1. HabiHolic's Normal (3.66 stars, 268 notes)
2. Hard (4.92 stars, 494 notes)
3. -iCo-'s Easy (1.6 stars, 166 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 705 notes)

LQA20Ans wrote:

From #korean

저퀄 모딩하고 도주할게염 ㅍㅍ

[General]

-규정 바껴서 artist에 ちょうちょ 라고 적어야 되요.
romanised는 ChouCho로...(근데 ChouCho인지 Choucho인지 잘 모르겠네요.)

-태그에 겟난 맵퍼 명 추가해주세요. 그리고 이건 제안입니다만 opening 도 추가 해주세요.


[Easy]

-00:01:599 - 맨처음 부분 리듬제안 입니다.

리듬

힛사는 1 끝에 클랩 2처음에 휘슬, 3이랑 4끝에 클랩입니다.

-00:04:508 - 이부분도 위에랑 똑같은 리듬으로 해주세요.

-00:19:054 - 여기서 부터 00:30:690 여기까지는 클랩대신 휘슬을 써주면 좋을것 같습니다.

-01:17:236 (1) - 리버스하는 부분 쪽 점을 가장 작은 그리드 기준으로 3만큼 왼쪽, 2만큼 위로 옮겨주세요.

-01:34:690 - 여기도 01:46:326 까지 클랩대신 휘슬을 써주세요.

-01:46:327 (3) - 뉴콤보

-02:00:872 (1) - 슬라이더 머리(?)부분을 01:59:418 (2) 과 스냅 시켜주세요.

-02:12:509 (1,2,3) - 모양을 약간더 보기 좋게 짜봤습니다.

스샷 + 코드

68,108,132508,6,0,P|140:76|204:116|204:116|268:156|340:124,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,192,134327,2,0,P|481:192,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
335,258,135417,2,0,P|268:228|204:268|204:268|140:308|68:276,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

-02:18:327 (1) - 슬라 끝에 클랩 제거

-02:21:236 (2) - ^

-02:22:690 (4) - 이렇게 바꿔주세요

힛사는 처음 슬라 끝에 클랩
반복슬라는 맨마지막에만 클랩

-02:24:146 (1) - 슬라끝에 클랩 제거

-02:25:600 (3,4) - 배치가 별로 좋아보이지 않네요... 겹치지 않게 바꿔주세요.

-02:29:963 (6) - NC

-03:01:963 - 03:09:963 여기까지 클랩대신 휘슬 사용해주세요
그리고 03:07:054 여기까지 사운드 50으로 해주시고 03:07:781 (1,1) 요 두개는 소리 크게 설정 해주세요.

-03:07:781 (1,1) - 겹치지 않게 배치 다시 해주세요.


[Normal]

-1.4는 좀 간격이 넓지 않나 생각이 드네요. 한 1.2정도가 괜찮을듯...

-HP Drain -1, OD -1

일단 노말은 디스턴스 조정이 다되면 체크할게요.

그리고 여담이지만 노말은 대칭 쓰더라도 디스턴스는 지켜줘야되요


[Insane]

-00:39:781 (2) - 00:39:236 (3) 랑 정확히 스냅 시켜주세요.

-00:49:780 (2,3) - 개인적으로 이 두개 위치 바꿔주는게 더 무빙이 자연스럽네요...

-01:54:690 (2,3,4,5,6) - 데크레센도 느낌이 나도록 소리를 줄여주시고서 01:55:235 (7) 여기는 원래 소리크기로 바꿔주세요.
다른 5연타 노트들도 이렇게 해주세요.

-02:10:691 (6,7) - 점프 거리를 이전거보다 약간더 벌리면 좋을듯.

-02:12:690 (6) - NC

-02:13:599 (1) - NC 제거

-02:18:508 (6) - NC

-02:19:235 (1) - NC 제거

-02:19:962 (6) - NC

-02:37:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - y축 중심과 대칭되도록 연타를 배치해주세요.

-02:51:781 (2,3) - 02:55:781 (8) - ctrl + g?

-02:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이부분 서클 3개씩 하기보단 슬라 1개 서클 1개로 하는게 더 좋지 않을까 싶네요.



-03:32:508 (5) - NC

-03:45:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5,6,7,8은 1,2,3,4 를 180도 회전시켜주는게 더 좋을듯 싶습니다.


개인적으로 힛사 크기 조절에는 좀 아쉬운감이 있긴 하지만 나머진 잘 만드셨네요.

화이팅!

Sherry wrote:

hi~ writes in Japanese.

[HabiHolic's Normal]

SPOILER

<Genera>
他の難易度同様にオフセットを235にあわす必要があります。 (It is necessary to change into Offset 235). fix

<this is timing change but same distance>
00:07:133 (5) - 00:07:315 (6):遠い (too far) no fix.. What does that mean?
00:17:315 (2) - 00:17:497 (3) : ^ ^ The above reasons
00:34:406 (6) - 00:34:951 (1) : ^ ^ The above reasons

00:45:315 (4) : スライダーを消して 00:45:679に単発を加えるほうがいいと思います。 (I think, remove slider and 00:45:679 single circle and NC is better) fix

01:02:769 (1) - 01:04:042 (3) : 違和感があります。リズムを変えてみてはどうでしょうか (It is not so good. How about changing a rhythm? ) hmm..Is not no need to change the rhythm TYSON think ..
02:18:405 (1) - 02:19:678 (3) - ^ ^ The above reasons

01:06:951 (1) - 01:11:133 (8) : コンボが長すぎです。 (it long combo) fix

01:23:133 (1) : タイミングが変わるのでNCがいいと思います。 (Since a rhythm changes, NC thinks that it is good ) fix

Sherry wrote:

hi~ writes in Japanese.

