spacing from 01:59:742 to 02:10:569 , is mostly uniform. some visual contrast starting on 02:08:990 (2) for the ramping drums and guitar would be nice.
01:49:592 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5)
01:51:396 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:56:810 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5)
I personally don't understand the overmapping, pls explain
04:44:564 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - The arrangement in placing here needs some work. 04:45:402 (2,3) - 04:45:905 (2,3) - the equal spacing of these removes the emphasis of the circles that land on snares.
04:45:737 (1,2,3,1) - This follows clockwise circular flow, even though 04:45:234 (1) - and 04:45:737 (1) - break the previous circular flow. Stick with one or the other.
The Rhythm in the Chorus Kiais get's quite repetitive. circle -> 1/2 slider -> circle -> 1/2 slider -> circle -> 1/2 slider -> Stream -> repeat.
Some variation would be nice.
changed it but different from yours, yours is too snappy, and I'd like to keep it a little calmer here
the spacing is overkill, it's undwhelming on purpose because I decided that the pianos here aren't as significant as 02:16:083 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
The curve on the slider is supposed to represent that sound. I don't want to add another note since I don't think it's a substantial enough sound to warrant an active click.
uhhh, basically, I just wanted to make the arrangement of this slider different, since 01:01:002 (5,6,7,8) is a major rhythmic change from the consistent 3/4 sliders. Idk if that helps.
you could just reopen, I don't see a problem with reopening if you find another relevant issue. Anyway, in regards to the spacing, the point of the spacing here wasn't to emphasize sound, but rather contrast the groupings and patterns in accordance with the music. Since there is a very definite contrast in the music here, I wanted to emphasize that contrast if that makes sense
I see, although I think measuring slider lengths to that sort of minute detail is a bit od, changes her should be fine.