1. Easy (2.83 stars, 107 notes)
2. Hard (4.7 stars, 177 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 265 notes)
4. Normal (3.56 stars, 108 notes)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Sorry. I appreciate your attempt, but I wasn't really looking for another difficulty.

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime
2. Inconsistency in combo colours

1. 00:11:532 (1) - remove NC like 00:08:157 (5,6) - and add NC at 00:12:282 (3) -

1. 00:00:095 (1) - weird rhythm.. i recommend to expand it to 00:00:845 -
2. 00:01:407 (3) - mistake?
3. 00:03:095 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:25:407 (7) - 1grid down is more looks good imo
5. 00:30:095 (2,3) - 3grid down to be centered from 00:28:970 (1) - ?
6. 01:21:845 (1) - NC for after spinner

1. 00:37:782 (2) - ctrl+r will be more playable
2. 00:52:595 (1,2,3) - hard to read.. maybe replace with 2 slider wich have 2 arrows and 1 circle
3. 01:22:032 (3) - NC?
4. 01:26:532 (7) - ^

1. Different Preview Time , unrankable
2. Different Combo on Insane difficulty , on purpose xD?
3. Timing sounds a bit of IMO , try Offset : 90 ( -5ms ) better to me :3
4. This Normal is harder than most normal difficulties , highly suggested to add a Easy difficulty ( I can make one if you want :3 )
5. 01:18:095 - I think you should end kiai time here
6. Some of the unsnap Green Timing need snap , Maybe you just -2ms on Red Timing Section but no move Green Timing Sections together

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:12:282 (3) - I don't think this slider fits the music well , I miss it 3 times >_< ( Noob player ) Maybe try this rhythm ? better to me I think
      
   2. 00:44:720 (1) - Move backward to 00:44:720 sounds better , oh You follow vocal here , so you can add note here :3
   3. 01:25:970 (4) - Hmm , I fell strange here while playing , My suggetion : Shortened this slider by 1/2 , and then add a circle 01:26:907 -
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:38:157 (4) - Maybe use clap instead of clap? finish here sounds a bit strange
   2. 01:01:595 (4) - Add finish on the repeat arrow , a cymbal in the music :3
   3. 01:04:595 (4) - Add finish end , same reason as above
   4. 01:06:095 (2) - Add finish start , same too
   5. 01:15:095 (1) - Finish start :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:01:032 - Highly suggested to add a circle with whistle sound here , drum is in the music at this time
   2. 00:01:407 (4) - This slider isn't follow the music at all ( except slider's head ) try to follow the music well , like this rhythm
      
   3. 00:03:095 (1,2) - Same as above , these object are not follow the music well , extend 00:03:095 (1) - by 1/4 tick and 00:04:032 (2) - too
      
   4. 00:24:095 (4) - I think you can add a New Combo here , but it's up to you
   5. 00:44:532 (6,7) - Ctrl+R may get a better flow IMO
   6. 01:05:907 - You usually follow vocal in this difficulty , so I suggest you add a circle here to following the vocal
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:01:407 (4,5,6,7) - If you change my suggetion in Beatmap design/Suggetion you should change some sounds to , here is my sounds : 4=finish , 5=clap 6 and 7=whistle
   2. 00:37:782 (5) - Finish end maybe follow the music well , but I think it's too loud , reduce volume to 60% ?
   3. 01:26:720 (3) - I don't think this clap is needed , remove it?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:07:782 (6) - I feel Ctrl+R here , better flow I think (?
   2. 00:47:345 (1,2) - Swap New Combo here , follow the vocal ?
   3. 00:52:595 (1,2,3) - I think use 4-repeat slider instead of 3-repeat slider is the best way if you want follow the pitch
   4. 00:53:532 (1,2,3) - Use distance spacing 0.8 here ? more fun while playing :3
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:04:032 (3) - Use clap instead of finish sounds better and use whistle instead of current clap
   2. 00:14:157 (3,4) - Remove clap on there two slider/circle , just leave whistle , claps are not follow music at this time IMO
   3. 01:09:470 (3) - Remove whistle start , I think it is unnecessary , no modder notice ? lol
   4. 01:25:407 (5) - Add whistle end and add whistle on next slider's head ? follow music well :3

I haven't see this anime's novel , but I bought it already , I need to clear others before read this QQ
The mapest is good as always ( Kite , yyy , master ) This map can get rank soon I believe
Hope this is helpful >_< Sorry for my very poor English ~
Good Luck :3

