C4R10Z123GT wrote:

General

1. Remove kokoro connect and love and team nekokan from tags
2. Add ed on tags

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

1. Try move some circles ...some times it gets complicate four newbies 00:36:459

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

1. Same problem 00:52:459

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

1. Here two 01:05:459

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

and 01:11:792 / Again 01:10:459

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

1. And last one 01:24:459
2. If you dont want to change the circles.. put at least two circles instead of 3,4,5 circles

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

Hard

1. 00:40:792 - 00:41:625 Doesnt goes well with the song, put something else

C4R10Z123GT wrote:

Thats all four me...hope it will help you out...
Very good map ..i enjoy playing it

Saten wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay No problem, I'm really happy to see your mod =D

[General]
I would use Grid Level 4 to map. You would have much less spacing issues and so on Thank's for that
The Kiai fits better from 00:43:100 - to 01:04:434 - which is where the chorus takes place in. FIXED

[Hard]
I don't really get the combo-color pattern you chose x.x I'm a beginner so I wasn't sure for the combo-color pattern :/ I tried to take flashy one but I don't really changed them ^^' I'll think about it when I'll go home.
00:23:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't think you should stack like this. It becomes quite confusing if you look carefully FIXED (with a little spaced part :p)
01:16:100 (2,3,1) - I suggest you stack this properly and move it somewhere else. because it looks kinda weird when playing FIXED
01:24:100 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - these parts are actually 1/6 if you listen carefully. Might be complicated to use in this difficulty though, but just letting you know. Yeah you've right. But as you said, it will be complicated so I don't know what I'll do for this part.
01:25:934 (1) - Silence this spinner. The song is coming to an end. FIXED

More jumps would be nice (or at least more spaced parts). Just like you already have in few places, but more often Yeah I know I didn't like that when I started this beatmap but I've done a lot of Hard and Insane which use that so I've got the principle and I'll add more "jumps" on this difficulty ^^

[Normal]
00:10:434 (7,1) - This is really confusing if you ask me. This should be avoided if possible I thought it could be good but yeah FIXED
00:31:100 (4,5) - I'm not sure about this. It's kinda confusing, but less confusing than the thing above I'll think about this one
00:32:434 (1,2,1,2) - This is a really tricky part imo. Stacks like this should be avoided imo. I thought that this part was good too xD but I fixed it
00:55:767 (2,3,1) - Don't mix stacks and non-stacks in chains like this please FIXED
01:03:767 (1,2,1) - You kinda broke your own rule here. A sudden change of spacing FIXED
01:05:100 (2,3,4) - like I mentioned on 00:55:767 (2,3,1) - FIXED
01:08:434 (3,1) - confusing spacing to what you usually uses FIXED
01:25:767 (1) - Silence this spinner. FIXED

[Easy]
00:13:767 (4) - You can make this slider prettier. Something like this maybe? FIXED (thank's for the screenshot)
00:33:767 (2) - rotate this slider a bit and move it more to the right FIXED (thank's for the screenshot)
00:37:767 (4) - You can use the the new type of slider that make it easier to make prettier sliders FIXED (thank's for the screenshot)
00:56:434 (1,2,3,4,1) - it's very hard to read if you stack them up like that. Try to make some space FIXED (thank's for the screenshot)
01:25:767 (1) - Silence this spinner, yeah FIXED


Hard and Normal (Mostly Hard) need a bit more work imo. Otherwise nice~ Yeah but I gain a lot of experience since I've started to /create beamap/mod so I'll improve this one the most I can!
And an incoming diff while I mod? owo. I'll leave that to the next modder I guess No problem for that Saten. It's already an amazing mod for me so you don't have to do more :p Thank you very much

Anyway, Good luck!

Moway wrote:

http://puu.sh/1POes update to my difficulty FIXED

Alright mod time, here we go.

Here's my suggestion for combo colors, let me know what you think. FIXED

Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 0,0,128
Combo4 : 128,0,0

Easy
[box=]00:03:767(3)- add whistle
00:04:434(4)- remove whistle
00:07:767(3)- add whistle
00:10:434(5)- whistle on the reverse arrow end
00:11:100 (5)- remove whistle, add finish
00:11:767(1)- move to (288,204) to have (5) blanket it
00:11:767(1)- add whistle
00:13:100(3)- add whistle
00:17:100(1)- add whistle
00:25:100(2)- add whistle
00:29:100(3)- add whistle
00:31:100(5)- remove whistle
00:31:767(6)- add whistle
00:32:434(1,2)- add whistle on slider end of both of these
00:35:100(1)- remove the circle and add a 1/2 slider
00:37:100(3)- add whistle
00:37:767(4)- add finish to both ends
00:41:100- add a circle
00:41:767(5)- add finish
00:42:434- add a circle, as an example for position i did this



00:43:100(1)- add a finish
00:45:100(2)- add a whistle
00:46:434(4)- add a whistle
00:47:767(6)- add a whistle
00:53:767(1)- add a finish
00:54:434(2)- remove whistle
00:55:100(4)- add whistle
00:56:434(1,2,3,4)- add a whistle to the head of all of these sliders
00:59:100(1)- add a finish
01:01:767(3)- add a finish
01:01:767(3,4,5,6,1)- this curve can be better, make sure to adjust all spacing after. my example:



01:02:434(4)- add whistle
01:04:434(1)- add finish
01:06:434(3)- add whistle
01:10:434(5)- add whistle
01:11:767(7)- add whistle
01:15:100(1)- add finish
01:22:434(2)- add whistle
01:25:100(2)- add whistle
01:25:767(1)- I personally like just ending with a circle rather than a spinner, but this is up to you.

