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Fuuyu
From Mod Q . . desu~

[General]

Q : Isn't Boa spelled like this > BoA ?

Easy :
HP Drain in Easy should be at least 2 , OK :)
OD - OK

Normal :
HP Drain - OK
OD - 4

Hard:
HP Drain - 6
OD - OK

Timing

BPM - 93.35 Correct

Offset - 2,177 Change to 570

( Just a Suggestion - Remove the 2nd Timing Point )




[Mod]

Easy - Ready

Normal
01:37:302 Move the note 01:37:142
01:37:463 Remove ( Didn't go with the beat )
01:37:463 Change it to a note
01:37:624 Add a note

Hard - Ready
Topic Starter
micchi_chi
Hi~ Sorry for late reply, I'm in the middle of exam week :o

neonat wrote:

I'll do some general stuff because I think it seems off

General

The first timing point starts late, I would go for 93.2 BPM and offset 2169 < Sounds good :) Fixed
The second timing point sounds off, it seems better if it was offset 41973 and 93.2 BPM < Fixed ^^

Hard

00:40:580 (7) - I don't think this note is needed, remove it as the held music is at 00:40:420 (6) < Not changing this yet... If another modder say this again, I might reconsider it...

Can't really tell the mistakes because the timing is off
Fix the timing and I think I might take a look again

Good luck
Thank you~ I should practice timing more ^^ I think this song's timing indeed pretty hard :o For me at least ><
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

xLoupGarou wrote:

From Mod Q . . desu~

[General]

Q : Isn't Boa spelled like this > BoA ? < Okay, fixed ^^

Easy :
HP Drain in Easy should be at least 2 , OK :) < (y)
OD - OK < (y)

Normal :
HP Drain - OK < (y)
OD - 4 < Another modder already said this before... Maybe I really have to change it... Fixed~

Hard:
HP Drain - 6 < Okay
OD - OK < (y)

Timing

BPM - 93.35 Correct < changed it to 93.2 :)

Offset - 2,177 Change to 570 < I'm following neonat's timing, and I think it's good :)

( Just a Suggestion - Remove the 2nd Timing Point ) < It is used to reset the metronome so the second chorus would start on big white tick...




[Mod]

Easy - Ready < (y)

Normal < I think it's pretty fine, didn't change anything....
01:37:302 Move the note 01:37:142
01:37:463 Remove ( Didn't go with the beat )
01:37:463 Change it to a note
01:37:624 Add a note

Hard - Ready < (y)
Okay~ thank you for your mod :D
neonat
re-check, no kudosu

Hard

00:18:263 (2,4) - blanket better
00:22:126 (5,1) - ^
00:22:769 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,2) - blanket
00:25:988 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:460 (3,4) - ^
00:32:104 (4) - finish on the middle (repeating) part of slider
00:35:323 (6) - whistle on start of slider
00:36:289 (2,3,4) - the angle of movement is too acute, 00:36:772 (3) should not be placed too far right of the end of 00:36:289 (2) but instead, more towards below it's end
00:38:220 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:38:864 (2,3) - blanket better
00:40:634 (7) - yea I really think you should remove this one, it feels very extra
00:43:260 (1) - curve it more
00:44:548 (1,2) - blanket it better
00:47:445 (2) - start of slider is covered up, it isn't nice, I suggest you place it elsewhere
00:50:985 (4,5) - blanket better
00:51:629 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:03:217 (2,3) - blanket better
01:03:217 (2,5) - stack circle on end of slider
01:07:724 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:09:655 (6) - finish on end of slider
01:13:518 (2,4) - blanket better
01:15:127 (5) - finish on start of slider
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:20:277 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:20:116 (5,1) - blanket nicely
01:34:440 (4,6) - stack on end of slider
01:36:694 (2,3) - blanket nicely
01:39:269 (2,3) - ^

Normal

00:05:387 (5,6) - blanket nicely
00:17:619 (1,2) - it's not good to stack these 2, with such a big gap in time between them
00:22:769 (1) - finish instead of clap on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,3) - stack exactly on the ends
00:25:344 (4,5) - could blanket better
00:31:138 (5) - finish on end of slider
00:34:357 (3,4) - could blanket better
00:38:220 (1) - finish instead of clap
00:38:220 (1,3) - stack better
00:45:191 (6,8) - could blanket better
00:47:766 (2,3) - ^
00:52:273 (1) - finish on start of slider instead of clap
01:07:724 (1) - ^
01:09:977 (4) - finish on start of slider
01:11:586 (6) - looks weird in this position, because it is in an area where there were previously other objects
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:19:955 (4,1) - blanket nicely

Once again, good luck
Topic Starter
micchi_chi
Hi~! :) I was waiting for this....

neonat wrote:

re-check, no kudosu

Hard > It's all fixed, except...

00:18:263 (2,4) - blanket better
00:22:126 (5,1) - ^
00:22:769 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,2) - blanket
00:25:988 (2,3,4) - ^
00:31:460 (3,4) - ^
00:32:104 (4) - finish on the middle (repeating) part of slider
00:35:323 (6) - whistle on start of slider
00:36:289 (2,3,4) - the angle of movement is too acute, 00:36:772 (3) should not be placed too far right of the end of 00:36:289 (2) but instead, more towards below it's end > Except for this one, I think it looks fine enough...
00:38:220 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:38:864 (2,3) - blanket better
00:40:634 (7) - yea I really think you should remove this one, it feels very extra > Okay then...
00:43:260 (1) - curve it more
00:44:548 (1,2) - blanket it better
00:47:445 (2) - start of slider is covered up, it isn't nice, I suggest you place it elsewhere > Okay, place it like this http://puu.sh/9iHBd/c6178d5cf8.jpg :)
00:50:985 (4,5) - blanket better
00:51:629 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:03:217 (2,3) - blanket better
01:03:217 (2,5) - stack circle on end of slider
01:07:724 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:09:655 (6) - finish on end of slider
01:13:518 (2,4) - blanket better
01:15:127 (5) - finish on start of slider
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:20:277 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:20:116 (5,1) - blanket nicely
01:34:440 (4,6) - stack on end of slider
01:36:694 (2,3) - blanket nicely
01:39:269 (2,3) - ^

Normal > It's all fixed, except...

00:05:387 (5,6) - blanket nicely
00:17:619 (1,2) - it's not good to stack these 2, with such a big gap in time between them
00:22:769 (1) - finish instead of clap on start of slider
00:22:769 (1,3) - stack exactly on the ends
00:25:344 (4,5) - could blanket better
00:31:138 (5) - finish on end of slider
00:34:357 (3,4) - could blanket better
00:38:220 (1) - finish instead of clap
00:38:220 (1,3) - stack better
00:45:191 (6,8) - could blanket better
00:47:766 (2,3) - ^
00:52:273 (1) - finish on start of slider instead of clap
01:07:724 (1) - ^
01:09:977 (4) - finish on start of slider
01:11:586 (6) - looks weird in this position, because it is in an area where there were previously other objects > Except for this one... I think it's already the best place... :o
01:18:024 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:19:955 (4,1) - blanket nicely

Once again, good luck
Okay ^^ thank you for mod~ I'm bad at hitsounding :o
Shiranai
Hanyuuu nama artistnya bener yang pertama tau makanya aku ga komentar soal itu di mod aku sebelumnya, seharusnya Boa bukan BoA. Kalo BoA itu artis korea, sedangkan Boa di sini itu british band, meski sama-sama boa tapi beda individu.

