Faust wrote:

Hi.

Seems you've gotten my 1'st mod post since I became a MAT.

First off, your mp3 sounds like a video-rip. Better for you to source for a better one, I'm sure it is available but if you have trouble with that I am willing to help.

Hana:

So all I have for this are simply "move 1 grid etc" which are not entirely useless, just small fry. I haven't overlooked anything, but if you decide you want to hear the very minor details, you can approach me again. maybe all done

Nokia:

One of the girl's name is Nokia? lol

Well, pretty much nothing to add on here.

- 00:37:126 (1) - Move this below the Y-axis. That way, it should be low enough to be intuitive.

- 01:48:080 (2) - Shift this note to - 01:47:904 - instead. Make sure the spacing is good enough.

Mayo:

I feel as if this is the actual Insane difficulty. Is it....? Yes it seem it is.

- 00:09:057 (1,2) - Shift each of these 2 grids away from the Y-axis. done

- 00:36:414 (5,6) - Broken stack. Fix it here:

SPOILER

done

- 00:58:491 (1,1) - Actually, this part I feel, needs a jump. Might want to copy - 00:57:957 (1,2) - and flip horizontally. More fun like this.

- 01:29:727 (1,2) - Here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

done

- 01:30:433 (3,4) - If you liked what I did above, you can follow through for here as well.done

-01:51:661 (1,2,3) - Try a kick-slider instead a 1/4 triple hitcircle combo.done

Sakuya:

The one thing I notice straight-away about this difficulty is the seemingly lagging AR.
I'd suggest you use 8, because for the most part, your spacing can be convulated/cramped.

I think using AR8 allows the player to move more freely due to the less restrictive movement needed to shift the cursor over and hit notes due to low AR. AR 8 OD 7

In addition to having the level of challenge that an "Insane" difficulty should pose. I realize this is actually the "Hard" diff, but my suggestion on AR8 still stands, the rest of the settings can remain the same.

Mostly harmless suggestions you may/may not want to follow. It's a good difficulty.

- 00:36:414 (4) - Why not remove this and replicate the previous slider, and then flip it vertically instead? Placing it in center is odd I think.done

- 00:38:016 (6) - I think this drum hit is prominent enough to warrant a note, so I guess placing one below the slider would be good. done

Stacking it on the next note isn't good since the color is pale.

- 00:44:425 (4) - Hmm, shift this 1 grid left. Currently it does slightly cover up the following note.done

- 00:46:918 (2) - I'd advise you to stack this on (1) rather than leave it. A straight-forward 1-2 followed by another 1-2 stack plays nicer.done

- 00:54:663 (2) - Do not recommend you keep this.done

I think it is better for you to remove this, and place 2 1/2 notes instead because it's actually musically correct rather than what you have here currently.

- 01:05:727 (2,3) - Not such a great stacking place. Shift the 2 notes as per normal. Preferably to the left-side.done

- 01:12:610 (4) - This isn't symmetrical/identical to the previous one, so I suggest you copy and flip horizontally.done

- 01:37:139 (2) - Hmm, maybe you can copy the slider from - 01:36:786 (1) - and flip it vertically + horizontally for a nice jump.done

That's it.

Faust wrote:

[Nokia:

One of the girl's name is Nokia? lol Maybe wrong translation/romaji. Actually nevermind, http://www.img150.animecharactersdataba ... p?id=30429, can't verify it through since I never tried this game.

Well, pretty much nothing to add on here.

- 00:37:126 (1) - Move this below the Y-axis. That way, it should be low enough to be intuitive. Move down to be aligned with begin of slider (2)

- 01:48:080 (2) - Shift this note to - 01:47:904 - instead. Make sure the spacing is good enough. K, done

Leorda wrote:

* Your hitsound is barely to hear, try maximize the volume I actually don't like how the whistle sound at high volume (it sound like it's clipping) so that's why I didn't maximize volume.

Leorda wrote:

Annyeong

General
* Your hitsound is barely to hear, try maximize the volumedone
* I saw your BG seems quite flat, try find another one?
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/cFL1 done

Hana
* I feel this diff is lacks of hitsound o.o done

00:10:116 (2) - I don't like if this slider is overlapped by previous slider (Nazi) done
01:08:021 (2) - I think this slider is needs more wavy done


Mayo
00:38:372 (7,8) - Try making this pattern to http://puu.sh/cFJF for following instruments in music? done
01:36:786 (1,2) - This sudden fast slider can makes players go confusing done


Sakuya
* Why this SV is lower that Mayo? Mayo = Insane Sakuya = Hard

00:21:939 (3) - Spacing too close? done
01:45:433 (7) - Stack this with 01:44:021 (1)? (Nazi) done
01:47:374 (3) - Spacing too close? done


EDIT : whoops, since you didn't mod my map, I can't give you a bubble, sorry

P.S. I mod this map when I am very uncomfortable ;_; sorry

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hi.

