388,60,35115,2,0,P|452:80|484:144,1,140
484,196,35740,1,8,0:0:0
376,224,36157,1,0,0:0:0
256,340,36782,1,2,0:0:0
136,224,37407,2,0,P|72:204|40:140,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,108,38240,5,8,0:0:0
192,144,38448,2,0,P|256:168|324:140,1,140
364,108,39073,2,0,P|396:88|428:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Frostmourne wrote:

alacat's Easy
fine~ \^^/

Guy wrote:

　[alacat's Easy]

　●　00:34:490 (1) - 微妙にスタックできてないのでしっかり00:32:823 (2) - の始端にスタックしましょう。 oops fixed :3
　●　01:00:740 (3) - x:424 y:244あたりに移動して、直線を作る感じの配置のほうが自分は好みです。 Nope ~ >_<

S h i o n wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
00:52:823 (3) - 折返点去掉whistle? hmm , I have already added it >.<

MerryGate wrote:

[Easy]
OD-1...? ok :3
01:01:990 (2) - add clap to start I want to put sound with constant rhythm here

Lally wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:990 (4) - curve it i think it's better i like this pattern >_<
00:18:240 - whistle or finish Nope
00:23:240 (4) - move it under this slider 00:24:490 (4) to do a blanket for it ^

00:27:823 (1) - this slider is curved why don't you try to fix it so: fixed :3

00:59:490 (2) - do a blanket for 01:00:740 (3) same as above .

RikiH_ wrote:

alacat's easy

Why no video here? D:
00:04:490 (4,1) - Blanketing them can make the pattern more interesting Nope
00:21:573 I'd add a note with clap Nope
00:32:407 The same ^
00:32:823 (2) - Fix stack with following 1 ok :3
00:37:823 (1) - Not perfectly stacked, move 2nd sliderpoint in 352|220 and slider's tail in 328|128. This should do ^
01:02:823 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern, it breaks the flow a bit mm , I want to keep current pattern >_<
01:06:573 (4) - Make this symmetric to the center? Nope.
01:27:407 (5) - Put the repeat in 172|204 fixed ~

Frostmourne wrote:

cRyo's Hard
01:08:865 (2,3) - ctrl+g this, I think this flows better than the previous , the current, distance from (3) to (4) is quite too short and doesn't fit with vocal(with higher volume of Horie's voice) yep changed a bit~
01:24:907 (5) - suggest new combo here , nothing else other than personal feeling want all kicksliders same color

Guy wrote:

　[cRyo's Hard]

　●　00:52:823 (4) - blanket (2)? 1grid right. and slider end point 1grid up and 1grid left. current blanket is fine for me o.o

　●　00:57:407 (5) - 1grid down? slider end stack with 00:58:865 (1) - no need

Lally wrote:

[Hard]
some unsnapped green lines green lines works correct oo!
00:09:282 (4) - curve this slider for a better flow i want straight x.x
00:38:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - do a better star its not supposed to be a star ^^

RikiH_ wrote:

cRyo's Hard

00:10:740 (1) - More curved? no need :>
00:47:823 (8) - A bit weird, put this in 280|64 no its somekind of weird symetry <.<
00:49:490 (5) - I'm not sure but it seems to be a bit asymmetric but its only 1 way point, how can it be asymmetric \:D/
00:57:407 (5) - Ctrl+g? I'm absolutely not sure about this but try it i think current plays better
00:58:865 (1) - This should be stacked with the previous 5 why o:

DarknessAngel wrote:

cRyo

• 
  
  (just ignore the suggestion you don't agree,but you should snap green sections which are unsnapped.)

1. 00:30:740 (1) - too many whistle in a short time sounds noizy to me.
   I feel better if you let the volume down to 35%. made 45% oo!
2. 01:16:990 (1,2) - I think the spacing between 01:16:990 (1,2) should be larger since the NC is just 2.
   also the large spacing can emphasize the vocal well. hmm i dont feel like there should be some large spacing x.x

Sekai-nyan wrote:

cRyo's Hard:

1. 00:39:490 (6) - why this combo is up to 10? i suggest you break it to 5 of 5 so add nc here~

i wanted same color for all kick sliders x.x ( this one also #10 00:41:157 (10) - \:D/
Nothing much to say owo/ good as always cryo wwww Thx !

DarknessAngel wrote:

bakacat

• 
  
  (I just point out a suggestion,it's up to you to decide to fix or not.)

