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Topic Starter
Strawberry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月28日 at 18:34:27

Artist: UNDEAD CORPORATION
Title: Yoru Naku Usagi wa Yume wo Miru
Source: Touhou
Tags: Ranko Nakamura Masaki Reisen Udongein Inaba a3272509123 bakabaka jomnhnk Twice ZUN instrumental Lunatic Red Eyes Invisible Full Moon Imperishable Night th08
BPM: 87.5
Filesize: 5840kb
Play Time: 04:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. A32's Challenging (4.03 stars, 366 notes)
  2. BakaNA (4.96 stars, 1134 notes)
  3. Hard (4.71 stars, 560 notes)
  4. jom's Taiko Muzukashii (4.66 stars, 922 notes)
  5. jom's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1406 notes)
  6. Lunatic (4.9 stars, 1091 notes)
  7. Twice's Normal (2.64 stars, 244 notes)
Download: UNDEAD CORPORATION - Yoru Naku Usagi wa Yume wo Miru
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Strawberry's 4th
§ Normal --- by .Twice
§ Challenging --- by .a3272509123
§ Hard --- by .me
§ Lunatic --- by .me
§ BakaNa --- by .bakabaka
§ Muzukashii --- by .jomnhnk
§ Oni --- by .jomnhnk
Special thanks to pimpG's timing help and bakabaka's fixed about BG
Redownload PLZ if you have download before Jan. 26th
40 favs already before first ranked.
Skystar
SF
Flask
我的沙發沒了
Nymph
a32
先占位~
Sakamotosan-w -
算前排么 QwQ
bakabaka
ヾ( ゚∀゚)ノ゙
a32
提醒一下: 02:03:534 需要加根红线 这段是3/4
于是我在我的diff里先改了
Topic Starter
Strawberry

a3272509123 wrote:

提醒一下: 02:03:534 需要加根红线 这段是3/4
于是我在我的diff里先改了
k fixed
a32
Skystar
Really awesome, REALLY.
Flask

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

Really awesome, REALLY.
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[A32's Normal]
Excellent!

[Hard]
01:16:767 - Add finish to the start of the slider.
01:29:517 (8) - Do not touch the slider
01:36:867 (6) - Change it into 2 circles
02:04:917 (1) - Finish.
02:06:267 - Add break time.
02:33:117 (8,9) - Ctrl+G
02:59:967 (8) - hmm? What about adding a note here with finish?
03:05:967 (7) - Start at 03:05:817. Move 03:05:817 (6) to 03:06:867 and then add a note at 03:07:017
03:08:217 (4,5) - something as above
03:23:967 - hmm? What about adding a note here with finish?



[Lunatic]
01:02:667 (1,1,1) - Remove newcombo?
01:36:267 (1) - Remove Newcombo
02:10:017 - Should be a note here
02:44:367 (9) - Newcombo
03:13:167 (7) - ^


[BakaNA]
00:57:567 (1) - Use whistle instead of finish
02:05:967 (1) - ^
02:16:017 (2) - Ctrl+G (flow better imo)
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
That's all
Perfect Mapset ;)
GL
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Fixed mostly in my diff and updated *including pimpG's mod~
(壮哉我大血梦
pimp
mod as requested :)

general

00:14:988 - this timeline should be 80 bpm imo
00:17:927 - move this timeline to 00:17:983 and use bpm 89
00:33:488 - add timeline here bpm 90.50

A32's normal

00:10:874 (3) - check the spacing
00:14:302 (4,1) - using ds 0.9x here. intentional?
00:29:439 (2) - slider end at 00:30:116?
00:31:471 (1,2) - check the spacing
00:37:565 (1) - remove repeat?
00:39:597 (3) - remove this slider and maybe replace for a spinner?
00:56:367- add a break after this slider and make the brak custom start at 00:58:167?
01:13:167 (2,3,1) - small mess in spacing here, intentional? better move (3) to x252 y224 imo
01:46:767 - add a circle here with finish?
01:49:167 - making the break start here would look nice
02:03:567 - just imo
03:11:367 (2) - slider end at 03:11:667 because fits the sound better and because its easier to hit for begginers?
03:16:767 (1,2) - would look better if the sliders dont touch, imo
03:44:667 (2) - strange slider (imo)
03:46:767 (1) - remove whistle at start, maybe move it to the repeat?
04:15:471 (1) - this note is suposed to be at the timeline at 04:15:481 right?
04:16:297 (1) - same as above, this slider has unsnapped slider end because of the bpm offset change. move it to 04:16:308 where the timeline starts

hard

01:08:367 (4) - remove one repeat, make a circle instead?
01:10:767 (5) - ^
01:28:617 (5,6,7,8) - a bit confusing because of the overlaps in 5 to 6, 5 to 8?
01:52:767 - same as 01:08:367 (4)
02:06:117 - add break?
02:52:767 (1) http://puu.sh/1jj1B ?
02:54:567 (3) - ^
03:08:367 - same as 01:08:367 (4)

lunatic

01:29:817 (1) - slider end in the white tick? fits the sound better/plays better imo
01:39:417 - ^
02:10:017 - adding a circle here to make a simple stream would be more readable

bakaNA

some small things looked a bit difficult to read but i think i'll never be able to play something like that, so all fine :D

04:17:196 (1) - make this slider end in the white tick for consistency with the previous notes, and maybe add a circle at 04:17:542 ?

that's all, have my star and good luck with ranking :)
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod~

[General]
0.0|~
我觉得需要一个更简单的E。。。
而且E到H什么的。。32做的其实是N把。。。orz

[a32's easy~]
nazi~OD-1 这个难度能当E么。orz。。感觉好危险。。。
  1. 00:08:131 (2,1) - (nazi)尾巴和1没覆盖好>_>
  2. 00:22:667 (3,1) - ...这种梗可以用在easy里么。。orz对于新人太鬼畜了吧。orz
  3. 00:42:567 (1,1) - (nazi)建议改成slider。。变化BPM有点不好点。orz
  4. 00:57:567 - add break time~
  5. 01:26:967 (3) - 这种不算unrank么?~我纠结这问题很久了。orz。。理由是第二次的折返箭头看不清。orz
  6. 02:36:267 (2,3) - (nazi)太近了。往上移两格~orz然后调整下。orz
  7. 03:16:767 (1,2) - ^
  8. 04:22:657 - 消音>_>5%。。。~
[Hard]

  • 绿线把我闪瞎了。orz。。。
  1. 03:55:017 (6,7) - 遮挡的好严重。。。。orz有点读图不能。。把7移出来点。。orz
  2. 03:52:167 (3) - 这个有点目害。。节奏好奇葩。orz。。。我总是点不到。orz跪了。
  3. 03:52:617 (5) - 这个也是。orz嘛。。。就这一段,。。03:51:867 (2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏。。;_;
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:43:167 (1,1) - 突然距离拉开太大不好适应。orz。。
  2. 目害。。不看了!~。。。找不到;_;!~test的手都断了。orz
[BakaNA]
这个绿线更目害。orz
不行。。。这个test都不能了。orz。。。超出我的范围了。。orz

GL and Star。。orz
Sun Rainbow
ganbatte><
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Snowy Dream

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]
01:16:767 - Add finish to the start of the slider. added
01:29:517 (8) - Do not touch the slider yea~fixed
01:36:867 (6) - Change it into 2 circles ok. seems better
02:04:917 (1) - Finish. sure
02:06:267 - Add break time. i forgot this x3
02:33:117 (8,9) - Ctrl+G seems great:3
02:59:967 (8) - hmm? What about adding a note here with finish? a bit wired imo..
03:05:967 (7) - Start at 03:05:817. Move 03:05:817 (6) to 03:06:867 and then add a note at 03:07:017 idk..i prefer my rhythm so sorry~no change atm
03:08:217 (4,5) - something as above ~
03:23:967 - hmm? What about adding a note here with finish? some redundancy?..



[Lunatic]
01:02:667 (1,1,1) - Remove newcombo? yea
01:36:267 (1) - Remove Newcombo ^
02:10:017 - Should be a note here added
02:44:367 (9) - Newcombo yea
03:13:167 (7) - ^ ^

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
That's all
Perfect Mapset ;) coool! thank you~
GL

pimpG

pimpG wrote:

mod as requested :)

general

00:14:988 - this timeline should be 80 bpm imo
00:17:927 - move this timeline to 00:17:983 and use bpm 89
00:33:488 - add timeline here bpm 90.50
brilian timing, changed!

hard

01:08:367 (4) - remove one repeat, make a circle instead? sry..no change
01:10:767 (5) - ^ ~
01:28:617 (5,6,7,8) - a bit confusing because of the overlaps in 5 to 6, 5 to 8? changed pattern
01:52:767 - same as 01:08:367 (4) huh
02:06:117 - add break? sure~
02:52:767 (1) http://puu.sh/1jj1B ? no change~..it's not suitable
02:54:567 (3) - ^ ~
03:08:367 - same as 01:08:367 (4) ~

lunatic

01:29:817 (1) - slider end in the white tick? fits the sound better/plays better imo it's fun ><
01:39:417 - ^
02:10:017 - adding a circle here to make a simple stream would be more readable reasonable

that's all, have my star and good luck with ranking :) thank you xDD

Athena Tennos

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~

[General]
0.0|~
我觉得需要一个更简单的E。。。
而且E到H什么的。。32做的其实是N把。。。orz 这个本来就是N啦~因为前面的intro才判定为E的其实是N的难度~

[Hard]

  • 绿线把我闪瞎了。orz。。。
  1. 03:55:017 (6,7) - 遮挡的好严重。。。。orz有点读图不能。。把7移出来点。。orz 换个梗~
  2. 03:52:167 (3) - 这个有点目害。。节奏好奇葩。orz。。。我总是点不到。orz跪了。 觉得还好啊~
  3. 03:52:617 (5) - 这个也是。orz嘛。。。就这一段,。。03:51:867 (2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏。。;_;
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:43:167 (1,1) - 突然距离拉开太大不好适应。orz。。
  2. 目害。。不看了!~。。。找不到;_;!~test的手都断了。orz
GL and Star。。orz 谢谢>_<

lkx_Shore
[General]
战火为何而燃>w<

第一部分音量太小,提高的40%比较好

[Lunatic]
01:37:017 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这5hit挺起来好逞强;-;
02:09:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 风格统一一下比较好
02:31:167 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5hit逞强+1

[BakaNA]
好鬼畜;-;

[Hard]
AR7→8
HP4→5
OD4→5

[A32's Normal]
HP2→3
02:16:767 (2,3,1,2,3) - 听起来不太好

再star一次
Topic Starter
Strawberry
lkx_shore

lkx_shore wrote:

[General]
战火为何而燃>w< xDDD

第一部分音量太小,提高的40%比较好 感觉还好~我会在考虑下

[Lunatic]
01:37:017 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这5hit挺起来好逞强;-; 是想燃一点>_<
02:09:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 风格统一一下比较好 感觉还好~ 等下再问几个人^^
02:31:167 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5hit逞强+1 同上~

[Hard]
AR7→8
HP4→5
OD4→5 这个是想让难度平衡一些不至于和N差距太大..~

再star一次 哇哇哇超感谢> A<
Twice_old
【友情赞助._.】


这图lunatic才是本体啊._.
绿线再次吓尿我QAQ
球球你们不要那么奇葩,你们以为鼠标党绝种了吗._.
这图不找777来做太鼓不幸福

[A32's Normal]

AR+1? AR4的话玩起来很别扭,我觉得这难度可以做normal+了,用AR5的话...~

那么低的sv 建议间距可以用1.2,不然默认皮肤各种遮挡。(o口o)话说我终于知道为什么当初别人让我不要用这种粘起来的方式作图了,果断是

考虑到了默认300的问题吗,这种问题可以用自制皮肤来解决~

00:30:791-3 嗯...normal用这种遮挡不太恰当?0.0
00:42:867-1 如果是我的话会取消nc,然后在00:43:167-2 这里nc
00:44:367-1 取消nc
00:50:067-1 取消nc 我认为没啥意义o.o
03:22:617 开头移到后面的红线,我认为那样就够了-w-

[Hard]

HP+1或2,玩了一下发现这hard略难,不过HP才4好像有点低-w-?

