This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, April 11, 2015 at 4:57:45 PM

Artist: Boa
Title: Duvet (TV Size)
Source: シリアルエクスペリメンツレイン
Tags: Iwakura Lain Opening op Serial Experiments Lain Anime
BPM: 93.25
Filesize: 12416kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.26 stars, 79 notes)
2. Hard (3.2 stars, 234 notes)
3. Normal (1.94 stars, 131 notes)

Download: Boa - Duvet (TV Size)
Download: Boa - Duvet (TV Size) (no video)
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"No matter where you are... everyone is always connected." - Lain Iwakura
A new mapper here \(°_°\) All difficulties were made by me. Hope you like it >.<

Edit:
06/03/14 Changing the BPM to 93.2 and offset to 2169 and 41973
08/08/14 Changing the audio and adjusting the offset
08/14/14 Change the offset, again, hope it would be correct now >.< Did some self modding too
08/15/14 Uploaded a new map... Maybe have to call a BAT soon...
08/26/14 Random update. (Did a little self-modding though...) Need BATs~
09/04/14 Change both, BPM and offset... Hope it would be correct now...

From my Q ~ To get this map modded, you have to mod other maps, if you dunno how to mod, just see how people mod ~ ^^ (So I'm gonna mod short)
General
-Ehh, the mp3 is low and the hitsounds are high? That's unrankable, make the hitsounds low~
!!YOU MUST USE DS(DISTANCE SNAP) IN EVERY DIFF AND MAP YOU MAKE. IF YOU DON'T, THEN YOU CAN'T RANK THIS MAP!!

-Remove countdown, and check the AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) for map problems

Gl btw ~

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my Q ~ To get this map modded, you have to mod other maps, if you dunno how to mod, just see how people mod ~ ^^ (So I'm gonna mod short)
General
-Ehh, the mp3 is low and the hitsounds are high? That's unrankable, make the hitsounds low~ -Fixed-
!!YOU MUST USE DS(DISTANCE SNAP) IN EVERY DIFF AND MAP YOU MAKE. IF YOU DON'T, THEN YOU CAN'T RANK THIS MAP!! -Fine, fixed(?) >.<-

-Remove countdown, and check the AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) for map problems -Fixed, no problem left according to AiMod-

Gl btw ~ <--- Thank you >.<

Thank you for your help~! I really appreciate it (and the star too~<3)

Kudosu given~<3

from Lazy queue
i'm sorry but i cant mod this map well
so just some issue:
Easy and Normal Must open distance snap all time
example IN easy 00:02:177 (1,2,3) - this is not allowed !
so select a suitable distance spacing and dont change it in E&N
also easy and normal cant change slider velociry it's unrankable
hard is fine
good luck
no kd ~

gxytcgxytc wrote:

from Lazy queue
i'm sorry but i cant mod this map well
so just some issue:
Easy and Normal Must open distance snap all time
example IN easy 00:02:177 (1,2,3) - this is not allowed !
so select a suitable distance spacing and dont change it in E&N
also easy and normal cant change slider velociry it's unrankable
hard is fine
good luck
no kd ~

Okay... All fixed~ I have to learn much more >.<

But, on my Normal, is this 00:18:566 (2) - or this 01:37:463 (6) - allowed? ._.

Thank you anyway~

hey, thanks for using my Q!

aku mod pake b.indo boleh kan?

GENERAL
easy

• normal
  
  1. 1. CS= 4
     2. OD=4
     3. 00:45:240(6) apus
     4. 01:20:591(1) ganti dengan spinner
     5. 01:33:446(1) ganti jadi reverse slider ( yg ada tanda panah ituloh)
     6. kiai time, sama kyak yg easy
  
  hard
  
  1. OD=6/7
  2. CS=5
  3. HD=6
  4. 00:40:741(1,1) hapus, biar ada senggang waktu buat istirahat(?)

Celizavia wrote:

hey, thanks for using my Q!

aku mod pake b.indo boleh kan?

GENERAL

[*]masih perlu di otak-atik lagii hitsoundnya, sesuaikan dengan iringan lagunya <--- aku kurang bisa pake hitsoud >.< jadi kubiarin gitu dulu, kecuali kk mau bantuin :3
[*]pake kiai time! biar mapnya jadi seru, kalo mau pake bisa di 01:02:594 sampai ke 01:12:878 <--- menurut aku sih lagunya kurang cocok buat pake kiai, jadi kubiarin gitu dulu ya...
[*]Cek AiMod<--- sudah ^^ udah g ada masalah lagi

easy

[*]pake spinner dari 01:38:588 sampai 01:41:159 <--- Good idea~! Fixed ^^
[*]spinner lagi dr 00:41:866 ke 00:45:883 <--- Aku ga suka ada spinner di tengah tengah lagu >.<
[*]kalo bisa penggunaan slidersnya lebih kreatif, pake pola symmetrical style ato yg lain <--- udah males ngerombak jadi dibiarin dulu mungkin di map berikutnya ^^

[symmetrical things]

• normal
  
  1. 1. CS= 4 <--- kalo normal, aku lebih suka CS 3...
     2. OD=4 <--- karena gampang jadi tetep 3 aja deh ^^
     3. 00:45:240(6) apus <--- dibiarin gitu dulu deh... ^^
     4. 01:20:591(1) ganti dengan spinner <--- kalo pake spinner, kayaknya feelnya kurang dapet, jadi tetep slider ya ^^
     5. 01:33:446(1) ganti jadi reverse slider ( yg ada tanda panah ituloh) <--- Kubiarin gitu dulu ^^
     6. kiai time, sama kyak yg easy<--- sama alasannya kayak yg di general
  
  
  hard
  
  1. OD=6/7 <--- hardnya gampang, jadi 5 aja deh
  2. CS=5 <--- aku g suka circle size 5
  3. HD=6 <--- HD nya kubiarin 7 buat gantiin circle size ^^
  4. 00:40:741(1,1) hapus, biar ada senggang waktu buat istirahat(?) <--- Kalo TV Size, aku g suka pake break

Oke deh kk, itu aja yg aku fix, thanks ya

Kudosu?

Add ''(TV Size)'' in the title since this is an OP ~

No kds

Nice map ♥

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Add ''(TV Size)'' in the title since this is an OP ~

No kds

Okay, done~
Thank you~

Hi.
As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

General:
Add some kiai time.
Add some hitsounds.

Easy:
00:27:243 (3) - Reverse selection?
01:18:020 (1) - Make the slider end point to 01:19:306 (2) - .
01:30:232 (2,3) - Fix the placement.

Normal:
01:10:950 (5,6) - Stack properly?

Hard:
Lower the AR! At least at 6-7
Seems to be good at my POV.

Good mapset! I like Lain. Great anime!
Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi.
As requested.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

General:
Add some kiai time. <--- Maybe I have to add some kiai after all.... Fixed
Add some hitsounds. <--- I've added some... maybe it doesn't sound too good... I'm not good at hitsounding

Easy:
00:27:243 (3) - Reverse selection? <--- No, thanks
01:18:020 (1) - Make the slider end point to 01:19:306 (2) - . <--- No change
01:30:232 (2,3) - Fix the placement. <---- ?

Normal:
01:10:950 (5,6) - Stack properly? <--- It can't be helped because of the Distance Snap

Hard:
Lower the AR! At least at 6-7 <--- I think AR 8 is good enough for me... so no change
Seems to be good at my POV.