[Genera]
tagに日本語「ちょうちょ」が入ってます。日本語はだめだったと思うので削除したほうがいいでしょう。

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:56:599 (2) : 違和感があります。　リズムを変えるのもいいかもしれませんが、ヒットサウンドを変えてみるのはどうでしょうか？ 00:56:963 (1) でfinishを使っているので00:56:963 (1)のfinishを消して、00:56:599 (2) に付けるのもありかなと思います。

00:58:236 (4) : 発音とずれていますこんなのはどうでしょうか？


01:01:145 (4) : ^


01:09:872 (4) :^


01:21:690 (1) - 01:22:054 (2) : 01:20:236 (1) - 01:20:598 (2)　この範囲をもう一度リピートするのはどうでしょうか

01:35:508 (3) :add finish
01:36:963 (6) :^
01:37:325 (8) :^
01:38:417 (3) :^
01:39:871 (6) :^
01:40:236 (8) :^
01:40:599 (1) :^
01:41:144 (2) :^
01:41:872 (4) :^
01:42:599 (6) :^
01:43:508 (1) :^

03:34:054 (1) : hit soundをfinishに変える

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:38:236 (1) - 00:38:598 (3) :この３点はジャンプじゃないほうがいいと思います。
00:48:235 (1) - 00:48:417 (2) :ジャンプじゃないほうがいいと思います。
01:02:781 (1) - 01:02:963 (2) :^
02:18:416 (1) - 02:18:598 (2) :^
03:20:962 (1) - 03:21:144 (2) :^

02:24:052 (9) - 02:24:235 (1) :少し遠いように感じます。

以上です。

General

-iCo-'s Easy

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

HabiHolic's Normal

Bobong's Hard

SPOILER

Hard

Insane

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue /o/

SPOILER

General
태그에 Bobong 추가 해주세요
그리고 쵸우쵸가 부른게 맞으면 소스에 Nico Nico douga 넣으심이?

AIBat
다른난이도는 전부 오프셋이 235인데 노말만 225네요 수정해주세요
또 노말만 프리뷰 타임 다른데 이것도 수정해주세요
또 노트 색깔도 노말하고 이지가 다른데 수정 어떠신가요? ( 이건 가이드 라인이니 굳이 수정 안하셔도 되요 )

Hard & Insane
00:17:315 - snap to 00:17:325
00:19:134 - snap to 00:19:144
00:29:315 - snap to 00:29:325
00:42:770 - snap to 00:42:780
00:47:680 - snap to 00:47:689
00:56:952 - snap to 00:56:962
01:23:134 - snap to 01:23:144
01:34:770 - snap to 01:34:780
01:44:225 - snap to 01:44:235
01:54:770 - snap to 01:54:780
01:58:406 - snap to 01:58:416
02:03:316 - snap to 02:03:325
02:12:589 - snap to 02:12:598
02:38:770 - snap to 02:38:780
02:50:770 - snap to 02:50:780
03:02:043 - snap to 03:02:053
03:07:134 - snap to 03:07:144
03:10:043 - snap to 03:10:053
03:10:406 - snap to 03:10:416
03:13:680 - snap to 03:13:689
03:34:043 - snap to 03:34:053
03:52:861 - snap to 03:52:871

Hard
00:39:145 (7) - 끝에 클랩 삭제
00:53:326 (1) - 스피너 00:55:325 - 여기서 끝내시면 리듬에 좀더 맞는거 같아요
01:18:599 (4) - HP바에 닿네요 조금 내리심이
01:20:598 (1,1,1) - 여긴 뉴콤보 지우시는게 나을거 같아요
02:18:417 (8) - 노트 보다는 02:18:054 (7) - 이걸 반복을 한번 더 넣으시는게?
03:13:690 (1) - 앞에피니시

굿 디프

Insane
00:22:417 (2) - 개인적인 생각인데 00:22:054 (1) - 이거하고 모양 비슷하게 만드시면 좋을거 같아요
00:44:236 (3) - 클랩
00:56:872 (8) - 0.8x 디스탠스 스냅 써주세요
00:56:963 (1) - ^
00:58:781 (2) - 이거를 00:58:236 (1) - 이거하고 안겹치게 하시면 더 좋을거 같아요
01:01:689 (2) - ^
01:08:598 (1) - 슬라이더 앞에 피니시
01:16:599 (3) - 딱히 점프를 이렇게 크게 넣을 필욘 없다고 봐요 ( 보컬도 그렇고 다른 리듬에도 별로 안어울리네요 )조금 줄이시는게?
01:59:871 (3) - 클랩
02:24:235 (1) - 슬라이더 앞에 피니시
03:02:053 (1) - 클랩 빼는게 좀더 어울리네요
03:10:780 (1) - 슬라이더 앞에 피니시
03:13:689 (1) - ^
03:20:599 (4,5,6,7,1) - 03:19:144 (4) - 여기 처럼 힛사 넣어주세요
03:22:053 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
03:25:326 (1) - 피니시
03:30:417 (8) - 뉴콤보
03:46:053 (4,5) - 이것도 디스탠스가 너무 넓은거 같아요

하 그래도 생각보다 맵셋이 괜찮네요 꼭 랭크 시키시길!