Coba baca ini, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%C3%B4a dan http://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/BoA
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hanyuuu nama artistnya bener yang pertama tau makanya aku ga komentar soal itu di mod aku sebelumnya, seharusnya Boa bukan BoA. Kalo BoA itu artis korea, sedangkan Boa di sini itu british band, meski sama-sama boa tapi beda individu.

Coba baca ini, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%C3%B4a dan http://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/BoA
Oh, oke sipp~! Udah kuganti lagi, thanks ya~ :)
Soalnya beatmap lagu ini yang udah ke rank tulisannya juga BoA :o
Maruyu
Hey~ From modding queue.

[Easy]

- The slider speed is VERY low. In my opinion, it's way too low. And you have sliders that are too big as well. You should also check your blankets. I'm going to skip it, due to my opinions changing your map quite a bit.

[Normal]

- 00:08:606 (3) - Not sure if keeping this note hidden is the best choice.
- 00:09:894 (5) - Finish this on 6. Remove 6.
- 00:18:585 (2) - ^
- 00:20:194 (1,2) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOsJ/12241e09b0.jpg
- 00:25:344 (4) - end in 00:25:988 and place a circle where the slider used to end
- 00:30:495 (4,5) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOyR/f38d8c2d83.jpg´
- 00:35:645 (5,6) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOCF/8785725017.jpg
- 00:40:795 (1,1) - Change this as well, please.
The rest of the sliders on 1/4... well, the song speeds up, so maybe they're acceptable there.

[Hard]

I'm going to skip this as well, mostly because of the amount of circles you have in blue ticks, as if the song had double the BPM and they were on red ticks. It's way too big for a mod, you'll have to redo it yourself.

Sorry if it wasn't too helpful~
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From modding queue.

[Easy]

- The slider speed is VERY low. In my opinion, it's way too low. And you have sliders that are too big as well. You should also check your blankets. I'm going to skip it, due to my opinions changing your map quite a bit. < Yeah... maybe I should've use 1.00 instead :/ I made this map before the update of the star difficulty where it's very hard to make something "easy". But, it's easy after all XD I don't change my slider velocity then :3

[Normal]

- 00:08:606 (3) - Not sure if keeping this note hidden is the best choice. < It looks good :3 so no change...
- 00:09:894 (5) - Finish this on 6. Remove 6. < Well, it fits the sound in the song, so no change....
- 00:18:585 (2) - ^ < This one sounds pretty good... Fixed ^^
- 00:20:194 (1,2) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOsJ/12241e09b0.jpg < It also fits the song, no change
- 00:25:344 (4) - end in 00:25:988 and place a circle where the slider used to end ^
- 00:30:495 (4,5) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOyR/f38d8c2d83.jpg´ ^
- 00:35:645 (5,6) - ^, http://puu.sh/9rOCF/8785725017.jpg ^
- 00:40:795 (1,1) - Change this as well, please. < Seems fine enough :/
The rest of the sliders on 1/4... well, the song speeds up, so maybe they're acceptable there. < Well, because of the slow BPM, I think sliders on 1/4 are acceptable on normal. I'm a new mapper, but from what I observe while playing, mappers often use sliders on 1/4 on normal with slow BPM....

[Hard]

I'm going to skip this as well, mostly because of the amount of circles you have in blue ticks, as if the song had double the BPM and they were on red ticks. It's way too big for a mod, you'll have to redo it yourself. < Well, it's just my style to map song with slow BPM :D And I think a lot of mappers do it too ^^ Doubling the BPM just seems... unnatural (?)

Sorry if it wasn't too helpful~
Yeah, I didn't change much, but don't worry, I appreciate all kind of mod ^^
Thank you~ :)
Swiftheart
Nice map! LOVE IT !! ;)
truonant
Hello~ From my M4M queue

I'm not used to modding slow songs but I go:

General

- The clap hitsounds are a bit loud, I would lower the volume on them
- Check out this video on polarity t/55282
- I think you should improve the flow the map by mapping accordingly to the vocals within these times and then using your original rythmn inbetween the vocals. It's up to you if you want to do this:

beginning - 00:31:460 - follow your usual rythmn
00:31:460 - 00:32:104 (4) - follow the vocals
00:41:973 - 00:47:445 - follow your usual rythmn
00:52:917 - 00:59:048 - follow the vocals
01:01:286 - 01:23:013 - follow the vocals
01:23:013 - end - follow your usual rythmn

- The reason why is because your rhthym follows the backbeat throughout the song and doesn't partically make use of the vocals at all. The vocals easily overpower the backbeat of the song. Use a playback rate of 50% to help you find the right time to put your notes.

For example on HARD:
00:35:323 (6,1,2,3) I suggest http://puu.sh/9BaNY/3b037b112f.jpg
00:52:917 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/9BbLo/f12dbdbe5e.jpg
00:52:917 - YOu can use a wiggle slider here to emphasize the ups and downs of the vocals

Easy

01:26:232 (3) - bad polarity shift. Either change (3) or the notes around it to make it work
01:36:050 (3,4) - polarity

Normal

00:17:619 (1) - elongate to white tick & add clap hs
00:20:194 (1) - remove clap hs
00:35:323 (4,5,6) - It doesn't follow the vocals. I would suggest http://puu.sh/9B9fb/f368081496.jpg
00:40:795 (1,1,1) - I suggest: http://puu.sh/9B9xc/d0535c14ed.jpg
01:19:955 (4) - Turn into a circle and move 01:20:599 (1) back 1/2 tick
01:26:393 - bad polarity shift. add a circle.

Hard

00:03:939 - add circle - stacked
Topic Starter
micchi_chi
Fuahh, finally updated ^^"

truonant wrote:

Hello~ From my M4M queue

I'm not used to modding slow songs but I go:

General

- The clap hitsounds are a bit loud, I would lower the volume on them < I think it's fine enough :/
- Check out this video on polarity t/55282 < Okay, nice tutorial ^^
- I think you should improve the flow the map by mapping accordingly to the vocals within these times and then using your original rythmn inbetween the vocals. It's up to you if you want to do this: < Didn't change anything ^^"

beginning - 00:31:460 - follow your usual rythmn
00:31:460 - 00:32:104 (4) - follow the vocals
00:41:973 - 00:47:445 - follow your usual rythmn
00:52:917 - 00:59:048 - follow the vocals
01:01:286 - 01:23:013 - follow the vocals
01:23:013 - end - follow your usual rythmn

- The reason why is because your rhthym follows the backbeat throughout the song and doesn't partically make use of the vocals at all. The vocals easily overpower the backbeat of the song. Use a playback rate of 50% to help you find the right time to put your notes. < Yeah, I actually prefer doing this. A lot of vocals in this song start on red line, I just....disliked it....

