HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue /o/

SPOILER

General
태그에 Bobong 추가 해주세요
그리고 쵸우쵸가 부른게 맞으면 소스에 Nico Nico douga 넣으심이?

AIBat
다른난이도는 전부 오프셋이 235인데 노말만 225네요 수정해주세요
또 노말만 프리뷰 타임 다른데 이것도 수정해주세요
또 노트 색깔도 노말하고 이지가 다른데 수정 어떠신가요? ( 이건 가이드 라인이니 굳이 수정 안하셔도 되요 )

Hard & Insane
00:17:315 - snap to 00:17:325
00:19:134 - snap to 00:19:144
00:29:315 - snap to 00:29:325
00:42:770 - snap to 00:42:780
00:47:680 - snap to 00:47:689
00:56:952 - snap to 00:56:962
01:23:134 - snap to 01:23:144
01:34:770 - snap to 01:34:780
01:44:225 - snap to 01:44:235
01:54:770 - snap to 01:54:780
01:58:406 - snap to 01:58:416
02:03:316 - snap to 02:03:325
02:12:589 - snap to 02:12:598
02:38:770 - snap to 02:38:780
02:50:770 - snap to 02:50:780
03:02:043 - snap to 03:02:053
03:07:134 - snap to 03:07:144
03:10:043 - snap to 03:10:053
03:10:406 - snap to 03:10:416
03:13:680 - snap to 03:13:689
03:34:043 - snap to 03:34:053
03:52:861 - snap to 03:52:871

Hard
00:39:145 (7) - 끝에 클랩 삭제
00:53:326 (1) - 스피너 00:55:325 - 여기서 끝내시면 리듬에 좀더 맞는거 같아요
01:18:599 (4) - HP바에 닿네요 조금 내리심이
01:20:598 (1,1,1) - 여긴 뉴콤보 지우시는게 나을거 같아요
02:18:417 (8) - 노트 보다는 02:18:054 (7) - 이걸 반복을 한번 더 넣으시는게?
03:13:690 (1) - 앞에피니시

굿 디프

Insane
00:22:417 (2) - 개인적인 생각인데 00:22:054 (1) - 이거하고 모양 비슷하게 만드시면 좋을거 같아요
00:44:236 (3) - 클랩
00:56:872 (8) - 0.8x 디스탠스 스냅 써주세요
00:56:963 (1) - ^
00:58:781 (2) - 이거를 00:58:236 (1) - 이거하고 안겹치게 하시면 더 좋을거 같아요
01:01:689 (2) - ^
01:08:598 (1) - 슬라이더 앞에 피니시
01:16:599 (3) - 딱히 점프를 이렇게 크게 넣을 필욘 없다고 봐요 ( 보컬도 그렇고 다른 리듬에도 별로 안어울리네요 )조금 줄이시는게?
01:59:871 (3) - 클랩
02:24:235 (1) - 슬라이더 앞에 피니시
03:02:053 (1) - 클랩 빼는게 좀더 어울리네요
03:10:780 (1) - 슬라이더 앞에 피니시
03:13:689 (1) - ^
03:20:599 (4,5,6,7,1) - 03:19:144 (4) - 여기 처럼 힛사 넣어주세요
03:22:053 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
03:25:326 (1) - 피니시
03:30:417 (8) - 뉴콤보
03:46:053 (4,5) - 이것도 디스탠스가 너무 넓은거 같아요

하 그래도 생각보다 맵셋이 괜찮네요 꼭 랭크 시키시길!

Edit : 프리뷰타임이 같아야하는건 가이드 라인이 아니라 룰입니다 난이도 별로 프리뷰 타임은 무조건 같아야해요
또한 오프셋이같아야하는것도 룰이구요.

Tsusuko wrote:

hi mod request from queue

General

Good

Hard

Only thing I have to say is;
03:34:053 ~ 03:34:144 (1,1) If you were going to have a spinner right after, why didn't you just put the spinner at 03:34:053 anyway?

Insane

Good

The mapset...could be better.Good luck, anyway.

1. 00:15:872 (10) - 3/4 slider or add a note inside
2. 00:18:871 - add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570030
3. 00:58:780 (2) - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570032 this way it looks better
4. 01:01:689 (2) - ^
5. 01:16:963 (5,6) - stream plz!
6. 01:54:599 (1) - new combo here; remove the next one
7. 02:05:235 - add note, or start the jump at (3), the spacing is too small here
8. 03:42:780 (1,3) - use ctrl+g; better flow
9. 03:45:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - large spacing

1. 03:24:780 (4) - move the end 4grids down

1. 00:24:961 (1) - rhythm: O===O_O___O___O=O (_: space, O=O: slider)
2. 00:43:870 (4) - O===O___O=R=O
3. 00:49:689 (5) - O=O_O=O___O===O
4. 01:02:779 (1) - O=======O___O___O=======O
5. 03:19:507 (1) - ^
6. 01:08:961 (1) - O_O===O___O=O___O
7. 02:24:597 (1) - ^
8. 03:04:962 (1) - put the reverse arrow on the left, don't block the note

1. 00:45:689 (1) - wrong spacing

1. 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - すべてfinishだと音が大きく曲にも合わないと思いますので、(2)と(3)のfinishを削除しましょう。(all finish sound is very loud. remove (2) and (3) finish.)
   　
2. 00:56:235 (1) - add whistle?
   　
3. 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) - clap 5連は曲に合っていません。ボリュームを下げるか、(6)以外を削除した方が良いと思いました。(not match 5 claps. down volume or remove (7),(8),(9) and (1) clap.)
   　
4. 02:05:326 (1,2,3,4) - 上記の00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です。 (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -)
   　
5. 02:08:780 (8) - 前のパターンからすると x:272 y:200に配置するのがベターです。 (In the case of your pattern, move to x:272 y:200 is better.)
   　
6. 02:18:052 (8,9,10,11,1) - 上記の02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -と同じ理由です。 (same reason above 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -)

1. 00:28:962 (3) - 音取りの提案です (suggestion)
   　
   　　　00:28:962 - add circle
   　　　00:29:144 - add 1/2 slider
   　　　こっちのほうがbackの音をしっかり取れてると思います。 (i think that good rhythm well.)
   
   　
2. 00:39:871 (1,2,3) - remove finish
   　
3. 00:39:871 (1,3) - add clap
   　
4. 00:49:689 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
5. 01:55:507 (2,3,4) - 上記の00:39:871 (1,2,3) -と同じ理由です (same reason above 00:39:871 (1,2,3) -)
   　
6. 02:05:325 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
7. 03:24:780 (4) - もう少しカーブを緩やかにするとさらに綺麗に見えます。 (I think it to become more beautiful when you make a curve slow a little more.)
   　
   SPOILER

   
   　
8. 03:26:780 (6) - remove finish

1. An Artist name is different from other diff.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hello///

first: it's the wrong way to cut the BG; don't make the girls in the wrong size, cut the borders instead Hmm. it looks good. OK i will fix


Insane

1. 00:15:872 (10) - 3/4 slider or add a note inside Fix my own way.
2. 00:18:871 - add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570030 I think, 1 -> 3 better than stream
3. 00:58:780 (2) - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570032 this way it looks better cool!
4. 01:01:689 (2) - ^ of course
5. 01:16:963 (5,6) - stream plz! copy that !
6. 01:54:599 (1) - new combo here; remove the next one I'm fixed this way. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/570525
7. 02:05:235 - add note, or start the jump at (3), the spacing is too small here ok. it looks more better
8. 03:42:780 (1,3) - use ctrl+g; better flow nice!
9. 03:45:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - large spacing I think, this is finish. therefore, I will steady this

Hard

1. 03:24:780 (4) - move the end 4grids down OK

...who is you I'm observing passerby by the way, Thank you !

