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ZUN - Tsukidokei ~ Luna Dial [OsuMania]

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FAMoss
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Minggu, 01 Juli 2018 at 19.14.24

Artist: ZUN
Title: Tsukidokei ~ Luna Dial
Source: 東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.
Tags: lunar clock runa daiaru touhou project eosd sakuya izayoi dudehacker
BPM: 146
Filesize: 2215kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 4Key (1,5 stars, 327 notes)
  2. Hard - 4Key (3,22 stars, 954 notes)
  3. Lunatic - 4Key (3,74 stars, 1078 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (2,24 stars, 570 notes)
Download: ZUN - Tsukidokei ~ Luna Dial
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... and you for playing this map!
Last edited by FAMoss , edited 118 times in total.
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Meiju
owo

[Lunatic]
00:00:491 (491|2) - i don't hear any sound here, so remove note
00:01:005 - 00:01:930 - 00:05:217 - i don't see reasons for these triples, make doubles. The best way to decide about chords is doubles for kicks and triples for crashes and sounds like 00:02:546 - this :^)
00:07:169 - don't ignore this sound, add note
00:05:834 - https://puu.sh/xUH2a/17ec16bdcb.png
00:10:149 - in this part, better to regularize jacks by adding them at crashes, https://puu.sh/xUHaO/a8e996973c.png like this
00:14:156 (14156|2,14258|1,14258|3) - better to map these kicks with singles to stronger highlight 00:13:847 (13847|2,13847|0,14053|1,14053|3) - these sounds with doubles
00:15:799 (15799|1,15902|0,15902|2) - same
00:22:477 - 00:23:094 - 00:23:710 - better to map with doubles :^)
00:27:717 - ehh why double, make single
00:28:025 - triple i guess
00:37:067 - triple
00:37:580 - double
00:37:786 - double
welp, i think enough, you get it, listen carefully and put double for kicks :v
00:44:156 (44156|3,44258|3,44361|3) - i don't like these triple jacks, maybe smth like 00:44:053 - https://puu.sh/xUHI8/748f4b1597.png - so we have two beautiful double jacks
00:52:786 - better to add note
01:06:039 - here starts new part and it sounds stronger, but patterns are easier than is past part :^( so, make patterns in this part harder :^)
01:07:375 - you missed note
01:09:121 - maybe triple
01:15:697 - same
01:17:546 - you actually can use here 1/8 like https://puu.sh/xUHS8/e5b099f787.png - this

Good luck! Go for ranked xd
FAMoss
osu! Alumni
1,142 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
FAMoss

Mage wrote:

owo

[Lunatic]
00:00:491 (491|2) - i don't hear any sound here, so remove note
00:01:005 - 00:01:930 - 00:05:217 - i don't see reasons for these triples, make doubles. The best way to decide about chords is doubles for kicks and triples for crashes and sounds like 00:02:546 - this :^)
00:07:169 - don't ignore this sound, add note
00:05:834 - https://puu.sh/xUH2a/17ec16bdcb.png
00:10:149 - in this part, better to regularize jacks by adding them at crashes, https://puu.sh/xUHaO/a8e996973c.png like this
00:14:156 (14156|2,14258|1,14258|3) - better to map these kicks with singles to stronger highlight 00:13:847 (13847|2,13847|0,14053|1,14053|3) - these sounds with doubles
00:15:799 (15799|1,15902|0,15902|2) - same
00:22:477 - 00:23:094 - 00:23:710 - better to map with doubles :^)
00:27:717 - ehh why double, make single
00:28:025 - triple i guess
00:37:067 - triple
00:37:580 - double
00:37:786 - double
welp, i think enough, you get it, listen carefully and put double for kicks :v
00:44:156 (44156|3,44258|3,44361|3) - i don't like these triple jacks, maybe smth like 00:44:053 - https://puu.sh/xUHI8/748f4b1597.png - so we have two beautiful double jacks
00:52:786 - better to add note
01:06:039 - here starts new part and it sounds stronger, but patterns are easier than is past part :^( so, make patterns in this part harder :^)
01:07:375 - you missed note
01:09:121 - maybe triple
01:15:697 - same
01:17:546 - you actually can use here 1/8 like https://puu.sh/xUHS8/e5b099f787.png - this

Good luck! Go for ranked xd
WOW, thanks man
very helpful ;) ;)
Ryzen_old_1
Ryzen_old_1
00:00:491 - ini harusnya di 00:00:000 - sini :>>
Ryzen_old_1
Ryzen_old_1
ngh-mo
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: :| irc aja dah dipp normal
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: katakan yg salah!!!
2017-10-11 16.13 Linyx-sama: anjing ngegas
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: :v
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: mod oi :)
2017-10-11 16.14 Linyx-sama: 00:02:957 (2957|3,3162|0,3368|3,3573|0) - ga dibentuk stair aja? soalnya ini sama suara di 00:02:340 (2340|3) - 
2017-10-11 16.14 Linyx-sama: hadhe, aink ga pro mod
2017-10-11 16.14 FAMoss: ga, karena jauh suara
2017-10-11 16.15 FAMoss: ok 1 00:02:546 (2546|0,2751|1) - ini ajagua balik
2017-10-11 16.15 Linyx-sama: nah
2017-10-11 16.16 FAMoss: lain?
2017-10-11 16.16 FAMoss: tapi kaya hs yg ga lengkap
2017-10-11 16.18 Linyx-sama: 00:02:546 (2546|0) - ga ke col 3 ?
2017-10-11 16.18 FAMoss: udah vix sekarang
2017-10-11 16.18 Linyx-sama: >:
2017-10-11 16.19 FAMoss: h3h3
2017-10-11 16.20 FAMoss: wwww
2017-10-11 16.21 Linyx-sama: 00:11:998 (11998|0,12204|1,12409|0) - aneh bruh, 00:11:998 (11998|0) - ke 3 sj , kalo 00:11:998 (11998|0,12204|1,12409|0) - gw kira kesulitan untuk dipencet dan ga sesuai irama
2017-10-11 16.21 FAMoss: wait gua lag
2017-10-11 16.22 Linyx-sama: laptop w lag di bagian akhir lagu :/
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: kapan loved? :v
2017-10-11 16.24 Linyx-sama: nusuk banget sialan :'v
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: :V
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: ini lanjut?
2017-10-11 16.26 Linyx-sama: udah cukup keknya
2017-10-11 16.28 Linyx-sama: AFK kah ?
2017-10-11 16.29 FAMoss: chatlog kirim ke thread
FAMoss
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Linyx-sama wrote:

