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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 4, 2018 at 12:00:56 AM

Artist: Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Title: Just Awake (TV Size)
Source: HUNTER×HUNTER
Tags: ハンター×ハンター hxh ending Nippon Animation 日本アニメーション asherz007 thetoaphster
BPM: 191
Filesize: 2606kb
Play Time: 01:19
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00:02:210 (2210|3) - u should add another single note as there is a bass to equal all the other jack patterns.
00:03:467 (3467|2) - same here.
00:04:723 (4723|1) - same here.

00:10:535 (10535|1) - this LN should be moved from the white tick to the blue tick due to the high pitch sound being shorter.
00:24:514 (24514|1,24514|0,24592|2,24592|3) - perhaps change this from 1 2 - 3 4 to a 1 3 - 2 4 to add a change (lower, less bass), instead of it being the same as 00:24:200 (24200|2,24200|3,24278|1,24278|0) - (louder, drum) which both patterns do not have the same sound, might be best.
this 00:36:765 (36765|2,36765|3) - is the same as 00:36:451 (36451|1,36451|3,36451|2) - , must be consistent.
00:39:278 (39278|3,39278|2) - this should be a hand (3 notes) for the guitar sound.
00:37:393 (37393|0,37393|3) - same here.
00:37:707 (37707|0,37707|3,37707|2) - this should be switch from a hand to a jack (2 notes) due to not having the guitar.
00:38:022 (38022|0,38022|1) - here should be a jack.
00:47:760 (47760|2) - this definitely needs to be a jack, so try adding a single note next to the LN to fit the rest of those patterns.
01:18:074 (78074|0,78152|1) - this should be rethought just a bit, it feels a little unnatural with how your mapping usually was.
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Alternater wrote:
-EX-
00:02:210 (2210|3) - u should add another single note as there is a bass to equal all the other jack patterns.
00:03:467 (3467|2) - same here.
00:04:723 (4723|1) - same here.

00:10:535 (10535|1) - this LN should be moved from the white tick to the blue tick due to the high pitch sound being shorter.
00:24:514 (24514|1,24514|0,24592|2,24592|3) - perhaps change this from 1 2 - 3 4 to a 1 3 - 2 4 to add a change (lower, less bass), instead of it being the same as 00:24:200 (24200|2,24200|3,24278|1,24278|0) - (louder, drum) which both patterns do not have the same sound, might be best.
this 00:36:765 (36765|2,36765|3) - is the same as 00:36:451 (36451|1,36451|3,36451|2) - , must be consistent.
00:39:278 (39278|3,39278|2) - this should be a hand (3 notes) for the guitar sound.
00:37:393 (37393|0,37393|3) - same here.
00:37:707 (37707|0,37707|3,37707|2) - this should be switch from a hand to a jack (2 notes) due to not having the guitar.
00:38:022 (38022|0,38022|1) - here should be a jack.
00:47:760 (47760|2) - this definitely needs to be a jack, so try adding a single note next to the LN to fit the rest of those patterns.
01:18:074 (78074|0,78152|1) - this should be rethought just a bit, it feels a little unnatural with how your mapping usually was. No change because I used that column so the LN dont form a trill and so a retarded mini jack doesn't come out of those patterns

Applied everything else though, thank you~
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00:10:613 (10613|1) - It must come down to the bottom. lol 00:10:535 -

00:36:451 - Should add to kick sound.

00:59:854 - Add note for vocal. definitely exist.

01:08:179 (68179|1) - I think it should be split accodring to the vocal sound (1/2)

01:17:917 (77917|1,77917|2) - Change it to make it easier to play.

01:18:859 (78859|1) - I think single note for this sound doesn't give the expression of ending sound, due to vocal and guitar sounds. I'd recommend to change it into LN


good luck !
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hey

00:10:613 (10613|1) - It must come down to the bottom. lol 00:10:535 - Applied

00:36:451 - Should add to kick sound. Applied

00:59:854 - Add note for vocal. definitely exist. No change, vocal already exists in column 1

01:08:179 (68179|1) - I think it should be split accodring to the vocal sound (1/2) Applied

01:17:917 (77917|1,77917|2) - Change it to make it easier to play.Applied

01:18:859 (78859|1) - I think single note for this sound doesn't give the expression of ending sound, due to vocal and guitar sounds. I'd recommend to change it into LN Applied

good luck !