Everything is fixed! Thank's for this mod


Normal
[box=]00:01:100(2)- Not sure how I feel about the drum hit here. You don't keep this up through the song, nor do you use it in any other difficulty. I suggest replacing with a soft whistle.
00:01:767(3)- ^ on the slider end
00:03:767(6)- ^
00:04:434(7)- ^ on the reverse arrow
0:06:434

I have updated this difficulty so tell me if all the sounds are good ^^

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Salut ^^ M4M

[General]
La dimension du background est pas bonne (1365*768), la résolution demandée est 800*600 ou 1024*768
Je peux pas le redimensionner mtn, j'essaierai de te le faire demain aussi ^^
Edit: Je peux pas le redimensionner sans le bousier, désolé, va falloir que t'en trouves un autre
FIXED

[Easy]
00:21:767 (1) - Au lieu de cette horreur (désolé xD) Tente ça http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580106 puis met des notes sur les beats jusqu'à la suite (le spacing colle, d'ailleurs, je tombe sur du 0.8x
FIXED

Un peu répétitif et linéraire. Tente de placer plus de notes et réduit la longueur de tes Sliders. Je ne te le hitsounde pas pour cette raison, il y a trop de modifications à faire.
Je vais voir ce que je peux faire là dessus. Pour la linéarité, je partais du principe que ça reste du easy donc que ça soit accessible pour les débutants. ça ne sera pas mon objectif prioritaire pour le moment vu que je vais refaire le hard.

[Normal]
00:10:434 (7) - Je suis pas un pro du hitsound, mais évite l'overclap.
00:13:434 - Mets une note
00:30:100 - mets une note
00:59:600 (7) - Tu es en Normal, ne mappe pas en 1/4
[box=Hitsounds]00:02:767 (4) - Whistle
00:03:767 (6) - Whistle
00:07:434 (3) - Whistle
00:10:434 (7) - Whistle sur Début et Clap sur Fin, mais rien sur les Reverses
00:12:434 (2) - Whistle
00:13:100 (4) - Whistle
00:13:767 (1) - Whistle sur les 3 poins du Slider
00:15:767 (2) - Whistle
00:16:100 (3) - Remove Whitle
00:20:767 (4) - Whistle
00:21:100 (5) - Finish
00:24:100 (3) - Whistle
00:26:100 (5) - Whistle
00:26:767 (7) - Whistle
00:27:100 (1) - Whistle sur fin
00:27:767 (2) - Clap
00:28:434 (3) - Clap
00:29:100 (4) - Whistle
00:53:100 (5) - Clap
01:11:100 (1) - Clap
01:12:434 (1) - Clap
01:22:434 (5) - Clap
01:23:767 (3) - Clap
01:24:434 (4) - Whistle
01:25:100 (5) - Clap
J'ai refais l'hitsound de la difficulté en m'inspirant de ce que m'a dit Moway donc j'ai pas vraiment utilisé ce que tu m'as dit mais normalement ça devrait mieux coller.

[Hard]
Le beatmap n'a strictement aucun vrai pattern. Un conseil, va faire un tour ici et remappe cette diff.
Le time est bon, mais le mapping est trop simple, il n'y a pas de vrais patterns.
Pour cette raison je ne te la hitsound pas, ça serait inutile vu que tu as à remapper le Hard.

Pense aussi à regarder le Spacing en Hard
00:31:434 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Toute cette zone a un spacing aléatoire par exemple, pouvant varier jusqu'à 0.5-0.8x entre 3 notes.

01:21:434 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Même si le spacing est mauvais, je note ici une tentative de faire un pattern

Merci pour le lien, je regarde ça plus en détail et je vais tenter de remapper tout ça en mettant un peu de spacing dedans.

[Insane]
00:39:600 (9) - NC ?
Good diff ^^ Nice job

That's all, good luck for rank ^^ Merci

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

00:06:434 add circle I'll add 1/4 slider instead (too much circles)
00:09:100 ^ I'll think about it but i'm not sure that's this circle is needed
00:00:434 whistle + finish sound better It's the beginning of the song and it's really soft so I think that I don't have to put finish here
00:17:434 remove it and add a circle here 00:18:434 I won't remove (2) but I'll add the circle
00:56:434 (1,2,3,4) - this is so hard for a easy lvl imo Mhmm I really dunno... You're maybe right, I'll ask MAT for this point. Ty!
01:04:434 remove NC since kiai finish here and and NC here 01:05:767 Yeah but that's a new beat and moreover kiai finish here so I think this is the good place for NC
01:15:767 01:17:100 since i feel this pauses weird imo FIXED
01:25:767 try to reduce volume here to 5% FIXED

Normal:

00:00:434 same as easy Same answer :p
00:10:434 since this dont fit with music try another pattern plz FIXED (better?)
00:12:100 add circle Too much circles :/
00:24:434 remove NC FIXED
00:31:100 i dont like this reverse on normal and easy diffs FIXED
00:40:434 (1,1) - this is unrankable try to move 1 to other place check the image: FIXED (Thank's! I didn't know )

SPOILER

01:01:767 (1,1) - same ^ 300 hit overlap next circle FIXED
01:25:100 move it to x:136 y:60 more redeable for new players FIXED
01:25:767 same as easy I have already reduce the volume ^^

Hard:

00:00:100 you forget finish here (finish + whistle sound better imo) I already use whistle on (2) (beat) and same reason for finish
00:01:767 remove nc FIXED
00:13:767 (4,5,6,7,1) - a little overmapping here Mhmm. I'll think about that but I like this pattern so x)
00:17:434 (2,3,4) - try another pattern the current one is weird imo If I find an other idea, I can change but i don't have :/
00:18:767 ^ same but if u like it keep it
00:44:767 (2,3,4) - really is very confuse xD FIXED
00:43:434 add finish Finish is already at the spinner's end
00:52:433 remove NC Mhmm I agree but 12 objects... That's a bit too much ^^' That's why I put NC here
01:19:100 ^ Here ok! FIXED

Insane:

00:00:434 i feel finish + whistle sound better :s
01:04:434 (1,1) - try this pattern sound better

01:25:767 ^
01:25:934 try to reduce volume to 5 %


Moway will take a look at this but I think he will not accept something here. ^^ edit : okay my prediction was bad :p

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hey!

