took me long enough to get to this
THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATIONGeneral outline of what my mods contain:>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Unrankable stuffHighly recommended various stuffRest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff
I'm not sure, but shouldn't source be Fate/kaleid liner プリズマ☆イリヤ ?
Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[Scintillation]
I always enjoy watching o2 maps on auto, they look so beautiful, and this one's not diffrent.
You have over 3k unsnapped notes and one stacked on another that keeps auto from SS'ing, might wanna fix that even if it's not for rank
[Luminescence]
OD 6,6? That's way too low, even for 1/3 LN map. Suggesting 7,500:00:802 (802|2) - This note should be on 00:00:787 - (1/12 snap) //checked it on 25% speed many times
00:00:824 (824|3) - Actually this also sounds like 1/12 to me
00:06:204 - Delete one, you've mapped this sound as 2 notes before // 00:05:489 -
00:10:668 (10668|6,10668|4,10668|5) - Shouldn't all end on white tick? //1/4 earlier
00:15:668 - 2 things: 1) Shouldn't there be 2 notes beside LN? 2) 00:15:668 (15668|5) - this shield looks painful
00:23:525 - Add for plate maybe?
00:37:811 (37811|3) - Make a 1/4 stair triplet instead of single note for drum?
00:39:418 (39418|3) - Move to 5th?
00:45:132 - Inb4 someone says it's overnoted (happened to my map lolol)
00:48:525 - this is LN end+next LN+ 1 note when 00:47:989 - is LN end+next LN+ 3 notes = ???
00:49:239 - Add?
00:55:936 - Add on 5th, strong beat
00:56:025 (56025|4) - If you accepted above move this to 6th
01:02:275 - Some of notes in those 1/4's don't have audible instruments for them. I myself am okay with this, because it plays well, but I guarantee you that BATs will nitpick on that01:07:275 - How about little sv bumps here? Imo it'll feel just right to have 1,2x->0,8x SV down here
01:12:900 - Add on 5th for drum
01:18:614 - Not accenting drum here?
01:19:418 - Same as before, I like that, I'm sure it's fun, but BATs will nitpick that01:25:013 (85013|2,85073|3) - This should be 1/8 stair listen at 25%
01:26:382 - Add one note? You've mapped that sound before with 3 notes and here you have 2 LNs
01:48:704 (108704|0) - Move to 3rd
01:51:739 (111739|5) - Move to 5th
01:53:704 - That's a pretty awkward anchor on space, this will totally kill left hand players. Also I'm not sure, you seem to use both chords and LNs for the same sound and hitsounds to accent claps/kicks (idk which, probably kick), maybe reduce notes when there's no kick?02:07:632 - Add, kicks are accented with 2 notes on this section
02:08:882 - Add on 4th maybe?
02:09:775 - WTFFFFF 1000x SV ;A; is that even rankable?02:21:204 - Add one more?
02:21:739 - How about trying something like this:
02:22:275 - Again the 1/4's02:23:704 - How about this for better hand ballance //this section is quite biased on right hand:
02:27:989 - Yummy =w=
02:40:489 (160489|5,160489|2,160579|1,160668|0,160668|4,160757|1,160846|6,160846|2,160936|1,161025|3,161025|0,161114|1) - Ctrl+H for hand ballance?
02:45:132 - Add one or two notes, that crash sounds suitable even for 6-chord lol
02:53:704 - No LNs like on 02:50:846 - ?
02:54:775 (174775|3,174775|1,174775|5,174954|5,174954|1,174954|3) - I don't quite get why there are 3 notes in both, first one should be 2 and second one 1 imo
03:01:516 - Drum here //idk if you want to map it
03:01:605 - ^
03:01:784 - ^
03:01:873 - ^
03:06:382 -
Again lol the 1kx sv03:13:346 - Shouldn't this be like that according to music? //1/4 LNs for guitar and stale LN for violin(?)