Good mapset! I like Lain. Great anime!
Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

Thank you for your mod

Semangat ! aku kasih star yah
Kalo aku ga sibuk nanti aku bantu mod

Mako Sakata wrote:

Semangat ! aku kasih star yah
Kalo aku ga sibuk nanti aku bantu mod

Makasih kakak

Halloooo ! kak sekalian M4M dong sama map aku, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/107838

[General]

1. Aku mau tanya, videonya dipotong? sepintas aku liat di sini http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDAeOatiooM&feature=kp agak beda
2. Untuk file audionya suaranya kurang gede menurut aku, kalo mau coba diganti sama ini http://puu.sh/8XqM8.mp3 dengan bpm:93.350 dan ofset 2196 sama 42046, tapi terserah kamu ding mau dipake atau engga lagian aku masih belajar timing : ))
3. Aku nemu gambar yg lebih bagus dr segi ukuran http://puu.sh/8XsMF.jpg diganti aja kalo mau
4. Di bagian design "Letter box during breaks" engga usah diceklis
5. Kayanya perlu custom hitsound deh, bagian clapnya kurang enak didenger, mungkin bisa coba cek hitsound pack dari LKs https://osu.ppy.sh/u/LKs
6. Mungkin sourcenya bisa diganti jadi ini シリアルエクスペリメンツレイン , terus pindahin Serial Experiments Lain dari source ke Tags

[Easy]

1. 00:05:390 (2,3,4) - Bagian itu mungkin bentuknya bisa dibuat lebih melengkung kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XCRP.jpg keliatannya bakal lebih rapih
2. 00:07:961 (5,6,1) - Bagian itu mungkin bentuknya bisa dibuat begini http://puu.sh/8XCYs.jpg flownya bakal lebih natural
3. 00:12:460 (3,4,5) - Selanjutnya biar lebih engga kaku bentuknya bisa dibuat begini http://puu.sh/8XDg3.jpg
4. 00:17:602 (1) - Kalo ngikutin mod di atas, bisa ubah posisi slider yg ini pake Ctrl+J terus Ctrl+< terus ditao di x:300 y:316 kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XDl7.jpg
5. 00:20:816 (2) - Itu bisa digeser ke posisi x:188 y:360 terus untuk bagian ini 00:21:459 (3,1) - bentuknya bisa dibuat kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XDBv.jpg
6. 00:25:315 (2) - Kalo ngikutin mod di atas, slider itu bisa di Ctrl+J terus pindah ke posisi x:176 y:236
7. 00:27:243 (3,4) - Selanjutnya bagian ini bisa dibentuk kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XDNN.jpg
8. 00:31:100 (5) - Circle itu coba pindah posisi ke x:480 y:308, terus bagian ini bentuknya bisa dibuat begini http://puu.sh/8XE0z.jpg
9. 00:34:956 (2) - Coba circlenya digeser ke x:328 y:24 terus 00:35:599 (3) - bagian itu dibentuk kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XHrA.jpg
10. 00:46:526 (4,5,1) - Itu bentuknya lebih baik agak melengkung, coba kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XHzD.jpg
11. 00:48:454 (2) - Mungkin lebih baik dibuat melengkung aja deh gini http://puu.sh/8XHFD.jpg
12. 00:50:382 (3,4,5) - Bentuknya terlalu lancip, coba dibuat agak lengkung lagi
13. 01:00:023 (3,4) - Blanketnya bisa dirapihin lagi biar keliatan bagus
14. 01:02:594 (1) - Dibuat slider melengkung aja http://puu.sh/8XHNh.jpg
15. 01:05:165 (3,4,5) - Coba ritme ini aja biar lebih cocok, http://puu.sh/8XHVP.jpg
16. 01:09:664 (2,3) - Diganti pake 1/2 slider aja
17. 01:10:950 (4,1) - Bagian itu biar engga overlap, baiknya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XI4c.jpg atau bisa coba yg lain
18. 01:20:270 (3) - Itu baiknya didelete aja, terus slider ini 01:20:591 (1) - mulainya dari 01:20:270 -
19. Oh iya untuk suara circle atau slider paling rendah ga boleh 5% kecuali spinner mungkin
20. 01:30:875 (4) - Ctel+> terus pindah ke x:108 y:196

Sedikit komentar ya, udah bagus kok diffnya tp untuk easy kayanya lebih baik nadanya dimulai dari white tick diakhiri jg di white tick, jd tetep readable sama pemain yang masih belajar, untuk New Combo bisa ikutin setiap stanza (big white tick), flow sama paternnya harus dikembangin lagi hitsound juga harus konsisten

[Normal]

1. AR + 1 deh kalo cuma 4 kayanya kerasa pelan
2. 00:17:602 (1,2) - Aduh bagian itu buat bingung, coba dipisah aja kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XJCO.jpg
3. 01:06:451 (7) - Itu lebih baik agak dilurusin aja buat kaya huruf S
4. 01:07:736 (1,3) - Keliatan engga bagus karena overlap, circle ini 01:09:664 (3) - mungkin bisa dipindah ke x:324 y:216 bentuknya jadi begini aja http://puu.sh/8XJRU.jpg
5. 01:11:593 (6) - Slider itu buat flownya kacau deh, menurut aku diganti aja posisinya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YrAU.jpg terus 01:12:878 (1) - Yang itu diganti aja bentuknya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YrGb.jpg
6. 01:14:485 (2,3,4,5) - Coba 4 cirle itu bentuknya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YrYj.jpg
7. 01:19:948 (4,1) - Bagian itu lebih baik pake ritme ini aja http://puu.sh/8YseP.jpg lebih cocok sama lagunya
8. 01:37:302 (5) - Delete circle itu deh kayanya terlalu susah buat Normal, terus ganti sama 1/1 slider kaya gini http://puu.sh/8Ysqn.jpg

Yang ini lebih bagus dari segi flownya cuma ada beberapa yang aneh flownya, hitsound juga perlu ditingkatkan deh

[Hard]

1. OD + 1 deh
2. 00:15:674 (3) - Slider itu bisa distack di bagian akhir slider ini 00:15:031 (1) - kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YsOO.jpg biar engga overlap sama slider ini 00:15:031 (1) -
3. 01:20:109 (5,6) - Kalo bagian itu didelete bgmn? biar lebih sesuai sama ritme lagunya, terus diganti sama ritme ini http://puu.sh/8YtDa.jpg terus pake timing point hijau di red tick, det SVnya jadi 0.50 biar dpt feelnya
4. 01:24:769 (5) - Pindah posisi ke x: 300 y:180 terus 01:24:930 (6) - Itu juga pindah ke x: 328 y:96 biar lebih rapih dalam stacking circle (6)

Diff Hard nya baguss, mungkin bisa dirapihin lagi blanket sama beberapa flownya terus hitsound juga

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Keseluruhan udah bagus kok tapi masih bisa ditingkatin lagi, oh iya semua yang aku bilang cuma saran kok ga harus diikutin semua atau mungkin bisa dijadiin referensi~
Segitu aja dari aku, kalo ada kesulitan bisa tanya ke aku pas ingame. Semangat !

Mako Sakata wrote:

Halloooo ! kak sekalian M4M dong sama map aku, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/107838 <--- wkwkwk oke deh Tunggu aja ya kak ^^ btw, aku masih newbie, jadi maap ya kalo modku jelek

[General]

1. Aku mau tanya, videonya dipotong? sepintas aku liat di sini http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDAeOatiooM&feature=kp agak beda <--- Iya, yang bagian "Present day, present time"nya aku potong emang agak kurang pas sih, sekarang kayaknya lebih pas dikit
2. Untuk file audionya suaranya kurang gede menurut aku, kalo mau coba diganti sama ini http://puu.sh/8XqM8.mp3 dengan bpm:93.350 dan ofset 2196 sama 42046, tapi terserah kamu ding mau dipake atau engga lagian aku masih belajar timing : )) <--- Engga deh kak....
3. Aku nemu gambar yg lebih bagus dr segi ukuran http://puu.sh/8XsMF.jpg diganti aja kalo mau <--- Engga, makasih
4. Di bagian design "Letter box during breaks" engga usah diceklis <--- Oke, fixed
5. Kayanya perlu custom hitsound deh, bagian clapnya kurang enak didenger, mungkin bisa coba cek hitsound pack dari LKs https://osu.ppy.sh/u/LKs <--- Engga dulu deh kak, mungkin di map aku berikutnya aku cari2 dulu custom hitsound yang pas
6. Mungkin sourcenya bisa diganti jadi ini シリアルエクスペリメンツレイン , terus pindahin Serial Experiments Lain dari source ke Tags <--- sipp

[Easy]

