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Miya
Recheck~

Easy
  1. 00:30:451 (2) - Add a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
  2. 00:31:187 (1) - I fell you don't need to reduce the volume of this finish in here. Just remove the timing section that reduce the volume of the finish sounds.
  3. 00:33:396 (5) - You should add a finish here at this slider end to follow up finish at 00:31:187 (1) -
  4. 00:40:022 (1) - Add a whistle here too at the slider end. Not consistant for your whistle rythim.
  5. 00:48:120 (1,2) - Increase both of this circle volume by 10% please. It's too low imo. So 1 will have 40% volume and 2 will have 50% volume.
Sekai's Normal
  1. I think overal volume in this diff is very low. Please add another 10%-20% to the overal volume.
  2. 00:26:770 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? Doesn't neccesary and ruin your combo consistencies. Just remove the new combo.
  3. 00:35:605 (1) - I don't think finish2 is fit here. Sounds awkward to me since in your previous and next section, you just use defaut finish sounds. So please change this finish sounds into the default one.
  4. 00:38:549 (4) - It would be good too if you add another default soft finish at this circle to make hitsounds more consistant.
  5. 00:41:126 (2) - It would be good if you add default finish sounds at this slider end since it follow up previous finish rythim nicely.
  6. 00:46:647 (3,1) - Still, it's sounds weird for me. And i'm suprised that this slider 00:46:647 (3) - has more repeat than other 1/2 repeat slider. It can surprised most of normal player. I suggest you reduce the repeat at this slider 00:46:647 (3) - then move 00:47:200 (1) - to 00:47:200- since it's follow the music better.
  7. 00:49:592 (2) - It's better to remove this finish sounds since it's not consistant to your finish rythim.
  8. 01:00:267 (7) - This combo is very very long. I suggest you add a new combo here to reduce it. Also, add a finish at this slider end since it's very fit with the cymbal sounds from the music.
Hard
  1. 00:17:752 (6) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
  2. 00:37:077 (3) - Aw, the whistle and finish sound here at the start of the slider is very loud and doesn't good to hear. Just remove the whistle to fix this.
Gamu's Insane
  1. 00:44:347- Reduce timing point here by 5% please, it's very loud imo.
  2. 00:45:819- ^ Reduce by 10%
That's all >.<
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Miya wrote:

Recheck~

Easy
  1. 00:30:451 (2) - Add a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
  2. 00:31:187 (1) - I fell you don't need to reduce the volume of this finish in here. Just remove the timing section that reduce the volume of the finish sounds.
  3. 00:33:396 (5) - You should add a finish here at this slider end to follow up finish at 00:31:187 (1) -
  4. 00:40:022 (1) - Add a whistle here too at the slider end. Not consistant for your whistle rythim.
  5. 00:48:120 (1,2) - Increase both of this circle volume by 10% please. It's too low imo. So 1 will have 40% volume and 2 will have 50% volume.
Hard
  1. 00:17:752 (6) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
  2. 00:37:077 (3) - Aw, the whistle and finish sound here at the start of the slider is very loud and doesn't good to hear. Just remove the whistle to fix this.
That's all >.<
Thank you again~ Miya~ :3
Fixed All~~
Suimya
Thanks Miya :3 for modding this~

My moemoe Diff >w<
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Futuristic Player.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48118
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Futuristic Player (TV Size)
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
Creator:Akemi_Homura
Version:Sekai's Normal
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags:ending gamu -gamu- sekai -sekai- kawayi rika

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Saki1.jpg"
Video,0,"Saki.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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78304,-100,4,2,2,20,0,0
79040,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0
79224,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 147,147,255
Combo2 : 255,155,155
Combo3 : 89,255,89
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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Baka Akemi-chan =3=
Miya
Umm, sorry, i've wrong mention at Sekai's Normal diff..
00:46:647 (3,1) - Reduce 3 repeat by 1 since it will confuse some normal player because you suddenly use more repeat. Then move 00:47:384 (1) - to 00:47:200- for better rythim.
Orz, i was careless in writing that >.<
Gamu

Miya wrote:

Recheck~

Gamu's Insane
  1. 00:44:347- Reduce timing point here by 5% please, it's very loud imo. Changed to 75%
  2. 00:45:819- ^ Reduce by 10% Changed to 80%
That's all >.<
http://puu.sh/DLbQ

thank you for modding~ >.<
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
All Diff updated~
bossandy
Hi hi~ Request from my queue~
 
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
 
[ General]
 