Edit : 프리뷰타임이 같아야하는건 가이드 라인이 아니라 룰입니다 난이도 별로 프리뷰 타임은 무조건 같아야해요
또한 오프셋이같아야하는것도 룰이구요.

Tsusuko wrote:

hi mod request from queue

General

Good

Hard

Only thing I have to say is;
03:34:053 ~ 03:34:144 (1,1) If you were going to have a spinner right after, why didn't you just put the spinner at 03:34:053 anyway?

Insane

Good

The mapset...could be better.Good luck, anyway.

1. 00:15:872 (10) - 3/4 slider or add a note inside
2. 00:18:871 - add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570030
3. 00:58:780 (2) - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570032 this way it looks better
4. 01:01:689 (2) - ^
5. 01:16:963 (5,6) - stream plz!
6. 01:54:599 (1) - new combo here; remove the next one
7. 02:05:235 - add note, or start the jump at (3), the spacing is too small here
8. 03:42:780 (1,3) - use ctrl+g; better flow
9. 03:45:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - large spacing

1. 03:24:780 (4) - move the end 4grids down

1. 00:24:961 (1) - rhythm: O===O_O___O___O=O (_: space, O=O: slider)
2. 00:43:870 (4) - O===O___O=R=O
3. 00:49:689 (5) - O=O_O=O___O===O
4. 01:02:779 (1) - O=======O___O___O=======O
5. 03:19:507 (1) - ^
6. 01:08:961 (1) - O_O===O___O=O___O
7. 02:24:597 (1) - ^
8. 03:04:962 (1) - put the reverse arrow on the left, don't block the note

1. 00:45:689 (1) - wrong spacing

1. 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - すべてfinishだと音が大きく曲にも合わないと思いますので、(2)と(3)のfinishを削除しましょう。(all finish sound is very loud. remove (2) and (3) finish.)
   　
2. 00:56:235 (1) - add whistle?
   　
3. 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) - clap 5連は曲に合っていません。ボリュームを下げるか、(6)以外を削除した方が良いと思いました。(not match 5 claps. down volume or remove (7),(8),(9) and (1) clap.)
   　
4. 02:05:326 (1,2,3,4) - 上記の00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です。 (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -)
   　
5. 02:08:780 (8) - 前のパターンからすると x:272 y:200に配置するのがベターです。 (In the case of your pattern, move to x:272 y:200 is better.)
   　
6. 02:18:052 (8,9,10,11,1) - 上記の02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -と同じ理由です。 (same reason above 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -)

1. 00:28:962 (3) - 音取りの提案です (suggestion)
   　
   　　　00:28:962 - add circle
   　　　00:29:144 - add 1/2 slider
   　　　こっちのほうがbackの音をしっかり取れてると思います。 (i think that good rhythm well.)
   
   　
2. 00:39:871 (1,2,3) - remove finish
   　
3. 00:39:871 (1,3) - add clap
   　
4. 00:49:689 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
5. 01:55:507 (2,3,4) - 上記の00:39:871 (1,2,3) -と同じ理由です (same reason above 00:39:871 (1,2,3) -)
   　
6. 02:05:325 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
7. 03:24:780 (4) - もう少しカーブを緩やかにするとさらに綺麗に見えます。 (I think it to become more beautiful when you make a curve slow a little more.)
   　
   SPOILER

   
   　
8. 03:26:780 (6) - remove finish

1. An Artist name is different from other diff.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hello///

first: it's the wrong way to cut the BG; don't make the girls in the wrong size, cut the borders instead Hmm. it looks good. OK i will fix


Insane

1. 00:15:872 (10) - 3/4 slider or add a note inside Fix my own way.
2. 00:18:871 - add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570030 I think, 1 -> 3 better than stream
3. 00:58:780 (2) - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570032 this way it looks better cool!
4. 01:01:689 (2) - ^ of course
5. 01:16:963 (5,6) - stream plz! copy that !
6. 01:54:599 (1) - new combo here; remove the next one I'm fixed this way. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570525
7. 02:05:235 - add note, or start the jump at (3), the spacing is too small here ok. it looks more better
8. 03:42:780 (1,3) - use ctrl+g; better flow nice!
9. 03:45:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - large spacing I think, this is finish. therefore, I will steady this

Hard

1. 03:24:780 (4) - move the end 4grids down OK

...who is you I'm observing passerby by the way, Thank you !

