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sana - Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku (TV size)

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PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20. november 2015 at 20:02:14

Artist: sana
Title: Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku (TV size)
Source: NARUTO - ナルト - 疾風伝
Tags: shippuden ending ed 33 ultrarik chamue cl8n honeyworks happyrocket88
BPM: 160
Filesize: 20795kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chamue's Hard (3 stars, 188 notes)
  2. Cl8n's Extra (5,3 stars, 338 notes)
  3. Insane (4,21 stars, 292 notes)
  4. Normal (2,03 stars, 149 notes)
  5. Rocket's Easy (1,49 stars, 99 notes)
  6. UltraRik's Insane (4,61 stars, 296 notes)
Download: sana - Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku (TV size)
Download: sana - Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All difficulties are ready for mods :)

[Difficulties]
Cl8n's Extra by Cl8n
UltraRik's Insane by UltraRik
Insane by PurpleHawk
Chamue's Hard by Chamue
Normal by PurpleHawk
Rocket's Easy by HappyRocket88


Update Archive
  1. (03.05.2015): Tried to change the maps according to Peachtrees' comments and implemented all of LucaSA4's Mod
  2. (04.05.2015): Changed preview point to 01:03:263 and changed a slider on Normal difficulty.
  3. (04.05.2015): annika69's mod
  4. (04.05.2015): Kbuns' mod
  5. (06.05.2015): Nikollo's Mod, soelsoel's mod, AsakuraNe's background and fixed metadata(Chamue)
  6. (06.05.2015): Added new mp3 and changed timing to new mp3 (Thanks to Chamue)
  7. (08.05.2015): Added UltraRik's Insane and Chamue's Hard
  8. (10.05.2015): ReFaller's Mod
  9. (11.05.2015): Arooma's Mod
  10. (14.05.2015): HappyRocket88's Mod
  11. (15.05.2015): Cl8n's Metadata
  12. (17.05.2015): Fixed metadata on Nikollo's Extra, updated UltraRik's Insane, uploaded Cl8n's Extra
  13. (18.05.2015): Updated Nikollo's Extra
  14. (24.05.2015): Updated Cl8n's Extra and added Cl8n to tags
  15. (25.05.2015): PixzleR's Mod and added HoneyWorks to tags
  16. (25.05.2015): UltraRik's mod to Normal, Chamue's Hard and Cl8n's Extra
  17. (26.05.2015): Chyo-Kun's mod to Normal and UltraRik's Insane
  18. (27.05.2015): Lama Poluna and guineaQ's mod to UltraRik's Insane
  19. (28.05.2015): Asonate's mod to Chamue's Hard and uploaded WIP of my Insane
  20. (29.05.2015): UR's Insane's Kiai time was re-mapped and Cl8n's Extra was updated with awesome new hitsounds!
  21. (31.05.2015): Uploaded Rocket's Easy and WIP of New Normal and New Insane.
  22. (01.06.2015): Finished New Normal WIP and made it replace the old Normal.
  23. (01.06.2015): Exahilosys' mod
  24. (03.06.2015): domSaur's mod and Super Hexagon's mod
  25. (06.06.2015): XeroiZi HD's mod
  26. (08.06.2015): MokouSmoke's mod and a few adjustments to Rocket's Easy
  27. (17.06.2015): Kiki and LGV894's mods
  28. (18.06.2015): LucaSA4's Mod, Cl8n's update and UltraRik's update
  29. (20.06.2015): Metadata fix, thank you Cl8n :)
  30. (21.06.2015): LucaSA4's Mod to Rocket's Easy, Normal and New Insane WIP
  31. (24.06.2015): Added happyrocket88 to tags (lol, sorry) updated UltraRik's Insane and changed hitsounding in New Insane WIP
  32. (08.07.2015): pkhg's mod, Cl8n's awesome metadata post and fixed metadata from the DQ post of monstrata's mapset. Added the timing changes to monstrata's mapset to New Insane WIP. Fix for the timing of my Normal is probably coming today :)
  33. (14.07.2015): Updated Chamue's Hard, update to Insane, video added. Rocket's Easy, Normal, Chamue's Hard, UltraRik's Insane and Cl8n's Extra are now ready for mods :D (not my Insane :'( )
  34. (15.07.2015): Updated Insane difficulty, no longer WIP and ready for mods! :D
  35. (18.07.2015): Update to Insane difficulty:
    1. Re-mapped 00:12:389 to 00:23:663
    2. Changed hitsounding in Kiaitime
    Updated Rocket's Easy and Normal after phaZ's mod. Updated the timing points to the latest timing points of monstrata's mapset and implemented them to all difficulties. Also removed naruto from tags since the name is now in the source.
  36. (20.07.2015): Updated Normal and Insane to Almaironn's mod.
  37. (22.07.2015): Updated Normal, Insane and UltraRik's Insane to Default's mod
  38. (23.07.2015): Updated Normal, Insane and UltraRik's Insane to UltraRik's mod
  39. (25.07.2015): Made some adjustments to hitsounding on Normal and Insane diff and changed status of mapset to Pending :D
  40. (25.07.2015): Updated Normal and Insane to MokouSmoke's Mod
  41. (26.07.2015): Changed video offset to -15 for all difficulties. Updated UltraRik's Insane to MokouSmoke's mod and Normal to HappyRocket88's mod.
  42. (27.07.2015): Updated Rocket's Easy, Normal and Insane to RikiH_'s mod
  43. (01.08.2015): Updated Rocket's Easy, Normal, Insane, UltraRik's Insane and Cl8n's Extra with all mods including -Lemons' mod
  44. (29.08.2015): Updated Cl8n's Extra and Insane + Normal to -Lemons' mod and shurito1sao's mod. Changed status to WIP
  45. (31.08.2015): Updated UltraRik's Insane to shurito1sao's mod.
  46. (13.09.2015): Updated Cl8n's Extra to shurito1sao's mod
  47. (28.09.2015): Changed a few things in the Insane difficulty, asking for mods soon: Changed the climax jump during Kiai time to something that resembels the old pattern. Changed a lot of the rhythm and aesthetics in the slower parts of the song, and emphasizing other instrument then the drums during those parts (used to be only drums). Made some transisitons between using different instruments, like in the beginning (transistioning from only piano to vocals + guitar). Changed some patterns that I felt didn't work well enough. Edit(01.10.2015): Changed some more things in Insane diff
  48. (18.10.2015): Updated Normal, Insane and Cl8n's Extra to Dazardz' mod
  49. (24.10.2015): Updated HappyRocket's Easy and fixed technical issues with all of the difficulties except for Chamue's Hard (need creator input). Balanced Insane difficulty, there was previously a difficulty spike speed-wise at around 1:08, which resulted in the change from 4.01 to 3.96

