[TimingPoints]
6395,200,4,2,0,40,1,0
95995,300,4,2,0,40,1,0
143995,285.714285714286,4,2,0,40,1,0
145137,272.727272727273,4,2,0,40,1,0
146227,255.31914893617,4,2,0,40,1,0
147248,240,4,2,0,40,1,0
148208,226.415094339623,4,2,0,40,1,0
149113,222.222222222222,4,2,0,40,1,0
150001,214.285714285714,4,2,0,40,1,0
150858,206.896551724138,4,2,0,40,1,0
151685,200,4,2,0,40,1,0

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Kobaryo - Galaxy Friends [OsuMania]






Good luck!

SPOILER

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Re pls

Another Lie wrote:

A random quick mod

Galaxy

01:11:293 - missing note? //Nah.. i ignore this just like i did on 01:10:493 -
01:12:093 - ^ //^
01:41:393 - this part until 01:45:293 - why not make it like that part? 01:36:593 (96593|0,96780|1,96968|2) - and the next note //Oh for this, because the sounds are fade out. So i reduce the note to show that feeling
02:23:993 - 02:29:888 - why leave it blank? you can map it like this part 01:35:993 - 01:45:293 - (i consider that as consistency) //And for this if u notice the BPM change, it will be pain to play because the speed change irregularly, so i keep it empty for the cymbal 02:29:999 - here

You can ignore it if that doesn't help you
Nice map (after speedcore 300)

KosukeSaitooo wrote:

Kobaryo少年人不简单啊 什么都能做
吓死宝宝了

Derelict Rain wrote:

normal:
00:19:893 - 00:20:693 - 00:23:093 - add? //i decide only follow the main sound here
00:59:393 - 00:59:793 - 01:00:193 - add too! Same reason as above
01:00:593 (60593|2) - ???
01:00:993 - good add here
sorry my bad english

-[Apple]- wrote:

膜拜
打算送个摸 :3..

ajeemaniz wrote:

irc'd a bit, additionally :
[EZ]
00:32:393 (32393|0,32593|0) - 00:33:193 (33193|3,33393|3) - every of these jacks is on 11 & 44, you might want to move it to 22 & 33 for variation in 00:38:793 (38793|0,38993|0) - 00:39:593 (39593|3,39793|3) - & move 00:39:193 (39193|2,39393|1) - to 14 41, same goes to 00:41:993 (41993|3,42193|3) - //i think for beginner, 1 and 4 col jack are easier than 2 3, and i made those part repetitive so it wouldnt be too hard

01:06:993 - addpls //ok
01:48:293 (108293|0,108593|3,108893|0) - change trill to 23 23 23 23 //ayyy... maybe not this time, i dont see and pitch change or other reason that i have to make those pattern different

02:16:793 (136793|1,137393|0) - switch column //ok

[NM]
00:14:793 (14793|0) - to 2, different pr //ok

00:32:393 (32393|1) - https://puu.sh/r6aai/1071b5c905.png . the down beat (kick burst) are louder in red lines tbh, the sounds in white line doesn't really worth to layer, apply until 00:43:093 (43093|1) - //really nice catch, i change tthe pattern as you said but make my own pattern

02:50:883 (170883|0,170883|3,171083|2,171283|1) - 43 21 , 02:52:483 (172483|3,172483|0,172683|1,172883|2) - 12 34 //nah.. i dont think trill will be a good idea

[HD]
same problem with NM, i'd make these 00:32:193 (32193|2) - 00:32:693 (32693|1,32893|2) - burst double than the kick //idk, somehow if you mix the double (for the 1/8 burst) with other 1/2, it just play weird... I will leave the current pattern see if i can get any other suggestion

man these kind of song is hard to mod, im not pro :^(

good luck sy

ExNeri wrote:

Insane

01:26:793 (86793|0,86993|0,87093|1,87193|2) - 这些个音用长条来表示会更好 //这个LN只有1/4的长度，在300BPM下这种短LN打起来和Note没差别还容易出错
03:20:983 (200983|3,201033|2,201083|1,201083|0,201183|0,201233|1,201283|3,201283|2,201383|3,201433|2,201483|0,201483|1,201583|0,201633|1,201683|2,201683|3,201783|3,201833|2,201883|1,201883|0,201983|0,202033|1,202083|3,202083|2) - 咋回事？ //没问题，背景重复的1/4 sanre
02:07:793 (127793|1,127793|0,127943|3,127943|2,128093|1,128093|0,128243|3,128243|2,128393|1,128393|0) - 我觉得还能有更好的摆法 //主音重复所以用trill没什么问题

Hard

00:44:693 (44693|2) - 加一个note
00:57:493 (57493|1) - 同上 //这是hard难度，而且为了保留后面的triple这个加到double造成的jack会太难而且没必要
01:23:093 (83093|2) - ^ //^
01:26:793 (86793|0,86993|0,87093|1,87193|3) - 还是觉得长条好 //同理Insane
01:35:893 (95893|1) - 加一个note //同上
02:03:593 (123593|0,123743|2,123818|1,123893|0,124043|3,124193|1,124193|0) - 欠考虑 //？？？？？？