1. 00:05:390 (2,3,4) - Bagian itu mungkin bentuknya bisa dibuat lebih melengkung kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XCRP.jpg keliatannya bakal lebih rapih <--- Fixed
2. 00:07:961 (5,6,1) - Bagian itu mungkin bentuknya bisa dibuat begini http://puu.sh/8XCYs.jpg flownya bakal lebih natural <--- Fixed
3. 00:12:460 (3,4,5) - Selanjutnya biar lebih engga kaku bentuknya bisa dibuat begini http://puu.sh/8XDg3.jpg <--- Fixed
4. 00:17:602 (1) - Kalo ngikutin mod di atas, bisa ubah posisi slider yg ini pake Ctrl+J terus Ctrl+< terus ditao di x:300 y:316 kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XDl7.jpg <--- Fixed
5. 00:20:816 (2) - Itu bisa digeser ke posisi x:188 y:360 terus untuk bagian ini 00:21:459 (3,1) - bentuknya bisa dibuat kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XDBv.jpg <--- Engga deh...
6. 00:25:315 (2) - Kalo ngikutin mod di atas, slider itu bisa di Ctrl+J terus pindah ke posisi x:176 y:236 <--- Nope
7. 00:27:243 (3,4) - Selanjutnya bagian ini bisa dibentuk kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XDNN.jpg <--- X
8. 00:31:100 (5) - Circle itu coba pindah posisi ke x:480 y:308, terus bagian ini bentuknya bisa dibuat begini http://puu.sh/8XE0z.jpg <--- No, thanks
9. 00:34:956 (2) - Coba circlenya digeser ke x:328 y:24 terus 00:35:599 (3) - bagian itu dibentuk kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XHrA.jpg <--- Nope
10. 00:46:526 (4,5,1) - Itu bentuknya lebih baik agak melengkung, coba kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XHzD.jpg <--- Fixed
11. 00:48:454 (2) - Mungkin lebih baik dibuat melengkung aja deh gini http://puu.sh/8XHFD.jpg <--- Okay
12. 00:50:382 (3,4,5) - Bentuknya terlalu lancip, coba dibuat agak lengkung lagi <--- Fixed
13. 01:00:023 (3,4) - Blanketnya bisa dirapihin lagi biar keliatan bagus <--- Sip
14. 01:02:594 (1) - Dibuat slider melengkung aja http://puu.sh/8XHNh.jpg <--- Oke
15. 01:05:165 (3,4,5) - Coba ritme ini aja biar lebih cocok, http://puu.sh/8XHVP.jpg <--- Fixed
16. 01:09:664 (2,3) - Diganti pake 1/2 slider aja <--- Engga dulu deh, emang sengaja kubikin kayak gitu
17. 01:10:950 (4,1) - Bagian itu biar engga overlap, baiknya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XI4c.jpg atau bisa coba yg lain <--- Good idea, fixed
18. 01:20:270 (3) - Itu baiknya didelete aja, terus slider ini 01:20:591 (1) - mulainya dari 01:20:270 - <--- Okeh
19. Oh iya untuk suara circle atau slider paling rendah ga boleh 5% kecuali spinner mungkin <--- Hmmm... okedeh
20. 01:30:875 (4) - Ctel+> terus pindah ke x:108 y:196 <--- No, thanks

Sedikit komentar ya, udah bagus kok diffnya tp untuk easy kayanya lebih baik nadanya dimulai dari white tick diakhiri jg di white tick, jd tetep readable sama pemain yang masih belajar, untuk New Combo bisa ikutin setiap stanza (big white tick), flow sama paternnya harus dikembangin lagi hitsound juga harus konsisten <--- oke deh, sippp

[Normal]

1. AR + 1 deh kalo cuma 4 kayanya kerasa pelan <--- Kayaknya cukup fine...
2. 00:17:602 (1,2) - Aduh bagian itu buat bingung, coba dipisah aja kaya gini http://puu.sh/8XJCO.jpg <--- Kayaknya fine aja deh kak, kalo ada modder lain yang komen tentang itu, baru aku ganti deh....
3. 01:06:451 (7) - Itu lebih baik agak dilurusin aja buat kaya huruf S <--- sipp
4. 01:07:736 (1,3) - Keliatan engga bagus karena overlap, circle ini 01:09:664 (3) - mungkin bisa dipindah ke x:324 y:216 bentuknya jadi begini aja http://puu.sh/8XJRU.jpg <--- Oke, tapi aku buat jadi begini http://puu.sh/8YUy2/3b3004440f.jpg
5. 01:11:593 (6) - Slider itu buat flownya kacau deh, menurut aku diganti aja posisinya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YrAU.jpg terus 01:12:878 (1) - Yang itu diganti aja bentuknya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YrGb.jpg <--- itu memang sengaja mulainya dari bawah
6. 01:14:485 (2,3,4,5) - Coba 4 cirle itu bentuknya kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YrYj.jpg <--- Kumodif jadi begini aja http://puu.sh/8YUBp/26daca418b.jpg
7. 01:19:948 (4,1) - Bagian itu lebih baik pake ritme ini aja http://puu.sh/8YseP.jpg lebih cocok sama lagunya <--- Engga dulu deh
8. 01:37:302 (5) - Delete circle itu deh kayanya terlalu susah buat Normal, terus ganti sama 1/1 slider kaya gini http://puu.sh/8Ysqn.jpg <--- Sepertinya fine2 saja

Yang ini lebih bagus dari segi flownya cuma ada beberapa yang aneh flownya, hitsound juga perlu ditingkatkan deh <--- (y)

[Hard]

1. OD + 1 deh <--- Fixed
2. 00:15:674 (3) - Slider itu bisa distack di bagian akhir slider ini 00:15:031 (1) - kaya gini http://puu.sh/8YsOO.jpg biar engga overlap sama slider ini 00:15:031 (1) - <--- Hmmm... aku buat gini deh, biar ga overlap XD http://puu.sh/8YUH4/5b542eacab.jpg
3. 01:20:109 (5,6) - Kalo bagian itu didelete bgmn? biar lebih sesuai sama ritme lagunya, terus diganti sama ritme ini http://puu.sh/8YtDa.jpg terus pake timing point hijau di red tick, det SVnya jadi 0.50 biar dpt feelnya <--- Engga deh....
4. 01:24:769 (5) - Pindah posisi ke x: 300 y:180 terus 01:24:930 (6) - Itu juga pindah ke x: 328 y:96 biar lebih rapih dalam stacking circle (6) <--- Oke

Diff Hard nya baguss, mungkin bisa dirapihin lagi blanket sama beberapa flownya terus hitsound juga <--- Sipp, thank you kaka

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Keseluruhan udah bagus kok tapi masih bisa ditingkatin lagi, oh iya semua yang aku bilang cuma saran kok ga harus diikutin semua atau mungkin bisa dijadiin referensi~
Segitu aja dari aku, kalo ada kesulitan bisa tanya ke aku pas ingame. Semangat !

Oke deh, trims ya kak~♥
Kudosu buat gantiin star yang kk kasih XD

おっす!やったよ!
from my queue and m4m
[General]
[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

That's all from me.
Hope this help and good luck~

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
from my queue and m4m
[General]

- If this an anime song add "Anime" to the tag then <--- Okay
- Use custom "SliderSlider.wav" (You can find it from other maps) to remove the current "SliderSlider" sound. it'll fit the song better <--- Hmmm, alright

[Easy]

1. 00:15:674 (4) - Too hard for easy~ perhaps to change this in to a cirlce? <--- I think its easier than circle....
2. 00:27:243 (3) - ^^^ ^
3. 00:37:527 (4) - ^^^ ^
4. 01:02:594 (1) - Move the second tick to the x:260 , y:48 ,to avoid overlap <--- Second tick?
5. 01:04:201 (2) - ^^^ to the x:196 , y:156 for a better flow~ <--- I think it's fine enough
6. 01:30:875 (4,5) - Overlap <--- It has to be overlapped because of the distance snap

[Normal]

1. Good enough for me~ <---- (y)

[Hard]

1. 2.0x distance for hard in the entire map is just... too hard... i suggest to reduce the distance about 1.5x. - 1.7x <--- I think it's fine enough
2. 00:07:961 (3,4) - Suddenly 3.0x jump~ consider to reduce the distance <--- It's actually fine, on slider, you don't have to move your cursor to the slider end to get 300, it's called slider leniency, it's also make the map more challenging
3. 00:17:120 (6,7,1) - ^^^ ^
4. 00:26:440 (3) - Anti jump~ ^
5. 00:27:404 (5,6) - 3.0x jump~ consider to reduce this~ ^
6. 00:35:278 (6,1) - ^^^ ^
7. 00:44:276 (3,1) - ^^^ ^
8. 00:47:329 (1,2,3) - ^^^ (4.6x in hard. . . .) ^
9. 00:52:632 (2,3) - ^^^ ^
10. 00:54:078 (2,3) - ^^^ ^
11. 00:55:042 (1,2,3) - ^^^ www and other pattern that use 3.0x~ ^

That's all from me.
Hope this help and good luck~

Okay ^^ thank you for your mod even though I don't change much....