1. bakabakabakabakabaka !! \>A</ baka >.<
2. 00:13:240 (2) - if I were you,I would move this note to (348,308). it looks better,and flow is better,too. hmm , I want to keep current pattern.
3. I'm not a fan with your soft-whistle setting,but I think I shouldn't point out them cuz it would break your setting patterns if I did that.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

alacat's Easy:
OD -1 will be better for Easy diff >< ok!

1. 00:04:490 (4,1) - i think you should switch those nc because the music changed there~
2. 00:09:490 (3) - well this slider is fine but i think it'll be better if you make curve like this http://puu.sh/1As0E, it'll make a nice flow~ Nope ~ I want to keep current pattern >_<
3. 00:15:740 (x) - it'll be nice if you added a note here to follow the vocal better >< hmm , I dont put it .same as here.00:07:823 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:21:157 (1) - i dont think whistle is strong enough, i suggest you to remove it and add finish instead~ i think finish sound is loud here ><
5. 00:24:490 (1) - it'll be nicer if you move the last slider point to x:184 y:164 (dont forget to fix the spacing after that) fixed :3
6. 00:27:823 (1) - same as i said at 00:21:157 (1) - same.
7. 00:39:907 (2) - nc here will be better and it'll follow the vocal better imo~
8. 01:03:657 (4) - it'll make nice effect if you added a nc on this slider =w=/
9. 01:19:907 (4) - well it's fine as it is, but i kinda dislike it since it's overlap the 01:17:823 (1,2) - >< follow vocal here >v<
10. 01:26:990 (5) - well same i said here 00:27:823 (1) - same.

about new combo : I put it with constant . so no change >.<

Frostmourne wrote:

hihi Rika, WB

M4M here !

General

I'm not sure about spinner-background.png and BG.jpg. They have different size so when the spin is running, it shows not perfectly comparing to each other yep, i guess shoud fix this.

Normal
HP+1 , I think it's not too high as it is ok.
00:36:157 (5) - suggest to new combo here because the next note starts with different beat(it has been running 1/2 beats so far) so it will notice people for large gaps there fixed
01:10:323 (5) - move this 1/2 back (will start on 01:10:115) from the logic and vocal of this song, it should follow the vocal exactly here imo and then add slider on 01:10:740 ending at 01:10:948 instead, I think it plays more naturally for this one hmm,i didn't follow vocal to here.

Rika
00:18:657 (5) - add more repeat and more it closer to the next ? it's quite empty on 00:18:969 , music has the obvious sound here Nah,because already have many stream x.x
00:37:719 (7) - suggest to move to x:256 y:304 or somewhere around that because it plays bettter from the previous run imo good idea,fixed.
00:42:407 (5) - down 1 grid here, it's too close to the 00:42:407 (5) - 's body fixed
01:08:240 (2) - improve this slider ? it's placed on the middle so I think it should be more balanced slider ^
01:20:323 (9) - down 1 grid, reason is the same ^

good luck !

Guy wrote:

hi~ from your queue!
try m4m :3

　[Rika]

　●　00:52:823 (5,6) - Like this slider? Nah,that's will made flow bad.

SPOILER

　●　00:56:157 (1) - 1grid up? this is not straight. i guess fine now :3
　●　01:16:677 - add note? Nah,that's unfits with music.

　[Normal]

　●　00:30:323 (2) - It is not perfect symmetry. try this code. ok,thanks for code

132,176,30323,2,0,P|200:176|200:176|212:224|300:224|312:176|312:176|380:176,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　●　01:23:240 (4,5) - like this? ok,fixed

SPOILER

That's all~
Good Luck

Edit:
100th Kudosu \:D/

S h i o n wrote:

yo M4M~?

[Normal]
00:42:407 (5) - NC 堆叠的提示 还能避免太长的combo ok,fixed.
00:54:490 (1,2) - swap nc? 对pattern和vocal都比较好 ^
01:24:907 (6) - 25%的音量太小声了很奇怪 渐大效果
01:25:323 (1) - 当中的折返点好像听起来没什么意义 试试在01:26:157放折返? 然后后面再调整加note slider什么的 嘛，normal就这样吧

