1. Easy - 4Key (1,5 stars, 327 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (3,22 stars, 954 notes)
3. Lunatic - 4Key (3,74 stars, 1078 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (2,24 stars, 570 notes)

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Mage wrote:

owo

[Lunatic]
00:00:491 (491|2) - i don't hear any sound here, so remove note
00:01:005 - 00:01:930 - 00:05:217 - i don't see reasons for these triples, make doubles. The best way to decide about chords is doubles for kicks and triples for crashes and sounds like 00:02:546 - this :^)
00:07:169 - don't ignore this sound, add note
00:05:834 - https://puu.sh/xUH2a/17ec16bdcb.png
00:10:149 - in this part, better to regularize jacks by adding them at crashes, https://puu.sh/xUHaO/a8e996973c.png like this
00:14:156 (14156|2,14258|1,14258|3) - better to map these kicks with singles to stronger highlight 00:13:847 (13847|2,13847|0,14053|1,14053|3) - these sounds with doubles
00:15:799 (15799|1,15902|0,15902|2) - same
00:22:477 - 00:23:094 - 00:23:710 - better to map with doubles :^)
00:27:717 - ehh why double, make single
00:28:025 - triple i guess
00:37:067 - triple
00:37:580 - double
00:37:786 - double
welp, i think enough, you get it, listen carefully and put double for kicks :v
00:44:156 (44156|3,44258|3,44361|3) - i don't like these triple jacks, maybe smth like 00:44:053 - https://puu.sh/xUHI8/748f4b1597.png - so we have two beautiful double jacks
00:52:786 - better to add note
01:06:039 - here starts new part and it sounds stronger, but patterns are easier than is past part :^( so, make patterns in this part harder :^)
01:07:375 - you missed note
01:09:121 - maybe triple
01:15:697 - same
01:17:546 - you actually can use here 1/8 like https://puu.sh/xUHS8/e5b099f787.png - this

Good luck! Go for ranked xd

Linyx-sama wrote:

ngh-mo

2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: :| irc aja dah dipp normal
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: katakan yg salah!!!
2017-10-11 16.13 Linyx-sama: anjing ngegas
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: :v
2017-10-11 16.13 FAMoss: mod oi :)
2017-10-11 16.14 Linyx-sama: 00:02:957 (2957|3,3162|0,3368|3,3573|0) - ga dibentuk stair aja? soalnya ini sama suara di 00:02:340 (2340|3) - 
2017-10-11 16.14 Linyx-sama: hadhe, aink ga pro mod
2017-10-11 16.14 FAMoss: ga, karena jauh suara
2017-10-11 16.15 FAMoss: ok 1 00:02:546 (2546|0,2751|1) - ini ajagua balik
2017-10-11 16.15 Linyx-sama: nah
2017-10-11 16.16 FAMoss: lain?
2017-10-11 16.16 FAMoss: tapi kaya hs yg ga lengkap
2017-10-11 16.18 Linyx-sama: 00:02:546 (2546|0) - ga ke col 3 ?
2017-10-11 16.18 FAMoss: udah vix sekarang
2017-10-11 16.18 Linyx-sama: >:
2017-10-11 16.19 FAMoss: h3h3
2017-10-11 16.20 FAMoss: wwww
2017-10-11 16.21 Linyx-sama: 00:11:998 (11998|0,12204|1,12409|0) - aneh bruh, 00:11:998 (11998|0) - ke 3 sj , kalo 00:11:998 (11998|0,12204|1,12409|0) - gw kira kesulitan untuk dipencet dan ga sesuai irama
2017-10-11 16.21 FAMoss: wait gua lag
2017-10-11 16.22 Linyx-sama: laptop w lag di bagian akhir lagu :/
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: kapan loved? :v
2017-10-11 16.24 Linyx-sama: nusuk banget sialan :'v
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: :V
2017-10-11 16.24 FAMoss: ini lanjut?
2017-10-11 16.26 Linyx-sama: udah cukup keknya
2017-10-11 16.28 Linyx-sama: AFK kah ?
2017-10-11 16.29 FAMoss: chatlog kirim ke thread

Zylin wrote:

hasil hubungan gelap

2017-10-13 15.18 FAMoss: irc?
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: yok
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: lgi gabut uga editing ps :'v
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: phothosp
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: ?
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: hooh
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: diff ez
2017-10-13 15.22 Zylin: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1435153 ZUN - Tsukidokei ~ Luna Dial [Easy]]
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: ok otw
2017-10-13 15.22 FAMoss: yo
2017-10-13 15.23 Zylin: 00:10:971 (10971|0,11793|3) - delete aja , cuz itu suara udh di cover sama ln
2017-10-13 15.23 Zylin: berhubung ini diff easy
2017-10-13 15.23 FAMoss: dah 
2017-10-13 15.25 Zylin: 00:14:430 (14430|0) - ini bukan 1/12 sih mnurutku 1/4 aj di 00:14:464 -
2017-10-13 15.25 FAMoss: um itu dari suara ntya benar 1/12
2017-10-13 15.25 FAMoss: mage map make itu
2017-10-13 15.26 Zylin: iya free to reject , sntay klo mw keep :'3
2017-10-13 15.27 FAMoss: lagi..
2017-10-13 15.28 Zylin: 00:03:573 (3573|1) - move ke col 3 aja biar gak terlalu berat di col 2
2017-10-13 15.28 FAMoss: yes
2017-10-13 15.29 Zylin: 00:40:560 (40560|2) - no needed
2017-10-13 15.30 FAMoss: dah
2017-10-13 15.30 Zylin: 00:42:204 (42204|3) - ^
2017-10-13 15.31 Zylin: 00:47:135 (47135|3) - nah sama delete uga, terus
2017-10-13 15.31 FAMoss: um
2017-10-13 15.31 Zylin: 00:47:546 (47546|2) - move ke col 4, and tambah note di 00:47:751 - col 3
2017-10-13 15.32 Zylin: jadi flow gtu :^)
2017-10-13 15.32 FAMoss: ok
2017-10-13 15.34 Zylin: 01:02:340 (62340|2,62546|2) - hindari jack di easy diff
2017-10-13 15.34 Zylin: ganti pattern lain aj
2017-10-13 15.34 FAMoss: udah
2017-10-13 15.36 Zylin: 01:02:340 (62340|2,62546|2,77546|2,77957|2,78368|1,78779|0,79190|1) - delete aj sih , mending ganti dengan ln di col 3  start dri 01:17:546 - tercover dah suaranya dengan double ln
2017-10-13 15.36 Zylin: and 01:19:190 - add note di col 1
2017-10-13 15.36 FAMoss:  OK
2017-10-13 15.37 Zylin: itu aj sih easy nya, ngintip nm lgi
2017-10-13 15.38 FAMoss: :p
2017-10-13 15.39 Zylin: 01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70662|2,70765|3) - wut the hel
2017-10-13 15.39 Zylin: yg biasa aj kea 12|43
2017-10-13 15.39 FAMoss: agak susah itu h3h3
2017-10-13 15.40 Zylin: malah tawa asw :'v
2017-10-13 15.40 FAMoss: ini part susah jadi buat gitu pattern tpi kalau bisa saran yg agak ga susah
2017-10-13 15.41 Zylin: 01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70662|2,70765|3,75286|0,75491|0,75697|0,75902|0) - gak boleh ini smpai bersusun 4 di dalam 1 kolom
2017-10-13 15.41 Zylin: malah susah yg pattern u loh
2017-10-13 15.42 Zylin: enak 12|43 mnurut ku
2017-10-13 15.42 FAMoss: ubah ok
2017-10-13 15.43 Zylin: 00:01:005 - add col 1 , ada penekanan suara
2017-10-13 15.43 Zylin: add note*
2017-10-13 15.44 Zylin: 00:01:930 - ^ dan yg lain , yg punya nada sama tinggi kyk gini
2017-10-13 15.47 Zylin: testis
2017-10-13 15.47 Zylin: *testing
2017-10-13 15.47 FAMoss: yeyeyeyeyey
2017-10-13 15.47 FAMoss: si rey mavok, apk mulu
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: wkwk
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: rey aktif malem
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: itu aj diff nm mos
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: avk njer
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: ok deh
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: ntah klo diff hd bisa atau g gw modnya :/
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: lma g modd hd ;w;
2017-10-13 15.48 FAMoss: up to you :^
2017-10-13 15.48 Zylin: tes dlo :V
2017-10-13 15.49 FAMoss: akwoakwao
2017-10-13 15.50 Zylin: wkwko anjer bru nyadar gw ada hs buat miss note
2017-10-13 15.50 Zylin: gj
2017-10-13 15.50 FAMoss: oakoawkwaokwaokwa
2017-10-13 15.51 Zylin: 00:02:546 (2546|1,2546|0) - suaranya lebih kecil dari 00:02:751 (2751|2,2751|3) - jadi buat single aja
2017-10-13 15.52 FAMoss: ok
2017-10-13 15.54 Zylin: 00:25:560 (25560|2,25971|2,26382|2,26793|2) - sama kayak yang sebelumnya gk boleh kek gini
2017-10-13 15.54 Zylin: ganti pattern
2017-10-13 15.54 FAMoss: ye
2017-10-13 15.56 Zylin: 01:08:505 (68505|3,68710|3,68916|3,69121|3,69327|3,69532|3) - wkwkwko hardesssssssst
2017-10-13 15.56 Zylin: 01:08:505 (68505|3,68710|3,68916|3,69121|3,69327|3,69532|3,70354|1,70560|1,70765|1,70971|1,71176|1,71382|1,71587|1) - . . . . .
2017-10-13 15.57 FAMoss: bentar say
2017-10-13 15.59 Zylin: 01:05:628 (65628|0,65834|0,66039|0,66245|0) - sama uga nih, bntar gw coba buat kan pattern buat yg ini
2017-10-13 15.59 FAMoss: dah 
2017-10-13 15.59 FAMoss: 01:05:834 - 1 ke 4
2017-10-13 16.00 FAMoss: jam 02.00 ?
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304388
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: itu di bagian 01:05:423 -
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: jam 02.00? nani!
2017-10-13 16.01 FAMoss: dah
2017-10-13 16.01 Zylin: ?
2017-10-13 16.01 FAMoss: owakoawk ga 
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: wkwko
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: 00:38:299 (38299|2,38505|2,38710|2,38916|2) - nah hmpir ketinggalan
2017-10-13 16.02 Zylin: change pattern
2017-10-13 16.03 FAMoss: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304400 lamo
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: 01:08:916 (68916|2,68916|3,68916|0,69121|0,69121|3,69121|2) - kalau ini ngikut suara "tung tung"
2017-10-13 16.04 FAMoss: tung-tung
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: mending double aja
2017-10-13 16.04 Zylin: nah bagus tuh
2017-10-13 16.04 FAMoss: tung!
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: :^ es krim
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: tungtung
2017-10-13 16.05 FAMoss: murah :^
2017-10-13 16.05 Zylin: wkwko