ngh-mo
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: :| irc aja dah dipp normal
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: katakan yg salah!!!
2017-10-11 16.13 Linyx-sama: anjing ngegas
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: :v
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: mod oi :)
2017-10-11 16.14 Linyx-sama: 00:02:957 (2957|3,3162|0,3368|3,3573|0) - ga dibentuk stair aja? soalnya ini sama suara di 00:02:340 (2340|3) - 
2017-10-11 16.14 Linyx-sama: hadhe, aink ga pro mod
2017-10-11 16.14 FAMoss: ga, karena jauh suara
2017-10-11 16.15 FAMoss: ok 1 00:02:546 (2546|0,2751|1) - ini ajagua balik
2017-10-11 16.15 Linyx-sama: nah
2017-10-11 16.16 FAMoss: lain?
2017-10-11 16.16 FAMoss: tapi kaya hs yg ga lengkap
2017-10-11 16.18 Linyx-sama: 00:02:546 (2546|0) - ga ke col 3 ?
2017-10-11 16.18 FAMoss: udah vix sekarang
2017-10-11 16.18 Linyx-sama: >:
2017-10-11 16.19 FAMoss: h3h3
2017-10-11 16.20 FAMoss: wwww
2017-10-11 16.21 Linyx-sama: 00:11:998 (11998|0,12204|1,12409|0) - aneh bruh, 00:11:998 (11998|0) - ke 3 sj , kalo 00:11:998 (11998|0,12204|1,12409|0) - gw kira kesulitan untuk dipencet dan ga sesuai irama
2017-10-11 16.21 FAMoss: wait gua lag
2017-10-11 16.22 Linyx-sama: laptop w lag di bagian akhir lagu :/
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: kapan loved? :v
2017-10-11 16.24 Linyx-sama: nusuk banget sialan :'v
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: :V
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: ini lanjut?
2017-10-11 16.26 Linyx-sama: udah cukup keknya
2017-10-11 16.28 Linyx-sama: AFK kah ?
2017-10-11 16.29 FAMoss: chatlog kirim ke thread

LMAO
Himari Kino
324 posts
Joined June 2015
Himari Kino
hasil hubungan gelap
2017-10-13 15.18 FAMoss: irc?
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: yok
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: lgi gabut uga editing ps :'v
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: phothosp
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: ?
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: hooh
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: diff ez
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1435153 ZUN - Tsukidokei ~ Luna Dial [Easy]]
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: ok otw
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: yo
2017-10-13 15.23 Zylin: 00:10:971 (10971|0,11793|3) - delete aja , cuz itu suara udh di cover sama ln
2017-10-13 15.23 Zylin: berhubung ini diff easy
2017-10-13 15.23 FAMoss: dah 
2017-10-13 15.25 Zylin: 00:14:430 (14430|0) - ini bukan 1/12 sih mnurutku 1/4 aj di 00:14:464 -
2017-10-13 15.25 FAMoss: um itu dari suara ntya benar 1/12
2017-10-13 15.25 FAMoss: mage map make itu
2017-10-13 15.26 Zylin: iya free to reject , sntay klo mw keep :'3
2017-10-13 15.27 FAMoss: lagi..
2017-10-13 15.28 Zylin: 00:03:573 (3573|1) - move ke col 3 aja biar gak terlalu berat di col 2
2017-10-13 15.28 FAMoss: yes
2017-10-13 15.29 Zylin: 00:40:560 (40560|2) - no needed
2017-10-13 15.30 FAMoss: dah
2017-10-13 15.30 Zylin: 00:42:204 (42204|3) - ^
2017-10-13 15.31 Zylin: 00:47:135 (47135|3) - nah sama delete uga, terus
2017-10-13 15.31 FAMoss: um
2017-10-13 15.31 Zylin: 00:47:546 (47546|2) - move ke col 4, and tambah note di 00:47:751 - col 3
2017-10-13 15.32 Zylin: jadi flow gtu :^)
2017-10-13 15.32 FAMoss: ok
2017-10-13 15.34 Zylin: 01:02:340 (62340|2,62546|2) - hindari jack di easy diff
2017-10-13 15.34 Zylin: ganti pattern lain aj
2017-10-13 15.34 FAMoss: udah
2017-10-13 15.36 Zylin: 01:02:340 (62340|2,62546|2,77546|2,77957|2,78368|1,78779|0,79190|1) - delete aj sih , mending ganti dengan ln di col 3  start dri 01:17:546 - tercover dah suaranya dengan double ln
2017-10-13 15.36 Zylin: and 01:19:190 - add note di col 1
2017-10-13 15.36 FAMoss:  OK
2017-10-13 15.37 Zylin: itu aj sih easy nya, ngintip nm lgi
2017-10-13 15.38 FAMoss: :p
2017-10-13 15.39 Zylin: 01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70662|2,70765|3) - wut the hel
2017-10-13 15.39 Zylin: yg biasa aj kea 12|43
2017-10-13 15.39 FAMoss: agak susah itu h3h3
2017-10-13 15.40 Zylin: malah tawa asw :'v
2017-10-13 15.40 FAMoss: ini part susah jadi buat gitu pattern tpi kalau bisa saran yg agak ga susah
2017-10-13 15.41 Zylin: 01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70662|2,70765|3,75286|0,75491|0,75697|0,75902|0) - gak boleh ini smpai bersusun 4 di dalam 1 kolom
2017-10-13 15.41 Zylin: malah susah yg pattern u loh
2017-10-13 15.42 Zylin: enak 12|43 mnurut ku
2017-10-13 15.42 FAMoss: ubah ok
2017-10-13 15.43 Zylin: 00:01:005 - add col 1 , ada penekanan suara
2017-10-13 15.43 Zylin: add note*
2017-10-13 15.44 Zylin: 00:01:930 - ^ dan yg lain , yg punya nada sama tinggi kyk gini
2017-10-13 15.47 Zylin: testis
2017-10-13 15.47 Zylin: *testing
2017-10-13 15.47 FAMoss: yeyeyeyeyey
2017-10-13 15.47 FAMoss: si rey mavok, apk mulu
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: wkwk
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: rey aktif malem
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: itu aj diff nm mos
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: avk njer
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: ok deh
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: ntah klo diff hd bisa atau g gw modnya :/
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: lma g modd hd ;w;
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: up to you :^
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: tes dlo :V
2017-10-13 15.49 FAMoss: akwoakwao
2017-10-13 15.50 Zylin: wkwko anjer bru nyadar gw ada hs buat miss note
2017-10-13 15.50 Zylin: gj
2017-10-13 15.50 FAMoss: oakoawkwaokwaokwa
2017-10-13 15.51 Zylin: 00:02:546 (2546|1,2546|0) - suaranya lebih kecil dari 00:02:751 (2751|2,2751|3) - jadi buat single aja
2017-10-13 15.52 FAMoss: ok
2017-10-13 15.54 Zylin: 00:25:560 (25560|2,25971|2,26382|2,26793|2) - sama kayak yang sebelumnya gk boleh kek gini
2017-10-13 15.54 Zylin: ganti pattern
2017-10-13 15.54 FAMoss: ye
2017-10-13 15.56 Zylin: 01:08:505 (68505|3,68710|3,68916|3,69121|3,69327|3,69532|3) - wkwkwko hardesssssssst
2017-10-13 15.56 Zylin: 01:08:505 (68505|3,68710|3,68916|3,69121|3,69327|3,69532|3,70354|1,70560|1,70765|1,70971|1,71176|1,71382|1,71587|1) - . . . . .
2017-10-13 15.57 FAMoss: bentar say
2017-10-13 15.59 Zylin: 01:05:628 (65628|0,65834|0,66039|0,66245|0) - sama uga nih, bntar gw coba buat kan pattern buat yg ini
2017-10-13 15.59 FAMoss: dah 
2017-10-13 15.59 FAMoss: 01:05:834 - 1 ke 4
2017-10-13 16.00 FAMoss: jam 02.00 ?
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304388
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: itu di bagian 01:05:423 -
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: jam 02.00? nani!
2017-10-13 16.01 FAMoss: dah
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: ?
2017-10-13 16.01 FAMoss: owakoawk ga 
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: wkwko
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: 00:38:299 (38299|2,38505|2,38710|2,38916|2) - nah hmpir ketinggalan
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: change pattern
2017-10-13 16.03 FAMoss: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304400 lamo
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: 01:08:916 (68916|2,68916|3,68916|0,69121|0,69121|3,69121|2) - kalau ini ngikut suara "tung tung"
2017-10-13 16.04 FAMoss: tung-tung
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: mending double aja
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: nah bagus tuh
2017-10-13 16.04 FAMoss: tung!
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: :^ es krim
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: tungtung
2017-10-13 16.05 FAMoss: murah :^
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: wkwko
FAMoss
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FAMoss