A re-check is in fact underway. I'm just going to continue it tomorrow.
Gonna try something new here, and you're my Ginnie Pig~
Instead of putting up the pictures, I will put up links.

General:

• Un-snapped notes on all diffs. Fix that please.
• I would just go ahead and make all the audio lead in times 2000 (2). It makes it consistent and fits well.
• Kiai time would be so much better if you start it on 00:58:845 and also here 01:10:139.

Hana:

• 00:12:409 (2,1) - Please don't stack these sliders. They are pretty confusing for an Easy diff.
• 01:08:198 (2) - I don't think this slider works well in an Easy. I would do this. It plays better.
• 01:19:315 (1,2) - This transition from red tick to white tick does not play very well. Change it to a slider like this
• 01:26:727 (1,2) - (1) does not really flow well into (2) in this pattern. I turn (1) so that it looks like this
• 01:41:197 (1) - This slider comes way too soon after the spinner. It does not give the player a chance to re-adjust their arm.

merchat7's Nokia:

• 00:00:410 (1) - Why don't you make this slider start on the red tick (00:00:580)? Because that is when that huge "woosh" sound starts
• 00:58:668 (2) - New combo on this note because it's the start of the kiai time (It would be the next note if you take my kiai suggestion)
• 01:32:022 (2) - Expand this note so that it ends on the red tick. I fits the music much better.

Mayo:

• 00:36:591 (5,6) - Expand the distances between these notes. It seems pretty confusing, you should make it obvious that it is an anti-jump.
• 00:58:846 (2,1) - Confusing spacing. I would stack (2) under 00:58:668 (1) and make it a simple jump. It plays a lot better that way.
• 01:34:140 (1) - This short spinner is way too short and takes a lot away from game play. I would do something like this, it plays a lot better.
• 01:39:434 (1) - For better flow, I would put the note around this area.

Sakuya:
• 00:38:193 (6,1) - It would play/flow better if you did something like this
• 00:39:795 (4,5) - These two notes don't sound very good. Remove the claps to match the music.
• 00:57:689 (1) - The silence feels weird. I would bring up the volume.

Overall:
Nice map you got here. I see great improvements in Hana. It's crawling closer to ranking, but I want to see more mod posts on this.
Great job.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

General:
• I would just go ahead and make all the audio lead in times 2000 (2). It makes it consistent and fits well. Still don't agree with this, if a diff starts at diff time, you should always use diff audio lead-in for the diffs imo, don't see a point in making it consistent just to be consistent.

merchat7's Nokia:

• 00:00:410 (1) - Why don't you make this slider start on the red tick (00:00:580)? Because that is when that huge "woosh" sound starts I want it to start right when you can hear the first woosh sound which is here and it is consistent with Sakuya and Mayo (where the spinner begin).
• 00:58:668 (2) - New combo on this note because it's the start of the kiai time (It would be the next note if you take my kiai suggestion) I would like to avoid one note combos for this map as when I mapped this, I tried to avoid one note combos so it would make combos a bit inconsistent.
• 01:32:022 (2) - Expand this note so that it ends on the red tick. I fits the music much better. You mean white? Well, I guess I'lll extend it by 1/2 to follow drums since lot of people say this and it make sense for me now that I think about it.

Cilvery wrote:

01:29:374 - remove finish instead to add whistle Done
01:32:021 - add finish Don't hear bass drum here (finish sound like bass drum)
01:32:374 - remove finish Bass drum plays here

haha5957 wrote:

[Merchat's Normal]
00:14:874 (3) - I don't think this slider is placed/or plays well because it doesnt nicely overlap previous slider.Fine imo, won't be noticeable in gameplay as (1) fade out by the time you have to hit this slider
rest of them seems fine o.o/

lepidopodus wrote:

