While I listed some problems with hyper usage on this diff, I think it would be a good idea to check all of the hypers used throughout the kiai and rework them a bit. They feel inconsistent, I cannot tell exactly what they are supposed to represent.

01:10:348 (5,6,7) - more emphasis here please, compared to your previous emphasis on high pitched vocals this feels weak
other instances don't have that strong of a pitch drift

00:51:115 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:04:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) are not that off in intensity yet you mapped them completely different, second pattern is a massive diff spike - there's a stronger vocal but not to justify a full-area hyperchain + you have next to no emphasis on the pitch drift
for the second pattern, either decreasing the distance between hypers or reducing the amount of hypers would be enough (maybe nerf the first hyperchain and keep the second hyperchain but with smaller distances, hmmmm...?)

00:07:360 (2) and 01:21:660 (2) - skipping the strong sounds on major white is quite off-putting when playing, I would suggest to add an object on the white tick

Malai's kawaii desu >w< general mapset checklist (will be updated along the check):

General:

• Title and Artist + romanised: ✅
• Source check: ✅
• BG format + combo colours: ✅ JPG in 1920x1080 format, combo colours not too bright or too dark
• Video quality + links + offset (if present): ✅ .mp4 format, 720p, 30FPS, offset is fine
• Audio check + offset: 🟨 .mp3 in 192kbps - offset issue mentioned in the reply to this note
• Hitsounds check: ✅
• Unnecessary files (hitsounds, other bgs, etc.): ✅
• Difficulty settings check: ✅
• Diff naming schema: ✅ more details in another note

Tags:

• GD ownership + GDers in tags (if applicable): ✅
• Hitsounder in tags (if applicable): ✅
• Genre and Language: ✅
• FA + MPG in tags (if applicable): N/A
• No duplicate tags: ✅
• Link to source + added related tags: ✅

Software checks:
AiMod
No issues on both diffs.

Mapset Verifier

No major issues, false positive on "el raton's 08.15.-2" due to drain time.

spek

No issues.

timinganlyz

🟨 See reply below for more info.

Summary:
Need to change audio offset and either nerf one of the diffs to make a proper spread, or add third difficulty to provide a proper jump in difficulty. Currently the two deluges are not sufficient to call that a proper spread.