Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!
General
- The combo colour black is very hard to read, especially at the beginning. You should find another colour instead, or a brighter grey instead.
Easy
- 00:11:363 (1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't make such patterns in Easys, for the reason it being very confusing for new players and hardly readable. This pattern especially is too hard. You need to find something else. The forth and back movement is not easy to play.
- 00:25:935 (1,2) - You shouldn't make them overlap. It's hard to read and can't be played well. Its also not very recommended to make this in an Easy nor Normal.
- 00:32:578 (1,2,3) - Rythms like such are confusing as well. Beginners get to know only simples 1/1 patterns and should have only CLEARLY noteable 1/2 patterns to play. Find something easier. 00:49:720 (1) - This for example, is clear how to play it.
- 00:59:363 (1) - So many repeats after another is not good. Beginners only should get to know 1 repeat or a few on very long sliders, but not such short sliders. This is very sudden and will end in a combo break or miss. Find something better.
- 01:04:506 (3) - Such sliders look very clustered and are hard to read. You should move the last slider point somewhere else so you can clearly see the shape of the slider.
- 02:02:363 (2,3) - This doesn't flow good due to the slider going straight but your movement of the pattern is upwards.
Normal
Nothing i would point out, nice done!
Hard
01:31:935 (4,5) - Spacing is wrong here and needs to be fixed. So far all is consistant but then you have this issue.
Everything else is ok.
Insane
- First off, please recombo your whole difficultie. You put a NC on almost every note. Combo's are to make patterns not too long not to make the difficultie more colourful. Please fix this.
- Your spacing is very incosistent. It's okay to have jumps but don't overuse them. This is NOT good and not enjoyable.
- 00:02:792 (1) - You shouldn't go ever to far to the edge of the mapping screen. It is either touching the score or HP bar or its might get offscreen. Move such things lower.
- 00:21:649 (1,1) - Watch spacing like this. You have a similar spacing to 00:21:435 (4,1) - but 00:21:649 (1,1) - is a 1/1 rythm when the other is a 1/2. You need to make the spacing bigger or better: make the spacing normal spacing. Same on this 00:30:006 (3,1,1) - . This goes on and on through the map.
- 00:50:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - When you stack this so much its barely enjoyable. You need to unstack those and make a better placement.
- 01:07:935 (1,2) - Spacing like this, antijumps like these are nonsense. You really need to change that into normal spacing, or at least stack them so it doesnt feel so weird when playing.
I leave you these advices here. You need to remap that difficultie or fix quiet a lot. I hope this makes you more aware of how to map next time. The other difficulties are pretty nice but the Insane just needs work. Also, the song doesn't really need an Insane but that's your choice.
Good luck with fixing and further mapping.
General
- The combo colour black is very hard to read, especially at the beginning. You should find another colour instead, or a brighter grey instead.
Easy
- 00:11:363 (1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't make such patterns in Easys, for the reason it being very confusing for new players and hardly readable. This pattern especially is too hard. You need to find something else. The forth and back movement is not easy to play.
- 00:25:935 (1,2) - You shouldn't make them overlap. It's hard to read and can't be played well. Its also not very recommended to make this in an Easy nor Normal.
- 00:32:578 (1,2,3) - Rythms like such are confusing as well. Beginners get to know only simples 1/1 patterns and should have only CLEARLY noteable 1/2 patterns to play. Find something easier. 00:49:720 (1) - This for example, is clear how to play it.
- 00:59:363 (1) - So many repeats after another is not good. Beginners only should get to know 1 repeat or a few on very long sliders, but not such short sliders. This is very sudden and will end in a combo break or miss. Find something better.
- 01:04:506 (3) - Such sliders look very clustered and are hard to read. You should move the last slider point somewhere else so you can clearly see the shape of the slider.
- 02:02:363 (2,3) - This doesn't flow good due to the slider going straight but your movement of the pattern is upwards.
Normal
Nothing i would point out, nice done!
Hard
01:31:935 (4,5) - Spacing is wrong here and needs to be fixed. So far all is consistant but then you have this issue.
Everything else is ok.
Insane
- First off, please recombo your whole difficultie. You put a NC on almost every note. Combo's are to make patterns not too long not to make the difficultie more colourful. Please fix this.
- Your spacing is very incosistent. It's okay to have jumps but don't overuse them. This is NOT good and not enjoyable.
- 00:02:792 (1) - You shouldn't go ever to far to the edge of the mapping screen. It is either touching the score or HP bar or its might get offscreen. Move such things lower.
- 00:21:649 (1,1) - Watch spacing like this. You have a similar spacing to 00:21:435 (4,1) - but 00:21:649 (1,1) - is a 1/1 rythm when the other is a 1/2. You need to make the spacing bigger or better: make the spacing normal spacing. Same on this 00:30:006 (3,1,1) - . This goes on and on through the map.
- 00:50:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - When you stack this so much its barely enjoyable. You need to unstack those and make a better placement.
- 01:07:935 (1,2) - Spacing like this, antijumps like these are nonsense. You really need to change that into normal spacing, or at least stack them so it doesnt feel so weird when playing.
I leave you these advices here. You need to remap that difficultie or fix quiet a lot. I hope this makes you more aware of how to map next time. The other difficulties are pretty nice but the Insane just needs work. Also, the song doesn't really need an Insane but that's your choice.
Good luck with fixing and further mapping.