I think this slider - 01:50:339 (3) - should be extended to 01:50:901 - as the syllable of the lyric ends there. Entirely optional though
00:30:370 (2,3) - this pattern here can be confusing to read due to the spacing after the slider end. I recommend placing it underneath the silder - 00:30:089 (1) - end to make it more comfortable. same thing applies for 00:36:370 (2,3) -
03:37:670 (5) - Ctrl+G to make the transition to the next note smoother (Accidentally made this a problem, Sorry)