Hestia- wrote:

hihi !
[Easy]
00:10:149 (10149|3) - Remove oK
00:10:354 - Add 4 oK
00:10:765 - Add 2 oK
00:11:176 - Add 4 oK
00:11:587 - Add 1 oK
00:11:998 - Add 4 oK
00:12:409 - Add 4 oK
maybe remove other the LNs here and add more normal notes too delete LN
[Normal]
01:15:696 (75696|0) - Move to 2; no anchor here oh no, thx, my bad
[Hard]
00:14:840 - Add 3 oK
00:16:484 - Add 3 oK
00:18:128 - Add 3 oK
00:19:772 - Add 3 oK
00:19:875 (19875|2) - Remove lmao, ok
[Lunatic]
00:39:738 (39738|1) - Remove ayy lmao, joke. oK
00:09:943 - 00:12:614 - The timing here seems slightly off thank you ~

goodluck !

Thanks

FadillSan wrote:

Hello~
NM from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Normal

00:00:799 - add note ok
00:40:868 - add note juga, biar sama kayak 00:42:409 -
00:41:381 (41381|1) - jadiin double, biar sama kayak 00:43:025 - ok
01:02:238 (62238|2) - ini delete aja, soalnya terlalu sulit buat diff normal ya sih
01:07:169 (67169|1) - ^
01:08:813 (68813|0) - ^
01:07:375 (67375|0) - salah naro, pindahin ke 01:07:272 -
01:10:354 (70354|3,70457|2,70559|0,70662|1,70765|2,70868|1) - saran aja, pattern nya ubah ke LN aja, soalnya terlalu rumit buat diff normal nope, ga enak kalau object dah banyak tiba-tiba ada LN

Hard

00:01:929 (1929|1,1929|0) - Single saja ok
00:02:443 - add note dah
00:02:546 (2546|1) - double harusnya dah
00:03:573 (3573|0,3573|3,3573|2) - ini double sajha, soalnya suara sama kayak note sbelumnya
00:05:012 (5012|0,5012|2) - single
00:05:217 (5217|3,5217|2) - ^
00:05:731 - add note
00:07:991 (7991|2) - ghost, delet dis
00:08:094 (8094|1,8094|0) - single
Dari 00:10:149 - sampe 00:12:614 - pattern nya gak cocok, gak pas, samain kayak pattern belumnya aja (00:07:066 - 00:09:121)
00:40:970 (40970|1) - move to 1
00:50:833 (50833|2) - move to 4

Hope that's help, gud lak~ :3

error_exe777 wrote:

hello! sorry for the delay, i've been caught in a flood of pending mods

General

Difficulties: all finished
Spread: good
Hitsounds: done i believe
Metadata: good
AiMod: nothing
Other: nothing

Lunatic

00:01:107 - add a note? there is a sound there

00:01:518 (1518|1,1621|1) - oo i don't like this. i recommend a pattern like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9350388

00:00:696 (696|1,696|0,799|3,799|2,902|0,902|1,1005|3,1005|2) - considering these are jumptrills, why aren't 00:02:340 (2340|3,2340|1,2443|2,2546|3,2546|0,2649|1) - these jumptrills? please add some

00:02:751 (2751|0,2751|3,2751|2,2957|3,2957|0,2957|2) - if these are the same pattern, 00:03:162 (3162|0,3162|3,3162|1,3368|3,3368|0,3368|2) - these need to be as well

00:04:806 (4806|2,4909|2) - again don't like, maybe use: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9350405

00:05:833 - i think this would be better as a triple

00:14:429 (14429|1,14532|2,14635|3,14738|1,14840|0,14943|2) - these are snapped to the 1/4th lmao

00:16:073 (16073|1,16176|2,16279|3,16381|1,16484|0,16587|2) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|2,17922|3,18025|1,18128|0,18231|2) - ^^

00:24:943 (24943|1,24943|3,24943|0) - i think a triple is too much tbh

00:26:895 (26895|1,26998|1) - any particular reason for this? if not, move it

00:27:614 (27614|2,27717|1,27820|2,27922|1,28025|2) - is this intended? if not, move some

00:36:244 (36244|3,36244|1,36450|3,36450|1,36655|3,36655|1,36861|3,36861|1,37066|3,37066|1) - lol maybe move some

00:53:710 (53710|1,53710|3,53710|2) - a triple is too much

00:55:354 (55354|1,55354|2,55354|0) - ^^

00:56:176 (56176|1,56176|3,56176|2) - ^^

00:56:998 (56998|1,56998|3,56998|0) - ^^ etc etc. this is very frequent

Hard

00:00:286 - triple like lunatic?

00:02:443 - why did you skip the 1/4th? you've comfortably added it before

00:02:649 - ^^

00:05:833 - add the 1/4? make it a jumpstream

00:14:429 (14429|1,14532|3,14635|2,14738|0,14840|2,14943|1) - 1/4th

00:16:073 (16073|1,16176|3,16279|2,16381|0,16484|2,16587|1) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|3,17922|2,18025|0,18128|2,18231|1) - ^^

00:19:361 (19361|1,19361|2,19464|0,19464|3,19566|1,19566|2,19669|0,19669|3,19772|2,19875|1) - also 1/4th

00:28:642 (28642|1,28642|0) - why is this a double?

00:42:614 (42614|3,42614|1,42820|2,43025|3,43025|1,43231|2,43436|3,43436|1,43642|2) - pretty boring

Normal

00:00:799 - add one? skipping it is odd

00:05:731 (5731|3) - move this so it's not in the way of the trill above

00:14:429 (14429|1) - 1/2

00:16:073 (16073|2) - ^^

00:17:717 (17717|1) - ^^

00:17:135 (17135|1,17340|2,17717|1) - maybe avoid this

00:19:361 (19361|2) - again

00:57:409 (57409|2,57614|2) - i don't advice this

00:57:820 (57820|0,57820|3,57820|1) - i may as well mention, triples in normal's are not allowed. on the rare occasion they are, but at the rate they show in the map is too much. i mean, i think it fits but there are too many tbh. maybe speak to a BN or QAT to discuss it further

01:05:217 (65217|1,65422|1,65628|0,65628|2,65833|1) - i highly recommend you moving some

Easy

00:02:340 - LN for 1/4 drum like 00:00:696 (696|2) - ? oK

00:05:628 - ^^ oK

00:14:429 (14429|0) - 1/2 sure?

