1. Easy (0.89 stars, 55 notes)
2. Hard (1.83 stars, 128 notes)
3. Normal (1.11 stars, 83 notes)

BG: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/or ... d0ad11.jpg | Hitsound | Edit

Ringating wrote:

from my bg modding queue:

the aspect ratio was somewhere between 4:3 and 16:9, so that's fixed. Other than that, didn't need to do anything too in depth to it other than choose the right method of up scaling to maintain the sharpness. Here is the new bg:

new bg

cloud342 wrote:

Howdy, Cloudy here. hey!

Just thought I'd point out a few things, seems perfect. But I'd like you to check up on a few things.

Easy Difficulty

Nothing seems to be wrong... (AI Mod says that at 0:59 that the previous object is too far from the next one. I would disagree because testing it out, there is nothing difficult about it) fixed

Normal Difficulty

Nothing seems to be wrong... (AI Mod says that at 1:00 that the previous object is too far from the next one. I would disagree because this is normal difficulty and that players shouldn't be patronized at this difficulty) fixed

Hard Difficulty

Referring to https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Hard as a guideline...

The HP Drain Rate is a little too easy for the players. Same applies with the Overall Difficulty. relatively slow map, i barely consider this to be a hard. heck even the website calls it an easy upped the hp drain and od to 5, lets see how it goes

General

Nothing seems to be wrong...

Opinions

In Easy Difficulty, there seems to be far much more sliders than there is circles. i think thats alright

~Cloudy

Kenssai wrote:

Easy and normal, I don't really see what wrong, is easy to follow the instrument in this song so I guess is fine :3

[Hard]
00:01:925 (3) and 00:04:294 (3) - shouldn't those 2 end at blue tick? snapped it to 1/6, i think thats a little better
00:18:406 - not sure if you want to use 1/8, but if yes you can add a note here probably too tough to hit, so no
00:26:399 (3) - you might want to shorten this by 2 tick (1/4) and add a note here 00:27:583 changed
00:37:353 - same situation as 00:18:406 , depend if you want to use 1/8 nope
00:50:478 - add circle dont think theres anything there
00:50:873 - add slider to 00:51:268 (4) added
00:52:452 (1) - shorten this by 2 tick (1/4) and add circle at 00:53:636 i dont want so many 1/2s, i dont think it sounds good.
01:01:136 (1) - shorten this by 2 tick (1/4) i like this better
01:01:925 - add slider to 01:02:320 that note is not very significant imo
01:02:715 - add circle i took out the reverse and put in a long slider.
01:07:057 - ^
01:07:452 - ^
01:07:846 - ^
01:09:425 - ^ (you can put a different hitsound or lower volume so is not the same as 01:09:031 (8)) dont think its necessary
01:10:215 - ^ (you can put a different hitsound or lower volume so is not the same as 01:09:820 (9)) ^
01:11:004 - ^ (you can put a different hitsound or lower volume so is not the same as 01:10:610 (10)) ^
01:40:610 - add a circle with a low volume theres no significant note here
Since the level is kind of too easy for a hard, you might wanna map this spinner 01:42:583 (1), there is still a lots of note that can be put in there, you'll just have to play with the volume so it go lower and lower
Lots of the change might ruined some of you're original pattern >,<...but is sacrifice, you're choice :3

pishifat wrote:

from ringating's queue (even though it's not a regular mod queue... just don't question it)

Hard:

1. some messy blanket spots in places like 00:14:557 (1,2,3) - 00:33:504 (1,2) - 00:48:899 (2,3) - etc. considering how slow the song is, it's easy to see any places where the objects are arranged sloppily, so make sure they're really nice looking tried to fix zem!
2. 00:54:031 (2,3,4) - this part seems a little odd since you've got a stack underneath the previous slider. i think the best thing to do would be to manually move the stack so it lines up with the end of 00:52:452 (1) -. each "stack" distance is 4x4 (or 1 grid unit in grid4), so if you just move 2, 3, and 4 down and to the right 3 grid units it'll line up nicely with the end of (1). that probably made no sense so picture time: i have no idea what is going on with this stupid stacking stuff, its like moved them all under the end of teh slider, save, come back, andtheyre like HAHAHAHA we arent under the slider anymore!! well i tried tofix it. sort of.
   
   in editor

   
   in game (uber fancy)