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2017-10-10 15:54 Noxus: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1433598 Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas - Just Awake (TV Size)]
2017-10-10 15:54 Noxus: finished and polished
2017-10-10 15:54 Noxus: along with a alternater and wonki mod
2017-10-10 15:54 Noxus: give it a try if youd like :D
2017-10-10 15:56 TheToaphster: hmmmm
2017-10-10 15:56 TheToaphster: its interesting for sure, more interesting than your other maps lmao
2017-10-10 15:57 Noxus: not competing with much
2017-10-10 15:57 Noxus: variety in intrument charting wise
2017-10-10 15:57 Noxus: lmfao
2017-10-10 15:57 Noxus: i focused on drums for the most part
2017-10-10 15:57 TheToaphster: alright lets start this
2017-10-10 15:57 TheToaphster: 00:10:535 (10535|1,10692|3) - these could probably be LN jacks to keep PR
2017-10-10 15:58 Noxus: LN jack
2017-10-10 15:58 TheToaphster:  yes
2017-10-10 15:58 Noxus: how do i even chart that
2017-10-10 15:58 Noxus: two LN on top of each other
2017-10-10 15:58 Noxus: eW
2017-10-10 15:58 TheToaphster: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9288183
2017-10-10 15:59 TheToaphster: this is with a little bit of stuff im looking at in the next measure
2017-10-10 15:59 TheToaphster: speaking of which, I assume the LNs are to the synth noise for the section right
2017-10-10 15:59 Noxus: ye
2017-10-10 16:00 Noxus: oh wait i missed a synth
2017-10-10 16:00 Noxus: in the start of it
2017-10-10 16:00 Noxus: oopS
2017-10-10 16:00 TheToaphster: because if that is so then the LNs should be 00:11:006 - 00:11:320 - 00:11:634 - and 00:11:948 - 
2017-10-10 16:00 TheToaphster: not on the upbeats
2017-10-10 16:01 Noxus: I charted some of those as single notes
2017-10-10 16:01 Noxus: not LN
2017-10-10 16:01 Noxus: maybe i should switch to LN
2017-10-10 16:02 Noxus: fixed
2017-10-10 16:02 TheToaphster: well, what i meant by that is it should be something closer to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9288206
2017-10-10 16:02 TheToaphster: since the synth is only on the downbeats
2017-10-10 16:04 Noxus: fixed
2017-10-10 16:04 TheToaphster: 00:13:519 (13519|0,13519|3,13676|1,13833|0,13833|3,13833|2,13990|3,14147|2,14147|1,14304|0,14461|3,14461|2,14461|1,14618|3,14618|1) -  could probably say the same about this part (but if you want variety for this just make the patterns change or like mirror or something)
2017-10-10 16:05 TheToaphster: now starting 00:12:262 - is something a bit awkward because what i would end up doing would make this part really terrible to play almost surely
2017-10-10 16:07 Noxus: lmao
2017-10-10 16:07 TheToaphster: you remember how i suggested an LN jack earlier
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: if you accepted that, then that would kinda be how i imagine this measure to go
2017-10-10 16:08 Noxus: NO
2017-10-10 16:08 Noxus: NO
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: lmao
2017-10-10 16:08 Noxus: TOAPH
2017-10-10 16:08 Noxus: NO
2017-10-10 16:08 Noxus: LOL
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: see thats what i expected
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: i mean
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: tbf
2017-10-10 16:08 Noxus: UR SO MEAN
2017-10-10 16:08 the LN jack isnt *that* bad playability wise
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: its worse than what you have
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: but not bad by any means
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9288249
2017-10-10 16:08 TheToaphster: like, this is what i probably would have done with the measure
2017-10-10 16:09 TheToaphster: if, however, you dont want to accept my absolutely wonderful suggestion
2017-10-10 16:09 TheToaphster: why are some of the LNs jumps
2017-10-10 16:09 Noxus: wdym
2017-10-10 16:09 Noxus: im just charting keys and drums at the same time
2017-10-10 16:09 TheToaphster: 00:12:419 - 
2017-10-10 16:09 TheToaphster: like here
2017-10-10 16:10 TheToaphster: why is that a jump
2017-10-10 16:10 TheToaphster: like why are there two LNs
2017-10-10 16:10 Noxus: keyboard note
2017-10-10 16:10 Noxus: hihat accent
2017-10-10 16:10 Noxus: cause i originally charted the hihat accents as LN