General

1. The title should be 'I scream Chocolatl', right? click here FIXED
2. I wonder why there are so many ranked maps with Team Nekokan in artist, when your one is right... Ask BATs about it? Yeah, Ill see that with them
3. Remove chocolatl scream from tags, it the title FIXED
4. Uh, your blue combo colour is... so dark. Try this colours:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 148,154,209
   Combo2 : 254,169,175
   Combo3 : 255,255,121

I'll speak with Moway about colours

Easy

1. HP -1 FIXED
2. 00:01:767 (2) - oh, make it look nicer, for example: FIXED
3. 00:01:767 (2) - whistle on beginning FIXED
4. 00:05:767 (1) - maybe remove finish? it's too strong FIXED
5. 00:08:434 (4) - new combo here, try to avoid comboes longer than (4) FIXED
6. 00:21:767 (1,2,3) - hmmm, try this rhythm: FIXED
7. 00:27:767 - I don't like that blanked space. Add note FIXED
8. 00:29:767 (4) - nc FIXED
9. 00:30:434 - as before, note :< I added 1/4 slidder because too much circles
10. 00:37:767 (1) - finish on beginnig? FIXED
11. 00:41:100 (2) - move it like here FIXED
12. 00:41:767 (3) - and this note you can stack with the beginning of 00:37:767 (1) - True! FIXED
13. 00:41:100 (2) - new combo! FIXED
14. 00:48:434 (1) - maybe finish it at 00:50:434? FIXED
15. 00:51:100 - and add here slider till 00:51:767 FIXED
16. 00:56:434 (1,2,3,4) - you had 1/1 rhythm and here... maybe try this FIXED
17. 00:59:767 - blanked :< No ^^
18. 01:01:100 - ^ FIXED
19. 01:01:767 (3) - new combo FIXED
20. 01:07:100 (4) - whistles on it FIXED
21. 01:10:434 (5) - new combo FIXED
22. 01:20:434 (1) - I don't like this shape D: try to work on it? Yay, first day of beatmapping.. x) FIXED
23. 01:23:100 (1) - this one is strange too Yay, first day of beatmapping.. x) FIXED

Normal

1. HP, AR, OD -1fixed for AR but for the other, i really don't know ^^' I'll see
2. 00:01:767 (3) - uh, watch your map's beauty! It looks random, try to make it nicer and be in harmony with other objects, for example:
   and check out all your map FIXED
3. 00:17:434 (2,3) - no! You can't use 1/4 in Normal! :< FIXED
4. 00:27:100 (1,2) - delete circle and add reverse on slider FIXED
5. 00:28:434 (2,3) - and here you can add slider too FIXED
6. 00:30:767 (4) - delete this? Too many notes may be hard D: FIXED
7. 00:32:434 (1) - this shape... is ugly :< FIXED
8. 00:33:767 (1) - ^ FIXED
9. 00:50:434 (5) - remove finish FIXED
10. 00:55:767 (3,4,1) - don't stack them, it may confuse players. I even suggest this FIXED
11. 00:56:100 (4) - delete this and FIXED
12. 00:59:767 (1) - remove nc FIXED
13. 01:03:767 (1,2) - don't stack FIXED
14. 01:17:767 (1) - whistles FIXED
15. 00:21:767 (1) - unsnapped slider end I think that it's fixed now

Hard

1. 00:00:100 (1) - remove this note FIXED
2. 00:05:100 (6) - whistle FIXED
3. 00:17:434 (2,3,4,5,6) - why different spacing? FIXED
4. 00:18:100 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - uhhh, they look bad. FIXED
5. 00:27:100 (1,2) - they look bad too D: FIXED
6. 00:31:434 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this circles... maybe try to change some into sliders? There are too many of them and don't look good FIXED
7. 00:33:434 (3,4,5) - stack 1/4 and then jump... it may confuse players, you know? It's hard to read. Rearrange it FIXED
8. 00:44:267 - add note? FIXED
9. 01:15:100 (1) - shaaaape FIXED
10. 01:16:434 (1) - and heere FIXED

That's all! Good map! Thank's

Lanturn wrote:

Hey there shARPII!

So what do I do? These maps are really nice, and I can't really find any errors. Most of what I'll probably say is just suggestions. So remember, they're just suggestions

[General]
Artist: From looking at the credits. I suggest putting some kanji and such as the main title. It should be "Team.ねこかん[猫] featuring. Lia"
Of course, leave the romanised artist what it is currently. This helps the east find this song easier.


[Easy]
Most of these are just a few placement nudges since I can't find anything really noticable in this difficulty.