Latest update: (20.11.2015): Major update to Insane diff, and updated UltraRik's Insane to latest mod

Thank you
The awesome mappers that have worked on this mapset :D
  1. Cl8n
  2. Chamue
  3. Nikollo
  4. UltraRik
  5. and the HappyRocket :D
litoluna, monstrata and Goldenwolf for help with timing :)

Modders:
  1. Peachtrees
  2. LucaSA4
  3. annika69
  4. Kbuns
  5. Nikollo
  6. soelsoel
  7. AsakuraNe
  8. Chamue
  9. UltraRik
  10. ReFaller
  11. Arooma
  12. HappyRocket88
  13. Cl8n
  14. PixzleR
  15. Chyo-Kun
  16. guineaQ
  17. Lama Poluna
  18. Asonate
  19. HappyRocket88
  20. ihewmatt
  21. Exa
  22. domSaur
  23. MokouSmoke
  24. Kuki
  25. LGV894
  26. pkhg
  27. phaZ
  28. Almaironn
  29. Default
  30. RikiH_
  31. -Lemons
  32. shurito1sao
  33. Dazardz
  34. Kyozoru
Last edited by PurpleHawk , edited 233 times in total.
Peachtrees
815 posts
Joined May 2013
Peachtrees
M4M

you asked for a rather generic mod, so I'll try my best at highlighting the main problems c:

Normal

1. Avoid overlaps as much as possible during lower Difficulties:

00:01:146 (1,3) - 00:08:557 (1,3) - 00:21:263 (3,1,2) - these ones are examples

Overlaps tend to looks messy and unpleasent to look at, and they can often lead to confusion when blocking a slider's path for example

2. Try not to skip downbeats/put them on slidertails:

00:43:145 (3) - 00:44:557 (5) - 00:02:204 (2) -

these downbeats feel very dominant and powerful, thus skipping or putting very little emphasize on those feels odd

3. Use Distance Snap!

This is pretty self explanatory. Lower Diffs should always use constant DS (say for some minor inconsistencies if it really helps with the flow). I think you've been using it most of the time, there are some inconsistencies though.

4. Try curving your sliders less:

01:12:440 (2) - 00:19:851 (1) - 00:21:969 (4) -

These CAN work with certain patterns, though I think just using them like you do looks rather unpleasant. This might be more of a personal opinion, but I think that you'll see that sliders like these rarely ever find use in beatmaps.

These are a few generic tips, I'm hoping they'll help!

Insane

1.Think about how what you want to emphasize when implementing jumps

00:02:028 (3,4,5,1) - take this pattern as an example. 4 -> 5 is a jump, which is fine I think, but 5 -> 1 is not spaced out at all, even though the downbeat on 1 is very high pitched and strong, thus making this feels unfitting

2. Do not overmap!

00:13:587 (5) - 00:19:234 (4) -

There is no 1/4 in the music

3.Flow:

It's hard to sum up the idea of how flow works (not that I'd be able to do this anyways haha) but generally speaking, try following your map with your cursor in the editor. If something feels weird or unnatural, the flow most likely is bad.