2017-10-10 16:10 Noxus: and you wanted it to be single notes
2017-10-10 16:11 TheToaphster: hmmmm
2017-10-10 16:11 TheToaphster: ok i see what youre talking about now
2017-10-10 16:11 TheToaphster: tho i dont know if i necessarily like the idea of mapping LNs to hihat sounds
2017-10-10 16:11 TheToaphster: it feels, weird to me
2017-10-10 16:11 Noxus: i do it too much through the map
2017-10-10 16:11 Noxus: to change it now
2017-10-10 16:11 Noxus: i prefer to leave it that way
2017-10-10 16:12 Noxus: i feel its justifiable enough
2017-10-10 16:12 TheToaphster: not really wrong in any way just a personal thing that feels weird
2017-10-10 16:12 Noxus: and just left to preference
2017-10-10 16:12 TheToaphster: hmm, ok so what did you change the 00:11:006 - measure to
2017-10-10 16:12 TheToaphster: was it what i suggested or did you keep the hihat as LNs
2017-10-10 16:14 Noxus: i changed to yours
2017-10-10 16:14 Noxus: but i kinda wanna change it back
2017-10-10 16:14 Noxus: cause i thought you noticed it before making that change
2017-10-10 16:14 Noxus: lol
2017-10-10 16:14 TheToaphster: let me look at the rest of the map really quick hold up
2017-10-10 16:15 TheToaphster: ok i looked at the rest of the map
2017-10-10 16:15 TheToaphster: and literally you only mapped LNs to the percussion hihat thing in the beginning and one section
2017-10-10 16:15 TheToaphster: which even without mapping to the hihat you could defend the placement and usage of the LNs
2017-10-10 16:15 Noxus: ye
2017-10-10 16:16 TheToaphster: so personally i dont find it would change too much of the map if you were to take out LNs for the hihats
2017-10-10 16:17 Noxus: so instead of the high hat
2017-10-10 16:17 Noxus: you want me to change it to a single note
2017-10-10 16:17 Noxus: on the upbeat
2017-10-10 16:17 Noxus: of where the LN originally started
2017-10-10 16:17 TheToaphster: especially since you showed that you were mapping LNs to the synth right before it, and hihat and synth are two veeerryy different sounds, and should probably be differentiated 
2017-10-10 16:17 TheToaphster: that is my basic suggestion for the intro yeah
2017-10-10 16:18 TheToaphster: 00:51:372 - but take right here, which is the only other part of the map you put LNs on high hat sounds, you probably dont even have to change this section at all, since the synth is likely more than enough there to defend your LN usage
2017-10-10 16:19 TheToaphster: i think something that has thrown me off for a few of your maps (i recall inferno doing this to me) is that you change what instruments you focus on on a measure by measure basis, which isnt really something i enjoy from a mapping viewpoint
2017-10-10 16:23 Noxus: alright
2017-10-10 16:23 Noxus: updated
2017-10-10 16:23 Noxus: check if i missed anyhting
2017-10-10 16:24 TheToaphster: intro looks good imo
2017-10-10 16:25 TheToaphster: 00:37:393 (37393|0,37393|1,37393|3) - this not could probably be a jump since theres no kick
2017-10-10 16:25 TheToaphster: plus jump jump hand ur evil
2017-10-10 16:25 TheToaphster: oh shoot your mapping the cowbell
2017-10-10 16:25 TheToaphster: hmmmm
2017-10-10 16:25 Noxus: guitar
2017-10-10 16:26 Noxus: not cowbell
2017-10-10 16:26 TheToaphster: the guitar is why that is a hand and not a jump?
2017-10-10 16:26 Noxus: but actually that is a evil though
2017-10-10 16:26 Noxus: thought
2017-10-10 16:26 Noxus: ill justify it as cowbell LMAO
2017-10-10 16:26 TheToaphster: fuk u
2017-10-10 16:27 TheToaphster: just goootta keep ur jumptrill hands in the map dont you boi
2017-10-10 16:27 Noxus: ;3
2017-10-10 16:27 TheToaphster: well hey at least 00:37:393 (37393|3,37393|1,37393|0) -  this one is fully justified in my eyes
2017-10-10 16:27 TheToaphster: 00:31:111 - 
2017-10-10 16:27 TheToaphster: this 
2017-10-10 16:27 TheToaphster: not the first thing i linked
2017-10-10 16:28 TheToaphster: alright moving on
2017-10-10 16:28 Noxus: OKAY ILL TAKE IT OUT
2017-10-10 16:28 Noxus: JESUS
2017-10-10 16:28 Noxus: ARE YOU HAPPY
2017-10-10 16:28 TheToaphster: yes
2017-10-10 16:28 TheToaphster: anyways
2017-10-10 16:28 TheToaphster: onto the chorus
2017-10-10 16:28 TheToaphster: this 00:46:032 (46032|1) - LN is to the synth noise thing right
2017-10-10 16:29 Noxus: ye
