 (1) - volume of hitsound since here is toooo loudly. Fixed.
6. 01:01:292 (2) - remove? and same as the part after here. Doesn't feel good for me to play :/
7. 01:16:506 (1,2) - these 2 slider looks so strange. Meh, i like them >.<

Not good at mod easy and normal so that is all.
Good Luck.

Thanks a lot

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

- The combo colour black is very hard to read, especially at the beginning. You should find another colour instead, or a brighter grey instead. Using a brighter grey now.

Easy

- 00:11:363 (1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't make such patterns in Easys, for the reason it being very confusing for new players and hardly readable. This pattern especially is too hard. You need to find something else. The forth and back movement is not easy to play. Fixed.
- 00:25:935 (1,2) - You shouldn't make them overlap. It's hard to read and can't be played well. Its also not very recommended to make this in an Easy nor Normal. Also fixed.
- 00:32:578 (1,2,3) - Rythms like such are confusing as well. Beginners get to know only simples 1/1 patterns and should have only CLEARLY noteable 1/2 patterns to play. Find something easier. 00:49:720 (1) - This for example, is clear how to play it. Okay, done
- 00:59:363 (1) - So many repeats after another is not good. Beginners only should get to know 1 repeat or a few on very long sliders, but not such short sliders. This is very sudden and will end in a combo break or miss. Find something better. The new Players who played it didnt seem to have trouble with that... I'll keep it
- 01:04:506 (3) - Such sliders look very clustered and are hard to read. You should move the last slider point somewhere else so you can clearly see the shape of the slider. Fixed.
- 02:02:363 (2,3) - This doesn't flow good due to the slider going straight but your movement of the pattern is upwards. Fixed.

Normal

Nothing i would point out, nice done! Yay thank you

Hard

01:31:935 (4,5) - Spacing is wrong here and needs to be fixed. So far all is consistant but then you have this issue. Fixed.

Everything else is ok.

Insane

- First off, please recombo your whole difficultie. You put a NC on almost every note. Combo's are to make patterns not too long not to make the difficultie more colourful. Please fix this. Done.
- Your spacing is very incosistent. It's okay to have jumps but don't overuse them. This is NOT good and not enjoyable.
- 00:02:792 (1) - You shouldn't go ever to far to the edge of the mapping screen. It is either touching the score or HP bar or its might get offscreen. Move such things lower. Done.
- 00:21:649 (1,1) - Watch spacing like this. You have a similar spacing to 00:21:435 (4,1) - but 00:21:649 (1,1) - is a 1/1 rythm when the other is a 1/2. You need to make the spacing bigger or better: make the spacing normal spacing. Same on this 00:30:006 (3,1,1) - . This goes on and on through the map. Changed some patterns here anyway
- 00:50:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - When you stack this so much its barely enjoyable. You need to unstack those and make a better placement. Done.
- 01:07:935 (1,2) - Spacing like this, antijumps like these are nonsense. You really need to change that into normal spacing, or at least stack them so it doesnt feel so weird when playing. Done.

I leave you these advices here. You need to remap that difficultie or fix quiet a lot. I hope this makes you more aware of how to map next time. The other difficulties are pretty nice but the Insane just needs work. Also, the song doesn't really need an Insane but that's your choice.

Good luck with fixing and further mapping.

Xiamul wrote:

This song is so good. ikr

[General]

I think your storyboard is sick. It's not strobiing correctly. Removed the strobing and made only the bg color change twice

[Easy]
Watch your claps. Otherwise, I have nothing to say. Fixed.

[Normal]

00:09:649 (2) This needs a little nudge one grid to the right. It's already perfectly below the other slider

00:32:578 (1,2) Drag the head of 2 two nudges to the left, and the red point to (256,140), to create a better blanket. Good advice Changed.

00:43:506 (3) Is this 1.00x DS? It doesn't seem like it, as it won't snap for me. It tells me that it's 0,98x so no need to fix here.

00:50:149 (6,1) These sliders feel odd because they start on a weaker beat, and end on a stronger one. Try removing the sliders, and placing circles on the white ticks? Hmmm, the crystal tones are quite intense there and follow this rhythm(at least it sounds like that for me). I'll keep them

00:59:363 (1,2,3,4) How about you follow this rhythm instead? Currently, I keep missing 2( ) and I think it's due to the slider on 1 that doesn't cover anything. Same for 01:01:078 (1,2,3,4). Changed.