1. Where's the easy diff? Q_Q
2. Inconsitency on the combo color on each diff k, just realized that 2 of the diff are GD
3. Since the other 2 diff are GD, why not make the GD diff that includes their name instead with just the default diff name? like "Kite's Normal" and "yyy's Hard"?
4. Also the preview time on insane diff was different than the other 2 diff, it was 53530 while the others are 53527, please check this again^^
5. Also, just a suggestion, but i think it's not a bad idea if you adjusted the combo color for each diff into same color, although they wer a GD, but it will be more consistent for the combo color

1. AR-1
2. 00:09:095 (1) - the endpoint are almost overlapped with the hp bar, is it ok? o.o
3. 00:16:595 (3) - i cant see the reason why you should make this slider point with the red anchor? Since almost all of the 1/2 beat slider are all on the normal curved slider shape like 00:15:095 (1,4,1,2,3,4) - (aside from 00:37:407 (3,4) - since i saw that they're on the same stanza and forming a nice blanket on there), i think make this slider into normal curved would be better
4. 00:37:407 (3,4) - but still, same as my opinion above, since almost all of the same kind of slider are normal curved why not make this into normal curved too?
   Same goes with the next pattern that consist with the same 1/2 slider that i mentioned above :3
5. 01:00:095 (2) - make this into the same shape as 00:58:595 (3) - ? it looks a bit weird to be honest since i saw this slider are shaped like that while the previous and next slider 00:58:595 (3,4) - are not orz
   or, you can also make the other 2 slider into the custom shape instead, i think it will be more intentional like what you did on 01:04:595 (4,2,4) -
6. 01:13:032 (2) - make this same as 01:11:532 (4) - ?

1. 00:01:407 (3,1,2) - i dunno if this was intentional or not, but i really feel that the pattern beat on this first part are really awkward to play o.o
   * 00:00:095 (1) - is this slider supposed to be ended on 00:01:032 - ?
   * 00:01:407 (3) - same as above, the endpoint should be end on 00:02:157 - or 00:02:532 imo, the rhythm are more intuitive on there
   * 00:03:095 (1) - the endslider supposed to be here 00:03:845 - ,same as normal diff
2. 00:30:657 (3) - use 2 anchor instead one? so the slider shape can perfectly covering around the previous endslider here 00:30:095 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   

   416,72,30657,2,0,B|492:140|416:208,2,160

3. 00:32:345 (6,2) - same as above
   
   SPOILER

   

   96,72,32345,2,0,B|20:140|96:208,1,160,0|8
   140,140,32907,5,0
   140,140,33095,2,0,B|216:208|140:276,1,160,0|8

4. 00:34:970 (6) - here too
   
   SPOILER

   

   328,120,34970,2,0,B|360:72|432:72|464:120,2,160,8|0|8

   And some of the slider on the next pattern that forming a slider covering/rounding the previous slider end or circles like 00:45:095 (2,3) - and 01:11:532 (1,2) - , i think it would be better if you use 2 anchor instead one to make it looks more pretty in looks and more intentional

1. AR-1, tbh i don't see using AR9 on this kind of calm song fits with high approach after all, the bpm are also not too fast too, 160 bpm, imo use QR8 are way better here
2. If you agree with me about above thing, then OD-1 too :3
3. 00:04:970 (5) - remove clap here? sound better to me o3o
4. 00:09:845 (3) - why there comes a V slider out of nowhere while the previous and next slider are normal curved slider like 00:09:095 (1,2,4,5) - ? I think that it's a bit too random if you add this V slider here while the rest of the slider that stitll on the same stanza as that V slider are normal curved one
5. 00:12:845 (2) - this too, better to make it same as 00:12:282 (1,3) - imo, or maybe make the red anchor a bit down-right will be ok too
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:34:595 (4,5) - make the slider position on this two into this? the cursor direction are abit awkward when i play that part
   
   SPOILER

   

   404,188,34595,2,0,B|388:232|404:276,1,90,2|0
   480,340,34970,2,0,B|496:296|480:252,1,90,8|2

7. 01:04:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - so evil pattern for a mouse only player like me Q_Q why not try to alternate this 01:04:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream with slider/slider-repeat?

Mafiamaster wrote:

Mhm.

Kite done by Easy.
yeahyeahyeahhh done by Hard.
Of course, Mafiamaster done by Insane.

Oh wait, Normal did Kite.

And bossandy did Easy.