I'll do some general stuff because I think it seems off

General

The first timing point starts late, I would go for 93.2 BPM and offset 2169
The second timing point sounds off, it seems better if it was offset 41973 and 93.2 BPM

Hard

00:40:580 (7) - I don't think this note is needed, remove it as the held music is at 00:40:420 (6)

Can't really tell the mistakes because the timing is off
Fix the timing and I think I might take a look again

Good luck

From Mod Q . . desu~

[General]

Q : Isn't Boa spelled like this > BoA ?

Easy :
HP Drain in Easy should be at least 2 , OK
OD - OK

Normal :
HP Drain - OK
OD - 4

Hard:
HP Drain - 6
OD - OK

Timing

BPM - 93.35 Correct

Offset - 2,177 Change to 570

( Just a Suggestion - Remove the 2nd Timing Point )




[Mod]

Easy - Ready

Normal
01:37:302 Move the note 01:37:142
01:37:463 Remove ( Didn't go with the beat )
01:37:463 Change it to a note
01:37:624 Add a note

Hard - Ready

Hi~ Sorry for late reply, I'm in the middle of exam week

neonat wrote:

I'll do some general stuff because I think it seems off

General

The first timing point starts late, I would go for 93.2 BPM and offset 2169 < Sounds good Fixed
The second timing point sounds off, it seems better if it was offset 41973 and 93.2 BPM < Fixed ^^

Hard

00:40:580 (7) - I don't think this note is needed, remove it as the held music is at 00:40:420 (6) < Not changing this yet... If another modder say this again, I might reconsider it...

Can't really tell the mistakes because the timing is off
Fix the timing and I think I might take a look again

Good luck

Thank you~ I should practice timing more ^^ I think this song's timing indeed pretty hard For me at least ><

xLoupGarou wrote:

From Mod Q . . desu~

[General]

Q : Isn't Boa spelled like this > BoA ? < Okay, fixed ^^

Easy :
HP Drain in Easy should be at least 2 , OK < (y)
OD - OK < (y)

Normal :
HP Drain - OK < (y)
OD - 4 < Another modder already said this before... Maybe I really have to change it... Fixed~

Hard:
HP Drain - 6 < Okay
OD - OK < (y)

Timing

BPM - 93.35 Correct < changed it to 93.2

Offset - 2,177 Change to 570 < I'm following neonat's timing, and I think it's good

( Just a Suggestion - Remove the 2nd Timing Point ) < It is used to reset the metronome so the second chorus would start on big white tick...




[Mod]

Easy - Ready < (y)

Normal < I think it's pretty fine, didn't change anything....
01:37:302 Move the note 01:37:142
01:37:463 Remove ( Didn't go with the beat )
01:37:463 Change it to a note
01:37:624 Add a note

Hard - Ready < (y)

Okay~ thank you for your mod

re-check, no kudosu

Hard

00:18:263 (2,4) - blanket better
00:22:126 (5,1) - ^
00:22:769 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,2) - blanket
00:25:988 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:460 (3,4) - ^
00:32:104 (4) - finish on the middle (repeating) part of slider
00:35:323 (6) - whistle on start of slider
00:36:289 (2,3,4) - the angle of movement is too acute, 00:36:772 (3) should not be placed too far right of the end of 00:36:289 (2) but instead, more towards below it's end
00:38:220 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:38:864 (2,3) - blanket better
00:40:634 (7) - yea I really think you should remove this one, it feels very extra
00:43:260 (1) - curve it more
00:44:548 (1,2) - blanket it better
00:47:445 (2) - start of slider is covered up, it isn't nice, I suggest you place it elsewhere
00:50:985 (4,5) - blanket better
00:51:629 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:03:217 (2,3) - blanket better
01:03:217 (2,5) - stack circle on end of slider
01:07:724 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:09:655 (6) - finish on end of slider
01:13:518 (2,4) - blanket better
01:15:127 (5) - finish on start of slider
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:20:277 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:20:116 (5,1) - blanket nicely
01:34:440 (4,6) - stack on end of slider
01:36:694 (2,3) - blanket nicely
01:39:269 (2,3) - ^

Normal

00:05:387 (5,6) - blanket nicely
00:17:619 (1,2) - it's not good to stack these 2, with such a big gap in time between them
00:22:769 (1) - finish instead of clap on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,3) - stack exactly on the ends
00:25:344 (4,5) - could blanket better
00:31:138 (5) - finish on end of slider
00:34:357 (3,4) - could blanket better
00:38:220 (1) - finish instead of clap
00:38:220 (1,3) - stack better
00:45:191 (6,8) - could blanket better
00:47:766 (2,3) - ^
00:52:273 (1) - finish on start of slider instead of clap
01:07:724 (1) - ^
01:09:977 (4) - finish on start of slider
01:11:586 (6) - looks weird in this position, because it is in an area where there were previously other objects
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:19:955 (4,1) - blanket nicely

Once again, good luck

Hi~! I was waiting for this....

neonat wrote:

re-check, no kudosu

Hard > It's all fixed, except...

00:18:263 (2,4) - blanket better
00:22:126 (5,1) - ^
00:22:769 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,2) - blanket
00:25:988 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:460 (3,4) - ^
00:32:104 (4) - finish on the middle (repeating) part of slider
00:35:323 (6) - whistle on start of slider
00:36:289 (2,3,4) - the angle of movement is too acute, 00:36:772 (3) should not be placed too far right of the end of 00:36:289 (2) but instead, more towards below it's end > Except for this one, I think it looks fine enough...
00:38:220 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:38:864 (2,3) - blanket better
00:40:634 (7) - yea I really think you should remove this one, it feels very extra > Okay then...
00:43:260 (1) - curve it more
00:44:548 (1,2) - blanket it better
00:47:445 (2) - start of slider is covered up, it isn't nice, I suggest you place it elsewhere > Okay, place it like this http://puu.sh/9iHBd/c6178d5cf8.jpg
00:50:985 (4,5) - blanket better
00:51:629 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:03:217 (2,3) - blanket better
01:03:217 (2,5) - stack circle on end of slider
01:07:724 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:09:655 (6) - finish on end of slider
01:13:518 (2,4) - blanket better
01:15:127 (5) - finish on start of slider
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:20:277 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:20:116 (5,1) - blanket nicely
01:34:440 (4,6) - stack on end of slider
01:36:694 (2,3) - blanket nicely
01:39:269 (2,3) - ^

Normal > It's all fixed, except...

00:05:387 (5,6) - blanket nicely
00:17:619 (1,2) - it's not good to stack these 2, with such a big gap in time between them
00:22:769 (1) - finish instead of clap on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,3) - stack exactly on the ends
00:25:344 (4,5) - could blanket better
00:31:138 (5) - finish on end of slider
00:34:357 (3,4) - could blanket better
00:38:220 (1) - finish instead of clap
00:38:220 (1,3) - stack better
00:45:191 (6,8) - could blanket better
00:47:766 (2,3) - ^
00:52:273 (1) - finish on start of slider instead of clap
01:07:724 (1) - ^
01:09:977 (4) - finish on start of slider
01:11:586 (6) - looks weird in this position, because it is in an area where there were previously other objects > Except for this one... I think it's already the best place...
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:19:955 (4,1) - blanket nicely

Once again, good luck

Okay ^^ thank you for mod~ I'm bad at hitsounding

Hanyuuu nama artistnya bener yang pertama tau makanya aku ga komentar soal itu di mod aku sebelumnya, seharusnya Boa bukan BoA. Kalo BoA itu artis korea, sedangkan Boa di sini itu british band, meski sama-sama boa tapi beda individu.

Coba baca ini, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%C3%B4a dan http://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/BoA

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hanyuuu nama artistnya bener yang pertama tau makanya aku ga komentar soal itu di mod aku sebelumnya, seharusnya Boa bukan BoA. Kalo BoA itu artis korea, sedangkan Boa di sini itu british band, meski sama-sama boa tapi beda individu.