2017-10-10 16:29 TheToaphster: 00:46:032 (46032|1) - was the lack of synth LN here because you wanted to focus on the drums
2017-10-10 16:29 TheToaphster: fuck im bad at this
2017-10-10 16:29 TheToaphster: 00:48:074 - 
2017-10-10 16:29 TheToaphster: here
2017-10-10 16:30 TheToaphster: god damnit dude highlighting notes makes me hate my life
2017-10-10 16:30 Noxus: yes
2017-10-10 16:30 TheToaphster: hmmm, alright ill accept that reasoning
2017-10-10 16:30 TheToaphster: 00:46:817 (46817|2,46974|1) - these tho i feel should probably be one LN
2017-10-10 16:30 TheToaphster: since the synth is just one note for the time of those two
2017-10-10 16:31 Noxus: no its not
2017-10-10 16:31 Noxus: listen closer bb lol
2017-10-10 16:31 TheToaphster: yes it absolutely is one note
2017-10-10 16:31 Noxus: no its not LMAO
2017-10-10 16:31 TheToaphster: i listened to it fucking 15 times
2017-10-10 16:31 Noxus: toaph i will literally fight u
2017-10-10 16:31 TheToaphster: the drums make it sound like its two separate notes
2017-10-10 16:31 TheToaphster: but i promise you
2017-10-10 16:31 TheToaphster: its one
2017-10-10 16:32 Noxus: ok
2017-10-10 16:32 Noxus: ill change it
2017-10-10 16:32 Noxus: u punk
2017-10-10 16:32 TheToaphster: good ;)
2017-10-10 16:32 TheToaphster: alright onward
2017-10-10 16:32 TheToaphster: like i said this section 00:46:817 (46817|2,46974|1) -  is good owob was fun
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: 00:46:817 (46817|2,46974|1,56870|3,57027|2) - lol wanna
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: wann
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: wanna xd
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: put a ln jack here
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: for PR
2017-10-10 16:33 Noxus: stfu
2017-10-10 16:33 Noxus: :<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: lmao
2017-10-10 16:33 Noxus: no
2017-10-10 16:33 Noxus: im not doing that
2017-10-10 16:33 Noxus: thats WAY too ham
2017-10-10 16:33 Noxus: lol
2017-10-10 16:33 TheToaphster: 00:56:870 (56870|3,57027|2) - should have a note here
2017-10-10 16:34 Noxus: just 1?
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: 01:07:707 (67707|0,67864|2,68022|3) - these three should probs be LNs
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: and yeah
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: FUCK
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: HIGHLIGHTED NOTES
2017-10-10 16:34 Noxus: lOL
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: FUCK THIS EDITOR
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: 01:06:529 - 
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: here
2017-10-10 16:34 TheToaphster: thats where there should be a note
2017-10-10 16:35 TheToaphster: when i post this i should probably take out that 
2017-10-10 16:35 Noxus: fixed
2017-10-10 16:35 TheToaphster: me saying fuck the editor
2017-10-10 16:35 Noxus: lol
2017-10-10 16:35 TheToaphster: 01:09:121 (69121|0,69278|1,69435|3,69592|1,69749|0) - presumably these are synth?
2017-10-10 16:37 Noxus: yes
2017-10-10 16:37 TheToaphster:   mmmk
2017-10-10 16:38 TheToaphster: it could be argued that 01:09:592 (69592|1) - shouldnt exist but because of human brains being stupid and making a sound there anyways i dont necessarilly mind it
2017-10-10 16:38 TheToaphster: 01:10:692 (70692|3) - though, that definitely should not be there
2017-10-10 16:38 TheToaphster: 01:14:618 (74618|2) - neither should this
2017-10-10 16:38 TheToaphster: 01:14:933 (74933|0) - or this?
2017-10-10 16:38 TheToaphster: 01:15:718 (75718|2) - or this
2017-10-10 16:39 TheToaphster: and 01:15:718 (75718|2,78231|2,78388|1) - these two should probably be one LN
2017-10-10 16:39 TheToaphster: sorry i selected the wrong two there
2017-10-10 16:39 TheToaphster: 01:18:074 (78074|0,78231|2) - 
2017-10-10 16:39 TheToaphster: these two should be one
2017-10-10 16:40 Noxus: alright
2017-10-10 16:40 Noxus: fixed
2017-10-10 16:40 TheToaphster: and thats it for my mod
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00:03:152 - would rearrange them to like this
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00:06:294 (6294|0,6451|2,6608|1,6922|3,7079|0,7236|2,7393|1,7550|3,7707|2,7864|1,8022|0,8179|2,8336|3) - prefer following the roll here ~ change to 1/1 ln's

