General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ )
6. Video : ( ✓ )

Beginner

1. 00:11:284 (1,3) - These could be shaped like this to look nicer:
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2. 00:29:284 (1,1) - These two also can be shaped nicer:
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3. 00:41:284 (5) - This can be shaped as a S shape; although remember to keep to the DS.
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4. 01:17:284 (1) - Hm? This is weirdly shaped. Maybe you could have this? :
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5. 01:21:784 (2,3) - The flow with these two could be better. Although you might need to adjust a little to compensate for DS.
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6. 01:26:284 (1) - Could be shaped as such:
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7. 01:34:534 (5) - This elbow isn't obvious enough to the eye.

Advanced

1. 00:14:284 (1) - You'd have to adjust this a bit to partially blanket the other note. Like so:
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2. 00:16:346 (4,5) - The spacing with these two do not corroborate with 00:13:909 (6,7) and 00:11:846 (2,3), which are both leading notes up to a slider.
3. 00:18:034 (2,3,4) - The general flow of this is awkward. Maybe have the hump of the slider face the other way.
4. 00:21:409 (4,5,6) - The cursor curves straight up, but then has to stop and awkwardly move to the right. This might not a be a huge problem for such a SV, but with higher difficulties the awkwardness will come up. I strongly suggest fixing this at it's foundation before moving up on the difficulty ladder Take note that if there are other such cases, I will indicate a & and spell out how the cursor would move.
5. 00:23:284 (1,2) - & The cursor expects to go downwards but is forced to move upwards.
6. 00:24:784 (5,6) - &The cursor expects to move downwards at an angle but is forced to go straight up to catch the next note.
7. 00:25:909 (7,8) - These two notes don't actually follow up to the slider nicely. Here's how I suggest it could be:
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8. 00:28:159 (5,6,7) - The notes don't complement the slider well. Have the slider hump face the other way and it should look better.
9. 00:40:534 (4,5,6) - Number 5 is a bit out of place.
10. 00:41:284 (1) - This slider shape should copy the one here 00:42:784 (4)
11. 00:50:284 (1) - Nice wobble
12. 01:52:159 (5,6,7) - These two also don't complement the slider well. Try having them face the general direction of the slider.
    

Challenging

1. 01:26:284 (1,3,5,6) - The sliders aren't exactly stacked below these notes.
2. The long whistle at the end actually ends at 02:26:659 (2), so the slider should be a little longer. I made a little loop with a nice water droplet hole, so maybe you could do this?
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Overall

1. I liked how the map had it's own kind of essence to complement the song. I especially liked playing the challenging difficulty; it was fun to single tap to.
2. If this is for rank, then Good Luck with Rank! Hoped my mod helped!

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  General

1. Before the break time, you didn't use any hitsound, which is not really appropriate, because players can't get any feedback from a successful hit. My opinion is, you add a whistle for every two 1/1 timeline. e.g.:00:12:034 (3) - 00:13:534 (8) - 00:15:034 (3) - ......until 00:58:534 (6) -
   
2. By the way, am I the only one who think the reversearrow is too dark to see? well, at first I didn't realize there is an reverse arrow
   
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3. 00:38:284 (1) - unify the ds
   
   Advanced
   
4. 01:57:221 (3) - unify the ds
5. 02:12:596 (4) - The same as above
6. 02:20:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - How about making them a symmetry? Like what you did in the Beginner