Guy wrote:

hi~ request from PM

[Insane]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - すべてfinishだと音が大きく曲にも合わないと思いますので、(2)と(3)のfinishを削除しましょう。(all finish sound is very loud. remove (2) and (3) finish.) えと, こんな方法はどうでしょう. 音お46%にしました.
   　
2. 00:56:235 (1) - add whistle? むしろ変に見えます.
   　
3. 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) - clap 5連は曲に合っていません。ボリュームを下げるか、(6)以外を削除した方が良いと思いました。(not match 5 claps. down volume or remove (7),(8),(9) and (1) clap.) ボリュームを下がります.
   　
4. 02:05:326 (1,2,3,4) - 上記の00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です。上記の00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じに変えりました.( (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -)
   　
5. 02:08:780 (8) - 前のパターンからすると x:272 y:200に配置するのがベターです。OK (In the case of your pattern, move to x:272 y:200 is better.)
   　
6. 02:18:052 (8,9,10,11,1) - 上記の02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -と同じ理由です。キアイタイムなのでそのままにした法がいいかと思います. (same reason above 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -)

[Hard]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:28:962 (3) - 音取りの提案です (suggestion)
   　
   　　　00:28:962 - add circle
   　　　00:29:144 - add 1/2 slider
   　　　こっちのほうがbackの音をしっかり取れてると思います。 (i think that good rhythm well.) それもいいけど, こっちがもっと御好みです
   
   　
2. 00:39:871 (1,2,3) - remove finish 音お46%にしました.
   　
3. 00:39:871 (1,3) - add clap いいえ.
   　
4. 00:49:689 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由ですOK (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
5. 01:55:507 (2,3,4) - 上記の00:39:871 (1,2,3) -と同じ理由ですOK (same reason above 00:39:871 (1,2,3) -)
   　
6. 02:05:325 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由ですOK (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
7. 03:24:780 (4) - もう少しカーブを緩やかにするとさらに綺麗に見えます。はい! (I think it to become more beautiful when you make a curve slow a little more.)
   　
   SPOILER

   
   　
8. 03:26:780 (6) - remove finish 曲のFinish部分なのでこのままにします.

sorry poor mod~ No, I'm appreciated your mod. I'm learned about something.
i wrote english sentence for if you don't understand my japanese. ご配慮に感謝します.
good luck you too ~ Thanks your cooperation!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hello///

first: it's the wrong way to cut the BG; don't make the girls in the wrong size, cut the borders instead


Normal

1. 00:24:961 (1) - rhythm: O===O_O___O___O=O (_: space, O=O: slider) fix
2. 00:43:870 (4) - O===O___O=R=O fix
3. 00:49:689 (5) - O=O_O=O___O===O no fix
4. 01:02:779 (1) - O=======O___O___O=======O fix
5. 03:19:507 (1) - ^ fix
6. 01:08:961 (1) - O_O===O___O=O___O fix
7. 02:24:597 (1) - ^ fix
8. 03:04:962 (1) - put the reverse arrow on the left, don't block the note

fix

and

...who is you

Lan wings wrote:

[Insane]
i think this clap is not good Well. my think is suitable this sound.
00:00:235 - volume 80%? I fixed 62%
00:01:872 (4) - clap Yes
00:04:781 (2) - ^ ^
00:05:326 (3) - drum clap 70% I think, this clap sound is not suitable.
00:09:508 (6) - finish 70% Not added finish sound in this music.
00:12:598 (1) - finish 80% ^
00:17:508 (6) - finish ^
00:24:871 (10) - drum whistle Add whistle
00:26:235 (4) - sliderwhistle OK. I add on slider's first.
00:27:871 - drum whistle 30% I instead add whistle on 00:27:780 (9)
00:28:599 (3,6) - finish Add on finish 00:28:599 (3,4,6,7) and volume 26% Thanks your nice idea!
00:37:872 (6) - finish 50% Same as 00:09:508 (6)
00:47:325 finish ^
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - 46%-->51%-->56%-->61% Looks like strange. I fixed 62%
00:40:962 add a cirle? finish 65% Good! I define volume 62%
00:40:962 (1) - ^start here?00:41:144 OK. I think 00:41:053 is more better.
00:45:145 (5) - whistle Not added whistle sound in this music.
00:46:781 (3) - finish Same as 00:09:508 (6)
00:48:235 (1) - change slider? Nope. if I change slider, symmetry is broken
00:49:689 (1,2) - 50% Negative. That is strange.
00:50:053 (3) - 55% ^
00:50:235 (4) - 60% ^
00:52:416 finish 60% OK!
00:53:326 (7) - finish 50% Same as 00:09:508 (6)
00:56:231 (1,3) - whistle Negative. That is strange.
01:00:236 (2,3) - blanket Move to x:72, y:204
00:58:236 (1,2) - slider end stack? Yepp. Thanks
01:01:144 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:02:235 (4) - x:272 y:244 Fix my own ways.
01:02:417 (4,5,6,7,1) - x:404 y:152 ^
01:02:963 (2) - x:256 y:84 ^

SPOILER

02:05:326 (1,2,3,4) - same 00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:053 finish 60 Same as 00:09:508 (6)
03:00:962 (10) - del sliderfinish and slider clap OK
03:07:144 (1,2) - del finish Negative.
03:10:053 (1) - 72% ^ because, this is highlight part before kiai time.

Wow.. so long. Thanks your labors.

MerryGate wrote:

from #modreqs

I dont know what langarge should I use...so I use English.

[General]
->Many of the settings are inconsistent in normal.
Combo Color,Preview Time,Letter Box,Tags
->Japanese tags are allowed.(http://osu.ppy.sh/s/56994)
Feel free to add Japanese Tags.
->1974AudioLeadIn is a little long. change to 1500.