  1. Some objects before Red Timing Section , is it unrankable? , If you scared MAT pop this when bubbled , Use Offset 267 in stead of 1,740
 
[ Rika's Taiko Oni]

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
  1. 00:04:316 (24,25,26) - kkk sounds not good and it's strange here...
  2. 00:04:868 (27,28) - Delete these circles , because there is nothing in the music , and you should add a circle 00:05:052 - to follow the vocal ^_^
  3. 00:09:101 (43) - Use D or d insteal of K , K sounds very strange here >_<
  4. 00:29:531 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - A long stream here? why? I feel uncomfortable while I playing
  5. 01:03:580 (352) - d or k is enough , K here sounds to loud for me
  6. 01:14:899 (415) - Move 1 tick forward sounds better
  7. This taiko diff seems good , but I think you need to follow some drum , vocal or any others , Some Random beats are uncomfortable
 
  --------------------------------------------------------
Ya~ that's all , why don't you upload this taiko diff ?
Good Luck Rika~ and other creaters~
shikyu
Hi, you ever requeest mod in my queue, but I found nothing wrong, so star~
Miya
Why graved? i was going to recheck this. :/
Well, if you don't want to revive this, i will delete this map from my list.
Spread Wings_old

Miya wrote:

Why graved? i was going to recheck this. :/
Well, if you don't want to revive this, i will delete this map from my list.
Since the user is afk...i think not.
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
bugggggggggggggggggggggggggg.............? D:
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Revive...!!!! D;
Gamu
omg..I am really glad about that.

But very old map D:
So I want to remap my diff if you are aiming for Rank 8-)
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Gamu wrote:

omg..I am really glad about that.

But very old map D:
So I want to remap my diff if you are aiming for Rank 8-)
yeah~ Gamu chan~! \=3=/
I think now is rankable~ but if you want, remap please~!! :3
Gamu
Yo!

map: http://puu.sh/8wl6n.zip

I finally completed that \:D/

[Note]
○Because i changed a red line, please change other diff.
○Don't forget to add a custom hitsound!

Thank you :)
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Updated~! :3
Guy
Hi! Gamu's request :3 check only Insane diff~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[Gamu's Insane]
  1. 00:00:267 (1) - ここはwhislte必要ないのでは? バスが鳴り出すのが00:00:635 - ここからなので
  2. 00:42:966 (7,1) - NCが逆のような
  3. 00:47:383 (1) - 音が無いようなのでリピート消したほうがいいと思います。
  4. 00:48:119 - ボーカルに合わせてnote追加しませんか?次の1/8スライダーに入りやすくなると思います。
  5. 00:59:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - なんだか歪んでいるように見えたのでもう少し整えてみてはどうでしょうか? 具体的にはnote間が詰まって見えたのでストリームの開始をもう少し下の位置からにすると改善できると思います。
  6. 01:07:628 (6,7,8,9,1) - 01:09:101 (9,10,1) - この2つの場所は裏でバスがはっきり聞こえるのでwhislteを入れてみてはどうでしょうか?

    nice map :3
Good luck! :)
Gamu

Guy wrote:

Hi! Gamu's request :3 check only Insane diff~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[Gamu's Insane]
  1. 00:00:267 (1) - ここはwhislte必要ないのでは? バスが鳴り出すのが00:00:635 - ここからなので
    :arrow: ほんまや、消します。
  2. 00:42:966 (7,1) - NCが逆のような
    :arrow: omg...
  3. 00:47:383 (1) - 音が無いようなのでリピート消したほうがいいと思います。
    :arrow: 音は微妙にあるけど、聞こえづらいし、ないほうがいいか。
  4. 00:48:119 - ボーカルに合わせてnote追加しませんか?次の1/8スライダーに入りやすくなると思います。
    :arrow: ボーカル無視してbackの音だけで取ってる部分だから、ボーカルに合わせておくと次のリピートスライダータイミングがとりづらいと思うので、入れませんでした。(ちなみに1/6スライダー ボソッ)
  5. 00:59:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - なんだか歪んでいるように見えたのでもう少し整えてみてはどうでしょうか? 具体的にはnote間が詰まって見えたのでストリームの開始をもう少し下の位置からにすると改善できると思います。
    :arrow: 超適当においてました。綺麗に整えます。
  6. 01:07:628 (6,7,8,9,1) - 01:09:101 (9,10,1) - この2つの場所は裏でバスがはっきり聞こえるのでwhislteを入れてみてはどうでしょうか?
    :arrow: 入れときまーす。

    nice map :3
Good luck! :)
ありがとう!