[Rika]
00:09:386 (6,9) - 稍微微调下让这两个不碰到= =? 还有00:10:115 (9,11) - 如果是故意的话就算了~ 这个我觉的没必要分开.
00:22:511 (x) - 这个音挺明显的 索性加note变成1串连打 这也是没必要,已经下了很多串了.
00:37:615 (6,7,8) - 很突兀啊.. 全图只有这个3连的spacing那么大 嘛 这是故意的.
01:07:823 (1,2,3) - 3/2slider 的节奏不太明显 还是1/2适合点? 1/2 单调啊
00:18:657 (5,6,7) - 挺random的节奏排列 虽然合音乐 试试这个[url]http://puu.sh/1ArW 这个改成串了l[/url]

MerryGate wrote:

Hi( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ from your queue

[Normal]
hmm...a little difficulty.
Probably due to the high SV. This is easy IMO.
I recommended OD3
00:18:657 (2) - add whistle to start Nah,should odd to me.
00:19:490 (1) - whistle to end
00:25:323 (5) - whistle to start
00:36:157 (5) - whistle
00:39:073 (3) - Looks a little not good.example code. maybe,53~60line Nah, looks fine IMO.

SPOILER

388,60,35115,2,0,P|452:80|484:144,1,140
484,196,35740,1,8,0:0:0
376,224,36157,1,0,0:0:0
256,340,36782,1,2,0:0:0
136,224,37407,2,0,P|72:204|40:140,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,108,38240,5,8,0:0:0
192,144,38448,2,0,P|256:168|324:140,1,140
364,108,39073,2,0,P|396:88|428:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Rika]
00:18:657 (5) - add hoistle to start
00:19:282 (7) - whoistle to end
00:25:323 (3) - whistle to start
00:36:157 (1) - ^ Nah, i don't want add more whistle.

Nice Mapset!
good luck

Lally wrote:

M4M >u< hope <3
[General]
omg cute sliders OAO
spinner-background have other size as bg is not cute to look it please fix it yep.will fix ~

[Normal]
00:09:907 (5,6,1) - try something like that Nah,breaking symmetry.

00:36:782 (6) - this cirle stop a little bit the rithm why don't you try to replace it with a small slider ? becasue i follow with melody.

00:42:407 (5) - new combo fixed

[Rika]

00:25:323 (3,4) - stack they stack will be to close here.
00:27:823 (1) - this slider is to close to the pervious Nah,i don't think so.
00:48:240 82,3) - stack they a little bit better i guess already stacked.

nice map :3

Irie Miyuki wrote:

Nice map. Good luck :3
I don't know what happened to you because i did't read every reply.. but i hope you feel better now xD
[Rika]
00:09:907 (7,8,9) - 这个节奏是不是好一点 没有影响节奏.

00:19:073 (6,7,1,2,3) - ^ 不怎么好.

00:48:657 (3) - stack better 我不知道你反方向的意思还是重叠的话 我想好了.
01:07:823 - 不好.

01:19:907 (8) - 感觉形状需要改一下.. 把第二个锚点往上改一改? 没必要.
01:27:094 (7) - 这个note删掉? 一直连的stream,不应该删.

That's all. Sorry for my poor mod I‘ve done my best, I wish these can help u a little.

edit: 本子触摸板不舒服不小心按上了个表情..用edit删了T.T 请别介意

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I want to make m4m from your queue but not a fast and poor mod only for get the slot. I hope you will check my map, anyways:

General

There is a mistake with your spinner's BG and normal BG. I don't know how to exploain it but when you play a spinner this happens:



Fix please yep ~

Normal

00:33:448 (4,5) - I' not sure about them, I'd change them or place a bit up no need.
01:12:823 (4,5,6) - They look a bit random, adjust this pattern in another way ^
01:24:073 (5) - make this symmetric with the previous one? You used symmetry until now D: yep,already fixed.
01:25:323 (1) - Not perfectly symmetric, put slider's tail in 424|180 it's already symmetrical.

Rika

00:06:990 (9) - I think you should add a NC here because the song changes radically in this point stream stuff,so it's fine.
00:09:907 (7,8,9) - Put these a bit more on the left, I don't like that overlapping Nah,it's fine IMO.
00:22:302 I think you missed a note here, you should change the whole pattern and make a unique stream here ok,once again,tested it's fits.
00:33:240 (7) Ctrl+g? It flows a bit better Nah,that's flow bad.
00:42:615 (6) 136|192 for a better flow ^
00:51:782 (3,4,5) - Adjust them in another way, they look random Nah.
00:53:240 (6,7) Blanket? No need blanket to here.
00:58:761 (7) This is a bit meeh, it breaks the simmetry of the whole pattern Nah,I don't think so need all symmetry.

