00:23:994 (4,5) - this shouldn't be a hyper since 00:26:366 (6,7) - isn't and vice versa
00:36:704 (1,2,3) - might as well remove (2) because there is no noticeable sound on the blue tick. shouldn't affect the gameplay too much
00:47:892 (3,4) - spacing emphasis should be made on (3) instead of (4) because there is a stronger sound at (3)
00:56:367 (4,1) - imo you should make this a dash instead of a hyper because the vocal in (1) isn't as strong as (4)
01:01:791 (2) - this slider is antiflow but every other instance of this sound (01:51:621 (2) - and 02:59:078 (2) - ) goes with the flow, for consistency maybe make that first one flowy too?
tilted 01:22:977 (2) - to the left instead of to the right
moved 01:23:146 (3,4) - 16px to the left
moved 01:23:485 (5) - 16px to the right
01:28:568 (4,5) - you should decrease spacing to 1.33x to have it be consistent with 01:27:212 (7,8) -
moved 01:28:568 (4) - 32px right
also removed hyper from previous note to match with 01:27:043 (6,7) -
02:18:421 (3,1) - this hyper takes a bit away from the next one on 02:21:302 (5,1) - , I think since this is a slow part you could just have a normal dash here
02:34:333 (9,10) - you should make these dashes instead to have 02:36:367 (9,10) - stand out more.
increasing the spacing of 02:36:367 (9,10) - also works