All fix!

[Hard]
Hmm...Generally,AR7 is better in Hard diff.well,AR8 is allowed. fix
Overall volume is high.As with Insane diff. fix
02:55:144 (6) - please unstack fix

[Insane]
00:38:053 - 00:38:794 - I feel a little unnatural. 00:37:872 (6) - and 00:38:598 (3) - change to slider?(follow vocal) No. I followed Guitar slider & clap drum. suddenly slider appeal is not good
00:47:872 (6,7,8,9,1) - 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - clap and finish are noisy.Decrease the volume(about 60%?) fix
00:57:689 (3) - Along the 2's approach circle.move to 228:60.(Well,this is fine detail,but if possible,you also fix some other) fix
01:15:145 (3,4,5) - 01:16:599 (3,4,5) - Why different specing? There is no difference in the melody. fix
01:48:235 (8,9,10) - placement suggestion fix

SPOILER

01:53:508 (6) - 01:54:236 (3) - same above fix
02:21:507 (2) - If possible,avoid overlap. fix
02:26:598 (8) - ^ fix
03:19:508 (1) - add finish fix
03:20:235 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:20:599 (4) - add clap No fix
03:20:962 (1) - add finish? fix
03:21:689 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:22:053 (4) - add clap No fix
03:22:416 (1) - add finish? fix
03:23:143 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:23:508 (4) - add clap No fix
03:23:871 (1) - add finish fix
03:24:599 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:24:962 (4) - add clap to start No fix
03:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm...to my mind,kinda bad flow. fix

example1

example2

blue->pink->green
03:42:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1->7->3->5? OK

I think good beatmap.
After receiving a few more mod, it may be ranked.(You need to ask the MAT in the queue,or PM,etc...) Thanks your high quality modding!

good luck.

1. Please, fix your background, it looks really shrunk (lol). Seems that you just resized it to fit 1024:768 criteria. Well, you can use something like 1366:768 since widescreens are supported now or go with 1024:768, but please don't resize, crop image instead to save ratio! If you lost the original, here's the link: http://cdn1.gelbooru.com//images/1489/9b7c0a67584d34748cdee2717e375208.jpg
2. You don't need ちょうちょ in tags since you already have it in ArtistUnicode field, also remove ChouCho from there because it's already in Artist Field

TicClick wrote:

mod requested via pm

[General]

1. Please, fix your background, it looks really shrunk (lol). Seems that you just resized it to fit 1024:768 criteria. Well, you can use something like 1366:768 since widescreens are supported now or go with 1024:768, but please don't resize, crop image instead to save ratio! If you lost the original, here's the link: http://cdn1.gelbooru.com//images/1489/9b7c0a67584d34748cdee2717e375208.jpg
2. You don't need ちょうちょ in tags since you already have it in ArtistUnicode field

All fix

Hard

1. 00:13:325 (1) - add finish fix
2. 00:17:325 (5) - I would remove it and start a slider from 00:17:507, also remove 00:17:871 (6) too, add a slider there and connect them with a note to follow the music better: http://puu.sh/1RTjb fix
3. 00:20:598 - I would start slider here (to follow the vocals) fix
4. 00:21:325 (6,7,1) - I really don't like how they look together, so change them? http://puu.sh/1RTxH fix my owns
5. 00:35:871 (1,2,3,4) - I'm afraid this square has too big and sudden spacing change, so I think you should make it smaller (1.2 instead of 1.5, for example) My thinks also same. Thank you.
6. 00:38:598 (6) - move it down, so note will be "inside" of it? http://puu.sh/1RTzw fix
7. 00:39:144 (7) - I would make it curvy, because the previous slider was curvy and I think it'll look better fix
8. 01:02:780 (1) - use a finish here, not a clap fix
9. 01:09:871 (4) - uh.. make a beat blanket or something? http://puu.sh/1RTMZ fix
10. 01:12:962 - add a circle? Though I'm not sure this looks empty sound. no fix
11. 01:21:689 (5,6) - it's too boring after 01:20:235 (1,2,3,4), change for more active play? http://puu.sh/1RTPg (please note that I added circle up there) fix
12. 01:36:053 (4) - I would remove it, then add a circle on the red tick and start a slider from 01:36:235 to follow the vocals better (change next slider to a circle or move it forward on timeline) fix my owns
13. 01:36:962 (6,7,8) and 01:39:871 (6,7,8) - I feel there's something wrong with these, but I can't explain what exactly is wrong. Just ignore this line okay. fix. my think is same. look so bad this rhythm.
14. 01:46:416 (1) - isn't it too close to previous object? I don't feel like anti-jumping here fix
15. 01:50:053 (3,4,5) - they don't look good together. I suggest to change their shapes a bit so they fit each other: http://puu.sh/1RUdC fix
16. 02:00:780 (5) - change to two circles? hmm. Okay. I'm prefer your owns
17. 02:08:053 (5) - missed a clap fix

