mod as requested
generalyou need a 3 star rating difficulty to your mapset be rankeable, i think your normal is easy enough, so just reduce its od by 1
inconsistency in combo colors
inconsistency in tags (add nemis to all difficulty tags)
your video has audio track, use this video instead
http://puu.sh/3S31N.avinemis01:15:672 (4,5) - big difference in spacing. as its the easiest difficulty of the mapset, is good to keep the gameplay without those traps i prefer you use a smaller value, like 1.3x~1.4x
nice normal !
hard00:15:442 (3,4) - try to keep your slider curves sharper
00:16:826 (3,4) - move this a bit to the left, there a big difference in the previous / next jump. and its a bit unfitting imo
00:18:211 (1,2,3) - curve this stream, will look a bit better
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't think this stream is necessary, keep in mind the difficulty spread. i think there is a big difference between hard and normal
00:27:672 - i prefer you start the 1/4 stream here where the guitar rhythm changes
00:47:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i always get some misses on this stream. its a bit overmapped indeed. consider removing 4 and 6
00:55:826 (1,2,3,4) - thats so irregular. give them a consistent shape or unstack
00:59:634 (4,5,6,7,8) - i prefer you just follow vocal and drums here
01:26:749 (1) - spinner end on blue tick, thats where the song really ends
insane00:05:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make this more symmetric
00:07:365 (1,2,3,4) - too irregular, choose one of this sliders and line its slider end to the center of the screen then copy replace the others and ctrl > or crtl < do this for all this sliders
00:15:211 (3,4,5) - feels a bit forced to me, consider re arranging this pattern
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - those jumps are a bit random made, and why you stopped to follow vocal and to use sliders?
00:26:288 (5,6,7,8,9) - steam sounds / feels bad here, try to make this pattern less complex
00:48:442 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as i said in hard
00:52:826 (4,5,1) - this jumps are a bit disgusting to play, i don't really think they fit the song
00:59:403 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to make this part simple as the song.
01:06:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:08:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:10:596 (1,2,3,4) - i think this does not fits your general mapping style at all
01:11:980 (4,1) - strange transition
lots of unfitting streams and random placed jumps but its really fun to play
several good mods for hard and insane and this will be ready
good luck