1. Yuki (3.48 stars, 849 notes)

Fort wrote:

hi, im here because this:
nice bg.
this is dubstep song
your ava cute
1st trit replies

there is no rock in this song, i think should remove rock as tags (but idk if this rock, kinda like "soft rock") i checked that one on somewhere. i'll think about this

and at overall this map have good structure but on some new combo its like decent i guess (but i dont know your style xD)
00:41:518 (6) - new combo disini lebih baik dari pada di 00:42:222 (1) - (sebelumnya kamu pakai combo pattern vocal, jadi gk ada salahnya menggunakan combo pattern vokal lagi) ok
00:42:456 (2) - ini bisa di NC y sdh
00:49:253 (3,5) - overlap ini ckckck fix
01:03:315 (1) - jangan spam NC k
01:35:190 (1) - oh come on D:
01:53:472 - wai skip dis? (ok i know what you mean) huh?
02:00:972 (6) - NC dis done
02:29:565 (1) - oke sip (i mean remove NC) done
ah screw NC (aduh tapi ini banyaknya problem NC toh, ah nanti aja lah ane males ngemod nya wkwkwkwk) ya elah elu

03:03:784 (3) - ini blanket saja nope
03:04:722 (1) - ini juga overlap nope
00:56:284 (5,6) - sebenarnya ini distancenya kurang konsisten (sama flow nya juga lumayan tajem, tapi entahlah gimana fix nya ini) nti w pkirkan itu
01:01:440 (3,6) - stack dis k
01:10:347 (1) - 384,152 pls (tapi......... ah squares, oke nvm) squares for me
01:53:706 (1) - sebenranya ini single NC memalukan sekali untuk diliat (ini kesan spam combo nya jelas bingits) y sudah
02:00:034 (4,7) - stack bro g perlu
02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strim ini keliatannya kagok kalau dibikin lurus kaya gini, mungkin bisa di modif jadi lengkungan gitu lintasan stream nya udah ok tu mnurut w
02:38:002 (7,2) - ayolah (ini style gue jadi jangan dipake :v) ckup untk w. dan ngapain w perlu ikuti style elu?
02:44:097 (1,2,3,4) - pattern jajar genjang ini flownya kurang berkesan gitu (Ctrl+> 2 kali lalu pindahin aja ke x384y240 biar ada sedikit flow ditambah jumpnya enak toh) boleh juga
02:53:354 (9) - hitsounding disini aneh, kok bisa" nya ada suara finish disini simbal cuy
03:23:237 - ini delay break time nya kagok bgt, udah lah hapus aja ini tserh
03:41:518 (7) - overmapped terlalu keras ini (2 cara buat perbaiki ini 1. Kecilin volume 2. bikin pattern baru yang lebih fokus ke suara piano. ane prefer no. 2 sih) lebih baik w ambil no. 1 aj deh
ane rasa kiai ending nya dah bagus yep
04:27:222 (1) - slidernya perbaiki lagi, bikin eceng (slider ♥) kayanya bagus perlu tungu opini mreka
04:37:065 (1) - oke good (if you know what i mean) NC, ya lah
04:40:347 (1,2,3) - spacing incosistancy (sebaiknya nya spacing disini lebih konsisten lagi) nope
04:46:909 (1,2) - overlap nya berjin ini nope, masih ok
04:48:784 (4,2) - imperfect stacking fix

untuk masalah kombo konsultasikan ke dokter terdekat ya, jangan lupa baca aturan pakai agar enggak spam combo
oke sip
good luck dad
i love you anjrit

Kibbleru wrote:

koi yuki <3
good song

Euny wrote:

as your request!♥ came from my queue thanks for nice mod!!

• General

1. ballad , pop , rock these are need to tag? i dont think so... there is already in osu! genre. i think your map dont need to this. removed
2. add tag ' サイレント サイレン ' seems artist japanese pronouncing. also, i found that tag in latest ranked map (by gaia's) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/537887 ok
3. start bit early to me. seems you need to add audio lead in +1000ms ok
4. Found unused .wav files: remove it
   - drum-sliderslide.wav done

