1. Easy (1.57 stars, 95 notes)
2. Hard (2.98 stars, 215 notes)
3. Insane (3.83 stars, 280 notes)
4. Normal (2.24 stars, 155 notes)

KantoKun wrote:

Goose house~~

why not accept GD ; [ ] ;
//scream

1. 00:26:114 (1) - nazi，223,179
2. 00:52:176 (1) - NC？
3. 01:21:051 (5) - 跟歌词的我我的意见是这个NC，然后01:21:614 (1) - 取消NC，然后01:22:364 (3) - NC，比较好读点

1. 00:48:614 (1) - 取消NC，这个NC好像没什么必要
2. 00:58:739 (4,1) - blanket吧
3. 01:16:739 (4,1) - 同上
4. 01:21:239 (3) - 意见和insane一样，这段我觉得跟歌词不错啊，大白线听不出重音NC不太起作用，这个NC然后01:21:614 (1) - 取消NC吧

1. 00:03:614 (1,2,3,4) - 这个四方微妙的DS不同，开最小的gird弄四方吧，1.5的ds

1. 00:03:614 (1) - 音效美丽，尾巴加whistle
2. 00:04:364 (2) - 音效又美丽，头加whistle
3. 00:24:989 (4,1) - blanket
4. 01:11:114 (3) - NC
5. 01:21:989 (4) - 这个节奏很怪啊，前面是1/1突然又变成2/1了，放在01:21:614，我觉得效果好多了

kanpakyin wrote:

我不會做圖了

1. Tags: opening romance drama music a-1 pictures

1. 00:09:051 (3) - Add whistle at head? I'm sure that it is the same sound as 00:08:676 (2) - , also like you putted: 00:06:051 (4) -
2. 00:08:676 (2,3) - I feel it is quite straight for current pattern, move (3) abit to the left (1~3 grids). The pattern looks nicer for me. Why not?
3. 00:14:114 (1) - This is up to you, I still think the tail of this slider should be stacked completely with 00:12:614 (1). looks not good? Just a idea.
4. 00:19:739 (4) - I don't understand why this tail has whistle but 00:16:739 (4) - is not.
5. 00:28:364 (3) - Moving to 348/167 is better balance with 00:29:114 (1). 00:29:676 (2) - If you fix it, don't forget to fix the placement of this slider that its tail is stacked completely with that circle.
6. 00:33:239 (4) - I really don't appreciate this. I'm sure that it should be 1/2 slider. The voice that I can hear be "no...o". The "o" is lower than "no". So 1/2 is clearly more sensible. This pattern is also nice enough, maybe try it?
   
   Example

   
7. 00:37:832 (4,5,6) - Etou... What can I hear? I don't think 3 these circles work well. I'm not sure but I can hear small drums at 00:37:739 - 00:37:926 - . Ofc that they aren't single drums, I can hear them "zzzz". So I think using 2 sliders 1/4 here is better for rhythm. Single circles often work well with the voice more than instrument. Remove 00:37:551 (4,5,6,7) , then put a single circle at 00:37:551 - . Next, creat 2 sliders 1/4 at 00:37:739 - and 00:37:926 -
   
   Example

   
8. 00:46:739 (4) - Add whistle at the tail. Nice sound for following the intrument of song?
9. 00:51:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Creating the volumn is becoming louder and add whistle all. I really like this idea like your Claris map (with drum instead)
10. 01:04:739 (6) - Change into 2 circles, creating jump for 2nd circle is nice both rhythm and pattern for me.
11. 01:09:426 (5) - Add whistle. The sound is great for my ears.
12. 01:11:676 (3) - Move to 380/248. The tail is stacked completely with the head of 01:10:176 (3) - . Why not?
13. 01:16:926 (8) - 48/148. The flow and jump is interesting.
14. 01:17:676 (2) - Move abit up, not stack with 01:16:551 (6) - . Currently I feel it is bad.
15. 01:21:801 (2) - Add whistle at head. It is as 01:20:676 (4) - .
16. 01:25:176 (2) - Following the instrument? I feel it is quite boring here. Ignore the voice at 01:25:364 - isn't a good idea. 01:25:176 (2) - Change into 1/2 slider, then creating a circle at 01:25:551 -
    
    Example

    
17. 01:27:426 (5) - This is your plan, right? My mean is, jump from (5) to the center of screenshot to spin? >w< If not, I still hope you can move it to 248/296, it is a better flow for me.
18. 01:26:114 (1) - Add whistle at head. I feel it is needed.

1. 00:21:614 (1,2,3) - I guees you need to balance these DS
2. 00:25:551 (3) - 448/122 is nicer with my viewing.
3. 00:33:239 (4) - as Insane
4. 00:52:739 (3) - Move to 188/100 is better balance.
5. 01:15:239 (3) - This slider is so off, it ignored so many things (both the vocal and the intruments). If instrument, I can hear drumbank at 01:15:426 - 01:15:520 - . If the vocal, there is it at 01:15:426 - with the word "na".
   
