1. Yuki (3.48 stars, 849 notes)

Fort wrote:

hi, im here because this:
nice bg.
this is dubstep song
your ava cute
1st trit replies

there is no rock in this song, i think should remove rock as tags (but idk if this rock, kinda like "soft rock") i checked that one on somewhere. i'll think about this

and at overall this map have good structure but on some new combo its like decent i guess (but i dont know your style xD)
00:41:518 (6) - new combo disini lebih baik dari pada di 00:42:222 (1) - (sebelumnya kamu pakai combo pattern vocal, jadi gk ada salahnya menggunakan combo pattern vokal lagi) ok
00:42:456 (2) - ini bisa di NC y sdh
00:49:253 (3,5) - overlap ini ckckck fix
01:03:315 (1) - jangan spam NC k
01:35:190 (1) - oh come on D:
01:53:472 - wai skip dis? (ok i know what you mean) huh?
02:00:972 (6) - NC dis done
02:29:565 (1) - oke sip (i mean remove NC) done
ah screw NC (aduh tapi ini banyaknya problem NC toh, ah nanti aja lah ane males ngemod nya wkwkwkwk) ya elah elu

03:03:784 (3) - ini blanket saja nope
03:04:722 (1) - ini juga overlap nope
00:56:284 (5,6) - sebenarnya ini distancenya kurang konsisten (sama flow nya juga lumayan tajem, tapi entahlah gimana fix nya ini) nti w pkirkan itu
01:01:440 (3,6) - stack dis k
01:10:347 (1) - 384,152 pls (tapi......... ah squares, oke nvm) squares for me
01:53:706 (1) - sebenranya ini single NC memalukan sekali untuk diliat (ini kesan spam combo nya jelas bingits) y sudah
02:00:034 (4,7) - stack bro g perlu
02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strim ini keliatannya kagok kalau dibikin lurus kaya gini, mungkin bisa di modif jadi lengkungan gitu lintasan stream nya udah ok tu mnurut w
02:38:002 (7,2) - ayolah (ini style gue jadi jangan dipake :v) ckup untk w. dan ngapain w perlu ikuti style elu?
02:44:097 (1,2,3,4) - pattern jajar genjang ini flownya kurang berkesan gitu (Ctrl+> 2 kali lalu pindahin aja ke x384y240 biar ada sedikit flow ditambah jumpnya enak toh) boleh juga
02:53:354 (9) - hitsounding disini aneh, kok bisa" nya ada suara finish disini simbal cuy
03:23:237 - ini delay break time nya kagok bgt, udah lah hapus aja ini tserh
03:41:518 (7) - overmapped terlalu keras ini (2 cara buat perbaiki ini 1. Kecilin volume 2. bikin pattern baru yang lebih fokus ke suara piano. ane prefer no. 2 sih) lebih baik w ambil no. 1 aj deh
ane rasa kiai ending nya dah bagus yep
04:27:222 (1) - slidernya perbaiki lagi, bikin eceng (slider ♥) kayanya bagus perlu tungu opini mreka
04:37:065 (1) - oke good (if you know what i mean) NC, ya lah
04:40:347 (1,2,3) - spacing incosistancy (sebaiknya nya spacing disini lebih konsisten lagi) nope
04:46:909 (1,2) - overlap nya berjin ini nope, masih ok
04:48:784 (4,2) - imperfect stacking fix

untuk masalah kombo konsultasikan ke dokter terdekat ya, jangan lupa baca aturan pakai agar enggak spam combo
oke sip
good luck dad
i love you anjrit

Kibbleru wrote:

koi yuki <3
good song

Euny wrote:

as your request!♥ came from my queue thanks for nice mod!!