• Yuki

1. 00:04:539 (1) - add whistle for here. cause you already did that 00:01:539 (4) - and 00:02:630 (2) - this tail for piano sound. done
2. 00:07:266 (2) - ^ same as above. done
3. 00:17:613 - duplicate timing point removed
4. 00:17:847 (3) - i think its need to nc for here. cause downbeat start. ok
5. and.. 00:17:847 - remove this timing point too. its duplicate removed
6. 00:40:347 (3) - sometimes, straight flow looks bit old and feels boring. how about move it on 286l223 288|224 will do since i use DS
7. 00:45:034 (7) - rotate this slider with 26 degrees(with selection centre) probably it will be looks better. oooohhh
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:49:253 (3,4,5) - lets makes looks better for them. try it. nice
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:14:097 (6) - nc for here. ok
10. 03:15:503 (1) - remove nc for here. ok
11. 03:15:972 (3) - and this is nc part. done

that's it
hope this is helpful...

1. 00:00:994 (2) - imo would be cool to stack this on 00:00:721 (1) - since they have the same pitch and then it would give kind of a buildup effect with the spacing as well unless u really want to keep the pentagon or something..
2. 00:05:357 (4) - imo the heart could be better :X I tried to make a better one, just copy the code in (anywhere, doesn't have to be in order)
   

   220,252,5357,2,0,B|196:204|196:168|232:140|268:168|268:168|320:144|340:176|336:220|300:268,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:534 - 00:22:768 - I don't think its very practical to skip these beats since you mapped the drums previously
4. 00:29:097 - I don't understand why you would want the slider slide sound lol..
   03:27:222 - ^whats with the sliderslide sounds man they don't sound good with the song =w=
5. 00:36:362 (3,1) - this needs more spacing since (1) is a fairly strong sound
6. 00:37:534 (5) - I would try to map those two drums since they are fairly strong sounds
   
   SPOILER

   [/sp
7. oilerbox]
8. 00:52:886 - extended slider doesn't fit here imo, the vocal isn't really strong enough to warrant an extended slider
   01:00:034 (8) - ^same here, you're also skipping a drum beat too with this :C
   01:00:503 (9) - ^
   01:56:753 (8) - ^ill stop pointing these out. but I personally recommend against it..
9. 01:12:222 (1,2,3) - just my taste, something like this might look better?
   [spoilerbox]
10. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern doesn't really fit the music. sure it works if you really want to keep it but I don't hear the music as a consistent group of 4 beats. that type of thing would fit here 01:23:472 - where its 4 beats of constant vocals
11. 01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - ehh this pattern just doesn't look that great to me lol. could try something like this if u want (note I only moved 3 and 4)
    
    SPOILER

    
    01:30:972 (1,2,3,4) - ^similar
12. 01:36:128 (6,1) - I would give this a bit of a jump since 1 is on a strong beat
    02:08:003 (6,1) - ^
    02:40:347 (1) - ^
    02:47:612 (1) - etc,, u get the idea
13. 01:36:597 - well I think this ending part of the kiai could be more jumpy in general, you start using normal spacing which doesn't really fit with the pace you've built up at the very least I would at least put jumps on the downbeats 01:38:472 (1) - since they are strong sounds
14. 01:45:972 (1) - try making this smoother
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:53:472 - I wouldn't skip this downbeat :/

1. 00:00:721 (2) - remove note and change the pattern, i think it sounds better
2. 00:04:539 - Is it just me, or it supposed to be heart shape slider?
3. 00:15:943 - Add a spinner here to 00:17:348 ?
4. 00:23:472 (3,4,5,6) - Judging the star rating, it's too much jumps
5. 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:02:847 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
7. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders
8. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Give me free pp /slapped

My skills are terrible haha

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m

I think ur offset is late by like 15-20ms i better wait for someone about this

diff

1. 00:00:994 (2) - imo would be cool to stack this on 00:00:721 (1) - since they have the same pitch and then it would give kind of a buildup effect with the spacing as well unless u really want to keep the pentagon or something.. aye, ok
2. 00:05:357 (4) - imo the heart could be better :X I tried to make a better one, just copy the code in (anywhere, doesn't have to be in order) thx for the fix
   