Map: http://puu.sh/8xdmP.zip
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Thank you~! Guy~! :3
Updated.
Loooctav
Hello! From my Queue

Sorry, but Your map is perfect, xD, I can't mod
For your good job, take my star ;D
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello! From my Queue

Sorry, but Your map is perfect, xD, I can't mod
For your good job, take my star ;D
Thank you~! :D
gxytcgxytc
[general]
offset 254 more suitable for me.
IN Gamu's Insane AudioLeadIn is different with other diffs

[Gamu's Insane]
00:13:518 (1) - MISS finish?

[Hard]
00:28:242 no green line? add two to adjust finish's vol.


[Easy]
00:24:929 (3) - add a note with clap at 464,236
00:39:285 (3) - add whistle at head

really old map >_>
good luck~
RandF
Gamuさん、request ありがとう~

[Gamu's Insane]
  1. GamuさんのdiffだけAudioleadin:2000ですけどOK?
  2. 00:04:132 (4) - あまり良いflowじゃないので、stackさせるより上の方に配置させるのはどうでしょう?
  3. 00:07:260 (5) - melodyに合ってないように感じました。普通のcurved sliderでも良いような気がします
  4. 00:27:506- ここはslider-head かcircleが合うような気がします。たとえばこんな感じとか
  5. 01:11:309 (3) - SV変えてもおもしろいかも
良いdiffです~
あまり指摘するところありませんでした。。。

cute skinning, Akemi_Homura <3
don't you add "Megrune Luka" for tags?

~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Thank you~! :)
waxman
(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

I will mod soon.
waxman
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[Gamu's Insane]
00:17:002 (3,5) - 少々近いので直してください :D
00:29:517 (1) - まっすぐに伸びるスライダーのほうがいいのでは? 00:29:333 (4)の流れにマッチしますが、がむさんのも悪くないです>w<
逆にまっすぐになるのが嫌で、ずらした感じはあります。
00:31:726 (2) - 00:32:278 (4)のblanketに合わせてみては? きれいに見えるので別にそこまで問題じゃないです。
00:48:198 (1) - 00:48:106にしてほしいです。 HDでやるとあれ?って感じになるかもしれません。(High recommedned)
01:03:934 (4,6) - 平行ではないので気になりました
01:15:346 (1) - hit sound強調するためのNCですが、01:16:266 (1)でNCされてるのでいらないと思いました(個人的に

素晴らしいマップです。 僕にもきれいなマップの作り方を教えてほしいものです>w<


[Hard]
Change Tick Rate to 2 for adding Clap? because you have tried to add any sound like 00:01:910 00:03:382.
00:39:640 00:41:112 00:42:585 are really needed any sounds.

00:09:088 (1) - blanket? There is no issue for Ranked tho.
00:15:714 (7) - ^
00:20:499 (5,3) - Stack perfectly. sorry...
00:42:401 (2,3) - ^
01:16:266 - Only Clap sound too loud. Add green line has vol. 60%.


I have wanted to say many times about using blanket. Because as you can see it's no issue for ranked.


[Sekai's Normal]
00:05:039 (2) - I think this slider is not cool. use blanket properly.
00:06:511 (4) - ^
00:38:536 (4,2) - stack perfectly? then 00:40:008 (1) would be moved properly.
00:58:781 (5,2) - stack perfectly.

[Easy]
Nothing to say.

GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
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[Hard]
Change Tick Rate to 2 for adding Clap? because you have tried to add any sound like 00:01:910 00:03:382.
00:39:640 00:41:112 00:42:585 are really needed any sounds. okay~ use tick rate 2~!

00:09:088 (1) - blanket? There is no issue for Ranked tho. fixed~
00:15:714 (7) - ^ fixed~
00:20:499 (5,3) - Stack perfectly. sorry... fixed~
00:42:401 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
01:16:266 - Only Clap sound too loud. Add green line has vol. 60%. okay~ :)


I have wanted to say many times about using blanket. Because as you can see it's no issue for ranked.

[Easy]
Nothing to say.

GOOD LUCK!

Thank you for modding & star~!
waxman~! :D
Gamu

gxytcgxytc wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
00:13:518 (1) - MISS finish? :arrow: No.

