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Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-09T06:24:44+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[Hard]
00:40:739 (4) - stack with (1) properly Fix~
01:15:340 (3,1) - Similar to [insane] try to mute ending of (4) and whistle at (1). (currently the whistle at ending of (4) does not go well with the clapping at (1)) Fix~~ :3

[Easy]
00:45:892 (1) - the spinner might be too short for an easy. Fix~ now end is 00:47:733
no errors but in general they looks better with fewer 1/1 overlapping (i.e. the spacing can be raised a bit) Change Spacing o.o

In general quite nice and good luck :3

Thank you for modding~ :3

Gamu

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Gamu 2012-06-09T08:04:42+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[Insane]
00:14:420 (4,5) - [Nazi] You can adjust the position of (4) so that (5) stacks on previous (2) sorry....
232,288,14420,2,0,B|184:304|144:280,1,90,0|8
80,216,14788,1,0
00:17:549 (4,5) - again fix the placement so that (2,3,4,5) forms a rhombus, like (4) (464,144), (5) (328,240) ok!
00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - looks placed randomly... just for reference http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/336577 sorry...
00:47:365 (1) - In the first glance I thought the slider come across two gituar note instead of the muting point. Therefore I'll suggest a 1.5x speed 1/2 slider here sorry...
00:51:046 - sound a bit odd when the triplet is placed after the vocal. Try to place the triplet just after the slider? Then it's symmetrical with (1,2,3) as well. sorry....
01:00:248 (1,3) - this is highly not recommended because the slider head is covered by another slider sorry....
01:03:377 (1,2) - somehow I'll suggest putting these on the left hand side of the slider so that the flow of movement sounds smooth and reduce overlapping ok!
01:16:260 (1) - use whistle instead of clap? This provides a larger contrast with coming notes. ok!
(The finish sound sounds too heavy for such a soft song imo.)

In general quite nice and good luck :3

some fixed!

thank you ><

http://puu.sh/zJGT

Low

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Low 2012-06-09T16:07:16+00:00

Heyo! A mod request from my bubble ready map queue.

[General]

Everything is in order.

[Easy]

00:45:892 (1) - It would make more sense for this spinner to end at 00:47:365. It's where the guitar part and the vocals stop.
01:03:561 (1) - The curves on this slider are pretty tight, making it less visually appealing. Try re-making it to be a bit less tight.

[Sekai's Normal]

00:05:033 (2,4) - Make these sliders the same shape for a symmetrical pattern. http://puu.sh/zNf7
00:52:886 (3) - Shouldn't there be a whistle on the end of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern?

[Hard]

Add +1 to either the HP drain or OD. 5 for both on a hard difficulty is much to low in my opinion.

[Gamu's Insane]

01:19:205 - Unused timing section.

Wonderful job.

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-09T17:31:32+00:00

Jacob wrote:
Heyo! A mod request from my bubble ready map queue.

[General]

Everything is in order.

[Easy]

00:45:892 (1) - It would make more sense for this spinner to end at 00:47:365. It's where the guitar part and the vocals stop. Fix~ and now start is 00:45:708 because spin is too short~ :3
01:03:561 (1) - The curves on this slider are pretty tight, making it less visually appealing. Try re-making it to be a bit less tight. Fix~

[Hard]

Add +1 to either the HP drain or OD. 5 for both on a hard difficulty is much to low in my opinion. OD +1~ :3

Wonderful job.

Thank you for modding~ ><

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-09T19:15:56+00:00

Added Hitcircle,Pause Skin~ >w</

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2012-06-10T00:21:34+00:00

Allright let's do this

Timing:
Offset: 1721. This is just so the first note isn't before the first red section

Insane:
Use whistles on 2 and 4 for the soft section
00:03:745 (2) - Not symmetrical!~. Move the 2nd and 3rd sliderpoints northwest
00:59:880 (3) - Ugly overlap
01:00:800 (3) - ^
01:02:825 (7) - Make the curve more notable

Hard:
01:11:659 (2) - This is really loud and I don't know why ;~;

Normal:
Use whistles on 2 and 4 for the soft section
01:00:984 (4) - Not symmetrical!~. Move the middle sliderpoint a bit downward
01:01:720 (5) - ^ The issue is with the last sliderpoint not being in line with the first

Easy:
01:03:561 (1) - Add clap on end of slider

Whee >3<`

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-10T02:19:45+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Allright let's do this

Timing:
Offset: 1721. This is just so the first note isn't before the first red section Offset is 1721 now~ O.O

Hard:
01:11:659 (2) - This is really loud and I don't know why ;~; ;~;

Easy:
01:03:561 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Fix~~ :3

Whee >3<`

Thank you for modding and star~ >w<

ririco

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ririco 2012-06-10T02:47:05+00:00

Akemi kawaiii~ >w<

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-10T03:14:52+00:00

-Sekai- wrote:
Akemi kawaiii~ >w<

Update~ desu~ \>w<

Gamu

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Gamu 2012-06-10T07:49:45+00:00

homura-chan kawaii ><

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-10T15:18:53+00:00

-Gamu- wrote:
homura-chan kawaii ><

Update~ desu~ >w</

Edit : Added Score skin~ lol

Konei

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Konei 2012-06-11T17:47:07+00:00

From my Queue

Easy

00:45:156 (5, 6) Change them into a slider?

Very nice - can't figure out something wrong =w=

Normal

=w=

Hard

00:48:837 (1) Is this whistle necesarry?

Insane

00:46:997 (4, 1) I think of this overlap kinda ugly :=

Sorry, didn't find much >.< I'm really sorry, I looked over it often. Just very nice map~ Go go ranked!

those

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those 2012-06-11T19:26:49+00:00

Eh..

[General]

Use an offset of 1730, which is (+9) of what you have.
If possible, please find the no credit version of this video; all that text in the way is so not moe ;w;

[Gamu's Insane]

00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - Seeing how the melody is a continuous 1/4 rhythm, I'd would extend the kickbacks on these to get
00:37:610 (3,1) - Use a 1.30x spacing instead of stacking; this causes a stall in the flow which isn't very pleasant. You should treat this like 00:39:0982 (4,1) - .
00:43:112 (2) - Because of the way 00:42:763 (3,1,2) - is positioned, this isn't in a very good spot. In addition, the spacing is irregular, so a greater angle would work better. Try something like this:
00:45:892 (1,2,3,4) - First thing: copy and pasting this pattern is not recommended. Second: 00:45:524 (4,1) - the fact that these are parallel created a very awkward play for me.
00:57:303 (1) - Space to 1.20x; maybe try something like this:
01:09:082 (7) - Expected a triple here to match 01:07:242 (5,6,7) - ; seeing how you chose to overlap 01:06:690 (2,3,4) - with 01:08:162 (3,4,5) - , I expected two phrases to match in rhythm, with the triple at the last syllable of the phrase.
01:16:721 (1) - Make the volume decrease more gradual?

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-11T19:43:41+00:00

Offset fixed~ :3
and try find no credit video~

Edit : Can't find no credit version.. orz I think that's not exist.. ;_;

Last edited by Akemi_Homura 2012-06-12T13:44:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gamu

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Gamu 2012-06-12T11:42:07+00:00

those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~

http://puu.sh/Aq7E

Poggo

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Poggo 2012-06-12T12:42:21+00:00

hi from our mod Q ^.^

i think in file .osu you should add line *SliderBorder* bcz you use skin http://puu.sh/x2Oe

00:47:374 - hm it is very strange to see that here the sound vanishes, while in music the accurate blow is audible О_о i think better on end slider put volume 45% (normal sound) and add finish. Really sound better

Insane

00:31:177(1) - maybe you make so http://puu.sh/Aqk8 looks better
00:37:803 - maybe add note here? I would think it well supported a rhythm
01:00:809(3) - hm this slider it is difficult to notice ._. maybe make so http://puu.sh/AqlS ? it's really more readable

Hard

00:17:742 - i think better sound if you end slider in big white tick and add note on red ( if you not want make it, stack better slider and note >.<)
00:42:404(2,3) - stack better
00:50:687 - better make this slider double and remove next note or add note on 00:51:239

Normal

00:49:214 - maybe you make this slider symmetric? http://puu.sh/Aqrf
00:50:318 - ^

It's all for me ^.^ good luck nyan~~

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-12T13:28:21+00:00

Thank you for modding~ :3
Fixed some~

those

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those 2012-06-13T00:41:55+00:00

-Gamu- wrote:
those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~

Hey -Gamu- P:
Would love to know which suggestions you didn't use so I can try to explain to you more in-depth why I think it's a problem, if you don't understand. Thanks.