   220,252,5357,2,0,B|196:204|196:168|232:140|268:168|268:168|320:144|340:176|336:220|300:268,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:534 - 00:22:768 - I don't think its very practical to skip these beats since you mapped the drums previously well, i'm fine with that
4. 00:29:097 - I don't understand why you would want the slider slide sound lol.. ohhh shit
   03:27:222 - ^whats with the sliderslide sounds man they don't sound good with the song =w= that should do
5. 00:36:362 (3,1) - this needs more spacing since (1) is a fairly strong sound fix
6. 00:37:534 (5) - I would try to map those two drums since they are fairly strong sounds done
   [spoilerbox][/sp
7. oilerbox]
8. 00:52:886 - extended slider doesn't fit here imo, the vocal isn't really strong enough to warrant an extended slider ok
   01:00:034 (8) - ^same here, you're also skipping a drum beat too with this :C fix
   01:00:503 (9) - ^ ^
   01:56:753 (8) - ^ill stop pointing these out. but I personally recommend against it.. ^
9. 01:12:222 (1,2,3) - just my taste, something like this might look better? ok
   
   
10. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern doesn't really fit the music. sure it works if you really want to keep it but I don't hear the music as a consistent group of 4 beats. that type of thing would fit here 01:23:472 - where its 4 beats of constant vocals instrument + vocal
11. 01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - ehh this pattern just doesn't look that great to me lol. could try something like this if u want (note I only moved 3 and 4) ok
    
    
    01:30:972 (1,2,3,4) - ^similar no
12. 01:36:128 (6,1) - I would give this a bit of a jump since 1 is on a strong beat nahh
    02:08:003 (6,1) - ^ ^
    02:40:347 (1) - ^ ^
    02:47:612 (1) - etc,, u get the idea ^
13. 01:36:597 - well I think this ending part of the kiai could be more jumpy in general, you start using normal spacing which doesn't really fit with the pace you've built up at the very least I would at least put jumps on the downbeats 01:38:472 (1) - since they are strong sounds fine...
14. 01:45:972 (1) - try making this smoother done
    
    
15. 01:53:472 - I wouldn't skip this downbeat :/ done

you definitely want to get the timing checked out lol i just asked someone for that LOL

KuranteMelodii wrote:

Yuki:

1. 00:00:721 (2) - remove note and change the pattern, i think it sounds better i changed that already from previous mod
2. 00:04:539 - Is it just me, or it supposed to be heart shape slider? heart
3. 00:15:943 - Add a spinner here to 00:17:348 ? i don't feel like spinner will be fitable for this
4. 00:23:472 (3,4,5,6) - Judging the star rating, it's too much jumps i don't mind about that hehehe
5. 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
6. 01:02:847 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^ ^
7. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
8. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

Since i can't find anything, so i give you my DT testplay (even you don't asked for it) XD

Give me free pp /slapped

My skills are terrible haha

Euny wrote:

i really love this songs sweet lyrics. take my stars haku ^^

-Hakurei- wrote:

1. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
2. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

KuranteMelodii wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

1. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
2. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

I actually mean to use 1/4 return slider to replace streams, so it's easier to play

Momochikun wrote:

A small timing fix and fixed NC via irc
mapper should have the log or something :#

00:30 Momochikun: 00:17:634 -
00:30 -Hakurei-: yep
00:30 Momochikun: 128 bpm hrusnya kyk timing selanjutnya. lbih pas
00:32 -Hakurei-: fix
00:32 Momochikun: gl ~
00:32 -Hakurei-: wait
00:33 -Hakurei-: 00:17:836 - tu gimana?
00:33 Momochikun: udh pas kok itu
00:34 -Hakurei-: [http://puu.sh/insye/bd1c6d0c0b.jpg approach ny]
00:37 Momochikun: apanya yg salah ?
00:37 -Hakurei-: nahh, g ad
00:37 -Hakurei-: cuma w takut saja tentang tu
00:37 -Hakurei-: nti w cari tau dri mod lain
00:37 Momochikun: mending hapus nc nya 00:17:836 (1) -  aja sih menurutku biar kliatan rapi
00:38 -Hakurei-: done
00:40 Momochikun: k gl
00:40 -Hakurei-: sip trims. btw, post ke thread
00:42 Momochikun: hmm.. ok
00:43 Momochikun: posted