00:16:073 (16073|3) - ^^ ^

00:17:717 (17717|0) - ^^ ^

00:19:361 (19361|3) - ^^ ^

00:58:231 (58231|2,58642|1,59053|2,59875|1) - maybe move some OK lmao

01:17:957 (77957|2,78368|1,78779|2,79190|1) - intended? if not move some fix

ah, i feel like the chart isn't balanced very well. as in literally. a lot of notes veer off to opposite sides quite often. and, easy has a lot of unnecessary jacks. though, keep getting mods and i feel this map will be on it's way to ranking. good luck! o/

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atian540 wrote:

hi FAMoss M4M req

1|2|3|4

general

1. ini padahal masih ada ruang kosong di beberapa note untuk di masukin HS, kenapa harus 1 dimasukin 2 ? mungkin ada si semua diff kek gini
   ==" itu ..

Lunatic

1. 00:00:799 - add 2 note buat suara kick ? sudah terubah ~ 00:03:984 - same
2. 00:01:005 (1005|2,1005|3,1005|0) - ini kok 3 note ? disini 00:04:292 (4292|3,4292|2) - 2 note, padahal suaranya sama mungkin bisa kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362406 00:03:984 - same
3. 00:12:101 (12101|1) - col 1 ? karena belum ada jack di part ini di kolom 1,buat seimbangin aja, soalnya ini 00:11:279 (11279|3) - jacknya di col 4 same
4. 00:30:696 (30696|0,30902|0,31107|0,31313|0,31518|0,31724|0) - too hard in left hand, mungkin bisa di seimbangin ? same
5. 00:38:916 (38916|0,39121|0,39327|0,39532|0,39738|0,39943|0,40149|0,40354|0,40559|0,40765|0,40970|0) - ^

hmm udah bagus,cuma di seimbangin aja,solanya kebanyakan terlalu fokus di col 4 jadi berat buat di mainin hmm thanks

Hard

1. 00:24:532 (24532|2) - col 2 biar lebih ena ok
2. 00:33:162 (33162|1) - col 1 ok
3. 00:39:738 (39738|2,39943|2,40149|2) - ini jack 3 an ? di part lain cuma 2, mungkin kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362437 ok
4. 00:50:525 (50525|1,50731|1,50936|1,51142|1) - too heavy, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362445 ok
5. kalo di acc 00:51:450 (51450|1,51655|2) - ctrl+H, 00:51:861 (51861|1) - col 4, 00:52:066 (52066|3) - col 2 ok
6. 01:10:354 (70354|1,70559|1,70765|1,70970|1,71176|1,71381|1,71587|1,71792|1) - oh jari telunjuk ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

bagus juga,cuma kurang konsisten aja sih menurutku thanks

oke that's all, i hope this helpful
gudlak owo)b

FelixSpade wrote:

oi moss :V mods request lu :v
Column set : 0|1|2|3

MUDAH

gaada problema keknya. oke dah

BIASA

00:47:340 (47340|2,47546|3) - gaada stream 1/4 kek ini? 00:40:765 (40765|1,40868|2,40970|3) - konsisten bruh
pas sebelum kiai, 1/4 streamnya munculin dong biar konsisten

SUSAH

00:19:669 (19669|0,19669|3) - keknya 1 note aja deh buat apa?
00:30:080 (30080|1) - mending ke col 2, kek kliatan ngejack 00:29:669 (29669|1,29875|1,30080|1) - pindah
00:33:368 (33368|1,33573|1,33779|1) - ini juga pindah, mending 00:33:779 (33779|1,33881|2,33984|3) - pindah 1 col ke kiri pindah
00:53:916 - ini mending gini, saran sih same
00:57:203 (57203|2,57409|2,57614|2,57820|2) - anchor yg disengaja?
01:07:477 (67477|1,67683|1,67888|1,68094|1) - ^
01:09:532 (69532|2,69738|2,69943|2,70149|2) - ^
01:15:491 (75491|3,75696|3,75902|3,76107|3) - ^

GILA

00:05:833 (5833|0,6039|0,6244|0,6450|0,6655|0,6861|0,7066|0,7272|0,7477|0) - anchor lmao
00:07:477 (7477|3,7683|3,7888|3,8094|3,8299|3) - ^
00:12:203 (12203|3,12409|3,12614|3,12820|3,13025|3,13231|3,13436|3) - ^
00:30:491 (30491|2,30696|2,30902|2,31107|2,31313|2,31518|2,31724|2,31929|2,32135|2,32340|2) - ^
00:34:190 (34190|2,34395|2,34601|2,34806|2,35012|2,35217|2) - ^
00:35:833 (35833|0,36039|0,36244|0,36450|0,36655|0,36861|0,37066|0,37272|0,37477|0) - ^
ini pada disengaja semua tha anchornya? :/ ya asw

00:09:275 (9275|2) - keknya ini ghost deh, dah gw bandingin sama map originalnya Mage
00:19:669 (19669|1,19669|3,19772|2,19772|0) - ini ngikut mana btw? klo drum hrsnya ini dah single

gud lak buat rank

tailsdk wrote:

Hard

00:08:094 (8094|1) - move or add a note at 00:07:991 - same
00:22:991 - add note here maybe maybe
01:07:580 (67580|0) - remove this note same
not really much else to say about this pretty clean Thank You

Lunatic

00:05:628 (5628|3,5731|2,5833|3,5936|2,6039|3,6142|2,6244|3) - maybe this thrill is a little long move
change these 00:11:792 (11792|2,11792|3,11895|0,11998|2,11998|1,12101|0) - to this pattern from 00:12:203 (12203|3,12203|2,12306|1,12409|0,12409|2,12409|3,12512|1,12614|3,12614|2,12614|0) - change
make this a double 00:22:991 - oK
maybe add a note here for the background drum 00:32:186 - wat ??
i dont really know how i feel about this jack 00:44:155 (44155|3,44258|3) - move
00:46:210 - add a note here OK
again this one 00:50:731 (50731|3,50833|3) - atleast mirror it so its not at the same spot(not going to point it out on the rest) move
remove this one 00:54:429 (54429|2,54429|1) - oK
also this one 00:55:868 (55868|2) - ^
00:59:361 (59361|1) - ^ ^
01:01:005 (61005|2) - ^ ^
why is not a double as everywhere else 01:05:833 - fix
missing a note here 01:06:347 - add
01:07:580 (67580|0) - remove this one
make this a double 01:10:868 - oK
01:12:922 - add note here ^
01:14:155 (74155|2) - remove this ^
01:14:566 - add note here ^

Normal

00:12:614 (12614|3,12820|1,13025|3,13231|2) - make this doubles like 00:09:121 - I think it cant, because the hard diff also has the same thing
01:18:368 (78368|1,78573|1,78779|2,78984|2) - maybe try not to use any kind of jacks on normal oK
thats all K

Pretty good map gl Thank You

Thanks Mod

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:01:313 (1313|3,1518|1,1724|2,1929|3) - pattern ini kayaknya cukup membingungkan deh untuk diff easy, soalnya kamu mencoba ngikutin drum yg seharusnya snapnya nggk seperti itu, saya saranin kamu coba deh ngikuti backsound guitar aja contohnya https://puu.sh/y7o7Q/6508e88a91.jpg
2. 00:02:340 (2340|2) - dan 00:05:628 (5628|2) - ini lebih pas klo single note aja, agak aneh klo dipaksain pakai LN sementara suara drum rollnya harusnya sampai sini 00:02:751 -
3. 00:04:292 - sama sarannya seperti mod di bagian pertama
4. 00:10:149 (10149|0) - kenapa nggk dipindahin ke kolom 3 aja supaya lebih bagus keliatannya ?
5. 00:12:820 (12820|2,13025|3,13231|2,13436|0) - mending dikasih half jack seperti ini http://puu.sh/y7ohp/128e4e9e0d.jpg soalnya klo urusan ritme nya udah beda sama pola-pola sebelumnya
6. 00:18:779 (18779|2) - pindahin aja ke kolom 2, coba di mirror sama part ini 00:13:847 -
7. 00:20:628 (20628|2,20833|0) - dan seterusnya, saran saya disamain aja dalam satu kolom untuk mengekspresikan suara kick yang identik/sama
8. 00:38:094 - mulai sini, hmm kayaknya bakalan lebih pas pke LN aja deh, lebih cocok soalnya klo urusan uara drum roll yang panjang dikasih pke LN aja di diff pemula http://puu.sh/y7orX/a378924274.jpg
9. 01:10:149 (70149|1,70559|2) - taruh dikolom yang sama aja, soalnya sebelumnya juga begitu 01:07:683 (67683|3,68094|3,68505|2,68916|2) -
10. 00:52:888 - saran aja, mulai dari timing sana lebih baik klo 2 note difokuskan ke drum aja (clap) supaya nggak membingungkan rhythm nya
    