   
3. 01:12:978 (4) - really nazi thing here -- if this slider is supposed to be symmetrical, make sure that on the red tick (middle of slider), the slider ball is in the little dip thing. applies to any other sliders that are supposed to be symmetrical like this as well. if you wanted it to be how it is though, just ignore this CHANGEDDDDDDDDDDDDD
   
   what i mean

   
4. final thing, i noticed that the 1/16 sliders throughout the map are aimed kind of randomly. some are facing towards the next note, some are facing away at weird angles, etc. i personally find it best when the sliders make a sort of curved flow (image), so if you wanted to change it like that, do so. if you don't want to do that, at least change where 01:27:189 (3) - is pointing cuz it seems really out of place fixored.
   
   nsfw curves

   

Easy:

1. some more messy blankets on this difficulty that are easily noticeable due to slowness. gonna have to go through and modify those yourself will try!
2. for the most part, your combo pattern was 1 new combo every 2 large white ticks, but there were some places where you doubled up on combo lengths. it's best to keep them consistent for hp drain reasons. that being, NC at 00:38:241 (1) - 00:47:715 (1) - and 00:57:189 (1) - just show me the carfax

Normal:

1. quote first thing from easy diff
2. 00:01:925 (2) - i just thought that this note could be moved more away from 1 and 3 for some nicer flow jes!
   
   nsfw curves

   

yeah... that's about it. there's not much i can say about such a short and simple map. good luck

1. nice work on slidershapes, they're awesome !
2. are you sure about the green combo colour?
   it's not picked from the background (obviously) and doesn't create a contrast to it either, so I'd prefer if you change it
   example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 101,117,228
   Combo2 : 252,171,236
   Combo3 : 219,135,237
   Combo4 : 157,121,234

3. imo you could use hitsounds waaay more effectively, I almost can't hear any :c
   but I suck with hitsounds so I can't help with that, haha :'c

1. you could refine some shapes and the placement, atm some parts look a bit sloppy, example:
   00:06:662 (2) - move this to 352|128, then adjust the shape of 00:05:083 (1) -
   you also can improve the shape of 00:02:715 (2) - by adding a second anchor to the second curve, to round it out
   overall it should look like this / comparison

   
   
2. 00:05:083 (1) - the sliderhead is missing some sort of hitsound, to go with the loud beat there. try normal-finish maybe?
   I suck with hitsounding, you might wanna try to get some hitsound-focused mod from someone else cause it sounds a bit off sometimes
3. 00:06:662 (2,3) - I don't like the movement from (2) to (3), you could place (3) differently / use another shape to improve it
   example

   
   sidenote: this might seem extremely minor, but imo easier diffs need really smooth and easy to read movements, so players can focus on rhythm and don't get distracted by abrupt movements
4. 00:16:925 (2,1,2) - the (2)'s could be connected to each other so nicely, you could for example blanket the red anchor of the first slider with the second slider. it just feels off atm, cause the rest of the map is so interwined ~
5. 00:35:873 (2,1) - not sure about the movement here, it's so abrupt.. also the DS change is noticeable, so consider moving the circles elsewhere
   you could slightly change the shape of 00:35:873 (2) - too
   screen

   
6. 00:42:978 (1,2) - this looks so squahed together, I'd prefer if you just place (2) at 104|348 and think about sth different for the following pattern
7. 01:30:346 (1,2) - movement.. ;_; it totally goes against the previous flow, try to place it differently, maybe change up the shape too

1. why do you use Slidertickrate 2 here? in E/H it's 1. if there is no particular reason for that I'd prefer if you keep it consistent throughout all diffs
2. try AR5, looks better to me
   also it balances out your spread a tiny little bit in settings :b
3. 00:06:662 (2) - replace with short slider + cirlce or three circles, the beat on the red tick ( 00:07:057 ) shouldn't be ignored, imo
   also the sliderend on the downbeat feels weird, the downbeat should be an object you can hit
4. 00:08:241 (3,4,1) - more beats here, that should be mapped, imo. try this rhythm, maybe:
   