Gamu

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Gamu 2012-06-13T11:36:46+00:00

those wrote:
-Gamu- wrote:
those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~
Hey -Gamu- P:
Would love to know which suggestions you didn't use so I can try to explain to you more in-depth why I think it's a problem, if you don't understand. Thanks.

oh.. OK

those wrote:
[Gamu's Insane]
00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - Seeing how the melody is a continuous 1/4 rhythm, I'd would extend the kickbacks on these to get You are a nice rhythm. But I think that the current rhythm better

00:37:610 (3,1) - Use a 1.30x spacing instead of stacking; this causes a stall in the flow which isn't very pleasant. You should treat this like 00:39:0982 (4,1) - . OK
00:43:112 (2) - Because of the way 00:42:763 (3,1,2) - is positioned, this isn't in a very good spot. In addition, the spacing is irregular, so a greater angle would work better. Try something like this: OK
00:45:892 (1,2,3,4) - First thing: copy and pasting this pattern is not recommended. Second: 00:45:524 (4,1) - the fact that these are parallel created a very awkward play for me. I like this placement. I don't want to change
00:57:303 (1) - Space to 1.20x; maybe try something like this: OK
01:09:082 (7) - Expected a triple here to match 01:07:242 (5,6,7) - ; seeing how you chose to overlap 01:06:690 (2,3,4) - with 01:08:162 (3,4,5) - , I expected two phrases to match in rhythm, with the triple at the last syllable of the phrase. I don't think so.
01:16:721 (1) - Make the volume decrease more gradual? no. The current volume is very good

sorry. I'm poor at English

@those : By the way, Do you not re-re-check me my map?

ririco

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ririco 2012-06-13T18:08:19+00:00

nothing to fix =3=/

Miya

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Miya 2012-06-14T12:47:57+00:00

Hi Akemi :3

General

Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.
Audio Lead-in +500 please. Current audio lead-in is too fast, and quite surprising to player.

Easy

00:09:091 (1) - I think it will be more consistant if you remove new combo here.
00:23:815 (2) - Remove whistle at this slider end. Doesn't follow anything at the back and breaking your whistle consistencies.
00:25:288 (1,3) - I think it's good to keep whistle consistencies here. Try to add whistle at 1 end and 3 start.
00:27:496 (4) - I don't think lowering whistle sound here is good. The music volume is not down here. Better to turn back the volume to 70% here.
00:35:595 (4) - I think whistle at this slider end should be on slider start. 00:34:490 (1,2,3,4) - sounds empty and inconsistant without whistle.
00:39:460 & 00:39:644- What's the purpose of timing point here? I don't think you need to lower volume of clap here. If you want to lower clap volume the timing position is wrong too, because timing point 00:39:644 should be on 00:39:736-.
00:42:220- Same, no need to turn down volume here.
00:54:736 (1,2) - I think because you suddenly follow vocal here the rythim sounds awkward. How about making rythim like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341644 , i think it's more good, and keep following the drum which not awkward to hear.. Rearrange the hitsound if you do this.

Sekai :3

00:29:705 (4,3) - The whistle here is awkward since you didn't continue your whistle rythim. Either continue your whistle rythim, or just delete whistle here.
Quite good, but Sekai, you use 1/1 too much. Try to adding more variation in the rythim next time you map a song.

Hard

00:10:564 (1) - For combo consistencies, i suggest you to remove new combo here.
00:23:631 (4) - This whistle break the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Just remove whistle here.
00:23:815 (5) - No need to turn down volume of whistle at this slider start. If you want to turn down volume, don't turn down it to 40%, it's too low. Turn down by 10% is more good.
00:35:595 (6) - Clap at this slider start iis very awkward to hear and breaking consistencies of your clap rythim. Remove it please.
01:16:085- I suggest you add note here for better readibilty since you suddenly swith polarity in a long gap.
00:53:263 (1) - Same reason as above, better to remove new combo here for consistencies.
01:02:098 (3,5,2,3) - Orz, your whistle pattern here suddenly missing. Add whistle here at both 3, 5 start and circle 2 and 3 end. It will be consistant to your previous whistle rythim at same rythim like these.
01:16:269 (5) - No need new combo here because the rythim is still same. Remove it.

Gamu's Insane

00:06:147 (1,2) - use 1.0x spacing please. Didn't expect this to have 1/1 gap since the spacing is incosistant.
00:09:828 (3) - Move this note further away from 00:09:460 (2) - since you suddenly lower the spacing which is not intuitive.
00:31:177 (1) - For consitencies it's better remove new combo here.
00:53:999 (3,1) - Make the spacing between this note 1.2 please. It's more readable if you use 1.2 spacing here.
01:14:245 (1) - I think clap here at the slider start is awkward. Better to remove it.

Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

Gamu

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Gamu 2012-06-14T14:15:06+00:00

Miya wrote:
Hi Akemi :3

Gamu's Insane
00:06:147 (1,2) - use 1.0x spacing please. Didn't expect this to have 1/1 gap since the spacing is incosistant.
00:09:828 (3) - Move this note further away from 00:09:460 (2) - since you suddenly lower the spacing which is not intuitive.
00:31:177 (1) - For consitencies it's better remove new combo here.
00:53:999 (3,1) - Make the spacing between this note 1.2 please. It's more readable if you use 1.2 spacing here.
01:14:245 (1) - I think clap here at the slider start is awkward. Better to remove it.
Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

All fixed!

thank you for Miya~ ><

http://puu.sh/ASEQ

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-14T15:22:07+00:00

Miya wrote:
Hi Akemi :3

General
Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.
Audio Lead-in +500 please. Current audio lead-in is too fast, and quite surprising to player.
Easy
00:09:091 (1) - I think it will be more consistant if you remove new combo here.
00:23:815 (2) - Remove whistle at this slider end. Doesn't follow anything at the back and breaking your whistle consistencies.
00:25:288 (1,3) - I think it's good to keep whistle consistencies here. Try to add whistle at 1 end and 3 start.
00:27:496 (4) - I don't think lowering whistle sound here is good. The music volume is not down here. Better to turn back the volume to 70% here.
00:35:595 (4) - I think whistle at this slider end should be on slider start. 00:34:490 (1,2,3,4) - sounds empty and inconsistant without whistle.
00:39:460 & 00:39:644- What's the purpose of timing point here? I don't think you need to lower volume of clap here. If you want to lower clap volume the timing position is wrong too, because timing point 00:39:644 should be on 00:39:736-.
00:42:220- Same, no need to turn down volume here.
00:54:736 (1,2) - I think because you suddenly follow vocal here the rythim sounds awkward. How about making rythim like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341644 , i think it's more good, and keep following the drum which not awkward to hear.. Rearrange the hitsound if you do this.
Hard
00:10:564 (1) - For combo consistencies, i suggest you to remove new combo here.
00:23:631 (4) - This whistle break the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Just remove whistle here.
00:23:815 (5) - No need to turn down volume of whistle at this slider start. If you want to turn down volume, don't turn down it to 40%, it's too low. Turn down by 10% is more good.
00:35:595 (6) - Clap at this slider start iis very awkward to hear and breaking consistencies of your clap rythim. Remove it please.
01:16:085- I suggest you add note here for better readibilty since you suddenly swith polarity in a long gap.
00:53:263 (1) - Same reason as above, better to remove new combo here for consistencies.
01:02:098 (3,5,2,3) - Orz, your whistle pattern here suddenly missing. Add whistle here at both 3, 5 start and circle 2 and 3 end. It will be consistant to your previous whistle rythim at same rythim like these.
01:16:269 (5) - No need new combo here because the rythim is still same. Remove it.
Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

All Fixed~!
Except this~~

Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.