For example on HARD: < Didn't change anything....
00:35:323 (6,1,2,3) I suggest http://puu.sh/9BaNY/3b037b112f.jpg
00:52:917 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/9BbLo/f12dbdbe5e.jpg
00:52:917 - YOu can use a wiggle slider here to emphasize the ups and downs of the vocals

Easy

01:26:232 (3) - bad polarity shift. Either change (3) or the notes around it to make it work < It's following the music, so i think it's fine :)
01:36:050 (3,4) - polarity ^

Normal

00:17:619 (1) - elongate to white tick & add clap hs < Added clap only
00:20:194 (1) - remove clap hs < Okay
00:35:323 (4,5,6) - It doesn't follow the vocals. I would suggest http://puu.sh/9B9fb/f368081496.jpg < Not changing this
00:40:795 (1,1,1) - I suggest: http://puu.sh/9B9xc/d0535c14ed.jpg < The second slider's a bit too early... But the current is a bit too late... What a dilemma -,- Not changing this...
01:19:955 (4) - Turn into a circle and move 01:20:599 (1) back 1/2 tick < Okay
01:26:393 - bad polarity shift. add a circle. < Nope, again, it's following the music

Hard

00:03:939 - add circle - stacked < No, just no
Okay, that's it ^^ thank you for your mod~
Rakuen
( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Hm...music volume seems low

[Easy]
AR is a bit fast for the SV, try AR2
Personally feel SV is a bit slow but acceptable
00:05:387 (2,3) - Change to a slider, like this 00:15:688 (4) -
00:41:439 (1) - NC here may be a bit confuse for offset change, I prefer only NC at 00:41:973 (1) -

[Normal]
Looks fine!
00:13:435 (2) - X:312 Y:176 for blanket with 00:12:469 (1) - , then DS this 00:13:756 (3) -
00:32:748 (6) - X:36 Y:220 for blanket
00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Hmm...confuse stack, especially 00:37:576 (8) -
01:07:724 (1) - Not sure if you're out of space or anything, but I strongly recommend to keep same Distance Snap
01:09:333 (2,3) - Make sure they are around 1.7x DS too
01:11:586 (6) - If possible don't make the slider tail touch 01:10:942 (5) -
01:12:874 (1) - 1.7x DS please, no jump even it's a very small 1
01:18:024 (1) - Constant DS
01:25:749 (5) - ^
01:27:681 (8) - ^

[Hard]
AR8 too fast, please use AR7
Looks fine as well!
00:26:632 (4,5,6,1) - This part is a bit crowded, stacks are confusing
00:40:312 (5,6) - Swap place
00:40:634 (1) - This one is extra hit, guitar sound is at 00:40:473 -
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Rakuen wrote:

( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Hm...music volume seems low < Indeed... can't find better one and too lazy to change it now XD

[Easy]
AR is a bit fast for the SV, try AR2 < How about 2.5? :3
Personally feel SV is a bit slow but acceptable < :3
00:05:387 (2,3) - Change to a slider, like this 00:15:688 (4) - < It was for some creation :3, no change
00:41:439 (1) - NC here may be a bit confuse for offset change, I prefer only NC at 00:41:973 (1) - < Hmm... It was used to be SV change, fixed :)

[Normal]
Looks fine!
00:13:435 (2) - X:312 Y:176 for blanket with 00:12:469 (1) - , then DS this 00:13:756 (3) - < Fixed
00:32:748 (6) - X:36 Y:220 for blanket < Okay
00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Hmm...confuse stack, especially 00:37:576 (8) - < Looks fine enough :3
01:07:724 (1) - Not sure if you're out of space or anything, but I strongly recommend to keep same Distance Snap < Yeah, I'm out of space T_T Fixed it now :)
01:09:333 (2,3) - Make sure they are around 1.7x DS too < They are :3
01:11:586 (6) - If possible don't make the slider tail touch 01:10:942 (5) - < Okay, barely did it :/
01:12:874 (1) - 1.7x DS please, no jump even it's a very small 1 < Okay, fixed
01:18:024 (1) - Constant DS < Fixed :3
01:25:749 (5) - ^ ^
01:27:681 (8) - ^ ^

[Hard]
AR8 too fast, please use AR7 < How AR 7.5 sounds to you? :3
Looks fine as well!
00:26:632 (4,5,6,1) - This part is a bit crowded, stacks are confusing < That's the tricky part :3
00:40:312 (5,6) - Swap place < Okay
00:40:634 (1) - This one is extra hit, guitar sound is at 00:40:473 - < Looks fine....
Thank you so much for your mod :) ~
Gaia
From my queue~~


[Hard]
You used DS of 2? o-o I'd use 1.7 or less for this slow tempo song
Changing your SV from 1x to 0.5x suddenly I don't recommend, people (like me) go too fast and slider break.. maybe 0.75x is better as an option
http://puu.sh/9YnJx/9718235742.png

00:02:169 (1) - blanket 00:02:651 (2) -
00:02:651 (2) - put it in the center (256,192)
00:02:812 (3) - not perf mirror. Copy n paste 00:02:169 (1) - and Ctrl + > twice (http://puu.sh/9Yn32/23038dcfb5.jpg)
00:12:308 (6,1) - pree big jump for hard
00:27:759 (6) - weird jump
00:33:070 (1,2) - blankets
00:37:576 (5,6) - looks better imo http://puu.sh/9YniM/5c670590da.jpg
00:50:342 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/9Ynr0/75c5e7d3cc.jpg
00:56:136 (4,5) - ^ basically same type of thing
01:04:827 (6) - http://puu.sh/9Yny6/536fd9727d.jpg
01:11:264 (3) - http://puu.sh/9YnBx/d03ee52d48.jpg

The song ends... abruptly.. :\

A nice relaxing song (: I especially love how you had a decrescendo on one of your sliders, that was cool!!
Good luck with ur map from now!~
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Gaia wrote:

From my queue~~


[Hard]
You used DS of 2? o-o I'd use 1.7 or less for this slow tempo song < ^-^ I think 2.0 is fine though ^-^
Changing your SV from 1x to 0.5x suddenly I don't recommend, people (like me) go too fast and slider break.. maybe 0.75x is better as an option
http://puu.sh/9YnJx/9718235742.png < I change the combo color, so pretty fine eh? :3

00:02:169 (1) - blanket 00:02:651 (2) - < Okay
00:02:651 (2) - put it in the center (256,192) < No thanks, it's just like repositioning my whole map x_x
00:02:812 (3) - not perf mirror. Copy n paste 00:02:169 (1) - and Ctrl + > twice (http://puu.sh/9Yn32/23038dcfb5.jpg) < Fixed
00:12:308 (6,1) - pree big jump for hard < There are hard with bigger jump than this... Furthermore, I love jumps :3
00:27:759 (6) - weird jump < Not really :P
00:33:070 (1,2) - blankets < I don't place it in the center on purpose...
00:37:576 (5,6) - looks better imo http://puu.sh/9YniM/5c670590da.jpg < Jump is love, jump is life XD
00:50:342 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/9Ynr0/75c5e7d3cc.jpg ^
00:56:136 (4,5) - ^ basically same type of thing ^
01:04:827 (6) - http://puu.sh/9Yny6/536fd9727d.jpg < Nope
01:11:264 (3) - http://puu.sh/9YnBx/d03ee52d48.jpg ^

The song ends... abruptly.. :\ < Well, I disliked spinner ^.^

A nice relaxing song (: I especially love how you had a decrescendo on one of your sliders, that was cool!! :3
Good luck with ur map from now!~
Thank you for mod~! ^^
Krfawy
Sorry for my ultra-belated mod, but I am so slooow now. ;w;

