03:28:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This stream here doesn't provide enough of a change in movement in the corners for it to be relevant.
Having used angles like 02:56:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -, you could consider having something like a zig-zag every four notes instead.
01:35:643 (9,10) - You could Ctrl+G this rhythm, as you get the drum sound in the sliderend instead of having it clickable.
01:00:243 (7,8,9,10,1) - Consider increasing spacing in these patterns, as the 90º 5 note burst doesn't provide enough change in movement for it to actually highlight the change in the song.
05:37:443 - Rhythm here doesnt add up, as it's not following accurately neither of the two layers.
Consider swapping to something similar to https://imgur.com/a/mLS6qAu, especially since you swap to the other melody in 05:50:243 - or simplifying the you use in the following section so that there is enough progression.
Not a big fan of adding anything in 00:59:704 -, as I feel theres not enough intensity for it to add a slider without it feeling weird. 00:57:360 (2) - turned this into a reverse and removed the spinner instead.
I took the Metadata from Akareh's set so I didn't check it initially.
According to Akareh, vinchi is credited in the song's description in youtube as "Arranger, REmixing Engineer and Mastering Engineer"
You dian yi si was in tags as the chinese title to the song, it stands for a romanization so I assume after adding the following post it should be alright to keep.
There's some parts of the song that fall under glitch hop, so I guess It's relevant.