This is really solid. Good job! Thanks a lot!

[Hard]
Are you sure your combo colors/storyboard are working here? At places like 00:20:363 and 00:25:506, it seems like the colors are misused. Oh yeah, you're right. Fixed

01:01:935 (4) Try to keep repeat sliders consistent. This has an extra reverse arrow and is hard to predict. Made them consistently having 2 reverses

01:03:649 (4) ^. ^

01:18:220 (2) If the bump came with the sound of the drums, I would approve of this slider shape. Changed

[Insane]
The whole comboing to change the background color is throwing me off. It's a cool idea, but your combos just become unfathomably inconsistent. You also don't fully commit, so it's even more inconsistent.

The whole intro is not symmetrical with its patterns. Is this intentional?

00:06:435 (1) To maintain consistency, avoid using sliders until the drums kick in. Goes for 4 as well.

00:13:292 (1,1,1,1,1) Here's an example of the comboing issue. Not only is it inconsistent, but it's hard to read as well. We have to assume the notes play as if revolving on a wheel, but what if this played like a star pattern and DS became inconsistent? <--- This was actually really fun and you should consider it.

00:33:649 (1,2) I don't like this double v pattern. The slowdown effect it creates doesn't fit the music.

I can't suggest anything, because your patterns and combos are so inconsistent. I don't want to ruin the map, so I suggest you go and recombo/remap the majority of the second half. A lot of things in this diff... I can't tell if you're doing them intentionally or not.

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

Easy
01:13:078 - 01:16:078 I don't know if it's just me, but I don't like that slider. Reshaped it

Normal
Didn't find anything. :3 Good work. Thanks :3

Hard:
00:49:078 - 00:49:720 This slider looks a bit strange. Change the curve. Reshaped it.
00:53:792 (7) Don't use the same position like you did for (5). Hmm okay.
02:04:720 - 02:05:792 This part feels uncomfortable to play. Used only sliders there instead.
02:07:720 (8) Don't use the same position like you did for (1). (Maybe some players are irritated) I'm not sure about it. Nah I think it's fine like that. It's clear that the circle has to appear there.
02:13:078 - 02:13:935 (1, 2, 3) Change the place of the notes. Or just of (3). I'm not sure about it. Done
02:14:792 - 02:20:792 Always the same slider. I think you can repeat it one time.^^ Think about another slider for the other one. (Just a suggestion) Reshaped all of them.^^

All in all I really liked modding this map.You're sliders are very nice in my opinion. :p Good luck with this map.

Nvirjskly wrote:

Hi

[General]
Enable widescreen support? It will still look good with the grey/coloured transition and will hide the annoying green borders on widescreen monitors.
Ahh yes, good idea.
Also maybe offset to 1074? Maybe 1076, but 1074 sounds a big better. No this sounds good to me

Inherited timing section at 02:21:328 with 5% volume? At 02:20:790 - it fits better though, also only at the Insane diff

[Easy]
I'm not sure if more than one repeat arrow is good for an easy:
00:59:363
01:01:078
02:04:506
02:06:220 Changed


00:35:363 (3) NC? Done

00:39:435 and 00:41:149 I know they fit with the beat but notes on red ticks might confuse new players, but up to you.
00:42:863 and 00:44:578 ^
00:46:292 and 00:48:006 ^
00:49:720 ^
00:53:149 ^
00:54:863 ^ I think the rhythm is pretty clear here, because it's quite repetitive. Also really new players rather wait for the approch circle to hit the note. So it's fine

01:06:649 NC instead of on 01:05:792 ? Done

01:26:792 I understand the need for a break in an Easy, but this is the only difficulty that has one, which seems off. As you say it's an easy Easy, mapping something in the break won't hurt hm?


Otherwise it's an easy Easy.

[Normal]
AR+1? Mmh okay

00:25:935 (1,3) look really ugly IMO. Reshaped

00:31:078 (3) form to look more like 00:29:363 (1) maybe in order to stay consistent. Done

00:51:435 (2) NC here instead of 00:50:578 (1) and remove NC at 00:51:506 (1) maybe? Done

rest of the diff looks good to me.


[Hard]
00:09:435 Add note?
00:11:149 ^ Added

01:05:899 (6) Feels like the drums begin a 1/4th of a beat earlier. Maybe make it look like


Similar problem at 01:12:756 (3) Changed but a bit differently to your suggestion.