Guy wrote:

hi~ request from PM

[Insane]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - すべてfinishだと音が大きく曲にも合わないと思いますので、(2)と(3)のfinishを削除しましょう。(all finish sound is very loud. remove (2) and (3) finish.) えと, こんな方法はどうでしょう. 音お46%にしました.
   　
2. 00:56:235 (1) - add whistle? むしろ変に見えます.
   　
3. 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) - clap 5連は曲に合っていません。ボリュームを下げるか、(6)以外を削除した方が良いと思いました。(not match 5 claps. down volume or remove (7),(8),(9) and (1) clap.) ボリュームを下がります.
   　
4. 02:05:326 (1,2,3,4) - 上記の00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由です。上記の00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じに変えりました.( (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -)
   　
5. 02:08:780 (8) - 前のパターンからすると x:272 y:200に配置するのがベターです。OK (In the case of your pattern, move to x:272 y:200 is better.)
   　
6. 02:18:052 (8,9,10,11,1) - 上記の02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -と同じ理由です。キアイタイムなのでそのままにした法がいいかと思います. (same reason above 02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) -)

[Hard]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:28:962 (3) - 音取りの提案です (suggestion)
   　
   　　　00:28:962 - add circle
   　　　00:29:144 - add 1/2 slider
   　　　こっちのほうがbackの音をしっかり取れてると思います。 (i think that good rhythm well.) それもいいけど, こっちがもっと御好みです
   
   　
2. 00:39:871 (1,2,3) - remove finish 音お46%にしました.
   　
3. 00:39:871 (1,3) - add clap いいえ.
   　
4. 00:49:689 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由ですOK (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
5. 01:55:507 (2,3,4) - 上記の00:39:871 (1,2,3) -と同じ理由ですOK (same reason above 00:39:871 (1,2,3) -)
   　
6. 02:05:325 (1,2) - Insaneの00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) -と同じ理由ですOK (same reason above 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - in Insane diff.)
   　
7. 03:24:780 (4) - もう少しカーブを緩やかにするとさらに綺麗に見えます。はい! (I think it to become more beautiful when you make a curve slow a little more.)
   　
   SPOILER

   
   　
8. 03:26:780 (6) - remove finish 曲のFinish部分なのでこのままにします.

sorry poor mod~ No, I'm appreciated your mod. I'm learned about something.
i wrote english sentence for if you don't understand my japanese. ご配慮に感謝します.
good luck you too ~ Thanks your cooperation!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hello///

first: it's the wrong way to cut the BG; don't make the girls in the wrong size, cut the borders instead


Normal

1. 00:24:961 (1) - rhythm: O===O_O___O___O=O (_: space, O=O: slider) fix
2. 00:43:870 (4) - O===O___O=R=O fix
3. 00:49:689 (5) - O=O_O=O___O===O no fix
4. 01:02:779 (1) - O=======O___O___O=======O fix
5. 03:19:507 (1) - ^ fix
6. 01:08:961 (1) - O_O===O___O=O___O fix
7. 02:24:597 (1) - ^ fix
8. 03:04:962 (1) - put the reverse arrow on the left, don't block the note

fix

and

...who is you

Lan wings wrote:

[Insane]
i think this clap is not good Well. my think is suitable this sound.
00:00:235 - volume 80%? I fixed 62%
00:01:872 (4) - clap Yes
00:04:781 (2) - ^ ^
00:05:326 (3) - drum clap 70% I think, this clap sound is not suitable.
00:09:508 (6) - finish 70% Not added finish sound in this music.
00:12:598 (1) - finish 80% ^
00:17:508 (6) - finish ^
00:24:871 (10) - drum whistle Add whistle
00:26:235 (4) - sliderwhistle OK. I add on slider's first.
00:27:871 - drum whistle 30% I instead add whistle on 00:27:780 (9)
00:28:599 (3,6) - finish Add on finish 00:28:599 (3,4,6,7) and volume 26% Thanks your nice idea!
00:37:872 (6) - finish 50% Same as 00:09:508 (6)
00:47:325 finish ^
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - 46%-->51%-->56%-->61% Looks like strange. I fixed 62%
00:40:962 add a cirle? finish 65% Good! I define volume 62%
00:40:962 (1) - ^start here?00:41:144 OK. I think 00:41:053 is more better.
00:45:145 (5) - whistle Not added whistle sound in this music.
00:46:781 (3) - finish Same as 00:09:508 (6)
00:48:235 (1) - change slider? Nope. if I change slider, symmetry is broken
00:49:689 (1,2) - 50% Negative. That is strange.
00:50:053 (3) - 55% ^
00:50:235 (4) - 60% ^
00:52:416 finish 60% OK!
00:53:326 (7) - finish 50% Same as 00:09:508 (6)
00:56:231 (1,3) - whistle Negative. That is strange.
01:00:236 (2,3) - blanket Move to x:72, y:204
00:58:236 (1,2) - slider end stack? Yepp. Thanks
01:01:144 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:02:235 (4) - x:272 y:244 Fix my own ways.
01:02:417 (4,5,6,7,1) - x:404 y:152 ^
01:02:963 (2) - x:256 y:84 ^

SPOILER

02:05:326 (1,2,3,4) - same 00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:053 finish 60 Same as 00:09:508 (6)
03:00:962 (10) - del sliderfinish and slider clap OK
03:07:144 (1,2) - del finish Negative.
03:10:053 (1) - 72% ^ because, this is highlight part before kiai time.

Wow.. so long. Thanks your labors.

MerryGate wrote:

from #modreqs

I dont know what langarge should I use...so I use English.

[General]
->Many of the settings are inconsistent in normal.
Combo Color,Preview Time,Letter Box,Tags
->Japanese tags are allowed.(http://osu.ppy.sh/s/56994)
Feel free to add Japanese Tags.
->1974AudioLeadIn is a little long. change to 1500.

All fix!

[Hard]
Hmm...Generally,AR7 is better in Hard diff.well,AR8 is allowed. fix
Overall volume is high.As with Insane diff. fix
02:55:144 (6) - please unstack fix

[Insane]
00:38:053 - 00:38:794 - I feel a little unnatural. 00:37:872 (6) - and 00:38:598 (3) - change to slider?(follow vocal) No. I followed Guitar slider & clap drum. suddenly slider appeal is not good
00:47:872 (6,7,8,9,1) - 00:49:689 (1,2,3,4) - clap and finish are noisy.Decrease the volume(about 60%?) fix
00:57:689 (3) - Along the 2's approach circle.move to 228:60.(Well,this is fine detail,but if possible,you also fix some other) fix
01:15:145 (3,4,5) - 01:16:599 (3,4,5) - Why different specing? There is no difference in the melody. fix
01:48:235 (8,9,10) - placement suggestion fix

SPOILER

01:53:508 (6) - 01:54:236 (3) - same above fix
02:21:507 (2) - If possible,avoid overlap. fix
02:26:598 (8) - ^ fix
03:19:508 (1) - add finish fix
03:20:235 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:20:599 (4) - add clap No fix
03:20:962 (1) - add finish? fix
03:21:689 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:22:053 (4) - add clap No fix
03:22:416 (1) - add finish? fix
03:23:143 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:23:508 (4) - add clap No fix
03:23:871 (1) - add finish fix
03:24:599 (3) - remove clap No fix
03:24:962 (4) - add clap to start No fix
03:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm...to my mind,kinda bad flow. fix

example1

example2

blue->pink->green
03:42:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1->7->3->5? OK

I think good beatmap.
After receiving a few more mod, it may be ranked.(You need to ask the MAT in the queue,or PM,etc...) Thanks your high quality modding!

good luck.

1. Please, fix your background, it looks really shrunk (lol). Seems that you just resized it to fit 1024:768 criteria. Well, you can use something like 1366:768 since widescreens are supported now or go with 1024:768, but please don't resize, crop image instead to save ratio! If you lost the original, here's the link: http://cdn1.gelbooru.com//images/1489/9b7c0a67584d34748cdee2717e375208.jpg
2. You don't need ちょうちょ in tags since you already have it in ArtistUnicode field, also remove ChouCho from there because it's already in Artist Field

TicClick wrote:

mod requested via pm

[General]

1. Please, fix your background, it looks really shrunk (lol). Seems that you just resized it to fit 1024:768 criteria. Well, you can use something like 1366:768 since widescreens are supported now or go with 1024:768, but please don't resize, crop image instead to save ratio! If you lost the original, here's the link: http://cdn1.gelbooru.com//images/1489/9b7c0a67584d34748cdee2717e375208.jpg
2. You don't need ちょうちょ in tags since you already have it in ArtistUnicode field

All fix

Hard

1. 00:13:325 (1) - add finish fix
2. 00:17:325 (5) - I would remove it and start a slider from 00:17:507, also remove 00:17:871 (6) too, add a slider there and connect them with a note to follow the music better: http://puu.sh/1RTjb fix
3. 00:20:598 - I would start slider here (to follow the vocals) fix
4. 00:21:325 (6,7,1) - I really don't like how they look together, so change them? http://puu.sh/1RTxH fix my owns
5. 00:35:871 (1,2,3,4) - I'm afraid this square has too big and sudden spacing change, so I think you should make it smaller (1.2 instead of 1.5, for example) My thinks also same. Thank you.
6. 00:38:598 (6) - move it down, so note will be "inside" of it? http://puu.sh/1RTzw fix
7. 00:39:144 (7) - I would make it curvy, because the previous slider was curvy and I think it'll look better fix
8. 01:02:780 (1) - use a finish here, not a clap fix
9. 01:09:871 (4) - uh.. make a beat blanket or something? http://puu.sh/1RTMZ fix
10. 01:12:962 - add a circle? Though I'm not sure this looks empty sound. no fix
11. 01:21:689 (5,6) - it's too boring after 01:20:235 (1,2,3,4), change for more active play? http://puu.sh/1RTPg (please note that I added circle up there) fix
12. 01:36:053 (4) - I would remove it, then add a circle on the red tick and start a slider from 01:36:235 to follow the vocals better (change next slider to a circle or move it forward on timeline) fix my owns
13. 01:36:962 (6,7,8) and 01:39:871 (6,7,8) - I feel there's something wrong with these, but I can't explain what exactly is wrong. Just ignore this line okay. fix. my think is same. look so bad this rhythm.
14. 01:46:416 (1) - isn't it too close to previous object? I don't feel like anti-jumping here fix
15. 01:50:053 (3,4,5) - they don't look good together. I suggest to change their shapes a bit so they fit each other: http://puu.sh/1RUdC fix
16. 02:00:780 (5) - change to two circles? hmm. Okay. I'm prefer your owns
17. 02:08:053 (5) - missed a clap fix