00:26:320 - missed a note~ if u ignore this then 00:09:985 (9985|2) - should be deleted too?

00:28:833 - ^

HD
00:11:006 - Would add another note for impact(loud sound snare cymbal and kick)

00:17:446 (17446|0,17603|3) - ctrl+h coz left part has to many ln's

00:25:299 (25299|3,25456|0,25613|3,25770|3,25770|0) - ctrl+h as well~ feels more comfy that way

00:26:320 - missed a note here ~ so add to |2| then move this 00:26:399 (26399|1) - to |4|
00:37:001 (37001|3) - move to |3| well its just annoying to have a note after a 1/2 ln
00:38:336 (38336|2,38336|3) - remove one note~ its over mapped imo

00:40:063 - suggestion for this part
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00:41:320 (41320|3) - move to |2| if previous suggestion is accepted

00:41:163 (41163|2) - ln ends here 00:41:477 -

00:41:477 - suggestion
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00:42:891 (42891|3) - move this here 00:42:812 -

00:43:440 - add
00:47:760 - add
01:06:765 (66765|2,66765|3) - delete one note
01:18:545 (78545|3,78545|0) - delete one note

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tbh if I could find ways to reduce the SR
00:09:906 (9906|1,9985|2) - 00:21:058 (21058|2,21137|1) - 00:21:844 (21844|1,21922|3) - turn these into 1/2 LNs
00:31:111 - im guessing this portion, the LNs represent the fast 1/4 drum sounds? so 00:31:739 (31739|2) - 00:32:995 (32995|3) - 00:34:252 (34252|2) - can be LNs