Generally
  1. I believe the second offset should be 41989. Tell me if it works better at your PC, but I am pretty sure it does.
Easy
  1. 00:09:894 (1) - I don't really think that a clap hitsound matches the music here. Remove it please, but IMO not hitsounding this moment is the best way to map this moment.
  2. 00:17:619 (1) - As above - I don't think it sounds great now. In this moment I advice to add a whistle instead of a clap. And maybe add a whistle at the very end of the slider. I think it will follow the music better. :P
  3. 00:41:439 (2) - I swear it sounds better if you change this moment a bit. I advice to extend a previous slider (1) til 00:41:278 - and here would be a finish hitsound. Also I advice to delete the accurate (2) note because it's really confusing for newer players. They will be shocked and surprised! It's a really hard moment to play if you do not train it something like 4 times, but Easy should be SS-able for the first time without practicing!
  4. 00:41:973 (1) - To be honest I believe a whistle would match better to the music than a finish at the beginning.
Normal
  1. 00:31:138 (5) - Move the last point in the slider to X=-20;Y=128 to improve the blanket.
  2. 00:40:795 (1,1) - Please, delete the red (1) - that second - since it's still to hard to play it correctly! It's really difficult and I think it will be better to add the note but in the Hard difficulty! And the second thing - I think the first - green - (1) slider would have a finish at the very end of it.
Hard
  1. Don't be scared! Set AR8 at this difficulty. It fits very well! ;)
  2. 00:40:634 (1) - Please, add a finish at the very end. It sounds better!
Hard is just a pure awesomness. *-*

Good Luck with this mapset! I don't think it has more mistakes than with the second offset, the rest is really well arranged. Go to BATs! :)
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Krfawy wrote:

Sorry for my ultra-belated mod, but I am so slooow now. ;w;

Generally
  1. I believe the second offset should be 41989. Tell me if it works better at your PC, but I am pretty sure it does.
< Hmm, I think my current offset now works better, 41989 sounds a bit late I think :/

Easy
  1. 00:09:894 (1) - I don't really think that a clap hitsound matches the music here. Remove it please, but IMO not hitsounding this moment is the best way to map this moment. < Okay
  2. 00:17:619 (1) - As above - I don't think it sounds great now. In this moment I advice to add a whistle instead of a clap. And maybe add a whistle at the very end of the slider. I think it will follow the music better. :P < Fixed
  3. 00:41:439 (2) - I swear it sounds better if you change this moment a bit. I advice to extend a previous slider (1) til 00:41:278 - and here would be a finish hitsound. Also I advice to delete the accurate (2) note because it's really confusing for newer players. They will be shocked and surprised! It's a really hard moment to play if you do not train it something like 4 times, but Easy should be SS-able for the first time without practicing! < I'm not changing this yet
  4. 00:41:973 (1) - To be honest I believe a whistle would match better to the music than a finish at the beginning.
< I don't think so :/

Normal
  1. 00:31:138 (5) - Move the last point in the slider to X=-20;Y=128 to improve the blanket. < Fixed
  2. 00:40:795 (1,1) - Please, delete the red (1) - that second - since it's still to hard to play it correctly! It's really difficult and I think it will be better to add the note but in the Hard difficulty! And the second thing - I think the first - green - (1) slider would have a finish at the very end of it.
< Not changing this yet :/

Hard
  1. Don't be scared! Set AR8 at this difficulty. It fits very well! ;) < Okay ^^ Finally, there is someone who agrees with me~
  2. 00:40:634 (1) - Please, add a finish at the very end. It sounds better!
< Hmm, I don't think so...

Hard is just a pure awesomness. *-* < Thank you~

Good Luck with this mapset! I don't think it has more mistakes than with the second offset, the rest is really well arranged. Go to BATs! :) < Well, maybe I'll search for few more mods before I go see BAT. I don't want to waste their time for my imperfect map ^-^
Thank you for mod~ :)
Cerulean Veyron
From V&V's Modding queue

[> Easy <]
  1. 00:25:344 (2,4) - Overlap, or on purpose?
  2. 00:50:342 (3,4,2) - ^
  3. 00:54:848 (4,5) - The flow breaks here, try curving it on the other side.
  4. - Well, nice mapping... no suggestion.
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:11:181 (8,1) - Same reason in Easy. Try make a blanket here.
  2. 00:20:838 (2,1) - Overlap, or on purpose?
  3. 00:29:207 (2,3,4) - Remake the triangle form here.
  4. 00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Good flow, but DS is a little strange here.
  5. 00:41:439 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't fit with the song track.
  6. 01:01:608 (7,1) - Remake a better blanket.
  7. 01:09:977 (4,6) - Same as 00:20:838 (2,1) -
  8. 01:14:483 (2,5) - ^
  9. - Another good mapping~

Hard is perfect anyway, Good Luck~
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Gray Veyron wrote:

From V&V's Modding queue

[> Easy <]
  1. 00:25:344 (2,4) - Overlap, or on purpose? < Change this part a bit :3
  2. 00:50:342 (3,4,2) - ^ < Not really visible, so no change
  3. 00:54:848 (4,5) - The flow breaks here, try curving it on the other side. < I dislike the shape >.<
  4. - Well, nice mapping... no suggestion.
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:11:181 (8,1) - Same reason in Easy. Try make a blanket here. < No
  2. 00:20:838 (2,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? < Again, not really visible, so no change
  3. 00:29:207 (2,3,4) - Remake the triangle form here. < Okay
  4. 00:37:254 (7,8,9) - Good flow, but DS is a little strange here. < The DS here is consistent, 1.7 ^-^
  5. 00:41:439 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't fit with the song track. < Okay
  6. 01:01:608 (7,1) - Remake a better blanket. < Fixed
  7. 01:09:977 (4,6) - Same as 00:20:838 (2,1) - < This part is helpless T_T
  8. 01:14:483 (2,5) - ^ < Another helpless part T_T
  9. - Another good mapping~

Hard is perfect anyway, Good Luck~ :3
Thank you for mod~ :)
sullyjhf
Hey, from my Modding Queue

Just gonna start with the fact that this isn't going to be a very big mod because you've already had a lot of moddings and I think this map is pretty much ready for BATs, but I hope I can be of some use anyway :)

Bpm is 93.16 but I don't think it makes that much of a difference, the timing of the notes feels a tiny bit late but that may just be my computer.

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:920 (4) - Blanket this slider better, I think you can actually just move it, but that might upset distance spacing, so do with it what you want.
  2. 00:40:473 (1,2) - Look at what I said for Hard here.
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:795 (1,2) - Look at what I wrote for hard about this part.
  2. 01:38:625 (1) - I think this sounds and looks better if you end it on the blue tick before, then make it a mirror of the repeat slider after it.
[Hard]
  1. AR 8 is perfect
  2. 00:26:632 (4,5,6) - Just something I noticed on my first play, this (6) is really hard to read because it's directly underneath the (4) slider, I remembered it on the second play so it's not that big of a deal, but it's still weird.
    It's weird because even though there are more notes like this, this was the only one that tripped me up, however if you do feel the need to alter some of the others then go ahead.
  3. 00:40:634 (1,1) - This is the strangest thing ever, the music actually changes at the 1/8 tick which makes it really hard to map for a Hard, what you could do is change the first slider to end 1/8 later with a finish hitsound on the end of it, and remove the other slider entirely, it sounds better to me like that
  4. 01:01:286 (5,6,7) - Try to blanket the ends of these sliders and the note a bit better?
  5. 01:15:971 (2) - this note isn't on the blue tick, probably just a resnap error but needs fixing anyway :P
  6. 01:38:625 (1,2) - Blanket the start of the second slider with the first a bit better?