01:12:434 (1) or 01:17:767 (3) - Either remove NC at the 1 or add NC at the 3 - This will balance out the length of the NC's
If you choose to remove the NC at 01:12:434 - You won't have the new combo earlier than it should be (from the violin starting late).
If you choose to add the NC at 01:17:767 - It won't stand out as being too long compared to the rest of the area.

Nudges:
00:00:434 (1,2,3) .82 in your distance here between the 2 and 3, might I suggest moving the 1 and 2 just a little bit closer to the slider? (This isn't that noticeable if you want to have the note in the middle at the start)
00:12:434 (2) - x216 y120 -> x215 y115 | This note was oddly placed and a bit noticable. Little too close to the 1
00:19:100 (2) - x384 y72 -> x383 y69 | This will make the distance between the two notes perfect and much cleaner.
00:55:767 (5) - x96 y80 -> x93 y80 | This one isn't noticable as much, but shifting it over the extra few does make a difference in my opinion
01:10:434 (1,2,3,1,2) | all of these have quite a bit of distance between them. They're all even, but mostly .82-.83 on your distance. (normal is .79-.81 for you) It looks and plays fine otherwise. Just thought I'd mention it.
01:16:434 (2) - x68 y64 -> x62 y67 | Little balance between the sliders and the next few notes

Like I said before.. there's nothing wrong with this difficulty, so in all honesty. These are just suggestions. Hopefully at least some of it could be put to use. =)

[Normal]
This is a good difficulty as well. A concern of mine is that some of the turns might be a little too sharp and sort of ruins the appeal of the map. I'll explain it as we reach each note:

00:01:767 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
-3,4,5,6,7- The angle from the slider to the two notes is really sharp and to me, kind of looks a little messy. I suggest maybe moving the slider left of the 2 and then making an angle that flows like a ( and then adjusting the 6 and 7 a bit lower to match it..
-1,2,3,4,5,6- After all that, adjust the next combo so it doesn't have a sharp turn as well. Confusing? Hopefully these pics can help. This is just a suggestion because to me, personally. Sharp turns can be really unappealing. Don't change it unless you want to
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605079
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605082
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605083

00:23:434 (1,2) - These notes really sounds out of place. I suggest using a reverse slider that go 3/4 long and then a regular slider that goes for 1 1/2.
also maybe shorten the slider at 00:24:434 to 3/4 as well (see pic)

SPOILER

00:33:767 (1,2,1) - This is kind of a tight turn. Hopefully you can move the whole section below it a bit further down. It would really look nice if you can shoot the 2 off the end of the 1 slider like you did at 00:32:100 (5,1,2)
00:33:767 - Remove this NC as well. Two notes for each of the combos is a little short in my opinion, and you don't really do it anywhere else in the song I've noticed

01:00:100 (4,5) Combine these into a reverse slider? This part is kind of hard because the vocals for the ku and watashi wo have almost no gap. using a reverse slider here would join watashi together.

01:01:767 (1) - Shorten the end of this spinner to 01:02:934. It matches the point when the song takes that brief pause. (you did this with the one slider in easy)

01:03:434 - You should add a note here (unless you don't plan on following the vocal beginning. I found it a bit confusing my first play), or make a slider that joins up with the note at 01:03:767

Good stuff as well on this. Especially for your first map

[Hard]
So I was going to complain about how spacey some of the 1/4s were placed, but then I went, tried the song and did single tapping through the whole thing.. I FC'd it without problems. So, I won't say anything about your distance spacing because it was all readable and to be honest, it works pretty good.

00:31:434 (2,3) Make the 2 Slider's tail touch the 3 Slider's head. since the 3 slider touches the next note afterwards.

Spacing: I suggest you go through each note and check the spacing. using the prev. and next located at the top right of the editor mode after clicking a note.

I won't go into too much detail, but I'll point out some notes that could definitely use a bit of work on just to help center them out. (But.. I went into too much detail anyways, sorry )