5. 00:11:399 (3) - similar to 00:06:662 (2), you really should emphasize the downbeat better ;-;
6. 00:13:768 (1) - and 00:16:136 (3) - ^
7. 00:19:294 (1) - I think it's fine to ignore the beat at 00:20:083 here, but I'd prefer if you make it have more impact by snapping a red anchor to it
   wow so minor. sorry for nitpicking, haha xD
   same with the following 00:21:662 (2) -
   and here 00:38:241 (1,2) -
8. 00:33:110 (1) - replace with two circles? it's perfectly fine for Normal diff, especially with this Easy!
9. 00:54:820 (3,1) - omg I love patterns like this, looks great ;w; nj! (= please keep it)
10. 01:05:478 (x) - add circle here?
    and here - 01:12:583
11. 01:16:136 (1,2) - you could improve the flow here quite a bit, also the repetitive pattern with 01:20:873 (1) - is a bit boring
    
    try this maybe

    
12. 01:37:057 (x) - missing another object here ;-;
    and here - 01:38:636
    and here - 01:39:425
    and here - 01:41:004
    this might look like spamming objects to you, but I'm sure you can think of nice patterns.
    overall you can add more reverses to sliders, use stacks in this diff and if you have a lot of time to spend, consider increasing DS to 1.4. that way objects don't overlap which gives you more freedom to create patterns similar to your E diff :3

1. you could increase HP a bit, I think. 5 is pretty low for Hard
2. 00:01:925 (3) - all of them feel better (imo) if you replace them with two circles instead of a slider this short. the beats are strong enough to deserve a hit on their own, don't you think? ;w;
3. 00:10:610 (x) - missing a circle here
4. 01:01:136 (8) - there should be a cirlce at the downbeat, imo
5. 01:05:873 (7,1) - there should be a jump here, but not here 01:07:057 (2,3) -
6. 01:09:031 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with these anti-jumps. the music slows down reaaally slightly, but I ddin't expect them. would perfer normal spacing
7. 01:12:978 (4) - rhythmwise this should look like this:
   
8. 01:15:346 (8) - shape looks fine but I'd prefer if head and end wouldn't overlap ;-;

Squirrel wrote:

Hi there, mod from my queue :3
just making suggestions, feel free to ignore ~

General

1. nice work on slidershapes, they're awesome !
2. are you sure about the green combo colour? removed, used your color set
   it's not picked from the background (obviously) and doesn't create a contrast to it either, so I'd prefer if you change it
   example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 101,117,228
   Combo2 : 252,171,236
   Combo3 : 219,135,237
   Combo4 : 157,121,234

3. imo you could use hitsounds waaay more effectively, I almost can't hear any :c done
   but I suck with hitsounds so I can't help with that, haha :'c

Easy

remapped most of easy

Normal

remapped most of normal


Hard

1. you could increase HP a bit, I think. 5 is pretty low for Hard
2. 00:01:925 (3) - all of them feel better (imo) if you replace them with two circles instead of a slider this short. the beats are strong enough to deserve a hit on their own, don't you think? ;w; theyll be the most annoying things to get 300s on. also im nto too sure about them anyways, welll wee where they go later on down the road
3. 00:10:610 (x) - missing a circle here added
4. 01:01:136 (8) - there should be a cirlce at the downbeat, imo i like the feeling of this more
5. 01:05:873 (7,1) - there should be a jump here, but not here 01:07:057 (2,3) - changed
6. 01:09:031 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with these anti-jumps. the music slows down reaaally slightly, but I ddin't expect them. would perfer normal spacing theyre fine
7. 01:12:978 (4) - rhythmwise this should look like this: too hard to hit, should just put triples in one spot. also i think the instrument is like, 1/8 snapped or something ridiculous
   
8. 01:15:346 (8) - shape looks fine but I'd prefer if head and end wouldn't overlap ;-;ok ;_;

okay, that's all. Hope I was of some help, good luck! :3
*squee*

Kloyd wrote:

• Easy

1. 00:46:136 (2) - consider the playground plz
2. 01:23:241 (2) - u can blanket this

• Hard

1. 00:02:715 (4) - NC
2. 00:08:636 (5) - make it to a reverse. (remove a circle)
3. 01:27:978 (4) - NC
4. 01:38:636 (5) - same again. reverse.