    [Normal]
11. Kalo kamu dari awal udah ngikutin suara kick nya, seharusnya disini ada juga dong 00:01:416 -
12. 00:02:340 - agak aneh gimana ya, hmmmm coba ini deh http://puu.sh/y7oFM/0b81e7104f.jpg karena seharusnya disini 00:03:573 - udah gak double lg notenya
13. 00:06:039 - coba tes dulu kek begini https://puu.sh/y7oJ3/915d3fe511.jpg variasi dikit lah
14. 00:12:614 - dan 00:13:436 - seharusnya double kan ? karena sebelumnya pada interval yang sama udah pada double note juga 00:10:970 (10970|1,10970|2,11792|0,11792|2) -
15. 00:20:628 (20628|0,20833|3) - dan seterusnya, sama seperti diff easy, coba deh jadikan satu kolom aja untuk suara kick yang identik/sama tersebut biar feel nya lebih berasa pas dimainin
16. 00:30:902 (30902|1,31005|2,31107|0,31313|3,31416|1,31518|0) - konsistensi untuk pattern 1/4 kek begini sangat kurang pada part-part selanjutnya, cek lagi mulai dari sini 00:32:751 -
17. 00:37:272 (37272|3,37272|0,37477|2,37683|1) - usahakan bikin berbeda sama pattern yang diatasnya ya, soalnya "feel" dari musiknya baru berubah mulai dari sini 00:37:888 -
18. 00:41:381 (41381|2,41381|1) - aku kurang ngerti kenapa ini dijadikan 2 note, padahal sama-sama hanya punya suara kick seperti di part lainnya, kusarankan penggunaan 2 note (double) cukup difokuskan sama hentakan drum saja (clap) seperti di timing ini 00:40:149 - 00:40:970 - 00:41:792 - dan seterusnya
19. 00:44:155 (44155|1) - hapus aja deh kayaknya, supaya nggak tercampur sama part ini 00:44:258 (44258|3,44361|2,44464|1,44566|0,44669|1) - soalnya itu 1/4 notenya kan kamu fokusnya sama synth, bukan kepada kick sound
20. 00:52:580 - ketinggalan note disini ? untuk pianonya
21. 00:52:888 - saran aja sih, kembali fokuskan penggunaan double note untuk drum saja lah . . . contohnya http://puu.sh/y7qq4/b66e2f89e3.jpg
22. 01:06:039 - come on, sangat tidak disarankan untuk memakai 3 note sekaligus di interval yang singkat, sementara problemnya satu lagi 01:10:559 - suara drum yang jelas-jelas kenceng aja dikasih satu note doang
23. sepertinya kamu harus coba memahami sedikit tentang basic mapping lagi ya, jumlah note itu kebanyakan berdasarkan tingkat kekerasan suara pada tiap-tiap instrumennya
    
    [Hard]
24. 00:05:628 (5628|0,5731|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kanan deh, biar pattern flowsnya lebih enakan dikit
25. 00:06:655 (6655|3,6861|3,7066|3) - ini kenapa sampai 3 kali ya di kolom yang sama ? coba re-arrange lagi 00:06:861 (6861|3,7066|1) - ke kolom 3 keduanya
26. 00:10:149 - saran saya sih di map aja deh 1/4 pianonya seperti ini http://puu.sh/y7qQN/884366f536.jpg soalnya gap dari diff Hard ke Lunatic terlalu jauh
27. 00:14:464 (14464|0,14566|3) - ini kok streamnya disconnected ya ? coba deh jadikan satu alur aja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y7qU9/c6bfcda7ce.jpg
28. 00:16:107 - coba ini http://puu.sh/y7qVg/b6b77e1612.jpg dan seterusnya, usahakan jangan disconnected terlalu jauh ya streamnya
29. 00:19:292 - kalo lebih diperhatikan lagi, suara drumnya mulai dari timing ini . . . harusnya kamu ngemap mulai dari sana
30. 00:20:628 - sampai saya bosan ngingetin, coba deh klo patternnya seperti contoh ini https://puu.sh/y7qZT/358c996a33.jpg bakalan lebih berasa feelnya sumpah, klo kamu setuju bisa dilanjutin pada part berikutnya
31. 00:24:840 (24840|1) - bisa dibikin half jack dengan dipindah ke kolom 1, untuk penekanan suara drum nya
32. 00:40:251 (40251|2) - ini untuk instrumen apa yah ?
33. 00:44:464 (44464|3,44464|2) - 00:51:039 (51039|0) - kenapa dijadikan double ? sementara untuk suara sejenis di part lainnya kamu masih menggunakan satu note aja kok
34. 00:49:601 (49601|3,49806|3) - kenapa dikasih half jack ? klo alasan kamu untuk penekanan pianonya, maka bagaian ini perlu dikasih jack juga 00:50:012 (50012|2,50217|1) -
35. 01:07:272 - ketinggalan note nya

Insp1r3 wrote:

Lunatic00:09:532 (9532|0,9738|0,9943|0,10149|0,10354|0) - Anchor

00:10:765 (10765|0,10970|0,11176|0,11381|0,11587|0,11792|0,11998|0) - ^

01:13:025 (73025|0,73231|0,73436|0,73642|0,73847|0,74053|0,74258|0,74464|0,74669|0) - Good christ what is this anchor

00:17:717 (17717|1,17820|2,17922|3,18025|1,18128|0,18162|3,18231|2) - Snap these

00:19:361 (19361|0,19361|2,19464|3,19464|1,19566|2,19566|0,19669|1,19772|2,19875|1) - ^

Go through the map and snap these notes. It doesn't go with the music at all.

00:23:916 (23916|0) - Ghost note

00:27:101 (27101|2) - ^

00:28:539 (28539|2) - ^

Okay, this map has too many problems for me to point out. There's a lot of ghost noting and a lot of the charting doesn't follow the music at all. In general, this is overmapped and unrankable until these problems are fixed, especially the ghost notes and anchors. The hitsounding however is generally very good.

All I can say is good luck.

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

M4M

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:01:313 (1313|3,1518|1,1724|2,1929|3) - pattern ini kayaknya cukup membingungkan deh untuk diff easy, soalnya kamu mencoba ngikutin drum yg seharusnya snapnya nggk seperti itu, saya saranin kamu coba deh ngikuti backsound guitar aja contohnya https://puu.sh/y7o7Q/6508e88a91.jpg
2. 00:02:340 (2340|2) - dan 00:05:628 (5628|2) - ini lebih pas klo single note aja, agak aneh klo dipaksain pakai LN sementara suara drum rollnya harusnya sampai sini 00:02:751 -
3. 00:04:292 - sama sarannya seperti mod di bagian pertama
4. 00:10:149 (10149|0) - kenapa nggk dipindahin ke kolom 3 aja supaya lebih bagus keliatannya ?
5. 00:12:820 (12820|2,13025|3,13231|2,13436|0) - mending dikasih half jack seperti ini http://puu.sh/y7ohp/128e4e9e0d.jpg soalnya klo urusan ritme nya udah beda sama pola-pola sebelumnya
6. 00:18:779 (18779|2) - pindahin aja ke kolom 2, coba di mirror sama part ini 00:13:847 -
7. 00:20:628 (20628|2,20833|0) - dan seterusnya, saran saya disamain aja dalam satu kolom untuk mengekspresikan suara kick yang identik/sama
8. 00:38:094 - mulai sini, hmm kayaknya bakalan lebih pas pke LN aja deh, lebih cocok soalnya klo urusan uara drum roll yang panjang dikasih pke LN aja di diff pemula http://puu.sh/y7orX/a378924274.jpg
9. 01:10:149 (70149|1,70559|2) - taruh dikolom yang sama aja, soalnya sebelumnya juga begitu 01:07:683 (67683|3,68094|3,68505|2,68916|2) -
10. 00:52:888 - saran aja, mulai dari timing sana lebih baik klo 2 note difokuskan ke drum aja (clap) supaya nggak membingungkan rhythm nya
    