01:54:435 add note?
01:54:863 ^
01:55:720 ^
01:56:578 ^
01:57:435 ^

At this point I might say restructure the whole section from 01:54:220 to 01:57:435 as it does not feel intuitive on which beat the note must go.


Similar problem in the next section:

01:59:149 add note?
02:00:863 ^


02:01:828 (3) remove note, as (2) lands on a primary beat but (3) seems like it does not fit with the map.
02:03:542 (3) ^


02:06:006 add note? Remapped this whole part

The rest of the map looks good.

[Insane]

00:33:863 (4) NC Done

00:53:792 (3,4) I just want to say that I really like this overlap! Looks really good. Thanks :3

01:14:792 NC?
01:18:220 ^
01:21:649 ^
01:25:078 ^ Done

01:26:578 (5) looks out of place in this section; unstack maybe? Done

02:21:222 not snapped o.O Fixed

Like the jumps!

Sorry that I could not be of much help :/ Nah it was helpful for me

Winek wrote:

Hello! You requested some mod before, on a certain form or whatever.

[Easy]
I'll directly start by suggestions.
00:25:935 (1,2) - What about rotating these two notes? The way they are placed is a bit curvy, which is not something i would say "normal" for sliders like this. But you must have your reasons, eh? Done
01:04:506 (3,5) - What about moving (3) , just a bit? It would be prettier, and avoid the mini-overlap. Alright
01:16:506 (1,2) - What about flipping the two (insert here horizontal or whatever in english) ? I think it will be prettier, and have a better flow. Hmm, i think it's the best the way it is now
01:25:078 (2) - What about doing like http://puu.sh/72ERc/c1c7dcd7a3.jpg ? I think it would more blanket desu. I know that idea sucks. I liked the idea though
01:40:078 (3) - Okay, you addded a note here, what about adding a note at 01:38:363 as well? I really think it will fits well. Done
01:53:792 (4,1) - Even if you NC, hat radical DS change can be confusing for new players.Moved 4
02:01:078 (1) - Average suggestion, but try making a prettier (thunder?) shape here! Done

Feedbacks
I like the difficulty, i see nothing really i should specify.

[Normal]
00:22:506 (1) - I'm not too sure about this bezier. Again for 00:29:363 (1) and 00:31:078 (3) , and more other.. I like them T_T
00:52:078 (2,3,1) - I'm not sure but this can be confusing due to color. It's both grey o.O Didn't fix

Feedbacks
Again, I totally see nothing wrong or whatsoever. I think your map could easily rank. I'll try my best

[Hard]
00:09:649 (1) - You NC this note right? Then why don,t you also nc these 00:02:792 (5) and 00:06:435 (6) ? Done
01:07:935 (1,1) - These sliders look kind of messy and bezier. Fixed
01:21:649 (2) - This one have really a bezier feeling. That was intended.

Feedbacks
The difficulty does need a polishing about the beziers sliders. Otherwise, it's good.

[Insane]
00:02:792 (1,2,3,4) - What about making curves? The actual overlap a bit, and making curves will make pretteir blanket with following notes. Good idea :3
00:10:720 (5,1) - I think you could distance a bit those two, it would be prettier. Done
00:36:649 (3) - I'm not sure you forgot a whistle over here, but it would fits better here. Oops yes you're right, fixed.
00:36:649 (3,4) - Try making a perfect stack? Done

Feedbacks
Again, a bit like hard, not much suggestion to give, exept some bezier sliders.

General Feedbacks
What about adding "Ebf" and "Ebf4" into the tags? Also, it really ready for ranks, you know. So good luck! Added the tags
I really like the song.

General

1. Combo colours are inconsistent! Easy and Normal has the current setup on Combo 4: 129,0,178. While Hard and Insane has the current setup on Combo 4: 129,0,159. Pick only one for consistency.