   Example

   
6. 01:27:239 (2,3) - Creat a far jump, it isn't too difficult for last note

1. 00:02:676 (6) - Move to 328/88. The flow is better for now
2. 00:22:364 (5) - Opposite with (4), my mean is Ctrl+J this slider. The pattern is nicer than old one.
3. 00:32:864 (2) - Move to 232/216. 00:33:426 (3) - to 440/208. 00:33:614 (4) - 338/120. Like that, the pattern is improved better.
4. 01:05:114 (1,2,3,4) - Really quite difficult for new players to be able to read this. I'm sure they will think they need to click hte (4) before instead of (3). Need to improved the pattern to make easier to read.
5. 01:07:739 (8,1,2) - This rhythm runs so randomly. I mean they don't follow anything.
   
   Example

   

1. Just 2 white is enough for new player to be ready for next notes, no need more, 00:14:864 - I mean you can start to map from here.
2. 00:48:989 (4) - Change into 1/1 slider and add a circle afterward. So, they will follow the voice. Feel better!~
3. 01:17:864 - same as 00:14:864 -
4. 01:21:989 (4) - Move this to 01:21:614 - following the voice better. 01:20:114 (1,2,3,4) - They will be more logical.

Your map is so awesome. So I only find something. Really great!! Hope it helps you something. Good luck for ranking soon!

Oyatsu wrote:

Hello Gu-san
~ My 100th kudosu ~
[General]

1. Tags: opening romance drama music a-1 picturesorz quite lazy to add those

[Insane]

1. 00:09:051 (3) - Add whistle at head? I'm sure that it is the same sound as 00:08:676 (2) - , also like you putted: 00:06:051 (4) - k
2. 00:08:676 (2,3) - I feel it is quite straight for current pattern, move (3) abit to the left (1~3 grids). The pattern looks nicer for me. Why not?k
3. 00:14:114 (1) - This is up to you, I still think the tail of this slider should be stacked completely with 00:12:614 (1). looks not good? Just a idea.in fact,they is a long time enough,you can hardly see 00:12:614 (1) when playing 00:14:114 (1)
4. 00:19:739 (4) - I don't understand why this tail has whistle but 00:16:739 (4) - is not.if you hear carefully,the piano pattern is different in these 2 parts
5. 00:28:364 (3) - Moving to 348/167 is better balance with 00:29:114 (1). 00:29:676 (2) - If you fix it, don't forget to fix the placement of this slider that its tail is stacked completely with that circle.just set a wobbing sense cuz of the music here
6. 00:33:239 (4) - I really don't appreciate this. I'm sure that it should be 1/2 slider. The voice that I can hear be "no...o". The "o" is lower than "no". So 1/2 is clearly more sensible. This pattern is also nice enough, maybe try it?as I said in hard
7. 00:37:832 (4,5,6) - Etou... What can I hear? I don't think 3 these circles work well. I'm not sure but I can hear small drums at 00:37:739 - 00:37:926 - . Ofc that they aren't single drums, I can hear them "zzzz". So I think using 2 sliders 1/4 here is better for rhythm. Single circles often work well with the voice more than instrument. Remove 00:37:551 (4,5,6,7) , then put a single circle at 00:37:551 - . Next, creat 2 sliders 1/4 at 00:37:739 - and 00:37:926 - i'm not sure as well..it sounds more like one guitar sound but..will consider
8. 00:46:739 (4) - Add whistle at the tail. Nice sound for following the intrument of song?not want to add whistle in this part
9. 00:51:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Creating the volumn is becoming louder and add whistle all. I really like this idea like your Claris map (with drum instead)k
10. 01:04:739 (6) - Change into 2 circles, creating jump for 2nd circle is nice both rhythm and pattern for me.it will be bad if 5 circles togeter
11. 01:09:426 (5) - Add whistle. The sound is great for my ears.k
12. 01:11:676 (3) - Move to 380/248. The tail is stacked completely with the head of 01:10:176 (3) - . Why not?in fact it won't be seen when playing
13. 01:16:926 (8) - 48/148. The flow and jump is interesting.want to leave the pattern..
14. 01:17:676 (2) - Move abit up, not stack with 01:16:551 (6) - . Currently I feel it is bad.in fact it won't be seen when playing
15. 01:21:801 (2) - Add whistle at head. It is as 01:20:676 (4) - .k
16. 01:25:176 (2) - Following the instrument? I feel it is quite boring here. Ignore the voice at 01:25:364 - isn't a good idea. 01:25:176 (2) - Change into 1/2 slider, then creating a circle at 01:25:551 - do a little change
    
