A really nice map, kroytz have already said this but anyways i'd work more on structuring, overall kiai feels nice but as for the first 2 parts they doesnt seem to be structured that well
00:29:378 (7,8) - These 2 Notes before the break are still streams in the timeline, Move 00:29:464 (8) - slightly closer to 00:28:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Reason is that people playing the map for the first time would try to predict that 00:29:464 (8) - is not connected in the stream before it, But think it's a 1/4th jump after the stream.