Normal

00:44:693 -加一个note //对normal太难，我已经把前后的note放在同一col来表现就足够了
00:57:493 -^ //^
01:27:093 -^//^
01:35:893 -^//^
02:14:143 -^//^

果然是rank过图的麻婆、铺面风格就不一样

有兴趣来摸摸我的图么……

Alsty- wrote:

hi , what i should call you? SY? :u ahh whatever
here NM as requested. if my suggestion is breaking your style , ignore them.
1|2|3|4

Insane

00:22:593 (22593|3) - move this to 1 //I will keep this since there is no reason to move this
00:25:393 - missing notes? , others part like this get double in here maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6068001 //because other part got snare which worth to double but not here
00:25:793 (25793|0) - move to 4
00:28:993 (28993|0) - move to 4
on the kiai section , maybe try to [2][1] and [3][4] variation on those 1/8 notes?? ignore this if this suggestion break your style.
00:57:193 - maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6068103 //nah.. i will keep this for hardest diff
00:57:793 (57793|0) - if ^ applied , move this to 2
01:10:393 - why this part use 1/1 instead of 1/2 ? //because i decide to follow the background bass
01:23:093 - add notes on 4? :u //nah...
01:29:593 (89593|0) - this is should be end here 01:30:393 - and this 01:30:393 (90393|2) - should be double instead of 01:30:193 (90193|1,90193|3) - check this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6068168 also the last 3 notes arranged 4|3|2 because of pitch then 01:30:793 (90793|1) - move to 3 //fix
01:30:793 - 01:31:193 - 01:31:793 - i would love if this parts get LNs too :u //dont really want to mix the 1/2 with the LN so...
01:53:093 (113093|0,113093|2) - 01:53:693 (113693|0,113693|2) - make this single , let this 01:53:393 (113393|1,113393|3) - get the feel with those cymbal //nah, i double not only for the cymbal but also the snare
02:14:243 (134243|1) - add notes on 4
02:22:943 (142943|1) - double. //k
02:23:993 - fill this paaarrtt? :c //k
03:42:083 - add LNs //what for

sorry just 1 diff's :3 i really like the song , take my star ~ :u
good luck btw , cya SY ~

Critical_Star wrote:

Halo

1/2/3/4
Galaxy
00:30:893 - 00:31:093 - would prefer to catch these sound instead 00:30:593 (30593|3,30793|1,30993|2,31193|0,31393|3) - where the sound are much noticeable here
01:22:593 (82593|2) - reduce a note here? just to differentiate them with 01:22:793 (82793|0,82793|2,82793|3) -
01:29:193 (89193|0) - would prefer to make this into column 4 for PR //keep this, not really a big deal imp
01:33:693 (93693|0,93743|1,93793|3,93843|2,93893|0,93943|1) - 1/8? //oh for this, the 1/8 are mix with the non-stop 1/4 and which if i follow them will be "impossible" to play
01:41:393 - till 01:45:593 - the sound are still clear to me i think add them like 01:39:593 (99593|0,99780|1,99968|2,100193|0,100380|1,100568|2,100793|0,100980|1,101168|2) - // i reduce this to show the fade-out feeling of the song, so keep this one
02:06:743 (126743|0) - doesn't seems worth to use a LN here since the sound are not really clear like 02:06:893 (126893|3,127043|1) - //nah.. this LN is like the 1/4 "clock" sound, like i did in insane

Insane
00:39:293 (39293|3,39343|2,39393|0,39443|1,39593|0,39643|1,39693|3,39743|2,39893|3,39943|2,40093|3,40143|2,40193|0,40243|1,40393|0,40443|1,40493|3,40543|2) - could try to rearrange them into 1-2-3-4 / 4-3-2-1 instead the same pattern variation usage // i really dont know, keep changing pattern in the burst part can be really hard, might consider this
01:00:593 (60593|0,60593|1) - not single note?
01:33:693 (93693|2,93693|1) - random double? //for the 1/8 burst start sound
01:41:393 - till 01:45:593 - same mod like galaxy
02:38:183 (158183|1,159783|2,161383|1,162983|2) - i thought u are not following these sound for the first half chorus? //not all of them, cause i wants to make this section "less note" to show the next part (which has same rhythm but more snare) are different
02:58:483 - should be double note here
03:08:483 (188483|3) - move to 2 and 03:08:683 (188683|0) - move to 3? just to variate the pattern here

good luck~

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi my Sanada

mod

[Normal]

00:14:793 (14793|1) - move to 1
00:21:793 (21793|2) - move to 4
00:28:193 (28193|1) - move to 1
00:38:193 (38193|3) - move to 3
00:41:393 (41393|0) - move to 2
01:05:993 - add note to 3 //nah, sounds no different to other normal note imo
01:06:393 - add note to 2 //^^
01:06:793 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083302 //same
02:03:293 - add note