03:40:317-3 不知道会不会被其他人叼,我是认为自制皮肤能解决._.
03:53:367-8 ^
03:58:917-2 个人认为+nc效果比较好
04:08:517-2 ^

我表示很喜欢这个hard,好图=w=

[Lunatic]

我觉得这难度都能做app了

我怒猜这图是先有lunatic的。肯定是lunatic做的非常爽,然后想rank这图的。
01:09:342-6 7 我感觉没必要
02:32:967-11 建议ctrl G
02:41:817-5 ^ 这样感觉更流畅好玩www
04:06:567-5 nc
04:06:867-8 ^
04:07:167-11 ^
04:07:467-14 ^
04:07:767-17 ^

我尽力了._. 这图明显超出我的水平太多

[BakaNA]

卧槽坑爹啊,看完lunatic以为是最高难度了,这尼玛怎么更难啊 >_>
我表示你们需要Insane过渡,不然这难度分配太奇葩。在我看来是normal+-hard-lunatic-lunatic,说好的Insane呢?

01:09:567-1 卧槽这瞬跳的,这游戏能玩?
01:11:967-1 ^

无能为力了。-。这难度太难,我mod不了
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Twice

Twice wrote:

【友情赞助._.】


这图lunatic才是本体啊._.
绿线再次吓尿我QAQ
球球你们不要那么奇葩,你们以为鼠标党绝种了吗._.
这图不找777来做太鼓不幸福

[Hard]

HP+1或2,玩了一下发现这hard略难,不过HP才4好像有点低-w-?

03:40:317-3 不知道会不会被其他人叼,我是认为自制皮肤能解决._. 了解~
03:53:367-8 ^ ~
03:58:917-2 个人认为+nc效果比较好 added
04:08:517-2 ^ ~

我表示很喜欢这个hard,好图=w= arikato><

[Lunatic]

我觉得这难度都能做app了 <3

我怒猜这图是先有lunatic的。肯定是lunatic做的非常爽,然后想rank这图的。 了解我xDD
01:09:342-6 7 我感觉没必要 感觉还好~ 再看看
02:32:967-11 建议ctrl G ctrl+g了前面的那个slider~
02:41:817-5 ^ 这样感觉更流畅好玩www ~~好球
04:06:567-5 nc added all
04:06:867-8 ^
04:07:167-11 ^
04:07:467-14 ^
04:07:767-17 ^

我尽力了._. 这图明显超出我的水平太多 ><

然后关于"Insane"的问题~ 个人觉得hard和Luna差距不是很大 所以感觉不是很有必要..>,< 谢谢mod~!!
sherrie__fay
mod req via in-game PM

[General]
  1. 考虑最后spinner音效+个whistle会亮一点
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:417 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:49:167 (1) - ^
  3. 00:50:067 (1) - ^
  4. 00:54:867 (1) - ^
  5. 01:26:967 (3) - 结尾finish
  6. 01:46:767 - +note
  7. 02:26:067 (4,5) - 最好改短滑条
  8. 03:16:767 (1) - 修形
  9. 04:16:297 (1) - whistle不好听

[Hard]
  1. 01:27:417 (1) - 开头finish
  2. 02:26:217 (1) - ^
  3. 02:46:467 (2) - 和02:45:267 (4) - 没有重叠好
  4. 02:59:967 - 少个note
  5. 03:22:617 (1) - 应该在03:23:967 - 结束
  6. 03:33:642 (1) - +finish
  7. 03:53:667 (10) - NC
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:43:617 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 01:11:742 (2,3) - 没有重叠好?还是故意的?
  3. 02:12:567 (7) - NC
  4. 02:25:467 (9) - ^
  5. 02:43:392 (2,3) - finish有点突兀
  6. 02:52:167 (2) - 没有重叠好
  7. 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - 这间距和排列绝逼unrankable OAO//
  8. 03:53:667 (7) - NC
  9. 04:12:417 (16) - NC
[BakaNA]
  1. 00:50:367 (1) - 1 grid left(grid level 4
  2. 00:54:042 (2,3,4) - 间距
  3. 01:07:017 (4) - 考虑放到2和3的垂直平分线上?
  4. 01:18:267 (5) - 没有重叠好
  5. 01:46:767 (5) - NC
  6. 01:58:317 (1) - 没有重叠好
  7. 02:10:167 (5) - NC(好大间距啊
  8. 03:30:267 (2) - 和03:29:667 (2) - 没有重叠好
  9. 03:34:617 (2) - NC应该在这里吧
音效不错 有的地方spacing真是瞎眼233
\鬼畜草莓/\草莓鬼畜/
Loneight
早灣 草莓醬 >w<
Request from In-game ~.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[A32's Normal]

  1. 00:52:767 (1) - 最後1個點x:444 y:64 ?~
  2. 00:54:267 (1,2,3) - 總覺得4個重疊對normal來講,不太好~看要不要分開?~不過咱以前好像有用過...
  3. 00:56:367 (2) - 咱覺得這笑臉歪了 lol (逃
  4. 02:19:467 (2) - x:256 y:284 ~? 若有改,後面2個也記得調一下~
  5. 01:32:367 (1) - 放在01:32:217好不 ;w;?! 像01:26:967 (3,1) - 的旋律
  6. 02:31:017 - +個note?~然後跟02:31:467 (1) - 交換NC ?
  7. 02:35:967 (1) - 移到02:35:817 - ?
  8. 02:42:567 (3) - 這個?!
  9. 02:52:767 (1,2) - 這樣?~
  10. 03:16:767 (1) - 第2個點x:52 y:208 ?
  11. 03:32:367 (2,3) - 如果你要對鼓聲 , 咱覺得應該是這樣的旋律
  12. 03:58:767 (1) - 放在03:58:617 -?~
  13. 04:08:367 (1) - 放在04:08:217 -?~

[Hard]

  1. 00:43:617 (2,3) - 這樣?~
  2. 00:53:217 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:02:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這感覺覺得有些偷懶 , +點變化?
  4. 01:18:417 (6,1,2) - 這樣?~
  5. 01:24:567 (3,4,5,6) - 這樣?~
  6. 01:52:017 (2,3) - 同00:43:617 (2,3) -
  7. 03:05:817 (6,7) - 這樣?~
  8. 03:08:217 (4,5) - ^

  9. 讓咱覺得有點像insane 這難度 ;w;

[Lunatic]

  1. 01:13:167 (7) - 最後1個點x:179 y:311 ?
  2. 01:15:567 (5) - 第3個點x:226 y:201
  3. 01:29:817 (1,2) - 這樣 ?~
  4. 01:39:417 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:57:717 (4) - 是咱的錯覺嘛 感覺歪了
  6. 02:01:917 (4) - NC
  7. 02:01:917 (4) - 這2個好多餘 re?!~ 有改記得調距離~
  8. 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - 請問這個...? 同距離 時間卻距離不同 , 咱在想你可能是要1/6 , 但 這裡很難看出是1/6 , 換成1個迴轉slider?
  9. 03:46:542 (13) - 刪掉?~
  10. 04:05:667 (5,1) - 這樣好不?~ 感覺旋律好一些

[BakaNA]

  1. 01:09:267 (1,1) - 其實咱想說 這裡..為何要加速
  2. 01:34:017 (3,1) - ctrl+G ?~~ flow比較順暢
  3. 02:23:367 (1) - re ?~
  4. 02:56:667 (4) - NC
  5. 03:53:592 (2) - re ?~
good song & good map & good luck, star ~
草莓醬加油~:3
咱的mod有點渣...對不起 ;w;
Flower
Hi~ qq request~

[General]
鉴于baka难度有两个红线前的note这个似乎是unrankable的所以offset要调到4017
然后spread太鬼畜 一个Normal 然后一个Insane 两个Extra 给我这种感觉

[a32]
00:06:759 ~ 00:41:967 - 建议这段SVx2,不然短的实在是令人看不清
00:43:167 (2) - NC?
00:45:417 (1) - 00:50:067 (1) - 00:54:867 (1) - 我觉得可以去掉NC方便读图当然结论还是随你
00:57:567 - 不加Break么
01:20:367 (4) - 按节奏应该是在01:20:217 开始的,所以删掉01:20:217 (3) 并且在此处开始
01:21:267 (5) - 同理,节奏应该在01:21:117
02:03:567 (1) - 在02:04:017 结束多好
02:19:467 (2) - stack 02:17:667 (3) - ?
03:17:967 (2) - 好像没摆好
03:34:167 (3) - 这形状可以吃电视

[Hard]
虽然我担心“你打得差不要怪我我做的难”但是200BPM各种跳各种遮挡确实已经比一般的Insane要难了 而且AR7读图困难 至少AR8比较好吧
00:43:617 (2,3) - 虽然我知道这是为了对称但是这个听着还是不是很舒服 毕竟是开头的突然加速 最好还是排列跟音效搭配起来比较好
01:26:967 (3,4,5) - Hard难度 200BPM跳成这样我觉得比较卓基 反正还是随你……
01:29:367 (7,8,9) - ^
01:34:167 (7,8,9) - ^
接下来还有一堆这样的
02:46:467 (2) - stack 02:45:267 (4) - ?