1. 00:04:812 (2) - add whistle?
2. 00:08:903 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:11:357 (2) - ^ from slider head?
4. 00:17:836 (3) - ^ from slider head?
5. 00:19:711 (1) - ^ from slider head?
6. 00:21:586 (1) - ^
7. 00:23:461 (1) - ^ from slider head?
8. 00:25:336 (1) - ^ from slider head?
9. 00:27:211 (1) - ^ from slider head?
10. 00:30:492 (3) - ^ from slider tail?
11. 00:45:023 (7) - ^ from slider tail?
12. 01:00:961 (1) - ^
13. 01:03:539 (4) - ^ from slider tail
14. 01:04:476 (6) - ^
15. 01:05:414 (4) - ^ from slider tail
16. 01:08:461 (1) - ^ from slider head
17. 01:12:211 (1) - ^ from slider head
18. 01:45:961 (1,2) - ^ from slider head
19. 02:04:711 (1) - ^
20. 02:49:242 (5,6,1) - ^ from slider head

Homura- wrote:

hi -Hakurei- M4M

[Yuki]

1. 00:04:812 (2) - add whistle? ok
2. 00:08:903 (2,3) - ^ ^
3. 00:11:357 (2) - ^ from slider head? ^
4. 00:17:836 (3) - ^ from slider head? ^
5. 00:19:711 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
6. 00:21:586 (1) - ^ ^
7. 00:23:461 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
8. 00:25:336 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
9. 00:27:211 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
10. 00:30:492 (3) - ^ from slider tail? ^
11. 00:45:023 (7) - ^ from slider tail? ^
12. 01:00:961 (1) - ^ ^
13. 01:03:539 (4) - ^ from slider tail ^
14. 01:04:476 (6) - ^ ^
15. 01:05:414 (4) - ^ from slider tail ^
16. 01:08:461 (1) - ^ from slider head ^
17. 01:12:211 (1) - ^ from slider head ^
18. 01:45:961 (1,2) - ^ from slider head ^
19. 02:04:711 (1) - ^ ^
20. 02:49:242 (5,6,1) - ^ from slider head ^

good luck~

Mentional wrote:

hi, for m4m

• 
  

  Yuki

1. 00:05:357 (4) - I would try and improve the look of this slider a bit more, since it doesn't look that good at the moment. that's fine for me
2. 00:24:398 (3,4,5,6) - This seems a bit weird to me, because of the sudden huge gap between 00:24:632 (4) - and 00:24:867 (5) - i'll wait for other opinion from mods
3. 00:51:351 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would move this pattern so 00:51:820 (2) - would look nicer with 00:49:711 (5) - reverse point ^
4. 01:00:492 (9) - NC? and remove NC from 01:00:961 (1) - no. 01:00:961 (1) - tells me that it's a perfect one for NC
5. 01:15:961 (1,2,3,4) - I would try to make this a bit nicer looking, like this it looks kind of boring. uhmm, kinda OK for me
6. 01:15:961 (1,2) - How about changing these like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3254958 ^
7. 01:16:898 (3,4,5) - And then these like this to fit the above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3254961 ^
8. 01:25:336 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think a square pattern fits here at all for me, it is
9. 02:02:836 (4,5) - How about changing the second slider to single notes and make them look like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3254976 no
10. 02:03:773 (6,7) - And then these two to something like this to fit the above: 02:03:773 (6,7) - no
11. 02:33:773 (4) - On this I would just simply remove the slider curve, to me it looks better that way. ok
12. 03:15:492 (6) - NC, and remove NC from 03:15:961 (1) - sound change and stuff like that
13. 03:17:367 (4) - NC, and remove NC from 03:17:836 (1) - ^
14. 03:43:617 (6) - NC, and remove NC from 03:44:086 (1) - need more opinion about this
15. 04:12:211 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern here looks really boring to play, I would try and change it to something more interesting. not really
16. 04:27:211 (1) - I think this slider can be improved to make it look nicer. not that sure about it. better wait for someone about this
17. 05:00:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Okay, now you just got lazy.. I would definitely change this pattern to something more interesting hehehehe

That's all, hope you found it helpful.

Snepif wrote:

Okay here it is!

