02:57:213 (2) - this sound is pretty strong, maybe rotate the slider 180 degrees like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19465307/3946
03:13:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you ctrl+h this, I think it fits better with the spinners that way
02:27:566 (3,4,5) - I think make 4 horizontal, rn it feels too weak https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19463998/068f
00:23:486 (1) - I like the idea of the slider for the voice but I think this has too much movement, you have another one later that is much easier and more fit for a salad (01:24:163 (1) - ). I think doing something similar to the second one would fit nicely
02:29:660 (8,9,1) - movement feels a bit difficult for a salad, maybe try to make 8 & 9 go to the left and then put 1 a bit further left? would be an easier flow for newer players
02:21:133 (6) - the blue tick after this slider has a pretty important sound, maybe adding a note on 02:21:387 would represent the song a bit better.
00:44:501 (6,7) - I would make 6 horizontal to help the movement be a bit easier. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19463977/97cf
02:18:421 (3,1) - this hyper takes a bit away from the next one on 02:21:302 (5,1) - , I think since this is a slow part you could just have a normal dash here
01:01:791 (2) - this slider is antiflow but every other instance of this sound (01:51:621 (2) - and 02:59:078 (2) - ) goes with the flow, for consistency maybe make that first one flowy too?