empty space

1. 02:18:416 (8) - use finish instead of a clap fix
2. 02:30:053 (1) - ^ (because finish fits more) fix
3. 02:35:144 (7) - I would change it to two notes to follow vocals better Nope. I think this look better.
4. 02:37:325 (5,6) - same as with 01:21:689 (5,6) ("it's too boring after 02:35:871 (1,2,3,4), change for more active play?") fix
5. 02:53:325 (1,2,3) - they overlap each other a little on their ends, try fixing it fix
6. 02:58:416 (1,2,3,4) - eww, too many linear sliders in a row, and they don't really fit each other. I don't really know what to suggest, so I'm just pointing this out fix
7. 03:07:144 (1,2) - remove finish hitsound to avoid spamming it I think, turn down volume is right a way. OK. I consider that.
8. 03:08:780 (1) - sounds too loud for this part of music fix
9. 03:19:507 (1) - add a finish? fix and add finish each other big white ticks
10. 03:20:416 (4) - looks broken lol, better make it less curvy (same for 03:23:325 (4) and 03:21:871 (4) fix
11. 03:26:780 (6) - new combo should be here fix
12. 03:31:144 (1,5) - how about adding a finish to beginning Nope. I feels like that empty sound.
13. 03:33:325 - add a note to follow the vocals link plz.? I don't think about how to place that.
14. 03:36:962 (1) - forgot finish lol. yes
15. 03:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the whole pattern looks bad because of overlaps and/or inaccurate stacks. Don't force symmetry, map something cool instead (curvy sliders are preferrable) fix
16. If you follow the suggestion above, I hope you'll move 03:42:053 (9) somewhere else, because the combo after it goes this way and it might be a bit uncomfortable to play fix
17. 03:45:689 (1,2) - please fix them, so they fit the circle between them: http://puu.sh/1RWot

fix

That's it. I could continue with my mod if I wasn't yawning all the time; probably I'm too sleepy to mod in a proper manner, so I think I'll better stop.

Sorry that I didn't check your Hard and Insane diffs. If you still want to get them modded by me, remind me later and I'll finish my mod. Almost there, only Insane is left unmodded. Sorry that it takes this long, I had some troubles with my notebook getting overheated.

Thanks your best quality mod. take it easy man

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Hi!

Timing: All its okay.

Blue color: Suggestions or coments.
Red color: High recommend.

Insane

00:38:963 (1,2,3) - remove NC I appeal jump as new combo. I steady this.
00:41:053 (1) - this spinner is a bit close to a circle and it sounds much better if you move 00:41:144 (1) - at 00:42:416 - Looks good. if i modded MAT/BAT, I change that.
00:54:599 (3) - more distance, i suggest cuz is too near to (1) I'd like it if the slider symmetrical fix
02:12:053 (3) - Sounds better with a clap. More strange..
02:26:052 (7) - What do you think if you move this slider to x:60 y:228, this connect with 02:26:598 (8) - http://puu.sh/1S0xS Move x:8, y:252
02:34:235 (7) - -A- decrease a little the distance, i recommend x:92 y:224 I don't think move here.

Hard

00:08:235 (2) - this circle haven't got the same distance than 00:08:416 (3,4) - move one grip http://puu.sh/1S0LP fix
01:23:144 (1) - The circle sounds weird, is not necessary here, can you delete it? Nope.
Hard diff its ok Thank you

TicClick wrote:

Insane

1. 00:01:145 (1,2,3) - it's kinda uncomfortable to get 300 on these, because they appear too sudden I don't know what do you mean.
2. 00:04:235 (4) - how about adding a little curve? It will look nice together with notes fix
3. 00:05:598 - add a note to make triplet? fix
4. 00:07:145 (5,6,7,8,1) - this slider doesn't really follow a curve you created with this tiny stream fix
5. 00:13:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tooooo booooooring. This is Insane after all, I wouldn't like running around in circles changed new pattern
6. 00:22:053 (1,2) - move them up a bit and keep the spacing, because I don't like the way I have to move my hand after following the previous notes fix
7. 00:23:508 (5) - please bend it to the other side for a better play experience fix linear slider
8. 00:24:963 (1,2) - I would make them look the same, because now they have a bit different curve fix
9. 00:32:235 - please start the slider from this big white tick to follow the vocals better I think, drum & guitar sound much better.
10. 00:33:690 (1,2,3) - this is really uncomfortable to play. At first you move your hand to the left, but then you suddently break your smooth movement and go in the opposite direction.

fix my owns.
Please, try to avoid such patterns where you have to change direction of your movement so roughly. In future, I'll just say that such moments don't have a "flow" (that's a common term and modders often say it). I also will give a short explanation and/or advice on how you can improve such parts. OK. this is my first map. I try to change follow

Okay, now back to the modding. yepp

1. 00:35:689 (9,10,11) - yep, here you break the flow again. To fix it, simply change the direction of the second slider, so it will go up to next notes fix
2. 00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion, there are too many finishes. Just keep the only one on the big white tick fix
3. 00:52:235 (3) - you better start this slider from the red tick on its end to follow the vocals better change new pattern
4. 00:52:780 (5,6) - I don't feel like it should be an anti-jump, better use the same spacing here ^
5. 00:55:145 (5,6) - please move these notes somewhere else, because the previous slider was placed right on them and it may not look good (especially when you come back on the same place few times in a row) fix
6. 00:56:417 (3,7) - add claps please (first one to follow the song, second to complete the hitsound pattern) fix
7. 00:56:963 (1,2,3) - it doesn't have a flow, because you have to move up after hitting a note and you only move a little on the horizontal fix
8. 00:58:235 (1,2) - if you try to make them look like their ends form a stack (http://puu.sh/1SVQ7), it will look better! Just reverse the 2nd one, then use spacing 0.07 or something like this, then reverse it back). If you agree, do the same for all the next sliders ending at the same points fix
9. 01:02:781 (1) - better use a finish instead of a clap fix
10. 01:08:054 (6,9,10) - add claps here, they sound sooo nice! fix. not added clap on 9
11. 01:22:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please, no. There's no any sound in the music that sounds like a stream, so all you do is overmapping. Player doesn't follow the music here, so this stream makes no sense. Just remove it and map something less intensive

my thinks also same. thank you
some space !?

