02:22:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - now this is cool compared to what you did at 00:20:058 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - because the latter looks really unpolished while the current timeline looks more refined
02:23:178 (3) - make this nc instead of this 02:23:298 (1) -
02:23:658 (1) - and i also think you should place this kickslider nearer to the last object, i suggest placing it maybe at x 310 y 107
01:57:738 (2) - would be cool too if you place this under 01:57:258 (1) - the slider head like how you did with 00:55:818 (1,2) -
01:38:418 (2) - would be cool if this is not entirely overlap, maybe move it to x 488 y 18 since this 01:38:898 (2) - is not overlapped
01:21:498 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - odd spacing changes tbh
you can try for a more straightforward movement like https://i.imgur.com/HxT1uUA.png
or you can try going ham like https://i.imgur.com/zJJJv7a.png
up to you but i think the current one is disruptive
00:20:058 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the placement of the circles look a bit random and it doesnt flow too well. heres my suggestion on how to place it (unless you can make an even better placement) https://i.imgur.com/CeTmRRo.png
make this as nc 00:20:298 (3) - instead of this 00:20:418 (1) -
00:13:098 (6,7,8) - i think its better to place these in a more straight forward manner like how you do it with 00:19:098 (3,4,1) - and 00:22:338 (3,4,5,6) - because this one out of all patterns in this section looks really out of place
edit: do this with 02:15:978 (6,7,8) - as well.
if you still insist on keeping the jump. maybe approach it like this instead? https://i.imgur.com/rug7Riz.png
it doesnt look too out of place and random this way