00:06:721 (1) - This slider shouldn't start on the red tick because that's the opposite of what the music suggests. Try this http://puu.sh/ioD5h/e186e02cfc.jpg done
00:17:634 (1,2) - A triplet with BPM changes would cause some confusion while playing don't you think? Try to change these 2 notes into a slider like this, it also fits the music a lot better: http://puu.sh/ioDe7/216d38b602.jpg (they can be closer than that obviously) aye, ok
00:20:648 (3) - (nazi) move to x268 y116 so it's equally distant to 1 and 2, for the looks of it only. ok
00:24:632 (4,5) - CTRL+G plays better in my opinion no
00:30:492 (3) - You should really remove the repeat and add a note at the big white tick, so the player actually clicks there where the beat lands. done
00:31:429 (1) - I don't like this shape since it's so excessively curved, try to make it smoother like this: http://puu.sh/ioDwi/dab9ab02d2.jpg and then copypaste for the other slider. I also moved (3) 2 grids down for a better curve, since it looks like a sharp pattern, I thought it would be better if it actually felt like a curve. fix
00:34:242 (7,8) - Fails to fit the music because the slider starts on a red tick without any particular reason, and also you have the main downbeat of the music on a slider end (remember the player doesn't click the slider's end so it isn't appropiate to put a slider's end in the main downbeat). Try to do this instead: http://puu.sh/ioDGv/9749f21a73.jpg ok
00:45:023 (7) - Same as last suggestion. From a mapper's perspective this doesn't change much but from a player's perspective, putting an actual note at the big white tick would fit the song a lot better. no
00:49:242 (3,4,5) - This pattern is not bad but do you think it fits the rest of the map's patterns? (legit question, you can keep it or change as you please) yep, i'll keep that
00:53:929 (1) - I don't like how you skipped a snare beat here. Maybe shorten this slider so you don't skip the snare beat? nope
01:07:054 (2,3,4) - This curve feels awkward, look: http://puu.sh/ioDY3/6a6114595f.jpg . Why don't you try this instead: http://puu.sh/ioDZk/0c75fd92a5.jpg fix
01:13:851 (1,2) - Would flow a lot better if you CTRL+G these two ok
01:24:866 (4,1) - Uhmm these are too close and don't flow at all x.x Move (1) somewhere else. done
01:31:429 (2) - I'd move this one a bit farther away from (1) so you have more space to put 3, like this: http://puu.sh/ioEjd/df075f49d5.jpg (then move (4) too) done
01:42:211 (1,2,3) - Maybe should make the spacing more consistent in these 3 sliders? not really
01:52:523 (5,6) - This would fit the music a lot better if you did this: http://puu.sh/ioEED/d18b13203b.jpg nope. btw, i did that on previous mod
01:58:617 (5) - Remove repeat and add a note in the main white tick,. no
02:03:304 (5,6) - Awkward flow with these two http://puu.sh/ioEJB/e650e2abe6.jpg . Try this: http://puu.sh/ioEMx/0241255ab5.jpg and then rearrange the following sliders and notes obviously. done
02:14:086 (1,2) - Should CTRL+G for more flow with the previous slider. too jumpy, but ok
02:44:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels really awkward to play this! Try http://puu.sh/ioEVn/1fd68fc087.jpg ohh shit. done
02:47:132 (6) - It would fit the music better if this were jumping notes and not a simple slider D: nope
03:07:523 (4) - Too close to the slider? i'd prefer it like that
03:09:398 (4,5,6,7) - Move this whole pattern farther away from (3) for more consistent spacing x.x done
03:11:976 (6) - Again it is bad to have the end of a slider in a big white tick. Try this. http://puu.sh/ioFbf/17c46797f5.jpg nope
03:21:468 - I hear a note on this blue tick done
03:22:289 - Here too done
03:22:406 - And here done
03:28:851 (6) - Slider end big tick thing no
03:36:585 (4) - NC? ok
03:43:617 (6) - Should move farther away from (5) because it looks like a 1/2 jump part of the star. need to think about this
04:23:226 (3) - Slider end big white tick thing. Try this: http://puu.sh/ioFpj/6b7b1cb32e.jpg no
04:37:289 (4) - Move to x332 y196 so it's equally spaced to the previous and next note ok
05:00:023 (3) - Too close to (2) no
05:07:992 (4) - Would fit the song a lot better if you made this a single note and not a slider. from previous mod

Relaxing~

Muya wrote:

