Change the first bpm line from 943 to 933, not sure if the offset for it is entirely correct as I didn't extensively check it, but it's way better at the very least.
04:44:724 (284724|0,284938|1,285153|0) - I think this is the first time you used ln's to signify the vocals here
You dont do that on the rest of the song like here 03:32:724 -
Also first time you're using a single instead of a double or mostly triple on a hard beat here 04:45:367 -
04:42:367 (282367|2) - I think this note is unnecessary and it breaks the flow of the rhythm.
Maybe you're hearing something I don't hear there, if so please correct me. Otherwise I think it's better to leave it out.
Thank youu! Well one day xd
Once I finish the hard difficulty I'll try to reach out and see how it goes
Tbh, I would just ignore the vocals and only focus on the instruments, just having single notes. Feel free to close it again if you rather keep the doubles