Nudges: These are all just little things that don't really need to be changed unless you want to. Skip reading this if you want.
00:01:434 (5) - Prev .80 | Next .76 | space this so they're .78 each, or both .80 to match the previous notes
00:03:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - Varies between .99 and 1.02
00:05:434 (7,8,1) - Varies between .61 to .71 | This might not be bad if there was some notification the music would be going upbeat a bit more. the prev before all of that is .8 though so it's a bit ugly.
00:06:100 (2,3,4) - Varies between .79 and .82 | Adjust the 3 a bit to even out the distance.
00:12:434 (1) - Prev 1.53 | Next 1.62 | Try to make the previous move up to the 1.6 distance snap you were using if possible.
00:14:434 (6) - Prev 1.57 | Next 1.51 | Move the tail end out a bit to make it 1.57 With this being said....
00:13:100 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Try to make almost all of this area 1.57, especially the notes at the start and the slider+notes at the end.
00:20:767 (2) - Prev 1.59 | Next 1.61 | Move the Prev. to 1.61 for balance
00:23:100 (1) - Next .90 | Move this a bit closer so its .80 or .79 like 2-3 is.
00:24:267 (7,1) - Prev .79 | These are at .85, move them a bit closer if you can.
00:25:434 (4) - Prev .71 | Next .86 | try to make this .80 as well.
00:30:267 (3) - Nudge this to match the prev / next. Not really noticable though.
00:31:434 (2) - As I mentioned above. connect the tail end of the previous slider to the head of this. balance this at 1.06 or adjust the 2 to make it 1.01 like the few notes after.
00:34:434 (6,1) - what a huge jump here. A whopping 2.76. Not sure if you want to touch this or not, but I honestly think this is really huge compared to the 1.77 you were using earlier. I'll leave this one up to you!
00:36:267 (4,5,1) - (5) Prev 1.51 | Next 1.57 | (5) Try to make these even if possible for a perfect triangle
00:36:934 (2,3,4) - (3) Prev 1.65 | Next 1.61 | (3) ^
I suggest using an even spacing for these notes if possible, maybe 1.6 like you did before with the other triangles you did.
00:44:267 (4) - Even this distance out
00:48:100 (4) - Prev .93 | Move the prev to match the .80 you were following before
00:51:434 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The 3 and 6 have a Prev of .80 and a next of .76.
00:53:100 (4) - Prev .83 | Next .79 | Try to get the prev closer to .80 like the rest of the slider if you can (Try moving the 3!)
00:54:434 (2) - Prev 1.64 | Next 1.59 | Move this a tiny bit closer to the circle.
00:57:600 (6) - .90 here, Try to make it .80 so the stream is even.
01:02:100 (2) - Prev 2.02 | Next 1.97 | Even this out to 2.0 if you can .05 is a bit noticeable (try to line them up all on y152 maybe?)
01:04:767 (2) - Prev .94 | Move this a bit closer to the slider maybe? unless you wanted it out a bit. This one seems a bit intended.
01:07:100 (1) - Prev .81 | Next .78 | This and the next line...
01:07:600 (3) - Prev .82 | Next .88 | Try to make these all closer to .80 if possible and then readjust 01:08:100 (5) - to 1.60
01:08:768 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Bit messy here, jumps around from .89 to 1.02 | I suggest not using the grid snap for sliders as it can make them Uneven.
01:13:767 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - This area as well... Not sure what kind of distance you are going for here.. maybe .9 and then .8 on the stream?
01:23:767 (5) - Prev 1.50 | Next 1.61 | Try to even this out a bit if you can.
01:24:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream as well. Jumps around from .97 to 1.04

Big block of text... Remember those are all suggestions just to even out the spacings a bit. I was honestly going to do the same thing for your normal difficulty, but I'm sure by now you know how to do all of it simple enough, so I suggest you go through it. having a .02 error in distance is fine, but anything bigger I suggest you move them around a bit. and try to make all your spacings on 1/2's + 1/4's similar.

dalex20 wrote:

Normal
00:42:767 - Add Note No it will be too fast after the spinner for a normal diff
00:53:434 - ^ yup good idea
00:59:100 (1) - Finish FIXED
01:05:767 (3) - ^ No it will be too much
01:07:100 (3) - ^ No it will be too much
01:08:434 (2) - ^ at the end of slider no but i have remade the hitsound part because I have failed a lot --' Thx for reminding me ^^'
01:11:100 (3) - ^ already done
01:12:434 (3) - ^ already done

Hard

00:21:600 - Add Note I thought it won't be good because of the pattern but mhmm dunno if it's too hard or not. I add this note and I'll see later
00:26:600 - Slider instead (until next red tick) ??? This is already a slider
00:39:934 - Add Note No because I follow the signer here. It will be overmapped otherwise
00:40:267 - ^ ^
00:43:934 (3) - Place this at 00:43:767 instead Mhmm I want to follow Lia's voice again :/ doesn't match

Cute song >~< I hope it gets ranked Ty :3

jaehn215 wrote:

M4M~

Easy

imo HP Drain -1, AR -1 I think it's ok because the song is really slow so i can increase a little the difficulty with that.

00:17:434 (2) - remove please. ok
00:48:434 (1) - bad slider shape... i won't change this one
00:51:100 (2) - Do not stack (Easy diff) Fixed
00:59:100 (1) - remove finish hitsound. No I'll keep that hitsound. It's ugly without and you feel something grow up in the song

Normal

imo HP Drain -1, AR -1 same

00:17:767 (3) - no stack here.. Why? I'll think about this one
00:32:434 (1,3) - bad slider shape... Sorry, I'll keep it.
00:37:767 (1) - change -> ex : http://puu.sh/2955W and code
[code272,316,37767,6,0,B|148:356|256:132|56:284|96:124,1,280,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:[/code] Thank your for this one! Really helpful! Fixed
01:17:767 (3) - ^ (same slider shape..) Fixed

Hard

imo OD -1 same

umm.. DS 1.6 and 1/4 note are insane diff pattern...
Change DS please...

I have spoken with a MAT about this difficulty. I can agree that i could be not readable when you're looking at the diff but if you try to play it, you'll see that's really readable. I think this is not so insane than moway's diff so it's ok for me.

GL Ty!

alacat wrote:

Hi :3 /me late recheck ~ your diff　

[Easy]
●00:00:434 (1) - add whistle instead of finish ? same as your Normal/Hard diff. It won't work with my rythm if i put whistle here
●00:09:767 (2) - I feel that these consecutive whistle does not match. so remove whistle to the head of the slider. True! Fixed
●00:23:100 (2) - mm... finish sound doesn't follow the music. it is too loud >_< it is better to use whistle or nothing. Fixed
●00:35:100 (1,3) - I guess the beginner is confused to this part. my suggestion of flow : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632442 Yeah that's right! Fixed
●00:39:767 (2,1) - add whistle . I recommend that you put sound with constant rhythm. Right. That was an omission
●00:48:434 (1,2) - Same as here >.< 00:35:100 (1,3) - yeah fixed
●00:57:767 (2) - Same as here.00:23:100 (2) - okay
●01:07:100 (4) - add whistle to the repeat of the slider. Fixed

[Normal]
●00:03:100 (5) - add New combo same as your pattern. Fixed
●00:08:434 (1) - add whistle to the end of the slider. True! Fixed
●00:27:100 (1,2) - ^ True! Fixed