Misaki DS
- 이 난이도 이름으로 태고맵인거 파악이 잘 안될지도.
빈집형이 캐릭터 맞춰 바꾼거라 뭐 저는 할 말이 없네요
- 나는 미연시곡 모딩은 별로 안 좋아해요. 거유는 바람직하지만 여기는 기숙사라서 좀 쑥쓰럽네요.
♥
- 구성은 괜찮은 듯? 뭐 이리저리 꼬집는 스타일은 아니고 어차피 기본 패턴 위주라서 그냥 몇가지 제안만.
00:02:175 (1) ~ 00:07:822 (43) - 시작부분은 쿠레나이를 연상시키는군요, 아무튼 뒤에 드럼이 쿵짝거리니까 이것도 괜찮기는 하지만 다른 소리들로 패턴 맞춰보는 것도 시도해보는게 좋을지도. 뭐 당장 생각나는 예시로는 ddd k ddd k 이런 것을 시도해 본다거나... (물론 여기 바꾸면 2번째 키아이 같이 바꿔주어야 하겠지만.)
조금... 바꿔봤습니다
00:07:116 (36) - 캇?
ok
00:09:234 (51,52,53,54) - d d k D이 나을수도 있음.
이 부분은 d d k D으로, 두번째 키아이부분은 d k k D으로 바꿔봤어요
00:13:469 (82) ~ 00:36:057 (228) - 이쪽 부분은 가볍게 전개하는 부분인데 큰 노트가 너무 많이 들어갔다는 느낌도 적잖아 있네요. (이 파트 후반부야 뭐 다음 파트 넘어가는 부분이니 환기 차원에서 좀 들어가는 것도 좋지만요.) 그리고 드럼 쿵짝거려서 동캇 거리는거 적절하기는 한데, 중간중간에 다른 소리에 기반을 둬서 변형을 좀 시도하는 것도 좋을 듯? (무리하면 뒷부분이 죽으니 주의. 그냥 간단한 패턴을 가지고 티만 나게 살짝 바꿔 봐요.)
큰동 몇개 빼고 뒤에 드럼소리를 이용해 약간 변형했습니다. 음...
00:24:057 (150,151,152,153,154,155) - kkd kkd이나 kkddk이나 아무튼 그런거?
음.. kkddk!
00:53:505 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318) - 이쪽 부분 잘 들어보면 더블렛 패턴(dd, dk, kd, kk) 넣을 구석이 있답니다. 예를 들어서 d-d-kd--d--dd--dd---k-d-라거나...
뒤에 깔짝깔작거리는 2 2 2 소리 그대로 넣으면 너무 박자가 애매해져서... 일단 d-d-kd-dd-kdd--dk-d-dkd 로 바꿔봤는데 별로 그렇게 마음에 쏙 들지는 않네요...
01:09:963 (414) - 여기 키아이 끊었다가 다시 켜주는거, 해주려면 티 안나게 1ms 간격으로 타이밍 섹션 조절하거나 아니면 그냥 안하는게 나을지도.
저번에 태고맵 관련 스레드 보니까 반짝키아이는 하지말라고 하더군요... 뭐 나중에 태클걸릴바에 그냥 지워버리겠습니다
01:14:022 (448,449,450) - 뒷 마디에 dkk dkk dkk...이 있어서 이 부분이 뒤에 붙어버리는 느낌이네요, 다른 패턴을 시도해 보는게?
9스트림을 5 3으로 나누고 패턴 좀 변경해봤습니다.
01:21:081 (500) - 스트림 좀 더 늘려도 될 듯? 여기 동으로 바꾸고 동 2개 추가는 선택사항. 그게 내려가는 느낌인데 캇으로 끝나니 좀 그렇네요.
전에 만들때 보컬만 듣고 넣었던 것 같네요. ddddkkkkdkd 으로 바꿔보았습니다
01:21:434 (501) - 키아이는 여기서 끕시다. 마디 단위로 해주는게 좋아요.
ok

Used Korean since KDS isn't that good at English. (Well and for me, it would be easier to mod in Korean, to be honest.)
Call me again if you want to. I might mod more if I see this again.

[General]

[Hana]

[merchat7's Nokia]

[Mayo]

[Sakuya]

Kitsuneko wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. 00:07:815 (1,2) - Add finish to both slider's head. Add only to the first slider, the second slider isn't back up by drums so I don't think it sound good on it.
2. 01:36:962 (4) - Add whistle to slider start and end, then remove whistle from 01:37:315. Put finish in earlier mod at begin I use whistle to emphasize vocal here and I think the way she say "go" is, well different from the rest of the song so I want to emphasize it with whistle. I thin emphasize will be lost if I add whistle to end as well.