empty space

1. 02:18:416 (8) - use finish instead of a clap fix
2. 02:30:053 (1) - ^ (because finish fits more) fix
3. 02:35:144 (7) - I would change it to two notes to follow vocals better Nope. I think this look better.
4. 02:37:325 (5,6) - same as with 01:21:689 (5,6) ("it's too boring after 02:35:871 (1,2,3,4), change for more active play?") fix
5. 02:53:325 (1,2,3) - they overlap each other a little on their ends, try fixing it fix
6. 02:58:416 (1,2,3,4) - eww, too many linear sliders in a row, and they don't really fit each other. I don't really know what to suggest, so I'm just pointing this out fix
7. 03:07:144 (1,2) - remove finish hitsound to avoid spamming it I think, turn down volume is right a way. OK. I consider that.
8. 03:08:780 (1) - sounds too loud for this part of music fix
9. 03:19:507 (1) - add a finish? fix and add finish each other big white ticks
10. 03:20:416 (4) - looks broken lol, better make it less curvy (same for 03:23:325 (4) and 03:21:871 (4) fix
11. 03:26:780 (6) - new combo should be here fix
12. 03:31:144 (1,5) - how about adding a finish to beginning Nope. I feels like that empty sound.
13. 03:33:325 - add a note to follow the vocals link plz.? I don't think about how to place that.
14. 03:36:962 (1) - forgot finish lol. yes
15. 03:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the whole pattern looks bad because of overlaps and/or inaccurate stacks. Don't force symmetry, map something cool instead (curvy sliders are preferrable) fix
16. If you follow the suggestion above, I hope you'll move 03:42:053 (9) somewhere else, because the combo after it goes this way and it might be a bit uncomfortable to play fix
17. 03:45:689 (1,2) - please fix them, so they fit the circle between them: http://puu.sh/1RWot

fix

That's it. I could continue with my mod if I wasn't yawning all the time; probably I'm too sleepy to mod in a proper manner, so I think I'll better stop.

Sorry that I didn't check your Hard and Insane diffs. If you still want to get them modded by me, remind me later and I'll finish my mod. Almost there, only Insane is left unmodded. Sorry that it takes this long, I had some troubles with my notebook getting overheated.

Thanks your best quality mod. take it easy man

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Hi!

Timing: All its okay.

Blue color: Suggestions or coments.
Red color: High recommend.

Insane

00:38:963 (1,2,3) - remove NC I appeal jump as new combo. I steady this.
00:41:053 (1) - this spinner is a bit close to a circle and it sounds much better if you move 00:41:144 (1) - at 00:42:416 - Looks good. if i modded MAT/BAT, I change that.
00:54:599 (3) - more distance, i suggest cuz is too near to (1) I'd like it if the slider symmetrical fix
02:12:053 (3) - Sounds better with a clap. More strange..
02:26:052 (7) - What do you think if you move this slider to x:60 y:228, this connect with 02:26:598 (8) - http://puu.sh/1S0xS Move x:8, y:252
02:34:235 (7) - -A- decrease a little the distance, i recommend x:92 y:224 I don't think move here.

Hard

00:08:235 (2) - this circle haven't got the same distance than 00:08:416 (3,4) - move one grip http://puu.sh/1S0LP fix
01:23:144 (1) - The circle sounds weird, is not necessary here, can you delete it? Nope.
Hard diff its ok Thank you

TicClick wrote:

Insane

1. 00:01:145 (1,2,3) - it's kinda uncomfortable to get 300 on these, because they appear too sudden I don't know what do you mean.
2. 00:04:235 (4) - how about adding a little curve? It will look nice together with notes fix
3. 00:05:598 - add a note to make triplet? fix
4. 00:07:145 (5,6,7,8,1) - this slider doesn't really follow a curve you created with this tiny stream fix
5. 00:13:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tooooo booooooring. This is Insane after all, I wouldn't like running around in circles changed new pattern
6. 00:22:053 (1,2) - move them up a bit and keep the spacing, because I don't like the way I have to move my hand after following the previous notes fix
7. 00:23:508 (5) - please bend it to the other side for a better play experience fix linear slider
8. 00:24:963 (1,2) - I would make them look the same, because now they have a bit different curve fix
9. 00:32:235 - please start the slider from this big white tick to follow the vocals better I think, drum & guitar sound much better.
10. 00:33:690 (1,2,3) - this is really uncomfortable to play. At first you move your hand to the left, but then you suddently break your smooth movement and go in the opposite direction.

fix my owns.
Please, try to avoid such patterns where you have to change direction of your movement so roughly. In future, I'll just say that such moments don't have a "flow" (that's a common term and modders often say it). I also will give a short explanation and/or advice on how you can improve such parts. OK. this is my first map. I try to change follow

Okay, now back to the modding. yepp

1. 00:35:689 (9,10,11) - yep, here you break the flow again. To fix it, simply change the direction of the second slider, so it will go up to next notes fix
2. 00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion, there are too many finishes. Just keep the only one on the big white tick fix
3. 00:52:235 (3) - you better start this slider from the red tick on its end to follow the vocals better change new pattern
4. 00:52:780 (5,6) - I don't feel like it should be an anti-jump, better use the same spacing here ^
5. 00:55:145 (5,6) - please move these notes somewhere else, because the previous slider was placed right on them and it may not look good (especially when you come back on the same place few times in a row) fix
6. 00:56:417 (3,7) - add claps please (first one to follow the song, second to complete the hitsound pattern) fix
7. 00:56:963 (1,2,3) - it doesn't have a flow, because you have to move up after hitting a note and you only move a little on the horizontal fix
8. 00:58:235 (1,2) - if you try to make them look like their ends form a stack (http://puu.sh/1SVQ7), it will look better! Just reverse the 2nd one, then use spacing 0.07 or something like this, then reverse it back). If you agree, do the same for all the next sliders ending at the same points fix
9. 01:02:781 (1) - better use a finish instead of a clap fix
10. 01:08:054 (6,9,10) - add claps here, they sound sooo nice! fix. not added clap on 9
11. 01:22:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please, no. There's no any sound in the music that sounds like a stream, so all you do is overmapping. Player doesn't follow the music here, so this stream makes no sense. Just remove it and map something less intensive

my thinks also same. thank you
some space !?

1. 01:37:144 (7,8,9,1) - this pattern doesn't have a flow too, because at first you move counter-clockwise and then you change your direction suddently *makes a sad face* fix
2. 01:38:053 (2,3) - too little spacing, plese use something like 1.1 (just move the bottom slider down) fix
3. 01:46:417 (1,2,3) - doesn't look nice, so I'd recommend to change it somehow for a better visual experience (possible solution: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/585038) fix
4. 01:53:144 (5) - I would bend it to the other side so it plays better fix
5. 02:05:508 (2,3,4) - too many finishes, please remove them fix
6. 02:07:871 (5) - please start it from the red tick on its end to follow vocals better. Also, I would stack all the notes exactly in the center, it would be more logical stack notes are yes. but I don't need to chase vocals.
7. 02:12:598 - by adding a repeat to your slider, you skipped a very important beat which means that here begins the new part of the music. Please, remove repeat from the slider and add a note on this big white tick, so people can actually play it, not just hold a key while passing the slider fix
8. 02:14:416 (6) - please, don't stack it with the previous slider, there's absolutely no point to do so. Better move it somewhere else or remap this part using non-zero spacing. Also, decrease the jump distance between 02:14:416 (6,7) fix my owns.
9. 02:18:416 (1) - use a finish instead of a clap because it sounds better fix
10. 02:18:961 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern has no flow, because you have to move your cursor in a very chaotic way, and there's nothing smooth or logic fix
11. 02:22:234 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - there's nothing in the music that sounds like a stream, so you overmapped it again. Please, remove the stream and map something that follows the music fix
12. 02:24:599 (2,3) - kind of uncomfortable to play too, because the note is placed not where the slider leads you to fix
13. 02:29:961 (10) - add a clap? I don't knowww lol. no fix
14. 02:30:234 (2,3,4,5) - sort of uncomfortable to play too, but I'll leave that on your decision Move different way.
15. 02:33:326 (2,3,4) - this pattern doesn't have a flow at all, because you have to jump back and then move in a direction that is opposite to jump direction. Please, remap it T.T fix
16. 02:35:144 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you overmapped the music again, please follow it instead of putting a stream that makes no sense fix
17. 02:38:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - exactly the same fix
18. 02:35:871 (1) - add a finish to the beginning

fix

Sorry that I didn't mod the whole diff, but it's tiring to point out so many mistakes, so I lasted only for 2/3. Good luck, you need more mods!