Sorry for such a short mod, it's just there isn't much to fix with this map, Good Luck on getting this ranked, I feel it should be soon!
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

sullyjhf wrote:

Hey, from my Modding Queue

Just gonna start with the fact that this isn't going to be a very big mod because you've already had a lot of moddings and I think this map is pretty much ready for BATs, but I hope I can be of some use anyway :) < Don't worry, I accept all kind of mods ^^

Bpm is 93.16 but I don't think it makes that much of a difference, the timing of the notes feels a tiny bit late but that may just be my computer. < Because it doesn't affect much, I'm not changing this (lazy to resnap all notes and timing points, lol XD)

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:920 (4) - Blanket this slider better, I think you can actually just move it, but that might upset distance spacing, so do with it what you want. < I'm not changing this yet ^-^
  2. 00:40:473 (1,2) - Look at what I said for Hard here. < Okay, okay, I have a lot of critics about this part, yeah it kinda weird, but I didn't notice that the music changes at 1/8 and I have no idea how should I change this.... But finally I find something good enough to change this part to :) Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:795 (1,2) - Look at what I wrote for hard about this part. < Okay, this one as well, fixed :) Oh, and look at what I've done ^^ http://puu.sh/a4S7W/0cec600ba6.jpg I change 00:40:151 (3) - to a circle and move 00:40:473 (1) - 1/2 tick forward :)
  2. 01:38:625 (1) - I think this sounds and looks better if you end it on the blue tick before, then make it a mirror of the repeat slider after it. < Good idea, fixed ~
[Hard]
  1. AR 8 is perfect < Yay ^^
  2. 00:26:632 (4,5,6) - Just something I noticed on my first play, this (6) is really hard to read because it's directly underneath the (4) slider, I remembered it on the second play so it's not that big of a deal, but it's still weird.
    It's weird because even though there are more notes like this, this was the only one that tripped me up, however if you do feel the need to alter some of the others then go ahead. < Do you want tricky part? Because that how you got tricky part ^^ Yeah, that's the tricky part :) No first try FC allowed XD
  3. 00:40:634 (1,1) - This is the strangest thing ever, the music actually changes at the 1/8 tick which makes it really hard to map for a Hard, what you could do is change the first slider to end 1/8 later with a finish hitsound on the end of it, and remove the other slider entirely, it sounds better to me like that
    < Okay, look at what I've done with this part :D http://puu.sh/a4Rj7/c9662525a5.jpg Instead of removing it, I make the second slider start on 1/8 ^^ Why? Because it's hard, that's why XD
  4. 01:01:286 (5,6,7) - Try to blanket the ends of these sliders and the note a bit better? < Okay, this is hard, barely did it, but it makes the 01:00:481 (2) - doesn't land on the end of the 01:01:930 (6) - slider T_T http://puu.sh/a4RDm/18f2ea03df.jpg
  5. 01:15:971 (2) - this note isn't on the blue tick, probably just a resnap error but needs fixing anyway :P < Whoops XD fixed~
  6. 01:38:625 (1,2) - Blanket the start of the second slider with the first a bit better? < Okay, I tried...

Sorry for such a short mod, it's just there isn't much to fix with this map, Good Luck on getting this ranked, I feel it should be soon! < Yeah, pretty short, but I change much ^^
Thank you so much for mod~ :)
Yuthuil
Easy:

00:08:606 (6,1) - Maybe turn the volume up for the hitsounds for these two, I had trouble hearing whether I hit them or not.
00:31:138 (5) - ^
00:31:972 add Kiai here?
00:35:645 (3) - Make this object closer to the prior object on the timeline, then DS it.

Normal:

00:03:778 (2) -I have trouble telling whether I hit it.
00:13:435 (2) - ^
00:32:787 Kiai here?
01:19:521 I was very confused here as this was Normal diff.

Hard:

I was thinking AR8 is too high for such a slow song. suggestion: 7 or 6.

00:32:884 Kiai?
I noticed a few parts aren't distance snapped. How about you do them? since they're way too hard on their own.

M4M by the way.
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

MisakiYuri wrote:

Easy:

00:08:606 (6,1) - Maybe turn the volume up for the hitsounds for these two, I had trouble hearing whether I hit them or not. < I don't even lower the volume :/
00:31:138 (5) - ^ ^
00:31:972 add Kiai here? < No, one kiai on the second chorus seems to be enough
00:35:645 (3) - Make this object closer to the prior object on the timeline, then DS it. < Okay, I modified this part a little, http://puu.sh/a6iCx/643e51447b.jpg I moved 00:35:323 (3) - 1/2 tick forward to follow the vocal and add a note here 00:36:932 what do you think? :3

Normal:

00:03:778 (2) -I have trouble telling whether I hit it. < I don't even lower the volume :/
00:13:435 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:787 Kiai here? < Same reason with easy
01:19:521 I was very confused here as this was Normal diff. < Okay, I stack this note http://puu.sh/a6iIM/5f392cbe36.jpg

Hard:

I was thinking AR8 is too high for such a slow song. suggestion: 7 or 6. < AR 8 for life~! :<

00:32:884 Kiai? < Same reason with easy and normal
I noticed a few parts aren't distance snapped. How about you do them? since they're way too hard on their own. < Jumps are allowed on hard :3

M4M by the way.
Okay, thank you for mod~:3
-Nya-
Hey, hanyuu!
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
1) 00:07:962~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 00:09:894.
2) 00:12:469~ NC here.
3) 00:27:920~ NC here.
4) 00:27:920~ Maybe place a clapsound here as well?
5) 00:36:932~ NC here
6) 01:04:183~ Maybe turn this slider so that it's mirroring this slider: 01:06:758. Like this:


Normal:
1) AiMod: I don't think the letterbox in breaks may differ from any diffs. I suggest fixing that.
2) 01:07:724~ Maybe turn this slider so it looks something like this:
I just think it looks better that way.

Hard:
1) 00:03:939~ Maybe add a hitcircle here?
2) 00:24:540~ Try to blanket this slider with this slider: 00:24:057. Something like this:
3) 00:40:473 and 00:40:634~ This sounds a bit confusing. I suggest removing this hitcircle: 00:40:473 and making this slider: 00:40:634 longer.
It must then look like this:
Remember to then also change the slider velocity at this point: 00:40:473.
4) 01:18:668~ Blanket this slider better.
5) 01:20:599~ I don't really like this slider here. I think a spinner would be better.
6) 01:30:095~ Add hitcircle here?
7) 01:40:234~ Blanket this slider with this slider: 01:40:556. Like this:

And that's that.
Overall, great mapset! Excellent work, hanyuu.
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
micchi_chi
Hi~ Sorry for late reply :3

LizeKotze wrote:

Hey, hanyuu!
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
1) 00:07:962~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 00:09:894. < I prefer NC on big white tick :/
2) 00:12:469~ NC here. < I don't really like two combo only on one color :/
3) 00:27:920~ NC here. < This one seems fine :)
4) 00:27:920~ Maybe place a clapsound here as well? < Okay, changed the whistle to clap :3
5) 00:36:932~ NC here < Again, I prefer NC on big white tick....
6) 01:04:183~ Maybe turn this slider so that it's mirroring this slider: 01:06:758. Like this: < Okay...