[Lunatic]
神图不看

[BAKA]
瞎了你们都会种草
00:53:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排列略奇怪 可以顺滑些
01:23:667 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

最后star
Purist_old
modreq from in-game pm :3

[General]
  1. BakaNA里的previewtime和别的不一样
  2. 这分明是normal-hard-Ex-Ex啊
  3. 鼠标党还没有死绝啊魂淡(/ # °Д°)/
[A32's Normal]
  1. 00:29:443(2)在00:30:117结束就可以了
  2. 00:45:417(1)remove nc?
  3. 00:50:067(1)^
  4. 00:54:867(1)^
  5. 00:57:867-01:02:067 这段没break好奇怪的感觉
  6. 01:17:967(3)试试这个呢
  7. 01:20:217(3)感觉去掉这个note比较好
  8. 02:17:667(3,2)没叠好
  9. 03:17:967(2)个人感觉这和03:15:567一样比较好
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:488(6)6可以比5声音小
  2. 01:14:967(4)来回听了几遍 觉得这个长slider挺别扭的
  3. 02:49:167(1)删掉2然后slider拉到02:49:767 当然只是建议orz
  4. 02:50:967(3)^
  5. 03:19:767(2)中间红点右移一格
  6. 04:17:907(6)还是个人建议orz
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:11:742(2,3)叠歪了 :3
  2. 01:19:617(1)x:268 y:280
  3. 01:37:017(1)remove nc?
  4. 01:39:117(1)^
[BakaNA]
  1. 好吧我光找note在哪就很费力了orz
  2. 00:44:217(4)叠歪了 :3
  3. 03:27:117(6)这个不摆成正方形么
差不多就这样 star~
Topic Starter
Strawberry
sherrie__fay

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via in-game PM

[General]
  1. 考虑最后spinner音效+个whistle会亮一点 嗯嗯嗯!!
[Hard]
  1. 01:27:417 (1) - 开头finish 好惹~
  2. 02:26:217 (1) - ^ ~
  3. 02:46:467 (2) - 和02:45:267 (4) - 没有重叠好 OAO! fixed!
  4. 02:59:967 - 少个note 诶~好了
  5. 03:22:617 (1) - 应该在03:23:967 - 结束 恩>_<
  6. 03:33:642 (1) - +finish added~
  7. 03:53:667 (10) - NC ~
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:43:617 (1) - 去掉NC 恩~
  2. 01:11:742 (2,3) - 没有重叠好?还是故意的? 没叠好 ><
  3. 02:12:567 (7) - NC added~
  4. 02:25:467 (9) - ^ ~
  5. 02:43:392 (2,3) - finish有点突兀 感觉还好~先保留着:3
  6. 02:52:167 (2) - 没有重叠好 叠好惹~
  7. 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - 这间距和排列绝逼unrankable OAO// \\OAO没snap好!!是1/6xDD
  8. 03:53:667 (7) - NC ~
  9. 04:12:417 (16) - NC ~
音效不错 有的地方spacing真是瞎眼233
\鬼畜草莓/\草莓鬼畜/
a32

pimpG wrote:

mod as requested :)


A32's normal

00:10:874 (3) - check the spacingfixed
00:14:302 (4,1) - using ds 0.9x here. intentional? it's fine~
00:29:439 (2) - slider end at 00:30:116?ok~
00:31:471 (1,2) - check the spacingit's fine~
00:37:565 (1) - remove repeat?sorry but i'd like to keep it~
00:39:597 (3) - remove this slider and maybe replace for a spinner?i just have a spinner a few seconds before this so i think it's unnecessary~
00:56:367- add a break after this slider and make the brak custom start at 00:58:167?add a break~ though I think a custom start is useless here 0.0
01:13:167 (2,3,1) - small mess in spacing here, intentional? better move (3) to x252 y224 imook~
01:46:767 - add a circle here with finish?nice~
01:49:167 - making the break start here would look niceok~
02:03:567 - just imosorry but i'd like to keep this~
03:11:367 (2) - slider end at 03:11:667 because fits the sound better and because its easier to hit for begginers?ok~
03:16:767 (1,2) - would look better if the sliders dont touch, imook~
03:44:667 (2) - strange slider (imo)i think it's fine~
03:46:767 (1) - remove whistle at start, maybe move it to the repeat?ok~
04:15:471 (1) - this note is suposed to be at the timeline at 04:15:481 right?fixed~
04:16:297 (1) - same as above, this slider has unsnapped slider end because of the bpm offset change. move it to 04:16:308 where the timeline startsfixed~

Athena Tennos wrote:

[a32's easy~]
nazi~OD-1 这个难度能当E么。orz。。感觉好危险。。。
  1. 00:08:131 (2,1) - (nazi)尾巴和1没覆盖好>_>改了下
  2. 00:22:667 (3,1) - ...这种梗可以用在easy里么。。orz对于新人太鬼畜了吧。orz这段bpm这么低没问题吧0.0
  3. 00:42:567 (1,1) - (nazi)建议改成slider。。变化BPM有点不好点。orz感觉还算好点吧
  4. 00:57:567 - add break time~加了
  5. 01:26:967 (3) - 这种不算unrank么?~我纠结这问题很久了。orz。。理由是第二次的折返箭头看不清。orz
  6. 02:36:267 (2,3) - (nazi)太近了。往上移两格~orz然后调整下。orz这个等其他人吐槽吧
  7. 03:16:767 (1,2) - ^ 这个还好~
  8. 04:22:657 - 消音>_>5%。。。~

lkx_shore wrote:

[A32's Normal]
HP2→3ok
02:16:767 (2,3,1,2,3) - 听起来不太好不太好改orz 而且对于nm来说这样打起来还行...

Twice wrote:

[A32's Normal]

AR+1? AR4的话玩起来很别扭,我觉得这难度可以做normal+了,用AR5的话...~既然是最低难度...

那么低的sv 建议间距可以用1.2,不然默认皮肤各种遮挡。(o口o)话说我终于知道为什么当初别人让我不要用这种粘起来的方式作图了,果断是

考虑到了默认300的问题吗,这种问题可以用自制皮肤来解决~

00:30:791-3 嗯...normal用这种遮挡不太恰当?0.0感觉还好啊0.0
00:42:867-1 如果是我的话会取消nc,然后在00:43:167-2 这里nc↓以下all fixed
00:44:367-1 取消nc
00:50:067-1 取消nc 我认为没啥意义o.o
03:22:617 开头移到后面的红线,我认为那样就够了-w-


sherrie__fay wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:45:417 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:49:167 (1) - ^
  3. 00:50:067 (1) - ^
  4. 00:54:867 (1) - ^
  5. 01:26:967 (3) - 结尾finish
  6. 01:46:767 - +note
  7. 02:26:067 (4,5) - 最好改短滑条这个打起来不太难吧
  8. 03:16:767 (1) - 修形
  9. 04:16:297 (1) - whistle不好听感觉还行0.0 (除这两个外all fixed

l1106188 wrote:

[A32's Normal]

  1. 00:52:767 (1) - 最後1個點x:444 y:64 ?~ nice~
  2. 00:54:267 (1,2,3) - 總覺得4個重疊對normal來講,不太好~看要不要分開?~不過咱以前好像有用過...这个大丈夫~
  3. 00:56:367 (2) - 咱覺得這笑臉歪了 lol (逃不会拉slider;_;(哭
  4. 02:19:467 (2) - x:256 y:284 ~? 若有改,後面2個也記得調一下~保留0.0
  5. 01:32:367 (1) - 放在01:32:217好不 ;w;?! 像01:26:967 (3,1) - 的旋律想了想还是不改了...这么改有点难...
  6. 02:31:017 - +個note?~然後跟02:31:467 (1) - 交換NC ?这个可以~
  7. 02:35:967 (1) - 移到02:35:817 - ?保留...
  8. 02:42:567 (3) - 這個?!好~
  9. 02:52:767 (1,2) - 這樣?~fixed~
  10. 03:16:767 (1) - 第2個點x:52 y:208 ?做了些更改0.0
  11. 03:32:367 (2,3) - 如果你要對鼓聲 , 咱覺得應該是這樣的旋律fixed!
  12. 03:58:767 (1) - 放在03:58:617 -?~对不起;_;
  13. 04:08:367 (1) - 放在04:08:217 -?~ok~

Flower wrote:

Hi~ qq request~

[General]
鉴于baka难度有两个红线前的note这个似乎是unrankable的所以offset要调到4017
然后spread太鬼畜 一个Normal 然后一个Insane 两个Extra 给我这种感觉

[a32]
00:06:759 ~ 00:41:967 - 建议这段SVx2,不然短的实在是令人看不清normal这速度还行吧...
00:43:167 (2) - NC?ok
00:45:417 (1) - 00:50:067 (1) - 00:54:867 (1) - 我觉得可以去掉NC方便读图当然结论还是随你fixed
00:57:567 - 不加Break么ok
01:20:367 (4) - 按节奏应该是在01:20:217 开始的,所以删掉01:20:217 (3) 并且在此处开始ok
01:21:267 (5) - 同理,节奏应该在01:21:117 这个不改...
02:03:567 (1) - 在02:04:017 结束多好ok
02:19:467 (2) - stack 02:17:667 (3) - ?
03:17:967 (2) - 好像没摆好fixed a bit
03:34:167 (3) - 这形状可以吃电视改了

Purist wrote:

[A32's Normal]
  1. 00:29:443(2)在00:30:117结束就可以了
  2. 00:45:417(1)remove nc?
  3. 00:50:067(1)^
  4. 00:54:867(1)^
  5. 00:57:867-01:02:067 这段没break好奇怪的感觉
  6. 01:17:967(3)试试这个呢 现在这还好0.0
  7. 01:20:217(3)感觉去掉这个note比较好
  8. 02:17:667(3,2)没叠好
  9. 03:17:967(2)个人感觉这和03:15:567一样比较好 那个梗有点难多用不太好...(其余all fixed


Thanks a lot for modding~




http://puu.sh/1k5mu
Topic Starter
Strawberry
l18

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 草莓醬 >w<
Request from In-game ~.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[Hard]

  1. 00:43:617 (2,3) - 這樣?~ 感觉还好~不太想改><
  2. 00:53:217 (2,3) - ^ ~
  3. 01:02:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這感覺覺得有些偷懶 , +點變化? Q.Q
  4. 01:18:417 (6,1,2) - 這樣?~ 试了感觉还是先保留自己的><
  5. 01:24:567 (3,4,5,6) - 這樣?~ ~
  6. 01:52:017 (2,3) - 同00:43:617 (2,3) - Q.Q
  7. 03:05:817 (6,7) - 這樣?~ Dx
  8. 03:08:217 (4,5) - ^

  9. 讓咱覺得有點像insane 這難度 ;w;

[Lunatic]

  1. 01:13:167 (7) - 最後1個點x:179 y:311 ? 哇好仔细><~ 改惹~
  2. 01:15:567 (5) - 第3個點x:226 y:201 fixed!!
  3. 01:29:817 (1,2) - 這樣 ?~ 啊啊~
  4. 01:39:417 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:57:717 (4) - 是咱的錯覺嘛 感覺歪了 调了一下
  6. 02:01:917 (4) - NC 嗯嗯
  7. 02:01:917 (4) - 這2個好多餘 re?!~ 有改記得調距離~ :O?
  8. 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - 請問這個...? 同距離 時間卻距離不同 , 咱在想你可能是要1/6 , 但 這裡很難看出是1/6 , 換成1個迴轉slider? fix成1/6惹;_; 这里spacing有加大应该还好..
  9. 03:46:542 (13) - 刪掉?~ 感觉删掉不够燃:3
  10. 04:05:667 (5,1) - 這樣好不?~ 感覺旋律好一些 好!!! ><
good song & good map & good luck, star ~ 灰常感谢!!~~
草莓醬加油~:3
咱的mod有點渣...對不起 ;w; 哪有啦超赞的mod!!