Zylin wrote:

hasil hubungan gelap
2017-10-13 15.18 FAMoss: irc?
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: yok
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: lgi gabut uga editing ps :'v
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: phothosp
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: ?
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: hooh
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: diff ez
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1435153 ZUN - Tsukidokei ~ Luna Dial [Easy]]
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: ok otw
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: yo
2017-10-13 15.23 Zylin: 00:10:971 (10971|0,11793|3) - delete aja , cuz itu suara udh di cover sama ln
2017-10-13 15.23 Zylin: berhubung ini diff easy
2017-10-13 15.23 FAMoss: dah 
2017-10-13 15.25 Zylin: 00:14:430 (14430|0) - ini bukan 1/12 sih mnurutku 1/4 aj di 00:14:464 -
2017-10-13 15.25 FAMoss: um itu dari suara ntya benar 1/12
2017-10-13 15.25 FAMoss: mage map make itu
2017-10-13 15.26 Zylin: iya free to reject , sntay klo mw keep :'3
2017-10-13 15.27 FAMoss: lagi..
2017-10-13 15.28 Zylin: 00:03:573 (3573|1) - move ke col 3 aja biar gak terlalu berat di col 2
2017-10-13 15.28 FAMoss: yes
2017-10-13 15.29 Zylin: 00:40:560 (40560|2) - no needed
2017-10-13 15.30 FAMoss: dah
2017-10-13 15.30 Zylin: 00:42:204 (42204|3) - ^
2017-10-13 15.31 Zylin: 00:47:135 (47135|3) - nah sama delete uga, terus
2017-10-13 15.31 FAMoss: um
2017-10-13 15.31 Zylin: 00:47:546 (47546|2) - move ke col 4, and tambah note di 00:47:751 - col 3
2017-10-13 15.32 Zylin: jadi flow gtu :^)
2017-10-13 15.32 FAMoss: ok
2017-10-13 15.34 Zylin: 01:02:340 (62340|2,62546|2) - hindari jack di easy diff
2017-10-13 15.34 Zylin: ganti pattern lain aj
2017-10-13 15.34 FAMoss: udah
2017-10-13 15.36 Zylin: 01:02:340 (62340|2,62546|2,77546|2,77957|2,78368|1,78779|0,79190|1) - delete aj sih , mending ganti dengan ln di col 3  start dri 01:17:546 - tercover dah suaranya dengan double ln
2017-10-13 15.36 Zylin: and 01:19:190 - add note di col 1
2017-10-13 15.36 FAMoss:  OK
2017-10-13 15.37 Zylin: itu aj sih easy nya, ngintip nm lgi
2017-10-13 15.38 FAMoss: :p
2017-10-13 15.39 Zylin: 01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70662|2,70765|3) - wut the hel
2017-10-13 15.39 Zylin: yg biasa aj kea 12|43
2017-10-13 15.39 FAMoss: agak susah itu h3h3
2017-10-13 15.40 Zylin: malah tawa asw :'v
2017-10-13 15.40 FAMoss: ini part susah jadi buat gitu pattern tpi kalau bisa saran yg agak ga susah
2017-10-13 15.41 Zylin: 01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70662|2,70765|3,75286|0,75491|0,75697|0,75902|0) - gak boleh ini smpai bersusun 4 di dalam 1 kolom
2017-10-13 15.41 Zylin: malah susah yg pattern u loh
2017-10-13 15.42 Zylin: enak 12|43 mnurut ku
2017-10-13 15.42 FAMoss: ubah ok
2017-10-13 15.43 Zylin: 00:01:005 - add col 1 , ada penekanan suara
2017-10-13 15.43 Zylin: add note*
2017-10-13 15.44 Zylin: 00:01:930 - ^ dan yg lain , yg punya nada sama tinggi kyk gini
2017-10-13 15.47 Zylin: testis
2017-10-13 15.47 Zylin: *testing
2017-10-13 15.47 FAMoss: yeyeyeyeyey
2017-10-13 15.47 FAMoss: si rey mavok, apk mulu
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: wkwk
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: rey aktif malem
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: itu aj diff nm mos
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: avk njer
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: ok deh
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: ntah klo diff hd bisa atau g gw modnya :/
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: lma g modd hd ;w;
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: up to you :^
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: tes dlo :V
2017-10-13 15.49 FAMoss: akwoakwao
2017-10-13 15.50 Zylin: wkwko anjer bru nyadar gw ada hs buat miss note
2017-10-13 15.50 Zylin: gj
2017-10-13 15.50 FAMoss: oakoawkwaokwaokwa
2017-10-13 15.51 Zylin: 00:02:546 (2546|1,2546|0) - suaranya lebih kecil dari 00:02:751 (2751|2,2751|3) - jadi buat single aja
2017-10-13 15.52 FAMoss: ok
2017-10-13 15.54 Zylin: 00:25:560 (25560|2,25971|2,26382|2,26793|2) - sama kayak yang sebelumnya gk boleh kek gini
2017-10-13 15.54 Zylin: ganti pattern