    Example

    
17. 01:27:426 (5) - This is your plan, right? My mean is, jump from (5) to the center of screenshot to spin? >w< If not, I still hope you can move it to 248/296, it is a better flow for me.changed in another way
18. 01:26:114 (1) - Add whistle at head. I feel it is needed.k

[Hard]

1. 00:21:614 (1,2,3) - I guees you need to balance these DSyes
2. 00:25:551 (3) - 448/122 is nicer with my viewing.just want to set such a sense here
3. 00:33:239 (4) - as InsaneI'm not following the vocal "no".I'm following a guitar sound here
4. 00:52:739 (3) - Move to 188/100 is better balance.
5. 01:15:239 (3) - This slider is so off, it ignored so many things (both the vocal and the intruments). If instrument, I can hear drumbank at 01:15:426 - 01:15:520 - . If the vocal, there is it at 01:15:426 - with the word "na".wrong time point?I don't hear vocal here and I mainly don't follow vocal ofen
6. 01:27:239 (2,3) - Creat a far jump, it isn't too difficult for last note yes

[Normal]

1. 00:02:676 (6) - Move to 328/88. The flow is better for nowhm//I like the present setting
2. 00:22:364 (5) - Opposite with (4), my mean is Ctrl+J this slider. The pattern is nicer than old one.the slider is not symmetrical,so if I do so,it looks a little unbalanced,I mean it looks more wide
3. 00:32:864 (2) - Move to 232/216. 00:33:426 (3) - to 440/208. 00:33:614 (4) - 338/120. Like that, the pattern is improved better.338/120?DS dont suppose to do so..
4. 01:05:114 (1,2,3,4) - Really quite difficult for new players to be able to read this. I'm sure they will think they need to click hte (4) before instead of (3). Need to improved the pattern to make easier to read.k,changed a pattem
5. 01:07:739 (8,1,2) - This rhythm runs so randomly. I mean they don't follow anything. ^

[Easy]

1. Just 2 white is enough for new player to be ready for next notes, no need more, 00:14:864 - I mean you can start to map from here.it seems that it should be 4 beats now,many bats told me so
2. 00:48:989 (4) - Change into 1/1 slider and add a circle afterward. So, they will follow the voice. Feel better!~don't
3. 01:17:864 - same as 00:14:864 -
4. 01:21:989 (4) - Move this to 01:21:614 - following the voice better. 01:20:114 (1,2,3,4) - They will be more logical.not mainly follow vocal so :<

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Your map is so awesome. So I only find something. Really great!! Hope it helps you something. Good luck for ranking soon!

1PSA wrote:

求GD wwwwwwww

1. I have no idea about the metadata. Try to confirm with JMQ members if possible.
2. Video might contain NSFW content (naked). dunno if it's safe enough for our younger players.
   
   lol

   

1. 00:17:864 (1) - i thought you intended to have NC on every 2 long white ticks, is this mistaken?
2. 00:20:114 - feels empty here as you're mainly following drums. add a note?

1. OD:4 also probably could use HP4.
2. 00:03:614 (1,2,3,4) - fix the DS difference here. large enough to be concerned.
3. 00:07:926 (1) - ^
4. 00:24:989 (4) - ^
5. 还有很多0.05以上的DS差，我觉得有可能会爆炸，你有空都修一下。最近大家都被un怕了。
6. 01:05:114 (1,2) - try to improve blanket without using grid snap.

1. OD:6
2. 00:03:426 (4) - could have NC on this one.

1. awesome.

Oracle wrote:

General

1. I have no idea about the metadata. Try to confirm with JMQ members if possible.i'm sure
2. Video might contain NSFW content (naked). dunno if it's safe enough for our younger players.fulifulifuli
   
   lol

   

Easy

1. 00:17:864 (1) - i thought you intended to have NC on every 2 long white ticks, is this mistaken?the first NC start at 00:14:114
2. 00:20:114 - feels empty here as you're mainly following drums. add a note?加的话这部分太难了

Normal

1. OD:4 also probably could use HP4.OD4..HP4 is a little fast imo
2. 00:03:614 (1,2,3,4) - fix the DS difference here. large enough to be concerned.a big time space here..and if using 1.5x there will be no space to place this
3. 00:07:926 (1) - ^
4. 00:24:989 (4) - ^
5. 还有很多0.05以上的DS差，我觉得有可能会爆炸，你有空都修一下。最近大家都被un怕了。改改改 都改
6. 01:05:114 (1,2) - try to improve blanket without using grid snap.k

Hard

1. OD:6k
2. 00:03:426 (4) - could have NC on this one.my fault

Insane

1. awesome.

in all, very clean and enjoyable mapset.