Hey, NM from my queue
Insane
00:02:286 (1) - 00:08:286 (4) - try focusing on the vocals here since the background is barely hearable
00:09:837 (5) - why note here? i know triples are fun but there are no sounds in the song to reflect this note
00:15:113 (1) - fix nc
00:16:769 (1) - maybe use circles instead of a slider, circles will better depict the vocals
00:17:286 (3) - once again you used a triple without any sounds in the song to reflect it
00:19:044 (4) - ctrl g with the next note to better follow the vocals
00:20:389 (2) - remove this note, no triple to be heard in the song
00:22:148 (3) - ^ no triples here
00:23:389 (1) - ^
00:25:665 (2) - ^
00:28:147 (1) - try using an extended slider here like
so00:29:700 (11) - overmapped triple
00:32:906 (8) - here you can even add a triple because thats what the percussion's doing
00:34:769 (1) - use a 1/2 slider here like
so00:37:975 (1) - change the kick here into the same pattern as ^ for better readability like
so00:39:941 (2) - use a triple here
00:47:493 (6) - no triple sound here, remove the note
00:48:837 (4) - use an extended slider here for better readability like
that for example01:00:010 (1) - 01:01:250 (11) - maybe remap this part into jumps that follow the vocals?
01:05:286 (2) - and 01:06:114 (5) - overmapped triples
01:08:286 (1) - remap this pattern into a 5 note stream
01:11:596 (1) - stream doesnt fit here, use a 1/2 slider into double to better reflect the rythms
01:14:389 (5) - overmapped note, no sound here
01:15:734 (5) - you can use a triple here because thats what the percussion's doing
01:34:562 (1) - fix nc
01:36:735 (3) - overmapped triple, remove this note
01:39:114 (6) - ^
01:39:838 (2) - ^
01:41:597 (3) - there are no sounds at all where this kickslider is, why do you force a triple there then?
01:42:838 (1) - no triple sound here
01:45:114 (2) - ^
01:45:942 (1) - 01:47:596 (1) - why did you use streams here? there are no streams in the song as well
01:47:596 (1) - use extended slider like i mentioned before like
that01:57:424 (1) - change the kickslider into a 1/2 slider into double like
so, kicksliders are really awkward to play, they fit into only some specific rythms and patterns
01:59:390 (2) - you can use a triple here
02:00:838 (1) - use an extended slider here to prevent reading difficullties
02:04:149 (1) - ^
02:06:942 (6) - no triple sound here
02:07:459 (1) - use an extended slider here
02:08:286 (4) - ^
02:08:908 (7) - you can use a triple here
02:15:528 (4) - no triple sound here, use a normal circle instead of a kickslider
02:16:562 (7) - 02:16:872 (8) - i wouldnt use kicks here, try using doubles
02:19:562 (2) - no triple sound in the song
02:20:286 (7) - no streams in the song as well
02:24:735 (2) - overmapped triple
02:31:045 (1) - no streams in the song
02:31:666 (6) - overmapped triple
02:33:838 (5) - ^
02:42:837 (1) - copy paste from the beginning so not gonna point out the same things i did
To sum up, you need to be more careful about your rythm choices. I know that some patterns may sound cool and be fun to play but you should ask yourself a question "is this sound depicting the song correctly?" Like with all the triples and streams, they fit the song, I can't say they don't, but the song didn't include them so why is the map including these? Your patterns aren't bad however you should pay more attention to how comfortably your map is to play. For example you create a lot of gaps between rythms and these may become hard to read for beginners, don't forget that your map is only 4 stars.