Flower

Flower wrote:

Hi~ qq request~

[General]
鉴于baka难度有两个红线前的note这个似乎是unrankable的所以offset要调到4017 恩这个改了
然后spread太鬼畜 一个Normal 然后一个Insane 两个Extra 给我这种感觉

[Hard]
虽然我担心“你打得差不要怪我我做的难”但是200BPM各种跳各种遮挡确实已经比一般的Insane要难了 而且AR7读图困难 至少AR8比较好吧 想平衡一下难度;_;
00:43:617 (2,3) - 虽然我知道这是为了对称但是这个听着还是不是很舒服 毕竟是开头的突然加速 最好还是排列跟音效搭配起来比较好 咱再想想><
01:26:967 (3,4,5) - Hard难度 200BPM跳成这样我觉得比较卓基 反正还是随你…… T.T也不是很频繁啦其实..
01:29:367 (7,8,9) - ^
01:34:167 (7,8,9) - ^
接下来还有一堆这样的
02:46:467 (2) - stack 02:45:267 (4) - ? 恩~

[Lunatic]
神图不看 Q3Q

最后star

Purist

Purist wrote:

modreq from in-game pm :3

[General]
  1. BakaNA里的previewtime和别的不一样 fixed~
  2. 这分明是normal-hard-Ex-Ex啊 QAQ
  3. 鼠标党还没有死绝啊魂淡(/ # °Д°)/
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:488(6)6可以比5声音小 改了~(包括I里面的)
  2. 01:14:967(4)来回听了几遍 觉得这个长slider挺别扭的感觉还好Q.Q 先留着
  3. 02:49:167(1)删掉2然后slider拉到02:49:767 当然只是建议orz 恩..
  4. 02:50:967(3)^
  5. 03:19:767(2)中间红点右移一格 好~
  6. 04:17:907(6)还是个人建议orz Q.Q没想好怎么摆~先留着
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:11:742(2,3)叠歪了 :3 改好了~
  2. 01:19:617(1)x:268 y:280 嗯嗯
  3. 01:37:017(1)remove nc? done~
  4. 01:39:117(1)^
差不多就这样 star~ 谢谢>_<

thank you all guys for really really helpful mods and stars ❤~
updated (including added -baby strawberry-'s skin
Rotte
瞎了草莓你又种草,各种神图

A32's Normal

00:38:956 (2) - set the last slider point to 256|120
00:52:767 (1) - set the second slider point to 492|116 & the last point to 456|60
00:57:867 - insert break time
01:20:067 (2) - move to 228|220
01:23:967 (1) - maybe you can adjust according to this example

02:32:967 (2) - point 2 276|256, point 3 232|260
03:16:767 (1) - slider point 1 56|212 point 2 36|276



能力不足,hard以后看来看去最后果断什么都看不出
_(:3」∠)_
神图哥你好
x847606653
长懒看(其实是没看出啥来,star
Topic Starter
Strawberry
> .< 谢谢star~
Chewin
Hi Strawberry :3
Here's my mod for your ticket.

[General]

  1. Remove AudioLeadIn from all diffs.
  2. Set PreviewTime: 96942 in "BakaNA" diff like the others.
  3. Inconsistency in red timing sections. You must use the same red lines in all diffs.
  4. I think the spread Normal > Hard is too huge. I'd rename the "A32's Normal" to "A32's Easy" mapping a new Normal diff. Or, more simply, map an Easy diff.
  5. Since you are using a custom hitcircle you must add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" into "Colours" field of each .osu file.
[A32's Normal]

  1. I'm going to mod it as a Normal diff but if you decide to follow what I wrote in general about to rename it in Easy I will mod it again as an Easy diff.
  2. 00:17:988 (1) - Unsnapped
  3. 00:39:619 (3) - 5% volume slider is unrankable. Increase it till at least 20%
  4. 00:21:353 (2) - This slider should be reduced by 1/2
  5. 02:26:067 (4,5) - Change with 1/2 slider?
  6. 00:31:471 (1) - Unsnapped
  7. 00:31:809 (2) - Unsnapped
  8. 00:32:148 (3) - Unsnapped
  9. 00:32:486 (4) - Unsnapped
  10. 00:32:825 (5) - Unsnapped slider's head
  11. 00:32:825 (5) - Unsnapped slider's tail
  12. 00:34:162 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end
  13. 02:55:467 (1,2) - Switch new combo and also removing it from 02:57:267 (1)
  14. 02:59:967 Extend break time till here
  15. 03:15:717 (3) - Why this slider? It follows nothing. Remove it and just add a circle on 03:15:867.
  16. 03:32:367 (2,3,1,2) - This pattern is too confusing for a Normal diff.
  17. 03:52:767 (3) - Is this whistle intentional? If not, remove it because it sounds bad IMO
  18. 04:16:308 (1) - ^ (on the slider body)
[Hard]

  1. HP and OD 6
  2. 00:17:988 (1) - Unsnapped slider's start and end
  3. 00:26:409 (6) - New combo?
  4. 00:39:289 - According to HP 6 you need to use a break here
  5. 01:13:167 (5) - Remove whistle from slider body
  6. 01:34:167 (7,8,9,1) - Honestly I think this pattern is enough awkward to play
  7. 02:32:967 (7,8,9,1) - ^
[Lunatic]

  1. 00:57:567 (10) - I'd use New combo here :3
  2. 01:08:517 (1) - Remove new combo. You have already used it on the previous circle
  3. 01:19:617 (1) - ^
  4. 01:28:467 (1) - ^
  5. 01:33:867 (1) - ^
  6. 01:37:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream follows nothing.
  7. 02:31:767 (7) - This slider touches the HP bar
  8. 03:32:592 (7) - New combo
  9. 03:55:017 (9) - ^
  10. 03:57:567 (8) - ^
  11. Funny, but totally overmapped. lol :\
[BakaNA]

  1. 00:16:488 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end
  2. 00:57:567 (1) - Add whistle
  3. 01:12:567 (1) - Remove whistle from slider body for consistency
  4. 01:14:217 (2) - This reverse arrow is covered by 01:13:392 (4,5)'s hitbursts and it's unrankable. Fix it
  5. 02:21:867 (1) - I'd remove this new combo because follow points are always helpful to read overmapped elements
  6. This diff is really awesome, but so hard >.<
That's it, good luck strawberry. :3
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Chewin wrote:

Hi Strawberry :3
Here's my mod for your ticket.

[General]

  1. Remove AudioLeadIn from all diffs. oh yea~
  2. Set PreviewTime: 96942 in "BakaNA" diff like the others. fixed~
  3. Inconsistency in red timing sections. You must use the same red lines in all diffs. >< i forgot this..fixed
  4. I think the spread Normal > Hard is too huge. I'd rename the "A32's Normal" to "A32's Easy" mapping a new Normal diff. Or, more simply, map an Easy diff. ok~..i'm considering
  5. Since you are using a custom hitcircle you must add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" into "Colours" field of each .osu file. > <fixed
[Hard]

  1. HP and OD 6 yea~
  2. 00:17:988 (1) - Unsnapped slider's start and end resnapped :3
  3. 00:26:409 (6) - New combo? added~
  4. 00:39:289 - According to HP 6 you need to use a break here added~
  5. 01:13:167 (5) - Remove whistle from slider bodyremoved
  6. 01:34:167 (7,8,9,1) - Honestly I think this pattern is enough awkward to play changed the pattern~
  7. 02:32:967 (7,8,9,1) - ^ ~
[Lunatic]

  1. 00:57:567 (10) - I'd use New combo here :3 added :3
  2. 01:08:517 (1) - Remove new combo. You have already used it on the previous circle lol removed~
  3. 01:19:617 (1) - ^ ~
  4. 01:28:467 (1) - ^ ~
  5. 01:33:867 (1) - ^ ~
  6. 01:37:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream follows nothing. changed to slider
  7. 02:31:767 (7) - This slider touches the HP bar changed the slider's shape
  8. 03:32:592 (7) - New combo yea
  9. 03:55:017 (9) - ^ ~
  10. 03:57:567 (8) - ^ ~
  11. Funny, but totally overmapped. lol :\ xD
That's it, good luck strawberry. :3 that's very helpful!~ thank you Chewin ><
a32

-[NYAN]- wrote:

A32's Normal

00:38:956 (2) - set the last slider point to 256|120sorry no change~I think the current one is fine~
00:52:767 (1) - set the second slider point to 492|116 & the last point to 456|60fixed :3
00:57:867 - insert break time:3
01:20:067 (2) - move to 228|220感觉spacing有点大orz
01:23:967 (1) - maybe you can adjust according to this example
ok~
02:32:967 (2) - point 2 276|256, point 3 232|260fixed
03:16:767 (1) - slider point 1 56|212 point 2 36|276ok~
[A32's Normal]

  1. I'm going to mod it as a Normal diff but if you decide to follow what I wrote in general about to rename it in Easy I will mod it again as an Easy diff.
  2. 00:17:988 (1) - Unsnappedfixed
  3. 00:39:619 (3) - 5% volume slider is unrankable. Increase it till at least 20%ok
  4. 00:21:353 (2) - This slider should be reduced by 1/2ok
  5. 02:26:067 (4,5) - Change with 1/2 slider?fixed~
  6. 00:31:471 (1) - Unsnapped fixed all unsnapped problems~
  7. 00:31:809 (2) - Unsnapped
  8. 00:32:148 (3) - Unsnapped
  9. 00:32:486 (4) - Unsnapped
  10. 00:32:825 (5) - Unsnapped slider's head
  11. 00:32:825 (5) - Unsnapped slider's tail
  12. 00:34:162 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end
  13. 02:55:467 (1,2) - Switch new combo and also removing it from 02:57:267 (1)fixed
  14. 02:59:967 Extend break time till hereok
  15. 03:15:717 (3) - Why this slider? It follows nothing. Remove it and just add a circle on 03:15:867.I can hear a sound here in the music,so I could keep it~
  16. 03:32:367 (2,3,1,2) - This pattern is too confusing for a Normal diff.fixed a bit~
  17. 03:52:767 (3) - Is this whistle intentional? If not, remove it because it sounds bad IMOok~
  18. 04:16:308 (1) - ^ (on the slider body)fixed~
[/quote]


http://puu.sh/1kZn0
a32
Topic Starter
Strawberry
updated~ and added jomnhnk's Taiko Muzukashii&Oni
Naryuga
Taiko mod requested jomnhnk

[General]
  1. You forget to add "jomnhnk" on tags
Since jom is a Japanese, so my mod in Taiko diffs in Japanese.