1. 01:37:144 (7,8,9,1) - this pattern doesn't have a flow too, because at first you move counter-clockwise and then you change your direction suddently *makes a sad face* fix
2. 01:38:053 (2,3) - too little spacing, plese use something like 1.1 (just move the bottom slider down) fix
3. 01:46:417 (1,2,3) - doesn't look nice, so I'd recommend to change it somehow for a better visual experience (possible solution: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/585038) fix
4. 01:53:144 (5) - I would bend it to the other side so it plays better fix
5. 02:05:508 (2,3,4) - too many finishes, please remove them fix
6. 02:07:871 (5) - please start it from the red tick on its end to follow vocals better. Also, I would stack all the notes exactly in the center, it would be more logical stack notes are yes. but I don't need to chase vocals.
7. 02:12:598 - by adding a repeat to your slider, you skipped a very important beat which means that here begins the new part of the music. Please, remove repeat from the slider and add a note on this big white tick, so people can actually play it, not just hold a key while passing the slider fix
8. 02:14:416 (6) - please, don't stack it with the previous slider, there's absolutely no point to do so. Better move it somewhere else or remap this part using non-zero spacing. Also, decrease the jump distance between 02:14:416 (6,7) fix my owns.
9. 02:18:416 (1) - use a finish instead of a clap because it sounds better fix
10. 02:18:961 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern has no flow, because you have to move your cursor in a very chaotic way, and there's nothing smooth or logic fix
11. 02:22:234 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - there's nothing in the music that sounds like a stream, so you overmapped it again. Please, remove the stream and map something that follows the music fix
12. 02:24:599 (2,3) - kind of uncomfortable to play too, because the note is placed not where the slider leads you to fix
13. 02:29:961 (10) - add a clap? I don't knowww lol. no fix
14. 02:30:234 (2,3,4,5) - sort of uncomfortable to play too, but I'll leave that on your decision Move different way.
15. 02:33:326 (2,3,4) - this pattern doesn't have a flow at all, because you have to jump back and then move in a direction that is opposite to jump direction. Please, remap it T.T fix
16. 02:35:144 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you overmapped the music again, please follow it instead of putting a stream that makes no sense fix
17. 02:38:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - exactly the same fix
18. 02:35:871 (1) - add a finish to the beginning

fix

Sorry that I didn't mod the whole diff, but it's tiring to point out so many mistakes, so I lasted only for 2/3. Good luck, you need more mods!

P.S. If you have any questions about my mod, ask them. Also, don't forget to fix the things I pointed out in General section in my previous post.

1. 03:13:689 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

K i A i wrote:

강조해야할 부분은 나름의 방법으로(?) 강조했습니다

[하드] 맵이 맘에 안 들어서 1.1로 리매핑했어요.
+ 하드라고 해도 디스턴스 변화는 아주 가끔씩 주는게 좋습니다~

232871 - 232962로 옮겨주세요~ / 볼륨을 5%로 해보는건 어떤가요?
00:02:598 (2) - 끝 부분에 소프트 피니시~
00:03:689 (4) - 시작 부분에 소프트 피니시~ + 꺾이는 부분이 좀 더 중간쪽으로 가게 해 보시는건 어떤가요?
(이런 식으로 꺾이는 부분은 의도하는 부분이 아니라면 슬라이더의 중간 부분을 기준으로 꺾이게, 그리고 너무 경사지지 않고 좀 더 완만하게 꺾이는게 보기 좋습니다)
00:06:598 (4) - ^
00:05:507 (2) - 끝 부분에 소프트 피니시~
00:06:598 (4) - 시작 부분에 소프트 피니시~
00:07:507 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시~
00:17:507 (6) - ^
00:26:235 (5) - 이 슬라이더도 꺾이는 부분에 대해선 위와 동일합니다
00:29:689 (1) - NC 제거
00:30:780 (3) - NC
00:48:053 (2) - 시작 부분에 피니시~
01:11:507 (1) - ^
01:10:962 (6) - 디스턴스 늘려주세요~
01:15:325 (4) - 끝 부분에 소프트 피니시~
01:17:325 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시~
01:22:053 (6,7) - 노트 분위기를 탈 때, 스핀 바로 이전의 노트이므로 점프를 똑같이 적용해주는게 더 좋아보여요~
01:41:871 (4) - 이 슬라이더도 꺾이는 부분에 대해선 위와 동일합니다
01:55:507 (2) - 피니시 대신 클랩~
01:56:234 (4) - ^
03:32:962 (6) - 한 번 리버스 하게 해주세요~
03:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 나쁜건 아닌데 노트가 좀 몰려있어보이는군요..