[Galaxy]

00:30:693 (30693|2) - move to 4
00:31:293 (31293|1,31393|2) - ctrl + g
00:31:593 - 00:43:193 - this part makes me cry //ikr, pretty much the hardest burst of this diff ;w;
01:03:993 - 01:08:793 - best gabba part //:^)
01:11:193 - add note to 1 //nah, i ignore this just like 01:10:493 - and 01:12:093 -
01:27:093 (87093|3) - move to 1 //i think the triple jack should be fine here
01:32:793 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6082887 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6082889
02:06:593 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083331
02:07:793 (127793|2,127943|1,128093|2,128243|1,128393|2) - change on normal notes //ayyy why, the short long sound really catchy
02:14:093 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6082895 //i wants to keep those double same col 02:13:793 (133793|1,133793|0,134093|1,134093|0) -
02:15:743 (135743|3) - move to 2
02:20:243 (140243|1) - move to 3
02:38:083 - 02:44:483 - you can add more notes //lol, its like every modder ask me to but the reason why i keep those part "under-mapped" is because i want to emphasize the next part, which is the same rhythm but more snare than this part, a same pattern will be hard to notice the difference
03:09:683 (189683|3,189783|3,189883|3,189883|0,189983|0,190083|0) - it hurts to play //i try other pattern, but i choose this is because it separate the 300 BPM 1/2 jacks and the 1/4 into two hands which i think its easier for player to play, and i also use the same pattern at 03:09:683 (189683|3,189783|3,189883|0,189883|3,189983|0,190083|0) -
03:13:983 (193983|0) - move to 3 //if i do so, the 03:14:083 (194083|3,194183|3) - jack here will also be right hand which is pain to play
03:15:183 (195183|0) - move to 3 //03:14:883 (194883|2,194883|3,194983|1,194983|0,195083|2,195083|3,195183|0,195183|1) - same kind of snare so...
03:15:883 (195883|0) - move to 4
03:16:283 - add note to 3, 03:15:883 - same sound here
03:19:083 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083352
03:24:383 - add note to 2
03:25:483 - add note
03:25:983 - add note to 1, 03:26:183 (206183|0) - move to 2, 03:26:283 (206283|3,206308|2,206333|1,206358|0,206383|3,206383|2,206483|0,206508|1,206533|3,206533|2,206583|0,206608|1,206633|3,206633|2,206683|1,206683|0,206783|3,206808|2,206833|1,206858|0,206883|3,206883|2,206983|0,207008|1,207033|2,207058|3,207083|0,207108|1,207133|2,207158|3,207183|0,207183|1,207283|3,207308|2,207333|1,207358|0,207383|3,207408|2,207433|1,207458|0,207483|3,207483|2,207583|0,207608|1,207633|2,207658|3,207683|0,207683|1) - ctrl + h part with bursts, 03:27:783 (207783|2) - move to 2 and 03:27:883 (207883|1) - move to 4
03:29:083 - and here 03:29:183 - add notes //prefer keep the double only for snare

Bruce wrote:

Easy
这种歌硬要憋一个Easy也是辛苦了
01:33:593 (93593|0) - 变Hold //01:33:793 - 这里有变调然后又不想放两条LN所以。。。

01:55:043 - 这个鼓点太明显了建议加上 //哭，加完星就炸了，虽然是200BPM但是这种1/2还是有点难经量少用， 我放同个col表现一下就行了

02:01:943 - 也是明显的

02:04:643 - ^

02:14:243 - ^

02:38:083 - 这里开始有点违和感.就是不太明白自己在打些什么音的感觉 //这边是主音不是那个1/1的Clap

Normal
02:14:243 - 漏音

Galaxy
这段mod是让你抓明显的主音的 如果不想要可以直接不用看 个人感觉这样会舒服点
03:29:383 - +Note 在1

03:30:783 - +Note 任何位置都行

03:31:183 (211183|1) - 移到 03:30:983 -

03:32:383 - 03:32:583 - +Note

03:33:983 - +

03:34:383 (214383|2) - 移到 03:34:183 -

03:35:383 - 03:35:583 - +

03:35:783 - 03:37:183 - +

03:37:583 (217583|1) - 移到 03:37:383 -

03:38:783 - 03:38:983 - +

03:40:383 - +

03:40:783 (220783|2) - 移到 03:40:583 -

03:41:983 - + //我知道你点的这些都是主音，可是我最后这段只抓了bass drum还有snare，对比下Insane可以看出来完全不同，在最后那段Kiai的burst之后我不太想玩太花的patter你，会累炸的

水完了

[Emiria] wrote:

IN
00:15:193 - 不把鼓抓起吗 //前面也没抓r
00:17:793 - 这有啊 //其实使这里00:17:993 - 高个Pitch
00:30:693 - 怎么漏音 //vocal欸
00:31:593 - 做条把
00:32:243 (32243|2) - 没听到1/4
这个1、4代1、8 不是很好 //re了


