Increase offset by 6.
Make sure to add hitsounds because they are a requirement for getting ranked!
00:01:384 (3) - The timing of this note is 1/8. I know 1/8 repeats can be hard to hit, so it's up to you if you change it. But I would recommend splitting this slider into 2 so you can click the drum beat on the white tick.
00:04:005 (5) - Stream spacing here is irregular. I recommend using Distance Snap or Convert Slider To Stream to make consistently spaced streams.
00:04:605 (12) - For simple curve sliders like this one, you should use just one anchor point so that it makes a perfect arc instead of messing around with several points. (If you use more than one point, the slider converts to Bezier algorithm which is a bit harder to control.)
00:07:348 (1) - This slider goes back on itself in the middle which is technically unrankable. Also the angles and spacing of the red points could be more consistent/neater.
00:08:720 (9) - The wave can be neater. You can check
this forum post for how to make a nice looking wave slider.
00:10:433 (1) - Since it's staccato after the white tick, it's kind of awkward to keep holding the slider down. I would reduce the slider to 1 beat and then put a hit circle on the red tick after.
00:10:948 (4, 5) - There's a drum beat in between these two notes that maybe you want to map.
00:15:576 (9) - Loop sliders look nicer and are more readable if you have a gap in the middle.
00:16:779 (4, 5, 6) - I had an unusual amount of trouble playing these. But it could be must me being bad.
00:18:319 (8) - Consider emphasizing this finish with a spacing increase.
00:18:491 (9, 1) - Did you mean this to blanket? It doesn't imo. You can turn off grid snap if you want to make a really precise blanket.
00:19:691 (4) - It's awkward to have a finish be placed on a sliderend like this. Maybe you could shorten the slider and add another hitcircle here, possibly with a jump.
00:32:633 (1) - You should map the kick on the red tick before this circle.
00:35:291 (3, 4) - There is a note between these two circles.
00:37:305 (6, 7) - ^
00:38:376 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - This stream has another note after it, so it might be better if you added another hitcircle and moved the stream so it connects with 00:38:891 (6).
00:42:919 (17, 18) - The drum beat ends on 00:42:919 (17) and the sound on 00:43:005 (18) is relatively weak by comparison. If you want to map it, maybe you could replace 00:42:919 (17) with a 1/4 slider.
00:46:433 (4) - Start it 1/4 beat earlier.
00:48:833 (1) - There's a beat in between these two.
00:55:348 (1) - ^
00:59:462 (9) - I'm not sure what justifies the sudden SV change here.
01:38:976 (6) - You should remove this note, because it doesn't match anything in the music.
01:39:062 (7) - A buzz/repeat slider might fit better here than a continued stream.
01:45:233 (3, 4) - Triplet here.
01:47:291 (4) - This is not 1/2 beat. Actually, it's 2 1/3 beats.
01:48:833 (9) - Cool!
Maybe space the tail out or curve it a little bit so it's not as cramped?
01:55:005 (1) - This pattern is REALLY difficult to play correctly. If you really want to keep it, you should space the two "columns" closer together so the player can follow it by just keeping their cursor in the middle.
02:12:491 (2) - If you think it's appropriate, you can restart the kiai here and end it at 02:32:719.
02:25:348 (7, 8) - 02:25:348 (7) should be on the blue tick right before, and 02:25:433 (8) should be removed, as it doesn't match a beat in the music.
02:28:262 (3, 4) - There's a note between these.
02:28:605 (6) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 beat.
I really liked the way you mapped the kiai! Good job!
03:01:862 (1) - I don't think the 1/4 slider jumps make sense for this calm section of the song.
03:05:633 (1) - In the music, the stream ended here.
03:28:948 (1) - You should put a hitcircle here and start the spinner 1/4 beat after that so you can have a hitsound where the spinner starts.
03:39:662 (6, 7, 8) - This is actually 1/3, again, instead of 1/4.
03:39:919 (8) - I think the scratches and vocal sounds deserve their own sliders/circles rather than making it one big held note.
05:09:062 (1) - NC to signify timing change.
05:09:060 - I don't have the patience to time this accurately right now but the ending is off. You can either not map the ending (or map it with a spinner) or find someone to do the timing for you.