ぜんぶ提案です
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tagsに"jomnhnk"を追加
  2. 00:44:517 (4) - ひとつ右の白Tickへ移動、うしろの音に合います
  3. 00:54:717 (46,47) - 削除, ここの単発の連続からの3連打は難しいと思います。以降特に説明なければ難易度をやさしくするためのnote削除だとおもってください._.
  4. 00:56:817 (57) - 削除
  5. 00:57:192 (60) - ^
  6. 01:00:867 (72) - ^
  7. 01:06:717 (92) - 後ろに音もないのでこれも消していいと思います
  8. 01:08:967 (103) - d ばしっと入れましょう、 01:11:367 (112) - 01:13:767 (121) - も同じく
  9. 01:29:667 (192) - を削除するか、01:39:267 - にkを入れるかした方が良いです。後者だけ消すのは違和感がありました
  10. 01:35:517 (223,224) - 削除
  11. 01:43:167 (263) - 次の赤線に移動
  12. 01:46:167 (278) - これを消すか、次の白線にまで動かしてもいいとおもいます。
  13. 01:48:567 - と 01:48:717 - add k
  14. 02:14:967 (385) - K(大) ?
  15. 02:41:967 (86) - 01:43:167 (263) - と同じように次の赤線に移動
  16. 02:59:967 - ここ以降の空白を埋めてください、簡単にしてもいいので
  17. 03:30:267 (92) - D?
  18. 03:32:517 (104) - 削除
  19. 03:32:967 (107) - ^
  20. 03:34:392 (117) - ^
  21. 03:42:717 (160,161,162) - ddd ---> d k?
  22. 03:54:117 (219) - K?
  23. 04:19:357 (324) - Oniと同じくスピナー?
[Oni]
  1. 00:43:167 (1,5,9,14,17) - これらをkに変えてもいいとおもいます
  2. 00:47:742 (43) - 削除、すこしオーバーです
  3. 00:51:567 - add d
  4. 01:08:367 - add d
  5. 01:09:567 (162) - d
  6. 01:11:067 (169,170,171,172) - この部分は1/3のリズムではありません。 1/2にするか、01:10:917 - から1/4tickで kkk k dとしてみてはどうでしょう? 02:12:267 (128,129,130,131) - も同様に.
  7. 01:21:117 (222,223) - K K?
  8. 01:37:092 (346,347) - 削除,ここに曲の方の空白があります
  9. 01:40:617 (375) - K?
  10. 01:46:767 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436) - GJ :)
  11. 01:50:067 (443,444,445) - d k d
  12. 02:01:917 - add d
  13. 02:14:367 (138,139,140) - K K K :3
  14. 02:44:217 - add d
  15. 02:44:817 - ここからddkkddddddk? KIAIの最後でもありますし、drumの音もあるのでnotesを置く方が盛り上がります
  16. 02:58:917 - add d
  17. 02:59:067 (442,443,444) - K K K
  18. 03:04:167 - add d
  19. 03:32:367 (1) - ここをスピナーにしてしまうのは、後ろに格好いいdrumがあるのでちょっともったいない気がします
Good luck! :3
Cihyaa
※japanese

jomさんにmod頼まれたので登場します

d=ドン
k=カッ
D=ドン(大)
K=カッ(大)
dlt=削除

[jom's Taiko Muzukasii]

MOD
  1. 00:43:167 , 00:43:617 , 00:44:067 D
  2. 00:45:417 dlt
  3. 00:45:567 , 00:46:467 D
  4. 00:46:017 K
  5. 00:46:917 (10,11,12) - ここを3打にするならば、 00:44:517 コイツも3打に繋げたらどうかね、それか消すか
  6. 3打の中を消した場合、 00:47:067 D
  7. 00:47:367 D
  8. 00:52:617 dlt
  9. 00:52:767 D
  10. 00:53:217 D
  11. 00:54:792 コイツを 00:54:192 に持って行く
  12. 00:54:267 d
  13. 00:54:417 dlt
  14. 00:54:567 k
  15. 00:54:717 dlt
  16. 00:55:167 , 00:55:617 D
  17. 00:56:067 K
  18. 00:58:017 d
  19. 00:59:667 dlt
  20. 00:59:067 k
  21. 01:08:817 , 01:08:967 , 01:11:217 , 01:11:367 後ろの音にあわせるなら、ここに音は入れないで。
  22. 01:07:467 ~ 01:15:267 k
  23. 01:15:567 , 01:15:867 K
  24. 01:16:317 k
  25. 01:16:617 d
  26. 01:16:767 D
  27. 01:31:317 k
  28. 01:31:467 d
  29. 01:41:817 d
  30. 01:43:167 を 01:43:317 に移動
  31. 02:44:667 d
  32. 01:44:967 dlt
  33. 01:45:417 dlt
  34. 01:45:867 dlt
  35. 01:46:167 dlt
  36. 01:48:567 , 01:48:717 k
  37. 01:50:967 から後ろらへんは、最初と似ているので、ハブき
  38. 02:26:067 k
  39. 02:35:817 d
  40. 02:40:617 d
  41. 02:41:967 を 02:42:117 に移動
  42. 02:44:967 dlt
  43. 03:08:967 からまたあのメロディなので省略
  44. 03:18:267 dlt
  45. 03:31:917 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - これは流石に無いww↓へ
  46. 03:32:367 dlt ↑から
  47. 03:32:667 k ↑から
  48. 03:32:817 dlt ↑から
  49. 03:33:117 k ↑から
  50. 03:33:267 dlt ↑から
  51. 03:33:717 dlt ↑から
  52. 03:33:867 d ↑から
  53. 03:39:417 d
  54. 03:44:067 k
  55. 03:44:217 d
  56. 03:48:867 k
  57. 03:49:017 d
  58. 03:54:117 D ※ここ一番重要※
  59. 03:53:667 k
  60. 03:53:817 d
  61. 03:57:117 dlt
  62. 03:57:717 dlt
  63. 03:58:317 dlt
  64. 04:03:417 d
  65. 04:08:067 k
  66. 04:08:217 d
  67. 04:08:067 d
  68. 04:08:217 k

    補足:
  69. 01:27:267 (174,175) - , 01:32:067 (198,199) - , 01:36:867 (223,224) - , 01:41:667 (247,248) - ,
    02:26:067 (1,2) - , 02:30:867 (25,26) - , 02:35:667 (51,52) - , 02:40:467 (77,78) - , 03:34:467 (114,115) - ,
    03:39:267 (138,139) - , 03:44:067 (163,164) - , 03:48:867 (188,189) - ,03:53:667 (213,214) - , 03:58:467 (238,239) -
    04:03:417 (261) - , 04:08:067 (278,279) -
    で、最初の01:27:267 (174,175) - が 「カ ド」だったので、全て「カ ド」と設定しろと言いましたが、音的に「ド カ」だと思うので、
    「ド カ」にしたほうがいいのかもしれません、
    また、 04:03:417 (261) - は、後ろだけの音なので、「カ」がいいかもしれません。

RANK GOGO ~
Topic Starter
Strawberry
thank you guys for mod~~ updated for jom~
edit:fixed tags
jomnhnk

Naryuga wrote:

Taiko mod requested jomnhnk

[General]
  1. You forget to add "jomnhnk" on tags
Since jom is a Japanese, so my mod in Taiko diffs in Japanese.

ぜんぶ提案です
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tagsに"jomnhnk"を追加
  2. 00:44:517 (4) - ひとつ右の白Tickへ移動、うしろの音に合います
  3. 00:54:717 (46,47) - 削除, ここの単発の連続からの3連打は難しいと思います。以降特に説明なければ難易度をやさしくするためのnote削除だとおもってください._.
  4. 00:56:817 (57) - 削除
  5. 00:57:192 (60) - ^
  6. 01:00:867 (72) - ^
  7. 01:06:717 (92) - 後ろに音もないのでこれも消していいと思います
  8. 01:08:967 (103) - d ばしっと入れましょう、 01:11:367 (112) - 01:13:767 (121) - も同じく
  9. 01:29:667 (192) - を削除するか、01:39:267 - にkを入れるかした方が良いです。後者だけ消すのは違和感がありました
  10. 01:35:517 (223,224) - 削除
  11. 01:43:167 (263) - 次の赤線に移動
  12. 01:46:167 (278) - これを消すか、次の白線にまで動かしてもいいとおもいます。
  13. 01:48:567 - と 01:48:717 - add k
  14. 02:14:967 (385) - K(大) ?
  15. 02:41:967 (86) - 01:43:167 (263) - と同じように次の赤線に移動
  16. 02:59:967 - ここ以降の空白を埋めてください、簡単にしてもいいので
  17. 03:30:267 (92) - D?
  18. 03:32:517 (104) - 削除
  19. 03:32:967 (107) - ^
  20. 03:34:392 (117) - ^
  21. 03:42:717 (160,161,162) - ddd ---> d k?
  22. 03:54:117 (219) - K?
  23. 04:19:357 (324) - Oniと同じくスピナー?
[Oni]
  1. 00:43:167 (1,5,9,14,17) - これらをkに変えてもいいとおもいます
  2. 00:47:742 (43) - 削除、すこしオーバーです
  3. 00:51:567 - add d
  4. 01:08:367 - add d
  5. 01:09:567 (162) - d
  6. 01:11:067 (169,170,171,172) - この部分は1/3のリズムではありません。 1/2にするか、01:10:917 - から1/4tickで kkk k dとしてみてはどうでしょう? 02:12:267 (128,129,130,131) - も同様に.
  7. 01:21:117 (222,223) - K K?
  8. 01:37:092 (346,347) - 削除,ここに曲の方の空白があります
  9. 01:40:617 (375) - K?
  10. 01:46:767 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436) - GJ :)
  11. 01:50:067 (443,444,445) - d k d
  12. 02:01:917 - add d
  13. 02:14:367 (138,139,140) - K K K :3
  14. 02:44:217 - add d
  15. 02:44:817 - ここからddkkddddddk? KIAIの最後でもありますし、drumの音もあるのでnotesを置く方が盛り上がります
    ↑変速部分と重なり見えなかったので変速部分を1つずらしました。
  16. 02:58:917 - add d
  17. 02:59:067 (442,443,444) - K K K
  18. 03:04:167 - add d
  19. 03:32:367 (1) - ここをスピナーにしてしまうのは、後ろに格好いいdrumがあるのでちょっともったいない気がします
↑オブジェクトを置きました。良ければ確認してください!