P.S. If you have any questions about my mod, ask them. Also, don't forget to fix the things I pointed out in General section in my previous post.

1. 03:13:689 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

K i A i wrote:

강조해야할 부분은 나름의 방법으로(?) 강조했습니다

[하드] 맵이 맘에 안 들어서 1.1로 리매핑했어요.
+ 하드라고 해도 디스턴스 변화는 아주 가끔씩 주는게 좋습니다~

232871 - 232962로 옮겨주세요~ / 볼륨을 5%로 해보는건 어떤가요?
00:02:598 (2) - 끝 부분에 소프트 피니시~
00:03:689 (4) - 시작 부분에 소프트 피니시~ + 꺾이는 부분이 좀 더 중간쪽으로 가게 해 보시는건 어떤가요?
(이런 식으로 꺾이는 부분은 의도하는 부분이 아니라면 슬라이더의 중간 부분을 기준으로 꺾이게, 그리고 너무 경사지지 않고 좀 더 완만하게 꺾이는게 보기 좋습니다)
00:06:598 (4) - ^
00:05:507 (2) - 끝 부분에 소프트 피니시~
00:06:598 (4) - 시작 부분에 소프트 피니시~
00:07:507 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시~
00:17:507 (6) - ^
00:26:235 (5) - 이 슬라이더도 꺾이는 부분에 대해선 위와 동일합니다
00:29:689 (1) - NC 제거
00:30:780 (3) - NC
00:48:053 (2) - 시작 부분에 피니시~
01:11:507 (1) - ^
01:10:962 (6) - 디스턴스 늘려주세요~
01:15:325 (4) - 끝 부분에 소프트 피니시~
01:17:325 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시~
01:22:053 (6,7) - 노트 분위기를 탈 때, 스핀 바로 이전의 노트이므로 점프를 똑같이 적용해주는게 더 좋아보여요~
01:41:871 (4) - 이 슬라이더도 꺾이는 부분에 대해선 위와 동일합니다
01:55:507 (2) - 피니시 대신 클랩~
01:56:234 (4) - ^
03:32:962 (6) - 한 번 리버스 하게 해주세요~
03:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 나쁜건 아닌데 노트가 좀 몰려있어보이는군요..

[인센]
232961 - 타이밍 포인트 이거만 볼륨 5%로 조정해보시는건 어떤가요
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00:01:145 (1,2) - 휘슬! okay
00:02:963 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시 okay
00:05:872 (1) - ^ okay
00:07:508 (1) - 시작 부분에 소프트 피니시 okay
00:09:508 (6) - 시작 부분에 피니시 Nope
00:10:416 (1,3) - ,00:10:963 (1,3) - ,00:11:507 (1,3) - ,00:12:054 (1,3) - 서로의 위치를 바꿔보시는건 어떤가요? 그럴까도 생각해봤는데 노트가 내려가는 느낌을 받았어요. 이건 그냥 이대로 갈께요
00:19:872 (3) - 끝 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:20:963 (6) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:21:690 (8) - 휘슬 Nope
00:22:417 (2) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:22:781 (3) - 끝 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:23:872 (6) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
00:24:599 (8) - 휘슬 Nope
00:28:599 (3) - ^ Nope
00:29:053 (7,8) - 1스냅 뒤로 이동해주세요 무슨 말인지 모르겠어요..
+ 00:29:326 (1) - 와 겹치게 해주세요 이거두.
+ 00:29:326 (1) - 뉴콤보를 없애주세요 Nope
+ 00:29:053 (7) - 뉴콤보 추가! Nope
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - 안티점프, 그리고 갑자기 디스턴스가 변하기 때문에 각 노트마다 뉴콤보를 적용해주는게 좋을 것 같아요 00:40:962 (5) 이거에만 적용했어요.
00:48:599 (3,4,5) - 조금 더 모양을 평평하게 해보시는건 어떤가요? okay
01:14:416 (1) - 피니시!! Nope
01:15:690 (7) - 소프트 피니시!! Nope
01:17:325 (1) - 피니시!! Nope
01:18:599 (5) - 소프트 피니시!! Nope
01:35:508 (3) - 끝 부분에 휘슬 okay
01:38:417 (3) - ^ okay
01:39:507 (6) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 okay
02:54:599 (4) - 시작 부분에 피니시 Nope
03:32:962 (2) - 한 번 리버스 되게 해주세요~ 가운데에 서클 하나 찍었어요.
03:36:962 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시 추가~ okay

indyinyou wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:962 : add fin
00:03:690 : ^
00:05:871 : ^
00:06:598 : ^
00:12:598 : whistle
00:07:507 : fin
00:17:507 : ^
00:18:236 : ^
00:31:507 : whistle
00:32:416 : ^
00:33:690 : ^
00:34:416 : ^
00:35:326 : ^
00:36:601 : ^
00:37:326 : ^
00:39:871 : clap volum 45 - 50 %
00:40:598 : ^
00:45:144 : whistle
00:45:325 : ^
00:46:780 : fin
00:47:325 : ^
00:48:053 : remove clap add whistle + fin
00:48:144 : remove note ?
00:48:235 : ^
00:48:416 : if you remove note at 00:48:144 / NC here and add whistle
00:49:871 : remove fin add whistle
00:48:962 : whistle
00:49:144 : ^
00:50:598 : ^
00:51:144 : remove clap add fin
00:51:507 : clap
00:51:689 : remove clap add fin
00:52:053 : whistle
00:52:235 : clap
00:52:416 : fin
00:52:780 : whistle
00:52:962 : clap
00:53:325 : whistle
00:53:507 : ^
00:57:689 : ^
00:57:871 : ^
00:58:235 : ^
00:58:598 : ^
00:59:144 : ^
00:59:325 : ^
00:59:871 : ^
01:00:780 : ^
01:01:507 : ^
01:02:053 : ^
01:02:235 : ^
01:03:689 : ^
01:04:053 : ^
01:04:416 : ^
01:05:144 : ^
01:05:689 : ^
01:06:417 : ^
01:06:598 : ^
01:07:325 : ^
01:09:325 : ^
01:09:507 : ^
01:09:872 : ^
01:10:235 : ^
01:10:780 : ^
01:10:962 : ^
01:12:053 : fin
01:12:780 : ^
01:13:507 : ^
01:15:144 : whistle
01:15:325 : ^
01:15:690 : ^
01:16:054 : ^
01:16:598 : ^
01:16:780 : ^
01:17:325 : fin and whistle
01:18:053 : whistle
01:18:235 : ^
01:18:599 : fin and whistle
01:19:507 : whistle
01:47:144 : ^
01:48:053 : ^
01:48:416 : remove whistle
01:48:598 : whistle
01:49:325 : ^
01:50:053 : ^
01:50:962 : ^
01:52:962 : ^
01:55:871 : ^
01:56:053 : ^
02:00:780 : ^
02:00:962 : ^
02:02:416 : fin
02:02:962 : ^
02:04:598 : whistle
02:04:780 : ^
02:06:235 : ^
02:06:780 : remove clap add fin
02:07:144 : clap
02:07:325 : remove clap add fin
02:08:053 : fin
02:08:416 : remove clap
02:08:598 : clap
02:08:962 : fin

they're just suggestions

if you like my hitsound mod plz tell me i ll back a full mod

Sorry. I don't need to all fix my hitsound. I fixed a few by your mod btw thank you ~

Byakugan249 wrote:

you requested for a MAT, and you got one . found this on #modreqs.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or curiosity about something.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[-iCo-'s Easy]
increase the AR by 1 and decrease the OD by 1 as well. the AR is because it'll flow smoother for beginners, and the OD because it makes things easier for them IMO.
00:02:416 (2) - hmm...i'm unsure of this slider because beginners may see this and they might hit the note as if it's a circle IMO, so in this case, replace this 1/2 slider for a circle to make things easier for beginners.
00:02:962 (3) - add a finish at the beginning. i can hear cymbals at the beginning of this slider and the finish would show emphasis to the song during gameplay.
00:05:325 (2) - same as 00:02:416.
00:05:871 (3) - same as 00:02:962, but this is up to you considering that this shows emphasis in the vocals and that there are no cymbals from what i hear.
00:24:963 (1,2,3) - the transition looks really awkward to follow because the gap between (2,3) is uneven and that may throw off beginners during gameplay, and it shows the inconsistent spacing here. make the gap the same as (1,2) for a steady flow to the map during gameplay.
00:30:780 (1) - i don't see the use of this normal-hitnormal because it sounds unfitting and it breaks the current hitsound pattern and that's the claps. it'd be better if you remove it so that nothing is distracting.