Sekai doesn't want delete it~ :3
Thank you~ Miya~ >w<

Saturnalize

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Saturnalize 2012-06-14T18:19:06+00:00

From pm

=General=
Clean, though those 300g, 300k, and 100k are hard to compare with 300 and 100 with a slight look, but It's nice and moe.

=Easy=
1. 00:10:564 (5) - So tiny mistakes, but it's not curve enough to blanket 00:10:196 (4) - so here is the thing I do to make it as curve as possible - http://puu.sh/AUKh

414,51,10564,2,0,B|468:91|449:158,1,120,2|2

2. 00:22:343 (1) - Move the endpoint to (264,308) to make it like going to 00:23:815 (2) - if epanded.

=Sekai's Normal=
1. 00:05:042 (2) - No no. Make this neater by using the same method with easy no.1

140,360,9091,2,0,B|92:312|116:240,2,99.9999999999999,4|0|2

=Hard=
1. 00:01:729 (1) - Perhaps fix this with 00:02:650 (3) - 's approach circle?

352,292,1730,2,0,B|424:256|405:172,1,140,4|2

2. 00:03:202 (6) - Why? this has a big potential to make a star pattern along with 00:02:466 (2,3,4,5) - , so please fix this. Here, I give you the code for 00:03:202 (6,7) - and some snapshot! http://puu.sh/AUZu (Oh, and please move 00:02:466 (2) - to 228,204)

204,120,3202,2,0,B|127:151|145:232,1,140,4|2
132,316,3754,2,0,B|96:308|72:276,1,70

3. 00:50:687 (4) - End point 1 grid tiny to the right to make it neater
4. 01:12:772 (2,3,4) - Where's the clap?

=Gamu's Insane=
1. 00:02:650 (5) - Use this code to make it neater imo

392,336,2650,2,0,B|336:344|304:312,2,90

2. 00:17:374 (3,4,5,6) - Triangle shape can be better if you put (4) on (436,160)
3. 00:47:374 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps make this more audible by increasing the hitsound by 3-5%?

That's all from me, great art.
Star & Good luck

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2012-06-14T19:17:46+00:00

Loli Cjj wrote:
From pm

=General=
Clean, though those 300g, 300k, and 100k are hard to compare with 300 and 100 with a slight look, but It's nice and moe. >w</

=Easy=
1. 00:10:564 (5) - So tiny mistakes, but it's not curve enough to blanket 00:10:196 (4) - so here is the thing I do to make it as curve as possible - http://puu.sh/AUKh Fix~ :3
414,51,10564,2,0,B|468:91|449:158,1,120,2|2
2. 00:22:343 (1) - Move the endpoint to (264,308) to make it like going to 00:23:815 (2) - if epanded. Fix~ :3

=Hard=
1. 00:01:729 (1) - Perhaps fix this with 00:02:650 (3) - 's approach circle? Fix~ :3
352,292,1730,2,0,B|424:256|405:172,1,140,4|2
2. 00:03:202 (6) - Why? this has a big potential to make a star pattern along with 00:02:466 (2,3,4,5) - , so please fix this. Here, I give you the code for 00:03:202 (6,7) - and some snapshot! http://puu.sh/AUZu (Oh, and please move 00:02:466 (2) - to 228,204) Fix~ :3
204,120,3202,2,0,B|127:151|145:232,1,140,4|2
132,316,3754,2,0,B|96:308|72:276,1,70
3. 00:50:687 (4) - End point 1 grid tiny to the right to make it neater Fix~ :3
4. 01:12:772 (2,3,4) - Where's the clap? I don't want use clap this part~ ;_;

That's all from me, great art.
Star & Good luck

Thank you~~! >w<

ririco

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ririco 2012-06-14T19:25:06+00:00

@Miya: >w<// thanks fixed it ~

@Loli Cjj: Sorry nothing to fix ._. i like it as it ~

Fixed Diff

cRyo[iceeicee]

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cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-06-15T08:57:56+00:00

hey ^^

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:42:588 (1,2) - sounds strange, i think it would be better if u replace them http://puu.sh/B3oT , fits better with vocal (and put finish on 00:42:956 , same with I/H diffs)
00:48:110 - add note with soft whistle
00:35:595 (4) - put finish on the tail o.o? (ur hard diff have it)

[Sekai's Normal]

SPOILER

00:01:729 (1) - this tail whistle not folowing ur own rhytm a bit, i think it should be placed on next note
00:27:496 (2,3) - im sure on 100% that slider should be first then 4 notes http://puu.sh/B3t7
00:36:331 (3) - u can add original soft finish here (same with H/I diffs)
00:38:539 (4) - and here
00:42:956 (1) - and here
00:46:637 (3,4) - kick slider fits better imo http://puu.sh/B3wV
00:47:374 (1) - change to N 40% sound, put whistle on head and body, tail slider either S sound or muted
00:48:110 (2) - whistle
00:48:846 (1,2) - and again, it fits/plays/sounds much better if slider first, then note
00:49:214 (2,4) - a bit ugly slider shape http://puu.sh/B3Hb , just noticed that there are a lot of sliders like that, so nvm then ><
00:58:417 (4) - whislte for Fu tu ris tic \o.o/
00:59:521 (6) - whistle tail for Plaaa yeeer \o.o/
01:00:809 - 01:06:331 this part has a lot of whistle-similar sounds in BG music
so i think it will fine if u add some at ( 01:00:993 (4) - tail , 01:02:834 (7) - , 01:03:938 (2) - arrow , 01:05:410 (4) - arrow
01:15:349 (7) - sounds better without whistle

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:04:858 (3) - a bit incorrect spacing, all previous notes have 1.2 this one 1.1
00:06:883 (1) - just saying, if u want to use blanket tehnique on low spacing, use sliders with 2 waypoints to make it more curve http://puu.sh/B2Z9 , because 1 waypoint looks a bit ugly
00:50:687 (4) - adding reverse arrow to this slider and deleting this note 00:51:423 (5) - sounds better for me
00:54:736 (1) - same here, reverse fits much better then breaking flow o.o
00:59:889 (8) - i think whistle sounds better then clap o.o!

~~GAMUUUUUUUU \^^/~~[Gamu's Insane]

SPOILER

00:17:558 (4,5,6) - why not make triangle jump with same spasing o.o? http://puu.sh/B33C different spacing looks a bit strange here
00:31:177 (3) - some one missed tail clap ^^
00:42:404 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - personally i think this jumps should be placed like that http://puu.sh/B38y maybe im wrong but for person who dont know JP language words kioku ni sounds like 1 word so thats why
first jump part(#1ki #2o #3ku #4ni) second(#1a #2ra #3ta)
/me slaps those for that jump suggestion ==/
00:47:374 (1) - change to N sound and add whistle head and body, sounds funny ww (tail slider should be S sound or muted)
00:48:110 (1) - whistle
00:59:889 (3) - finish
01:01:177 (1,2,3) - mb this o.o? http://puu.sh/B3gl
01:06:331 (1,2) - i think it will be better if u place note first then slider http://puu.sh/B3h1
01:12:956 (3) - remove whistle from head and add it on tail o.o?