Good luck! :3
ありがとうございました!!譜面Oni、Muzu共に更新しました!詳細は黄緑で書いております・
jomnhnk

Cihyaa wrote:

※japanese

jomさんにmod頼まれたので登場します

d=ドン
k=カッ
D=ドン(大)
K=カッ(大)
dlt=削除

[jom's Taiko Muzukasii]

MOD
  1. 00:43:167 , 00:43:617 , 00:44:067 D
  2. 00:45:417 dlt
  3. 00:45:567 , 00:46:467 D
  4. 00:46:017 K
  5. 00:46:917 (10,11,12) - ここを3打にするならば、 00:44:517 コイツも3打に繋げたらどうかね、それか消すか
  6. 3打の中を消した場合、 00:47:067 D
  7. 00:47:367 D
  8. 00:52:617 dlt
  9. 00:52:767 D
  10. 00:53:217 D
  11. 00:54:792 コイツを 00:54:192 に持って行く
  12. 00:54:267 d
  13. 00:54:417 dlt
  14. 00:54:567 k
  15. 00:54:717 dlt
  16. 00:55:167 , 00:55:617 D
  17. 00:56:067 K
  18. 00:58:017 d
  19. 00:59:667 dlt
  20. 00:59:067 k
  21. 01:08:817 , 01:08:967 , 01:11:217 , 01:11:367 後ろの音にあわせるなら、ここに音は入れないで。
  22. 01:07:467 ~ 01:15:267 k
  23. 01:15:567 , 01:15:867 K
  24. 01:16:317 k
  25. 01:16:617 d
  26. 01:16:767 D
  27. 01:31:317 k
  28. 01:31:467 d
  29. 01:41:817 d
  30. 01:43:167 を 01:43:317 に移動
  31. 02:44:667 d
  32. 01:44:967 dlt
  33. 01:45:417 dlt
  34. 01:45:867 dlt
  35. 01:46:167 dlt
  36. 01:48:567 , 01:48:717 k
  37. 01:50:967 から後ろらへんは、最初と似ているので、ハブき
  38. 02:26:067 k
  39. 02:35:817 d
  40. 02:40:617 d
  41. 02:41:967 を 02:42:117 に移動
  42. 02:44:967 dlt
  43. 03:08:967 からまたあのメロディなので省略
  44. 03:18:267 dlt
  45. 03:31:917 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - これは流石に無いww↓へ
  46. 03:32:367 dlt ↑から
  47. 03:32:667 k ↑から
  48. 03:32:817 dlt ↑から
  49. 03:33:117 k ↑から
  50. 03:33:267 dlt ↑から
  51. 03:33:717 dlt ↑から
  52. 03:33:867 d ↑から
  53. 03:39:417 d
  54. 03:44:067 k
  55. 03:44:217 d
  56. 03:48:867 k
  57. 03:49:017 d
  58. 03:54:117 D ※ここ一番重要※
  59. 03:53:667 k
  60. 03:53:817 d
  61. 03:57:117 dlt
  62. 03:57:717 dlt
  63. 03:58:317 dlt
  64. 04:03:417 d
  65. 04:08:067 k
  66. 04:08:217 d
  67. 04:08:067 d
  68. 04:08:217 k

    補足:
  69. 01:27:267 (174,175) - , 01:32:067 (198,199) - , 01:36:867 (223,224) - , 01:41:667 (247,248) - ,
    02:26:067 (1,2) - , 02:30:867 (25,26) - , 02:35:667 (51,52) - , 02:40:467 (77,78) - , 03:34:467 (114,115) - ,
    03:39:267 (138,139) - , 03:44:067 (163,164) - , 03:48:867 (188,189) - ,03:53:667 (213,214) - , 03:58:467 (238,239) -
    04:03:417 (261) - , 04:08:067 (278,279) -
    で、最初の01:27:267 (174,175) - が 「カ ド」だったので、全て「カ ド」と設定しろと言いましたが、音的に「ド カ」だと思うので、
    「ド カ」にしたほうがいいのかもしれません、
    また、 04:03:417 (261) - は、後ろだけの音なので、「カ」がいいかもしれません。
↑ドカにしました!

RANK GOGO ~
ナリュガさんのアレンジにて加えて9割ほど採用して更新しました!ありがとうございました~!\(^o^)/
Saten
[General]
I'd prefer the regular approachcircle.png. The current one makes it hard to see at times

vs

[⑨]
Tickrate 2? I find it very fitting imo
01:03:567 (1,2,3,4) - rotate this -90° (minus yes) the pattern looks better imo
03:07:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - flip vertically?

[Lunatic]
00:47:767 (8,9) - oh, I never noticed that this was 1/3. Put a little more spacing?
01:21:417 (9,10,1) - NC on (9) instead?
01:38:667 (1) - why would you hide this behind a slider?
01:40:167 (2) - well this is kinda different because the delay is 1/1 so I guess this is alright
01:46:617 (1) - why NC?
03:32:517 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead
03:47:067 (2) - again, why so hidden D: Shot sliders are hard to notice imo
04:10:992 (2,3) - change this part to normal but the finish should still be soft
04:14:721 (6) - not sure if this counts as unsnapped slider-end

[Hard]
imo you should use AR 8. Much smoother
01:55:767 (5) - I expected it to just have 1 repeat
02:59:067 (7) - soft finish instead
03:53:067 (7,8) - try avoid letting them overlap?
04:19:657 (1) - whistle and 25% at the end, just like Lunatic

[A32]
00:48:567 (2,3,4) - you should avoid having this kind of pattern (circle, slider, slider/circle)
01:23:367 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - you should avoid mixing stuff like this
01:29:667 (7,1) - NC on (7) instead
01:39:267 (5,1) - sudden change of spacing (2,0x)
01:44:067 (2,1) - this looks just like 1/2 due to the previous issue. please avoid playing with spacing on normals
02:52:767 (1) - This slider feels weird. This should end at 02:53:367 -
03:15:267 (2,3,4) - avoid patterns like this
03:32:367 (2,3) - kinda confusing
03:35:367 (2,3,4) - again, avoid this (there are more stuff like this further on)

[Twice]
You should remove all the useless green timing sections at the beginning
01:27:417 (1,2) - this plays weird
01:34:167 (3,1) - why 1,0x? spacing here?
02:59:967 (1,1) - I would try to avoid this
03:36:567 (3,1) - why 1,0x spacing here?
03:41:367 (3,1) - ^


I guess that's all
Good luck!
a32

Saten wrote:

[A32]
00:48:567 (2,3,4) - you should avoid having this kind of pattern (circle, slider, slider/circle)keep on this...
01:23:367 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - you should avoid mixing stuff like thisfine imo...some challenges should be included in Normal I think
01:29:667 (7,1) - NC on (7) insteadfixed
01:39:267 (5,1) - sudden change of spacing (2,0x)fixed
01:44:067 (2,1) - this looks just like 1/2 due to the previous issue. please avoid playing with spacing on normalsI just forgot to change the spacing orz
02:52:767 (1) - This slider feels weird. This should end at 02:53:367 - fine imo
03:15:267 (2,3,4) - avoid patterns like thisfixed a bit
03:32:367 (2,3) - kinda confusingI can't find a better one for this rhythm :o
03:35:367 (2,3,4) - again, avoid this (there are more stuff like this further on)They have good effect I think...
Thanks a lot for modding,Satensan:3
http://puu.sh/1nrPW
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Saten wrote:

[General]
I'd prefer the regular approachcircle.png. The current one makes it hard to see at times

vs thanks~

[Lunatic]
00:47:767 (8,9) - oh, I never noticed that this was 1/3. Put a little more spacing? yea, fixed
01:21:417 (9,10,1) - NC on (9) instead? fixed~
01:38:667 (1) - why would you hide this behind a slider? it's funny to play and not really confuse imo so.. no change atm~sry
01:40:167 (2) - well this is kinda different because the delay is 1/1 so I guess this is alright ~
01:46:617 (1) - why NC? ah removed :3
03:32:517 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead changed~
03:47:067 (2) - again, why so hidden D: Shot sliders are hard to notice imo ^
04:10:992 (2,3) - change this part to normal but the finish should still be soft there r just 2 circle and all them in finish so idk how to change~ so keep now > <
04:14:721 (6) - not sure if this counts as unsnapped slider-end Dx

[Hard]
imo you should use AR 8. Much smoother changed:3
01:55:767 (5) - I expected it to just have 1 repeat ^
02:59:067 (7) - soft finish instead ok~
03:53:067 (7,8) - try avoid letting them overlap? fixed
04:19:657 (1) - whistle and 25% at the end, just like Lunatic i forgot it x3

I guess that's all thank you :3
Good luck!
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Remove letterboxing during breaks.
Use alternating colours next time~

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:53:667 - K
00:55:617 - K
02:18:417 - d
02:23:967 - replace with spinner

[jom's Taiko Oni]
no problems~

very good map~
good luck with rank~
Jinyan
love the music, and especial the taiko oni >_< >_< >_<
Accel World
Fixed \:3/
jomnhnk

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Remove letterboxing during breaks.
Use alternating colours next time~

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:53:667 - K OK
00:55:617 - K OK
02:18:417 - d OK
02:23:967 - replace with spinner OK

[jom's Taiko Oni]
no problems~

very good map~
good luck with rank~
Thank you taiko mod!!! i'll change the map~ Oni…Thank u very much!!