• General

1. ballad , pop , rock these are need to tag? i dont think so... there is already in osu! genre. i think your map dont need to this. removed
2. add tag ' サイレント サイレン ' seems artist japanese pronouncing. also, i found that tag in latest ranked map (by gaia's) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/537887 ok
3. start bit early to me. seems you need to add audio lead in +1000ms ok
4. Found unused .wav files: remove it
   - drum-sliderslide.wav done

• Yuki

1. 00:04:539 (1) - add whistle for here. cause you already did that 00:01:539 (4) - and 00:02:630 (2) - this tail for piano sound. done
2. 00:07:266 (2) - ^ same as above. done
3. 00:17:613 - duplicate timing point removed
4. 00:17:847 (3) - i think its need to nc for here. cause downbeat start. ok
5. and.. 00:17:847 - remove this timing point too. its duplicate removed
6. 00:40:347 (3) - sometimes, straight flow looks bit old and feels boring. how about move it on 286l223 288|224 will do since i use DS
7. 00:45:034 (7) - rotate this slider with 26 degrees(with selection centre) probably it will be looks better. oooohhh
   
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8. 00:49:253 (3,4,5) - lets makes looks better for them. try it. nice
   
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9. 03:14:097 (6) - nc for here. ok
10. 03:15:503 (1) - remove nc for here. ok
11. 03:15:972 (3) - and this is nc part. done

that's it
hope this is helpful...

1. 00:00:994 (2) - imo would be cool to stack this on 00:00:721 (1) - since they have the same pitch and then it would give kind of a buildup effect with the spacing as well unless u really want to keep the pentagon or something..
2. 00:05:357 (4) - imo the heart could be better :X I tried to make a better one, just copy the code in (anywhere, doesn't have to be in order)
   

   220,252,5357,2,0,B|196:204|196:168|232:140|268:168|268:168|320:144|340:176|336:220|300:268,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:534 - 00:22:768 - I don't think its very practical to skip these beats since you mapped the drums previously
4. 00:29:097 - I don't understand why you would want the slider slide sound lol..
   03:27:222 - ^whats with the sliderslide sounds man they don't sound good with the song =w=
5. 00:36:362 (3,1) - this needs more spacing since (1) is a fairly strong sound
6. 00:37:534 (5) - I would try to map those two drums since they are fairly strong sounds
   
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8. 00:52:886 - extended slider doesn't fit here imo, the vocal isn't really strong enough to warrant an extended slider
   01:00:034 (8) - ^same here, you're also skipping a drum beat too with this :C
   01:00:503 (9) - ^
   01:56:753 (8) - ^ill stop pointing these out. but I personally recommend against it..
9. 01:12:222 (1,2,3) - just my taste, something like this might look better?
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10. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern doesn't really fit the music. sure it works if you really want to keep it but I don't hear the music as a consistent group of 4 beats. that type of thing would fit here 01:23:472 - where its 4 beats of constant vocals
11. 01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - ehh this pattern just doesn't look that great to me lol. could try something like this if u want (note I only moved 3 and 4)
    
    SPOILER

    
    01:30:972 (1,2,3,4) - ^similar
12. 01:36:128 (6,1) - I would give this a bit of a jump since 1 is on a strong beat
    02:08:003 (6,1) - ^
    02:40:347 (1) - ^
    02:47:612 (1) - etc,, u get the idea
13. 01:36:597 - well I think this ending part of the kiai could be more jumpy in general, you start using normal spacing which doesn't really fit with the pace you've built up at the very least I would at least put jumps on the downbeats 01:38:472 (1) - since they are strong sounds
14. 01:45:972 (1) - try making this smoother
    
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15. 01:53:472 - I wouldn't skip this downbeat :/

1. 00:00:721 (2) - remove note and change the pattern, i think it sounds better
2. 00:04:539 - Is it just me, or it supposed to be heart shape slider?
3. 00:15:943 - Add a spinner here to 00:17:348 ?
4. 00:23:472 (3,4,5,6) - Judging the star rating, it's too much jumps
5. 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:02:847 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
7. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders
8. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Give me free pp /slapped

My skills are terrible haha

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m

I think ur offset is late by like 15-20ms i better wait for someone about this

diff

1. 00:00:994 (2) - imo would be cool to stack this on 00:00:721 (1) - since they have the same pitch and then it would give kind of a buildup effect with the spacing as well unless u really want to keep the pentagon or something.. aye, ok
2. 00:05:357 (4) - imo the heart could be better :X I tried to make a better one, just copy the code in (anywhere, doesn't have to be in order) thx for the fix
   