Everything else should be fine though, a bit hard to reduce the SR if 00:11:006 - this portion keeps all the 1/2 notes but I guess this is the nature of this song. gl :D
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2017-10-11 07:05 Soul Evans: yes haha
2017-10-11 07:08 Soul Evans: 00:06:294 (6294|3,6372|2,6451|1,6529|0,6608|2,6608|3,6686|1,6765|2,6844|3,6922|1,7001|2,7079|3,7158|1) - feels like the rolls are a bit centered around
2017-10-11 07:08 Soul Evans: the last 3 columns
2017-10-11 07:09 Soul Evans: hold on
2017-10-11 07:09 Noxus: id say it balances itself out for the rest of the patterns
2017-10-11 07:09 Noxus: im not too concerned about that
2017-10-11 07:09 Soul Evans: hmm
2017-10-11 07:10 Soul Evans: you make a point
2017-10-11 07:11 Soul Evans: 00:11:634 (11634|2,11948|2,12105|2,12262|3) - this feels a bit tricky to do i suggest 00:12:105 (12105|2,12105|1) - ctrl+H this for a better playfeild
2017-10-11 07:12 Soul Evans: did you pr the LNs lol
2017-10-11 07:13 Soul Evans: 00:18:859 (18859|1) - this would be less rigid if it was moved to 3 i feel
2017-10-11 07:13 Soul Evans: you layered this diff to be really rigid to the LNs it seems
2017-10-11 07:17 Noxus: alrighty fixed
2017-10-11 07:18 Soul Evans: the note on col 1 seems like you really cramped it up there if it's not intentional, do move it to 3 and the note in column 4 can be put on column 1 instead
2017-10-11 07:18 Soul Evans: to give some sort of ladder type of feel when they play the last verse
2017-10-11 07:20 Soul Evans: oh
2017-10-11 07:20 Soul Evans: shit
2017-10-11 07:20 Soul Evans: i forgot to include the timing stamp LOL
2017-10-11 07:20 Soul Evans: 00:19:645 (19645|3,19802|0) - 
2017-10-11 07:20 Noxus: LOL
2017-10-11 07:21 Noxus: fixed :3
2017-10-11 07:22 Soul Evans: 00:23:571 - i think it's safe to say this can have a note for the beat at column 3
2017-10-11 07:22 Soul Evans: since you included chords for the same sound
2017-10-11 07:22 Noxus: oh nice catch
2017-10-11 07:22 Noxus: forgot about that
2017-10-11 07:25 Soul Evans: 00:34:409 (34409|1,34566|1,34723|1,34880|1,35037|1,35194|1) - this could be considered a 6 note anchor
2017-10-11 07:25 Soul Evans: fwiw
2017-10-11 07:26 Noxus: fixed
2017-10-11 07:26 Noxus: 00:34:566 (34566|0) -
2017-10-11 07:26 Noxus: moved to column 1
2017-10-11 07:26 Noxus: xd
2017-10-11 07:27 Soul Evans: 00:51:215 - i think you can add a note on 1 here for the specific sound
2017-10-11 07:27 Soul Evans: i don't know i never went to figure out what those sounds are called
2017-10-11 07:28 Noxus: lmao
2017-10-11 07:30 Soul Evans: 01:01:268 - same for this i guess
2017-10-11 07:30 Soul Evans: i think that's it
2017-10-11 07:33 Noxus: thx daddy
2017-10-11 07:33 Noxus: throw it in the forum so i can give you some pp
2017-10-11 07:33 Soul Evans: aren't you my daddy technically
2017-10-11 07:34 Noxus: no i suck ass
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00:19:723 - maybe add here - No change i dont think that note is loud or relevant enough to put in since itll make the pattern obnoxious
00:31:111 (31111|2,31111|3,31268|3,31268|1,31268|0) - triple should be here 00:31:111 - then remove one note 00:31:268 (31268|1,31268|3,31268|0) - I'd prefer to avoid minijack jumptrills and im not removing a note from the triple chord cause that's a snare drum and all my snare drums are hands
00:34:880 (34880|1) - move to |3|- was already in column 3 ?_?
00:35:037 (35037|1) - to |1|- Applied
00:35:351 (35351|3) - to |3| - Applied
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m4m with lia-tan nox-san >w<

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00:11:006 - Would add another note for impact(loud sound snare cymbal and kick) mmmk

00:17:446 (17446|0,17603|3) - ctrl+h coz left part has to many ln's mimics earlier pattern/mirrors earlier pattern, won't change unless theres enough discomfort with both sections

00:25:299 (25299|3,25456|0,25613|3,25770|3,25770|0) - ctrl+h as well~ feels more comfy that way changed the first 3 notes, but im keeping the last two the way they are in favor of holding PR

00:26:320 - missed a note here ~ so add to |2| then move this 00:26:399 (26399|1) - to |4| awkward, since this is an HD diff, I kept triplets while holding LNs out of it for the sake of keeping spikes out (though maybe that's not too big of a deal, I'll discuss with some people about that)
00:37:001 (37001|3) - move to |3| well its just annoying to have a note after a 1/2 ln hmmm, alright
00:38:336 (38336|2,38336|3) - remove one note~ its over mapped imo i dont knoooooow that sound is preeetty loud