I hope that this was the kind of mod you were looking for. Good luck with your map and have fun mapping!
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
Hi from ingame m4m request!

Let's start
■Overall■
:arrow: You must perfect your slider, some of them are really ugly
:arrow: Use more hitsounds
:arrow: Preview point must be the same in all diffs

■Normal■
00:01:146 (1) - This slider is ugly :x, try making it another way, or making one with reverse arrow, it's big and doesn't look cool
00:02:204 (2) - Make a blanket (as perfect as you can)
00:02:910 (3) - ^
00:03:616 (4) - Same as 00:01:146 (1) -
00:07:498 (5) - I would change for a circles at 00:07:498 - 00:07:851 - and 00:08:204 -
00:09:969 (3) - Move to x 270 y 194
00:10:322 (4) - Move to x328 y 88
00:11:028 (5) - Move to x 270 y 194
00:12:440 (1) - Improve this slider, you can do it better, and move to around x 172 y 112
00:17:734 (4) - Remove this slider, get this one 00:17:734 (4) - Ctrl C/V and Ctrl G, then, put it here 00:17:028 (3) -
00:28:322 (3) - This slider, I'm sorry for the word.. Is so.. 2011 :p, you can improve it, make atleast it a semi-circle
00:43:851 (4,5,6) - This is weird, try to make it different
00:46:322 (1) - From now on is a bit weird, I didn't like too much, I think it's too simple, but it's not a must, think of Ctrl G/H/J the best sliders because some are not so good, like:
00:49:145 (3) - But do with this shape 00:50:557 (4) - Ctrl H then Ctrl J
00:47:381 - Circle?
00:50:204 - Same
00:53:028 - ^
00:56:204 (8) - ^
00:56:204 (8) - Move to x 208 y 176
01:02:557 (2) - Remove this slider, 01:01:851 (1) - Copy this one and place at x 188 y 88, don't forget to remove NC(New Combo)
01:07:145 (2) - Improve this slider, make a blanket
01:07:851 (3) - Ctrl J and place at x 168 y 152
01:08:557 (4,5) - Move to x 96 y 264
01:13:851 (4) - Move to x 208 y 228
01:14:557 (1) - Move to x 124 y 280
01:16:675 (6) - Move to x 320 y 208
01:18:087 (2) - Copy this slider 01:16:675 (6) - and Ctrl H. Then place at x 108 y 80
01:25:851 (1) - Same as the first note I linked

■Insane■
:arrow: You can call this diff what you want, just a adice
00:07:675 (2,3) - Remove that and use the same pattern as b4
00:11:028 (4) - Fix this slider, its not good-looking :p and place at x 312 y 176
00:12:440 (1) - Move to x 336 y 236
:arrow: These little streams doesn't fit the song, I wouldn't use them, the song don't ask for them, streams must follow a rhythm that asks for it
00:20:204 (8) - NC here maybe?
:arrow: Try to alternate sliders, don't use straight sliders forever
00:23:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try changing it, it's not following the rhythm, the last stream is ok (00:23:028 (5,6) - this one isn't), but the jump and the sliders aren't following it imo
00:56:204 (2) - Finish this slider at 00:57:263 -
01:02:557 (1,2) - Huge jump for this kind of diff
01:05:910 (2) - Space it out
01:08:910 (1) - Don't use reverse arrow here
01:10:322 (1) - ^
01:18:616 (2) - Space it out
01:28:675 (1) - Don't need this spinner, replace with a circle

That's all!
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M

you asked for a rather generic mod, so I'll try my best at highlighting the main problems c:

Normal

1. Avoid overlaps as much as possible during lower Difficulties:

00:01:146 (1,3) - 00:08:557 (1,3) - 00:21:263 (3,1,2) - these ones are examples

Overlaps tend to looks messy and unpleasent to look at, and they can often lead to confusion when blocking a slider's path for example

2. Try not to skip downbeats/put them on slidertails:

00:43:145 (3) - 00:44:557 (5) - 00:02:204 (2) -

these downbeats feel very dominant and powerful, thus skipping or putting very little emphasize on those feels odd

3. Use Distance Snap!

This is pretty self explanatory. Lower Diffs should always use constant DS (say for some minor inconsistencies if it really helps with the flow). I think you've been using it most of the time, there are some inconsistencies though.

4. Try curving your sliders less:

01:12:440 (2) - 00:19:851 (1) - 00:21:969 (4) -

These CAN work with certain patterns, though I think just using them like you do looks rather unpleasant. This might be more of a personal opinion, but I think that you'll see that sliders like these rarely ever find use in beatmaps.

These are a few generic tips, I'm hoping they'll help!

Insane

1.Think about how what you want to emphasize when implementing jumps

00:02:028 (3,4,5,1) - take this pattern as an example. 4 -> 5 is a jump, which is fine I think, but 5 -> 1 is not spaced out at all, even though the downbeat on 1 is very high pitched and strong, thus making this feels unfitting

2. Do not overmap!

00:13:587 (5) - 00:19:234 (4) -

There is no 1/4 in the music

3.Flow:

It's hard to sum up the idea of how flow works (not that I'd be able to do this anyways haha) but generally speaking, try following your map with your cursor in the editor. If something feels weird or unnatural, the flow most likely is bad.