2017-10-13 15.54 FAMoss: ye
2017-10-13 15.56 Zylin: 01:08:505 (68505|3,68710|3,68916|3,69121|3,69327|3,69532|3) - wkwkwko hardesssssssst
2017-10-13 15.56 Zylin: 01:08:505 (68505|3,68710|3,68916|3,69121|3,69327|3,69532|3,70354|1,70560|1,70765|1,70971|1,71176|1,71382|1,71587|1) - . . . . .
2017-10-13 15.57 FAMoss: bentar say
2017-10-13 15.59 Zylin: 01:05:628 (65628|0,65834|0,66039|0,66245|0) - sama uga nih, bntar gw coba buat kan pattern buat yg ini
2017-10-13 15.59 FAMoss: dah 
2017-10-13 15.59 FAMoss: 01:05:834 - 1 ke 4
2017-10-13 16.00 FAMoss: jam 02.00 ?
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304388
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: itu di bagian 01:05:423 -
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: jam 02.00? nani!
2017-10-13 16.01 FAMoss: dah
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: ?
2017-10-13 16.01 FAMoss: owakoawk ga 
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: wkwko
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: 00:38:299 (38299|2,38505|2,38710|2,38916|2) - nah hmpir ketinggalan
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: change pattern
2017-10-13 16.03 FAMoss: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304400 lamo
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: 01:08:916 (68916|2,68916|3,68916|0,69121|0,69121|3,69121|2) - kalau ini ngikut suara "tung tung"
2017-10-13 16.04 FAMoss: tung-tung
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: mending double aja
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: nah bagus tuh
2017-10-13 16.04 FAMoss: tung!
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: :^ es krim
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: tungtung
2017-10-13 16.05 FAMoss: murah :^
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: wkwko
ng3h3
FAMoss
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Topic Starter
FAMoss
Hitsound Added
Hestia-
271 posts
Joined June 2010
Hestia-
hihi !
[Easy]
00:10:149 (10149|3) - Remove
00:10:354 - Add 4
00:10:765 - Add 2
00:11:176 - Add 4
00:11:587 - Add 1
00:11:998 - Add 4
00:12:409 - Add 4
maybe remove other the LNs here and add more normal notes too
[Normal]
01:15:696 (75696|0) - Move to 2; no anchor here
[Hard]
00:14:840 - Add 3
00:16:484 - Add 3
00:18:128 - Add 3
00:19:772 - Add 3
00:19:875 (19875|2) - Remove
[Lunatic]
00:39:738 (39738|1) - Remove
00:09:943 - 00:12:614 - The timing here seems slightly off

goodluck !
FAMoss
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
FAMoss

Hestia- wrote:

hihi !
[Easy]
00:10:149 (10149|3) - Remove oK
00:10:354 - Add 4 oK
00:10:765 - Add 2 oK
00:11:176 - Add 4 oK
00:11:587 - Add 1 oK
00:11:998 - Add 4 oK
00:12:409 - Add 4 oK
maybe remove other the LNs here and add more normal notes too delete LN
[Normal]
01:15:696 (75696|0) - Move to 2; no anchor here oh no, thx, my bad
[Hard]
00:14:840 - Add 3 oK
00:16:484 - Add 3 oK
00:18:128 - Add 3 oK
00:19:772 - Add 3 oK
00:19:875 (19875|2) - Remove lmao, ok
[Lunatic]
00:39:738 (39738|1) - Remove ayy lmao, joke. oK
00:09:943 - 00:12:614 - The timing here seems slightly off thank you ~

goodluck !
Thanks :D

UUUUUUUUPPPDATEEEEE_
FadillSan
753 posts
Joined August 2015
FadillSan
Hello~
NM from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Normal
00:00:799 - add note
00:40:868 - add note juga, biar sama kayak 00:42:409 -
00:41:381 (41381|1) - jadiin double, biar sama kayak 00:43:025 -
01:02:238 (62238|2) - ini delete aja, soalnya terlalu sulit buat diff normal
01:07:169 (67169|1) - ^
01:08:813 (68813|0) - ^
01:07:375 (67375|0) - salah naro, pindahin ke 01:07:272 -
01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70559|0,70662|1,70765|2,70868|1) - saran aja, pattern nya ubah ke LN aja, soalnya terlalu rumit buat diff normal
Hard
00:01:929 (1929|1,1929|0) - Single saja
00:02:443 - add note
00:02:546 (2546|1) - double harusnya
00:03:573 (3573|0,3573|3,3573|2) - ini double sajha, soalnya suara sama kayak note sbelumnya
00:05:012 (5012|0,5012|2) - single
00:05:217 (5217|3,5217|2) - ^
00:05:731 - add note
00:07:991 (7991|2) - ghost, delet dis
00:08:094 (8094|1,8094|0) - single
Dari 00:10:149 - sampe 00:12:614 - pattern nya gak cocok, gak pas, samain kayak pattern belumnya aja (00:07:066 - 00:09:121)
00:40:970 (40970|1) - move to 1
00:50:833 (50833|2) - move to 4