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hi.
From My 'Unlimit Modding Queue for Instrumental song'

[General]
set preview time on 00:59:363 (1) - here

[Insane]
00:13:935 (1,2,3,4) - Make perfect Square Liked a crystal more :/
00:25:506 (1) - Make Same shape with 00:25:935 (2) - this. you can use ctrl + C ctrl + V Done
00:27:220 (2) - ^ Done
00:36:649 (3) - Ctrl + G to make Playable pattren xD what's unplayable about that? o_O
00:56:792 (4) - Remove whitsle I like the whistle there. It fits the higher crystal sounds there better than when removed. Also the slight rhythm change makes you prepare for the upcoming part:
00:58:506 (5) - ^ ^
01:05:792 (1,2) - Delete Clap This part needs hitsounding and claps feel best there imo
01:13:078 (1,1) - Don't need to Add NC here :p True
01:19:720 (2) - Set another place like 01:26:578 (2) - this Done
01:28:292 (2) - Add Note Alright
01:39:649 (5) - Make Same shape with 01:40:078 (6) - this Done
01:41:363 (3,4,5,6) - Strange shape Made a square out of it

I will mod other diff later x.x I feel tired Alright and sleep well :p

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~ Nice music xD I know right? :p

[General]

N/A

[Insane]

Feels kinda inconsistent. The jumps in the second half of the map seems to be too much of an overkill for me. The spacing is way too stream which doesn't fit the music that well, imo.


00:06:220 (1,2) - Don't like the shape of these two sliders. The music is quite smooth and such an sharp angel doesn't fit well. True^^ Changed
00:07:935 (1) - Why not adding some normal hitsound to fit the drums? (same suggestions apply to all the following notes where there're drums in the music) Done
00:13:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - need some louder hitsound for these notes to match the tension in the music. Set volume to 100%
00:19:506 (5,6,1) - spacing here feels inconsistent Fixed
00:24:649 (5,6) - suggest slider then circle. Alright
00:26:363 (3,4,1) - spacing Fixed
00:26:363 (3,4,1) - ^ Fixed
00:45:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - suggest some slightly larger spacing as the music is really high Good idea^^
00:57:649 (1,2,3,4) - better curve? Yes please
01:05:792 (1,2) - This pattern plays pretty weird. I think it plays well :/
01:12:649 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:13:078 (1,2) - slider tick is annoying to me I'm not sure to mute the ticks... Gonna think about what's best later
01:31:292 (2,3,4) - jump too large. Reduced spacing
01:36:006 (2,3,4,5) - spacing and shape could be improved True^^
01:38:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ I think it's good like that
01:41:363 (3,4,5,6) - don't like these large jumps.. Slightly reduced the spacing

[Hard]
00:22:506 (2,3,4) - triangle? Yes
00:45:649 (4,5,6,7) - blanket between 4 and 7? I want to use the arc of 4 to match 7 and not to cover it
00:54:220 (1,2,3) - make 1 and 3 more symmetrical Done
01:16:506 (1) - this looks ugly I like it :/
01:30:220 (4) - bit more curve? Okay
01:31:506 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing True Stacked 3 and 4
01:42:006 (4,1,2) - improve triangle Done

[Normal]
00:29:363 (1) - could have a better shape Fixed

[Easy]
00:13:078 (3,4) - avoid inconstant spacing Fixed
01:52:935 (2,3,4) - ^ Here it comes from the SV change. It's best like this i think.


Only a quick check.... Still a helpful mod :p
Good luck xD

unknown7bolt wrote:

Hello,
Sorry for the long wait.

Recommendation
Suggestion

Normal:
01:09:435 - You can add something here, maybe? Yes, makes sense
01:36:863 - Same as above. So that then it would be consistent with 01:38:792 (1,2,3,4,5) Uhhh i can't see any consistency when i add that circle
01:02:792 (1) - Hit circle instead of slider, or a slider spanning from 01:02:792 to 01:03:220 Good idea^^
01:04:506 (1) - Same. Didn't fix this one for a bit more variation during that part
Sounds good without hitsounds too, but I guess you need to add them in order to get it ranked Exactly my thoughts xD The beat throughout the song is actually strong enough but yeah...

Cool song and nice mapping too xD :3

AJeyB wrote:

Insane
00:01:078 (1) - This first circle is sounds earlier than the beat. Check the offset, maybe? Fixed, i hope it's better now.
00:16:720 (1,2,3,1) - This part sounds bad, not sure what are you following, maybe try something else ? The hitsounds should make it clear what I'm following, didn't change
Like 00:16:720 (1) - 3 notes instead, then one here [ 00:18:220 - ] and one here [00:18:435 - ], you can even map the drumm between them Sry, I didn't get what you meant here
01:05:792 (1,2,1) - This is overmaped, imo, stream would sound really good. If you want to keep it, try make some flow, instead of going to the oposite side.
01:12:649 (1,2) - ^
01:46:935 (1,2,1) - ^
01:53:792 (1,2,1) - ^ Changed all of them to streams

1. 01:40:508 - umm.. it's not approval using more than x1.0 slider speed on easy and normal diff. better fix this problem. if you think it's OK, plz ask for check to BAT if this is OK or not. it can be a unrankable issue.