and some offtop

SPOILER

1- why not start patern with whistle sound instead of finish? BGm sound totally match with soft whistle but not with finish, or at least reduce volume for that finish
2- 00:31:177 (1) - and 00:33:386 (5) - only sekai diff have finish here, just saying xD
3- very big difference in volume in Sekai diff
4- Sekai clap sounds better (◕‿◕✿)
5- In Gamu diff i would like to see same hitsounds as [Hard] diff o.o!
~~6- Why there is 2 *Gamu* and 2 *Sekai* in tags but only 1 *ending* o.o?~~
7- And yeah 4+ star N diff should have much more variation istead of 1/1 spam (¬‿¬)

ririco

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-06-15T10:40:03+00:00

Thanks cryo >w<

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Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2012-06-15T10:59:26+00:00

thank you \></

http://puu.sh/B4MK

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-15T11:03:21+00:00

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
hey ^^

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:42:588 (1,2) - sounds strange, i think it would be better if u replace them http://puu.sh/B3oT , fits better with vocal (and put finish on 00:42:956 , same with I/H diffs) Fix~ :3
00:48:110 - add note with soft whistle Fix~
00:35:595 (4) - put finish on the tail o.o? (ur hard diff have it) Fix~

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:04:858 (3) - a bit incorrect spacing, all previous notes have 1.2 this one 1.1 Fix~
00:06:883 (1) - just saying, if u want to use blanket tehnique on low spacing, use sliders with 2 waypoints to make it more curve http://puu.sh/B2Z9 , because 1 waypoint looks a bit ugly Fix~
00:50:687 (4) - adding reverse arrow to this slider and deleting this note 00:51:423 (5) - sounds better for me remain this~ ;_;
00:54:736 (1) - same here, reverse fits much better then breaking flow o.o ^
00:59:889 (8) - i think whistle sounds better then clap o.o! Fix~

and some offtop
SPOILER
1- why not start patern with whistle sound instead of finish? BGm sound totally match with soft whistle but not with finish, or at least reduce volume for that finish Reduce volume~
2- 00:31:177 (1) - and 00:33:386 (5) - only sekai diff have finish here, just saying xD okay~ add finish~ :3
3- very big difference in volume in Sekai diff orz..
4- Sekai clap sounds better (◕‿◕✿) QAQ...
5- In Gamu diff i would like to see same hitsounds as [Hard] diff o.o!
~~6- Why there is 2 *Gamu* and 2 *Sekai* in tags but only 1 *ending* o.o?~~
7- And yeah 4+ star N diff should have much more variation istead of 1/1 spam (¬‿¬)

Thank you for modding~ cryo~ ><

Miya

2,690 posts

Joined June 2011

Miya 2012-06-17T07:43:53+00:00

Recheck~

General

Tag should be '-Sekai- and Sekai' not '-Sekai- and -Sekai-'. I told you double -Sekai- will not work >.<

Easy

00:41:484 (3) - Whistle at the start? It will be consistant to your whistle rythim.

Sekai

00:35:595 (1) - Adding a finish at this circle is good and your finish sounds rythim will become more consistant.
00:47:190 (1) - This slider should move 1/2 tick earlier. It will follow the electric guitar more acurately if you move this slider 1/2 tick earlier.
00:48:386- How about adding a circle at this time? I think it's good and follow vocal more accurate.

Gamu's Insane

00:41:208 (4,5) - For better flow, how about stacking this below 00:40:932 (3) - end point?

That's all for now. Call me back once you're done with this mod :3

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2012-06-17T08:16:54+00:00

Miya wrote:
Recheck~

Gamu's Insane
00:41:208 (4,5) - For better flow, how about stacking this below 00:40:932 (3) - end point?
That's all for now. Call me back once you're done with this mod :3

sorry~ no changed

I think the current placement is good

thank you~ Miya ><

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-17T09:24:39+00:00

Miya wrote:
Recheck~

General
Tag should be '-Sekai- and Sekai' not '-Sekai- and -Sekai-'. I told you double -Sekai- will not work >.<
Where is two -Sekai-~? QAQ I can't find.. I can see just "ending, gamu, -gamu-, sekai, -sekai-" orz.. maybe I fixed unconsciously~

Easy
00:41:484 (3) - Whistle at the start? It will be consistant to your whistle rythim. Fix~
That's all for now. Call me back once you're done with this mod :3

Thank you~ Miya~~ >w<

ririco

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-06-17T16:46:30+00:00

Thanks Miya >w<

Just added the finish =3=//

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wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2012-06-17T17:06:40+00:00

from my queue
inb4 miya's bubble

[General]
lead-in=500 is enough, 1500 is too large

[Sekai's Normal]
00:27:496 (2,1) - wrong spacing?
00:30:441 (6,1) - ^
00:41:116 (2,3,4) - I suggest change this to a reqpest sldier, it's kinda hard to play as a Normal diff
00:46:637 (3) - plz change direction, or it's hard to tell how many time the sldier repeat..
01:00:257 (1,2,3) - same here, or maybe change to a 1/2 sldier + 1 circle, if you think a repeat sldier is too easy

[Gamu's Insane]
01:12:956 (3,4) - I think the rhyme is kinda odd here, circle first and slider later fit the song better

good luck

ririco

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-06-17T17:17:00+00:00

thanks wcx >A<

Sekai's Normal

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Futuristic Player.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 48118
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Futuristic Player (TV Size)
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
Creator:Akemi_Homura
Version:Sekai's Normal
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags:ending gamu -gamu- sekai -sekai-

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Saki1.jpg"
Video,0,"Saki.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo2 : 255,155,155
Combo3 : 255,68,255
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-17T17:27:47+00:00

Okay~ Testing and discuss about lead-in with Sekai, changed that 1000~ :3
Thank you for modding wcx~ ><

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-06-17T20:15:08+00:00

저기 혹시 태고 난이도 추가해도 되나요?

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2012-06-17T21:21:41+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
from my queue
inb4 miya's bubble

[Gamu's Insane]
01:12:956 (3,4) - I think the rhyme is kinda odd here, circle first and slider later fit the song better

good luck

hmm... I changed to this rhythm http://puu.sh/BE1W

thank you~ wcx ><

http://puu.sh/BE44

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-18T04:00:47+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
저기 혹시 태고 난이도 추가해도 되나요?

네~ 괜찮으시다면 부탁드릴게요~ :3

Move to WIP~~

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-06-18T09:35:10+00:00

여기 있습니다 :3

http://puu.sh/BNt9

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-18T10:11:51+00:00

굉장히 빠르시네요~ =3= 아무튼 감사합니다~!

okay~ Update and move to Pending again~

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-06-18T10:19:12+00:00

as Rika's Taiko mod request

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

Taiko

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

remove video when you have Taiko BG
lend in: 1750~2000 is better

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:03:662 (22) - remove this and add note at 00:03:478 - is better since 00:02:650 (15,16,17) - you start at red line(1/2 rhythm)
00:05:135 (31) - I think move to 00:04:950 - and 00:05:411 (33) - move to 00:05:595 - is better
00:04:306 (26,27) - switch whistle?
00:07:619 - to 00:12:036 - difficulty spread issue.
00:18:294 - to 00:23:815 - ^
00:22:803 (114) - remove this note? I think this note is overmap for this part
00:42:220 (229,230,231,232) - sound d k d k is better
00:49:030 (270) - d? ((about pitch issue
00:49:674 (274) - sound move to 00:49:490 - will be better
00:51:423 (285) - use k to prominent this downbeat?
00:56:208 (317,318,319,320,321) - sound use o o o o rhythm it's more fit to this part
01:07:987 (380,381,382,383,384,385,386) - d d k k ddd k?
01:13:877 (411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419) - you used ddddkkkdd for this part. but I disagree about it. In fact. It's very awkward flow for player. ddddkkddk/ddddkkdkk is a possible solution.
01:15:326 (424) - unsnap note

Recommendations:

Custom combo colours
Custom combo colours do not really matter to taiko as they will be overwritten in actual gameplay. The case is the same with combo numbering, but you may wish to use the numbering to mark out red/blue notes visually within edit mode (assuming no custom colours have been set), this would make modding for other people easier and could make mapping easier:

anyway~ good luck~

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-06-18T10:38:04+00:00

Almose fixed ~ thanks sp ~

http://puu.sh/BNQV

태그 넣는거 까먹지 마세요 ㅎ

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-18T10:44:30+00:00

Update~! :3
태고BG 오류로 다시 풀서브밋 orz..