Coba baca ini, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%C3%B4a dan http://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/BoA

Oh, oke sipp~! Udah kuganti lagi, thanks ya~
Soalnya beatmap lagu ini yang udah ke rank tulisannya juga BoA

Hey~ From modding queue.

[Easy]

- The slider speed is VERY low. In my opinion, it's way too low. And you have sliders that are too big as well. You should also check your blankets. I'm going to skip it, due to my opinions changing your map quite a bit.

[Normal]

- 00:08:606 (3) - Not sure if keeping this note hidden is the best choice.
- 00:09:894 (5) - Finish this on 6. Remove 6.
- 00:18:585 (2) - ^
- 00:20:194 (1,2) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOsJ/12241e09b0.jpg
- 00:25:344 (4) - end in 00:25:988 and place a circle where the slider used to end
- 00:30:495 (4,5) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOyR/f38d8c2d83.jpg´
- 00:35:645 (5,6) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOCF/8785725017.jpg
- 00:40:795 (1,1) - Change this as well, please.
The rest of the sliders on 1/4... well, the song speeds up, so maybe they're acceptable there.

[Hard]

I'm going to skip this as well, mostly because of the amount of circles you have in blue ticks, as if the song had double the BPM and they were on red ticks. It's way too big for a mod, you'll have to redo it yourself.

Sorry if it wasn't too helpful~

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From modding queue.

[Easy]

- The slider speed is VERY low. In my opinion, it's way too low. And you have sliders that are too big as well. You should also check your blankets. I'm going to skip it, due to my opinions changing your map quite a bit. < Yeah... maybe I should've use 1.00 instead :/ I made this map before the update of the star difficulty where it's very hard to make something "easy". But, it's easy after all XD I don't change my slider velocity then :3

[Normal]

- 00:08:606 (3) - Not sure if keeping this note hidden is the best choice. < It looks good :3 so no change...
- 00:09:894 (5) - Finish this on 6. Remove 6. < Well, it fits the sound in the song, so no change....
- 00:18:585 (2) - ^ < This one sounds pretty good... Fixed ^^
- 00:20:194 (1,2) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOsJ/12241e09b0.jpg < It also fits the song, no change
- 00:25:344 (4) - end in 00:25:988 and place a circle where the slider used to end ^
- 00:30:495 (4,5) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOyR/f38d8c2d83.jpg´ ^
- 00:35:645 (5,6) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOCF/8785725017.jpg ^
- 00:40:795 (1,1) - Change this as well, please. < Seems fine enough :/
The rest of the sliders on 1/4... well, the song speeds up, so maybe they're acceptable there. < Well, because of the slow BPM, I think sliders on 1/4 are acceptable on normal. I'm a new mapper, but from what I observe while playing, mappers often use sliders on 1/4 on normal with slow BPM....

[Hard]

I'm going to skip this as well, mostly because of the amount of circles you have in blue ticks, as if the song had double the BPM and they were on red ticks. It's way too big for a mod, you'll have to redo it yourself. < Well, it's just my style to map song with slow BPM And I think a lot of mappers do it too ^^ Doubling the BPM just seems... unnatural (?)

Sorry if it wasn't too helpful~

Yeah, I didn't change much, but don't worry, I appreciate all kind of mod ^^
Thank you~

Nice map! LOVE IT !!

Hello~ From my M4M queue

I'm not used to modding slow songs but I go:

General

- The clap hitsounds are a bit loud, I would lower the volume on them
- Check out this video on polarity t/55282
- I think you should improve the flow the map by mapping accordingly to the vocals within these times and then using your original rythmn inbetween the vocals. It's up to you if you want to do this:

beginning - 00:31:460 - follow your usual rythmn
00:31:460 - 00:32:104 (4) - follow the vocals
00:41:973 - 00:47:445 - follow your usual rythmn
00:52:917 - 00:59:048 - follow the vocals
01:01:286 - 01:23:013 - follow the vocals
01:23:013 - end - follow your usual rythmn

- The reason why is because your rhthym follows the backbeat throughout the song and doesn't partically make use of the vocals at all. The vocals easily overpower the backbeat of the song. Use a playback rate of 50% to help you find the right time to put your notes.

For example on HARD:
00:35:323 (6,1,2,3) I suggest http://puu.sh/9BaNY/3b037b112f.jpg
00:52:917 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/9BbLo/f12dbdbe5e.jpg
00:52:917 - YOu can use a wiggle slider here to emphasize the ups and downs of the vocals

Easy

01:26:232 (3) - bad polarity shift. Either change (3) or the notes around it to make it work
01:36:050 (3,4) - polarity

Normal

00:17:619 (1) - elongate to white tick & add clap hs
00:20:194 (1) - remove clap hs
00:35:323 (4,5,6) - It doesn't follow the vocals. I would suggest http://puu.sh/9B9fb/f368081496.jpg
00:40:795 (1,1,1) - I suggest: http://puu.sh/9B9xc/d0535c14ed.jpg
01:19:955 (4) - Turn into a circle and move 01:20:599 (1) back 1/2 tick
01:26:393 - bad polarity shift. add a circle.

Hard

00:03:939 - add circle - stacked

Fuahh, finally updated ^^"

truonant wrote:

Hello~ From my M4M queue

I'm not used to modding slow songs but I go:

General

- The clap hitsounds are a bit loud, I would lower the volume on them < I think it's fine enough :/
- Check out this video on polarity t/55282 < Okay, nice tutorial ^^
- I think you should improve the flow the map by mapping accordingly to the vocals within these times and then using your original rythmn inbetween the vocals. It's up to you if you want to do this: < Didn't change anything ^^"

beginning - 00:31:460 - follow your usual rythmn
00:31:460 - 00:32:104 (4) - follow the vocals
00:41:973 - 00:47:445 - follow your usual rythmn
00:52:917 - 00:59:048 - follow the vocals
01:01:286 - 01:23:013 - follow the vocals
01:23:013 - end - follow your usual rythmn

- The reason why is because your rhthym follows the backbeat throughout the song and doesn't partically make use of the vocals at all. The vocals easily overpower the backbeat of the song. Use a playback rate of 50% to help you find the right time to put your notes. < Yeah, I actually prefer doing this. A lot of vocals in this song start on red line, I just....disliked it....

For example on HARD: < Didn't change anything....
00:35:323 (6,1,2,3) I suggest http://puu.sh/9BaNY/3b037b112f.jpg
00:52:917 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/9BbLo/f12dbdbe5e.jpg
00:52:917 - YOu can use a wiggle slider here to emphasize the ups and downs of the vocals

Easy

01:26:232 (3) - bad polarity shift. Either change (3) or the notes around it to make it work < It's following the music, so i think it's fine
01:36:050 (3,4) - polarity ^

Normal

00:17:619 (1) - elongate to white tick & add clap hs < Added clap only
00:20:194 (1) - remove clap hs < Okay
00:35:323 (4,5,6) - It doesn't follow the vocals. I would suggest http://puu.sh/9B9fb/f368081496.jpg < Not changing this
00:40:795 (1,1,1) - I suggest: http://puu.sh/9B9xc/d0535c14ed.jpg < The second slider's a bit too early... But the current is a bit too late... What a dilemma -,- Not changing this...
01:19:955 (4) - Turn into a circle and move 01:20:599 (1) back 1/2 tick < Okay
01:26:393 - bad polarity shift. add a circle. < Nope, again, it's following the music

Hard

00:03:939 - add circle - stacked < No, just no

Okay, that's it ^^ thank you for your mod~

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Hm...music volume seems low

[Easy]
AR is a bit fast for the SV, try AR2
Personally feel SV is a bit slow but acceptable
00:05:387 (2,3) - Change to a slider, like this 00:15:688 (4) -
00:41:439 (1) - NC here may be a bit confuse for offset change, I prefer only NC at 00:41:973 (1) -