If you want to keep the normal-hitnormal, follow these

00:32:235 (3) - add a normal-hitnormal at the end of this slider so that it'll be consistent with the end of (1) in the hitsound pattern. not having it breaks the current pattern IMO.
00:33:690 (1,3) - same as above, but for this one, add them at the end for both sliders.
00:38:053 (2) - ^

00:32:235 (3,1) - personally i don't like the transitioning here because going from 1 slider to the other like this feels too far for beginners to reach and they might not be confident in this. why don't you move this note here. the flow would be steady and it'll be easier to get to for beginners during gameplay IMO.
00:38:053 (2,1) - i feel that the transitioning needs to be fixed here. that smooth and calm feeling to the song is gone once (1) is hit. and the direction going from down to up doesn't look right IMO. i highly suggest that you do this pattern. it'll be easier to follow and it'll continue that calm feeling to the song for beginners during gameplay.
00:45:689 (3,4,5) - i find the transitioning awkward to follow because they're curved sliders and the direction from (2,3) feels awkward to follow, and the gap from (3,4) look too far apart for beginners to reach to. it'd flow smoother during gameplay if you can do something like this] so that it'd be easier to get to for beginners during gameplay.
00:49:690 (2) - add a finish at the beginning for emphasis in the cymbals in this part of the song during gameplay.
00:51:872 (2,3) - move (2) up and stack (3) at the beginning of (2) that's mentioned above. overlaps like this one may bother beginners and it makes the diff look bad, and i feel that if you stack this note on (2). i find that the transition would be smoother during gameplay IMO.
00:56:235 (1) - perhaps you can delete this so that you can give beginners plenty of time to recover after the next note?
01:00:962 (2,4) - to make the diff more fun for beginners, how about moving these notes up a bit so that it'll look like a zig-zag pattern. i think that going in a linear pattern feels boring for beginners during gameplay IMO. it should look like this.
01:02:780 (1,2) - if you follow the suggestion above, then move these sliders here. (1)'s arc should be under (3), and (2) should be stacked on (2,4) at the previous combo. i think that doing this would give off a smooth feeling for beginners during gameplay.
01:11:507 (1) - that finish at the end sounds unfitting and it ruins the flow in the hitsounding during gameplay. it'd sound a lot better if you can remove the finish at the end so that it doesn't sound that distracting.
01:13:689 (3) - make this a straight slider because it'll keep the flow steady during gameplay. the direction the curve is taking feels awkward to follow for me during gameplay IMO.
01:14:417 (1) - perhaps you can add a finish at the beginning for emphasis in the BGM, and to show that a new pattern occurs?
01:34:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - i took the liberty to re-arrange these notes to a smoother pattern in my eyes. use the code below if you wanna see, and you're free to change up any patterns you don't find flowy.

SPOILER

48,56,94780,6,0,P|124:40|196:52,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,128,95871,1,0,0:0:0
304,200,96235,2,0,P|377:215|453:199,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,296,97690,6,0,P|192:312|120:296,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,224,98780,1,0,0:0:0
132,144,99144,2,0,P|205:129|281:145,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,76,100599,6,0,P|208:48|328:76,2,245,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,173,103507,2,0,P|208:201|328:173,2,245,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,272,106416,6,0,P|116:287|156:291,1,70,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,288,107144,2,0,P|284:288|316:276,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
353,189,107871,2,0,P|423:189,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,120,108962,1,8,0:0:0
188,104,109326,6,0,P|137:55,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,188,110417,1,8,0:0:0
244,276,110780,2,0,P|244:352,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,228,111871,1,8,0:0:0
384,308,112235,6,0,P|460:312|464:248,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,248,114417,1,8,0:0:0

01:55:144 (1,2,3) - i find it smoother to follow for beginners if you can make this go in a diagonal pattern like this. the current flow feels a bit too forced to follow for me during gameplay IMO.
02:09:690 (1) - end this spinner till 02:11:144 so that it'll be consistent with the last spinner before the 1st kiai. it plays inconsistently during gameplay since the drums stop here and it also plays awkwardly if it keeps going IMO.
02:18:417 (1) - a finish at the beginning should be there for emphasis for the cymbals. i can hear them in the BGM and it sounds empty without it.
02:21:326 (2) - i find it smoother if you can move this slider down so that it feels smoother and easier to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO. it should look like this.
02:24:236 (1) - remove the clap at the end. it breaks consistency with the current clap pattern at the 2nd and 4th ticks and it sounds unfitting to this part of the song.
02:27:144 (4) - NC here because it'll be consistent with the majority of your combos in this diff.
02:32:962 (1,1) - you need to find a way to make a gap for beginners to recover. give at least 1-3 beats for beginners to recover in time for the next note. with the gap like this, it'll be hard for them to react in time.
02:46:053 (3,4) - the spacing here is inconsistent with the gap at 1:37 whereas the others in this combo are at around 1:30. switch to this DS and fix the spacing from there so that it'll play consistency during gameplay.
02:50:417 (3) - move this note between the end of (2) and the beginning of (1). if you see, it'll look nicer although the flow won't change much as it creates a triangle for this combo.
03:02:053 (1) - extend this slider till 03:04:598 because if you do, it'll flow to the vocals a lot smoother and the current pattern may throw off beginners considering that the vocals start again 1/2 late at the repeat slider.
03:04:962 (1) - ^
make the 2 sliders like this. i think that if you do this, it'll flow smoother and it'll look nicer with the blankets in effect IMO.

SPOILER

88,80,182053,6,0,P|91:186|216:224,2,245,4|2|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,132,184962,6,0,P|280:160|287:289,2,245,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

03:10:780 (1) - same as 02:09:690, but end it at 03:12:053 since the vocals stop there.
03:19:508 (1,2,1) - try this pattern instead. i think the blankets in this part take place in this as it affects the flow in a good way and i feel that following this would look fun for beginners to follow IMO. the code is below if you can't see properly.

SPOILER

224,132,199508,6,0,P|334:171|385:258,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
290,243,200963,2,0,P|199:215|128:301,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
222,308,202417,6,0,P|333:330|383:250,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

03:27:871 (4) - align this note to (2) to form a diamond. the hitburst is still hidden from (20 and that may impact beginners as they may not know where the note is. in easy diffs, the note should be visible, nothing is covering that 1 note so that it'd be easier for beginners during gameplay.
03:44:962 (3,4) - this will be hard to follow for beginners and the transition is awkward to follow. since the next note is next to the repeat, it will give beginners a hard time to get that note and since they may most likely focus on the middle of the slider considering that they don't know how wide the gap is for the sliderball. it'd be easier if you can align (4) to the beginning/end of (3).[color]
03:46:780 - [color=#FF0000]i'm suggesting a decrescendo on this spinner so that it'll go along with the guitar in this part.if you don't know what this means, it means that you should add timing points on each part of the spinner...for example; 03:47:871. and so on. there still that sound during the spin of the spinner since it sounds unfitting with the fade out of the guitar.
you need to fix your spacing in several parts. the majority of them most likely play inconsistently and it'll break the flow of the map, and idk if you're using 1.30 or 1.40, but it's recommended if you can stick to 1 DS pattern, and since this is a easy diff, i highly suggest that you keep the DS under to 1.20 at least. right now i feel that 1.30-1.40 is too large of a gap during gameplay for beginners IMO.

[HabiHolic's Normal]
consider increasing each stat(except CS). i find the settings too low for a normal diff since you already have an easy diff IMO.
00:02:961 (4) - replace the clap for a finish at the beginning because it'll show emphasis in the cymbals in this part of the song.
00:05:325 (2) - add a drum clap at the beginning since the drum clap sounds similar to the drum in the BGM IMO.
00:07:325 (1) - reduce this slider by 1/2 because right now, the slider ending there plays awkwardly and it doesn't fit with this part of the song IMO.
00:09:507 (5) - add a finish at the beginning. same reason as 00:02:961.
00:10:416 (1) - same as 00:07:325.
00:16:234 (1) - move this note down and adjust this slider so that it'll blanket the end of (2). i find that this overlap looks bad in a diff like this during gameplay IMO
00:19:143 (1) - the clap at the sliderbody and at the end is unnecessary because it breaks consistency with the current clap pattern during gameplay.
00:20:234 (2) - for this one, add claps at the beginning and end and remove the clap at the repeat. same reason as above.
00:21:689 (4) - this is why the claps at the last few places would break consistency with the clap pattern. since you have a clap here, i don't see a reason why the claps should be at the 1st and 3rd tick..it sounds unfitting and it breaks the clap pattern like i said on my suggestions.
00:23:870 (3,4) - patterns like these would feel really awkward to follow because the circle is beside the repeat arrow and that will get in the way in the map. it'd be easier if you can align (4) to (3)...not like this, but do Ctrl+G on (40 so that it'd be easier to get to for players.
00:29:689 (4) - stack this note on the beginning of (1) because i find doing something like this smoother and neater during gameplay IMO. note that you have to move around (2,3) if you want to do this.
00:30:780 (5) - make this note a NC because this is where the lyrics change in the song. i'm guessing that this is most likely a mistake in this case.
00:32:235 (3,4) - the spacing here is inconsistent. space out (4) so that the flow would be steady during gameplay.
00:43:870 (4) - i was expecting a repeat on this slider so that it'll show emphasis in the vocals. in other words, it'll follow "itsumo"
00:45:689 (5) - NC here. same reason as 00:30:780.
00:49:689 (4,6) - add finishes at the beginning for emphasis in the cymbals. it feels empty without it during gameplay.
00:51:143 (1) - same as above, but at the end.
01:08:598 (4) - same as 00:30:780.
01:34:779 (1,2) - adjust (1) and make (2) a straight slider because it'll keep the flow steady in this part. from what i see, this patterns feels awkward to follow during gameplay considering that (2) is curved in that direction.
01:51:143 (4) - add a clap at the end. it'll be consistent with the current clap pattern, and if you want, you can remove the clap at the end of (3) mainly because it breaks the consistency with the claps.
01:58:779 (2) - space this note out. it's too close to each other and the flow is already broken once (2) is hit during gameplay.
02:05:871 (7) - same as 00:49:689.
02:24:235 (4) - same as 00:30:780.
03:19:507 (5) - *nazi* i suggest fixing this slider so that there would be no bumps or edges on this slider and it'll flow smoothly during gameplay, also make this a NC for the same reasons as 00:30:780.
03:45:689 (1,2) - you can make this easier by removing (2) and adding a repeat on (1). players don't need to time it correctly during gameplay if you remove it IMO.
03:46:962 (1) - same as easy about the decrescendo.
my concern is the hitsounding and the consistency. there are several patterns that don't fit with the song and if you play it, it plays awkwardly for me. consider going back to the diff and fixing the hitsounds, especially the finishes that have the cymbals as the BGM.