Makar

osu! Alumni

2,258 posts

Joined February 2011

Makar 2012-06-18T16:36:38+00:00

I was asked to mod the taiko...

[Rika's Taiko]

General Recommendation: Use Clap instead of Whistle to make a Katsu so that it is easier to identify in the editor. Also, using combo colours like sp3 suggestion makes taikos 100% easier to mod.
Remember that you don't want your main focus to the the vocals in taiko :<. It's okay to follow it sometimes (during big accents or something) but don't let it be the only thing your map is trying to follow.
00:00:993 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Use dkkdkkd to emphasize the bass hit on the drums
00:06:515 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - This section is very undermapped especially compared to how you started off. Map more in here, and try to follow the drums more than the vocals (in general vocal mapping in taiko is bad unless you know what you are doing).
00:15:349 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - This is all mapped to the vocals... Please try to follow the drums instead.
00:18:662 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - ^
00:32:650 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - ^
01:11:300 (398,399,400,401,402) - ^
01:10:196 - For Consistency, follow 00:56:208 instead of following vocals.
01:13:877 (413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421) - kkddkkddk
01:14:981 - d
01:15:165 (425) - k
01:15:349 (426) - D
01:16:453 - Move to 01:16:269

Sorry if some suggestions seem bland. For the vocal mapping parts I'd rather have the mapper decide how to do it then give specific suggestions since it is a big chunk of the song.

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-20T00:29:54+00:00

Sorry ~ no change ~ still thanks for mod ~

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2012-06-20T06:08:09+00:00

Taiko mod request by Akemi_Homura

[Rika's Taiko Oni]

00:00:257 (1,2) - I would like to remove this two note because there are no any instruments/ music/ bass to support that so it doesn't sound a good effect.
00:04:306 (26) - k?
00:04:490 (27,28) - d d please.
00:26:392 (136) - Change it back to small note? I don't think a big kat is suitable here because there is no accent point to fit with finish sound, a simple note can fit the music very well.
00:47:374 (263) - d here would be nice.
01:13:325 (407,408,409,410) - I can't see any reason that it needs a 2plets pattern here. They don't fit the music very well. Simple 1/2 is much better imo.
01:14:521 (418) - k?

其實我覺得這歌如果把藍音放到2.4拍上然後再做變化就已經很好了
GL

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-20T10:21:56+00:00

Thanks for mod all fixed ~

http://puu.sh/ChqX

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-20T12:34:10+00:00

업데이트~
모드 한번이나 두번정도 더 받아야될것 같네요~ ;__;

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

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Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2012-06-20T23:36:06+00:00

requested taiko mod from my queue~

[Taiko]
Generel: Maybe it would be better to put the name of the song into the black bar, instead the diff. name? For the sake of authentic. lol

Hitcircles:
00:00:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - all those notes should be deleted since there is a fade in. Also starting at 00:01:730 - is better as reference point.
00:07:251 (37) - better d
00:07:619 (38) - better k
00:07:987 (39,40,41,42) - k ddd
00:08:723 (43) - k?
00:09:091 (44) - K
00:28:969 (147) - delete
00:29:245 (x) - add a d
00:29:521 (150) - k
00:29:613 (x) - k
00:31:637 - delte note and at at 00:31:822 - k?
00:41:944 (224,225) - delete both notes because of vocal again.

Overall it's a fine Taiko diff.. Maybe here and there some little strange things because of vocal - beat mapping, but not such an big issue here.~

Good luck with your project

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-22T17:46:38+00:00

Almost fixed ~ thanks for mod ~

http://puu.sh/CRCv

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-22T17:52:34+00:00

Update~~ :3

No_Gu

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Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2012-06-22T22:48:02+00:00

request from my queue
orz I have forgot to mod for 1 month..sorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorry
color2 and 3 are nearly the same with this hitcircle.add 1 more color between them?
something about hitsound
soft-hitfinish2.wav : I don't think it can fit this song.I can't hear it in music
soft-hitclap.wav : soft-hitclap2.wav is the real drums.not this.If you really want to use this. at least turn down its volume
[Easy]
00:45:717 (1) - why not start at 00:45:901 to follow vocal?

[Sekai]
00:01:730 - 00:13:141 whistle on 1,3 sounds odd.change to 24whistle?
00:37:067 (1) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349815
00:46:637 (3) - I prefer this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349817
00:47:374 (1) - end at 00:47:558 sounds really better
00:48:846 (1) - why use clap?finish is better
00:57:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what happened to combo...
01:13:141 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can clearly hear the drums

[Hard]
00:07:619 (3) - finish is too noisy
00:48:110 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems need some work
01:16:269 (5) - remove whistle and finish then add clap

[Gamu]
00:47:374 (1) - end at 00:47:558 sounds better
00:48:110 (1) - whistle not good
01:16:269 (1,2) - clap is better
I personally suggestting adding whistle at 1,3 in kiai time. sounds much better.

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-23T02:30:10+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
request from my queue
orz I have forgot to mod for 1 month..sorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorry That's okay~ lol
color2 and 3 are nearly the same with this hitcircle.add 1 more color between them? Colour Fixed~ :3
something about hitsound
soft-hitfinish2.wav : I don't think it can fit this song.I can't hear it in music I think this sound not bad.. I'm sorry about this individual difference..
soft-hitclap.wav : soft-hitclap2.wav is the real drums.not this.If you really want to use this. at least turn down its volume okay~ volume is little down~

[Easy]
00:45:717 (1) - why not start at 00:45:901 to follow vocal? I consider Beginner's reaction velocity, then Think this spin is too short.. ;_; So Start eailier.

[Hard]
00:07:619 (3) - finish is too noisy Reduce volume~ (Easy Diff too)
00:48:110 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems need some work umm..orz I don't know where is need some work~ ;_; Hit sounds..? Placement...?
01:16:269 (5) - remove whistle and finish then add clap I think current sounds and your suggestion both are fine~ but I want consistency with Insane diff. So If Gamu-chan change that sounds I'll fix that too~ :3

Thank you for modding~ ><

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2012-06-23T05:17:45+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
request from my queue

[Gamu]
00:47:374 (1) - end at 00:47:558 sounds better no~
00:48:110 (1) - whistle not good ok~
01:16:269 (1,2) - clap is better (1) - Clap changed. (2) - no changed
I personally suggestting adding whistle at 1,3 in kiai time. sounds much better.hmm... I don't think so

http://puu.sh/D0uX

thank you for modding~ >w<

Yume_old_old

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Joined February 2012

Yume_old_old 2012-06-23T16:19:54+00:00

nice map o.o

ririco

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Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-06-23T16:21:15+00:00

no changes on my diff sorry ~

but thanks for modding ~

omegaflo

196 posts

Joined March 2009

omegaflo 2012-06-23T17:34:03+00:00

Rika's Taiko

Well, let's begin

I have ABSOLUTLY nothing against voice based mapping, but here... i can't even see if it's mapped on vocals or on the beat =s (actually, sometime both)

So :

00:04:868 (27,28) : ?? remove them, they're not following anything here

SUGGEST : If you want to map it on the vocal, add a note at 00:05:052 and at 00:05:420

SUGGEST : 00:06:525 to 00:07:997 : Try to do something here with the beat, they're SO much more to do than only 1/1 =s

00:08:181 (39,40,41) : this triplet don't really fit =s if you really want to use a triplet, do it three beat later at 00:08:549

SUGGEST : 00:09:101 (44) to 00:10:574 (48) Same than before, try to do something with this

SUGGEST : 00:18:672 (93) to 00:19:960 (97) - Same~

00:23:273 : Add a note here, this "timing drop" is just not fun to play =s

00:29:163 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160) : ... not following anything, can be fun to play, but i suggest you to change it (ask me if needed, i'll try to help)

00:30:635 : We're reaching the chorus, more rythmic is needed, add a note here
00:32:108 : Same here maybe ?
00:32:476 : Same~