[Hard]
●00:05:100 (6) - I want more spacing here. like this :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632470 try to make triangle ~ Fixed
●00:12:434 (4) - try to make curve slider ? Aim for the next note. Fixed
●00:21:434 (4,5,1) - big spacing it is better to use DS0.8x like this here. 00:10:767 (6,7,1) - I don't know for this I think this is readable and playable. I'll see that with you later
●00:32:767 (2) - add whistle to the end of the slider. Fixed
●00:40:267 - add note follow the vocal ? I have moved the slider instead. What do you think about it now?
●00:43:434 (2,5) - add whistle. Fixed
●00:46:267 (3) - ^ Fixed
●00:53:600 (7) - remove whistle ? it follows nothing. Fixed
●01:09:101 (3) - add whistle follow the piano ? Fixed
●01:09:767 (1) - try to rotate by -10°? You could improve this flow a bit. Fixed
●01:19:767 (8) - add whistle. Fixed

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296,56,48434,6,0,B|196:88|196:88|164:188|164:188|48:224|48:344,1,420,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Yuki-kun wrote:

Quick check due to your pm.~ Thank you very much Yuki-kun!

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [0gre's Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:100, ends on 01:03:767

- [0gre's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:100, ends on 01:04:434 Damn right! I didn't notice it last time. I'll warn 0gre about that Ty!

My Mod

[Hard]

Hitsound is too quiet Duh ^^ It's ok for me with my skin or with the default one. I don't understand. Isn't your universal volume too low?
01:03:767 (1) - Ugly slider. Make it more curve. Fixed
01:24:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use those below code for your stream. I've made for more curve and symmetric. Fixed
01:25:100 (1) - Move end point to x: 280, y: 276 Fixed

[Normal]
- AR -1 is better imo. But if you do that, please consider to reduce OD and Drain too. Up to you. I'm not sure because the song is really slow so it allows me to do something a little bit harder imo. I'll think about it.
- You seem to be overused finish hitsound in this map. Yeah, you've right.
00:28:434 (2) - Finish hitsound here make no sense. Change to whistle at start of slider. Fixed but this isn't the place for whistle. I had 2 choice : Finish or nothing so it will be nothing here ^^
00:51:100 (1) - Whistle instead of finish. ^
00:51:767 (2) - Remove whistle. No i'm following my rythm. (whistle on 1st and 3th little white tick)
00:52:434 (3) - Whistle. ^
00:53:767 (1) - I've expected a finish hitsound here, at start of slider. Totally true. I forgot it. Fixed!
01:17:767 (3) - Whistle on repeat. whistle on 1st and 3th little white tick

[Easy]
00:13:767 (4) - Move back to x:68, y:244 Yeah really nice idea! Fixed

Good luck~ <3 Ty Yuki-kun! For a quick check, you helped me a lot so :3 Really thank you for your time

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ from My queue~

General:
Use Grid level 3 Mhmm dunno where is the problem. I prefer grid level 4 because i can do a better work with distance spacing between objects.
You have a video, deselect Letterbox during breaks. Right, fixed!


Easy:
OD -1 I think this is ok like that so i won't change that.
00:03:767(4) - new combo. Ok fixed.
00:19:100(4) - new combo; try not to do more than 4 combo on one color in the easy. Otherwise it will be difficult for beginners to restore HP. Fixed
00:26:434(4) - new combo. Yeah i like. fixed.
00:47:100(5) - ^ Not sure about this one, no change here
01:17:767(3) - ^ Ok, Fixed.


Normal:
00:20:434(4) - maybe NC? No, I don't think this is useful here because Lia is still singing.
00:48:934(1) - unsnapped note. Mhmm? I don't see that this object is unsnapped but i think that this is fixed now
02:23:100(4) - new combo. Duh? 02:23:100- xD It's ok for 01:23:100- fixed!


Hard:
00:05:767(1) - move new combo to 00:05:434(7) Right, fixed!
00:11:434(2,3) - unsnapped patterns.
00:15:100(1,3) - ^
00:27:600(2) - unsnapped pattern. Think it is worth alter it.
00:31:934(3) - ^
00:43:600(2,7) - ^
00:48:434(1,6) - ^
00:53:767(1) - ^
Every unsnapped things seem to be snapped now (imo.. ^^')
EDIT : Now i have understand >.< x) I'll recheck this and I'll update if I think my pattern need to be reworked
01:18:767(4) - new combo. Not sure that this is useful here.


I hope that she will soon be ranked ^ __ ^. Star~ Ty Verlaren!! :3

Xgor wrote:

Project Thorough Modding, OH YEAH~

[General]
The hitsounds are kinda dull, for the most part you just use whistles every 1/1 with occasional extra whistles at 1/2 and some finishes.
They fit but it could be so much more exiting if you used claps ever other 1/1 or/and used the drum sample-set to follow the drums
I'm not really confident about my hitsound skill so I have chosen to do something easy to follow and which match with the song ^^ I think I'll let this like that except if a MAT or someone else want to help me with hitsounds.

[Easy]
Nothing wrong with it but it's pretty forgettable aside from this pretty odd slider 00:48:434 (1) - I think it allow beginners to have the feeling that they are really following Lia that's why it could be odd but I think it could be nice for them.
It's pretty hard to get intresting flow on an easy so I'd say it would be good if you focused on making some interesting and fun patterns. I have added some patterns so yeah, I think it can be good like that.

[Normal]
Not much here either but it's also forgettable like Easy. can't you at least change the DS and SV because it's just the same as Easy.
I have changed the DS/SV when i use the kiai.