Normal:
1) AiMod: I don't think the letterbox in breaks may differ from any diffs. I suggest fixing that. < Fixed
2) 01:07:724~ Maybe turn this slider so it looks something like this: < Okay, good idea :)
I just think it looks better that way.

Hard:
1) 00:03:939~ Maybe add a hitcircle here? < No, that was done on purpose...
2) 00:24:540~ Try to blanket this slider with this slider: 00:24:057. Something like this: < It looks weird imo :/
3) 00:40:473 and 00:40:634~ This sounds a bit confusing. I suggest removing this hitcircle: 00:40:473 and making this slider: 00:40:634 longer.
It must then look like this: < Okay :)
Remember to then also change the slider velocity at this point: 00:40:473. < (y)
4) 01:18:668~ Blanket this slider better. < If you tell me to blanket it with 01:18:024 (1) - then I'm not doing it. I don't place it at the center of the slider on purpose....
5) 01:20:599~ I don't really like this slider here. I think a spinner would be better. < No
6) 01:30:095~ Add hitcircle here? < That was done on purpose...
7) 01:40:234~ Blanket this slider with this slider: 01:40:556. Like this: < It looks crowded and causing a lot of overlap, the current seems fine for me....

And that's that.
Overall, great mapset! Excellent work, hanyuu.
Good Luck! :D
Thank you for mod :3
And it seems you just uploaded a new mapset eh?
Maybe I'll mod it sometime~♥
Rtyzen
Hey there! from my queue~
O_O Creepy song
Hitsound pattern is abit weird, so I'm not confident of my modding skills enough to mod them
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:894 (1) - Move NC from here to 00:07:962 (5)
  2. 00:12:469 (3) - NC
  3. 00:27:920 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved (the slider head)
  4. 00:35:323 (3,4) - Don't hide notes behind tails on easy, especially not when the beat is so close
  5. 00:36:932 (4) - NC
Couldn't find any more problems :o

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:010 (5) - NC
  2. 00:24:701 (3) - Nazi-mod Sorry, I had to x-1
  3. 00:26:310 - Blanket better
  4. 00:49:698 (5) - NC
  5. 00:59:998 (5,6) - Blanket better
  6. 01:07:724 (1) - Move NC from here to 01:06:436 (7)
  7. 01:12:874 (1) - Move NC from here to 01:11:586 (6)
  8. 01:15:449 (4) - NC(?)

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:435 (3) - x-1, y+1 (too noticeable to skip)
Couldn't find any other problems :o

Sorry for a short mod :(, but your map is already almost perfect and I couldn't find many problems with it :o. Definitely not because I was rushing through it because the song is creepy as heck and I don't want to listen to it too many times. No, that would be unprofessional XD :P

Good Luck with ranking soon!~
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there! from my queue~
O_O Creepy song < lol XD
Hitsound pattern is abit weird, so I'm not confident of my modding skills enough to mod them < Well, I'm not good at hitsounding >.<
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:894 (1) - Move NC from here to 00:07:962 (5) < Okay....
  2. 00:12:469 (3) - NC < Fixed
  3. 00:27:920 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved (the slider head) < Okay
  4. 00:35:323 (3,4) - Don't hide notes behind tails on easy, especially not when the beat is so close < Well, it can't be helped... If I move it, then it would be hard to DS the next notes :/
  5. 00:36:932 (4) - NC < Okay
Couldn't find any more problems :o

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:010 (5) - NC < I NC here 00:15:044 (1) - Instead ;)
  2. 00:24:701 (3) - Nazi-mod Sorry, I had to x-1 < lol XD, fixed :3
  3. 00:26:310 - Blanket better < 'Kay
  4. 00:49:698 (5) - NC < Fixed
  5. 00:59:998 (5,6) - Blanket better < (Y)
  6. 01:07:724 (1) - Move NC from here to 01:06:436 (7) < I prefer NC on big white tick....
  7. 01:12:874 (1) - Move NC from here to 01:11:586 (6) < ^
  8. 01:15:449 (4) - NC(?) < No, thanks

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:435 (3) - x-1, y+1 (too noticeable to skip) < lool XD Fixed
Couldn't find any other problems :o

Sorry for a short mod :(, but your map is already almost perfect and I couldn't find many problems with it :o. Definitely not because I was rushing through it because the song is creepy as heck and I don't want to listen to it too many times. No, that would be unprofessional XD :P

Good Luck with ranking soon!~
Thank you for mod ^^
I like how you still mod my map even though you don't like the song :)
osu needs more people like you :D
And if you wonder why this song is creepy, it comes from a very absurd anime XD
Once again, thank you :)
Ichigaki
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


[General]

  • Okay, this mapset has a video, but where's the download option for no video? `-`)
  1. The audio bitrate is under 192 kbps...
  2. Change the Artist name to BOA, 'cause the video show the metadata at all `3`
[Easy]
  1. 00:05:709 (3) - remove this
  2. 00:15:688 (2) - change to circle
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:387 (5) - move to x : 132 y : 56
  2. 00:37:576 (8,9) - ctrl + g for better gameplay
  3. 01:06:114 - add circle
  4. 01:11:264 (6) - add circle to x: 144 y :200
  5. 01:15:449 (4) - move to 01:15:127 - and move to x : 152 y : 184
[Hard]
  1. Change AR to 7
  2. 00:03:778 (5) - change to slider with end point on 00:03:939 -
  3. 00:04:100 (6) - change the end point to 00:04:583 -
  4. 00:16:010 (4) - ctrl + g
  5. 00:22:689 - add circle on x : 192 y : 136 (1/8 snap divisor)
  6. 00:38:059 (6) - move to x : 160 y : 144
  7. 01:06:758 (4) - move to x : 184 y : 144
  8. 01:11:103 (2) - remove this
  9. 01:20:277 (6) - remove this and change the start point of 01:20:599 (1) - to 01:20:277 -
I've heard this anime, but i'm not watching it, the art seems like Elfen Lied, so this's must be psychological `3`)v

Good luck~
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


[General]

  • Okay, this mapset has a video, but where's the download option for no video? `-`) < :? I don't know, how do you make no video download button appear on the beatmap listing? The link appeared on the forum, but the button doesn't appear on the beatmap listing T_T sorry, I'm such a new mapper T_T
  1. The audio bitrate is under 192 kbps... < It doesn't matter as long as it doesn't below 128 kbps, because the range is 128 kbps - 192 kbps.... "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps"
  2. Change the Artist name to BOA, 'cause the video show the metadata at all `3` < I think the current artist is fine :/ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%C3%B4a
[Easy]
  1. 00:05:709 (3) - remove this < I think it's fine enough...
  2. 00:15:688 (2) - change to circle < It's some kind of variation, so no thanks ^^
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:387 (5) - move to x : 132 y : 56 < ? What for?
  2. 00:37:576 (8,9) - ctrl + g for better gameplay < I think it's fine for now, so the next flow would be better....
  3. 01:06:114 - add circle < I don't add any circle there on purpose....
  4. 01:11:264 (6) - add circle to x: 144 y :200 < huh? O-O
  5. 01:15:449 (4) - move to 01:15:127 - and move to x : 152 y : 184 < I think it's fine for now
[Hard]
  1. Change AR to 7 < No
  2. 00:03:778 (5) - change to slider with end point on 00:03:939 - < I don't add any circle at 00:03:939 on purpose
  3. 00:04:100 (6) - change the end point to 00:04:583 - < ? The endpoint is already on 00:04:583 ....
  4. 00:16:010 (4) - ctrl + g < Seems fine for me
  5. 00:22:689 - add circle on x : 192 y : 136 (1/8 snap divisor) < Okay, but I change the place a bit to x:176 y:140
  6. 00:38:059 (6) - move to x : 160 y : 144 < hmm? what for? O-O
  7. 01:06:758 (4) - move to x : 184 y : 144 < ^
  8. 01:11:103 (2) - remove this < No
  9. 01:20:277 (6) - remove this and change the start point of 01:20:599 (1) - to 01:20:277 - < I'm doing this on easy and normal, but maybe not on hard
I've heard this anime, but i'm not watching it, the art seems like Elfen Lied, so this's must be psychological `3`)v < Yup ^^ very absurd XD