SUGGEST : You can even add a note here : 00:32:936

SUGGEST : 00:34:132 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - If you want to map it like this, try to add a note here : 00:34:224

00:41:494 : Add a note here

SUGGEST : 00:45:451 : too much triplets repetitions, you can a note here if you want to break it

00:51:065 (287,288,289) - This triplet don't fit, keep 287 and 289 but remove 288
SUGGEST : If you really want a triplet here, add a note at 00:50:973

00:51:617 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299) - what i've said at the beggining, you're trying to map the vocals AND the rythmic, so two way to proceed :

Vocal mapping : remove 00:51:985 (294) and 00:52:261 (296,297)
Rythmic mapping : remove 00:52:261 (297) and ADD a note at 00:52:077 and 00:52:445

00:56:770 : Add a note here to follow the vocals, ignore if you don't want

00:58:611 : Add a note here for more rythmic

01:14:991 : ADD a note here, You just CAN'T leave this dual pattern after your stream

SUGGEST : Maybe add a UBEROMGFINISH Spinner here :3 ? : 01:16:832

Try to recheck your map (i even suggest you to remap the beginning if you want and have the time to :3 ) and try to check the timeline again

I just can't understand how two EXPERIENCED modders can only find some hitsounds suggests but well =s dat wers my 2cents :3

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-25T15:47:03+00:00

Okay, Because of My private reason and Rika's current situation, Rika's Taiko removed now from mapset. I just put Extra Download.
Thank you for all mod this map. And sorry.. orz

Miya

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Joined June 2011

Miya 2012-06-25T16:48:14+00:00

Recheck~

Easy

00:30:451 (2) - Add a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
00:31:187 (1) - I fell you don't need to reduce the volume of this finish in here. Just remove the timing section that reduce the volume of the finish sounds.
00:33:396 (5) - You should add a finish here at this slider end to follow up finish at 00:31:187 (1) -
00:40:022 (1) - Add a whistle here too at the slider end. Not consistant for your whistle rythim.
00:48:120 (1,2) - Increase both of this circle volume by 10% please. It's too low imo. So 1 will have 40% volume and 2 will have 50% volume.

Sekai's Normal

I think overal volume in this diff is very low. Please add another 10%-20% to the overal volume.
00:26:770 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? Doesn't neccesary and ruin your combo consistencies. Just remove the new combo.
00:35:605 (1) - I don't think finish2 is fit here. Sounds awkward to me since in your previous and next section, you just use defaut finish sounds. So please change this finish sounds into the default one.
00:38:549 (4) - It would be good too if you add another default soft finish at this circle to make hitsounds more consistant.
00:41:126 (2) - It would be good if you add default finish sounds at this slider end since it follow up previous finish rythim nicely.
00:46:647 (3,1) - Still, it's sounds weird for me. And i'm suprised that this slider 00:46:647 (3) - has more repeat than other 1/2 repeat slider. It can surprised most of normal player. I suggest you reduce the repeat at this slider 00:46:647 (3) - then move 00:47:200 (1) - to 00:47:200- since it's follow the music better.
00:49:592 (2) - It's better to remove this finish sounds since it's not consistant to your finish rythim.
01:00:267 (7) - This combo is very very long. I suggest you add a new combo here to reduce it. Also, add a finish at this slider end since it's very fit with the cymbal sounds from the music.

Hard

00:17:752 (6) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
00:37:077 (3) - Aw, the whistle and finish sound here at the start of the slider is very loud and doesn't good to hear. Just remove the whistle to fix this.

Gamu's Insane

00:44:347- Reduce timing point here by 5% please, it's very loud imo.
00:45:819- ^ Reduce by 10%

That's all >.<

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-25T17:47:13+00:00

Miya wrote:
Recheck~

Easy
00:30:451 (2) - Add a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
00:31:187 (1) - I fell you don't need to reduce the volume of this finish in here. Just remove the timing section that reduce the volume of the finish sounds.
00:33:396 (5) - You should add a finish here at this slider end to follow up finish at 00:31:187 (1) -
00:40:022 (1) - Add a whistle here too at the slider end. Not consistant for your whistle rythim.
00:48:120 (1,2) - Increase both of this circle volume by 10% please. It's too low imo. So 1 will have 40% volume and 2 will have 50% volume.
Hard
00:17:752 (6) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
00:37:077 (3) - Aw, the whistle and finish sound here at the start of the slider is very loud and doesn't good to hear. Just remove the whistle to fix this.
That's all >.<

Thank you again~ Miya~ :3
Fixed All~~

ririco

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Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-06-25T19:32:43+00:00

Thanks Miya :3 for modding this~

My moemoe Diff >w<

osu file format v9

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48118
Countdown: 0
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Title:Futuristic Player (TV Size)
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
Creator:Akemi_Homura
Version:Sekai's Normal
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags:ending gamu -gamu- sekai -sekai- kawayi rika

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128,128,51065,1,0
72,208,51433,1,8
104,304,51801,5,2
184,248,52169,2,0,B|200:192,2,50,8|0|0
256,320,52905,2,0,B|312:304,2,50,8|0|2
160,344,53641,1,8
64,320,54009,1,0
40,224,54378,1,8
88,136,54746,6,0,B|128:96|192:96,1,99.9999999999999,2|8
272,136,55482,2,0,B|232:176|168:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
168,272,56218,1,2
264,312,56586,2,0,B|304:272|368:272,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
424,200,57322,5,8
440,104,57690,1,2
340,84,58059,1,8
324,180,58427,1,2
232,136,58795,2,0,B|176:128,2,50,8|0|4
248,232,59531,2,0,B|224:280,2,50,8|0|2
348,240,60267,6,0,B|380:284,2,50,0|0|4
332,140,61003,2,0,B|276:116|228:140,1,100,8|2
208,232,61740,2,0,B|152:248|100:224,1,100,8|2
16,200,62476,1,8
36,296,62844,1,2
124,348,63212,6,0,B|188:340|212:292,1,99.9999999999999,8|2
236,204,63948,2,0,B|172:212|148:260,2,99.9999999999999,8|2|8
252,104,65052,1,2
332,164,65420,2,0,B|396:156|420:108,2,99.9999999999999,8|2|8
356,260,66525,5,4
356,260,66893,1,8
304,348,67261,1,0
304,348,67629,1,8
204,332,67997,2,0,B|140:316|124:260,1,99.9999999999999,4|8
128,172,68733,2,0,B|192:188|208:244,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
256,148,69470,5,4
304,60,69838,2,0,B|352:36|416:60,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
480,120,70574,1,8
392,176,70942,2,0,B|335:198|290:164,1,99.9999999999999,4|8
200,152,71678,2,0,B|144:136,2,50,0|8|8
208,248,72414,6,0,B|168:288,2,50,4|0|8
304,280,73151,1,2
360,200,73519,1,0
328,104,73887,1,2
232,80,74255,2,0,B|176:64|120:80,1,99.9999999999999,0|2
56,136,74991,1,0
120,208,75359,1,4
256,192,75727,12,0,79224

Baka Akemi-chan =3=

Miya

2,690 posts

Joined June 2011

Miya 2012-06-26T03:08:05+00:00

Umm, sorry, i've wrong mention at Sekai's Normal diff..
00:46:647 (3,1) - Reduce 3 repeat by 1 since it will confuse some normal player because you suddenly use more repeat. Then move 00:47:384 (1) - to 00:47:200- for better rythim.
Orz, i was careless in writing that >.<

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Joined December 2010

Gamu 2012-06-26T11:38:01+00:00

Miya wrote:
Recheck~

Gamu's Insane
00:44:347- Reduce timing point here by 5% please, it's very loud imo. Changed to 75%
00:45:819- ^ Reduce by 10% Changed to 80%
That's all >.<

http://puu.sh/DLbQ

thank you for modding~ >.<

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2012-06-26T17:15:56+00:00

All Diff updated~

bossandy

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2010

bossandy 2012-07-06T08:46:13+00:00

Hi hi~ Request from my queue~
　

Red : I think you must to fix.
Blue : Need to discuss.
Black : Just suggest or nazi.