H
00:25:393 - 好好抓主音就好
00:30:893 - 漏
01:32:793 - 用条把 //01:32:393 (92393|0,92593|3) - 条子留给这两个就好


没了
其他的中规中矩，整个图有点没诚意的感觉 //诚意在Galaxy((

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

galaxy
03:15:883 - change to LN? //在03:15:683 - 开始的LN
00:34:393 - SV感覺有delay感

Protastic101 wrote:

oh, it's kobaryo, yey

Column 1|2|3|4

300 bpm breakcore <3

[General]

1. Idk if you're working on a diff between Insane and Galaxy, but you're probably going to need one for rank since the diff gap is ~1.8* //no i'm not planning to add any diff between Galaxy and Insane, i think we should focus on the pattern spread instead of just check the SR, since we all know SR system is broken. And over 1.5 SR gap is not a unrankable issue
2. For OD of Insane, since there's a pretty big note:LN ratio, I'd recommend a slightly higher OD, like ~8.3 or so. //Nah, this diff use a lots of short LN (even more than galaxy diff), so a low OD should be fine
3. The offset is wrong. It should be ~6376, give or take a few milliseconds. That means you should move everything by -17 //hmm... not sure with this, will ask some "timing expert" for this

Ibrahim wrote:

take stars i'll mod your map ></

Fresh Chicken wrote:

take stars i will not mod your map ></

Fresh Chicken wrote:

take stars i will not mod your map ></

Protastic101 wrote:

oh, it's kobaryo, yey

Column 1|2|3|4

300 bpm breakcore <3

[Easy]00:06:393 (6393|0) - I would suggest ending this LN at 00:12:793 since that's where the bass ends. If accepted, I would actually move the LN to 2 since it's higher in pitch than 00:12:793 (12793|0) //ok
00:29:993 - I'd recommend using a 2/1 LN here to represent the drum roll. If accepted, 1 would be nice and you could shift 00:29:993 (29993|1,30193|0) to the right one. //sure
01:02:393 (62393|0) - I'd recommend ending this at 01:02:893 and starting 01:02:793 (62793|2) at the same place too since the synth has a small pause at 01:02:793 //nah, the current timing are right for the pitch change
01:05:993 (65993|0) - Why are these jacked if you don't use jacks anywhere else in this section? Consider moving to 2.
01:09:193 (69193|1,69593|2,69993|0) - Why not make these 3 notes into LNs to represent the clap and build up sounds? If accepted, you could probably move 01:09:993 (69993|0) to 3 or 2. //i want to keep the LN only for 01:07:593 (67593|0) - to shows the difference
01:08:793 (68793|3) - Also, I might consider removing this since there's no kick or anything here; rather the music goes way down in terms of density.
02:06:893 (126893|0) - I feel like this note is a little redundant since it's covered by the bass growl. Instead, I'd recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111816 /remove, but i didnt add LN which i think its too hard for EZ
02:19:193 - Right here, why not try following the drum kicks? So it'd look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111843 Tho I understand why you'd want to keep it 4/1. //ok add
02:31:062 - Here, I'd recommend following the synth lead in, so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111857 ...Actually, I think it'd be better to use all Lns for the synth here to add some variation to the map, but that's only my opinion.
03:06:283 (186283|1) - I think it'd be fine to leave this note out to accent the drop in instruments here. //ok done
03:27:683 (207683|2,207683|3) - Maybe turn one of these into a 2/1 LN since the bass is similar to 03:28:083 (208083|0) //prefer to use double as a finish to end the burst

[Normal]00:20:593 (20593|1,20793|2,20793|3,20993|1,21193|2,21193|3) - I feel like for this, rather than use the same double - single structure you've been using, it'd be ok to use a short 1/2 burst like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111883//those main sound not worthy to change the pattern
00:23:793 (23793|0) - I feel like this LN that represents the 1/2 is kind of unnecessary because the sound can just be mapped as 1/2 instead, as opposed to the 1/4 used in 00:22:193 (22193|3) //sure
00:44:593 (44593|3) - I'd consider moving this to 3 and adding another note at 00:44:693 in 2. I think it's fine to use 1/2 in this diff q.q //since i'm not planning to use 1/2 in this diff, put it in the same col will be nice to show the drumkick
00:51:193 - Here, rather than use straight 2/1 jumps, I would consider adding a note on every 2nd and 4th offbeat like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111918 If you wanna keep the difficulty down, you could reduce the double notes on the downbeats so it's a simple 1/1 stream kind of thing. //no i want to keep this part easy to emphasize the next kiai
01:03:393 (63393|3,63593|1) - Maybe jack these two notes instead of with the LN cause two short note jacks is easier to time imo.
01:29:193 - Consider adding a note in 2 for the snare sound like at 01:28:993 (88993|3,88993|2) //nah.. they sounds different
02:37:683 (157683|0,157683|3) - I might also consider making one of these an LNs to signify that small silence broken by the clap there. //they are not even long sound
02:50:483 (170483|0) - Maybe move this to 2 and make a 2/1 LN for the small wind build up?
02:56:883 (176883|1) - ^^ Make 2/1 LN for the bass buildup.
03:06:283 (186283|3) - I might consider removing this to accent the decrease in music density, or you could make it an LN and end at 03:06:483 for the bass hold.