[Normal]
Looks fine!
00:13:435 (2) - X:312 Y:176 for blanket with 00:12:469 (1) - , then DS this 00:13:756 (3) -
00:32:748 (6) - X:36 Y:220 for blanket
00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Hmm...confuse stack, especially 00:37:576 (8) -
01:07:724 (1) - Not sure if you're out of space or anything, but I strongly recommend to keep same Distance Snap
01:09:333 (2,3) - Make sure they are around 1.7x DS too
01:11:586 (6) - If possible don't make the slider tail touch 01:10:942 (5) -
01:12:874 (1) - 1.7x DS please, no jump even it's a very small 1
01:18:024 (1) - Constant DS
01:25:749 (5) - ^
01:27:681 (8) - ^

[Hard]
AR8 too fast, please use AR7
Looks fine as well!
00:26:632 (4,5,6,1) - This part is a bit crowded, stacks are confusing
00:40:312 (5,6) - Swap place
00:40:634 (1) - This one is extra hit, guitar sound is at 00:40:473 -

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Hm...music volume seems low < Indeed... can't find better one and too lazy to change it now XD

[Easy]
AR is a bit fast for the SV, try AR2 < How about 2.5? :3
Personally feel SV is a bit slow but acceptable < :3
00:05:387 (2,3) - Change to a slider, like this 00:15:688 (4) - < It was for some creation :3, no change
00:41:439 (1) - NC here may be a bit confuse for offset change, I prefer only NC at 00:41:973 (1) - < Hmm... It was used to be SV change, fixed

[Normal]
Looks fine!
00:13:435 (2) - X:312 Y:176 for blanket with 00:12:469 (1) - , then DS this 00:13:756 (3) - < Fixed
00:32:748 (6) - X:36 Y:220 for blanket < Okay
00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Hmm...confuse stack, especially 00:37:576 (8) - < Looks fine enough :3
01:07:724 (1) - Not sure if you're out of space or anything, but I strongly recommend to keep same Distance Snap < Yeah, I'm out of space T_T Fixed it now
01:09:333 (2,3) - Make sure they are around 1.7x DS too < They are :3
01:11:586 (6) - If possible don't make the slider tail touch 01:10:942 (5) - < Okay, barely did it :/
01:12:874 (1) - 1.7x DS please, no jump even it's a very small 1 < Okay, fixed
01:18:024 (1) - Constant DS < Fixed :3
01:25:749 (5) - ^ ^
01:27:681 (8) - ^ ^

[Hard]
AR8 too fast, please use AR7 < How AR 7.5 sounds to you? :3
Looks fine as well!
00:26:632 (4,5,6,1) - This part is a bit crowded, stacks are confusing < That's the tricky part :3
00:40:312 (5,6) - Swap place < Okay
00:40:634 (1) - This one is extra hit, guitar sound is at 00:40:473 - < Looks fine....

Thank you so much for your mod ~

From my queue~~


[Hard]
You used DS of 2? o-o I'd use 1.7 or less for this slow tempo song
Changing your SV from 1x to 0.5x suddenly I don't recommend, people (like me) go too fast and slider break.. maybe 0.75x is better as an option
http://puu.sh/9YnJx/9718235742.png

00:02:169 (1) - blanket 00:02:651 (2) -
00:02:651 (2) - put it in the center (256,192)
00:02:812 (3) - not perf mirror. Copy n paste 00:02:169 (1) - and Ctrl + > twice (http://puu.sh/9Yn32/23038dcfb5.jpg)
00:12:308 (6,1) - pree big jump for hard
00:27:759 (6) - weird jump
00:33:070 (1,2) - blankets
00:37:576 (5,6) - looks better imo http://puu.sh/9YniM/5c670590da.jpg
00:50:342 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/9Ynr0/75c5e7d3cc.jpg
00:56:136 (4,5) - ^ basically same type of thing
01:04:827 (6) - http://puu.sh/9Yny6/536fd9727d.jpg
01:11:264 (3) - http://puu.sh/9YnBx/d03ee52d48.jpg

The song ends... abruptly.. :\

A nice relaxing song (: I especially love how you had a decrescendo on one of your sliders, that was cool!!
Good luck with ur map from now!~

Gaia wrote:

From my queue~~


[Hard]
You used DS of 2? o-o I'd use 1.7 or less for this slow tempo song < ^-^ I think 2.0 is fine though ^-^
Changing your SV from 1x to 0.5x suddenly I don't recommend, people (like me) go too fast and slider break.. maybe 0.75x is better as an option
http://puu.sh/9YnJx/9718235742.png < I change the combo color, so pretty fine eh? :3

00:02:169 (1) - blanket 00:02:651 (2) - < Okay
00:02:651 (2) - put it in the center (256,192) < No thanks, it's just like repositioning my whole map x_x
00:02:812 (3) - not perf mirror. Copy n paste 00:02:169 (1) - and Ctrl + > twice (http://puu.sh/9Yn32/23038dcfb5.jpg) < Fixed
00:12:308 (6,1) - pree big jump for hard < There are hard with bigger jump than this... Furthermore, I love jumps :3
00:27:759 (6) - weird jump < Not really
00:33:070 (1,2) - blankets < I don't place it in the center on purpose...
00:37:576 (5,6) - looks better imo http://puu.sh/9YniM/5c670590da.jpg < Jump is love, jump is life XD
00:50:342 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/9Ynr0/75c5e7d3cc.jpg ^
00:56:136 (4,5) - ^ basically same type of thing ^
01:04:827 (6) - http://puu.sh/9Yny6/536fd9727d.jpg < Nope
01:11:264 (3) - http://puu.sh/9YnBx/d03ee52d48.jpg ^

The song ends... abruptly.. :\ < Well, I disliked spinner ^.^

A nice relaxing song (: I especially love how you had a decrescendo on one of your sliders, that was cool!! :3
Good luck with ur map from now!~

Thank you for mod~! ^^

Sorry for my ultra-belated mod, but I am so slooow now. ;w;

Generally

1. I believe the second offset should be 41989. Tell me if it works better at your PC, but I am pretty sure it does.

Easy

1. 00:09:894 (1) - I don't really think that a clap hitsound matches the music here. Remove it please, but IMO not hitsounding this moment is the best way to map this moment.
2. 00:17:619 (1) - As above - I don't think it sounds great now. In this moment I advice to add a whistle instead of a clap. And maybe add a whistle at the very end of the slider. I think it will follow the music better.
3. 00:41:439 (2) - I swear it sounds better if you change this moment a bit. I advice to extend a previous slider (1) til 00:41:278 - and here would be a finish hitsound. Also I advice to delete the accurate (2) note because it's really confusing for newer players. They will be shocked and surprised! It's a really hard moment to play if you do not train it something like 4 times, but Easy should be SS-able for the first time without practicing!
4. 00:41:973 (1) - To be honest I believe a whistle would match better to the music than a finish at the beginning.

Normal

1. 00:31:138 (5) - Move the last point in the slider to X=-20;Y=128 to improve the blanket.
2. 00:40:795 (1,1) - Please, delete the red (1) - that second - since it's still to hard to play it correctly! It's really difficult and I think it will be better to add the note but in the Hard difficulty! And the second thing - I think the first - green - (1) slider would have a finish at the very end of it.

Hard

1. Don't be scared! Set AR8 at this difficulty. It fits very well!
2. 00:40:634 (1) - Please, add a finish at the very end. It sounds better!

Hard is just a pure awesomness. *-*

Good Luck with this mapset! I don't think it has more mistakes than with the second offset, the rest is really well arranged. Go to BATs!

Krfawy wrote:

Sorry for my ultra-belated mod, but I am so slooow now. ;w;

Generally

1. I believe the second offset should be 41989. Tell me if it works better at your PC, but I am pretty sure it does.

< Hmm, I think my current offset now works better, 41989 sounds a bit late I think :/

Easy

1. 00:09:894 (1) - I don't really think that a clap hitsound matches the music here. Remove it please, but IMO not hitsounding this moment is the best way to map this moment. < Okay
2. 00:17:619 (1) - As above - I don't think it sounds great now. In this moment I advice to add a whistle instead of a clap. And maybe add a whistle at the very end of the slider. I think it will follow the music better. < Fixed
3. 00:41:439 (2) - I swear it sounds better if you change this moment a bit. I advice to extend a previous slider (1) til 00:41:278 - and here would be a finish hitsound. Also I advice to delete the accurate (2) note because it's really confusing for newer players. They will be shocked and surprised! It's a really hard moment to play if you do not train it something like 4 times, but Easy should be SS-able for the first time without practicing! < I'm not changing this yet
4. 00:41:973 (1) - To be honest I believe a whistle would match better to the music than a finish at the beginning.