Now!
Changed!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Star Stream
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Tags
  2. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections
[Easy]
  1. 00:44:667 (5,1) - pretty confusing for easiest diff, consider finding other way plz
  2. 01:16:767 (1,1) - i can't recommend putting over 3hit-slider for an easiest diff.. maybe you could use 4 3hit-sliders for this part
  3. 01:35:967 (1,2) - unexcepted 3/2 beat, maybe combine them as a slider to be read well
  4. 01:45:717 - useless green lines
  5. 02:15:567 (1,1) - same as 01:16:767 (1,1) -
  6. 02:23:667 (2) - y:376 for better movement?
  7. 02:26:967 (2) - sound doesn't make sense, shorten by 1/2 and add a circle at 02:28:167 -
  8. 03:04:167 (1,2) - combine as a slider to make easier to play?
  9. 03:35:667 (2) - pretty unexpected rhythm, i would put it on 03:35:817 -
  10. 03:39:417 (1) - do not overlap
  11. 03:52:767 (4) - same as 01:16:767 (1,1) -, maybe use 2 1/2 sliders for here
  12. 03:54:117 - you have to put a note on kiai-start
  13. 04:09:867 (3) - x:456 would look better with 04:08:217 (1,2) -
  14. 04:10:167 (1) - snap the end of this spinner
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:162 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
  2. 00:37:464 (1,2,3) - i'm sure they should be early by 1/2
  3. 00:48:567 (2,3) - too hard, combine them as a slider
  4. 01:11:367 (3) - don't stack
  5. 01:16:167 (3) - don't make it too hard, shorten by 1/2
  6. 01:23:817 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - too hard, remap them
  7. 01:26:967 (3) - i'd reduce 1 arrow and add a circle instead
sorry but it has too many weird rhythms and too hard as a Normal diff.. plz recognice it's 200BPM. remap plz

[Hard]
  1. 00:33:488 (1) - end it at 00:36:139 - like Lunatic diff
  2. 00:56:217 (1) - no spinner here, add some notes to make it better
  3. 01:34:167 (7) - NC for the 3 jumps
  4. 02:25:767 (6) - ^
  5. 03:43:617 (7) - ^
  6. 04:08:067 (1) - NC for after spinner
you should know it's actually 'Insane' diff, it has 320SV, but the approved 'Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...' has just 280SV.. i'm not saying it's terrible, it's really good diff if you rename it as 'Insane'

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:33:488 (1) - or end it at 00:36:305 - like Hard diff
  2. 01:06:267 (2) - NC?
  3. 01:06:567 (6) - or at least NC for here
  4. 01:08:067 (5) - don't make it too busy, just put a circle here
  5. 01:09:567 (1) - the taiko sounds want me to make 3hit-stream for here, maybe add 3 circles on the head instead
  6. 01:36:567 (1,2,3) - it's really hard to read due to the hit-burst and combo colors with BG, ctrl+g 01:36:717 (2,3) - to make it easier
  7. 01:50:367 (7) - NC
  8. 02:01:467 (1,2,3,1,2) - really hard to understand why you made like this and hard to play as well, just try following me, add 2 circles on 02:01:017 (10) - 's head from 02:01:317 - , and a circle on (228,184) at 02:01:617 - with NC, then add 2 circles on 02:01:017 (10) - 's head again, so make them like this
  9. 02:05:967 (1,1,1) - delete all, add some notes instead
  10. 02:09:867 (1) - NC for after spinner
  11. 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - pretty unexpected 1/3 beats, maybe put 1/3slider with an arrow instead
  12. 03:20:217 - i'd add a circle on 3's end to make it more exciting map, i know there's no sound but there's no problem to do it as well imo
  13. 03:53:667 (1) - please express this song with notes, don't let it be as just a slider, add a circle at 03:53:667 - and '0.5x'sldier from 03:53:817 - to 03:54:117 -
[baka]
  1. skip, some diffs like this are too subjective, and i think it's ok
saw the all diffs, and you'd better rename them, Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard, Hard to Insane
also find some skilled timer for this map plz, they're a bit wrong now imo
Good luck with rank~
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Tags
  2. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:488 (1) - end it at 00:36:139 - like Lunatic diff Fixed
  2. 00:56:217 (1) - no spinner here, add some notes to make it better it's following the long piping, no change sry~:3
  3. 01:34:167 (7) - NC for the 3 jumps added
  4. 02:25:767 (6) - ^
  5. 03:43:617 (7) - ^
  6. 04:08:067 (1) - NC for after spinner
you should know it's actually 'Insane' diff, it has 320SV, but the approved 'Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...' has just 280SV.. i'm not saying it's terrible, it's really good diff if you rename it as 'Insane'

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:33:488 (1) - or end it at 00:36:305 - like Hard diff fixed in hard diff
  2. 01:06:267 (2) - NC? added
  3. 01:06:567 (6) - or at least NC for here ^
  4. 01:08:067 (5) - don't make it too busy, just put a circle here i like my way~ :3
  5. 01:09:567 (1) - the taiko sounds want me to make 3hit-stream for here, maybe add 3 circles on the head instead umm..it's not obvious so i hesitate this ,but no change atm
  6. 01:36:567 (1,2,3) - it's really hard to read due to the hit-burst and combo colors with BG, ctrl+g 01:36:717 (2,3) - to make it easier fixed by my way.. i think it's ok now
  7. 01:50:367 (7) - NC added
  8. 02:01:467 (1,2,3,1,2) - really hard to understand why you made like this and hard to play as well, just try following me, add 2 circles on 02:01:017 (10) - 's head from 02:01:317 - , and a circle on (228,184) at 02:01:617 - with NC, then add 2 circles on 02:01:017 (10) - 's head again, so make them like this
  9. 02:05:967 (1,1,1) - delete all, add some notes instead i'd prefer to make a breath here :3
  10. 02:09:867 (1) - NC for after spinner added~
  11. 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - pretty unexpected 1/3 beats, maybe put 1/3slider with an arrow instead it's fun to play imo :3
  12. 03:20:217 - i'd add a circle on 3's end to make it more exciting map, i know there's no sound but there's no problem to do it as well imo good point~ added and not totally covered by (3)
  13. 03:53:667 (1) - please express this song with notes, don't let it be as just a slider, add a circle at 03:53:667 - and '0.5x'sldier from 03:53:817 - to 03:54:117 - umm..i'd prefer my way :3
saw the all diffs, and you'd better rename them, Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard, Hard to Insane
also find some skilled timer for this map plz, they're a bit wrong now imo
Good luck with rank~
thanks for modding~ > <
a32

Star Stream wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:34:162 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).fixed
  2. 00:37:464 (1,2,3) - i'm sure they should be early by 1/2fixed
  3. 00:48:567 (2,3) - too hard, combine them as a sliderfixed
  4. 01:11:367 (3) - don't stacksorry but I think is fine~
  5. 01:16:167 (3) - don't make it too hard, shorten by 1/2fixed~
  6. 01:23:817 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - too hard, remap themok~
  7. 01:26:967 (3) - i'd reduce 1 arrow and add a circle insteadnice idea~
sorry but it has too many weird rhythms and too hard as a Normal diff.. plz recognice it's 200BPM. remap plz
as you said,it's 200BPM,so Normal should be mapped into a Normal which is a bit harder than others.Also,there is a big gap between Normal and Hard for most maps,especially for this one(For the difficulty of Hard)So,I think making it a bit hard is fine :)
http://puu.sh/1pKx1
Skystar
~ :3

[A32's Hard]
  1. 00:32:814 (5) - 弧度大點好看 http://puu.sh/1qrp2
  2. 00:43:167 (1) - 尾巴加上個whistle
  3. 00:44:367 (2) - 拉好點
  4. 00:44:967 (3) - 尾巴加clap?
  5. 00:45:567 (1) - 尾巴加上個whistle
  6. 00:47:067 (2) - 開頭和折返要麼全clap要麼全whistle要麼全加 自己決定
  7. 00:49:017 (3,4) - 既然改hard了那麼這個節奏就別放過了 http://puu.sh/1qril
  8. 01:23:967 (1,2,3) - clap到這怎麼突然停了? 建議白線全加上
  9. 01:31:767 (7) - http://puu.sh/1qrrw
  10. 01:32:367 (1) - 提前1/2 擺到紅線上
  11. 01:34:767 (1) - 結束在 01:37:017 ?
  12. 01:40:617 (4) - 咱能再難看點嗎...弧度那麼大真心嚇人
  13. 01:46:167 - 還是那句既然改hard了這麼明顯的重音就不要放過了...
  14. 02:35:967 (1) - 提前到紅線...
  15. 03:34:617 (1) - 這裡開始感覺突然完爆之前的kiai段 懷疑嗑藥
a32

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

~ :3

Notice:Since I have replaced almost every object,sth could be igned without reasons ww(mainly about the arrangement)
[A32's Hard]
  1. 00:32:814 (5) - 弧度大點好看 http://puu.sh/1qrp2ok~
  2. 00:43:167 (1) - 尾巴加上個whistleok~
  3. 00:44:367 (2) - 拉好點~
  4. 00:44:967 (3) - 尾巴加clap?fixed~
  5. 00:45:567 (1) - 尾巴加上個whistlefixed~
  6. 00:47:067 (2) - 開頭和折返要麼全clap要麼全whistle要麼全加 自己決定ok~I chose to keep whistles ww
  7. 00:49:017 (3,4) - 既然改hard了那麼這個節奏就別放過了 http://puu.sh/1qril made some change but didn't follow your advice :/
  8. 01:23:967 (1,2,3) - clap到這怎麼突然停了? 建議白線全加上fixed~
  9. 01:31:767 (7) - http://puu.sh/1qrrw~
  10. 01:32:367 (1) - 提前1/2 擺到紅線上sorry...don't want to change ;_;
  11. 01:34:767 (1) - 結束在 01:37:017 ?cool~
  12. 01:40:617 (4) - 咱能再難看點嗎...弧度那麼大真心嚇人~
  13. 01:46:167 - 還是那句既然改hard了這麼明顯的重音就不要放過了...改了
  14. 02:35:967 (1) - 提前到紅線...fixed
  15. 03:34:617 (1) - 這裡開始感覺突然完爆之前的kiai段 懷疑嗑藥金馆长
http://puu.sh/1qMBv