Mapping

1. 01:19:844 - I suggest slider 01:19:844 - 01:20:374 (or 01:20:197). that break is long a little for me. Hm 4.3 star rating, really pushing the limit of a normal, but I'll consider this.
   nice Normal diff~ Thanks

1. Taiko Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Difficulty names
   Difficulty names must be taiko specific, but don't need to contain it's difficulty rating self (e.g. Taiko, Taiko Oni, Taiko Muzukashii). Guest difficulties may contain the mapper's name.

   So using "Misaki DS" is unrankable now.

1. 00:09:756 (55) - How about changing this to big kat? It sounds much better.
2. 00:13:462 (83) - I would like to change it to kat if I were you. It can make the pattern more fluently during gameplay.
3. 00:20:874 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - 2-4 plets sound weird and play awkward here. Probably try xx xx x x here?
4. 00:24:050 (154,155,156,157,158) - I would place ddkkd if I were you or remove the stream and then put simple 1/2 here.
5. 01:45:962 (66) - Big kat?
6. 01:49:668 (1) - How about moving this spinner to 01:49:852 - and end at 01:51:840 - , and then put a note at 01:49:672 - with a kat sound.

01:49:668 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
01:51:840 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:840 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:52:202 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:382 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.Random Taiko modding.

[General]

1. Taiko Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Difficulty names
   Difficulty names must be taiko specific, but don't need to contain it's difficulty rating self (e.g. Taiko, Taiko Oni, Taiko Muzukashii). Guest difficulties may contain the mapper's name.

   So using "Misaki DS" is unrankable now. binjip already fixed it @w@

[Misaki DS]

1. 00:09:756 (55) - How about changing this to big kat? It sounds much better. no change
2. 00:13:462 (83) - I would like to change it to kat if I were you. It can make the pattern more fluently during gameplay. Why? The sound is going down at that point.
3. 00:20:874 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - 2-4 plets sound weird and play awkward here. Probably try xx xx x x here? no c.
4. 00:24:050 (154,155,156,157,158) - I would place ddkkd if I were you or remove the stream and then put simple 1/2 here. ^
5. 01:45:962 (66) - Big kat? ^
6. 01:49:668 (1) - How about moving this spinner to 01:49:852 - and end at 01:51:840 - , and then put a note at 01:49:672 - with a kat sound. hmm.... ^

ok, that's it.

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
yeah, it's suggested to add "taiko" to the difficulty name... :3
-remove letterbox during breaks binjip already fixed it too x3;
01:49:672 - it's recommended to add a note before slider starts slider...? spinner...? btw, no fix
not much to complain, it followed the drum well.

484,232,10639,6,0,B|256:372|28:228,1,480,2|2

Chewin wrote:

[merchat7's Nokia]
00:00:492 (1) - This slider should to star 1/4 after, I mean 00:00:492 Hmmm, I start here for consistency with spinners on other diff. Also slider ticks would look ugly doing this so I keep this for now. If there is a really big problem, I may just change to a spinner.
00:34:109 (3) - Fix this shape moving the second waypoint 1 grid up k fixed
00:41:755 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:200 y:148 so you can move the 00:42:467 (2) to x:436 y:148 making a blanket with 00:40:865 (3) Hmm, I actually want to do something else here so did that instead. Basically, I want (1) to point to (2) (redownload when this diff get update for a clear idea of what I mean)
Nice diff Ty

1. you make diffs some useless green line please delete all you need choose use green line

1. 00:35:874 (3) - Add new combo cuz start slow part
2. 00:53:149 (4) - add finish
3. 01:01:668 (3) - beginner custom whistle

1. 00:34:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think its strange jump useing spacing 1.5 or 1.0

1. Nice*

1. why you some change spacing? i think newbie player will be confused
2. nothing to say this diff well...

S o r d a wrote:

from queue
sorry for delay

[overall]:

1. you make diffs some useless green line please delete all you need choose use green line

[Sakuya]:

1. 00:35:874 (3) - Add new combo cuz start slow part
2. 00:53:149 (4) - add finish
3. 01:01:668 (3) - beginner custom whistle

[Mayo]:

1. 00:34:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think its strange jump useing spacing 1.5 or 1.0

[merchat7's Nokia]:

1. Nice*

[Easy]:

1. why you some change spacing? i think newbie player will be confused
2. nothing to say this diff well...

good luck with ranked~

Fenya wrote:

Hi hi~

Hana:
00:47:274 (1,2,3) - Spacing D:
00:57:422 (2) - Why jump?

merchat7's Nokia:
00:22:286 (2) - 1 grid up?
00:34:109 (3) - Put like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352740 ? I think looks better o.o

Mayo:
00:49:055 (1) - 1 grid left?