Good map. Please fix spinner's BG, it's important!
I tried to make a good mod, so I hope you will accept to m4m. My map is this: t/90571 sorry,you are late T-T
Thank you in any case, bye O:

DarknessAngel wrote:

as your request via in-game PM ~


我是看到妳的queue才想到：「對了！還沒mod妳的圖！」 lol
(最近玩其他遊戲玩得太開心=.=)
抱歉慢了點T.T

話說大家為了求快而mod出來的東西果然看起來不怎麼樣xD


[notice]Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General

1. none !

Rika

• 
  
  (here are some suggestions about rhythm,you can ignore the suggestion you don't agree.)

1. 00:23:240 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我認為這樣的節奏會更好 这个也不坏啦.
   
   這節奏跟隨著音樂中比較強烈的部分，在打擊上可能會舒適一點
2. 00:28:657 (3,4,5) - 節奏改成下圖那樣 ? 理由同上面所說 ^
   
3. 00:37:615 (6,7,8) - 這個這麼分開看起來有點怪IMO，我覺得間距弄成像00:44:177 (5,6,7,8)會好一點 哦,这个故意弄大了点spacing.
4. 01:19:073 (5) - ↓節奏換一下 ? 對我來說省略人聲聽起來不大對勁，換成這樣聽起來舒服一點 这也一样.
   
5. 01:21:886 (3) - 抱歉nazi一下，這note往下一格的話01:21:157 (1,2,3,4)就等間距了，看起來好看一點 ok,fixed

Normal

• 
  
  (please consider the suggestion about rhythm.)

1. 00:04:073 (4) - 這個聽起來就真的不好了，我覺得至少不能省略00:04:490的voice，改成這樣： 所以我用tick2了啊 不必改.
   
2. 00:28:032 (3) - 又個nazi lol，移到(444,240)，看看00:27:407 (2,3,4)，感覺曲線會流暢一點 这个是直线.
3. 00:36:157 (5,6,7) - 在(6)的地方有種節奏"急停"的感覺，造成打擊感和聽覺上的空虛，換一下節奏來完全跟著人聲 ? 单调点就好,毕竟是normal.
   
4. 00:50:115 (x) - 試試看放個note在這邊 ? 不知怎的我覺得就是該加，我也不大會解釋 .. 同上.
5. 00:52:407 (3) - 做個跟00:53:240 (4)契合的slider看起來更好\:D/，像這樣 我觉的倾斜点比较好看.

overall,a good map.
GJ ~

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi Rika :3 here i'm again but this time i'm gonna mod your map wwww


General:

1. Make the lead in to 1000 it's a bit too fast atm~ ok.agree.

Normal:

1. 00:04:073 (4) - i can understand you followed the music but it's just dont fit here so i suggest you to do it like this http://puu.sh/1AvfH it's sound better IMO.
2. 00:06:990 (3) - this will be better if you make it blanket with the other note :3 like this http://puu.sh/1Avgx No need blanket to here.
3. 00:10:740 (6,1) - i think it'll follow the voice better if you switch those nc ~ it's fine,follow new voice.
4. 00:14:073 (7,1) - ^ ^
5. 00:19:490 (1) - well this slider will more better if you move the 2nd slider point to x:108 y:300 like this :3 http://puu.sh/1Avm7 it's looks fine IMO.
6. 00:22:823 (1) - i think if you added a finish on the start will give a nice effect to the song >w< unfits to here ;w;
7. 00:26:157 (6,1) - switch those nc well because the music changed there~ ok,fixed.
8. 00:42:823 (7) - well since this combo went longer then the other so i suggest you to add a nc here to keep your nc consistency >< already fixed to 00:42:407 (1) .
9. 00:59:490 (3,4) - Rika i love you for this <3 xD nice blanket XD
10. 01:03:657 (4,5) - it'll give a nice effect if you added a nc on those sliders ~ I guess no need nc to here.

Insane:

1. 00:10:948 (12,1) - it'll be better if you switch those nc it'll look nicer with this triple~ but vocal start on here,so no change.
2. 00:25:323 (3,4,5) - this triple is really hard to see so i suggest you to move it somewhere else~ it's fine,tested many times.
3. 00:32:823 (6) - this will be better if you break those nc on to 5 of 5 combo, so i suggest you to add nc here~ No need nc.
4. 00:51:052 (7) - this note bothered me for while i always miss it ;w; so i suggest you to remove it~ it's fits with music :3
5. 00:59:698 (5) - nc here to follow the vocal~ No need nc.
6. 01:19:698 (6) - ^ ^
7. 01:19:907 (8,9) - those sliders dont really blanket right so make it like this http://puu.sh/1AvN7 move the 9 a bit down so it'll look better~ looks same.