Thanks for modding~
Flask
OwO

[General]
  1. 總覺得tags該加上flute orz
[Twice's Easy]
  1. 00:52:167 (1,1) - 建議疊好一点
  2. 00:57:567 - 这裡音量略小 調高20~30%比較帶感 20%就什馬打擊感都沒了zz
  3. 01:16:767 (1) - 如果是我我就不会放这么單調的3 reserves 一点都沒梗 試試作個長slider+1 reserve? 而且還能玩個blanket 233
  4. 01:19:167 (1) - ^
  5. 02:15:567 (1) - ^
  6. 02:17:967 (1) - ^
  7. 01:35:967 (1,2) - 新人不一定read的到 用滑條代替吧
    clap
    • 这裡都是kiai裡缺clap的地方 加上会比較好聽 :3
    1. 01:30:867 (3) - (begin)
    2. 01:40:467 (3) - (begin)
    3. 01:42:867 (3) - (begin)
    4. 02:39:417 (2) - (end)
    5. 03:35:667 (2) - (end)
    6. 03:40:467 (2) - (end)
    7. 04:08:967 (2) - (reserve)
  8. 02:05:967 (3) - 補個finish如何
  9. 02:26:967 (2) - (reserve)这裡不該clap 空著也好clap下去就unfit
  10. 02:28:617 (1) - 試試把reserve去掉 在02:29:367 - 上個note? 對歌詞会比較好听我覺得
  11. 02:38:217 (1) - ^ 02:38:967 -
  12. 02:40:617 (1) - ^ 02:41:367 -
  13. 02:36:867 (2) - 这個是不是要上clap按成finish还是怎樣搞出的finish來orz? 去掉+clap
  14. 02:40:167 (3) - 去whistle
  15. 02:45:567 - 感覺上这條綠線沒神么需要
  16. 03:34:617 (1) - 这有点不美觀 可以用用看改版後的新slider
  17. 03:39:417 (1) - ^
  18. 03:43:167 (3) - ^ 这個滿需要的
[A32's Hard]
  1. 感覺OD+1
  2. 01:15:867 - +note
  3. 01:43:767 - ^
  4. 02:22:467 - ^
  5. 01:32:217 (1) - 提前1/2拍
  6. 02:35:817 (1) - ^
  7. 01:44:067 (2) - clap
  8. 02:10:767 (1,2) - 这感覺有要blanket 做做看
  9. 02:23:967 (2) - 这有点討厭 感覺上这個会更可愛
  10. 02:41:967 (2) - (end) clap
  11. 02:48:267 (4) - (reserve) ^
  12. 03:11:967 (1,2) - (nazi)如果可以的話在包好一点
  13. 03:16:767 (1,2) - ^
  14. 03:31:167 (1) - (end) clap
  15. 03:32:967 (1) - 節奏改 nc
  16. 03:39:267 (7) - Spacing有点錯 会誤導哦
  17. 03:50:667 (2) - clap
    草苺你真不該把它改成Hard 因為這很明顯就是N的spacing ==+
[Hard+]
  1. AR-1
  2. 00:49:167 (2,3,4) - 試試弄個圈?
  3. 03:22:617 (1) - Finish如何
  4. 03:46:167 (7,9) - 看起來這兩個ctrl+G 会比較flow
  5. 04:14:721 (4) - 開头略空 建議+whistle
  6. 04:18:757 (7) - 这sv略慢 nc ovo
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:12:567 (3,7) - 硬要說的話第三個slider point可以再拉開一点 会比較好看o.o
  2. 02:22:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这排列有点偏了/.\
  3. 02:33:717 (4,5,6) - 略不flow 把(5,6)擺在slider揚去的地方o.o
  4. 02:43:392 (2,3) - 妮瑪我被嚇的半死finish出毛啊QAQ!!!
  5. 02:52:767 (5) - Nc
  6. 03:23:367 (1,2,3,4) - 弄個正方形?
    排版有点亂不过沒差-v-
[BakaNA]
  1. skip (?)
-v-加油! Star~
mintong89
Taiko Mod ♪
sugoi song 0.0

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Oni]

01:30:792 - k
01:53:142 - k
03:59:592 - d
04:06:942 - k

[Taiko Muzu]

perfect~
hell good maps~ i can't find anything.
jomnhnk

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko Mod ♪
sugoi song 0.0

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Oni]

01:30:792 - k OK
01:53:142 - k OK
03:59:592 - d OK
04:06:942 - k OK

[Taiko Muzu]

perfect~
hell good maps~ i can't find anything.
Thank you mod~!!! i changed this map!
OnosakiHito
Just sneeking in to mod some taikos.

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]

General: Use the same audio volumen in all timeline sections

00:46:017 (9) - I would suggest to use a don here. Less kats would give the other kept kats a bigger effect.
01:02:367 (68) - better change this to a don. Dosen't plays that nice when it starts as kat. Also you didn't used kat at 01:05:967 (80) -
01:51:267 (281) - better move this to 01:51:117 as kat because of the high pitch which you follow
01:58:017 (309) - same as above. Move to 01:57:867
02:05:967 (343) - kat would be better having k k d d d d is better as k k k d d d because of the leaning number.
02:12:867 (368) - having some gaps would be good, since this is a muzukashii, so delete this note please. Also you used allready one before, so please follow this way of mapping.
02:15:267 (376) - ^
02:20:367 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - I think making all notes to finisher would be nice.
02:22:167 (406) - don finisher, fits maybe better.
02:23:967 (1) - I rather suggest a slider here which goes up to 02:25:767
02:45:567 - Use in this part more kats and les dons, follow more the high-pitches and have gaps! This is a muzukashii, so it needs more gaps, especially at such weak parts.
03:04:767 (180) - finisher, because you used them before too.
03:07:167 (191) - ^
02:45:567~03:03:567 - More breaks/gaps! (also more breaks/gaps after this section of course)
03:53:667 (209,210) - delete this notes and put a tripplet at 03:53:667 - ddd with one more don at 03:53:517 - I think that fits better.
03:54:117 - move timeline to 03:54:267
04:05:817(x) - adding one d would be good here, because of the sound in the music.
04:12:117 (293,294,295,296,297,298) - give every note a timeline to accelerate them down up to this note: 04:13:221 (299) - to avoid this overlap.
04:13:221 - up to here use 80% volumen.
04:18:157 - last timing is wrong, for now move the note there to the blue tick.

Kind of hard this Muzukashii because you got too less gaps/breaks. Gaps would be also good because you have hard 1/2 patterns.


[jom's Taiko Oni]

General: Use the same audio volumen in all timeline sections

02:04:167 (90) - move this note to 02:04:317 because of the beats.
02:27:342 (231) - making this note to d would fit probably better
02:45:567 - Use in this part some more kats.
03:54:117 - move timeline to 03:54:267
04:18:157 - last timing is wrong

That's all for Oni. I don't like to change too much on someone style or diff. it self if it is overall fine.
Maybe here and there some notes could be changes, but it's no need to.


Good luck.
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Flask wrote:

OwO

[General]
  1. 總覺得tags該加上flute orz
[Hard+]
  1. AR-1 纠结中……
  2. 00:49:167 (2,3,4) - 試試弄個圈? 会和后面的长slider有叠一点。。所以先保持现状Q.Q
  3. 03:22:617 (1) - Finish如何 爽!
  4. 03:46:167 (7,9) - 看起來這兩個ctrl+G 会比較flow 感觉spacing有点蛋痛..先不改惹~
  5. 04:14:721 (4) - 開头略空 建議+whistle 其实还好啦~
  6. 04:18:757 (7) - 这sv略慢 nc ovo 好~
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:12:567 (3,7) - 硬要說的話第三個slider point可以再拉開一点 会比較好看o.o 感觉还好:3
  2. 02:22:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这排列有点偏了/.\ :oo
  3. 02:33:717 (4,5,6) - 略不flow 把(5,6)擺在slider揚去的地方o.o 啊这里是因为音乐也有个转折所以连打有拐到下面去~
  4. 02:43:392 (2,3) - 妮瑪我被嚇的半死finish出毛啊QAQ!!! bgm有锣的声音所以finish惹。。是有点大咱把声音改小惹~
  5. 02:52:767 (5) - Nc fixed~
  6. 03:23:367 (1,2,3,4) - 弄個正方形? 没有“甩”的那种感觉~
    排版有点亂不过沒差-v-
-v-加油! Star~
灰常感谢!!!!!! edit: my 666th post 'v'
jomnhnk

OnosakiHito wrote:

Just sneeking in to mod some taikos.

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]

General: Use the same audio volumen in all timeline sections

00:46:017 (9) - I would suggest to use a don here. Less kats would give the other kept kats a bigger effect.
01:02:367 (68) - better change this to a don. Dosen't plays that nice when it starts as kat. Also you didn't used kat at 01:05:967 (80) -
01:51:267 (281) - better move this to 01:51:117 as kat because of the high pitch which you follow
01:58:017 (309) - same as above. Move to 01:57:867
02:05:967 (343) - kat would be better having k k d d d d is better as k k k d d d because of the leaning number.
02:12:867 (368) - having some gaps would be good, since this is a muzukashii, so delete this note please. Also you used allready one before, so please follow this way of mapping.
02:15:267 (376) - ^
02:20:367 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - I think making all notes to finisher would be nice.
02:22:167 (406) - don finisher, fits maybe better.
02:23:967 (1) - I rather suggest a slider here which goes up to 02:25:767
02:45:567 - Use in this part more kats and les dons, follow more the high-pitches and have gaps! This is a muzukashii, so it needs more gaps, especially at such weak parts.
03:04:767 (180) - finisher, because you used them before too.
03:07:167 (191) - ^
02:45:567~03:03:567 - More breaks/gaps! (also more breaks/gaps after this section of course)
03:53:667 (209,210) - delete this notes and put a tripplet at 03:53:667 - ddd with one more don at 03:53:517 - I think that fits better.
03:54:117 - move timeline to 03:54:267
04:05:817(x) - adding one d would be good here, because of the sound in the music.
04:12:117 (293,294,295,296,297,298) - give every note a timeline to accelerate them down up to this note: 04:13:221 (299) - to avoid this overlap.
04:13:221 - up to here use 80% volumen.
04:18:157 - last timing is wrong, for now move the note there to the blue tick.My english skil is poor...so,I do not know what it means. more easy english plz(´;ω;`) 04:18:157 to ?time   

Kind of hard this Muzukashii because you got too less gaps/breaks. Gaps would be also good because you have hard 1/2 patterns.


[jom's Taiko Oni]

General: Use the same audio volumen in all timeline sections

02:04:167 (90) - move this note to 02:04:317 because of the beats.
02:27:342 (231) - making this note to d would fit probably better
02:45:567 - Use in this part some more kats.Changed! and check plz~
03:54:117 - move timeline to 03:54:267
04:18:157 - last timing is wrongMuzu last ^ same

That's all for Oni. I don't like to change too much on someone style or diff. it self if it is overall fine.
Maybe here and there some notes could be changes, but it's no need to.


Good luck.
Thank you mod!!! i changed the map BEST~!
OnosakiHito
ああ、すまんすまんwww
04:18:157 - last timing is wrong, for now move the note there to the blue tick. 最後にタイミングは誤ったです。でもStrawberryが俺の話で聞てるよ。
今のドン(04:19:357)で04:19:507変位するよ。お願いします。
@Straberry: the last timing is wrong. It's a bit too slow.
Topic Starter
Strawberry

OnosakiHito wrote:

@Straberry: the last timing is wrong. It's a bit too slow.
thanks for reply :3
i'll fix asap~
a32

Flask wrote:

[A32's Hard]
  1. 感覺OD+1
  2. 01:15:867 - +note
  3. 01:43:767 - ^
  4. 02:22:467 - ^
  5. 01:32:217 (1) - 提前1/2拍
  6. 02:35:817 (1) - ^
  7. 01:44:067 (2) - clap
  8. 02:10:767 (1,2) - 这感覺有要blanket 做做看
  9. 02:23:967 (2) - 这有点討厭 感覺上这個会更可愛
  10. 02:41:967 (2) - (end) clap
  11. 02:48:267 (4) - (reserve) ^
  12. 03:11:967 (1,2) - (nazi)如果可以的話在包好一点
  13. 03:16:767 (1,2) - ^
  14. 03:31:167 (1) - (end) clap
  15. 03:32:967 (1) - 節奏改 nc
  16. 03:39:267 (7) - Spacing有点錯 会誤導哦
  17. 03:50:667 (2) - clap
    草苺你真不該把它改成Hard 因為這很明顯就是N的spacing ==+
Orz 貌似草莓忘传新的Hard了orz 所以没能改对不起...
↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓Here is the latest version with some spacing errors fixed!↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓
http://puu.sh/1rVmS
Topic Starter
Strawberry
updated~
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