[Hard]00:11:593 (11593|2,11993|0) - I think it'll be easier to just swap columns with these notes to avoid an unnecessary jack at 00:11:993 (11993|0,12193|0) which doesn't play as well imo. //it just a 1/1 jack, its fine
00:59:393 (59393|3,59793|3,60193|0) - I think it'd be cool to make notes like this 1/1 LNs to represent the upbeat of the synths.
01:03:393 - Maybe you could add another note here for the snare, like at 4 or something. //keep this
01:32:393 (92393|0,92593|3) - These sound like the same 2/1 bass growl. I'd consider combining the LNs together to get a single LN in 4. //nah the different
01:59:693 (119693|1) - You could try making this 1/1 to represent the small echo for the clap.
03:12:683 (192683|0) - I think making some notes like this where the music suddenly pauses for a second into LNs would be cool as it would help lead the player into the next note at 03:12:883 so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112161

Sorry for the short mod, but I can't really play beyond 4* q.q Anyways, good luck~

Mage wrote:

Second kiai starts 00:31:993 - here, 00:44:793 - ends here; 4th kiai 03:29:283 - ends here

1|2|3|4

Easy

00:38:793 (38793|0,38993|0) - you already used this pattern a lot at 1/4 columns, so you can put it at 2/3 columns, something like this //i put it as a 1/2 jacks to show the burst felling

01:32:393 - LN ends here, becaus sound doesn't break like previous LN

02:49:283 (169283|2,169683|3) - ctrl+G //prefer current

03:02:083 (182083|0) - remove? //nah... for vocal

03:10:083 - add note to 1 //one is enough

03:52:483 - start LN here?

Normal

00:44:693 - add note

01:35:893 - ^ //nope, the same col is enough to show the drumkick

01:52:793 - 01:53:393 - start LNs //keep it double for the cynbal

03:12:683 - ^

03:15:683 - ^

Hard

00:12:793 (12793|0) - i think will be more comfortable if you move this LN to 4, and note to 1

00:33:893 - here double, 00:33:993 - here single note //double are for the 1/8 burst

00:37:093 - ^

00:40:293 - ^

01:24:793 - LN starts here

03:09:283 - 03:09:483 - you can start LNs here

03:12:683 - ^

Insane

00:13:593 - 00:15:193 - add single notes

00:20:993 - move to 3 and 4 for jack

00:24:193 - ^

00:27:393 - 1 and 4

01:26:393 - add note to 1

01:29:593 - add note to 3

01:31:193 - add note

02:32:483 - add note to 2

02:33:283 - add note to 3

02:34:083 - add note to 2

03:03:283 - 4 notes like 02:37:683 - here

Ibrahim wrote:

Fresh Chicken wrote:

take stars i will not mod your map ></

asdasdasd


hi Salada im here , mod as your req in my queue

Galazy

00:15:993 (15993|3,16793|0,17193|1,17593|2) - i think the LN sto here 00:18:293 - //ok fixed
00:26:693 (26693|0) - move to col 2 and 00:26:793 (26793|1) - move to col 1 (col 1 2 3 4) //k
00:30:893 (30893|0) - how about add one more note, i think the sound is loud tho //00:31:093 - this one more worthy to double, so keep that note single
01:03:593 - add one more note? //no need
01:11:193 - add one more note //here no main sound so
01:12:093 - this too //01:10:493 - like i ignore here
01:20:893 - add //k
02:17:993 - add one note i think for effect "bunngghh" //sure
02:23:993 - to 02:30:856 - how about add one note like here too 01:41:993 - //keep this part empty for now due to the changing BPM
02:34:883 (154883|0,155683|3,156083|2,156483|1) - same mention as before fixed

that's all what i got , i hope it will help.
Good Luck!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

no

2016-09-18 17:36 SanadaYukimura: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1058142 Kobaryo - Galaxy Friends]
2016-09-18 17:44 Bonsai: seems correct with exception of the end which gets too slow, I'd do 285bpm at 02:29:999 - and then move the following sections accordingly
2016-09-18 17:45 SanadaYukimura: so i just change this rea line from 280 to 285
2016-09-18 17:45 Bonsai: yup, and move the next two lines by -14 or whatever, so it connects with that one
2016-09-18 17:46 SanadaYukimura: sure
2016-09-18 17:47 SanadaYukimura: thanks man

laughingcomet wrote:

Hello!