    [Normal]
11. Kalo kamu dari awal udah ngikutin suara kick nya, seharusnya disini ada juga dong 00:01:416 -
12. 00:02:340 - agak aneh gimana ya, hmmmm coba ini deh http://puu.sh/y7oFM/0b81e7104f.jpg karena seharusnya disini 00:03:573 - udah gak double lg notenya
13. 00:06:039 - coba tes dulu kek begini https://puu.sh/y7oJ3/915d3fe511.jpg variasi dikit lah
14. 00:12:614 - dan 00:13:436 - seharusnya double kan ? karena sebelumnya pada interval yang sama udah pada double note juga 00:10:970 (10970|1,10970|2,11792|0,11792|2) -
15. 00:20:628 (20628|0,20833|3) - dan seterusnya, sama seperti diff easy, coba deh jadikan satu kolom aja untuk suara kick yang identik/sama tersebut biar feel nya lebih berasa pas dimainin
16. 00:30:902 (30902|1,31005|2,31107|0,31313|3,31416|1,31518|0) - konsistensi untuk pattern 1/4 kek begini sangat kurang pada part-part selanjutnya, cek lagi mulai dari sini 00:32:751 -
17. 00:37:272 (37272|3,37272|0,37477|2,37683|1) - usahakan bikin berbeda sama pattern yang diatasnya ya, soalnya "feel" dari musiknya baru berubah mulai dari sini 00:37:888 -
18. 00:41:381 (41381|2,41381|1) - aku kurang ngerti kenapa ini dijadikan 2 note, padahal sama-sama hanya punya suara kick seperti di part lainnya, kusarankan penggunaan 2 note (double) cukup difokuskan sama hentakan drum saja (clap) seperti di timing ini 00:40:149 - 00:40:970 - 00:41:792 - dan seterusnya
19. 00:44:155 (44155|1) - hapus aja deh kayaknya, supaya nggak tercampur sama part ini 00:44:258 (44258|3,44361|2,44464|1,44566|0,44669|1) - soalnya itu 1/4 notenya kan kamu fokusnya sama synth, bukan kepada kick sound
20. 00:52:580 - ketinggalan note disini ? untuk pianonya
21. 00:52:888 - saran aja sih, kembali fokuskan penggunaan double note untuk drum saja lah . . . contohnya http://puu.sh/y7qq4/b66e2f89e3.jpg
22. 01:06:039 - come on, sangat tidak disarankan untuk memakai 3 note sekaligus di interval yang singkat, sementara problemnya satu lagi 01:10:559 - suara drum yang jelas-jelas kenceng aja dikasih satu note doang
23. sepertinya kamu harus coba memahami sedikit tentang basic mapping lagi ya, jumlah note itu kebanyakan berdasarkan tingkat kekerasan suara pada tiap-tiap instrumennya
    
    [Hard]
24. 00:05:628 (5628|0,5731|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kanan deh, biar pattern flowsnya lebih enakan dikit
25. 00:06:655 (6655|3,6861|3,7066|3) - ini kenapa sampai 3 kali ya di kolom yang sama ? coba re-arrange lagi 00:06:861 (6861|3,7066|1) - ke kolom 3 keduanya
26. 00:10:149 - saran saya sih di map aja deh 1/4 pianonya seperti ini http://puu.sh/y7qQN/884366f536.jpg soalnya gap dari diff Hard ke Lunatic terlalu jauh
27. 00:14:464 (14464|0,14566|3) - ini kok streamnya disconnected ya ? coba deh jadikan satu alur aja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y7qU9/c6bfcda7ce.jpg
28. 00:16:107 - coba ini http://puu.sh/y7qVg/b6b77e1612.jpg dan seterusnya, usahakan jangan disconnected terlalu jauh ya streamnya
29. 00:19:292 - kalo lebih diperhatikan lagi, suara drumnya mulai dari timing ini . . . harusnya kamu ngemap mulai dari sana
30. 00:20:628 - sampai saya bosan ngingetin, coba deh klo patternnya seperti contoh ini https://puu.sh/y7qZT/358c996a33.jpg bakalan lebih berasa feelnya sumpah, klo kamu setuju bisa dilanjutin pada part berikutnya
31. 00:24:840 (24840|1) - bisa dibikin half jack dengan dipindah ke kolom 1, untuk penekanan suara drum nya
32. 00:40:251 (40251|2) - ini untuk instrumen apa yah ?
33. 00:44:464 (44464|3,44464|2) - 00:51:039 (51039|0) - kenapa dijadikan double ? sementara untuk suara sejenis di part lainnya kamu masih menggunakan satu note aja kok
34. 00:49:601 (49601|3,49806|3) - kenapa dikasih half jack ? klo alasan kamu untuk penekanan pianonya, maka bagaian ini perlu dikasih jack juga 00:50:012 (50012|2,50217|1) -
35. 01:07:272 - ketinggalan note nya

Good luck ya

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Itu mod diapply semua ?
Hmmm next time tolong di reply atau kasih keterangan gitu

chouyaa wrote:

karna lagi bosan, jadi pengen mod saja

1|2|3|4

Lunatic

00:44:258 - 3 notes, konsistensi um kalau ini sih cuma mau pertahankan trill nya

00:44:361 - ini kenapa 2? ga ada loud kick pertahankan dulu deh

00:02:546 - 00:02:751 - 00:02:957 - 00:03:162 - 00:03:368 - yang kek gini sebenernya bisa jadi 3 notes,
lebih konsisten dengan part lainnya dan terlebih ini diff lunatic boleh

00:05:731 - dan seterusnya juga sama kek atas ok

00:09:738 - 3 notes, nanggung klo 2 sendiri padahal suara sama ok

00:10:046 (10046|2) - ghost note ga kok

00:10:457 (10457|1) - ^ ^

00:19:292 - ini harusnya 2 notes, loud snare ok

00:21:861 - 2 notes, cek konsistensi dengan di bawahnya ok

00:26:176 (26176|0) - pindah col 2, cek 00:25:970 (25970|0,26176|0,26381|0,26587|0) - berat kiri ok, hehe

00:36:655 (36655|0,36861|0,37066|0,37272|0,37477|0) - rearrange, stack 5 notes jadi masalah
karna di sana juga ada triple ok dah

00:47:135 (47135|0,47340|0,47546|0,47751|0,47957|0) - super imbalance,
kanan kosong melompong dan suara juga ga mendukung buat stacks ok

00:49:395 (49395|3) - pindah ke col 3, liat kanan imbalance kek sebelumnya hm, perbaikan di anchor itu T_T ok udah

00:54:224 - delete 1 note, no loud sound saya pikir ga

00:59:155 - ^ ^

01:00:799 - ^ ^

dah ah segini aja, nanti re-check lagi karna masih banyak kesalahan yg sama dengan di atas terutama anchor males nyebutin satu satu

GL

Ridho 2307 wrote:

hadhe mod gw nggak dianggep

17:53 Ridho 2307: woy
17:54 Ridho 2307: irc nya lanjut apa kagak?
17:54 FAMoss: post aja dah
17:54 FAMoss: itu dah update
17:54 Ridho 2307: ==
17:54 FAMoss: mager
17:54 FAMoss: banyak salah
17:54 FAMoss: mending gua delete aja lunatic
17:55 Ridho 2307: la gimana sih
17:55 Ridho 2307: lu nya yang males
17:56 FAMoss: w lagi nugas cok :'''V besok sama syadow- irc + lu, siap siap :>
17:56 Ridho 2307: ha\
17:56 FAMoss: ok bentar ya , selesain ini doelow
18:03 FAMoss: kuy
18:04 Ridho 2307: tunggu
18:04 *Ridho 2307 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1206166 Team Grimoire - MOTHER FUCXXXXXer [4k SuccuBus AttacK]]
18:04 FAMoss: eh ok
18:12 Ridho 2307: kuy lah\
18:12 FAMoss: kjks
18:12 FAMoss: kuy
18:12 Ridho 2307: diff nya yang terakhir paan?
18:12 FAMoss: BAB 2. REPRESENTASI DATA
18:12 FAMoss: lunatic
18:13 Ridho 2307: maksudnya yang w mod
18:13 FAMoss: hooh
18:13 FAMoss: itu aja
18:14 Ridho 2307: sr yang lunatic diup ke pas 4 bisa tuh
18:14 Ridho 2307: :v
18:14 FAMoss: oi
18:14 FAMoss: dah cukup  :V
18:15 Ridho 2307: 00:01:005 (1005|0) -  yang ini di hapus aja terus taroh 00:00:799 (799|3,799|2) -  di 00:01:005 - 
18:15 Ridho 2307: maksudnya yang di taroh buat juga
18:16 FAMoss: bentar :V
18:16 Ridho 2307: 00:01:724 -  kok ini cuman 1 note sih? harusnya 2 ato 3
18:17 FAMoss: w baru update tadi
18:17 FAMoss: cek thread gih
18:17 FAMoss: :V
18:17 Ridho 2307: ini dah w update lel
18:17 FAMoss: oakawokaw  ok
18:19 FAMoss: 00:01:005 (1005|2,1005|3) - triple?
18:19 FAMoss: doule?
18:19 Ridho 2307: 00:01:107 -  add note
18:19 FAMoss: tae
18:19 Ridho 2307: tripple aja
18:19 FAMoss: k
18:20 Ridho 2307: 00:02:751 (2751|2,2751|3,2957|0,2957|1,3162|1,3162|0,3368|2,3368|3,3573|3,3573|1,3573|0) -  ini yang line birunya napa dikosongin? padahal jelas banget loh nadanya
18:20 Ridho 2307: 00:04:395 -  add note
18:20 FAMoss: jadi trill?
18:20 Ridho 2307: 00:04:498 -  add note
18:20 FAMoss: cok
18:20 Ridho 2307: yang mana?
18:21 FAMoss: 00:02:751 (2751|2,2751|3,2957|0,2957|1,3162|1,3162|0,3368|2,3368|3,3573|3,3573|1,3573|0) - ini
18:21 FAMoss: trill?
18:21 Ridho 2307: 00:05:525 -  add note
18:21 FAMoss: o
18:21 FAMoss: k
18:22 Ridho 2307: https://puu.sh/y2AAq/b49917ce1a.png
18:22 Ridho 2307: gitu aja
18:23 FAMoss: dari?
18:23 FAMoss: k
18:23 Ridho 2307: 00:06:964 -  missing sound?
18:23 FAMoss: wait
18:23 Ridho 2307: 00:07:631 -  ^?
18:24 FAMoss: wth jump
18:24 FAMoss: 00:06:964 - ga ada emang
18:24 Ridho 2307: ^00:09:275 - ?
18:24 FAMoss: wat
18:24 Ridho 2307: dengerin pake playback 25 persen lel
18:25 Ridho 2307: 00:12:922 -  add 2 note
18:25 FAMoss: k
18:25 Ridho 2307: 00:13:025 (13025|1,13025|3,13231|1,13231|3,13436|3,13436|2,13436|0) -  tick birunya juga napa dikosongin?
18:26 FAMoss: dah
18:26 Ridho 2307: 00:14:155 -  add note
18:26 Ridho 2307: 00:14:258 -  ^
18:26 FAMoss: doubel?
18:26 FAMoss: waoawkowa mage malah suruh hapus
18:26 FAMoss: 00:14:258 -
18:27 Ridho 2307: kan namanya mod jadi terserah lu
18:27 FAMoss: akawowako
18:27 Ridho 2307: 00:16:929 -  missing sound?
18:27 Ridho 2307: 00:17:546 - ^?
18:28 Ridho 2307: 00:18:573 - ^
18:28 Ridho 2307: 00:19:196 - ^?
18:28 FAMoss: k
18:28 Ridho 2307: 00:19:087 - ^
18:28 Ridho 2307: 00:23:094 -  add satu note biar consis\
18:29 FAMoss: dh
18:29 Ridho 2307: 00:34:806 (34806|2,34806|3,34806|0) -  hapus satu
18:29 FAMoss: k
18:30 Ridho 2307: 00:39:121 (39121|2,39327|2,39532|2,39738|2,39943|2,40149|2) -  ya rabb
18:30 FAMoss: itu lah
18:30 FAMoss: dah
18:31 Ridho 2307: banyak banget yang kayak gitu tadi
18:31 Ridho 2307: 00:58:642 (58642|2,58642|3,58642|1) -  hapus satu
18:31 FAMoss: liat aja :V
18:32 Ridho 2307: ^nggak usah
18:32 Ridho 2307: \00:58:642 (58642|1,58642|3,58642|2)  add satu note
18:32 FAMoss: 00:58:642 (58642|3) - DELERE?
18:32 FAMoss: te
18:32 Ridho 2307: ^salah copas
18:32 Ridho 2307: 01:04:395 (64395|3,64395|0) -  yang ini mau diadd satu
18:33 FAMoss: ok
18:33 Ridho 2307: 01:05:833 -  ^ add satu note
18:33 Ridho 2307: 01:09:635 -  add note di 3
18:33 Ridho 2307: 01:11:279 - ^
18:34 FAMoss: K
18:34 FAMoss: :^)
18:34 Ridho 2307: |01:16:210 -  ^ di sua
18:34 Ridho 2307: dua
18:34 Ridho 2307: pattern terakhirnya monoton banget