I hope that this was the kind of mod you were looking for. Good luck with your map and have fun mapping!
Thank you for the feedback, I've tried to implement some of your points in both the normal difficulty and insane difficulty.
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

LucaSA4 wrote:

Hi from ingame m4m request!

Let's start
■Overall■
:arrow: You must perfect your slider, some of them are really ugly
:arrow: Use more hitsounds
:arrow: Preview point must be the same in all diffs

■Normal■
00:01:146 (1) - This slider is ugly :x, try making it another way, or making one with reverse arrow, it's big and doesn't look cool
00:02:204 (2) - Make a blanket (as perfect as you can)
00:02:910 (3) - ^
00:03:616 (4) - Same as 00:01:146 (1) -
00:07:498 (5) - I would change for a circles at 00:07:498 - 00:07:851 - and 00:08:204 -
00:09:969 (3) - Move to x 270 y 194
00:10:322 (4) - Move to x328 y 88
00:11:028 (5) - Move to x 270 y 194
00:12:440 (1) - Improve this slider, you can do it better, and move to around x 172 y 112
00:17:734 (4) - Remove this slider, get this one 00:17:734 (4) - Ctrl C/V and Ctrl G, then, put it here 00:17:028 (3) -
00:28:322 (3) - This slider, I'm sorry for the word.. Is so.. 2011 :p, you can improve it, make atleast it a semi-circle
00:43:851 (4,5,6) - This is weird, try to make it different
00:46:322 (1) - From now on is a bit weird, I didn't like too much, I think it's too simple, but it's not a must, think of Ctrl G/H/J the best sliders because some are not so good, like:
00:49:145 (3) - But do with this shape 00:50:557 (4) - Ctrl H then Ctrl J
00:47:381 - Circle?
00:50:204 - Same
00:53:028 - ^
00:56:204 (8) - ^
00:56:204 (8) - Move to x 208 y 176
01:02:557 (2) - Remove this slider, 01:01:851 (1) - Copy this one and place at x 188 y 88, don't forget to remove NC(New Combo)
01:07:145 (2) - Improve this slider, make a blanket
01:07:851 (3) - Ctrl J and place at x 168 y 152
01:08:557 (4,5) - Move to x 96 y 264
01:13:851 (4) - Move to x 208 y 228
01:14:557 (1) - Move to x 124 y 280
01:16:675 (6) - Move to x 320 y 208
01:18:087 (2) - Copy this slider 01:16:675 (6) - and Ctrl H. Then place at x 108 y 80
01:25:851 (1) - Same as the first note I linked

■Insane■
:arrow: You can call this diff what you want, just a adice
00:07:675 (2,3) - Remove that and use the same pattern as b4
00:11:028 (4) - Fix this slider, its not good-looking :p and place at x 312 y 176
00:12:440 (1) - Move to x 336 y 236
:arrow: These little streams doesn't fit the song, I wouldn't use them, the song don't ask for them, streams must follow a rhythm that asks for it
00:20:204 (8) - NC here maybe?
:arrow: Try to alternate sliders, don't use straight sliders forever
00:23:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try changing it, it's not following the rhythm, the last stream is ok (00:23:028 (5,6) - this one isn't), but the jump and the sliders aren't following it imo
00:56:204 (2) - Finish this slider at 00:57:263 -
01:02:557 (1,2) - Huge jump for this kind of diff
01:05:910 (2) - Space it out
01:08:910 (1) - Don't use reverse arrow here
01:10:322 (1) - ^
01:18:616 (2) - Space it out
01:28:675 (1) - Don't need this spinner, replace with a circle

That's all!
Great mod! I've implemented all of your comments, with some modification due to DS.
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
Your beatmap improved alot since I last see it! The normal is perfect, just need some hitsounds and fix this slider 01:25:851 (1) - Make it something like this:



Also I recommend setting the preview point to 01:03:263 - it's the start of the climax of the song

Don't give kudosu for this post :P
annika69
184 posts
Joined October 2014
annika69
Hei hei, fra M4M forespørselen min :)

moddd
[Generelt]
- Ser at du har en del blanket feil, så kommer ikke til å nevne dem. Vil heller at du kan gå igjennom og sjekke selv da så slipper modden å være så lang. Ett godt triks er å bruke approach sirkelen som en guide sånn dette: http://puu.sh/hBbtZ/332508a919.jpg