[Hard]
00:02:598 (2) - same as normal.
00:04:598 (1) - ^, but at the end.
00:05:507 (2) - same as 00:02:598, ^
00:09:507 (7) - ^, but at the beginning.
00:20:416 (4,5) - i find the flow in this pattern really awkward because of the direction (5) is taking from (4) and that's slightly up. it ruins the smooth feeling to the diff during gameplay. i suggest that you should do something like this because the flow is steady throughout the whole diff.
00:22:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - re-arrange your pattern like this. the transition to the next combo looks bad and i don't see the flow in the current pattern during gameplay considering that the spacing is so close IMO. here's the code if you want to see what it really looks like.

SPOILER

148,160,22053,6,0,P|140:196|160:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,248,22416,2,0,P|249:221|289:213,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,244,22780,2,0,P|304:316|224:324,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
173,347,23325,1,0,0:0:0
103,317,23507,2,0,P|71:289|62:254,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:24:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as above, but it's better if i give you the code since it wouldn't show the pattern properly.

SPOILER

412,80,24780,5,2,0:0:0
336,72,24962,2,0,P|258:113|268:186,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
271,240,25507,2,0,P|334:279|394:229,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
463,224,26053,1,0,0:0:0
415,167,26235,2,0,P|413:113|335:72,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
263,93,26780,1,0,0:0:0
191,114,26962,2,0,P|134:165|174:242,1,150
228,232,27507,1,0,0:0:0
256,164,27689,1,2,0:0:0

00:41:144 (1) - move this spinner back by 1/4 because since it's a hard diff, it wouldn't hurt to challenge these players in their reaction, and plus doing this spins to the vocals smoothly during gameplay.
00:51:689 (3) - same as 00:02:598.
01:04:962 (6) - this isn't stacked properly and i feel that this would affect the flow in this during gameplay considering that this isn't stacked properly. stack this on the end of (4) so that the transition is smoother during gameplay IMO.
01:15:871 (5) - make this note a NC mainly because of the change in the BGM and lyrics in this part of the song.
03:46:871 (1) - same as easy.
same comment as normal.

[Insane]
00:02:963 (1) - same as normal.
00:05:326 (3) - ^
00:07:235 (6) - i don't see a use of this note. i think it'd be better if you can delete this since this map is overmapped during gameplay IMO.
00:12:598 (1) - remove the NC here. the BGM from the triangular pattern is still connected and make (2) a NC because of the change in the BGM.
00:50:599 (5,6) - i find it easier to follow if you can stack this note on (4). the spacing change here threw me off for a bit during gameplay.
01:20:963 (3,4) - keep the spacing for this one evened out because the vocal pitch continues and there's no change in the BGM. it'll keep the flow steady in his part of the song during gameplay.
01:21:690 (6,7) - ^
01:54:781 (2,3,4,5,1) - i don't see a use of this stream i highly suggest that you remove them because the stream in this part is overmapped and it doesn't follow anything related to the music. replace them for sliders that follow the music and make it challenging for them at the same time.
02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^
03:44:962 (9) - i don't find the repeat fitting because it breaks the flow in the rhythm of the notes. i suggest that you replace the repeat for a 1/2 slider and a circle to keep the flow going for this combo. it'll look even more fun for players if it keeps going during gameplay.
03:46:871 (1) - same comment as easy.
same comment as normal.

and i guess that's it. i don't think that this is ready for a bubble yet because of the comments i mentioned. look for more mods in the meantime and don't give up on this map. GL .

Byakugan249 wrote:

you requested for a MAT, and you got one . found this on #modreqs.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or curiosity about something.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Hard]
00:02:598 (2) - same as normal. fix
00:04:598 (1) - ^, but at the end. fix
00:05:507 (2) - same as 00:02:598, ^ fix
00:09:507 (7) - ^, but at the beginning. no fix
00:20:416 (4,5) - i find the flow in this pattern really awkward because of the direction (5) is taking from (4) and that's slightly up. it ruins the smooth feeling to the diff during gameplay. i suggest that you should do something like this because the flow is steady throughout the whole diff. It looks good ! thank you ~
00:22:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - re-arrange your pattern like this. the transition to the next combo looks bad and i don't see the flow in the current pattern during gameplay considering that the spacing is so close IMO. here's the code if you want to see what it really looks like. Sure. why not

SPOILER

148,160,22053,6,0,P|140:196|160:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,248,22416,2,0,P|249:221|289:213,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,244,22780,2,0,P|304:316|224:324,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
173,347,23325,1,0,0:0:0
103,317,23507,2,0,P|71:289|62:254,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:24:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as above, but it's better if i give you the code since it wouldn't show the pattern properly. Okay!

SPOILER

412,80,24780,5,2,0:0:0
336,72,24962,2,0,P|258:113|268:186,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
271,240,25507,2,0,P|334:279|394:229,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
463,224,26053,1,0,0:0:0
415,167,26235,2,0,P|413:113|335:72,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
263,93,26780,1,0,0:0:0
191,114,26962,2,0,P|134:165|174:242,1,150
228,232,27507,1,0,0:0:0
256,164,27689,1,2,0:0:0

00:41:144 (1) - move this spinner back by 1/4 because since it's a hard diff, it wouldn't hurt to challenge these players in their reaction, and plus doing this spins to the vocals smoothly during gameplay. I'm search for this pattern as well as all fixed
00:51:689 (3) - same as 00:02:598. No fix.
01:04:962 (6) - this isn't stacked properly and i feel that this would affect the flow in this during gameplay considering that this isn't stacked properly. stack this on the end of (4) so that the transition is smoother during gameplay IMO. Nice! fix
01:15:871 (5) - make this note a NC mainly because of the change in the BGM and lyrics in this part of the song. fix
03:46:871 (1) - same as easy. fix
same comment as normal.

[Insane]
00:02:963 (1) - same as normal. fix
00:05:326 (3) - ^ fix
00:07:235 (6) - i don't see a use of this note. i think it'd be better if you can delete this since this map is overmapped during gameplay IMO. fix
00:12:598 (1) - remove the NC here. the BGM from the triangular pattern is still connected and make (2) a NC because of the change in the BGM. fix
00:50:599 (5,6) - i find it easier to follow if you can stack this note on (4). the spacing change here threw me off for a bit during gameplay. fix
01:20:963 (3,4) - keep the spacing for this one evened out because the vocal pitch continues and there's no change in the BGM. it'll keep the flow steady in his part of the song during gameplay. fix
01:21:690 (6,7) - ^ fix
01:54:781 (2,3,4,5,1) - i don't see a use of this stream i highly suggest that you remove them because the stream in this part is overmapped and it doesn't follow anything related to the music. replace them for sliders that follow the music and make it challenging for them at the same time. fix
02:03:507 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^ fix
03:44:962 (9) - i don't find the repeat fitting because it breaks the flow in the rhythm of the notes. i suggest that you replace the repeat for a 1/2 slider and a circle to keep the flow going for this combo. it'll look even more fun for players if it keeps going during gameplay. fix
03:46:871 (1) - same comment as easy. fix
same comment as normal.

and i guess that's it. i don't think that this is ready for a bubble yet because of the comments i mentioned. look for more mods in the meantime and don't give up on this map. GL .

hwew. so long btw, Thank you.