[Yuki]
00:05:357 (4) - try this? http://puu.sh/ipUSi/fd515d5b0a.jpg nahh, the current one is ok for me
00:21:586 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/ipVe8/8a8106c5af.jpg nope. that's fine for me
00:45:023 (7) - ^ http://puu.sh/ipVoQ/f52dbc98a8.jpg or http://puu.sh/ipVwb/d3e5c655e9.jpg that should do
00:48:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/ipWmv/5b334c12e2.jpg http://puu.sh/ipWoh/2e511a0524.jpg quite ok for me
00:58:382 (3) - rotate 00:57:445 (2) - 's 180°? nope
01:11:507 - add note here if follow drum i don't need to add a note there tbh. vocal is enough for me
01:23:461 (1,2,3,4) - fix blanket? http://puu.sh/ipXdJ/74a65e3c84.jpg that'll do
02:07:523 (5,6) - use 02:06:117 (5) - 's copy? no need
02:15:257 - add note here if follow drum vocal is enough for me
02:16:429 (3) - move to x:307 y:129 ummm... i know that this is ok for me, but i'll think about this
02:22:054 (2,3) - change rhythm? http://puu.sh/ipYvc/71581ab408.jpg no
02:26:273 (5,6) - blanket to 02:25:570 (2) - ? umm... i think that i don't need blanket for this
02:28:617 (6) - blanket to 02:27:211 (1,3) - 's (1) or (3) i'll go for (3)
02:38:929 (2) - stack end to 02:37:991 (7) - done
02:43:617 (6,3) - this overlap 02:44:320 (2,3) - stack to 02:43:148 (5,6) - 's start and end? ok, but still unsure about this
03:57:679 (2,3) - same as 02:22:054 - nope. i'd prefer square something like that

good luck~

Ultr4persona wrote:

(First time modding, so i hope that this will work)
00:05:357 (4) - entah kenapa gua ngerasa kalo ini enaknya disamain ujungnya. kan ada suara piano (lagi hold tu)
00:24:632 (4,5) - agak terlalu jauh (?) untuk yang baru main hard, agak deketin dikit circle 5-nya. nope
00:26:742 (5,6) - sama disini. w mw ad jumps ny tu
01:00:492 (9,10,1) - agak dideketin circle-nya. dh ckup sih untk tu
01:29:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kayaknya lebih bagus kalo dijadiin slider aja ini aj dh ckup
02:36:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - isn't that a bit too cruel (?) kinda, but i'm fine with that tbh
03:21:116 (4,5,1,2) - 5 sama 1 deketin sama slider, dan bukannya itu agak jahat juga? dikecilin jaraknya mungkin lebih bagus. g perlu lah dan w butuh opini dari mod slanjut ny
04:09:165 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - streamnya kecepetan imo, mulai-nya dari 7, sebelumnya jadiin slider. kan memang. w ikuti suara biola sihhh. dan maaf, w g mw pke slider untk tu

I think it's done, inb4 sorry if it doesn't match your style

Taeyang wrote:

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• Yuki

1. 00:05:357 (4) - like this? no
   
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2. 00:17:634 (1) - here head and tail add hitsound i don't need to add hitsound for that anyway
3. 00:23:929 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow nope
   
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4. 00:27:211 (1,2,3) - suggest no
   
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5. 00:30:961 (4,1) - NC change here is downbeat ok
6. 00:33:304 (5) - NC nahh
7. 00:33:304 (5,6,7,8) - rhythm,00:34:476 - 00:34:711 - here drum sound strong ok
   
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8. 00:40:804 (5,1) - NC change no
9. 00:41:742 (2,3) - ctrl+g flow better umm, no
10. 00:43:148 - i know you followed vocal but i think need note circle in here done
11. 00:44:086 (3) - NC done
12. 00:45:961 - clickable add note circle nah
13. 00:53:461 (7,1) - NC change ohh ok
14. 00:58:148 - add note circle done
15. 00:59:086 (4) - NC done
16. 01:31:898 (3,4) - sugest done
    
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17. 02:00:023 (4,2) - try stack done
18. 02:02:132 (1,4) - NC change ok
19. 03:15:023 (5,6) - stack and make like this? i don't want to change that since it's a symmetrical from 03:17:367 (4,5,1,2,3) -
    
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20. 03:18:070 - here drum sound no
21. 03:40:336 (5) - NC ok
22. 04:43:617 (6,7,1) - readable ok. trapezoid one is ok for me
    
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Good luck~!

nadapan wrote:

Hello! From Chaoslitz modding queue

1. 01:31:429 (2,3) - Blanket done
2. 01:45:961 (1) - this slider goes suddenly slow. A slider break will happen for sure. And it happens a bit too sudden. Try to make it a little bit faster (You can let the 2 other sliders be as it is. need an opinion from the next mod or BN
3. 02:16:664 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I'm not that sure if this is a hard diff or an insane diff... or between them. If it's supposed to be an insane then ignore this. If it's supposed to be between Hard and Insane read this and think about it. If it's hard then remove the stream since it's a bit too hard for Hard it could be insane, it could be hard. even though, i'd prefer this one into stream
4. 02:19:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
5. 02:19:711 (1,2) - these two notes are too low it's fine
6. 02:49:711 (1) - same as 01:45:961 (1) same thing like i said
7. 03:03:773 (3) - blanket? no need

This was all I could find good luck with ranking

1. 00:00:721 (1,2) - i suggest to avoid stack. stack at play starting is a little confusing...
2. 00:22:289 (4) - follow the drum sound at 00:22:757-
   just a suggetion~
   
3. 00:34:007 (6,7) - I recommed to make the same pattern as 00:34:945 (1,2,3) - for following vocal
   especially, the spacing change of 00:34:476 (7,8,1,2,3) - is so confusing
4. 01:52:523 (5,6,7,1) - ^
5. 01:07:054 (2,3,4,5,6) - too sudden spacing change. I suggest to decrease spacing of 01:07:054 (2,3) -
6. 01:39:867 (4,1) - ^
7. 01:45:961 (1) - set red anchor on the slider tick correctly. suit to rhythm, imo
   
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8. 02:49:711 (1) - ^
9. 01:47:836 (2) - rotate 2degrees clockwise for good looking (vertical symmetry)
10. 01:49:945 (1) - I prefer to delete
11. 02:03:304- remove whistle
12. 02:04:242 (4) - end red line and follow drum by use of whistle(soft)
13. 03:02:836 (1,2,3,4) - you can blanket correctly
14. 03:15:257- add a note. in this part, vocal follow is strange
15. 03:22:289 (4,5) - very hard to paly
16. 03:37:523 (1,2,3) - clockwise pattern is better flow not anti-clockwise
17. 03:45:961 (1,2) - why not exchange positions? that's better flow, imo
18. 04:20:179 (3,5) - I suggest to blanket
19. 04:47:836 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to make 1/2 rhthm or use reverse like 04:46:898 (2) -
20. 04:56:273 (5,1) - u~m, not good flow...

RandomEffect wrote:

From your queue, M4M!

[Yuki]

1. 00:00:721 (1,2) - i suggest to avoid stack. stack at play starting is a little confusing... there is a same note, so i have to stack that
2. 00:22:289 (4) - follow the drum sound at 00:22:757- done
   just a suggetion~
   
3. 00:34:007 (6,7) - I recommed to make the same pattern as 00:34:945 (1,2,3) - for following vocal
   especially, the spacing change of 00:34:476 (7,8,1,2,3) - is so confusing changed the position
4. 01:52:523 (5,6,7,1) - ^ nah
5. 01:07:054 (2,3,4,5,6) - too sudden spacing change. I suggest to decrease spacing of 01:07:054 (2,3) - that's fine for me
6. 01:39:867 (4,1) - ^ ^
7. 01:45:961 (1) - set red anchor on the slider tick correctly. suit to rhythm, imo it's fine
   
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8. 02:49:711 (1) - ^ no
9. 01:47:836 (2) - rotate 2degrees clockwise for good looking (vertical symmetry) done
10. 01:49:945 (1) - I prefer to delete ohh, didn't hear any notes there. removed
11. 02:03:304- remove whistle ohh shit
12. 02:04:242 (4) - end red line and follow drum by use of whistle(soft) done
13. 03:02:836 (1,2,3,4) - you can blanket correctly no need
14. 03:15:257- add a note. in this part, vocal follow is strange no need
15. 03:22:289 (4,5) - very hard to paly i made (4) close with (5)
16. 03:37:523 (1,2,3) - clockwise pattern is better flow not anti-clockwise done
17. 03:45:961 (1,2) - why not exchange positions? that's better flow, imo ohhh that will help
18. 04:20:179 (3,5) - I suggest to blanket no need
19. 04:47:836 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to make 1/2 rhthm or use reverse like 04:46:898 (2) - i need more opinion about this
20. 04:56:273 (5,1) - u~m, not good flow... done

i like this song<3 thanks
~Good Luck~