[Normal]
00:02:204 (2,3) - Kanskje du kan markere begge, ctrl+g og markere (2) også ctrl+g igjen? Gir bedre flow sånn føler jeg.
00:03:616 (4) - Hva med å putte hitcircle her og legge en slider fra 00:03:969 til 00:04:322 istedenfor?
00:08:204 (7,1,2,3) - Tror kanskje at rytmen heller skal være sånn: http://puu.sh/hBama/0d46a799dc.jpg (Markøren ligger på 00:09:440)
00:17:734 (4) - Du burde ikke stable det sånn for denne vanskelighetsgraden, for det kan være vanskelig for nybegynnere å oppfatte det og sånt?? Kanskje du kan lage blanket med 00:17:028 (3) ?
00:22:675 (1,2) - For å være ærlig ser det ikke så pent ut når den er nær (4), prøv å beveg den litt lengere vekk fra den. Tror at den er litt for nærme også.
00:24:087 (1) - Skal ikke den egentlig begynne her 00:24:087 (1) ?
00:26:557 (4) - Hva med å heller gjøre den til en vanlig slider, akkurat som 00:24:087 (1), samme lengde og alt? Du kan jo egentlig bare kopiere den og flippe den rundt og stuff sånn at det passer inn
00:28:322 (3) - Rytmen er feil, tror den skal være ca sånn http://puu.sh/hBbfn/de894b24f7.jpg
00:41:381 - Putte på en hitcircle?
00:44:204 (1) - Fjern ny combo
01:27:263 - Kanskje putte noe på slutten også, som dette http://puu.sh/hBbOP/37cd82e5e7.jpg

[Insane]
00:01:146 (1) - Gjør det mindre kurvet? Syntes ikke at det ser sååå bra ut sånn..
00:48:793 - Putte på en hitcircle?
00:50:557 (3) - Flytte den til 00:50:381 ?
00:53:381 (3) - Flytte den til 00:53:204 ?
00:56:204 (2) - Flytte den til 00:56:028 ?

Ser at den trenger noe fiks her og der, men likte den, var gøy å spille! Lykke til med rank! :D
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

annika69 wrote:

Hei hei, fra M4M forespørselen min :)

moddd
[Generelt]
- Ser at du har en del blanket feil, så kommer ikke til å nevne dem. Vil heller at du kan gå igjennom og sjekke selv da så slipper modden å være så lang. Ett godt triks er å bruke approach sirkelen som en guide sånn dette: http://puu.sh/hBbtZ/332508a919.jpg

Takk, skal se gjennom mappet :)

[Normal]
00:02:204 (2,3) - Kanskje du kan markere begge, ctrl+g og markere (2) også ctrl+g igjen? Gir bedre flow sånn føler jeg.
00:03:616 (4) - Hva med å putte hitcircle her og legge en slider fra 00:03:969 til 00:04:322 istedenfor?
00:08:204 (7,1,2,3) - Tror kanskje at rytmen heller skal være sånn: http://puu.sh/hBama/0d46a799dc.jpg (Markøren ligger på 00:09:440)

Vil gjerne ha det litt roligere i begynnelsen og dermed følger jeg ikke den rytmen og dermed tror jeg sliderene slik de er nå passer bedre, men takk for gode tips :)

00:17:734 (4) - Du burde ikke stable det sånn for denne vanskelighetsgraden, for det kan være vanskelig for nybegynnere å oppfatte det og sånt?? Kanskje du kan lage blanket med 00:17:028 (3) ?
Fixed
00:22:675 (1,2) - For å være ærlig ser det ikke så pent ut når den er nær (4), prøv å beveg den litt lengere vekk fra den. Tror at den er litt for nærme også.
Fixed

00:24:087 (1) - Skal ikke den egentlig begynne her 00:24:087 (1) ?
??

00:26:557 (4) - Hva med å heller gjøre den til en vanlig slider, akkurat som 00:24:087 (1), samme lengde og alt? Du kan jo egentlig bare kopiere den og flippe den rundt og stuff sånn at det passer inn
Ingen forandring pga rytme

00:28:322 (3) - Rytmen er feil, tror den skal være ca sånn http://puu.sh/hBbfn/de894b24f7.jpg
Hmm, delvis enig, men gjør ikke noen endringer for nå

00:41:381 - Putte på en hitcircle?
Fixed
00:44:204 (1) - Fjern ny combo
Whops :P Fixed
01:27:263 - Kanskje putte noe på slutten også, som dette http://puu.sh/hBbOP/37cd82e5e7.jpg
Supert forslag, det er lagt til!

[Insane]
00:01:146 (1) - Gjør det mindre kurvet? Syntes ikke at det ser sååå bra ut sånn..
00:48:793 - Putte på en hitcircle?
00:50:557 (3) - Flytte den til 00:50:381 ?
00:53:381 (3) - Flytte den til 00:53:204 ?
00:56:204 (2) - Flytte den til 00:56:028 ?