That's all i can fine :3 nice map Rika good luck ~~~

NoHitter wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
- Pretty clean difficulty. :3
- 00:04:490 (4) - Your combos seem to start at the downbeat. New combo this to keep your consistency. ok!
- 00:06:157 (1) - Remove new combo. ^ ^

NoHitter wrote:

[Normal]
- 00:04:073 (4) - [nazi] This slider isn't quite centered properly. It should be like this? I follow DS to here.
- 00:36:782 (2) - IMO add a note at 00:36:573 to make it easier to read. You switched polarity suddenly with this combo by placing it directly on the red tick. You've placed notes on the white tick first in other combos before this. ok,it's good idea.added.
- 00:46:157 (3) - Not too sure about the change of spacing here in a Normal. no probleam,it's easy
- 01:08:448 (2) - Reposition this note like this for better flow? it's flow fine IMO.

[Rika]
- 00:09:073 (5,6) - I think you inverted the length of these sliders. If you want to place a 3/4 long slider, make sure (5) is the one that is 3/4 long. (6) should be the one 1/2 long since you have to emphasize the rhythm at 00:09:490. Like this. yep,agree and fixed.
- 00:22:823 (1) - The hitbursts of the previous notes cover the end of the slider a bit. I would recommend changing the pattern. hard to fix and end point is fine :3
- 00:50:740 (6,7,1) - This combo is really confusing since you used two different spacing for 1/4 notes. It's really hard to read on your first attempt. You can use a pattern like 01:18:657 (3,4,5). yep,fixed.

kanpakyin wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]

1. 00:42:615 (2) - How about adding a whistle here to fit the instrument from the background music? no because dont like how 2 whistles sounds together o:
2. 01:01:573 (1,2,3,1) - I feel like the spinner should be started at 01:01:573 - since the vocal protraction started from there. no....spiner starts when music changes, also u can hear some kind of *wind* in BG music
3. 01:16:157 (7) - Rhythmical suggestion: Probably remove this slider and then put a diplet at 01:16:157 - and 01:16:469 - , so that it can fit the music perfectly. Also, you could add a whistle on 01:16:261 - and 01:16:469 - after adding the diplet. i decided to use 1 slider because it plays easier and personally not a big fan of sudden duplets x.x
4. 01:26:157 (1) - Add a new combo here? i want to use 1 combo color for whole *drumm part*

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:073 (4) - 長Slider有點不合適...我覺得用1/1 就好了- - 我觉的挺好,因为用了tick2.
2. 00:11:157 (1) - The finish sound is too loud and hence generate some 'noisy sound', which doesn't fit the music. So I would like to suggest to lower the volume to probably 70% here. 带耳机听的话或许会高点,但是用音响听完全没声,所以我觉的100%没事.
3. 00:16:157 (3) - Asymmetrical shape here. Probably fix it by moving the second point of the slider? ok,i guess fine now.
4. 01:08:657 (3) - Some mapping idea here. I would say this will look more beautiful and flow better if you can change it like this:
   current flow is better to me.
   [box=recommendation]

[小芊]

1. 00:07:823 (1,2) - 這個跳不順手...換著是我的話, 我會在(2)- 上面Ctrl+g 下个note 太远了..
2. 00:17:823 (1) - The finish sound is too loud and hence generate some 'noisy sound', which doesn't fit the music. So I would like to suggest to lower the volume to probably 70% here. same reason as normal.
3. 00:17:927 (2,3) - Add a whistle there to fit the music from the background music? it's sound noisy to me x.x
4. 00:18:657 (5) ~ 00:29:282 - 根據^的走向, 在適當的位置上加上whistle? 不想加,觉的太杂..
5. 00:34:282 (10) - The finish sound is too loud and hence generate some 'noisy sound', which doesn't fit the music. So I would like to suggest to lower the volume to probably 70% here. same reason as normal.
6. 01:07:823 (1,2,3,4) - Very awkward jump here. Actually, 1/2 is enough here. 1/4 doesn't fit the music that much. Also you can did some refinement on jumps 1/2 is too boring.