1. 00:29:365 (3) - i think this shape is not that good way. i prefer this one. it looks nice to me. but maybe it's on your purpose
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2. 01:37:080 (1,3) - this can be really confusing overlapping way to beginners
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3. 02:19:937 (4) - why didn't you make this way?
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   it's more natural with 02:14:794 (1,2) - these sliders

1. 00:03:437 (2) - move to 240, 244. it's not same distance with 00:02:794 (1,3) - some DS miss maybe
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2. 00:12:222 (3) - hmm.. maybe Ctrl + G will be more natural. it looks like kind of weird pattern now. i recommend to fix this
3. 00:23:794 (5) - how about this one? it looks cleaner i think
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4. 01:07:937 (1) - I usually don't mention about slider's shape but i think it will be really nice make natural like this
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5. 02:07:937 (1) - why only this note's distance is different? I recommend fix this if there's not any reason
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Neta wrote:

hi~ from my modding queue

[General]

1. 01:40:508 - umm.. it's not approval using more than x1.0 slider speed on easy and normal diff. better fix this problem. if you think it's OK, plz ask for check to BAT if this is OK or not. it can be a unrankable issue. I've asked one and he said it is indeed not allowed. So i changed the base SV and adjusted the SV multipliers. (I don't get why that was necessary, it's the same map >.<)

[Easy]

1. 00:29:365 (3) - i think this shape is not that good way. i prefer this one. it looks nice to me. but maybe it's on your purpose Nah it wasn't. Fixed
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2. 01:37:080 (1,3) - this can be really confusing overlapping way to beginners Removed that circle
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3. 02:19:937 (4) - why didn't you make this way?
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   it's more natural with 02:14:794 (1,2) - these sliders Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:437 (2) - move to 240, 244. it's not same distance with 00:02:794 (1,3) - some DS miss maybe Oww yes, fixed it
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2. 00:12:222 (3) - hmm.. maybe Ctrl + G will be more natural. it looks like kind of weird pattern now. i recommend to fix this Alright
3. 00:23:794 (5) - how about this one? it looks cleaner i think ^
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4. 01:07:937 (1) - I usually don't mention about slider's shape but i think it will be really nice make natural like this Reshaped
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5. 02:07:937 (1) - why only this note's distance is different? I recommend fix this if there's not any reason I think it was from an older SV changement i've had there. Fixed
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what a nice slider shapes... :3

I didn't mod Normal and Insane diff because actually i have not much times lately and they looks enough nice for me

i hope my mod is helpful enough sorry for this and Good Luck~

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

[Normal]
General
Overall is not in low quality, but still something to say~
SV change is better not be used in low difficulty diff. (But this time is okay imo)
Placement
01:37:080 (1,2,3) - You can have a better look if you get the pattern more extended but not getting them together. Example:

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01:38:794 (1,2,3) - Also here. And the distance is better to be adjusted to be consistent.

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Hitsound
Similar to harderer diff.

[Hard]
General
What I want to say is similar to Insane diff.
OD-1 to make the difficulty more balanced.
Beats
00:16:722 (1) - the note may be too close to the spinner. Especially in lower diffs. You can try this.

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01:40:722 (1) - Starting the slider here is just not so good for me. The head of the slider is lack of hitting feeling and I suggest you can have a try of this:

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Hitsound
In fact think overall the volume of hitsound is a little noisy. Consier not using such as 95% or 100% volume because it's too strong.

[Insane]
General
Good map. Some small things to mention.
Creative sliders.
OD-1 to make the difficulty more balanced.
Beats
00:16:722 (1) - Just reminding you that the note may be too close to the spinner. You can try this.