Fikset alle punktene, takk :)

Ser at den trenger noe fiks her og der, men likte den, var gøy å spille! Lykke til med rank! :D
Kbuns
91 posts
Joined July 2014
Kbuns
M4M
Insane

  • 00:12:440 (1) - Bad overlap
    00:12:440 (1,2,3) - I recommend making these all parallel. It's kind of awkward in the current state.
    00:15:087 (6) - Slight overlap with 00:15:616 (2) -
    00:17:028 (2,3) - Again, I would suggest making these parallel to be more aesthetically pleasing.
    00:18:616 (2,4) - Overlap
    00:26:028 (2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing consistent. DS?
    00:24:793 (3,4) - I wouldn't stack these. Maybe make these hit circles a slider.
    00:35:734 (1,2) - Really bad overlap. Either stack (2) (not recommended) or space it out.
    00:41:734 (2) - Putting this hit circle here flows weirdly. Consider placing it at (160,168) and then ctrl+G (3).
    00:42:440 (1,2) - I would bring these in slightly closer to 00:42:793 (1) -
    00:49:851 (2) - Overlap
    01:01:852 (1,2,1,2) - Here, the hitsounds are piercingly loud. As a rule of thumb, I don't think you should ever exceed 80% volume on this song.
    01:11:734 (1,2) - Flows really oddly.
    01:11:028 (1) - I do not recommend stacking this here.
    01:25:146 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really bad I recommend using DS 1.8 for these hit circles.
    Overall, it's a great start. Just needs a little more polish with volume changes, hitsounds, and overlapping.
    Also, Slider tick rate 1 feels a little low for an insane so you may want to increase it.
Normal

  • 00:03:616 (4) - This slider does not represent what is happening in the music very well.
    00:09:969 (3) - I suggest shifting the position of this between (2) and (4) so that it does not overlap with 00:11:028 (5) -
    00:46:322 (1) - Big jump for normal diff players. Consider ctrl+J and then re-spacing it with 1.00 DS. You would also have to shift the positioning of (2) and (3) if you choose to do this.
    01:01:851 (1) - Here, normal hit sounds sound kind of harsh. Consider using soft hit sounds throughout the map.
    01:16:675 (6) - Overlap with 01:17:381 (1) -
    01:19:851 (5,6) - I would shift these to (212,332), but that's just due to personal preference.
    This is a great normal mode map. Not much to fix here other than hitsounds and some minor overlap/flow issues. Nice job!
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

Kbuns wrote:

M4M
Insane

  • 00:12:440 (1) - Bad overlap
    Fixed
    00:12:440 (1,2,3) - I recommend making these all parallel. It's kind of awkward in the current state.
    Fixed
    00:15:087 (6) - Slight overlap with 00:15:616 (2) -
    00:17:028 (2,3) - Again, I would suggest making these parallel to be more aesthetically pleasing.
    00:18:616 (2,4) - Overlap
    Fixed all above by re-mapping the section
    00:26:028 (2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing consistent. DS?
    It's on purpose, see Peachtrees' comments
    00:24:793 (3,4) - I wouldn't stack these. Maybe make these hit circles a slider.
    Fixed
    00:35:734 (1,2) - Really bad overlap. Either stack (2) (not recommended) or space it out.
    Fixed
    00:41:734 (2) - Putting this hit circle here flows weirdly. Consider placing it at (160,168) and then ctrl+G (3).
    Fixed
    00:42:440 (1,2) - I would bring these in slightly closer to 00:42:793 (1) -
    Moved them slightly closer :P
    00:49:851 (2) - Overlap
    Fixed
    01:01:852 (1,2,1,2) - Here, the hitsounds are piercingly loud. As a rule of thumb, I don't think you should ever exceed 80% volume on this song.
    Lowered volume to 80%
    01:11:734 (1,2) - Flows really oddly.
    Fixed
    01:11:028 (1) - I do not recommend stacking this here.
    Fixed
    01:25:146 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really bad I recommend using DS 1.8 for these hit circles.
    Fixed
    Overall, it's a great start. Just needs a little more polish with volume changes, hitsounds, and overlapping.
    Also, Slider tick rate 1 feels a little low for an insane so you may want to increase it.
    Changed Slider tick rate to 2 :)
Normal

  • 00:03:616 (4) - This slider does not represent what is happening in the music very well.
    What should I change it to? When the pitch of her voice raises, so does the slider, so it kind of represents the music?
    00:09:969 (3) - I suggest shifting the position of this between (2) and (4) so that it does not overlap with 00:11:028 (5) -
    Fixed
    00:46:322 (1) - Big jump for normal diff players. Consider ctrl+J and then re-spacing it with 1.00 DS. You would also have to shift the positioning of (2) and (3) if you choose to do this.
    Compeletly re-mapped that part now, so: Fixed
    01:01:851 (1) - Here, normal hit sounds sound kind of harsh. Consider using soft hit sounds throughout the map.
    Lowered volume to 80%
    01:16:675 (6) - Overlap with 01:17:381 (1) -
    01:19:851 (5,6) - I would shift these to (212,332), but that's just due to personal preference.
    Fixed both above by re-mapping 01:17:381(1,2,3,4,5,6)
    This is a great normal mode map. Not much to fix here other than hitsounds and some minor overlap/flow issues. Nice job!
    Thank you :D
Nikollo
39 posts
Joined November 2013
Nikollo
Insane
General

Firstly, try use equal spacing between notes when it's necesarry (in jumps especially). Examples: 00:05:910 (2,3) - here , 00:05:910 (2,3,4,5) - spacing between 2nd and 3rd note is equal to spacing between 4th ant 5th? Err... really, it's a little bit bad, you know.