00:40:063 - suggestion for this part did something similar, but changed around the patterns a little bit from your suggestion
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00:41:320 (41320|3) - move to |2| if previous suggestion is accepted not necessary imo

00:41:163 (41163|2) - ln ends here 00:41:477 - sure

00:41:477 - suggestion did something similar
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00:42:891 (42891|3) - move this here 00:42:812 - HD diff - three note bursts (especially with the short LN patterning here) would likely be pretty hard compared to the rest

00:43:440 - add see above
00:47:760 - add sure
01:06:765 (66765|2,66765|3) - delete one note sound is clearly louder + kick so it should be represented by a jump
01:18:545 (78545|3,78545|0) - delete one note sure



thanks for the mod! Will send the new .osu to Noxus shortly for him to update
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00:09:514 (9514|3) - might be better if placed at 2 for easier reading
00:11:006 (11006|3,11006|1) - 24 seems rather awkward to begin, why not try 14?
00:23:885 (23885|3,23964|0,24200|2,24278|1,24514|0,24592|3) - rather oddly timed, might be better to follow the piano instead
00:30:482 (30482|0,30639|1,30796|2) - what are these 3 LNs following? i can't really tell
01:13:126 (73126|2) - seems oddly snapped, was it meant to be on the red line?
Decent chart

ToaphhpaoT
00:12:577 (12577|0,12577|1,12577|2) - snares seem to be mapped as doubles, but here it's triples. consistency error?
00:13:205 (13205|1,13205|0,13205|2) - ^ and so forth, will not mention this
00:42:105 - you mapped the double kick sound before, why not continue it?
Consistency errors, look out for them as they are almost all over the chart

EX EX EX EX
00:08:728 (8728|0,8807|0) - might be better to avoid this kind of pattern when there are additional trills ahead, generally this pattern is found when the jumptrill ends
00:09:985 (9985|0,10063|0) - same goes
00:12:419 - quite the focus on col 1
00:17:917 (17917|1,17917|3,17917|0) - its a kick, not a snare, no reason for this to be a triple
00:18:859 - missing note for snare
00:19:488 - ^
00:20:116 - ^
00:31:268 (31268|1,31425|1,31582|1,31739|1) - anchor
00:32:367 (32367|2,32524|2,32681|2,32838|2) - ^
00:33:624 (33624|1,33781|1,33938|1,34095|1) - ^
00:34:095 (34095|3,34252|3,34409|3,34566|3,34723|3,34880|3) - ^
00:36:294 (36294|2,36451|2,36608|2,36765|2,36922|2,37079|2) - ^
00:39:121 (39121|2,39278|2,39435|2,39592|2) - ^
00:41:163 (41163|2,41320|2,41477|2,41634|2,41791|2) - ^
00:43:205 (43205|2,43362|2,43519|2,43676|2) - ^
00:43:990 - for this i think it's better to continue the pattern that i'm seeing at 00:44:304 - instead of suddenly cutting it at the start
00:48:859 (48859|2) - probably better to move to col 1 to balance the hands due to 00:48:388 (48388|2,48545|2) - and 00:49:330 (49330|2,49488|2,49645|2) -
01:13:519 (73519|0) - similar to above but col 2
01:14:461 (74461|2,74461|0,74461|1) - doesn't sound like a snare to me
Multiple issues of all sorts, look out for anchors as well

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00:12:577 (12577|0,12577|1,12577|2) - snares seem to be mapped as doubles, but here it's triples. consistency error? check
00:13:205 (13205|1,13205|0,13205|2) - ^ and so forth, will not mention this check
00:42:105 - you mapped the double kick sound before, why not continue it? so instead of continuing to map the kick sound, I took it out in favor of avoiding triplet patterns while holding LNs down

checked through the rest of the chart to make sure everything looked alright, fixed any consistency errors I found, thanks!
Consistency errors, look out for them as they are almost all over the chart