Easy

think something like this would play better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6126270
00:15:993 (15993|2,17593|1) - i think these ends at 00:18:393 - //No, the current timing are right
I think if you had note on each white line on 00:19:193 - ~ 00:29:993 -
00:29:993 (29993|0) - i think this should end at 00:30:193 - http://puu.sh/rfF2h/b2b10017c3.png
00:43:993 (43993|3) - im sure you don't need this
i don't know what you thought about when you did the last kaiai but i don't like them at all. it dosen't make any sense to put doubles there in my opinion

Normal

00:12:193 - no LN?
00:17:593 (17593|3) - ends at 00:18:393 -
02:34:869 (154869|3,155669|0) - ends at 02:37:269 -

Hard

00:16:793 (16793|3,17193|2,17593|1) - ends at 00:18:393 - (seems to be on every diff)
00:33:893 - double?
01:47:393 (107393|3,107693|3,107993|3,108293|3,108593|3) - intentional?
02:35:669 (155669|3,156069|2,156469|1) - ends at 02:37:269 - (seems to be on every diff)

insane

01:35:993 - ~ 01:45:593 - some of these are wrongly timed
01:41:393 - keep going with the threes?
02:23:993 - ~ 02:29:999 - map these sounds?

Feerum wrote:

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello SanadaYukimura!
Thanks for requesting to my Modding Queue
Here is my mod for you.

Now i see why you asked me if 1/8 is rankable on 300bpm ayy xD

The Song is pretty long. Is it okay for you when i focus more n Insane & Galaxy? //No problem at all
These diff's will have then a more detailed mod because i simply think they would benefit most for a Mod.

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right // According to the official website.
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Your offset seems a bit off for me. Please try it with 6384 (-9ms for all timing points) // Change it after apply my mod or the time stamps will be incorrect /k
mp3/Hitsounds: Is it me or is your Beatmap not hitsounded yet? //Will add later for sure
Other: -

Insane

Okay let's beginn with the Insane.

Already at the beginning i noticed you have some ghost notes in your difficult. I gonna list them out:
00:19:743 (19743|1) - , 00:21:343 (21343|3) - , 00:21:343 (21343|3,22943|3) - , 00:26:143 (26143|0) - , 00:27:743 (27743|3) - , 00:29:343 (29343|0) -
On all these notes is no own sound. There is just a long sound of the previous note which is 1/2 beat long.
All other 1/4 you can keep because there is a 1/4 kick sound.
//Ok fix this one, I thought there are echo, anyway deleted

00:29:343 (29343|0) - When you change the offset you will notice that this note should be snapped to 1/3 at 00:15:859 - .
//Must be something wrong while I fixing the BPM, I knew this is 1/3

00:31:993 - These chords seems .. uh.. how can is say... random placed for me. I mean i bet you have a system behind them but i still will suggest something what can give a better feeling for playing it:

Screen

The thing here is: Instead of following "something" and spam wild 1/2 beat chords on 300 bpm you can follow, especially for the Insane, just the loud 1/8 sounds with chords. Don't worry about the kicks which get mapped with only one note. This is more than enough for them. There is no other sound than the kick so it fit well.
You may notice that some chords have a single note jack. like [14][13]. The sense behind them is that the 1/8 sound has just slightly a different pitch and with this you can emphasize this even more!

If you like this suggestion you can apply it for all these 1/2 chord parts in this part. Basically until here 00:43:193 - .
//As this kiai section suppose to be the hardest part of the whole diff, use double for the snare and the 1/8 burst should be ok (since use 1/4 for the 1/8 is just too stupid imo). And they are not place randomly, 00:31:993 (31993|3,31993|2,32093|3,32093|2,32393|0,32393|1,32493|1,32493|0) - for the same pitch snare, 00:32:693 (32693|0,32693|3,33193|0,33193|3,33693|0,33693|3) - jack to shows the 1/8 feeling

00:54:393 (54393|3,54393|0) - any reason why this is with two notes? You didn't use two notes in the 1/2 part before for the claps and here is no other sound. //k
00:55:993 (55993|1) - Suggest also to delete this note. The 1/4 stream sound ended 1/4 before. //change to LN for the long sound after

01:22:393 (82393|2) - Delete this note or add a not at 01:21:993 - . Same sound. //added

Mh.. should this note 01:23:593 (83593|0) - be better on 01:23:293 - , 01:24:393 (84393|3) - on 01:24:093 - and so on.. i mean on the downbeat you doesn't really have any certain sound and on the red beat you ignore one of the most audible, the melody. It feels very strange. //deleted 01:23:593 - , but i decide not to add 01:23:293 - since the 2 notes after have higher pitch

01:26:993 (86993|0,87093|1) - Maybe jack these notes. Is actually pretty cool! //Unlike top diff, i want to keep this part easy

01:35:993 - to 01:41:385 - . I am 1000% sure your notes here are wrong snapped. The first notes fit well to 2/3 beat but later not. Please get someone who is skilled in timing to check this because i am pretty sure here is some kind of bpm change. I tried over 30min to figure it out but failed :/ //Ok marked first