< I don't think so :/

Normal

1. 00:31:138 (5) - Move the last point in the slider to X=-20;Y=128 to improve the blanket. < Fixed
2. 00:40:795 (1,1) - Please, delete the red (1) - that second - since it's still to hard to play it correctly! It's really difficult and I think it will be better to add the note but in the Hard difficulty! And the second thing - I think the first - green - (1) slider would have a finish at the very end of it.

< Not changing this yet :/

Hard

1. Don't be scared! Set AR8 at this difficulty. It fits very well! < Okay ^^ Finally, there is someone who agrees with me~
2. 00:40:634 (1) - Please, add a finish at the very end. It sounds better!

< Hmm, I don't think so...

Hard is just a pure awesomness. *-* < Thank you~

Good Luck with this mapset! I don't think it has more mistakes than with the second offset, the rest is really well arranged. Go to BATs! < Well, maybe I'll search for few more mods before I go see BAT. I don't want to waste their time for my imperfect map ^-^

Thank you for mod~

From V&V's Modding queue


Hard is perfect anyway, Good Luck~

Gray Veyron wrote:

From V&V's Modding queue

[> Easy <]

1. 00:25:344 (2,4) - Overlap, or on purpose? < Change this part a bit :3
2. 00:50:342 (3,4,2) - ^ < Not really visible, so no change
3. 00:54:848 (4,5) - The flow breaks here, try curving it on the other side. < I dislike the shape >.<
4. - Well, nice mapping... no suggestion.

[> Normal <]

1. 00:11:181 (8,1) - Same reason in Easy. Try make a blanket here. < No
2. 00:20:838 (2,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? < Again, not really visible, so no change
3. 00:29:207 (2,3,4) - Remake the triangle form here. < Okay
4. 00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Good flow, but DS is a little strange here. < The DS here is consistent, 1.7 ^-^
5. 00:41:439 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't fit with the song track. < Okay
6. 01:01:608 (7,1) - Remake a better blanket. < Fixed
7. 01:09:977 (4,6) - Same as 00:20:838 (2,1) - < This part is helpless T_T
8. 01:14:483 (2,5) - ^ < Another helpless part T_T
9. - Another good mapping~

Hard is perfect anyway, Good Luck~ :3

Thank you for mod~

Hey, from my Modding Queue

Just gonna start with the fact that this isn't going to be a very big mod because you've already had a lot of moddings and I think this map is pretty much ready for BATs, but I hope I can be of some use anyway

Bpm is 93.16 but I don't think it makes that much of a difference, the timing of the notes feels a tiny bit late but that may just be my computer.

[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]

Sorry for such a short mod, it's just there isn't much to fix with this map, Good Luck on getting this ranked, I feel it should be soon!

sullyjhf wrote:

Hey, from my Modding Queue

Just gonna start with the fact that this isn't going to be a very big mod because you've already had a lot of moddings and I think this map is pretty much ready for BATs, but I hope I can be of some use anyway < Don't worry, I accept all kind of mods ^^

Bpm is 93.16 but I don't think it makes that much of a difference, the timing of the notes feels a tiny bit late but that may just be my computer. < Because it doesn't affect much, I'm not changing this (lazy to resnap all notes and timing points, lol XD)

[Easy]

1. 00:27:920 (4) - Blanket this slider better, I think you can actually just move it, but that might upset distance spacing, so do with it what you want. < I'm not changing this yet ^-^
2. 00:40:473 (1,2) - Look at what I said for Hard here. < Okay, okay, I have a lot of critics about this part, yeah it kinda weird, but I didn't notice that the music changes at 1/8 and I have no idea how should I change this.... But finally I find something good enough to change this part to Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:40:795 (1,2) - Look at what I wrote for hard about this part. < Okay, this one as well, fixed Oh, and look at what I've done ^^ http://puu.sh/a4S7W/0cec600ba6.jpg I change 00:40:151 (3) - to a circle and move 00:40:473 (1) - 1/2 tick forward
2. 01:38:625 (1) - I think this sounds and looks better if you end it on the blue tick before, then make it a mirror of the repeat slider after it. < Good idea, fixed ~

[Hard]

1. AR 8 is perfect < Yay ^^
2. 00:26:632 (4,5,6) - Just something I noticed on my first play, this (6) is really hard to read because it's directly underneath the (4) slider, I remembered it on the second play so it's not that big of a deal, but it's still weird.
   It's weird because even though there are more notes like this, this was the only one that tripped me up, however if you do feel the need to alter some of the others then go ahead. < Do you want tricky part? Because that how you got tricky part ^^ Yeah, that's the tricky part No first try FC allowed XD
3. 00:40:634 (1,1) - This is the strangest thing ever, the music actually changes at the 1/8 tick which makes it really hard to map for a Hard, what you could do is change the first slider to end 1/8 later with a finish hitsound on the end of it, and remove the other slider entirely, it sounds better to me like that
   < Okay, look at what I've done with this part http://puu.sh/a4Rj7/c9662525a5.jpg Instead of removing it, I make the second slider start on 1/8 ^^ Why? Because it's hard, that's why XD
4. 01:01:286 (5,6,7) - Try to blanket the ends of these sliders and the note a bit better? < Okay, this is hard, barely did it, but it makes the 01:00:481 (2) - doesn't land on the end of the 01:01:930 (6) - slider T_T http://puu.sh/a4RDm/18f2ea03df.jpg
5. 01:15:971 (2) - this note isn't on the blue tick, probably just a resnap error but needs fixing anyway < Whoops XD fixed~
6. 01:38:625 (1,2) - Blanket the start of the second slider with the first a bit better? < Okay, I tried...

Sorry for such a short mod, it's just there isn't much to fix with this map, Good Luck on getting this ranked, I feel it should be soon! < Yeah, pretty short, but I change much ^^

Thank you so much for mod~

Easy:

00:08:606 (6,1) - Maybe turn the volume up for the hitsounds for these two, I had trouble hearing whether I hit them or not.
00:31:138 (5) - ^
00:31:972 add Kiai here?
00:35:645 (3) - Make this object closer to the prior object on the timeline, then DS it.

Normal:

00:03:778 (2) -I have trouble telling whether I hit it.
00:13:435 (2) - ^
00:32:787 Kiai here?
01:19:521 I was very confused here as this was Normal diff.

Hard:

I was thinking AR8 is too high for such a slow song. suggestion: 7 or 6.

00:32:884 Kiai?
I noticed a few parts aren't distance snapped. How about you do them? since they're way too hard on their own.

M4M by the way.

MisakiYuri wrote:

Easy:

00:08:606 (6,1) - Maybe turn the volume up for the hitsounds for these two, I had trouble hearing whether I hit them or not. < I don't even lower the volume :/
00:31:138 (5) - ^ ^
00:31:972 add Kiai here? < No, one kiai on the second chorus seems to be enough
00:35:645 (3) - Make this object closer to the prior object on the timeline, then DS it. < Okay, I modified this part a little, http://puu.sh/a6iCx/643e51447b.jpg I moved 00:35:323 (3) - 1/2 tick forward to follow the vocal and add a note here 00:36:932 what do you think? :3

Normal:

00:03:778 (2) -I have trouble telling whether I hit it. < I don't even lower the volume :/
00:13:435 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:787 Kiai here? < Same reason with easy
01:19:521 I was very confused here as this was Normal diff. < Okay, I stack this note http://puu.sh/a6iIM/5f392cbe36.jpg

Hard:

I was thinking AR8 is too high for such a slow song. suggestion: 7 or 6. < AR 8 for life~! :<

00:32:884 Kiai? < Same reason with easy and normal
I noticed a few parts aren't distance snapped. How about you do them? since they're way too hard on their own. < Jumps are allowed on hard :3

M4M by the way.

Okay, thank you for mod~:3

Hey, hanyuu!
Well, here's my mod:


And that's that.
Overall, great mapset! Excellent work, hanyuu.
Good Luck!

