00:04:418 (19) - how about delete this note to give 1/1 distance break? 40 notes are continuos now
I recommend 00:03:746 k dkd -> kkdkd and delete 00:04:418
00:14:492 (26,27,28,29,1) - the music sounds like d k k d D
so can you change pattern like ddkdk d D? add d on 00:15:164 seems good