[인센]
232961 - 타이밍 포인트 이거만 볼륨 5%로 조정해보시는건 어떤가요
-----
00:01:145 (1,2) - 휘슬! okay
00:02:963 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시 okay
00:05:872 (1) - ^ okay
00:07:508 (1) - 시작 부분에 소프트 피니시 okay
00:09:508 (6) - 시작 부분에 피니시 Nope
00:10:416 (1,3) - ,00:10:963 (1,3) - ,00:11:507 (1,3) - ,00:12:054 (1,3) - 서로의 위치를 바꿔보시는건 어떤가요? 그럴까도 생각해봤는데 노트가 내려가는 느낌을 받았어요. 이건 그냥 이대로 갈께요
00:19:872 (3) - 끝 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:20:963 (6) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:21:690 (8) - 휘슬 Nope
00:22:417 (2) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:22:781 (3) - 끝 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:23:872 (6) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:24:599 (8) - 휘슬 Nope
00:28:599 (3) - ^ Nope
00:29:053 (7,8) - 1스냅 뒤로 이동해주세요 무슨 말인지 모르겠어요..
+ 00:29:326 (1) - 와 겹치게 해주세요 이거두.
+ 00:29:326 (1) - 뉴콤보를 없애주세요 Nope
+ 00:29:053 (7) - 뉴콤보 추가! Nope
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - 안티점프, 그리고 갑자기 디스턴스가 변하기 때문에 각 노트마다 뉴콤보를 적용해주는게 좋을 것 같아요 00:40:962 (5) 이거에만 적용했어요.
00:48:599 (3,4,5) - 조금 더 모양을 평평하게 해보시는건 어떤가요? okay
01:14:416 (1) - 피니시!! Nope
01:15:690 (7) - 소프트 피니시!! Nope
01:17:325 (1) - 피니시!! Nope
01:18:599 (5) - 소프트 피니시!! Nope
01:35:508 (3) - 끝 부분에 휘슬 okay
01:38:417 (3) - ^ okay
01:39:507 (6) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
02:54:599 (4) - 시작 부분에 피니시 Nope
03:32:962 (2) - 한 번 리버스 되게 해주세요~ 가운데에 서클 하나 찍었어요.
03:36:962 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시 추가~ okay

indyinyou wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:962 : add fin
00:03:690 : ^
00:05:871 : ^
00:06:598 : ^
00:12:598 : whistle
00:07:507 : fin
00:17:507 : ^
00:18:236 : ^
00:31:507 : whistle
00:32:416 : ^
00:33:690 : ^
00:34:416 : ^
00:35:326 : ^
00:36:601 : ^
00:37:326 : ^
00:39:871 : clap volum 45 - 50 %
00:40:598 : ^
00:45:144 : whistle
00:45:325 : ^
00:46:780 : fin
00:47:325 : ^
00:48:053 : remove clap add whistle + fin
00:48:144 : remove note ?
00:48:235 : ^
00:48:416 : if you remove note at 00:48:144 / NC here and add whistle
00:49:871 : remove fin add whistle
00:48:962 : whistle
00:49:144 : ^
00:50:598 : ^
00:51:144 : remove clap add fin
00:51:507 : clap
00:51:689 : remove clap add fin
00:52:053 : whistle
00:52:235 : clap
00:52:416 : fin
00:52:780 : whistle
00:52:962 : clap
00:53:325 : whistle
00:53:507 : ^
00:57:689 : ^
00:57:871 : ^
00:58:235 : ^
00:58:598 : ^
00:59:144 : ^
00:59:325 : ^
00:59:871 : ^
01:00:780 : ^
01:01:507 : ^
01:02:053 : ^
01:02:235 : ^
01:03:689 : ^
01:04:053 : ^
01:04:416 : ^
01:05:144 : ^
01:05:689 : ^
01:06:417 : ^
01:06:598 : ^
01:07:325 : ^
01:09:325 : ^
01:09:507 : ^
01:09:872 : ^
01:10:235 : ^
01:10:780 : ^
01:10:962 : ^
01:12:053 : fin
01:12:780 : ^
01:13:507 : ^
01:15:144 : whistle
01:15:325 : ^
01:15:690 : ^
01:16:054 : ^
01:16:598 : ^
01:16:780 : ^
01:17:325 : fin and whistle
01:18:053 : whistle
01:18:235 : ^
01:18:599 : fin and whistle
01:19:507 : whistle
01:47:144 : ^
01:48:053 : ^
01:48:416 : remove whistle
01:48:598 : whistle
01:49:325 : ^
01:50:053 : ^
01:50:962 : ^
01:52:962 : ^
01:55:871 : ^
01:56:053 : ^
02:00:780 : ^
02:00:962 : ^
02:02:416 : fin
02:02:962 : ^
02:04:598 : whistle
02:04:780 : ^
02:06:235 : ^
02:06:780 : remove clap add fin
02:07:144 : clap
02:07:325 : remove clap add fin
02:08:053 : fin
02:08:416 : remove clap
02:08:598 : clap
02:08:962 : fin

they're just suggestions

if you like my hitsound mod plz tell me i ll back a full mod

Sorry. I don't need to all fix my hitsound. I fixed a few by your mod btw thank you ~