02:08:843 - pretty sure missing note. Kick, hihat, music. //Yup done

02:16:493 (136493|0) - suggest to make here a 1/2 LN. It really feels like something is missing here. //fixed

03:23:669 (203669|0,203669|1,203719|2,203719|3,203769|0,203769|1,203819|2,203819|3,203869|1,203869|0) - These as single notes would be enough. You doesn't have here a strong enough sound to make it as chords.
//To make those snare different with 03:22:669 (202669|0,202719|1,202769|2,202819|3) - those 1/4, make it as a chords is not overdone

03:25:269 (205269|3,205269|2,205319|0,205319|1,205369|2,205369|3) - Same here. The sound isn't audible enough for chords. They seem so random placed, just for the difficult spike. What is a no-no. //Like the explanation I gave above, the placed in this way for a reason

03:32:369 - Pretty sure missing note. Follows still the melody. //Yup sure

That's all for insane i think. The Map is generally pretty cool but a at some points a little bit overdone. It seems sometimes like you want to force the difficulty.
Maybe it's just my imaginations. Otherwise a cool diff.

Galaxy

00:13:593 (13593|0,13668|1,13718|3,13793|2,13868|0,13918|1,13993|3,13993|2,14068|0,14118|1,14193|3,14268|2,14318|1) - what the hell is this snap. //WTF, I'm so careless when I shift the timing, should recheck this part
I really suggest you to make it full 1/6. It's simply impossible to snap this complete correctly so i really suggest you this simplification. I suggested this already to some people in the past when i was BN because the snap would be weird af then. With complete 1/6 it follows the sound best on 100% but get more feedback about this part please.

00:15:718 (15718|3,15718|2,15868|0,15868|1) - Both should be 1/3. I mean, even without my offset fix the snap is already different to the insane difficult lol. //Same^^^ all fixed

00:19:193 - Same suggestion like above in Insane. You have here ghost notes which you have to remove. Not gonna post it again, look in Insane please! //All fixed

From 00:31:993 - to 00:43:193 - I don't know who suggested you this or if this was your own idea. But to use on 300!!! bpm 1/8 mixed with happy 1/2 jack chords and all this fun stuff that maybe 10 players can play is like what. I really think you have this part really overdone.
I can't really tell you what to change or what can play good because this is literally beyond my lvl what i ever will reach. This is basically a long [12][34] mash.

All i can suggest you is here. Try it with less notes but a bit more complex pattern.
//Yup I know those 1/8 are pretty dense. Bur first, I did asked many high-rank player when I decide to use this pattern, "Those pattern are playable and FC-able" thats what feedback i get. Second, those 1/8 are not non-stop 1/8, I only use the double(for snare) at the last part for each small burst. I try to avoid unnecessary jacks as many as I can, all the 1/8 are the easiest pattern (1234/4321). Will keep the pattern for now

01:10:393 - That's something like in Insane just a bit earlier. You have sounds like 01:10:493 - and 01:11:293 - unmapped while they belong to the main melody but you added notes at 01:10:793 (70793|3,71593|1) - where is basically no sound. //Fixed

01:18:393 - I think this JS is too much. I know it is the highest difficult but it seems you force here the difficult. What could be better is to follow the hihat with chords. Then the JS makes at least sense and you can justify it!
Here the timings where you should delete one note: 01:18:693 (78693|0) - , 01:19:093 (79093|1) - , 01:19:493 (79493|1) - , 01:19:893 (79893|1) - .
Delete these and you JS makes more sense c:
//I know you want me to follow the kick, but I use double for the same sound that start at 01:16:793 - , and the JS pattern are the easiest pattern I can say

01:23:193 - Now the same suggestion like in the Insane. Again you did ignore pretty important sounds but you mapped something inaudible. Maybe it's just me and i don't hear it.. bit i really suggest you to make it like suggested above.
//Fixed this part like I did in Insane

01:33:643 - do you have here a note missing ?_? //I know what u mean, but no, no gonna follow this sound

01:35:993 - ??? Why this part has a different snap like the Insane. What? xD //ayyy.... the snap in insane are wrong, i think this one is correct

02:19:643 (139643|0,140093|0,140543|3,140693|3,141143|0,141293|0) - Don't you think two notes are more than enough on the marked places? I don't hear any reason why you could add here suddenly hands. //Bass drum

03:08:469 (188469|0,188669|0,188769|3) - It seems you followed the kick sounds in this part of the beatmap why i suggest you to delete these notes. No kick. //Not only for kick, the double you point out are for the snare sound
03:12:669 (192669|3,193069|3,193169|0) - Same like above. //^^

03:15:269 (195269|3,195269|0,195369|2,195369|1,195469|3,195469|0,195569|2,195569|1) - Suggest to make here a simple 3-2-3-2 trill. The kick sounds endet and you shouldn't force any kind of unneeded difficult. The Map is already hard enough and a trill could be a cool end for this part. //they are same sound with 03:14:869 - , only higher pitch