When passing your double-noted jumps I feel like moving my cursor or something. Action, you know. For example: 00:13:498 (4,5) - not critical at all , 00:14:557 (3,4,5,6) - two in a row? add action, there're no purpose in freezing your cursor. Try not to forget about it.

Issues

00:02:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mentioned in "General". Why not to create trapeze-like jump? Here, like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090942
00:04:498 (2,3,4,5) - Mentioned in "General". I can agree with spacing between 2nd and 3rd note, but other are weird. Maybe triangle-like jump? Like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090955
00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - According to my previous changes it's necesarry to change it. After triangle-like jump this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090966 , then this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090973
00:07:322 (1,2,3,4) - I do really like idea (2nd and 3rd sliders), but I don't like it's realization. Err... well, when creating a shape try to create another shape :D It's easier for me to show. This https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090985 , then this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090989 and... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3090993 . Square like shape, yep.
00:08:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - About 1st slider, according to previous fixes let us move it there https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3091011 . About other notes. Big jump? Good idea, I like it. But realization... maybe like this? (again, action) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3091014 Almost like a lozenge! :D
00:10:145 (1,2,3,4) - Gap between 2nd and 3rd notes. Just fix all places like this in your beatmap, you know. My view there– https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3091032 and there – http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3091058 .

That's all what I can do tonight. Sorry for such a small mode (and actually bad , I think so). Good luck to you.
soelsoel
18 posts
Joined December 2011
soelsoel
Hello... PurpleHawk from #modreqs
I just find some map to pratice my mod

[General]

Disable countdown because it too short(and when I test it didn't countdown)
Disable widescreen support because there no storyboard
Disable letterbox during breaks because there no break time
and it seem this map has no hitsound so my most mod is about it.

[Normal]
00:01:146 (1,2,3,4) - just example shape
00:01:851 - add whistle
00:03:263 - ^
00:04:675 (5) - ^
00:06:087 (2) - ^
00:07:498 (5) - ^
00:08:910 - ^
00:10:322 - ^
00:12:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this rhythm
00:13:145 - add clap
00:13:851 - ^
00:14:557 - ^
00:15:263 - ^
00:15:969 - ^
00:16:675 - ^
00:17:381 - ^
00:18:087 (5) - ^
00:18:440 (1,2,3,4) - how about this rhythm
00:18:793 - add clap
00:19:498 - ^
00:20:204 - ^
00:20:910 - ^
00:21:616 - ^
00:22:322 - ^
00:22:675 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:18:440 (1,2,3,4)
00:23:028 - add clap
00:24:087 - It seem this inherited point should move to 00:23:734
00:25:851 - add whistle
00:27:263 - ^
00:30:087 - ^
00:31:498 (2) - ^
00:32:910 - ^
01:01:851 (1,2) - how about this rhythm
after this it's up to you to add some hitsound
AsakuraNe
690 posts
Joined January 2015
AsakuraNe
Heloo~ :3 Came from the Land of #ModReqs

Gonna Help you with backgrounds ;)

Hokage Naruto
Cute Naruto w/ tailed beasts
This Suits best for me :3 The cute music compliments with it ;)
Serious Naruto
Naruto & Sasuke
Team 7

If you want to remove a text from the backgrounds, just PM me. :3
Also, PM me if you don't want a naruto theme background, I can change it~ :)

Then Good Luck for Ranking :D
Yunona
103 posts
Joined May 2014
Yunona
Hi~ From #modreqs

General

SPOILER
I think you can put this BG



and I think your mp3 is a modified version of the song,maybe this will do?

https://yadi.sk/d/M9MKxudlgTems

Then the BMP,I guess,is 170 and the offset 1055

Can use 4 colors


Red - 6
Green - 8
Blue - 128

Red - 107
Green - 62
Blue - 36

Red - 77
Green - 34
Blue - 42

Red - 77
Green - 75
Blue - 105

Delete in the tags of your nickname,as it already exists in the metadata

Can I make GD for your map?
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

soelsoel wrote:

Hello... PurpleHawk from #modreqs
I've fixed the general issues and implemented all of your hitsounding comments

I like your suggestions regarding rhythm, but I didn't implement any of them for now. I think that it may be better to use sliders and single notes to create flow rather then a repeat slider(a repeat slider would probably be easier for a beginner to play though, which is why I might implement your ideas later on :) )

I really don't know anything about hitsounding, so I didn't change anything except for your mod :P
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heloo~ :3 Came from the Land of #ModReqs

Gonna Help you with backgrounds ;)

Hokage Naruto
Cute Naruto w/ tailed beasts
This Suits best for me :3 The cute music compliments with it ;)
Serious Naruto
Naruto & Sasuke
Team 7

If you want to remove a text from the backgrounds, just PM me. :3
Also, PM me if you don't want a naruto theme background, I can change it~ :)

Then Good Luck for Ranking :D
I liked the Cute Naruto background and agree that a cute background would fit the song. I could have something less childish, but something like the background you showed expresses the kind of "fun" that I'm looking for in a background image. The use of many vibrant colours is probably one of the things that makes the background good for the song.