　
[

General]
　

Some objects before Red Timing Section , is it unrankable? , If you scared MAT pop this when bubbled , Use Offset 267 in stead of 1,740

　
[

Rika's Taiko Oni]

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )

00:04:316 (24,25,26) - kkk sounds not good and it's strange here...
00:04:868 (27,28) - Delete these circles , because there is nothing in the music , and you should add a circle 00:05:052 - to follow the vocal ^_^
00:09:101 (43) - Use D or d insteal of K , K sounds very strange here >_<
00:29:531 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - A long stream here? why? I feel uncomfortable while I playing
01:03:580 (352) - d or k is enough , K here sounds to loud for me
01:14:899 (415) - Move 1 tick forward sounds better
This taiko diff seems good , but I think you need to follow some drum , vocal or any others , Some Random beats are uncomfortable

　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Ya~ that's all , why don't you upload this taiko diff ?
Good Luck Rika~ and other creaters~

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2012-07-10T00:42:00+00:00

Hi, you ever requeest mod in my queue, but I found nothing wrong, so star~

Miya

2,690 posts

Joined June 2011

Miya 2012-08-02T12:31:44+00:00

Why graved? i was going to recheck this. :/
Well, if you don't want to revive this, i will delete this map from my list.

Spread Wings_old

67 posts

Joined May 2011

Spread Wings_old 2012-08-02T13:06:34+00:00

Miya wrote:
Why graved? i was going to recheck this. :/
Well, if you don't want to revive this, i will delete this map from my list.

Since the user is afk...i think not.

Akemi_Homura

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2013-04-28T14:44:56+00:00

bugggggggggggggggggggggggggg.............? D:

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-04-07T14:46:20+00:00

Revive...!!!! D;

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2014-04-09T04:28:08+00:00

omg..I am really glad about that.

But very old map D:
So I want to remap my diff if you are aiming for Rank

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-04-09T05:31:57+00:00

Gamu wrote:
omg..I am really glad about that.

But very old map D:
So I want to remap my diff if you are aiming for Rank

yeah~ Gamu chan~! \=3=/
I think now is rankable~ but if you want, remap please~!! :3

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2014-05-02T18:13:06+00:00

Yo!

map: http://puu.sh/8wl6n.zip

I finally completed that \:D/

[Note]
○Because i changed a red line, please change other diff.
○Don't forget to add a custom hitsound!

Thank you

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-05-02T18:31:09+00:00

Updated~! :3

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

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Guy 2014-05-03T07:53:00+00:00

Hi! Gamu's request :3 check only Insane diff~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Gamu's Insane]

00:00:267 (1) - ここはwhislte必要ないのでは？　バスが鳴り出すのが00:00:635 - ここからなので
00:42:966 (7,1) - NCが逆のような
00:47:383 (1) - 音が無いようなのでリピート消したほうがいいと思います。
00:48:119 - ボーカルに合わせてnote追加しませんか？次の1/8スライダーに入りやすくなると思います。
00:59:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - なんだか歪んでいるように見えたのでもう少し整えてみてはどうでしょうか？具体的にはnote間が詰まって見えたのでストリームの開始をもう少し下の位置からにすると改善できると思います。
01:07:628 (6,7,8,9,1) - 01:09:101 (9,10,1) - この2つの場所は裏でバスがはっきり聞こえるのでwhislteを入れてみてはどうでしょうか？

nice map :3

Good luck!

Gamu

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Gamu 2014-05-03T09:24:44+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi! Gamu's request :3 check only Insane diff~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Gamu's Insane]
00:00:267 (1) - ここはwhislte必要ないのでは？　バスが鳴り出すのが00:00:635 - ここからなので
ほんまや、消します。
00:42:966 (7,1) - NCが逆のような
omg...
00:47:383 (1) - 音が無いようなのでリピート消したほうがいいと思います。
音は微妙にあるけど、聞こえづらいし、ないほうがいいか。
00:48:119 - ボーカルに合わせてnote追加しませんか？次の1/8スライダーに入りやすくなると思います。
ボーカル無視してbackの音だけで取ってる部分だから、ボーカルに合わせておくと次のリピートスライダーﾀｲﾐﾝｸﾞがとりづらいと思うので、入れませんでした。（ちなみに1/6ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰﾎﾞｿｯ)
00:59:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - なんだか歪んでいるように見えたのでもう少し整えてみてはどうでしょうか？具体的にはnote間が詰まって見えたのでストリームの開始をもう少し下の位置からにすると改善できると思います。
超適当においてました。綺麗に整えます。
01:07:628 (6,7,8,9,1) - 01:09:101 (9,10,1) - この2つの場所は裏でバスがはっきり聞こえるのでwhislteを入れてみてはどうでしょうか？
入れときまーす。

nice map :3
Good luck!

ありがとう！

Map: http://puu.sh/8xdmP.zip

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-05-04T02:25:04+00:00

Thank you~! Guy~! :3
Updated.

Loooctav

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Joined January 2012

Loooctav 2014-05-16T05:30:39+00:00

Hello! From my Queue

Sorry, but Your map is perfect, xD, I can't mod
For your good job, take my star ;D

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-05-16T10:03:37+00:00

ThoomyyxD wrote:
Hello! From my Queue

Sorry, but Your map is perfect, xD, I can't mod
For your good job, take my star ;D

Thank you~!

gxytcgxytc

204 posts

Joined May 2011

gxytcgxytc 2014-05-16T13:03:11+00:00

[general]
offset 254 more suitable for me.
IN Gamu's Insane AudioLeadIn is different with other diffs

[Gamu's Insane]
00:13:518 (1) - MISS finish?

[Hard]
00:28:242 no green line? add two to adjust finish's vol.

[Easy]
00:24:929 (3) - add a note with clap at 464,236
00:39:285 (3) - add whistle at head

really old map >_>
good luck~

RandF

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Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-05-16T15:56:45+00:00

Gamuさん、request ありがとう~

[Gamu's Insane]

GamuさんのdiffだけAudioleadin:2000ですけどOK?
00:04:132 (4) - あまり良いflowじゃないので、stackさせるより上の方に配置させるのはどうでしょう？
00:07:260 (5) -　melodyに合ってないように感じました。普通のcurved sliderでも良いような気がします
00:27:506- ここはslider-head かcircleが合うような気がします。たとえばこんな感じとか
01:11:309 (3) - SV変えてもおもしろいかも

良いdiffです～
あまり指摘するところありませんでした。。。

cute skinning, Akemi_Homura <3
don't you add "Megrune Luka" for tags?

~Good Luck~

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-05-17T12:08:11+00:00

Thank you~!

waxman

467 posts

Joined February 2012

waxman 2014-05-21T14:05:38+00:00

(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

I will mod soon.

waxman

467 posts

Joined February 2012

waxman 2014-05-22T02:02:49+00:00

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Gamu's Insane]
00:17:002 (3,5) - 少々近いので直してください

00:29:517 (1) - まっすぐに伸びるスライダーのほうがいいのでは？　00:29:333 (4)の流れにマッチしますが、がむさんのも悪くないです＞ｗ＜
逆にまっすぐになるのが嫌で、ずらした感じはあります。
00:31:726 (2) - 00:32:278 (4)のblanketに合わせてみては？　きれいに見えるので別にそこまで問題じゃないです。

bad image

00:48:198 (1) - 00:48:106にしてほしいです。 HDでやるとあれ？って感じになるかもしれません。(High recommedned)
01:03:934 (4,6) - 平行ではないので気になりました
01:15:346 (1) - hit sound強調するためのNCですが、01:16:266 (1)でNCされてるのでいらないと思いました(個人的に

素晴らしいマップです。　僕にもきれいなマップの作り方を教えてほしいものです＞ｗ＜

[Hard]
Change Tick Rate to 2 for adding Clap? because you have tried to add any sound like 00:01:910　00:03:382.
00:39:640　00:41:112　00:42:585 are really needed any sounds.