TheVileOne wrote:

I can't look at that mod. 249, never mod anything of mine.

312,64,20963,2,0,P|216:76|180:156,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
222,242,21508,1,0,0:0:0
318,290,21690,1,0,0:0:0
415,242,21872,1,0,0:0:0
356,152,22053,6,0,P|313:131|273:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,207,22417,2,0,P|95:181|84:134,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

TheVileOne wrote:

I'm not finished. no need to kudosu this. yepp. as you wish but, I'm fancy kudos give >_<

General

Artist and title do not belong in tags. Remove them. fix

Easy
Kiais are slightly unsnapped. Resnap inheriteds. fix
02:12:598 (2) Note follows a spinner should be new combo My think is good even now.
I can't guarantee my mod is 100% accurate, so use good judgment when deciding what to change/fix. Usually my spacing suggestions are valid. Everything is a suggestion, so you can ignore most if not all of it, but I will probably not like it if you skipped over some of the spacing issues.

00:22:054 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be equal. fix
01:52:235 (1) - I'm just not sure about this slider. The beat goes offbeat, but this is on beat. It sounds weird. I would have mapped it in such a way to have 01:53:507 - mapped, but that's me. It's probably fine. fix my owns
02:02:417 (2) - Perhaps move second point up a unit or two? fix
02:03:871 (1,2,3) - you should make the spacing equal here. Grid snap off if you have to. fix
02:28:235 (5) - Sounds so much better on that red tick where the vocals start :/ no fix
02:28:235 (5,6,1) - Spacing change here is distracting. fix
03:04:962 (1,1) - Should try to avoid overlaps like this if possible. If you can't then its fine. fix
03:31:144 (1) - Move to x 279, y 289? (Not sure, so do only if you like it) fix my owns
03:39:144 (3,4,1,2) - Best if this was 1.3 snap. Shouldn't go below 1.3 fix

Normal
This song is too long for me to recheck my mod for errors.

Lots of end snapping errors. check AiMod fix

00:12:598 (4,1) - Sort of bothers me that this isn't a perfect blanket. It doesn't look too difficult to fix. fix
00:22:052 (1,2) - Form is not that great. I suggest mapping this part in such a way that you can blanket these without creating overlap. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593859 < I like how this flows.
00:24:234 (4) - Just doesn't sound like it goes with the previous rhythm. If anything the slider would go here 00:23:871 -. fix
00:24:235 - There should be a whistle sound here. well. I'm change all about this interval to vocal sound.
00:26:779 (3) - adjust the end of this to make a better blanket around next note? fix
00:38:416 (3) - Maybe move the middle point down a couple units? Comparing it to 01:53:506 (2,3) - I think this is a cleaner example of this pattern. fix
00:43:143 (3,4) - Transition looks a bit random. It might be better if the slider started as the second object. Might.. I'm not sure. Regardless if you do that 00:42:780 - I suggest having a whistle here so that it's easier to pick up the beat through the low hitsounds. My think is same. but, he want this
00:43:871 - Whistle to improve readability. I'm curious as your opinion to having a whistle on long white ticks or at least some of them. no fix
00:45:325 (5) - Do not stack this under that slider in a normal or any difficulty really. I think you need to either remap this or find a way to make it more playable. fix
00:46:779 (2) - Start with finish looks like empty sound.
01:02:780 (1) - Doesn't need a finish IMO. also this pattern does flow very well. Here's my suggestion for the next three notes.
01:02:780 (1) - Move to x 36 y 92 01:03:871 (2) - x 276 y 200 01:04:416 (3) - x 420 y 92 I replaced the finish with a whistle. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593904 fix
01:04:416 (3,4) - Snap shouldn't go above 1.5 here. My pattern change about will get it down to 1.65, but you should bring it down further. fix my owns
01:06:961 (3,1) - Is this spacing really necessary? Good! fix
01:39:870 (4) - End with a whistle? I'm chase the vocals. yepp.
01:50:052 (2,3,4) - doesn't look as nice as 00:34:416 (2,3,4) - IMO. Is there any reason why you're using 0.9 snap when you mapped this same area at 1.0 snap the first time? You're even using the same patterns. fix
03:13:689 (2) Note follows a spinner- add new combo. fix
02:15:506 (1,2) - Align these sliders better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593931 Nice! fix
03:04:962 (1,2,3) - Make exactly 1.0? fix
03:10:053 (1) - sounds better without a finish IMO. I fitted every difficulty
03:17:871 (3,4) - Line up better? no fix.
03:19:507 (1) - If you were going for symmetry, this isn't symmetrical. no fix.
03:22:053 (4,1) - Use 1.0 here. It interferes with the shape when you change the snap. fix
03:32:962 (3) - 1 unit left. fix
03:33:326 (4) - 1 unit down fix
03:33:689 - Lower the volume of this end. It sounds weird. I deleted this slider
03:37:326 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure I like this hitsounding. It's not accurately mapped to the actual supporting back. But I'm not sure whether its more proper to follow the supporting beat (the one that switches to red ticks). i'll just leave this as a comment that i'm not sure about this. It could be fine. If you like it you can probably keep it. your pointing out is perfect. I fixed everything
03:47:144 (1) - End on long white tick fix

Hard
I hope you don't mind some nazi modding.

00:01:689 (1,2) - This is not the same as 00:04:598 (1,2) -. the way you have them positioned I assume you were trying to have them be the same. Even if this was not the case I recommend you make them the same, just flipped. fix
00:09:325 (6) - Really small but change y to 111 instead. fix
00:10:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Really suggest you turn grid snap off and made all the spacing 1.1 fix
00:14:962 (7,8,9) - ^ fix
00:22:416 (2,3) - Rotate 2 so that the start and the end will be the same distance from 3. What do you think? Good. fix
00:24:962 (2,3) - Slightly misaligned. 3 needs to be moved roughly 1 unit to the right. Fix spacing afterwards. Oh and on a side note this pattern is kind of boring is you ask me. There's also overlap here 00:27:871 (1) - . There's probably a much better pattern out that. You should backup your difficulty before you try this in case you don't like. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594006 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594007 If you do this, there's quite a bit more overlap at this point, but it's a more interesting pattern overall. If you could make it more interesting and not have overlap that would be great! Up to you though. I will chase your nod. thank you ~
00:32:598 (6,7,8) - Grid snap off, make closer to 1.10 fix
00:39:871 (1) - Clap fix
00:40:598 (3) - ^ fix
00:56:598 (2) - For some reason this is awkward to me. The parts later in the song that are like this play fine. This seems to be the beat http://puu.sh/1W3KO If you want to keep,I suggest making the snap 1.10 here, and making the curved slider a bit softer. hmm. I'll keep snap 1.1
01:02:234 (6,7) - Use 1.2 snap. You haven't ended the combo yet. fix
01:02:416 (7,1) - Two things: 1: Line up better, 2: Use 1.10 snap. How about 1.2 snap?
01:35:144 (2,3) - Exactly 1.10 fix
01:39:507 (6,1) - ^ fix
01:48:780 (7,8,9) - ^ fix
01:55:507 (1) - Clap fix
01:56:234 (3) - ^ fix
02:00:962 (6) - Add finish fix
02:02:780 (3) - ^ (end) feels like empty sound.
02:16:780 (4,5,6,7) - Plays weird to me. I don't like that knob. It interferes with the flow. fix
02:18:416 (8) - Next combo should start here since you did so in other parts of the song. Nice! fix
02:22:416 (3,4) - Exactly 1.2 flows better IMO. fix
02:54:598 (5,6,7,8) - Exactly 1.10? fix
02:57:871 (7,8,1) - I think it would be better if it followed the symmetry exhibited here 02:56:780 (3,4,5) - fix my owns
03:10:416 (2) - Remove finish? no fix
03:42:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Exactly 1.10 like first part. fix
03:46:780 (1) - Finish fix

Insane
I believe most of my suggestions were sound, but I can't guarantee my initial opinion was distorted due to mapping preferences. well. fix all about.

Unsnapped objects- check Aimod fix

00:03:690 (3) - start with whistle no fix
00:18:781 (9) - I suggest moving much higher so that players coming off the previous slider will be able to hit it and then curve downward towards the triple. http://puu.sh/1W5hG Might not be the best position, but it works. fix
00:20:963 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - I think this could be improved. might want to backup your difficulty in case you want to change back. I felt 1,2 should have been more of a jump instead. So I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594071 Here's the code for it. fix and 00:19:145 (1,2) is same a way.