RandomEffect wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
  1. GamuさんのdiffだけAudioleadin:2000ですけどOK? :arrow: ルールではなくガイドラインに書かれていますので、絶対というわけではなないので大丈夫だと思います。 私のdiffだけ最初の部分を置いてるので、その分audio lead-inで時間伸ばさないと開始時間が早くなっちゃうんですよね。それを避けるために増やしています。
  2. 00:04:132 (4) - あまり良いflowじゃないので、stackさせるより上の方に配置させるのはどうでしょう? :arrow: 確かにそうですね。流れを良くしました。
  3. 00:07:260 (5) - melodyに合ってないように感じました。普通のcurved sliderでも良いような気がします  :arrow: そればっかだとちょっとアレかなぁ・・・って思い少し形を工夫したつもりでいます。特に違和感がない(?)と自分は思いますので、このままにさせてもらいます。しかし、何度も指摘がきた場合、再度検討していきたいと思います。
  4. 00:27:506- ここはslider-head かcircleが合うような気がします。たとえばこんな感じとか :arrow: そうかな。私は曲に合ってると思う!
  5. 01:11:309 (3) - SV変えてもおもしろいかも :arrow: SVを変える所とか、まだ私にはハッキリと理解できていません。そのため、SVを変えないほうがいいと思うので、このままに。
良いdiffです~
あまり指摘するところありませんでした。。。

waxman wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
00:17:002 (3,5) - 少々近いので直してください :D :arrow: そこまで気にならない程度だと思う!
00:29:517 (1) - まっすぐに伸びるスライダーのほうがいいのでは? 00:29:333 (4)の流れにマッチしますが、がむさんのも悪くないです>w<
逆にまっすぐになるのが嫌で、ずらした感じはあります。 :arrow: 90度のまっすぐスライダーは滅多に使わないです。微妙にずらすのが大好きなので、このままで。
00:31:726 (2) - 00:32:278 (4)のblanketに合わせてみては? きれいに見えるので別にそこまで問題じゃないです。 :arrow: 意識はしてるのですが、そこまで・・・って感じなので、修正は必要ないと思いますが、私は直しときます。
00:48:198 (1) - 00:48:106にしてほしいです。 HDでやるとあれ?って感じになるかもしれません。(High recommedned) :arrow: ずれていました。直しときます。
01:03:934 (4,6) - 平行ではないので気になりました平行だと思います~
01:15:346 (1) - hit sound強調するためのNCですが、01:16:266 (1)でNCされてるのでいらないと思いました(個人的に :arrow: 消しときます。

素晴らしいマップです。 僕にもきれいなマップの作り方を教えてほしいものです>w<
みなさんmodありがとうございます。

thank you everyone!

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Hi~! from my queue!

  • General

    좋네염!


    • Easy

      00:06:143 (2) - 약간 어색한 것 같네요. 아래처럼 모양을 바꿔주시는 건 어떠실지?? ㅎㅎ
      00:10:192 (4,5) - 담요가 약간 어긋난 것 같아요!
      00:37:063 (1,2,3) - 개인적인 제안이에요!!
      01:03:566 (1,2) - Blanket (개인적인 제안입니다)


      • Sekai's Normal

        00:04:671 (1,2) - blanket better
        00:08:720 (3,4) - ^
        00:05:039 (2,4) - Make to same shape
        00:20:867 (3,4) - ^
        00:28:229 (1,2) - I'm not recommend overlapping
        00:34:487 (6,1) - blanket?

        I recommend you that blanket better.
        Please try to fix that.


        • Hard

          00:02:646 (3) - NC
          00:05:959 (7) - 을 지워주시고 00:06:143 (8) - 를 00:05:959 - 에서 시작하게 해 주세요. 그리고 00:06:511 - 서클추가.
          00:32:094 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리의 사각형을 (80,96)으로 이동시켜주세요!
          00:33:842 (6) - 지워도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
          00:35:591 (6) - NC
          01:00:622 (4) - ^


          • Insane

            It is good to me :)

            I'm suck at on Insane ._.
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
모딩 감사합니다~! BBS때문에 드디어 업데이트..
Fuuyu
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Easy
00:28:229 End it Here? 00:29:517 - keep the repeat though-
( No Major Problems seen here )

Well That's All , You should call a BAT already
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Thank you~!
Update~
HabiHolic
메타 데이터 체크하러 왔습니다.

Artist : Futuristic Player


Creator : 咲 -Saki- 阿知賀編 episode of side-A)

Tag : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A 를 추가하시고 나머지는 그대로 두세요
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

HabiHolic wrote:

메타 데이터 체크하러 왔습니다.

Artist : Futuristic Player


Creator : 咲 -Saki- 阿知賀編 episode of side-A)

Tag : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A 를 추가하시고 나머지는 그대로 두세요
수정했습니다. 감사합니다~ :)
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