• [Lunatic]

1. 00:00:696 (696|3,696|2,799|2,799|3,902|0,902|1,1005|1,1005|0) - suaranya beda, saran ganti ke jumpstream aja
2. 00:02:340 (2340|2,2340|3,2443|2,2443|3,2546|0,2546|1,2649|1,2649|0) - bole jack asal 1 column aja, kalo 2 rasanya ga pas
3. 00:03:265 (3265|2) - ghost note, move ke 00:03:059 - soalnya ada suara hithat
4. 00:03:984 (3984|1,3984|0,4087|0,4087|1,4190|3,4190|2,4292|2,4292|3) - sama
5. 00:05:628 (5628|3,5731|3,5833|3) - aneh aja msh awal2 dah 3 note ngejack -w-
6. 00:16:313 - 00:16:518 - 00:17:957 - 00:18:779 - 00:19:806 - double
7. 00:21:553 - add note hit hat
8. 00:22:169 (22169|1,22375|1) - ghost note ga ada suara, remove
9. 00:23:607 (23607|1) - ghost note, remove
10. 00:28:847 - try dis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9791384 lebih ena n ngefeel
11. 00:30:388 - double i guess
12. 00:31:827 (31827|1) - ghost note, move to 00:32:032 - to make double
13. 00:34:292 (34292|1) - ghost note, move to 00:34:190 - to make double
14. 00:35:731 (35731|2) - ghost note, remove
15. 00:36:758 (36758|1) - 00:37:991 (37991|1) - 00:39:224 (39224|1) - ^
16. 00:41:073 (41073|2) - ghost note move to 00:40:662 - cuz hithat
17. 00:42:306 - add note hithat
18. 00:49:703 - add note
19. 00:52:785 - 00:56:279 - 01:06:142 - 01:06:347 - add note
20. 01:07:991 - 01:09:429 - 01:09:635 - add note
21. 01:12:922 - 01:16:210 -
    

Syadow- wrote:

feed me some food

• [Lunatic]

1. 00:00:696 (696|3,696|2,799|2,799|3,902|0,902|1,1005|1,1005|0) - suaranya beda, saran ganti ke jumpstream aja
2. 00:02:340 (2340|2,2340|3,2443|2,2443|3,2546|0,2546|1,2649|1,2649|0) - bole jack asal 1 column aja, kalo 2 rasanya ga pas
3. 00:03:265 (3265|2) - ghost note, move ke 00:03:059 - soalnya ada suara hithat
4. 00:03:984 (3984|1,3984|0,4087|0,4087|1,4190|3,4190|2,4292|2,4292|3) - sama
5. 00:05:628 (5628|3,5731|3,5833|3) - aneh aja msh awal2 dah 3 note ngejack -w- change ~ uwu
6. 00:16:313 - 00:16:518 - 00:17:957 - 00:18:779 - 00:19:806 - double
7. 00:21:553 - add note hit hat
8. 00:22:169 (22169|1,22375|1) - ghost note ga ada suara, remove
9. 00:23:607 (23607|1) - ghost note, remove
10. 00:28:847 - try dis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9791384 lebih ena n ngefeel keep dulu deh, kwkwkwk soalnya suara clap hehe
11. 00:30:388 - double i guess
12. 00:31:827 (31827|1) - ghost note, move to 00:32:032 - to make double
13. 00:34:292 (34292|1) - ghost note, move to 00:34:190 - to make double
14. 00:35:731 (35731|2) - ghost note, remove
15. 00:36:758 (36758|1) - 00:37:991 (37991|1) - 00:39:224 (39224|1) - ^
16. 00:41:073 (41073|2) - ghost note move to 00:40:662 - cuz hithat
17. 00:42:306 - add note hithat
18. 00:49:703 - add note
19. 00:52:785 - 00:56:279 - 01:06:142 - 01:06:347 - add note
20. 01:07:991 - 01:09:429 - 01:09:635 - add note
21. 01:12:922 - 01:16:210 -

good luck >w<)b jgn lupa di reply :V

chifurukawa wrote:

marked uwu

chouyaa wrote:

rank when?

Fahrie6775 wrote:

eeeeeeeeeeeeeoooooooooooooooooooooo
aaaaaaaaaaaaaoooooooooooooooooooooo
mod's comin'

Normal

00:27:820 - 00:27:922 - missing notes? bukan deh, coba denger lagi, itu butuh ruang untuk normal, biar kaga sama seperti hard
01:09:327 - 2 aja cukup :< nice, 01:09:327 (69327|1) - hapus
01:19:190 - ^ gaada suara yg nendang :'v ga deh, hahaha, untuk akhirnya tetap 3

Hard

00:37:683 (37683|2) - ghost note? nice catch

sorry, can't find much :'v pattern nya dah gud semua :*
well mapped, when ths map is ranked? good

CoffeeLatte- wrote:

Lunatic

00:00:799 - perasaan ini suara similar sama 00:01:518 - malah saya dengernya lebih keras loh. disini 00:04:087 - sama 00:04:806 - saya denger nadanya sama keras juga iya. ga deh, keep aja itu. masih lebih keras 00:01:518 - dan 00:04:806 - ~ pake 2 note untuk kekerasan note

00:02:546 - saya rasa kalau ngasih 1/4 drum 00:02:649 (2649|1,3059|2) - malah jadi ga enjoy ngerasain hitsoundnya, lebih asik di kasih sv ketimbang perkusi lo ya. menimbang ini top diff pasti ada la sv" dikit xd. dan masih intro / awal" lagu udah ga jauh beda sama keseluruhan map jadi ya rada boring sih cuma liat single note doang di sepanjang map, saran saya ya buat mini LN. (just my preference) keep, tetap ga pake slider untuk diff dan ga mau ada sv tapi kalau slowjam boleh lah

