00:27:772 (2,3) - I suggest changing 2 so it's just a circle instead of a slider to avoid confusion.
01:30:515 (1,3) - I suggest changing 1 so it's just a circle instead of a slider to avoid confusion.
01:27:772 (1,3) - If you can line up those slider beginnings it'd make it look nice just like you did at 01:30:515 (1,3) -
00:32:915 (1,1,2,1,1) - under mapped, I suggest following the vocals. It's hard, they should be able to handle it.
04:03:335 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - while the spacing can be great for when the song gets more intense, the guitar goes lower in pitch making the increasing jumps seem a little off.
03:22:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel like something should be done with these to make them more linear.
02:58:085 (1) - I enjoy what you did for this solo in general. Made it nice and simple before it becomes really intense.