00:09:088 (1) - blanket?　There is no issue for Ranked tho.

bad image

00:15:714 (7) - ^
00:20:499 (5,3) - Stack perfectly. sorry...
00:42:401 (2,3) - ^
01:16:266 - Only Clap sound too loud. Add green line has vol. 60%.

I have wanted to say many times about using blanket. Because as you can see it's no issue for ranked.

[Sekai's Normal]
00:05:039 (2) - I think this slider is not cool. use blanket properly.
00:06:511 (4) - ^
00:38:536 (4,2) - stack perfectly? then 00:40:008 (1) would be moved properly.
00:58:781 (5,2) - stack perfectly.

[Easy]
Nothing to say.

GOOD LUCK!

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-05-22T16:05:24+00:00

SPOILER

waxman wrote:
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Hard]
Change Tick Rate to 2 for adding Clap? because you have tried to add any sound like 00:01:910　00:03:382.
00:39:640　00:41:112　00:42:585 are really needed any sounds. okay~ use tick rate 2~!

00:09:088 (1) - blanket?　There is no issue for Ranked tho. fixed~
bad image
00:15:714 (7) - ^ fixed~
00:20:499 (5,3) - Stack perfectly. sorry... fixed~
00:42:401 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
01:16:266 - Only Clap sound too loud. Add green line has vol. 60%. okay~

I have wanted to say many times about using blanket. Because as you can see it's no issue for ranked.

[Easy]
Nothing to say.

GOOD LUCK!

Thank you for modding & star~!
waxman~!

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2014-05-23T10:08:11+00:00

gxytcgxytc wrote:
[Gamu's Insane]
00:13:518 (1) - MISS finish? No.

RandomEffect wrote:
[Gamu's Insane]
GamuさんのdiffだけAudioleadin:2000ですけどOK? ルールではなくガイドラインに書かれていますので、絶対というわけではなないので大丈夫だと思います。　私のdiffだけ最初の部分を置いてるので、その分audio lead-inで時間伸ばさないと開始時間が早くなっちゃうんですよね。それを避けるために増やしています。
00:04:132 (4) - あまり良いflowじゃないので、stackさせるより上の方に配置させるのはどうでしょう？確かにそうですね。流れを良くしました。
00:07:260 (5) -　melodyに合ってないように感じました。普通のcurved sliderでも良いような気がします　そればっかだとちょっとアレかなぁ・・・って思い少し形を工夫したつもりでいます。特に違和感がない（？）と自分は思いますので、このままにさせてもらいます。しかし、何度も指摘がきた場合、再度検討していきたいと思います。
00:27:506- ここはslider-head かcircleが合うような気がします。たとえばこんな感じとかそうかな。私は曲に合ってると思う！
01:11:309 (3) - SV変えてもおもしろいかも SVを変える所とか、まだ私にはハッキリと理解できていません。そのため、SVを変えないほうがいいと思うので、このままに。
良いdiffです～
あまり指摘するところありませんでした。。。

waxman wrote:
[Gamu's Insane]
00:17:002 (3,5) - 少々近いので直してくださいそこまで気にならない程度だと思う！
00:29:517 (1) - まっすぐに伸びるスライダーのほうがいいのでは？　00:29:333 (4)の流れにマッチしますが、がむさんのも悪くないです＞ｗ＜
逆にまっすぐになるのが嫌で、ずらした感じはあります。９０度のまっすぐスライダーは滅多に使わないです。微妙にずらすのが大好きなので、このままで。
00:31:726 (2) - 00:32:278 (4)のblanketに合わせてみては？　きれいに見えるので別にそこまで問題じゃないです。意識はしてるのですが、そこまで・・・って感じなので、修正は必要ないと思いますが、私は直しときます。
bad image
00:48:198 (1) - 00:48:106にしてほしいです。 HDでやるとあれ？って感じになるかもしれません。(High recommedned) ずれていました。直しときます。
01:03:934 (4,6) - 平行ではないので気になりました平行だと思います～
01:15:346 (1) - hit sound強調するためのNCですが、01:16:266 (1)でNCされてるのでいらないと思いました(個人的に消しときます。

素晴らしいマップです。　僕にもきれいなマップの作り方を教えてほしいものです＞ｗ＜

みなさんmodありがとうございます。

thank you everyone!

map: http://puu.sh/8XG9O.zip

DeletedUser_3611598

DeletedUser_3611598 2014-05-26T13:03:17+00:00

Hi~! from my queue!

General
좋네염!
- Easy
  00:06:143 (2) - 약간 어색한 것 같네요. 아래처럼 모양을 바꿔주시는 건 어떠실지?? ㅎㅎ
  SPOILER
  00:10:192 (4,5) - 담요가 약간 어긋난 것 같아요!
  00:37:063 (1,2,3) - 개인적인 제안이에요!!
  SPOILER
  01:03:566 (1,2) - Blanket (개인적인 제안입니다)
  - Sekai's Normal
    00:04:671 (1,2) - blanket better
    00:08:720 (3,4) - ^
    00:05:039 (2,4) - Make to same shape
    00:20:867 (3,4) - ^
    00:28:229 (1,2) - I'm not recommend overlapping
    00:34:487 (6,1) - blanket?
    
    I recommend you that blanket better.
    Please try to fix that.
    - Hard
      00:02:646 (3) - NC
      00:05:959 (7) - 을 지워주시고 00:06:143 (8) - 를 00:05:959 - 에서 시작하게 해 주세요. 그리고 00:06:511 - 서클추가.
      SPOILER
      00:32:094 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리의 사각형을 (80,96)으로 이동시켜주세요!
      00:33:842 (6) - 지워도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
      00:35:591 (6) - NC
      01:00:622 (4) - ^
      - Insane
        It is good to me
        
        I'm suck at on Insane ._.

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2014-05-30T04:40:14+00:00

모딩 감사합니다~! BBS때문에 드디어 업데이트..

Fuuyu

856 posts

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Fuuyu 2014-06-15T02:01:04+00:00

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

Easy

00:28:229 End it Here? 00:29:517 - keep the repeat though-
( No Major Problems seen here )

Well That's All , You should call a BAT already
Good Luck~

Akemi_Homura

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Topic Starter

Akemi_Homura 2014-06-15T06:46:09+00:00

Thank you~!
Update~

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2017-03-14T14:44:15+00:00

메타 데이터 체크하러 왔습니다.

Artist : Futuristic Player

SPOILER

https://www.amazon.co.jp/%E6%A9%8B%E6%9C%AC%E3%81%BF%E3%82%86%E3%81%8D%E3%80%8C%E5%92%B2-Saki-%E3%80%8DBest-Album-~Anthology~-%E6%A9%8B%E6%9C%AC%E3%81%BF%E3%82%86%E3%81%8D/dp/B00J0BUYJ2/ref=sr_1_1?s=music&ie=UTF8&qid=1489502463&sr=1-1&keywords=Futuristic+Player

Creator : 咲 -Saki- 阿知賀編 episode of side-A)

Tag : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A 를 추가하시고 나머지는 그대로 두세요

Akemi_Homura

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Akemi_Homura 2017-03-14T15:07:28+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
메타 데이터 체크하러 왔습니다.

Artist : Futuristic Player

SPOILER
https://www.amazon.co.jp/%E6%A9%8B%E6%9C%AC%E3%81%BF%E3%82%86%E3%81%8D%E3%80%8C%E5%92%B2-Saki-%E3%80%8DBest-Album-~Anthology~-%E6%A9%8B%E6%9C%AC%E3%81%BF%E3%82%86%E3%81%8D/dp/B00J0BUYJ2/ref=sr_1_1?s=music&ie=UTF8&qid=1489502463&sr=1-1&keywords=Futuristic+Player

Creator : 咲 -Saki- 阿知賀編 episode of side-A)

Tag : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A 를 추가하시고 나머지는 그대로 두세요

수정했습니다. 감사합니다~

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Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player

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Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player

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