02:49:855 (1,2,3,4) - your map really does tend to dance around the readanility bounds as well. items like this and 01:07:777 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - are while readable to an extent they dont follow a clear theme or justification of this kind of placement. also making giant unreadable wub sections is insanely jumpscaring to anyone touching this map with a 15ft pole
02:43:621 (1,2,3,4) - when placing sliders in general you gotta remember the sliderend is a note too. what you have here are what are basically 300 bpm jumps from end 1 to start 2. id reccomend consistently alternating like slider head where prev slider end is, just anything to decrease the insane speed and spacing of these sliders