Sakuya:
Fine \o\

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Flask wrote:

Hi there ~ Request from CLANNAD Modding queue~

[Mayo]
01:23:374 (8,9) - like this ? (a little bit change on (9))

01:44:197 (6) - move down 5 gird (or more) (gird level4)

[Sakuya]
00:41:755 (1) - how about this ?

00:44:603 (4) - ctrl+H then move back ? (suggestion)
01:13:492 (4,5) - this ?

That's all i can find , GL !

arien666 wrote:

Seems okay on things :3
(Fixed unsnapped things of Mayo diff)



meow :3

Aleks719 wrote:

General
i'm not at home, can't check timing, will make it a bit later
Names of diffs kinda strange, i couldn't understand what does it mean. As example, Mayo diff harder than Sakuya, but places lower, so.. better rename with usual names

Sakuya
00:37:304 (3,4,5,6) - try this direction : http://puu.sh/14E0W. imo, makes flow more constant and avoids strange jump between 3 and 4
00:47:274 (3,1,2) - kinda hard to read for the 1st time. unstack?

Hana
Tickrate 2 would be better here
01:29:727 (5) - put nc here, from next note?
01:46:844 (1) - make it symmetrical? :S

Aleks719 wrote:

aaand timing:

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:478 (1) - Now this is way too soon after a spinner. Try to give 3-4 white ticks before adding a new note please.
01:36:266 (1) - New combo

1. 00:46:058 (3) - Since you probably moved 00:47:307 (1) to the red line when the lastest mod, consider to shorten this slider to 00:46:593. It becomes easier to read them.

• 
  Only what I worry about is the big gap of difficulty setting between Normal and Hard. Please increase HP/OD by 1.

1. 00:40:879 (8) - Move this further a bit from (7) to make spacing consistent in the same combo.
2. 01:20:207 (x) - Add a note here? It can follow both of the vocal and the drum.

1. 00:18:066 (4) - Gameplay isn't that good here because this note is hidden a bit by the previous note. Hum, how about fixing (2) and (4) a bit like the below example?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:360 (5) - Kinda misleading. I expected the next triple is at 00:32:890 when playing :/ Just shorten this slider to 00:32:713 and add a note circle at 00:32:890? Gameplay will become better imo.
3. 00:44:450 (2) - It can be played but too narrow spacing looks weird. Rather, stack with (1) perfectly?
4. 00:48:910 (6) - Add a newcombo to this rather than 00:49:088 (1). Being on the downbeat is better and here's symmetric formation will get emphasized.
5. 01:32:031 (5) - Add a newcombo to clarify the spacing change.
6. 01:49:149 (1,2,3,4) - I felt something wrong. To follow the bass, I think they should be like this.
   

Suzully wrote:

Hi.

[Easy]

1. 00:46:058 (3) - Since you probably moved 00:47:307 (1) to the red line when the lastest mod, consider to shorten this slider to 00:46:593. It becomes easier to read them.

[Normal]

• 
  Only what I worry about is the big gap of difficulty setting between Normal and Hard. Please increase HP/OD by 1.

[Hard]

1. 00:40:879 (8) - Move this further a bit from (7) to make spacing consistent in the same combo.
2. 01:20:207 (x) - Add a note here? It can follow both of the vocal and the drum.

[Insane]

1. 00:18:066 (4) - Gameplay isn't that good here because this note is hidden a bit by the previous note. Hum, how about fixing (2) and (4) a bit like the below example?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:360 (5) - Kinda misleading. I expected the next triple is at 00:32:890 when playing :/ Just shorten this slider to 00:32:713 and add a note circle at 00:32:890? Gameplay will become better imo.
3. 00:44:450 (2) - It can be played but too narrow spacing looks weird. Rather, stack with (1) perfectly?
4. 00:48:910 (6) - Add a newcombo to this rather than 00:49:088 (1). Being on the downbeat is better and here's symmetric formation will get emphasized.
5. 01:32:031 (5) - Add a newcombo to clarify the spacing change.
6. 01:49:149 (1,2,3,4) - I felt something wrong. To follow the bass, I think they should be like this.