Hi~ Sorry for late reply :3

LizeKotze wrote:

Hey, hanyuu!
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
1) 00:07:962~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 00:09:894. < I prefer NC on big white tick :/
2) 00:12:469~ NC here. < I don't really like two combo only on one color :/
3) 00:27:920~ NC here. < This one seems fine
4) 00:27:920~ Maybe place a clapsound here as well? < Okay, changed the whistle to clap :3
5) 00:36:932~ NC here < Again, I prefer NC on big white tick....
6) 01:04:183~ Maybe turn this slider so that it's mirroring this slider: 01:06:758. Like this: < Okay...

Picture

Normal:
1) AiMod: I don't think the letterbox in breaks may differ from any diffs. I suggest fixing that. < Fixed
2) 01:07:724~ Maybe turn this slider so it looks something like this: < Okay, good idea

Picture

I just think it looks better that way.

Hard:
1) 00:03:939~ Maybe add a hitcircle here? < No, that was done on purpose...
2) 00:24:540~ Try to blanket this slider with this slider: 00:24:057. Something like this: < It looks weird imo :/

Picture

3) 00:40:473 and 00:40:634~ This sounds a bit confusing. I suggest removing this hitcircle: 00:40:473 and making this slider: 00:40:634 longer.
It must then look like this: < Okay

Picture

Remember to then also change the slider velocity at this point: 00:40:473. < (y)
4) 01:18:668~ Blanket this slider better. < If you tell me to blanket it with 01:18:024 (1) - then I'm not doing it. I don't place it at the center of the slider on purpose....
5) 01:20:599~ I don't really like this slider here. I think a spinner would be better. < No
6) 01:30:095~ Add hitcircle here? < That was done on purpose...
7) 01:40:234~ Blanket this slider with this slider: 01:40:556. Like this: < It looks crowded and causing a lot of overlap, the current seems fine for me....

Picture

And that's that.
Overall, great mapset! Excellent work, hanyuu.
Good Luck!

Thank you for mod :3
And it seems you just uploaded a new mapset eh?
Maybe I'll mod it sometime~♥

Hey there! from my queue~
O_O Creepy song
Hitsound pattern is abit weird, so I'm not confident of my modding skills enough to mod them



Sorry for a short mod , but your map is already almost perfect and I couldn't find many problems with it . Definitely not because I was rushing through it because the song is creepy as heck and I don't want to listen to it too many times. No, that would be unprofessional XD

Good Luck with ranking soon!~

Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there! from my queue~
O_O Creepy song < lol XD
Hitsound pattern is abit weird, so I'm not confident of my modding skills enough to mod them < Well, I'm not good at hitsounding >.<

[Easy]

1. 00:09:894 (1) - Move NC from here to 00:07:962 (5) < Okay....
2. 00:12:469 (3) - NC < Fixed
3. 00:27:920 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved (the slider head) < Okay
4. 00:35:323 (3,4) - Don't hide notes behind tails on easy, especially not when the beat is so close < Well, it can't be helped... If I move it, then it would be hard to DS the next notes :/
5. 00:36:932 (4) - NC < Okay

Couldn't find any more problems

[Normal]

1. 00:16:010 (5) - NC < I NC here 00:15:044 (1) - Instead
2. 00:24:701 (3) - Nazi-mod Sorry, I had to x-1 < lol XD, fixed :3
3. 00:26:310 - Blanket better < 'Kay
4. 00:49:698 (5) - NC < Fixed
5. 00:59:998 (5,6) - Blanket better < (Y)
6. 01:07:724 (1) - Move NC from here to 01:06:436 (7) < I prefer NC on big white tick....
7. 01:12:874 (1) - Move NC from here to 01:11:586 (6) < ^
8. 01:15:449 (4) - NC(?) < No, thanks

[Hard]

1. 00:13:435 (3) - x-1, y+1 (too noticeable to skip) < lool XD Fixed

Couldn't find any other problems

Sorry for a short mod , but your map is already almost perfect and I couldn't find many problems with it . Definitely not because I was rushing through it because the song is creepy as heck and I don't want to listen to it too many times. No, that would be unprofessional XD

Good Luck with ranking soon!~

Thank you for mod ^^
I like how you still mod my map even though you don't like the song
osu needs more people like you
And if you wonder why this song is creepy, it comes from a very absurd anime XD
Once again, thank you

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

• 
  Okay, this mapset has a video, but where's the download option for no video? `-`)

1. The audio bitrate is under 192 kbps...
2. Change the Artist name to BOA, 'cause the video show the metadata at all `3`

[Easy]

1. 00:05:709 (3) - remove this
2. 00:15:688 (2) - change to circle

[Normal]

1. 00:05:387 (5) - move to x : 132 y : 56
2. 00:37:576 (8,9) - ctrl + g for better gameplay
3. 01:06:114 - add circle
4. 01:11:264 (6) - add circle to x: 144 y :200
5. 01:15:449 (4) - move to 01:15:127 - and move to x : 152 y : 184

[Hard]

1. Change AR to 7
2. 00:03:778 (5) - change to slider with end point on 00:03:939 -
   
3. 00:04:100 (6) - change the end point to 00:04:583 -
4. 00:16:010 (4) - ctrl + g
5. 00:22:689 - add circle on x : 192 y : 136 (1/8 snap divisor)
6. 00:38:059 (6) - move to x : 160 y : 144
7. 01:06:758 (4) - move to x : 184 y : 144
8. 01:11:103 (2) - remove this
9. 01:20:277 (6) - remove this and change the start point of 01:20:599 (1) - to 01:20:277 -

I've heard this anime, but i'm not watching it, the art seems like Elfen Lied, so this's must be psychological `3`)v

Good luck~

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

• 
  Okay, this mapset has a video, but where's the download option for no video? `-`) < I don't know, how do you make no video download button appear on the beatmap listing? The link appeared on the forum, but the button doesn't appear on the beatmap listing T_T sorry, I'm such a new mapper T_T

1. The audio bitrate is under 192 kbps... < It doesn't matter as long as it doesn't below 128 kbps, because the range is 128 kbps - 192 kbps.... "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps"
2. Change the Artist name to BOA, 'cause the video show the metadata at all `3` < I think the current artist is fine :/ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%C3%B4a

[Easy]

1. 00:05:709 (3) - remove this < I think it's fine enough...
2. 00:15:688 (2) - change to circle < It's some kind of variation, so no thanks ^^

[Normal]

1. 00:05:387 (5) - move to x : 132 y : 56 < ? What for?
2. 00:37:576 (8,9) - ctrl + g for better gameplay < I think it's fine for now, so the next flow would be better....
3. 01:06:114 - add circle < I don't add any circle there on purpose....
4. 01:11:264 (6) - add circle to x: 144 y :200 < huh? O-O
5. 01:15:449 (4) - move to 01:15:127 - and move to x : 152 y : 184 < I think it's fine for now

[Hard]

1. Change AR to 7 < No
2. 00:03:778 (5) - change to slider with end point on 00:03:939 - < I don't add any circle at 00:03:939 on purpose
   
3. 00:04:100 (6) - change the end point to 00:04:583 - < ? The endpoint is already on 00:04:583 ....
4. 00:16:010 (4) - ctrl + g < Seems fine for me
5. 00:22:689 - add circle on x : 192 y : 136 (1/8 snap divisor) < Okay, but I change the place a bit to x:176 y:140
6. 00:38:059 (6) - move to x : 160 y : 144 < hmm? what for? O-O
7. 01:06:758 (4) - move to x : 184 y : 144 < ^
8. 01:11:103 (2) - remove this < No
9. 01:20:277 (6) - remove this and change the start point of 01:20:599 (1) - to 01:20:277 - < I'm doing this on easy and normal, but maybe not on hard

I've heard this anime, but i'm not watching it, the art seems like Elfen Lied, so this's must be psychological `3`)v < Yup ^^ very absurd XD

Good luck~

Thank you for mod~

I also made a map for Duvet and I was very curious about how another player would map it.
I played it and might as well mod it

... I couldn't find things that weren't right but in the hard difficulty I found some notes that were on top of each other but weren't 100% stacked. You can change this by lowering the stack leniency in the advanced menu of song setup. There is nothing wrong with it, it just looks a little messy in my opinion

Judging by the amount of stars you collected I would definetely contact a BAT and ask either for a bubble or getting it ranked because it deserves it