312,64,20963,2,0,P|216:76|180:156,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
222,242,21508,1,0,0:0:0
318,290,21690,1,0,0:0:0
415,242,21872,1,0,0:0:0
356,152,22053,6,0,P|313:131|273:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,207,22417,2,0,P|95:181|84:134,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

If you want my opinion 00:19:145 (1,2) - would flow better as a jump too if you could make it work. fix
00:25:507 (2,3,4) - Try this http://puu.sh/1W5AL Consider a similar transition here 00:26:235 (4,5,6) - fix
00:32:053 (6,7,8,9) - I suggest making the spacing more consistent here. fix
00:34:417 (4) - Move to x 222 y 89? Looks better to me. nope.
00:35:326 (7,8,9) - Exactly 1.10. fix
00:36:054 (10,11,1) - So awkward. The transition into the next combo should not be a jump and I highly recommend you make 1 a slider due to the lack of beat here. You do not want to end a jump with no beat. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594081 I rather like it when you go backward to hit 11. Perhaps experiment with the note placed around here. fix my owns.
00:39:871 (2) - clap fix
00:40:598 (4) - ^ fix
00:42:781 (1) - I don't recommend starting this so close to the spinner hitburst. I'm consider that. but I can't think about how to place.
00:52:053 (4,1) - I'm not sure about this being so close. The pattern you chose through here is unusual so I'll leave it to you to figure out what kind of flow you want if you change this. Accordingly, I appealed NC
00:58:235 (1,2) - Please stack the ends. It looks bad. My think is same. but, I'm modded that. I don't know what to do fix.
00:59:690 (5,1) - 1.10 flows better fix
01:00:963 (4) - Move up 1 unit? fix
01:01:144 (1,2) - Stack ends. same as 00:58:235 (1,2)
01:02:963 (2,3) - Increase spacing here? fix
01:04:416 (1,2) - Perhaps turning these notes into a slider would work better. It would match 01:02:963 (2,3) - . You could have a blanket on that other slider like so . http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594089 slider 3 should be rotated somewhat, because that angle was just bad IMO. fix my owns.
01:05:690 (1) - Remove finish? No fix.
01:06:417 (4,5) - I don't understand this jump. Why are you increasing the spacing so much larger than the other jumps? It doesn't fit and doesn't look good. I suggest making it like all the other jumps. fix
01:09:508 (3,4,5) - Closer to 1.10 flows better. fix
01:14:416 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not perfectly aligned. Align better? no fix.
01:16:599 (3,4,5) - Avoid flattening out here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594103 (actually the pattern should be more left than seen in the screenshot) fix
01:18:781 (1) - finish doesn't fit IMO. Finish sound is here 01:18:599 (5) - fix
01:18:599 (5,1) - Isn't really a jump sound IMO. If you ask me 01:18:598 - should be a repeat slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594106 Just a suggestion. I'm not sure if you were going for anything. nope. I think, this is better.
01:34:780 (1,2) - Mirror isn't perfect. fix
01:35:508 (3) - Find a better spot for this. You can safely make a jump for this note too. The end should be closer to 01:36:053 (4) - because the flow doesn't support it and 01:38:417 (3,4) - wasn't a large jump. fix my owns
01:37:689 (1,2,3) - ^ Although this one looks better. fix my owns
01:39:145 (5,6) - 1.2 snap. why..? I fixed 1.1 snap
01:40:053 (7,8,9) - Spacing should be equal. fix
01:41:871 (4,5,6) - Ugly IMO. Please try to create some form of symmetry or soften that transition. Rough doesn't work. fix my owns
01:48:416 (9,10) - Ugh.. make sliders more similar? fix
01:58:416 (1) - Same comment about starting near spinner hitburst Same as 00:42:781 (1)
02:00:598 - Add note or move next note to here. either way move the next note from where it is. Finally 02:01:144 - add note here, because why would you skip this sound? Eh actually this wouldn't be consistent with how you mapped the first part. So it's up to you to figure out what to do. fix my owns.
02:02:780 (5) - end with finish feels like empty sound.
02:03:326 (6,7,8) - Strange transition. all these sounds are the same. There should be no reason why one of the sound gaps is mapped much large than the other. fix
02:22:416 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would prefer to play at 1.2 snap rather than 1.1. nope. I'll steady this.
02:38:052 (1) - There wasn't a new combo here in the other difficulties. fix
03:14:235 (2,3) - Parallel sliders look much better IMO. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/594143 fix and Ctrl + G number 3
03:29:325 (5,6) - 1.12 like the rest of the combo. fix
03:36:962 (2) Note follows a spinner- add new combo. fix

Conclusion

Here's your star. wow. Thank you so much

Raging Bull wrote:

Hellooooooooooo. Sorry it took long but better late than never. Mods are suggestions, if you don't agree with any, please explain instead of saying "no"


Easy:
00:45:689 (3) - NC here? You've been pretty consistent in NC pattern and you broke it here. Also, is spacing intentional here? Spaced too close from last note.
00:51:145 (1,2,3,4) - Mapping to white tick here seems boring. Vocals sound more prominent than music at that part. Plus sliders are on red tick so it shouldn't be too difficult for beginners to hit and it gets away from the whole white tick mapping only. Try that pattern in timeline? http://puu.sh/1W5v8
01:43:508 (2) - NC for consistency?
02:06:780 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as earlier?
02:12:598 (1) - I'm not sure if unrankable, but just add NC since it's after a spinner. It was unranakble before, but not sure now. Adding it wouldn't really hurt.
02:15:507 (3) - NC for consistency?
02:19:871 (1,2) - Swap NC. (Remove NC on 1, add NC on 2)
02:27:144 (4) - NC for consistency?
02:28:235 (5) - orz this slider. I don't usually like when people make a slider on 2/4 tick, following the music, especially if it goes over the downbeat. I think downbeat is really important that players should be able to click it and not slide over it. Maybe like picture instead? I think the vocals are very strong here that mapping to vocals is way more important than the downbeat. Really recommend it orz http://puu.sh/1W5QS
02:32:962 (1) - Perhaps shorten this slider by 1/1. Beginners might have a hard time clicking next note after spinner in very short notice.
02:50:417 (3) - Up to you, but maybe NC here for consistency?
03:02:053 (1,1) - Perhaps this instead of your current pattern? http://puu.sh/1W5W8 Vocals are still strong here and having a 3/1 slider with a repeat just feels realllllllyyy weird.
03:16:599 (3) - NC here for consistency?
03:44:416 (2) - Spacing?

Normal:
Perhaps +1 OD? Same OD as easy so might as well raise it up a bit?
00:05:870 (3) - Maybe like screenie? http://puu.sh/1W63p I feel like it follows vocals better than how you mapped, and 00:06:780 felt kinda weird to me cause no vocal there (since you're following vocals)
00:13:325 (1) - End 1/2 earlier to follow music? I think the red tick sounds more prominent than white tick.
00:14:416 (2) - ^?
00:16:234 (1) - Maybe like screenshot? Sounds a lot better since it follows the music. http://puu.sh/1W682
00:30:780 (5) - NC for consistency?
00:39:507 (1) - Perhaps end 1/1 earlier? Kinda too close to next note after spinner for me.
00:45:689 (5) - NC here for consistency?
01:08:235 (4) - Add note? For some reason, it felt really empty here lol. It would be right on vocal too!
01:08:598 (5) - Add NC for consistency?
01:17:325 (1) - Okay well 1/1 shorter also? Especially since next pattern is a stack, I think beginners would totally panic and click really fast.
01:55:143 (1) - 1/1 earlier too?
02:00:416 (4) - Add 1/1 slider on this? Probably sounds better since the vocal is on red tick and then she holds a note so a slider is appropriate.
02:00:961 (1) - Perhaps a finish hitsound here? I think it's pretty strong music here at this part.
02:03:325 (1,2) - Swap NC for better consistency? Lol no matter what, it's broken here cause she starts on red tick and not downbeat orz
02:23:871 (3) - Add note? Sounds empty here too just like 01:08:235 (4)
02:24:235 (5) - NC for consistency here?
02:32:961 (1) - End 2/1 earlier? I find ending spinners on downbeat weird unless it's like near the end of music.
02:35:871 (1) - Then just add note here? Keeps pattern consistent like at 01:20:235.
02:59:143 (1) - End 1/1 earlier for bigger gap between next note?
03:07:144 (1) - Remove NC
03:07:871 (3) - NC here instead? Keeps NCing consistent and 03:07:871 (1,1,1) would be all NC'd and would look pretty appropriate especially to change in music.
03:10:779 (1) - 1/1 earlier too?
03:18:780 (4) - Perhaps like screenshot instead? http://puu.sh/1W6yV I think it follows vocals a lot better so it's smoother.
03:19:507 (5) - NC for consistency?
03:13:689 (1) - NC here? I'm not sure if it's still unrankable but it won't hurt.
03:20:962 (7,8) - MAybe like screenshot instead? http://puu.sh/1W6C4 I think it follows lyrics better and it felt rather awkward that downbeat wasn't mapped.
03:34:053 (1) - End 2/1 earlier and add note at 03:36:962 like the pattern you've been doing at end of chorus?
03:36:962 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe this instead? I think it follows music better than how you've mapped it. http://puu.sh/1W6Gp
03:39:870 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps follow same pattern as above? Mapping at white tick seems awkward when the red ticks are way more prominent in music.
03:42:779 (1) - ^ Same thing one last time? Lol

Just posting so I don't lose what I have!

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