00:04:418 (19) - how about delete this note to give 1/1 distance break? 40 notes are continuos now I recommend 00:03:746 k dkd -> kkdkd and delete 00:04:418
also 00:25:239
fixed!
00:14:492 (26,27,28,29,1) - the music sounds like d k k d D so can you change pattern like ddkdk d D? add d on 00:15:164 seems good
also 00:35:985
00:43:150 can you use k d k k D instead of k d k d K? you already use k d k k D on 00:21:657 and I think using k d k k D sounds better