Good luck~
Thank you for mod~
MissGeurts
I also made a map for Duvet and I was very curious about how another player would map it.
I played it and might as well mod it ;)

... I couldn't find things that weren't right but in the hard difficulty I found some notes that were on top of each other but weren't 100% stacked. You can change this by lowering the stack leniency in the advanced menu of song setup. There is nothing wrong with it, it just looks a little messy in my opinion :oops:

Judging by the amount of stars you collected I would definetely contact a BAT and ask either for a bubble or getting it ranked because it deserves it ;)
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

MissGeurts wrote:

I also made a map for Duvet and I was very curious about how another player would map it.
I played it and might as well mod it ;)

... I couldn't find things that weren't right but in the hard difficulty I found some notes that were on top of each other but weren't 100% stacked. You can change this by lowering the stack leniency in the advanced menu of song setup. There is nothing wrong with it, it just looks a little messy in my opinion :oops:

Judging by the amount of stars you collected I would definetely contact a BAT and ask either for a bubble or getting it ranked because it deserves it ;)
Hi~ Thank you for your compliment ^^
I would be very happy if you would like to mod my map ^^
And about stacking, I might try to tidy it up a bit ^^
Maybe I'll check your map later :)
About contacting a BAT, maybe later.... Lazyyy XD
Want 2 Buy Avon
Hi Hi, from my modding queue~ <3
[Easy]
00:08:606 (2) - could blanket 00:07:962 (1) - better
00:15:688 (2) - I'd generally avoid 1/2 sliders for an easy
00:22:769 (1) - this overlap isn't too appealing
00:27:276 (3) - same as before
00:27:920 (1) - could blanket 00:31:138 (2) - better
00:31:782 (3,1) - having overlaps like this in an easy is kinda frowned upon
00:35:323 (3,1) - never stack things on an easy, stacks are extremely difficult for new players
00:40:473 (1) - I would avoid this too since it ends on such a weird tick
01:12:874 (1) - put only one inherited point here son that kiai doesn't switch off
That's it for the Easy <3
[Normal]
00:07:319 (1) - could fix the blanket a little
00:16:010 (2) - remove the whistle please >.<
00:34:357 (3) - touch up dis blanket
00:40:473 (1) - this curve looks kinda funny
00:47:123 (1) - move this where 00:45:191 (6) - is
00:45:835 (8) - and blanket this around it after you move it
00:49:698 (1) - and 00:50:985 (3) - could be blanketed better
00:59:998 (5) - fix blanket~
01:34:762 (2) - blankettt~
Good luck with the map <3
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

Xellie wrote:

Hi Hi, from my modding queue~ <3 <
[Easy]
00:08:606 (2) - could blanket 00:07:962 (1) - better < Okay
00:15:688 (2) - I'd generally avoid 1/2 sliders for an easy < Okay, maybe I'll avoid it on my other maps... But for this one, I'd leave it the way it is...
00:22:769 (1) - this overlap isn't too appealing < ? o-o what overlap? with 00:21:482 (3) - ? It can't be helped because of the DS...
00:27:276 (3) - same as before < same as before as well ;)
00:27:920 (1) - could blanket 00:31:138 (2) - better < It's blanketed perfectly :/
00:31:782 (3,1) - having overlaps like this in an easy is kinda frowned upon < Again, DS... But, overlap like that looks cool imo ;)
00:35:323 (3,1) - never stack things on an easy, stacks are extremely difficult for new players < ... someone's already pointed this out... maybe I have to change this after all... moved 00:36:932 (1) - at the place where 00:35:001 (2) - was and DS the next notes
00:40:473 (1) - I would avoid this too since it ends on such a weird tick < It ends on the cymbal sound...
01:12:874 (1) - put only one inherited point here son that kiai doesn't switch off < That was done on purpose so that the stars would burst out again :)
That's it for the Easy <3
[Normal]
00:07:319 (1) - could fix the blanket a little < Fine
00:16:010 (2) - remove the whistle please >.< < Okay
00:34:357 (3) - touch up dis blanket < 'kay
00:40:473 (1) - this curve looks kinda funny < And lovely ♥
00:47:123 (1) - move this where 00:45:191 (6) - is < Okay
00:45:835 (8) - and blanket this around it after you move it < Fine
00:49:698 (1) - and 00:50:985 (3) - could be blanketed better < It's pretty hard to blanket them :/
00:59:998 (5) - fix blanket~ < 'Kay
01:34:762 (2) - blankettt~ <^
Good luck with the map <3
Thank you for mod ^^
Updated :)
HootOwlStar
Hi~~ :D
Mod from my queue
Don't mind my English and these are only suggestions <------These words are important

[General]

AiMod wrote:

Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:12:874
So that's what you should concern about~

[Easy]
OMG SV is too low for me
00:05:387 (2,3) - Make them become a slider
00:06:031 (4) - Move point x:212 y:272 to x:208 y:284
00:21:482 (3,1) - This part is not so nice in my opinion but idk the way to fix this
00:41:973 (1) - Suggest moving point x:500 y:148 to x:488 y:112
00:54:526 (3) - Suggest to remove the circle
01:09:655 (2,3) - Just make them a slider or overlap the two notes
01:14:805 (2,3) - ^


[Normal]
00:18:263 - Add a circle
00:49:376 - ^
01:05:148 (5) - Remove this circle
01:15:449 (4) - Move to 01:15:127

No offense for Hard diff so that's all of my mod
The mapset is almost excellent (y)
Hope your maps get ranked :D
Topic Starter
micchi_chi
Yay~! Finally a mod arrived ^^

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hi~~ :D
Mod from my queue
Don't mind my English and these are only suggestions <------These words are important < 'Kay

[General]

AiMod wrote:

Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:12:874
So that's what you should concern about~ < No problem, it's used to turn the kiai off for a while and turn it on again so the star would burst out one more time. A lot of map have that problem (the mapper do that) too....