00:02:957 (2957|3,2957|1,2957|0,3162|3,3162|0,3162|1) - itu boleh jack (coloumn sama) karena suaranya similar jadi sip. tapi kalau 00:02:546 (2546|2,2546|3,2546|0,2751|3,2751|2,2751|0) - itu sedikit beda jadi rada aneh kalau di jadiin jack atau di samain coloumnnya suaranya masih sama pak

00:06:244 (6244|2,6244|0,6450|3,6450|2) - saya saranin coloumnnya samain karena teng tengnya itu sama xd (saya dengernya ting tong teng teng tung *biar lebih mudah bedain xd) itu suara piano XD bukan suara dari lagunya

00:07:272 - saya saranin aja ini ga usah double, karena kamu mark double suara ini 00:06:861 - terus jadinya berasa ghost note karena ga ada suara similar. Lagian ini juga masuk bagian intro lo belum kiai jadi saya saranin jangan terlalu kompleks. nice catch 00:07:272 (7272|2) - deleted

00:07:066 - btw ini cuma drum suara tingnya kerasa di 00:07:169 - saya denger 25% ga ada suara drum di 00:07:169 -

00:07:991 - nah ini kenapa single hayo.. yang 00:07:683 - 00:07:272 - double. udah buat single aja udah biar fokus ting"nya pas awal" xd mantap

00:09:327 - nah ini harusnya triple kek sebelum"nya. ini juga 00:09:532 (9532|3,9532|2,9532|0,9738|1,9738|3,9738|2) - harusnya kolomnya sama. kalau ada suara similar coba inget: ting tong teng teng tung LOL 00:09:327 - tetap double, karena di buat triple jadi aneh dan anchor karena berbarengan suara yang sama

00:10:149 - 00:10:559 - 00:10:970 - saya saranin aja kaka buat single aja, tapi kalau masih tetep keep double. semua itu 00:11:381 - 00:11:587 - 00:11:792 - harus triple karena ada 3 suara yang muncul. detik ke 10 aja udah fail mah kalau aku ini xd keep itu suara clap

00:13:436 - 00:15:080 - 00:16:724 - 00:18:368 - itu suara sebenarnya LNable, tapi ya terserah sih, rada bingung juga ngikut piano sama drum kayak 00:13:847 (13847|2,14053|1,14155|3,14258|0,14258|2) - keep, no sliders pls

00:20:012 - Nah ini baru masuk sesi perkusi/drum section.

00:22:066 - 00:26:998 - saya denger suara hit hat, suaranya similar kayak ini 00:21:553 - keep malah jadi aneh kalau banyak hithat, soalnya jadi anchor nanti dan unrankadable. tak bisa di control

00:22:785 - 00:27:717 - kayaknya suaranya itu similar sama 00:26:484 - keep

01:19:087 - kayaknya itu kiai letaknya di 01:19:190 - memang di 01:19:190 - kok

RIP LN . single note terus selama lagu end dari awal juga rada garing gan itu aja sih oh

Hitsound

00:07:169 - missing G5S_s.wav C5S_s.wav sama kek di 00:06:861 -
00:09:121 - missing C6S_s.wav D#6S_Eb6S_s.wav D#5S_Eb5S_s.wav sama kek di 00:05:833 -
00:39:738 - missing G5S_s.wav Apply all

Maaf diff lain ga di mod :"D
Good Luck ^^

• 00:01:416 (1416|3) - shouldn't this be a LN like 00:00:696 (696|2) - ? They are the same sound so I dont see a reason why the other one is not a LN
  00:00:286 - column 2 is really empty on the start, consider adding some notes to it
  00:03:984 - same goes here for the 3rd column, its really empty
  00:09:943 (9943|1) - move to 4 for pitch since 00:09:327 (9327|3) - is the same sound
  00:10:149 - 00:12:614 - column 1 dead, Id really suggest that you move/add notes to it because it can bring to some really weird unbalanced pattern
  00:24:943 - column 3 dead
  00:37:888 (37888|0,38299|0,38710|0,39121|0) - anchor, avoid it sicne you have alot of room to move those notes too so there is no reason to have that kind of anchor
  00:43:231 - missed note here? check 00:39:943 -
  00:44:875 - ^
  00:46:518 - ^ and so on
  00:47:546 (47546|2,47957|2) - those shouldn't be in the same column since they are not the same pitch, why don't you move this note to 4? 00:47:546 (47546|2) -
  00:50:833 - missing note? check 00:47:546 (47546|2) -
  01:10:149 (70149|1,71792|3,73436|0) - kinda weird imo that you have mixed LNs, for example you here have 01:07:272 (67272|2) - 1/1 LNs and then you suddenly have some long ones. You should follow 01:10:559 - this sound with 1/1 LNs to stay consistent
  01:17:135 (77135|1) - this should be double note like 01:11:381 (71381|2,71381|0) -

• 00:00:286 - 00:06:861 - this part is very similar to hard, consider to snipe down normal a bit
  00:09:121 - 00:10:149 - on this part I'd suggest that you only have doubles on claps 00:09:121 (9121|0,9121|1,9532|1,9532|0,9943|1,9943|3) - and singles on Claps and cymbals 00:09:327 (9327|2,9327|3,9738|3,9738|2) - so that you dont have the same density pattern as hard difficulty https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893868
  00:20:012 - 00:21:655 - unbalanced, column 4 is unused and left hand does most of the work
  00:23:299 (23299|1,23505|0) - not consistent with 00:21:244 (21244|0,21450|0) - they should be in the same column
  00:24:018 - missed note here, check 00:21:861 (21861|3) -
  00:27:203 (27203|0,27409|0) - well you dont have any jacks on column 2 so meybe move those?
  00:39:327 (39327|0,39738|0,40149|0,40559|0) - anchor, avoid it so that it does not cause unbalancing
  00:42:614 (42614|3,42820|2,43025|3,43231|2,43436|3) - this trill-ish pattern si quite weird because there is no repetitive sound that can support it. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893903, that would aslo remove anchor on column 4
  00:46:724 (46724|3,46724|1,46929|2,47135|1) - 00:48:368 (48368|0,48368|2,48573|1,48779|0) - 00:45:080 (45080|0,45080|2,45286|1,45491|2) - quite repetitive don't you think, why don't you rearange some?
  00:48:984 (48984|2,49190|1,49190|3,49395|2,49806|2,50012|1,50012|3,50217|2) - ^
  00:59:669 (59669|1,60080|1,60491|1,60902|1) - anchor
  01:07:272 - 01:08:505 - consider moving notes to column 4, same reason as before
  01:15:080 (75080|2,75286|1,75491|0,75491|2,75696|1,76313|2,76518|1,76724|0,76724|2,76929|1) - you could change some to avoid repetitive gameplay

• 00:14:155 - 00:14:258 - you could definetly add notes on 4 and 3 for the drums since they are very clear
  00:15:799 - ^ and so on
  00:19:806 (19806|2) - this should be double like 00:19:601 (19601|0,19601|2) - since they are the same sound
  00:31:005 - 00:31:416 - add a note for drum like at 00:30:388 (30388|1) -
  00:33:368 - do the same here as above ^
  00:55:970 (55970|0,56176|0,56381|0) - you could rearange this handstream a bit since you have alot of place to avoid it, try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893963
  01:10:149 (70149|3,70149|1,70354|1,70354|3) - these shouldn't be in the same column since they are not the same sound, you could move those 01:10:354 (70354|1,70354|3) - to 1 and 2 for a better PR
  01:11:587 (71587|0,71792|0,71998|0,72306|0) - anchor

Umo- wrote:

hi
1234

[Easy]

• 00:01:416 (1416|3) - shouldn't this be a LN like 00:00:696 (696|2) - ? They are the same sound so I dont see a reason why the other one is not a LN
  00:00:286 - column 2 is really empty on the start, consider adding some notes to it
  00:03:984 - same goes here for the 3rd column, its really empty 00:05:833 - move
  00:09:943 (9943|1) - move to 4 for pitch since 00:09:327 (9327|3) - is the same soundmove
  00:10:149 - 00:12:614 - column 1 dead, Id really suggest that you move/add notes to it because it can bring to some really weird unbalanced pattern
  00:24:943 - column 3 dead
  00:37:888 (37888|0,38299|0,38710|0,39121|0) - anchor, avoid it sicne you have alot of room to move those notes too so there is no reason to have that kind of anchor
  00:43:231 - missed note here? check 00:39:943 -
  00:44:875 - ^
  00:46:518 - ^ and so on
  00:47:546 (47546|2,47957|2) - those shouldn't be in the same column since they are not the same pitch, why don't you move this note to 4? 00:47:546 (47546|2) -
  00:50:833 - missing note? check 00:47:546 (47546|2) -
  01:10:149 (70149|1,71792|3,73436|0) - kinda weird imo that you have mixed LNs, for example you here have 01:07:272 (67272|2) - 1/1 LNs and then you suddenly have some long ones. You should follow 01:10:559 - this sound with 1/1 LNs to stay consistent
  01:17:135 (77135|1) - this should be double note like 01:11:381 (71381|2,71381|0) -