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00:08:728 (8728|0,8807|0) - might be better to avoid this kind of pattern when there are additional trills ahead, generally this pattern is found when the jumptrill ends Applied
00:09:985 (9985|0,10063|0) - same goes Applied
00:12:419 - quite the focus on col 1- Fixed
00:17:917 (17917|1,17917|3,17917|0) - its a kick, not a snare, no reason for this to be a triple - Fixed
00:18:859 - missing note for snare Applied
00:19:488 - ^ - Applied
00:20:116 - ^ - Applied
00:31:268 (31268|1,31425|1,31582|1,31739|1) - anchor - Fixed
00:32:367 (32367|2,32524|2,32681|2,32838|2) - ^ - Fixed
00:33:624 (33624|1,33781|1,33938|1,34095|1) - ^ - Fixed
00:34:095 (34095|3,34252|3,34409|3,34566|3,34723|3,34880|3) - ^ - Fixed
00:36:294 (36294|2,36451|2,36608|2,36765|2,36922|2,37079|2) - ^ - Fixed
00:39:121 (39121|2,39278|2,39435|2,39592|2) - ^ - Fixed
00:41:163 (41163|2,41320|2,41477|2,41634|2,41791|2) - ^ - Fixed
00:43:205 (43205|2,43362|2,43519|2,43676|2) - ^ - Fixed
00:43:990 - for this i think it's better to continue the pattern that i'm seeing at 00:44:304 - instead of suddenly cutting it at the start
00:48:859 (48859|2) - probably better to move to col 1 to balance the hands due to 00:48:388 (48388|2,48545|2) - and 00:49:330 (49330|2,49488|2,49645|2) - - Fixed
01:13:519 (73519|0) - similar to above but col 2 - Fixed
01:14:461 (74461|2,74461|0,74461|1) - doesn't sound like a snare to me - Fixed
Multiple issues of all sorts, look out for anchors as well - Fixed
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00:03:152 - would rearrange them to like this sure owo)b
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00:06:294 (6294|0,6451|2,6608|1,6922|3,7079|0,7236|2,7393|1,7550|3,7707|2,7864|1,8022|0,8179|2,8336|3) - prefer following the roll here ~ change to 1/1 ln's lol xD I was trying to do anything but the 1/1 LN spam qwq so I followed just the kicks and the piano here.

00:26:320 - missed a note~ if u ignore this then 00:09:985 (9985|2) - should be deleted too?

00:28:833 - ^ I was thinking to have that early 1/4 in because it was surrounded by a break, so it's not going to be too bad if the player missed this note. (also trying to keep SR down ._.)


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Ash
tbh if I could find ways to reduce the SR
00:09:906 (9906|1,9985|2) - 00:21:058 (21058|2,21137|1) - 00:21:844 (21844|1,21922|3) - turn these into 1/2 LNs But that makes the map super boring by eliminating the LNs and I dun want that uwu
00:31:111 - im guessing this portion, the LNs represent the fast 1/4 drum sounds? so 00:31:739 (31739|2) - 00:32:995 (32995|3) - 00:34:252 (34252|2) - can be LNs idk... yes, there are 1/4s here, but there nowhere near as audible as the ones that are mapped as LNs.


Everything else should be fine though, a bit hard to reduce the SR if 00:11:006 - this portion keeps all the 1/2 notes but I guess this is the nature of this song. gl :D I was trying to keep that damned SR down xD


riunosk wrote:
mod requested 1234
ashy
00:09:514 (9514|3) - might be better if placed at 2 for easier reading Fair point. Was just a little concerned about the OH movement for this one.
00:11:006 (11006|3,11006|1) - 24 seems rather awkward to begin, why not try 14? Yeah, the previous notes were [14] as well but oh well xD
00:23:885 (23885|3,23964|0,24200|2,24278|1,24514|0,24592|3) - rather oddly timed, might be better to follow the piano instead Hmm...
probably gonna need some more opinions on this one. I mean, the section doesn't really follow piano at all for this section, so might be a little odd to start following it again. (plus variation cus everyone knows constant js at this speed kinda sux)

00:30:482 (30482|0,30639|1,30796|2) - what are these 3 LNs following? i can't really tell Guitar whilst also covering that 1/4 drum roll
01:13:126 (73126|2) - seems oddly snapped, was it meant to be on the red line? Nope, deliberate. I thought the snare on the 1/4 was more prominent that the one on the 1/2, hence why the note's there
Decent chart thanks owo)b


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