Since the timing has been confirmed, I just want to get the wrongfully snapped objects out of the way.

00:24:307 (2) - This slider is wrongfully snapped. Should start at 00:24:359 on the 1/3 tick.
00:26:807 (2) - Same issue as above, but its snapped at 1/12 tick at 00:26:911. You could probably keep this one as is if you want to simplify.
02:14:355 (4) - Wrongfully snapped reverse slider. Should be a 3/8 beat reverse slider to match the guitar riffs.
02:14:991 (1) - Same issue as above (should be a 3/8 beat slider). For this one though, start at 02:14:969 and end it at 02:15:173 (2). Same deal at 02:16:946 (6) as well.

Hope this helps!
Marking this as a problem due to timing issue, but feel free to resolve this once you are done (=w=)

02:47:764 (8) - I would add a hit circle here to capture the vocals.

02:41:764 (3,5) - Flow/Structure wise, I would straighten both of these sliders. If you decided to fix these, then I would also sugguest making 02:41:355 (2) the same shape as 02:40:946 (1) for a smoother flow. Here's an example:

76,47,160946,6,0,P|117:86|112:155,1,125.999996154785,6|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 72,222,161355,2,0,P|41:275|62:332,1,125.999996154785,0|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 144,331,161764,2,0,L|208:324,1,62.9999980773926,10|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 270,378,162037,1,2,2:0:0:0:
In addition, I would change the curve at 02:42:582 (7) for better flow.

02:31:946 (7,8,1) - Very small detail, but these objects are not perfectly snapped.

02:09:151 (5,6,7,8,9) - The pattern and flow could be better here. May I suggest a better pattern?

259,379,118369,2,0,P|241:318|199:288,1,116.999994644165,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 87,289,118838,2,0,P|130:242|135:191,1,116.999994644165,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 73,126,119307,1,2,2:0:0:0: 153,115,119463,2,0,L|227:105,1,58.4999973220826,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 280,158,119776,2,0,L|354:168,1,58.4999973220826,10|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0: 424,90,120088,2,0,L|350:80,1,58.4999973220826,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:

01:45:401 (1,2,3,4) - I'll keep the spacing consistent here since the vocal intensity are the same.

01:32:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These objects seems randomly placed. My suggestion is to restructure these objects. Same as in 01:35:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7).

Ironically, you have done a better job in terms of flow and structure on the 1st verse at 00:35:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7), so maybe go with something similar.

01:09:463 (5) - Similar to above suggestion. For this one though, angle this slider more towards the right for better flow.

01:06:963 (6) - I'll probably just angle this slider downwards a bit for better flow.