Hi samplefish. I'm here from my modding queue

1. 00:47:715 (1) Finish sounds better than Whistle at the beginning of this slider in my opinion
2. 00:52:452 (1,2) |Nazi| Try to improve the blanket between these objects.
3. 01:11:399 (1) Are you missing a Whistle at the slider end?. I'm not really sure

1. 00:10:610 (x) Honestly I feel that you are ignoring a note here. Feels necessary since there are a noticeable piano sound
2. 00:37:452 (4) The Whistle from the sliderend sounds a bit bad in my opinion. Since the piano sounds sounds very soft on there. So, I suggest you to remove it
3. 00:42:978 (1) Try smoothing the curvature of the slider, looks a bit bad
4. 01:41:004 (1) I suggest you to remove the Whistle from this spinner like other diffs.

1. 00:10:610 (2) I would like to add a Whistle to this circle. What do you think?
2. 01:24:820 (4) I didn't like this kinds of slider. Just my opinion

XinCrin wrote:

Hi samplefish. I'm here from my modding queue

Easy

1. 00:47:715 (1) Finish sounds better than Whistle at the beginning of this slider in my opinion ok
2. 00:52:452 (1,2) |Nazi| Try to improve the blanket between these objects. tried, cant be botherd too much tbh
3. 01:11:399 (1) Are you missing a Whistle at the slider end?. I'm not really sure added

Normal

1. 00:10:610 (x) Honestly I feel that you are ignoring a note here. Feels necessary since there are a noticeable piano sound eee i dont think so
2. 00:37:452 (4) The Whistle from the sliderend sounds a bit bad in my opinion. Since the piano sounds sounds very soft on there. So, I suggest you to remove it ok
3. 00:42:978 (1) Try smoothing the curvature of the slider, looks a bit bad its ok
4. 01:41:004 (1) I suggest you to remove the Whistle from this spinner like other diffs.

Hard

1. 00:10:610 (2) I would like to add a Whistle to this circle. What do you think? ok
2. 01:24:820 (4) I didn't like this kinds of slider. Just my opinionwell see how it goes i guess, i dont know what to use for those sounds right now

Great song and beatmap. Good luck with the ranking!

1. hard is missing kiai while easy/normal have it. works better to just not have kiai but it's up to you
2. disable widescreen support on easy/normal
3. 00:00:355 - delete the first green line cuz ranking criteria says no 1.0x green lines on red lines
4. 01:46:933 - prolly a better place to end spinner for reasons
5. since hitsounds are same for all diffs, 01:01:933 (1) - remove whistle on tail. consistency with 00:42:986 (1) -

1. 00:02:723 (1) - don't really need the new combo here. entire map is 2 bar comboing besides one acceptable exception and you did it right at 01:27:986 (4) -
2. 00:04:302 (3) - angling any amount >
3. 00:04:302 (3,1,2,3) - this is super subjective but breaking the circular flow at the start of a new section thing would be cool
4. 00:18:512 (4) - same rhythm as 00:37:460 (4,1) - >
5. 00:42:986 (1,2) - could easily do something so spacing between these isn't so tiny
6. 00:47:723 (1,3) - almost touching so lame
7. 01:12:986 (4) - 01:15:354 (8) - would be ideal to not have sliderend on downbeats like this. especially 8 with that tail finish ewwwww
8. 01:41:407 - hitsound volume here should be at least 20%. can be 5% for the spinner

1. 00:00:355 (1,2) - would look way better following this logic. image is from a different map but still applies. these look super squished as they are now so when centering things making them less squish >
2. 00:30:354 (2) - idealy curve would be same amount as 00:32:723 (4) - . right now it's like supercurve. a few others look overly curved but this is biggest deal one. if you wanted to change others then do that but if not it's k
3. 01:01:933 (1) - 01:06:670 (1) - any amount of angle >

1. 00:31:144 (2,1) - blanket stuff you got goign on here looks pretty weird. equal spacing for the two blanketted parts is good. 01:01:933 (1,2) - does this pretty close to perfect
2. 00:33:512 (1) - what's the point of hte node on the tail ._.
3. 00:50:091 (2) - way inside the hp bar. whenever you adjust that, spacing between 00:47:723 (1,2) - could also be adjusted
4. 00:54:828 (2,1) - bodyblanket stuff could be waaay cleaner
5. 00:07:460 (3,1,2) - super subjective thing: 3 of the exact same shape in a row um it's not a problem but it's lame
6. 01:11:407 (1,2) - this touching ew. would be best around this distance with whatever slidershape you want
7. 01:30:354 (1,2) - ^pretty much same deal