03:23:669 (203669|0,203669|1,203719|2,203719|3,203769|0,203769|1,203819|2,203819|3,203869|1,203869|0) - Remove one note from each chord. Again. Do not force difficulty. //Like my explanation in insane diff

My opinion to the 2nd Kiai part is the same like before to the beginning. I think you have some pattern pretty overdone. 1/8 is fine but you have it simply too much together with all these chords.
I really suggest you to get way more feedback for these pattern and i don't say feedback only from mappers. Also from players on high ranking. You try to rank here a map in 4K which has a really really high SR. It's cool that you try it but these parts needs really really way more polishing!
//I understand what you trying to say, I also not every sure when the map is beyond my play skill, and trust me, this pattern are decided after i ask a lots of high rank player

Alright, mod is done. I hope i could help you and you can do something with it.
I wish you good luck with this beatmap. You'll need it xP

A little extra, maybe you like it

While your BG looks pretty cool, it doesn't fit that much to the song itself. I looked a bit around and saw the background picture of the official website, which looks simply amazing and it would fit really good to the song. Maybe you like it, try it out!
BG
Oh and as extra i also made from this picture a Banner for the BSS site. Should you not accept the BG maybe you want to add at least the Banner, simply as reference for the Album
//This is the album cover,which I dont think it will be a good idea to use as a BG for a particular song. Will keep the current and keep looking see if i can find any better img for it, Thanks for the offer anyway
Banner

Thanks Feerum, really glad that some of the serious problem got point out

Soul Evans wrote:

Hello o/ here's the m4m mod as we agreed on.

Galaxy

[list=]00:32:693 - until 00:43:193 - Ok, so i was thinking to make this section a bit more interesting and not have only that pattern to show off, i was thinking of using jumptrills or dense JS maybe? was well as mixing it up with jacks, the reason for this is to only give more of a challenge because these are the only ''hard'' parts in this map and it can be spammed as well as the patterns can be more fun to give the player a more interesting experience to your map because, well that's the point in making this map right? to give a player the best experience and that they will appreciate your mapping for it. //Excuse me? Show off? The current represent the 1/8 burst and snare perfectly
00:47:193 - In this section, you hear the brrrrrrr sound right? try applying a small stream to map that because it sounds interesting and more fun to play //pointless
and also that other sound than can be an LN maybe?
01:12:793 - Instead of these LNs, you can pretty much make use of the sound by making short streams, uuh the ones that are like Bzzt //k
01:21:193 (81193|3,81243|0,81293|3,81343|0) - These streams are a little bit of a bad opening for the rolls when i played them, consider moving it to index or change it's pattering maybe //done
01:26:793 (86793|0,86893|1) - I think you can add doubles in it because it replicates the same sound as 01:26:993 (86993|2,86993|3,87093|3,87093|2) -
01:27:593 (87593|3) - This maybe can be an LN up to 01:27:593 (87593|3) - //not a long sound, so...
01:32:393 - Personal suggestion, i think you can add notes here because of the Bzzt sound again
01:33:593 - Ok this can be way denser than that, you can add 1/8 maybe //U complain about the second kiai and now u asking me to add 1/8 which are mix with the 1/4 (??????) and this is not for the difficulty
01:34:043 - And i think this section can be jumptrills up to 01:34:393 - ~ //^
01:35:793 - You here that 8-bit sound? you can add notes to the blue line for that and it would be more interesting //no, want to make it compare with 00:44:584 -
01:38:393 - Like i said before, you can add more notes to this because of the brrrrr sound and it would be funner
01:44:993 - Since you regularly make use of LNs, you might as well use it here until 01:45:593 - //the LN start here 01:44:834 -
01:45:593 - This heavy drum sound can be triples for sure, don't make the first sound a triple and leave the rest as doubles, apply triples to the loud sound please //fixed
01:52:793 - I think this section can be either A) more dense in terms of Jumpstream or B) changed to jumptrills
01:57:143 (117143|2,117293|1,117293|3,117293|0,117443|2,117443|3,117593|0,117593|1) - That sound can have more variety in pattern choice than that
01:58:043 (118043|2,118343|3,118643|0) - These might be better to be put off in the same column
02:03:593 - Add mini lns to that sound in the background //the long sound only last 1/4 length, no
02:24:064 - Don't just leave it like that sure you can add break but alteast don't make it completely empty, the map isn't even that hard in terms of stamina //the BPM change from 200 -> each 1/2, will be pain to play if add note
02:56:869 - Add dense patterns to the song
02:57:269 - You may add some sort of handstreams as a better way to show the section to get the player ready for the next hard part. //for what sound, or just for difficultly
03:06:269 - Why do you completely ignore the sounds that may be better suiting for the maps difficulty? //you mean LN or what
03:09:269 - Same here, good place for streams //there is no 1.4 stream sound, only LN and 1/2 kick
03:12:669 - Add hard parts to these types of special sounds, the song allows or it don't worry lol
03:15:669 - same thing[/list]

That's it from me now good luck