[Hard]
I really don't like how randomly the spacing is place on the 1/4, sometimes it's regular spacing and sometimes there is double that spacing and there isn't any set consistency with the spacing, this makes it kinda odd to play and feels very

Heck I don't even think you need to use that much 1/4s in a Hard on such an relaxing song like this.

I have fixed some patterns and same thing that normal diff.

[Insane]

00:52:350 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a pain to play, It starts with an fast stream and then goes with some jumps that very hard to sightread as they are cluttered and changes from anti-clockwise to clockwise very suddenly, I suggest you just redo the pattern.

I think that moway doesn't want to rework this pattern, I'll ask him tonight if I see him.

rezoons wrote:

Salut ,

Je vais enfin pouvoir te rendre la pareille (et pouvoir enfin faire un mod en français ^^)

Mod for popner's queue
Ta map est assez courte et a déja été moddée plein de fois donc je vais faire tenter de faire un mod pointilleux. La plupart des trucs sont juste des suggestions mais il n'y a aucun énorme problème dans ta map.

[General]

1. The final spinner doesn't end at the same time in the GD than in the other diff.

C'est une guest diff donc il fait ce qu'il veut mais j'avoue que la musique s'arrête avant donc je vais quand même lui en parler.

[Easy]

1. 00:12:434 (2,3) - Déplace le à x=204 y=124. Ça fait un joli trapèze en 1,2,3,4. J'ai remap donc ça marche plus ^^
2. 00:33:767 (2) - La blanket a l'air meilleur si tu le bouges de quelques crans au-dessus. J'ai refais le slider
3. 00:45:100 (2) - La blanket m'a l'air meilleur si tu le bouges un cran en-dessous. Fix normalement
4. 01:12:434 (1) - Un cran en-dessous? Pour être à la même altitude que 01:11:100 (2). Même 2 crans. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:10:438 (4) - Euh.... Pourquoi le distance snapping est tout de suite beaucoup plus élevé pour ce silder? Pour faire le blanket mais je pense pas que ça dérange. Enfin bon sinon c'est assez moche.
2. 00:40:434 (1) - Je trouve que ça fait un petit peu étrange. Peut être commencer le spinner 1/2 beat plus tard et mettre une note ici. Fixed
3. 01:05:767 (3) - Je trouve qu'un finish sonne bien ici. On m'avait demander de le retirer de souvenir, ça fait trop chargé sinon et sans ça passe bien aussi ^^
4. 01:07:100 (3) - ^

^

[Hard]

1. 00:16:434 (1) - L'overlapping était vraiment obligatoire? Mouai perso ça me dérange pas énormément.
2. 00:31:100 (1) - Plutôt un finish... non? Ouai pourquoi pas. C'est pas forcément sa place mais ça rentre bien donc ok.
3. 01:25:100 (1) - C'est dommage de finir par une map par un simple petit slider. Peut être que tu pourrais mettre trois notes à la place. La batterie fait du 1/6 en rythme donc 3 cercles ça risque d'être un peu trop confus pour savoir quand appuyer.

Voilà j'espère que ça t'auras été utile. En tout cas bonne chance pour faire ranké ta map t'en ai pas loin du tout. Et puisque la perfection ça se récompense voilà une ~STAR~ . Merci

P.S.:J'ai finalement suivi ton conseil et j'ai passé toutes mes maps en Grid Level 4.

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue
General
delete "ed" in the tag, less than 2 words doesn't hit in search. Ok. Fixed
please put hit sound more consistence, heard randomly so I don't follow your pattern. I'm putting a whistle on the first and the third little with tick. After that, if there is a moment which accelerate, i'm putting whistle where it's needed ^^
Easy
I feel OD & HP 2 better because this diff seems easier. In my opinion, this is good like that because the song is already veryyyy slow so i'm trying to boost the difficulty with that.
Placement
00:01:767(3) x:80 better in consistence up. Well, ok!
00:18:434(3) y:144 with same height (1) 144? I think there is a problem here ^^ I have changed a little
00:37:767(1) make blanket like this? Fixed
00:51:100(2) wrong dspacing, please use ×0.8 distance. If i'm using x0.8 here, it will be weird. If you have an other option, I'll take it ^^
01:03:767(3)^ Damn, right ^^ Fixed (ty)
Hit Sound
00:37:767(1) add finish at head like other diffs. Right, i forget it ^^ fixed!

Normal
same as Easy, OD.HP 4 better ^
Placement
00:02:767(4,1) it's a minor thing, but maybe this flow seem nice if accepted. Yeah the flow is better so it's ok. Fixed
00:07:100(2,3,4,5) a bit weird, please make smoother Fixed
00:10:434(4) sudden jump... you should set same spacing in Normal diff for newbie.
00:29:767(1) umm, I don't suppose this stack seems nice since the rhythm changed. so maybe you can move away better.Mhmm here I think it's ok because it's always on the beat so it's not so disturbing
00:51:100(1,2,3) make beaustiful triangle? Now this is beaustiful ! :3 Fixed
00:56:534(1,2,3)umm, maybe like this? Yeah good idea! Fixed

SPOILER

00:59:100(1,2,3,4) a bit crowded... you can put away better.
Hit Sonud
00:32:434(1,2,3,4) delete whistle at (2) and (4), add whistle at (1) and (3) 's end Yeah totally true, that's my bad. Fixed