03:16:561 (196561|0,197096|2,197186|1,197275|0,197364|1,197454|2,197543|1,197632|0,197721|1) - Wow this is so cluttered, it's practically impossible to execute unless you're ET :V
03:19:061 (199061|5,199061|6,199150|6,199150|5,199239|6,199239|5,199329|5,199329|6) - This is wrong, not only is it bad to play, but also 03:19:150 (199150|6,199150|5) - shouldn't even be there. It should be 1 note at best and in diffrent place
03:19:418 - I didn't want to point out another wrong 1/4, but eh, this feels like a totally missed guitar (I suppose you're mapping it with those longer LNs, but it still feels that way)04:12:632 -
Again pointing out the 1k SV04:39:192 (279192|4,279192|0) - Sound is on 04:39:254 - (1/12)
04:41:461 (281461|3) - move to 04:41:476 - (1/12)
04:42:201 (282201|5) - Move to 04:42:217 - (1/12)
04:45:118 (285118|2,285118|6) - 04:45:180 - (1/12)
04:45:890 - Missing note
04:46:877 (286877|1,286924|5,286924|3) - Single note on 04:46:847 - two notes on 04:46:908 -
04:47:387 (287387|3) - On 04:47:402 -
04:48:127 (288127|5) - On 04:48:143 -
04:48:914 (288914|3,288914|0) - On 04:48:945 - (1/12 later) // I've checked all of these at 25% about 10 times[Insane]
OD 7,5 at least
I recomend you to nerf this diff by ~0,1 sr to make spread safe to rank. Right now it's 1,44 star gap between Insane and Hard and 1,5 is already unrankable00:00:802 (802|2,824|3) - Same as on Luminescence
00:04:596 - Intentional? // Refference to Luminescence
00:07:454 - ^
00:14:061 - Add
00:14:418 - Add
00:16:114 (16114|5) - Imo it's unnecessary jack, move to 7th
00:16:561 - Make this as [357] chord to avoid weird shield on 00:15:132 (15132|0,16561|0) - 00:23:525 - Add for plate maybe?
00:53:346 - Add for consistency
01:05:846 - Why is this a double stair? It's even a single stair in Luminescence
01:06:829 - Quite loud drum here
01:12:900 - Missing drum note
01:13:614 - ^
01:18:614 - ^
01:25:013 (85013|2,85073|3) - This should be 1/8 stair, listen at 25%02:09:775 - Pointing out 1kx SV for the sake of it02:21:650 - No note here? Drum is going here
02:41:918 - Maybe this to avoid weird shields?
02:42:900 - Add on 3rd
02:45:132 - It's quite hard to catch those notes with 100ms between speedup and notes, move SV a bit earlier maybe?03:06:382 (186382|3) - Same story, but here with 1kx SV and 89 ms to react it's literally impossible to release this LN on time when sightreading. Move slowdown earlier03:11:918 (191918|2) - Delete to be consistent on note density
03:13:346 - Same as Luminescence
03:15:489 - Add for consistency
03:50:132 - Start speeding up SV from here //0,86x here, 0,91x on 03:50:400 - , 0,96x on 03:50:668 - would be my idea for it
04:08:704 (248704|3,248882|3,249061|3,249239|3) - and 04:10:132 (250132|3,250311|3,250489|3,250668|3) - Those look like total pain in the ass to play, rearrange to make it more comfortable
04:12:632 - Same thing again04:17:454 - See 00:04:596
04:18:704 - Add
04:19:418 - Remove one
04:26:204 - This maybe? // Easier to hit with some space between stairs
04:39:192 (279192|4,279192|0) - Sound is on 04:39:254 - (1/12)
04:41:461 (281461|3) - move to 04:41:476 - (1/12)
04:42:201 (282201|5) - Move to 04:42:217 - (1/12)
04:45:118 (285118|2,285118|6) - 04:45:180 - (1/12)
04:45:890 - Missing note
04:46:877 (286877|1,286924|5,286924|3) - Single note on 04:46:847 - two notes on 04:46:908 -
04:47:387 (287387|3) - On 04:47:402 -
04:48:127 (288127|5) - On 04:48:143 -
04:48:914 (288914|3,288914|0) - On 04:48:945 - (1/12 later) // I've checked all of these at 25% about 10 times^ Basically copied from Luminescence since it's the same thing, you can just use reference option in editor
I'm not going to mod rest, sorry, but I'm not feeling good lately :X
Good luck anyways! o/