   220,252,5357,2,0,B|196:204|196:168|232:140|268:168|268:168|320:144|340:176|336:220|300:268,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:534 - 00:22:768 - I don't think its very practical to skip these beats since you mapped the drums previously well, i'm fine with that
4. 00:29:097 - I don't understand why you would want the slider slide sound lol.. ohhh shit
   03:27:222 - ^whats with the sliderslide sounds man they don't sound good with the song =w= that should do
5. 00:36:362 (3,1) - this needs more spacing since (1) is a fairly strong sound fix
6. 00:37:534 (5) - I would try to map those two drums since they are fairly strong sounds done
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7. oilerbox]
8. 00:52:886 - extended slider doesn't fit here imo, the vocal isn't really strong enough to warrant an extended slider ok
   01:00:034 (8) - ^same here, you're also skipping a drum beat too with this :C fix
   01:00:503 (9) - ^ ^
   01:56:753 (8) - ^ill stop pointing these out. but I personally recommend against it.. ^
9. 01:12:222 (1,2,3) - just my taste, something like this might look better? ok
   
   
10. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern doesn't really fit the music. sure it works if you really want to keep it but I don't hear the music as a consistent group of 4 beats. that type of thing would fit here 01:23:472 - where its 4 beats of constant vocals instrument + vocal
11. 01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - ehh this pattern just doesn't look that great to me lol. could try something like this if u want (note I only moved 3 and 4) ok
    
    
    01:30:972 (1,2,3,4) - ^similar no
12. 01:36:128 (6,1) - I would give this a bit of a jump since 1 is on a strong beat nahh
    02:08:003 (6,1) - ^ ^
    02:40:347 (1) - ^ ^
    02:47:612 (1) - etc,, u get the idea ^
13. 01:36:597 - well I think this ending part of the kiai could be more jumpy in general, you start using normal spacing which doesn't really fit with the pace you've built up at the very least I would at least put jumps on the downbeats 01:38:472 (1) - since they are strong sounds fine...
14. 01:45:972 (1) - try making this smoother done
    
    
15. 01:53:472 - I wouldn't skip this downbeat :/ done

you definitely want to get the timing checked out lol i just asked someone for that LOL

KuranteMelodii wrote:

Yuki:

1. 00:00:721 (2) - remove note and change the pattern, i think it sounds better i changed that already from previous mod
2. 00:04:539 - Is it just me, or it supposed to be heart shape slider? heart
3. 00:15:943 - Add a spinner here to 00:17:348 ? i don't feel like spinner will be fitable for this
4. 00:23:472 (3,4,5,6) - Judging the star rating, it's too much jumps i don't mind about that hehehe
5. 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
6. 01:02:847 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^ ^
7. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
8. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

Since i can't find anything, so i give you my DT testplay (even you don't asked for it) XD

Give me free pp /slapped

My skills are terrible haha

Euny wrote:

i really love this songs sweet lyrics. take my stars haku ^^

-Hakurei- wrote:

1. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
2. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

KuranteMelodii wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

1. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
2. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

I actually mean to use 1/4 return slider to replace streams, so it's easier to play

Momochikun wrote:

A small timing fix and fixed NC via irc
mapper should have the log or something :#

00:30 Momochikun: 00:17:634 -
00:30 -Hakurei-: yep
00:30 Momochikun: 128 bpm hrusnya kyk timing selanjutnya. lbih pas
00:32 -Hakurei-: fix
00:32 Momochikun: gl ~
00:32 -Hakurei-: wait
00:33 -Hakurei-: 00:17:836 - tu gimana?
00:33 Momochikun: udh pas kok itu
00:34 -Hakurei-: [http://puu.sh/insye/bd1c6d0c0b.jpg approach ny]
00:37 Momochikun: apanya yg salah ?
00:37 -Hakurei-: nahh, g ad
00:37 -Hakurei-: cuma w takut saja tentang tu
00:37 -Hakurei-: nti w cari tau dri mod lain
00:37 Momochikun: mending hapus nc nya 00:17:836 (1) -  aja sih menurutku biar kliatan rapi
00:38 -Hakurei-: done
00:40 Momochikun: k gl
00:40 -Hakurei-: sip trims. btw, post ke thread
00:42 Momochikun: hmm.. ok
00:43 Momochikun: posted