[Easy]
OMG SV is too low for me < Making Easy before the change of the star difficulty system is troublesome... That's why.... T_T
00:05:387 (2,3) - Make them become a slider < Seems fine for me, at least for now....
00:06:031 (4) - Move point x:212 y:272 to x:208 y:284 < Okay, the slider looks better :)
00:21:482 (3,1) - This part is not so nice in my opinion but idk the way to fix this < look ---> this, what do you think? ;)
00:41:973 (1) - Suggest moving point x:500 y:148 to x:488 y:112 < Okay
00:54:526 (3) - Suggest to remove the circle < Looks fine for me :)
01:09:655 (2,3) - Just make them a slider or overlap the two notes < I would avoid overlap on Easy... But my actual reason is the DS is troublesome -,-
01:14:805 (2,3) - ^ ^


[Normal]
00:18:263 - Add a circle < Hmmm... It sounds kinda good, it makes good polarity too... But I think I would follow the vocal this time :)
00:49:376 - ^ < Fine for this one :)
01:05:148 (5) - Remove this circle < Fine enough for me °3°
01:15:449 (4) - Move to 01:15:127 < Okay, and DS the entire thing -,-

No offense for Hard diff so that's all of my mod
The mapset is almost excellent (y)
Hope your maps get ranked :D
Thank you for mod~
Self modded the Hard, edited some hitsounds and stuff...
Updated ^^
It's hard to find mod nowadays x_x
Maybe I should call a BAT....
But lets wait until the star priority reaches 30+ ^^
AlexaBM
hi~ from my queue
[General]
  1. Don't you think this mp3 is too quiet? Try to get an mp3 that's louder.
  2. The 1st offset should be 2153. Don't forget to resnap the objects then. Timing -> Resnap all notes
[Easy]
  1. Check this diff with AiMod, there is some problems with spacing (ctrl+shift+a -> check distance snap)
  2. 00:05:693 (3) - I suggest to delete this circle. Don't forget to fix the spacing if you accept it.
  3. 00:07:946 (1,2) - Blanket could a bit better.
  4. 00:25:344 (3,1) - Beginners will click an the slider's end. Move it higher
  5. 00:46:801 (5) - Delete it please. Easy diff should be more relaxing.
  6. 00:50:663 (4) - ^
  7. 01:14:805 (2,3) - If I were you, I'd placed it to the left
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:169 (1,2) - Blanket pls
  2. 00:10:538 (6,7,8) - Make a perfect triangle?
  3. 00:29:207 (2,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:35:645 (5) - Maybe end this slider at 00:35:967 - ?
  5. 00:37:254 (7,8,9) - This moment is unexpected and not so good. I don't know what to suggest, but try to mak it easier to read!
  6. 00:40:151 (3) - Player can't see this object, unexpected again
  7. 00:42:991 (2) - I'm sure this object should be here 00:42:938 -
  8. 00:49:054 (4) - This again.
  9. 01:11:586 (6) - No no no no NO!! This is totally not good to play. Player WILL click on the slider's tail. Highly suggest to replace it.
  10. 01:16:093 (6,7) - Bad blanket
  11. 01:18:024 (1) - End this slider at 01:18:346 -
  12. End this dif with a spinner like you did in the Easy diff?
[Hard]
  1. AR 8 is too fast for such a calm song. Maybe AR 7 will fit better?
  2. 00:17:619 (1) - This slider is too near the HP Bar, lower it a bit
  3. 00:25:988 (2,4) - Blanket pls
  4. 00:04:744 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:50:985 (4,5) - ^
  6. 01:12:874 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:17:058 (6,7) - ^
  8. 00:07:319 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle?
  9. 00:23:574 (2,3,4) - ^
  10. It would sound much better if you make this way:
  11. 01:04:827 - ^
  12. 01:15:127 - ^
  13. 01:12:552 (6) - I suggest to make a 1/6 reverse slider. First of all you should do this:
    Then you should do this:
    This slider fits the song better
Wow, really nice work! good luck~
Topic Starter
micchi_chi

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ from my queue
[General]
  1. Don't you think this mp3 is too quiet? Try to get an mp3 that's louder. < Okay, just discovered an online software to make the audio a bit louder :3
  2. The 1st offset should be 2153. Don't forget to resnap the objects then. Timing -> Resnap all notes < I changed my audio so I also adjusted my offset by myself... I hope I got it right...
[Easy]
  1. Check this diff with AiMod, there is some problems with spacing (ctrl+shift+a -> check distance snap) < Okay, fixed all of them
  2. 00:05:693 (3) - I suggest to delete this circle. Don't forget to fix the spacing if you accept it. < No, thanks :)
  3. 00:07:946 (1,2) - Blanket could a bit better. > Okay
  4. 00:25:344 (3,1) - Beginners will click an the slider's end. Move it higher < Okay
  5. 00:46:801 (5) - Delete it please. Easy diff should be more relaxing. < Not really matter imo... It's still easy XD
  6. 00:50:663 (4) - ^ ^
  7. 01:14:805 (2,3) - If I were you, I'd placed it to the left < Really? Why? it's would overlap with 01:12:750 (1) - :/
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:169 (1,2) - Blanket pls > 'Kay
  2. 00:10:538 (6,7,8) - Make a perfect triangle? < Fixed
  3. 00:29:207 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
  4. 00:35:645 (5) - Maybe end this slider at 00:35:967 - ? < No, thanks, I like it the way it is now...
  5. 00:37:254 (7,8,9) - This moment is unexpected and not so good. I don't know what to suggest, but try to mak it easier to read! < Look http://puu.sh/aJBy9/8fe4860a3a.jpg like it? ;)
  6. 00:40:151 (3) - Player can't see this object, unexpected again < I have no idea how to change this one T_T
  7. 00:42:991 (2) - I'm sure this object should be here 00:42:938 - < Really? why? o-o
  8. 00:49:054 (4) - This again.< Okay, make it like before http://puu.sh/aJBIj/64e648ba8b.jpg Is stacking on normal that bad?
  9. 01:11:586 (6) - No no no no NO!! This is totally not good to play. Player WILL click on the slider's tail. Highly suggest to replace it. < Look http://puu.sh/aJBVh/2600e3fcd9.jpg :) I've been troubled with this part for a while, and now fixed it :), no more overlap too ^^ Thanks for this
  10. 01:16:093 (6,7) - Bad blanket < I did a little symmetry here...
  11. 01:18:024 (1) - End this slider at 01:18:346 - < Nah
  12. End this dif with a spinner like you did in the Easy diff? < Maybe no...
[Hard]
  1. AR 8 is too fast for such a calm song. Maybe AR 7 will fit better? < Okay, this again... I kinda disliked AR 7 on hard, so 7.5 maybe? Still fitting imo
  2. 00:17:619 (1) - This slider is too near the HP Bar, lower it a bit < It's can't be helped :( I blanket it with 00:16:208 (5) - And there's no better position imo
  3. 00:25:988 (2,4) - Blanket pls < Fixed and the rest of the blanket ^^
  4. 00:04:744 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:50:985 (4,5) - ^
  6. 01:12:874 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:17:058 (6,7) - ^
  8. 00:07:319 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle? < 'Kay, and below this one too
  9. 00:23:574 (2,3,4) - ^
  10. It would sound much better if you make this way: < Which part is this? lol
  11. 01:04:827 - ^ < I like it for now, it's just like my style :)
  12. 01:15:127 - ^ ^
  13. 01:12:552 (6) - I suggest to make a 1/6 reverse slider. First of all you should do this: < Is that so? Okay then :)
    Then you should do this:
    This slider fits the song better
Wow, really nice work! good luck~ < Thank you :)
Thank you so much for mod ^^
Topic Starter
micchi_chi
Thank you Spicy Salsa for the star ^^

Go go needs more mod!!!
Moeri_old_1
General:
Kiai off-toggle is not needed at 01:12:589 and kiai toggle is not needed at 01:12:750.
The offset seem to be off 15ms, change offset to 2,030 and testplay if it's more correct than the one before (2,045).
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