Hard
Placement
00:23:767(4,5,6,7,8) why changed spacing? If i kept 0.8, the pattern looked really weird
Rhythm
01:15:100 unnecessary green line It's necessary for my SV
00:00:767(2,3,4) not feel better imo. replace like this? I don't really know how to put this slider to fit with what i've done.
01:05:600 add a note to follow the musi. Fixed
Hit Sonud
00:37:767(1) delete finish at end Fixed
01:11:100(3) delete finish at head. I suppose whistle better No I think it fit with the song actually.
01:16:434(1)^ Yeah here ok but i don't put whistle.

needs some works I suppose, but overall fine. so take my star~

Frostmourne wrote:

Hey ! Hello<3 ^^

General
- Your video still has audio in itself which is unrankable so please remove its audio Fixed
- Artist can be whether Team.Nekokan[Neko] feat.Lia or Team Nekokan feat.Lia Ok.
- Change the song's name to "I Scream Chocolatl (TV Size)" since

Reiji-RJ wrote:

The title should be 'I scream Chocolatl', right? click here

zrhnozrbn xD I'm mad ^^ Mhmm that was what I thought at the beginning so yeah! let's change it again :3

and seeing this , you can add both tag : nyanyannya sham Ok

Easy
All HP Drain,Approach Rate,Overall difficulty set to 2, I do believe that AR2 fits this song the best because the song isn't giving that kind of fast Owkay.
00:13:767 (4) - NC here will fit since you started NCing at the downbeat on such point 00:08:434 (1) - ,00:19:100 (1) - Fixed
00:17:100 (1) - you can remove NC here according to the above ^ Fixed
00:27:767 (5) - NC Fixed
00:36:434 (2,3) - as I see you used some sort of this rhythm 00:20:434 (2,3,4) -
I would say that this point is a bit empty comparing to the rest of the map, I think you can add a note on 00:36:767 , which will fill the blank here a bit better Yeah I like, fixed.
00:40:100 (x) - ^ same reason, it's not hard because it's the part before the kiai, a bit exciting will be great for playing here ! ok
00:45:767 (3) - NC because 00:45:767 (1,2,1) - 01:00:434 (2,1) - , seeing this part, they are NCed frequently so it should be balance in this case Ok, i understand. Done!
00:51:100 (2,3) - move these 2 notes right 1 grid because 00:52:434 (3) - will be the same axis with 00:53:767 (1) - and the gap between 00:48:434 (1,2) - will look more proper Fixed
01:19:100 (3,4) - better align them with 01:17:767 (1,2) - by moving down 1 grid for both note , so that it will be more neat (y:288) Oh damn, I didn't notice here ^^ Fixed

Normal
HP and AR -1 , it will fit this song better and spread with the Easy one Mhmm Ok for AR but I want to keep HP if it's possible ^^ I'll ask you later
00:17:600 (x) - as the music presents, adding a note here will fit the vocal really well as in before 00:15:434 (2,3,4) - , you seemed to follow it much more precisely on vocal so that's why adding here will fit better Fixed
00:49:434 (2) - I think additional and sampleset drum on the head doesn't fit the smoothness of this song much , as it can fit a bit with the instrument but I guess it will be a bit contradicted with the vocal so I suggest you use default set instead of these Ok. Fixed
00:53:434 (6) - move to x:436 y:130 so that it will look really much proper (the current's inclined to the upper side) Done
00:59:100 (1,2,3,4) - just in my opinion , but to arrange in this way looks better to me Actually, I don't like the rythm so I have changed it. I think you can recheck but for me, this is better :p
01:10:434 (5) - NC? it's too long imo and since 01:09:767 (4) - is finish, so it will fit because it's like after the ending of previous phrase True and fixed!
01:24:434 (3) - if you don't mind, to make it consistent with 00:49:434 (2) - (in case you removed) I suggest you use this as default set too so that the sound won't stand out too much (a bit obvious and that is a bit strange) Fixed

Hard
AR and OD 6 are pretty better(-1 both) , the current is quite unfitting with the spread and the song itself Fixed.
00:10:767 (6,7,1) - these 3 notes are placed strangely because you have used with larger spacing on these points 00:09:434 (3,4,5) -
and the direction of these 3 notes are in the same way and under this slider 00:09:434 (3) - so it's quite hard to read in some way
what I suggest is you can move 00:10:434 (5) - to x:404 y:268 and move these 3 notes in a time to x:496 y:128
also move 00:11:434 (2) - to x:348 y:64 (it isn't included in this picture yet) so adjust the spacing better Fixed imo
00:25:267 (3,4) - overlapping in this way doesn't look good imo, thing is it looks more proper to read since a bit overlapping with 00:24:767 (2) - will indicate 1/4 beat and it will also indicate 1 beat between 00:25:434 (4,5) - as well like this (x:140 y:296) Fixed
00:27:600 (2) - this spacing and slider is a bit confusing, with its spacing and rhythm, I suggest you shorten this slider 1/4 beat back (will end at 00:27:767)
and it will fit with the vocal accordingly Fixed
00:39:767 (1) - remove NC? I think leaving the follow point to guide the player that this note is on the top left side (which is really obviously opposite of the previous one) will make it read better Yeah, that's totally true! Fixed
01:03:434 (6) - add NC and remove 01:03:767 (1) - , because it doesn't fit with the new phrase here imo Fixed
like this one 01:02:934 (5) - follows the chorus before and then 01:03:434 (6) - suddenly changes the tone of volume
01:10:767 (2,3) - better move this out of 01:09:101 (3,4,5,6) - these lines because some hitburst might interfere a bit while playing Done

Call me back for a recheck once you are done fixing here Thank you Frostmourne :3