Hope that's help, gud lak~ :3
error_exe777
720 posts
Joined February 2016
error_exe777
hello! sorry for the delay, i've been caught in a flood of pending mods

General
Difficulties: all finished
Spread: good
Hitsounds: done i believe
Metadata: good
AiMod: nothing
Other: nothing

Lunatic
00:01:107 - add a note? there is a sound there

00:01:518 (1518|1,1621|1) - oo i don't like this. i recommend a pattern like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9350388

00:00:696 (696|1,696|0,799|3,799|2,902|0,902|1,1005|3,1005|2) - considering these are jumptrills, why aren't 00:02:340 (2340|3,2340|1,2443|2,2546|3,2546|0,2649|1) - these jumptrills? please add some

00:02:751 (2751|0,2751|3,2751|2,2957|3,2957|0,2957|2) - if these are the same pattern, 00:03:162 (3162|0,3162|3,3162|1,3368|3,3368|0,3368|2) - these need to be as well

00:04:806 (4806|2,4909|2) - again don't like, maybe use: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9350405

00:05:833 - i think this would be better as a triple

00:14:429 (14429|1,14532|2,14635|3,14738|1,14840|0,14943|2) - these are snapped to the 1/4th lmao

00:16:073 (16073|1,16176|2,16279|3,16381|1,16484|0,16587|2) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|2,17922|3,18025|1,18128|0,18231|2) - ^^

00:24:943 (24943|1,24943|3,24943|0) - i think a triple is too much tbh

00:26:895 (26895|1,26998|1) - any particular reason for this? if not, move it

00:27:614 (27614|2,27717|1,27820|2,27922|1,28025|2) - is this intended? if not, move some

00:36:244 (36244|3,36244|1,36450|3,36450|1,36655|3,36655|1,36861|3,36861|1,37066|3,37066|1) - lol maybe move some

00:53:710 (53710|1,53710|3,53710|2) - a triple is too much

00:55:354 (55354|1,55354|2,55354|0) - ^^

00:56:176 (56176|1,56176|3,56176|2) - ^^

00:56:998 (56998|1,56998|3,56998|0) - ^^ etc etc. this is very frequent

Hard
00:00:286 - triple like lunatic?

00:02:443 - why did you skip the 1/4th? you've comfortably added it before

00:02:649 - ^^

00:05:833 - add the 1/4? make it a jumpstream

00:14:429 (14429|1,14532|3,14635|2,14738|0,14840|2,14943|1) - 1/4th

00:16:073 (16073|1,16176|3,16279|2,16381|0,16484|2,16587|1) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|3,17922|2,18025|0,18128|2,18231|1) - ^^

00:19:361 (19361|1,19361|2,19464|0,19464|3,19566|1,19566|2,19669|0,19669|3,19772|2,19875|1) - also 1/4th

00:28:642 (28642|1,28642|0) - why is this a double?

00:42:614 (42614|3,42614|1,42820|2,43025|3,43025|1,43231|2,43436|3,43436|1,43642|2) - pretty boring

Normal
00:00:799 - add one? skipping it is odd

00:05:731 (5731|3) - move this so it's not in the way of the trill above

00:14:429 (14429|1) - 1/2

00:16:073 (16073|2) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1) - ^^

00:17:135 (17135|1,17340|2,17717|1) - maybe avoid this

00:19:361 (19361|2) - again

00:57:409 (57409|2,57614|2) - i don't advice this

00:57:820 (57820|0,57820|3,57820|1) - i may as well mention, triples in normal's are not allowed. on the rare occasion they are, but at the rate they show in the map is too much. i mean, i think it fits but there are too many tbh. maybe speak to a BN or QAT to discuss it further

01:05:217 (65217|1,65422|1,65628|0,65628|2,65833|1) - i highly recommend you moving some

Easy
00:02:340 - LN for 1/4 drum like 00:00:696 (696|2) - ?

00:05:628 - ^^

00:14:429 (14429|0) - 1/2

00:16:073 (16073|3) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|0) - ^^

00:19:361 (19361|3) - ^^

00:58:231 (58231|2,58642|1,59053|2,59875|1) - maybe move some

01:17:957 (77957|2,78368|1,78779|2,79190|1) - intended? if not move some

ah, i feel like the chart isn't balanced very well. as in literally. a lot of notes veer off to opposite sides quite often. and, easy has a lot of unnecessary jacks. though, keep getting mods and i feel this map will be on it's way to ranking. good luck! o/
FAMoss
osu! Alumni
1,142 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
FAMoss

FadillSan wrote:

Hello~
NM from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Normal
00:00:799 - add note ok
00:40:868 - add note juga, biar sama kayak 00:42:409 -
00:41:381 (41381|1) - jadiin double, biar sama kayak 00:43:025 - ok
01:02:238 (62238|2) - ini delete aja, soalnya terlalu sulit buat diff normal ya sih
01:07:169 (67169|1) - ^
01:08:813 (68813|0) - ^
01:07:375 (67375|0) - salah naro, pindahin ke 01:07:272 -
01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70559|0,70662|1,70765|2,70868|1) - saran aja, pattern nya ubah ke LN aja, soalnya terlalu rumit buat diff normal nope, ga enak kalau object dah banyak tiba-tiba ada LN
Hard
00:01:929 (1929|1,1929|0) - Single saja ok
00:02:443 - add note dah
00:02:546 (2546|1) - double harusnya dah
00:03:573 (3573|0,3573|3,3573|2) - ini double sajha, soalnya suara sama kayak note sbelumnya
00:05:012 (5012|0,5012|2) - single
00:05:217 (5217|3,5217|2) - ^
00:05:731 - add note
00:07:991 (7991|2) - ghost, delet dis
00:08:094 (8094|1,8094|0) - single
Dari 00:10:149 - sampe 00:12:614 - pattern nya gak cocok, gak pas, samain kayak pattern belumnya aja (00:07:066 - 00:09:121)
00:40:970 (40970|1) - move to 1
00:50:833 (50833|2) - move to 4

Hope that's help, gud lak~ :3
00:14:429 - untuk part ini saya tetap memakai 1/12 karena hentakannya atau lihat Mage's mapset
Malas ketik :c w apply semua D:


error_exe777 wrote:

hello! sorry for the delay, i've been caught in a flood of pending mods

General
Difficulties: all finished
Spread: good
Hitsounds: done i believe
Metadata: good
AiMod: nothing
Other: nothing

Lunatic
00:01:107 - add a note? there is a sound there

00:01:518 (1518|1,1621|1) - oo i don't like this. i recommend a pattern like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9350388

00:00:696 (696|1,696|0,799|3,799|2,902|0,902|1,1005|3,1005|2) - considering these are jumptrills, why aren't 00:02:340 (2340|3,2340|1,2443|2,2546|3,2546|0,2649|1) - these jumptrills? please add some

00:02:751 (2751|0,2751|3,2751|2,2957|3,2957|0,2957|2) - if these are the same pattern, 00:03:162 (3162|0,3162|3,3162|1,3368|3,3368|0,3368|2) - these need to be as well

00:04:806 (4806|2,4909|2) - again don't like, maybe use: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9350405

00:05:833 - i think this would be better as a triple

00:14:429 (14429|1,14532|2,14635|3,14738|1,14840|0,14943|2) - these are snapped to the 1/4th lmao

00:16:073 (16073|1,16176|2,16279|3,16381|1,16484|0,16587|2) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|2,17922|3,18025|1,18128|0,18231|2) - ^^

00:24:943 (24943|1,24943|3,24943|0) - i think a triple is too much tbh

00:26:895 (26895|1,26998|1) - any particular reason for this? if not, move it

00:27:614 (27614|2,27717|1,27820|2,27922|1,28025|2) - is this intended? if not, move some

00:36:244 (36244|3,36244|1,36450|3,36450|1,36655|3,36655|1,36861|3,36861|1,37066|3,37066|1) - lol maybe move some

00:53:710 (53710|1,53710|3,53710|2) - a triple is too much

00:55:354 (55354|1,55354|2,55354|0) - ^^

00:56:176 (56176|1,56176|3,56176|2) - ^^

00:56:998 (56998|1,56998|3,56998|0) - ^^ etc etc. this is very frequent

Hard
00:00:286 - triple like lunatic?

00:02:443 - why did you skip the 1/4th? you've comfortably added it before

00:02:649 - ^^

00:05:833 - add the 1/4? make it a jumpstream

00:14:429 (14429|1,14532|3,14635|2,14738|0,14840|2,14943|1) - 1/4th

00:16:073 (16073|1,16176|3,16279|2,16381|0,16484|2,16587|1) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|3,17922|2,18025|0,18128|2,18231|1) - ^^

00:19:361 (19361|1,19361|2,19464|0,19464|3,19566|1,19566|2,19669|0,19669|3,19772|2,19875|1) - also 1/4th

00:28:642 (28642|1,28642|0) - why is this a double?

00:42:614 (42614|3,42614|1,42820|2,43025|3,43025|1,43231|2,43436|3,43436|1,43642|2) - pretty boring

Normal
00:00:799 - add one? skipping it is odd

00:05:731 (5731|3) - move this so it's not in the way of the trill above

00:14:429 (14429|1) - 1/2

00:16:073 (16073|2) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1) - ^^

00:17:135 (17135|1,17340|2,17717|1) - maybe avoid this

00:19:361 (19361|2) - again

00:57:409 (57409|2,57614|2) - i don't advice this

00:57:820 (57820|0,57820|3,57820|1) - i may as well mention, triples in normal's are not allowed. on the rare occasion they are, but at the rate they show in the map is too much. i mean, i think it fits but there are too many tbh. maybe speak to a BN or QAT to discuss it further

01:05:217 (65217|1,65422|1,65628|0,65628|2,65833|1) - i highly recommend you moving some

Easy
00:02:340 - LN for 1/4 drum like 00:00:696 (696|2) - ? oK

00:05:628 - ^^ oK

00:14:429 (14429|0) - 1/2 sure?

00:16:073 (16073|3) - ^^ ^

00:17:717 (17717|0) - ^^ ^

00:19:361 (19361|3) - ^^ ^

00:58:231 (58231|2,58642|1,59053|2,59875|1) - maybe move some OK lmao

01:17:957 (77957|2,78368|1,78779|2,79190|1) - intended? if not move some fix

ah, i feel like the chart isn't balanced very well. as in literally. a lot of notes veer off to opposite sides quite often. and, easy has a lot of unnecessary jacks. though, keep getting mods and i feel this map will be on it's way to ranking. good luck! o/
00:14:429 - for this part i still use 1/12 because of the beat or see Mage's mapset
thank you for taking the time of mod, right i still not pro in mapping

Apply :)
Yukari_Sama
720 posts
Joined April 2015
Yukari_Sama
hi FAMoss M4M req

1|2|3|4

general
  1. ini padahal masih ada ruang kosong di beberapa note untuk di masukin HS, kenapa harus 1 dimasukin 2 ? mungkin ada si semua diff kek gini

Lunatic
  1. 00:00:799 - add 2 note buat suara kick ?
  2. 00:01:005 (1005|2,1005|3,1005|0) - ini kok 3 note ? disini 00:04:292 (4292|3,4292|2) - 2 note, padahal suaranya sama mungkin bisa kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362406
  3. 00:12:101 (12101|1) - col 1 ? karena belum ada jack di part ini di kolom 1,buat seimbangin aja, soalnya ini 00:11:279 (11279|3) - jacknya di col 4
  4. 00:30:696 (30696|0,30902|0,31107|0,31313|0,31518|0,31724|0) - too hard in left hand, mungkin bisa di seimbangin ?
  5. 00:38:916 (38916|0,39121|0,39327|0,39532|0,39738|0,39943|0,40149|0,40354|0,40559|0,40765|0,40970|0) - ^
hmm udah bagus,cuma di seimbangin aja,solanya kebanyakan terlalu fokus di col 4 jadi berat buat di mainin hmm

Hard
  1. 00:24:532 (24532|2) - col 2 biar lebih ena
  2. 00:33:162 (33162|1) - col 1
  3. 00:39:738 (39738|2,39943|2,40149|2) - ini jack 3 an ? di part lain cuma 2, mungkin kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362437
  4. 00:50:525 (50525|1,50731|1,50936|1,51142|1) - too heavy, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362445
  5. kalo di acc 00:51:450 (51450|1,51655|2) - ctrl+H, 00:51:861 (51861|1) - col 4, 00:52:066 (52066|3) - col 2
  6. 01:10:354 (70354|1,70559|1,70765|1,70970|1,71176|1,71381|1,71587|1,71792|1) - oh jari telunjuk
bagus juga,cuma kurang konsisten aja sih menurutku

oke that's all, i hope this helpful :)
gudlak owo)b
FAMoss
osu! Alumni
1,142 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
FAMoss

atian540 wrote:

hi FAMoss M4M req

1|2|3|4

general
  1. ini padahal masih ada ruang kosong di beberapa note untuk di masukin HS, kenapa harus 1 dimasukin 2 ? mungkin ada si semua diff kek gini
    ==" itu ..

Lunatic
  1. 00:00:799 - add 2 note buat suara kick ? sudah terubah ~ 00:03:984 - same
  2. 00:01:005 (1005|2,1005|3,1005|0) - ini kok 3 note ? disini 00:04:292 (4292|3,4292|2) - 2 note, padahal suaranya sama mungkin bisa kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362406 00:03:984 - same
  3. 00:12:101 (12101|1) - col 1 ? karena belum ada jack di part ini di kolom 1,buat seimbangin aja, soalnya ini 00:11:279 (11279|3) - jacknya di col 4 same
  4. 00:30:696 (30696|0,30902|0,31107|0,31313|0,31518|0,31724|0) - too hard in left hand, mungkin bisa di seimbangin ? same
  5. 00:38:916 (38916|0,39121|0,39327|0,39532|0,39738|0,39943|0,40149|0,40354|0,40559|0,40765|0,40970|0) - ^

hmm udah bagus,cuma di seimbangin aja,solanya kebanyakan terlalu fokus di col 4 jadi berat buat di mainin hmm thanks :D

Hard
  1. 00:24:532 (24532|2) - col 2 biar lebih ena ok
  2. 00:33:162 (33162|1) - col 1 ok
  3. 00:39:738 (39738|2,39943|2,40149|2) - ini jack 3 an ? di part lain cuma 2, mungkin kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362437 ok
  4. 00:50:525 (50525|1,50731|1,50936|1,51142|1) - too heavy, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362445 ok
  5. kalo di acc 00:51:450 (51450|1,51655|2) - ctrl+H, 00:51:861 (51861|1) - col 4, 00:52:066 (52066|3) - col 2 ok
  6. 01:10:354 (70354|1,70559|1,70765|1,70970|1,71176|1,71381|1,71587|1,71792|1) - oh jari telunjuk ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
bagus juga,cuma kurang konsisten aja sih menurutku thanks :D


oke that's all, i hope this helpful :)
gudlak owo)b
Thank You :D
FelixSpade
332 posts
Joined May 2013
FelixSpade
oi moss :V mods request lu :v
Column set : 0|1|2|3

MUDAH
gaada problema keknya. oke dah ;)

BIASA
00:47:340 (47340|2,47546|3) - gaada stream 1/4 kek ini? 00:40:765 (40765|1,40868|2,40970|3) - konsisten bruh
pas sebelum kiai, 1/4 streamnya munculin dong biar konsisten

SUSAH
00:19:669 (19669|0,19669|3) - keknya 1 note aja deh
00:30:080 (30080|1) - mending ke col 2, kek kliatan ngejack 00:29:669 (29669|1,29875|1,30080|1) -
00:33:368 (33368|1,33573|1,33779|1) - ini juga, mending 00:33:779 (33779|1,33881|2,33984|3) - pindah 1 col ke kiri
00:53:916 - ini mending gini, saran sih
00:57:203 (57203|2,57409|2,57614|2,57820|2) - anchor yg disengaja?
01:07:477 (67477|1,67683|1,67888|1,68094|1) - ^
01:09:532 (69532|2,69738|2,69943|2,70149|2) - ^
01:15:491 (75491|3,75696|3,75902|3,76107|3) - ^

GILA
00:05:833 (5833|0,6039|0,6244|0,6450|0,6655|0,6861|0,7066|0,7272|0,7477|0) - anchor :(
00:07:477 (7477|3,7683|3,7888|3,8094|3,8299|3) - ^
00:12:203 (12203|3,12409|3,12614|3,12820|3,13025|3,13231|3,13436|3) - ^
00:30:491 (30491|2,30696|2,30902|2,31107|2,31313|2,31518|2,31724|2,31929|2,32135|2,32340|2) - ^
00:34:190 (34190|2,34395|2,34601|2,34806|2,35012|2,35217|2) - ^
00:35:833 (35833|0,36039|0,36244|0,36450|0,36655|0,36861|0,37066|0,37272|0,37477|0) - ^
ini pada disengaja semua tha anchornya? :/

00:09:275 (9275|2) - keknya ini ghost deh, dah gw bandingin sama map originalnya Mage
00:19:669 (19669|1,19669|3,19772|2,19772|0) - ini ngikut mana btw? klo drum hrsnya ini dah single

gud lak buat rank ;)
Tailsdk
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Tailsdk
Hard
00:08:094 (8094|1) - move or add a note at 00:07:991 -
00:22:991 - add note here maybe
01:07:580 (67580|0) - remove this note
not really much else to say about this pretty clean
Lunatic
00:05:628 (5628|3,5731|2,5833|3,5936|2,6039|3,6142|2,6244|3) - maybe this thrill is a little long
change these 00:11:792 (11792|2,11792|3,11895|0,11998|2,11998|1,12101|0) - to this pattern from 00:12:203 (12203|3,12203|2,12306|1,12409|0,12409|2,12409|3,12512|1,12614|3,12614|2,12614|0) -
make this a double 00:22:991 -
maybe add a note here for the background drum 00:32:186 -
i dont really know how i feel about this jack 00:44:155 (44155|3,44258|3) -
00:46:210 - add a note here
again this one 00:50:731 (50731|3,50833|3) - atleast mirror it so its not at the same spot(not going to point it out on the rest)
remove this one 00:54:429 (54429|2,54429|1) -
also this one 00:55:868 (55868|2) -
00:59:361 (59361|1) - ^
01:01:005 (61005|2) - ^
why is not a double as everywhere else 01:05:833 -
missing a note here 01:06:347 -
01:07:580 (67580|0) - remove this one
make this a double 01:10:868 -
01:12:922 - add note here
01:14:155 (74155|2) - remove this
01:14:566 - add note here
Normal
00:12:614 (12614|3,12820|1,13025|3,13231|2) - make this doubles like 00:09:121 -
01:18:368 (78368|1,78573|1,78779|2,78984|2) - maybe try not to use any kind of jacks on normal
thats all

Pretty good map gl
FAMoss
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Topic Starter
FAMoss

FelixSpade wrote:

oi moss :V mods request lu :v
Column set : 0|1|2|3

MUDAH
gaada problema keknya. oke dah ;)

BIASA
00:47:340 (47340|2,47546|3) - gaada stream 1/4 kek ini? 00:40:765 (40765|1,40868|2,40970|3) - konsisten bruh
pas sebelum kiai, 1/4 streamnya munculin dong biar konsisten

SUSAH
00:19:669 (19669|0,19669|3) - keknya 1 note aja deh buat apa?
00:30:080 (30080|1) - mending ke col 2, kek kliatan ngejack 00:29:669 (29669|1,29875|1,30080|1) - pindah
00:33:368 (33368|1,33573|1,33779|1) - ini juga pindah, mending 00:33:779 (33779|1,33881|2,33984|3) - pindah 1 col ke kiri pindah
00:53:916 - ini mending gini, saran sih same
00:57:203 (57203|2,57409|2,57614|2,57820|2) - anchor yg disengaja?
01:07:477 (67477|1,67683|1,67888|1,68094|1) - ^
01:09:532 (69532|2,69738|2,69943|2,70149|2) - ^
01:15:491 (75491|3,75696|3,75902|3,76107|3) - ^

GILA
00:05:833 (5833|0,6039|0,6244|0,6450|0,6655|0,6861|0,7066|0,7272|0,7477|0) - anchor :( lmao
00:07:477 (7477|3,7683|3,7888|3,8094|3,8299|3) - ^
00:12:203 (12203|3,12409|3,12614|3,12820|3,13025|3,13231|3,13436|3) - ^
00:30:491 (30491|2,30696|2,30902|2,31107|2,31313|2,31518|2,31724|2,31929|2,32135|2,32340|2) - ^
00:34:190 (34190|2,34395|2,34601|2,34806|2,35012|2,35217|2) - ^
00:35:833 (35833|0,36039|0,36244|0,36450|0,36655|0,36861|0,37066|0,37272|0,37477|0) - ^
ini pada disengaja semua tha anchornya? :/ ya asw

00:09:275 (9275|2) - keknya ini ghost deh, dah gw bandingin sama map originalnya Mage
00:19:669 (19669|1,19669|3,19772|2,19772|0) - ini ngikut mana btw? klo drum hrsnya ini dah single

gud lak buat rank ;)

tailsdk wrote:

Hard
00:08:094 (8094|1) - move or add a note at 00:07:991 - same
00:22:991 - add note here maybe maybe
01:07:580 (67580|0) - remove this note same
not really much else to say about this pretty clean Thank You :D
Lunatic
00:05:628 (5628|3,5731|2,5833|3,5936|2,6039|3,6142|2,6244|3) - maybe this thrill is a little long move
change these 00:11:792 (11792|2,11792|3,11895|0,11998|2,11998|1,12101|0) - to this pattern from 00:12:203 (12203|3,12203|2,12306|1,12409|0,12409|2,12409|3,12512|1,12614|3,12614|2,12614|0) - change
make this a double 00:22:991 - oK
maybe add a note here for the background drum 00:32:186 - wat ??
i dont really know how i feel about this jack 00:44:155 (44155|3,44258|3) - move
00:46:210 - add a note here OK
again this one 00:50:731 (50731|3,50833|3) - atleast mirror it so its not at the same spot(not going to point it out on the rest) move
remove this one 00:54:429 (54429|2,54429|1) - oK
also this one 00:55:868 (55868|2) - ^
00:59:361 (59361|1) - ^ ^
01:01:005 (61005|2) - ^ ^
why is not a double as everywhere else 01:05:833 - fix
missing a note here 01:06:347 - add
01:07:580 (67580|0) - remove this one
make this a double 01:10:868 - oK
01:12:922 - add note here ^
01:14:155 (74155|2) - remove this ^
01:14:566 - add note here ^
Normal
00:12:614 (12614|3,12820|1,13025|3,13231|2) - make this doubles like 00:09:121 - I think it cant, because the hard diff also has the same thing
01:18:368 (78368|1,78573|1,78779|2,78984|2) - maybe try not to use any kind of jacks on normal oK
thats all K

Pretty good map gl Thank You ;)
Thanks Mod ;)
RoroTheDeer
247 posts
Joined September 2015
RoroTheDeer

Lunatic
00:09:532 (9532|0,9738|0,9943|0,10149|0,10354|0) - Anchor

00:10:765 (10765|0,10970|0,11176|0,11381|0,11587|0,11792|0,11998|0) - ^

01:13:025 (73025|0,73231|0,73436|0,73642|0,73847|0,74053|0,74258|0,74464|0,74669|0) - Good christ what is this anchor

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|2,17922|3,18025|1,18128|0,18162|3,18231|2) - Snap these

00:19:361 (19361|0,19361|2,19464|3,19464|1,19566|2,19566|0,19669|1,19772|2,19875|1) - ^

Go through the map and snap these notes. It doesn't go with the music at all.

00:23:916 (23916|0) - Ghost note

00:27:101 (27101|2) - ^

00:28:539 (28539|2) - ^

Okay, this map has too many problems for me to point out. There's a lot of ghost noting and a lot of the charting doesn't follow the music at all. In general, this is overmapped and unrankable until these problems are fixed, especially the ghost notes and anchors. The hitsounding however is generally very good.

All I can say is good luck.
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