[Normal]

• 00:00:286 - 00:06:861 - this part is very similar to hard, consider to snipe down normal a bit
  00:09:121 - 00:10:149 - on this part I'd suggest that you only have doubles on claps 00:09:121 (9121|0,9121|1,9532|1,9532|0,9943|1,9943|3) - and singles on Claps and cymbals 00:09:327 (9327|2,9327|3,9738|3,9738|2) - so that you dont have the same density pattern as hard difficulty https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893868 reagereeded
  00:20:012 - 00:21:655 - unbalanced, column 4 is unused and left hand does most of the work
  00:23:299 (23299|1,23505|0) - not consistent with 00:21:244 (21244|0,21450|0) - they should be in the same column
  00:24:018 - missed note here, check 00:21:861 (21861|3) - 00:21:861 - deleted
  00:27:203 (27203|0,27409|0) - well you dont have any jacks on column 2 so meybe move those?
  00:39:327 (39327|0,39738|0,40149|0,40559|0) - anchor, avoid it so that it does not cause unbalancing
  00:42:614 (42614|3,42820|2,43025|3,43231|2,43436|3) - this trill-ish pattern si quite weird because there is no repetitive sound that can support it. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893903, that would aslo remove anchor on column 4
  00:46:724 (46724|3,46724|1,46929|2,47135|1) - 00:48:368 (48368|0,48368|2,48573|1,48779|0) - 00:45:080 (45080|0,45080|2,45286|1,45491|2) - quite repetitive don't you think, why don't you rearange some? rearrange
  00:48:984 (48984|2,49190|1,49190|3,49395|2,49806|2,50012|1,50012|3,50217|2) - ^
  00:59:669 (59669|1,60080|1,60491|1,60902|1) - anchor
  01:07:272 - 01:08:505 - consider moving notes to column 4, same reason as before
  01:15:080 (75080|2,75286|1,75491|0,75491|2,75696|1,76313|2,76518|1,76724|0,76724|2,76929|1) - you could change some to avoid repetitive gameplay

[Hard]

• 00:14:155 - 00:14:258 - you could definetly add notes on 4 and 3 for the drums since they are very clear
  00:15:799 - ^ and so on
  00:19:806 (19806|2) - this should be double like 00:19:601 (19601|0,19601|2) - since they are the same sound
  00:31:005 - 00:31:416 - add a note for drum like at 00:30:388 (30388|1) -
  00:33:368 - do the same here as above ^
  00:55:970 (55970|0,56176|0,56381|0) - you could rearange this handstream a bit since you have alot of place to avoid it, try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893963
  01:10:149 (70149|3,70149|1,70354|1,70354|3) - these shouldn't be in the same column since they are not the same sound, you could move those 01:10:354 (70354|1,70354|3) - to 1 and 2 for a better PR
  01:11:587 (71587|0,71792|0,71998|0,72306|0) - anchor

good luck

DoNotMess wrote:

DnM's modding queue desu~
1|2|3|4
Lunatic
00:06:861 - this could be emphasized for the new song part, i would suggest to add column 3
00:13:025 (13025|0,13025|1) - 1 note is enough here since the sound is not too loud and doesnt represent kick like u did on the previous segment keep this, but arregereredeed
00:16:313 (16313|2,16313|0,16518|0,16518|2) - this trill seems awkward for me because it's clear the pitch is different and i dont find anything in the instrument that can represent this trill, i would suggest to make this into 1|4 and 00:16:621 (16621|1,16724|2) - ctrl h this
00:22:272 - 3 notes for snare
00:27:203 (27203|0,27203|1,27409|0,27409|1) - also could be 3 notes for snare
00:34:190 - this also

Hard
00:10:046 - stream should have started here
00:19:601 (19601|0,19601|2) - would suggest this to be only 1 note to differentiate the snare and the kick in this diff
00:55:149 (55149|2,55149|3,55354|2,55354|3) - could have been better if u make the column different because the pitch is different here like u did on latter
01:10:559 (70559|0,70559|1) - same suggestion on previous diff, would be better if u make it 1|4


i think thats all

general thoughts: good mapset, have concept, it's touhou!! i would like to see more ln in this map tho given the instrument but since it seems like this is bms style thing and has some keysounds ,its ok same, keysound is cool

hope it helps!

Noxus wrote:

Thanks for using my queue to request! Let's get started, your map seems to have gotten quite a ton of mods so I'll probably just be nitpicking at this point lmao, thanks for stopping by though c:

Hard:

00:01:724 (1724|2,1827|3,1929|2) - This pattern doesn't really sound like it should be a trill, just my opinion though.

00:05:012 (5012|0,5114|1,5217|0) - ^

00:19:292 (19292|1,19292|3,19395|0,19395|2,19498|3,19498|1) - Would recommend changing this to a 34 / 12 / 34 jumptrill instead of what you have to just make playability a bit nicer. re arrengerededdae some, that's so different from Lunatic

00:34:601 (34601|3) - add note for consistency, it's a snare so it should be a chord.

00:37:066 (37066|1) - ^h

01:07:477 (67477|3) - Wouldd move this to column 1 cause the sound is descending so it doesn't make sense for two completely different sounds to just mindlessly mimic the same pattern.

01:10:354 (70354|0,70559|0,70765|0,70970|0,71176|0) - Fix this anchor please.

Lunatic:

00:02:340 (2340|3,2340|2,2443|1,2546|3,2546|2,2546|0,2649|1,2751|3,2751|2,2751|0) - Why is this charted completely differently from 00:05:628 (5628|3,5628|2,5731|0,5731|1,5731|3,5833|2,5833|1,5936|0) - when it's the exact same sound, not to mention the second variation is just obnoxious lol so I'd recommend changing the second variation to the handstream-ish style you had for the first one.

00:06:450 (6450|2,6655|2,6861|2,7066|2) - Avoid anchor please.

00:08:710 (8710|1,8916|1,9121|1,9327|1) - ^

00:12:614 (12614|0,12820|0,13025|0,13231|0,13436|0) - ^ will keep it

00:16:107 (16107|2) - add a note 1 note enough i guess

00:16:416 (16416|1) - ^ for snare

00:17:751 (17751|1,17854|2,17957|1,18059|2,18162|1,18265|2,18368|1) - come on dude....don't be lazy. You can be more inventive with this pattern.

00:23:094 (23094|1) - add note in column 4. It's a snare, keep the consistency.

00:27:614 (27614|2,27820|2,28025|2,28231|2) - Avoid the anchor.

01:17:443 (77443|2) - Rearrange the patterns before this note so this note can end up being in the first or second column so the transition into the burst is much more fluid.

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

well this took a while, first mod with my new pc., you should be honoured woah, that's good news

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue

Lunatic

00:03:573 (3573|2,3573|3,3573|1) - this note isnt emphasised with a hitsound, that being the case i dont think it warents a triple keep, consistenst

00:07:066 (7066|3,7066|1,7066|0) - same deal here same

00:09:532 (9532|0,9532|2,9532|3) - for such a soft sounding sound, why is this a triple to follow like 00:09:121 (9121|1,9121|3,9121|0) -

00:14:361 - It seems a little odd that theres no note here? will keep, this. follow guitar style

00:16:005 - Same deal here (especially) theres a very audible sound its also not mapped in hard, which it really probably should be

00:17:238 - put a note here same

00:17:649 - another really audible beat ignored same

00:19:190 (19190|2,19190|0,19292|3,19292|1,19395|2,19395|0,19498|1,19498|3,19601|2,19601|0) - what is this, this is lengthy and honestly doesnt really serve much of a purpose, id say have this follow the beat more, this is represented better in the HARD Difficulty (compare the two)

00:28:642 (28642|1,28642|0) - big sound, id consider making it a triple add

list of sounds you missed, 00:33:676 - 00:34:292 - 00:34:703 - [color=#00FF00]keep/color]

Nothing much to point out about the kiai time, at time the notes seem a taaaaadd off, but that could just be me.
The Kiai consists of mostly the same 2 patterns a weird trill and a col 1/4 2/3 pattern, and that made it reeally boring and uninteresting to play for me, id add some diversity with more patterns and what not.

Hard (not actually doing a full mod just found this)

00:39:224 - delete this, Ghost note

Good luck

dudehacker wrote:

Sorry about delay. its okay

hitsound done:

Changed your sample set from normal to soft, dont worry about overwrite, copy my files to your folder.
https://puu.sh/yXTxo/f662b5b4c4.rar

I keeped your piano in the SB, didnt change it im bad with piano.

You can use my Magic Copy to copy hitsound if you like it
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330