However, this is an ending theme to Naruto Shippuden, which has more of a darker feel to it, so I'll be looking for a background image with less childish appearence aswell

For now I'll be using your background image :)
(if I end up using it when I'm going for ranked I would appreciate if you could remove the small text in the top corner)
PurpleHawk
80 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
PurpleHawk

Chamue wrote:

Hi~ From #modreqs

General

SPOILER
I think you can put this BG



and I think your mp3 is a modified version of the song,maybe this will do?

https://yadi.sk/d/M9MKxudlgTems

What's the difference? :S Edit: Yeah, her voice is higher pitched in my version, and your version is the one they use in Naruto, thank you :)

Then the BMP,I guess,is 170 and the offset 1055

Thanks :)

Can use 4 colors


Red - 6
Green - 8
Blue - 128

Red - 107
Green - 62
Blue - 36

Red - 77
Green - 34
Blue - 42

Red - 77
Green - 75
Blue - 105

Delete in the tags of your nickname,as it already exists in the metadata
Done

Can I make GD for your map?
That would be great! :D What difficulty?
(Comments inside box)


Regarding your background image, I liked it as more of a darker themed background image that represents Naruto Shippuden really well.
However, for me this song is a break away from the dark theme of Shippuden. Therefore I still think a more childish background with vibrant colours fits better.

If I change my mind regarding the theme of the image(which I'll might do) then your background is definitely better then my old background :)
AsakuraNe
690 posts
Joined January 2015
AsakuraNe
Helooo agaain :)
I'll give you a dark theme Naruto then~ :3

Bijuu Naruto
Naruto & Sasuke
Cool Naruto
Naruto & Sasuke 2
Naruto Vs Sasuke
Black & White Naruto
Black & White Madara

Well, some are not dark xD haha. It's just random stuff~ :D
I like the Black and White Naruto though :3

No Kudosu
UltraRik
202 posts
Joined June 2014
UltraRik
I believe you requested an Insane GD :)
Hope you know how to paste it in your folder ^^

>>EDIT: 5.08 stars remapped to 4.63

"UltraRik's Insane"
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63174
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.100001

[Metadata]
Title:Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku
TitleUnicode:Kotoba no Iranai Yakusoku
Artist:Sana
ArtistUnicode:Sana
Creator:PurpleHawk
Version:UltraRik's Insane
Source:Naruto Shippuden
Tags:anime, tv size
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:3.6
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"687474703a2f2f7075752e73682f68446b56532f313463313531386337362e6a7067.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,60198,61162
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1057,352.941176470588,4,1,0,50,1,0
1057,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,40,0,0
10851,-200,4,2,0,40,0,0
12349,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,65,0,0
22584,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,68,0,0
22937,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,71,0,0
23466,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,73,0,0
23996,-200,4,2,0,40,0,0
34851,-200,4,2,0,40,0,1
34937,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
35027,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
46231,-200,4,2,0,50,0,0
60349,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0
61760,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
63174,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
85762,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,40,0,0
86466,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,35,0,0
87172,-200,4,1,0,30,0,0
87878,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 118,0,236
Combo2 : 255,104,32
Combo3 : 170,167,55
Combo4 : 198,0,99
Combo5 : 255,132,9
Combo6 : 0,79,157
Combo7 : 168,0,0
Combo8 : 255,255,55

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ReFaller
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Joined August 2014
ReFaller
Hi, from #modreqs
Normal
00:53:292 (3) - this slider will be OK, if you use ctrl+g on it to save a flow. Next move 00:54:351 (4) to the same place as in 00:52:939 (2) .
00:54:704 (5) - use ctrl+g again and move it to x: 144 y: 308, next rotate by 3° clockwise with "selection centre".
00:55:762 (6,7) - mark them twice and move them by (6) [6 and 7 must be marked all the time] to x: 428 y: 208. A blanket 00:54:704 (5,7) should be created.
00:57:527 (1) - A spinner should end in 01:00:351
01:25:851 - Create an inheriting section (ctrl+shift+p) and set the Soft sampleset. Set the same for 4 remaining sections.
Insane
From 00:12:351 to 00:23:292 I hear that not every drum sound is put on the map. Try to fix it.
Get rid of the jumps between the circles in 00:23:998 through 00:33:527, this fragment should be softer.
In the fragment between 00:46:233 and the spinner, I recommend following the drums.
00:57:527 (1) - The spinner should be set as in Normal
01:25:851 - do the same as in Normal.
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