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Placement
00:13:937 (1,2,3,4) - It's just a little lean. Try to make it more like this:

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00:17:365 (2,3) - Nazi: Here you can make a better blanket. Example:

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00:53:794 (3,1) - Although it's the hardest diff and the sliders are really great, I think starting a slider in the middle of another slider will be confusing. But I've got no idea to fix it without chaning the beautiful slider 3.
01:12:651 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make a smaller distance in the stream. For 2 reasons. 1, the flow is just downward and a sharp turn to catch the stream. 2, the distance is kinda like big(3,4) to small(4,1) and big(1,2,3,4). So I just suggest that(distance 0.5x):

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01:46:937 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmmm testplayed here for several times and the stream is kinda hard to catch. The distance control is not balanced with the diff. I suggest a smaller distance. Example(may not be so accurate,distance 0.5x~0.6x):

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Hitsound
Overall awesome hitsound~
In fact think overall the volume of hitsound is a little noisy. Consier not using such as 95% or 100% volume because it's too strong.

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From Googledocs request.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
I don't know why it has a brief time backed to colored when the map starts and ends. Maybe you should make something to let it be grey when it starts and ends. Yes, I changed the base BG to grey and built the SB upon that. Seems to work now
And I think since you don't have something quickly strobing, it's not necessary to use epilepsy warning. Alright
Your storyboard image is 1200x768, and ranking rule says:

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

Please use 4:3 or 16:9 background image. Changed to 1024x768px but using a 640x480 SB image (which works like a second BG here) would result in a blur :/ I'm gonna ask a BAT about it
Combo color is really hard to differ from each other and from the BG or SB. Try another scheme to make them differ from each other. Done, I hope it's better
Would be a lot better if fixed general issues.

[Easy]
General
Beats are a little dense imo. But maybe not so bad~
Maybe SV change is really hard for Easy diff.. You need to consider it.. Greatly reduced the SV change
Beats
01:31:294 (2) - In easy it's maybe harder I think. the 1/2 reverse and soon after it is 1/1 reverse.Try this Forgot the link? Fixed though^^

[Normal]
General
Overall is not in low quality, but still something to say~
SV change is better not be used in low difficulty diff. (But this time is okay imo) :3
Placement
01:37:080 (1,2,3) - You can have a better look if you get the pattern more extended but not getting them together. Example:

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01:38:794 (1,2,3) - Also here. And the distance is better to be adjusted to be consistent.

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I simplified the pattern a bit
Hitsound
Similar to harderer diff.

[Hard]
General
What I want to say is similar to Insane diff.
OD-1 to make the difficulty more balanced. Mmh, okay
Beats
00:16:722 (1) - the note may be too close to the spinner. Especially in lower diffs. You can try this. Done

SPOILER

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01:40:722 (1) - Starting the slider here is just not so good for me. The head of the slider is lack of hitting feeling and I suggest you can have a try of this: Good idea I fixed it similarly

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Hitsound
In fact think overall the volume of hitsound is a little noisy. Consier not using such as 95% or 100% volume because it's too strong.

[Insane]
General
Good map. Some small things to mention.
Creative sliders. Thanks :3
OD-1 to make the difficulty more balanced. Nah OD8 is fine here imo
Beats
00:16:722 (1) - Just reminding you that the note may be too close to the spinner. You can try this. Here it's fine for me cause it's an Insane after all. There's also one more crystal tone and it was more confusing not to capture it than to capture it

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Placement
00:13:937 (1,2,3,4) - It's just a little lean. Try to make it more like this: Okay

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00:17:365 (2,3) - Nazi: Here you can make a better blanket. Example: Done

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00:53:794 (3,1) - Although it's the hardest diff and the sliders are really great, I think starting a slider in the middle of another slider will be confusing. But I've got no idea to fix it without chaning the beautiful slider 3. It's pretty obvious where and when the slider starts imo and in an Insane it shouldn't cause much trouble
01:12:651 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make a smaller distance in the stream. For 2 reasons. 1, the flow is just downward and a sharp turn to catch the stream. 2, the distance is kinda like big(3,4) to small(4,1) and big(1,2,3,4). So I just suggest that(distance 0.5x): Went for ~0,6x. Otherwise it would look a little bit too squeezed imo

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01:46:937 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmmm testplayed here for several times and the stream is kinda hard to catch. The distance control is not balanced with the diff. I suggest a smaller distance. Example(may not be so accurate,distance 0.5x~0.6x): Yes, 0,6x seems fine

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Hitsound
Overall awesome hitsound~
In fact think overall the volume of hitsound is a little noisy. Consier not using such as 95% or 100% volume because it's too strong. Reduced to ~75%

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .