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DINY - Always be myself

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pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 07 de julio de 2015 at 2:27:19

Artist: DINY
Title: Always be myself
Source: 라테일
Tags: mmorpg HyunTaek Yun LaTale ActozSoft 액토즈소프트
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4490kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,26 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Hard (2,75 stars, 239 notes)
  3. Normal (1,66 stars, 139 notes)
Download: DINY - Always be myself
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Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
BPM is correct
Offset: -850
Be sure to resnap notes and inheriting sections.
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

CloudSplash16 wrote:

BPM is correct
Offset: -850
Be sure to resnap notes and inheriting sections.
I changed it, but when I re snapped, I feel the maps lost the flow I don't know how explain it
MiloHD
1 post
Joined March 2013
MiloHD
Me parece que el mapa tiene ciertos fallos en cuestión de ritmo en el minuto 00:22:002 (7) - , me parece que puede haber un circulo más.
Este comentario es para el mapa en hard, igual en términos generales el mapa está muy bien.
Por otro lado, ese mapa en insane es una bazofia.
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Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Try Offset -843. It should feel exactly the same as 80. It is more correct and more useful to use -843, because you have pick-up notes to the first bar, and takes into consideration the accented beat 1.
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Try Offset -843. It should feel exactly the same as 80. It is more correct and more useful to use -843, because you have pick-up notes to the first bar, and takes into consideration the accented beat 1.
-843? or 843, I am sorry but I didn't understand you very well
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

pife1 wrote:

-843? or 843, I am sorry but I didn't understand you very well
I mean -843.
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

CloudSplash16 wrote:

pife1 wrote:

-843? or 843, I am sorry but I didn't understand you very well
I mean -843.
Thank you very much, also the order was not altered
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

MiloHD wrote:

Me parece que el mapa tiene ciertos fallos en cuestión de ritmo en el minuto 00:22:002 (7) - , me parece que puede haber un circulo más.
Este comentario es para el mapa en hard, igual en términos generales el mapa está muy bien.
Por otro lado, ese mapa en insane es una bazofia.
Gracias MiloHD aunque pequeña la ayuda pero gracias, otra cosa deja la groseria este no es el bajo mundo
MeatloafCereal
78 posts
Joined April 2012
MeatloafCereal
Accidentally posted it! mod not done yet!
Done~
Hi from my queue
You forgot to say something about yourself in my queue... :(
...but I'll let it slide ;)

General
Use distance snap more;adjust it using Alt+Scrollwheel, It's all about flow and readability


Normal
Kiai Timing
00:54:080 - Turn off kiai here and start it again on 00:54:541
01:00:080 - Turn off here, restart 01:01:233
01:08:849 - Turn off here, restart 01:09:310
01:12:541 - Turn off here, restart 01:13:003
01:14:387 - Turn off here, restart 01:14:849
Kiai loses the special feeling if it's too long, chopping up kiai adds emphasis on espacially strong notes. I don't know if this applies to the other diffs since they may have different kiai times
Cleanup each combo so that distance snap is consistent
00:04:233 (6,7,1) - Use the 'Create Polygonal Circles' function Compose -> Create Polygonal circles or Ctrl+Shift+D. To make it look and flow better
00:05:618 (1) - Go in another direction so that the flow of the map is smoother (The zigzag doesn't feel nice and the next circle is poorly placed)
00:07:003 (2) - nudge it farther away so the distance is consistent; Prev and Next should be almost equal
00:10:695 (1,2,3,4) - fix the arrangement?
00:07:464 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrange the circles in a curve and the slider less compact
00:15:310 (7) - NC and the slider doesn't cut it, try:
00:20:387 (3,4,5,6) - Very hard to read especially on a normal map! My suggestion for a pattern:
00:22:233 - circle here
00:22:695 (7) - NC
00:23:618 (8) - jump is too large
00:28:695 (1) - end this spinner at 00:30:541
00:32:849 - Circle here
00:35:157 - Circle here
00:37:003 - Circle here
00:37:464 (2) - extend with a reverse arrow (shift the distance of following notes to match distance snap too)
00:39:772 - circle here
00:43:464 (2,3) - Spacing is huge even keep it consistent at normal maps
00:55:926 (4) - snap the end of the slider back on the white tick
01:01:003 (5) - out of place; move up to the red tick but shorten it so it still ends at the next red tick, NC here too
01:01:926 - awkward silence here. use sliders to fill gaps:
01:05:156 (2) - remove circle
01:18:080 (2,3,4) - large jumps ,(2) especially confused me. Keep distances in a combo consistent

Hard

00:00:339 - Inherit timing section is not snapped (actually its snapped on a 1/16 but you should fix it to the close red or white tick)
00:16:493 - ^
00:30:339 - ^
00:46:378 - ^
01:01:147 - ^
01:16:493 - ^
00:05:156 (2,3,4) - arrange into a triangle?
00:11:387 - circle?
00:18:771 (8) - remove claps
00:23:272 (2) - move this backwards in to the white tick, extend it with a reverse arrow too
00:31:464 - circle here
00:31:695 (2) - too close to the previous note
00:34:002 (6,7) - i think a Slider -> Circle would work better than a Circle -> Slider
00:35:848 (1) - reverse arrow doesn't fit, lengthen the slider all the way through
00:38:617 (5,6) - these are out of place, try:
01:07:579 (1) - end the slider at 01:08:387
01:17:849 - Circle?
01:20:387 - ^
01:24:771 (5) - move this back to the white tick
01:25:695 (7) - lengthen the end to the white tick
01:26:617 (1) - remove circle
01:27:079 (2,3,4,5,6) - the melody is off, this sounds better:

EruJazz's Insane

00:11:618 (7) - NC
00:17:387 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - replace with:
00:44:618 (6) - NC
00:46:464 (10) - NC
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - gets very clustered and confusing, spread out the notes and place them neater
01:05:618 (9) - NC
01:25:349 (6) - remove circle
01:31:233 (8) - NC?
01:32:618 (9) - NC
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

MeatloafCereal wrote:

Accidentally posted it! mod not done yet!
Done~
Hi from my queue
You forgot to say something about yourself in my queue... :(
...but I'll let it slide ;)

General
Use distance snap more;adjust it using Alt+Scrollwheel, It's all about flow and readability


Normal
Kiai Timing
00:54:080 - Turn off kiai here and start it again on 00:54:541
01:00:080 - Turn off here, restart 01:01:233
01:08:849 - Turn off here, restart 01:09:310
01:12:541 - Turn off here, restart 01:13:003
01:14:387 - Turn off here, restart 01:14:849
Kiai loses the special feeling if it's too long, chopping up kiai adds emphasis on espacially strong notes. I don't know if this applies to the other diffs since they may have different kiai times
Cleanup each combo so that distance snap is consistent
00:04:233 (6,7,1) - Use the 'Create Polygonal Circles' function Compose -> Create Polygonal circles or Ctrl+Shift+D. To make it look and flow better
00:05:618 (1) - Go in another direction so that the flow of the map is smoother (The zigzag doesn't feel nice and the next circle is poorly placed)
00:07:003 (2) - nudge it farther away so the distance is consistent; Prev and Next should be almost equal
00:10:695 (1,2,3,4) - fix the arrangement?
00:07:464 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrange the circles in a curve and the slider less compact
00:15:310 (7) - NC and the slider doesn't cut it, try:
00:20:387 (3,4,5,6) - Very hard to read especially on a normal map! My suggestion for a pattern:
00:22:233 - circle here
00:22:695 (7) - NC
00:23:618 (8) - jump is too large
00:28:695 (1) - end this spinner at 00:30:541
00:32:849 - Circle here
00:35:157 - Circle here
00:37:003 - Circle here
00:37:464 (2) - extend with a reverse arrow (shift the distance of following notes to match distance snap too)
00:39:772 - circle here
00:43:464 (2,3) - Spacing is huge even keep it consistent at normal maps
00:55:926 (4) - snap the end of the slider back on the white tick
01:01:003 (5) - out of place; move up to the red tick but shorten it so it still ends at the next red tick, NC here too
01:01:926 - awkward silence here. use sliders to fill gaps:
01:05:156 (2) - remove circle
01:18:080 (2,3,4) - large jumps ,(2) especially confused me. Keep distances in a combo consistent

Hard

00:00:339 - Inherit timing section is not snapped (actually its snapped on a 1/16 but you should fix it to the close red or white tick)
00:16:493 - ^
00:30:339 - ^
00:46:378 - ^
01:01:147 - ^
01:16:493 - ^
00:05:156 (2,3,4) - arrange into a triangle?
00:11:387 - circle?
00:18:771 (8) - remove claps
00:23:272 (2) - move this backwards in to the white tick, extend it with a reverse arrow too
00:31:464 - circle here
00:31:695 (2) - too close to the previous note
00:34:002 (6,7) - i think a Slider -> Circle would work better than a Circle -> Slider
00:35:848 (1) - reverse arrow doesn't fit, lengthen the slider all the way through
00:38:617 (5,6) - these are out of place, try:
01:07:579 (1) - end the slider at 01:08:387
01:17:849 - Circle?
01:20:387 - ^
01:24:771 (5) - move this back to the white tick
01:25:695 (7) - lengthen the end to the white tick
01:26:617 (1) - remove circle
01:27:079 (2,3,4,5,6) - the melody is off, this sounds better:

EruJazz's Insane

00:11:618 (7) - NC
00:17:387 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - replace with:
00:44:618 (6) - NC
00:46:464 (10) - NC
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - gets very clustered and confusing, spread out the notes and place them neater
01:05:618 (9) - NC
01:25:349 (6) - remove circle
01:31:233 (8) - NC?
01:32:618 (9) - NC
Thank you so much for the mod I will do it :)
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Normal]
Please enable Distance Snap and set 1.0x as its value.
00:00:310 (1,2,3) - Could make them like these ? → http://puu.sh/3LrGc.jpg
00:02:387 (4,5) - ...and like these? → http://puu.sh/3LrHa.jpg
00:02:849 (5) - NC
00:05:156 (1) - remove NC
00:04:233 (2,1,2) - could make them like these? → http://puu.sh/3LrRA.jpg
00:05:618 (1,2) - ...and these ones like → http://puu.sh/3LrVN.jpg ← ?
00:08:387 (4) - NC
00:09:772 (4) - Could make it like this → http://puu.sh/3Ls0d.jpg ← ?
00:12:080 (4) - NC
00:15:310 (7) - NC
:!: 00:17:618 (4,1) - JUMP! Unrankable on Normal/Easy diffs. Tip: remove the jump making them like → http://puu.sh/3LsbE.jpg → and making 00:19:464 (2) - like → http://puu.sh/3Lsec.jpg
:!: 00:20:849 (4,5,6) - IRREGULAR spacing (peppyspacing?). Try avoid this on Normal/Easy diffs. They feel better like → http://puu.sh/3Lskl.jpg
00:22:695 (1) - NC
:!: 00:22:695 (1,2) - JUMP! Fix this by making 00:22:695 (1,2,3) like http://puu.sh/3Lsu7.jpg
00:25:003 (4,5,6) - Make them like http://puu.sh/3Lsxy.jpg --- and 00:26:387 (1) - make it like http://puu.sh/3LsyI.jpg -- to avoid a JUMP here too.
00:31:464 (1) - move to x:112 y:64 and 00:32:387 (2) - to x:168 y:152
00:33:310 (3) - move to x:360 y:96 and 00:33:772 (4) - to x:432 y:160
00:34:695 (5,6) - Change these two notes into a slider from (5)'s place to (6)'s place on timeline and screen.
00:37:464 (2) - Why not snap it on next white tick ( at 00:37:296 ) and add a 1/1 slider at 00:37:003 ? Like http://puu.sh/3LsLY.jpg ?
00:37:926 (3) - NC
00:38:849 (2) - Move to x:280 y:160.
00:39:310 (3) - Move to x:184 y:120
00:39:772 - add note at x:280 y:160 and add NC to it.
00:41:618 (3) - NC
00:43:003 (1) - remove NC
00:43:464 (5) - NC
:!: 00:43:003 (4,1,2) - IRREGULAR spacing with variable JUMPs >< Please try avoid them at Normal/Easy diffs.
:!: 01:05:156 (2,3) - JUMP!
:!: 01:09:310 (2,3) - Little jump/spacing error.
:!: 01:15:772 (6) - Too far from prior note!
:!: 01:16:695 (7) - ^
:!: 01:18:080 (2) - ^
:!: 01:18:080 (2,3,4) - This feels and fits well on Insane, not on Normal/Easy diffs.
:!: 01:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Irregular spacing.

[Hard]
00:22:464 (9) - Remove note for better flow and rhythm.
00:22:695 (9) - NC
00:23:272 (2) - Move to 00:23:157 and add a repeat.
00:27:771 (5) - Better if remove this note and add a repeat on 00:27:195 (4) .

[Insane]
00:02:849 (8) - NC
00:03:541 (1) - remove NC
00:09:772 (1) - ^
00:10:233 (10) - NC
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read >_< try arranging them in a more readable way (can be stacking some notes)
01:19:926 (6) - Feels better and pretty if stacked with 01:19:003 (4)

Aaaand that's it ^^

Well, this is just the beginning (: Wishing good work on further days and good luck for getting more mods (Many people makes so many restrictions >< as if they were afraid of request spamming on their queues ><).
If no queue seems open or no one feels saying 'welcome' to your modding requests, try #modreqs and, lately, making M4M* (mod for mod) with jonathanlfj / pimpG / someone else.

Att.

* M4M is when you mod someone's map and then he/she mods the yours.

And of course, good luck on Ranking the map! Nice song too.
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,726 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

MeatloafCereal wrote:

EruJazz's Insane

00:11:618 (7) - NC I decided to use the Alarido's mod here.
00:17:387 (7) - ^ oK
00:43:233 (5) - replace with:
done >:3
00:44:618 (6) - NC oKeY
00:46:464 (10) - NC nope
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - gets very clustered and confusing, spread out the notes and place them neater It is true that a bit confused reading, however, if you hold the rhythm is very easy to do well. Also, is Kiai time, so... I will not change it. :3
01:05:618 (9) - NC ok
01:25:349 (6) - remove circle hummm... nope, as it is more fun.
01:31:233 (8) - NC? おk
01:32:618 (9) - NC ko|ok

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V
[Insane]
00:02:849 (8) - NC Okey
00:03:541 (1) - remove NC Ok
00:09:772 (1) - ^ おk
00:10:233 (10) - NC kk
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read >_< try arranging them in a more readable way (can be stacking some notes) mm... nope.
01:19:926 (6) - Feels better and pretty if stacked with 01:19:003 (4) done, is better.
Thank you very much to the two! ^_^
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Normal]
Please enable Distance Snap and set 1.0x as its value.
00:00:310 (1,2,3) - Could make them like these ? → http://puu.sh/3LrGc.jpg
00:02:387 (4,5) - ...and like these? → http://puu.sh/3LrHa.jpg
00:02:849 (5) - NC
00:05:156 (1) - remove NC
00:04:233 (2,1,2) - could make them like these? → http://puu.sh/3LrRA.jpg
00:05:618 (1,2) - ...and these ones like → http://puu.sh/3LrVN.jpg ← ?
00:08:387 (4) - NC
00:09:772 (4) - Could make it like this → http://puu.sh/3Ls0d.jpg ← ?
00:12:080 (4) - NC
00:15:310 (7) - NC
:!: 00:17:618 (4,1) - JUMP! Unrankable on Normal/Easy diffs. Tip: remove the jump making them like → http://puu.sh/3LsbE.jpg → and making 00:19:464 (2) - like → http://puu.sh/3Lsec.jpg
:!: 00:20:849 (4,5,6) - IRREGULAR spacing (peppyspacing?). Try avoid this on Normal/Easy diffs. They feel better like → http://puu.sh/3Lskl.jpg
00:22:695 (1) - NC
:!: 00:22:695 (1,2) - JUMP! Fix this by making 00:22:695 (1,2,3) like http://puu.sh/3Lsu7.jpg
00:25:003 (4,5,6) - Make them like http://puu.sh/3Lsxy.jpg --- and 00:26:387 (1) - make it like http://puu.sh/3LsyI.jpg -- to avoid a JUMP here too.
00:31:464 (1) - move to x:112 y:64 and 00:32:387 (2) - to x:168 y:152
00:33:310 (3) - move to x:360 y:96 and 00:33:772 (4) - to x:432 y:160
00:34:695 (5,6) - Change these two notes into a slider from (5)'s place to (6)'s place on timeline and screen.
00:37:464 (2) - Why not snap it on next white tick ( at 00:37:296 ) and add a 1/1 slider at 00:37:003 ? Like http://puu.sh/3LsLY.jpg ?
00:37:926 (3) - NC
00:38:849 (2) - Move to x:280 y:160.
00:39:310 (3) - Move to x:184 y:120
00:39:772 - add note at x:280 y:160 and add NC to it.
00:41:618 (3) - NC
00:43:003 (1) - remove NC
00:43:464 (5) - NC
:!: 00:43:003 (4,1,2) - IRREGULAR spacing with variable JUMPs >< Please try avoid them at Normal/Easy diffs.
:!: 01:05:156 (2,3) - JUMP!
:!: 01:09:310 (2,3) - Little jump/spacing error.
:!: 01:15:772 (6) - Too far from prior note!
:!: 01:16:695 (7) - ^
:!: 01:18:080 (2) - ^
:!: 01:18:080 (2,3,4) - This feels and fits well on Insane, not on Normal/Easy diffs.
:!: 01:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Irregular spacing.

[Hard]
00:22:464 (9) - Remove note for better flow and rhythm.
00:22:695 (9) - NC
00:23:272 (2) - Move to 00:23:157 and add a repeat.
00:27:771 (5) - Better if remove this note and add a repeat on 00:27:195 (4) .

[Insane]
00:02:849 (8) - NC
00:03:541 (1) - remove NC
00:09:772 (1) - ^
00:10:233 (10) - NC
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read >_< try arranging them in a more readable way (can be stacking some notes)
01:19:926 (6) - Feels better and pretty if stacked with 01:19:003 (4)

Aaaand that's it ^^

Well, this is just the beginning (: Wishing good work on further days and good luck for getting more mods (Many people makes so many restrictions >< as if they were afraid of request spamming on their queues ><).
If no queue seems open or no one feels saying 'welcome' to your modding requests, try #modreqs and, lately, making M4M* (mod for mod) with jonathanlfj / pimpG / someone else.

Att.

* M4M is when you mod someone's map and then he/she mods the yours.

And of course, good luck on Ranking the map! Nice song too.

Thank you so much, but I couldn't changed all, because while I was taking the MeatloafCereal's advice suddenly !zack! I saw you mod, so I had to accommodate the map
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
updated
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Mod solicitado en Cloud's modding queue :3/

Te voy a ayudar y dar consejos para que mejores este mapa =w=b osu! needs more spanish mappers~

General

:idea: Tienes que mappear al menos el 80% de la canción para que sea rankeable
:idea: Coloca un preview point en algún lugar como el coro para escuchar la 'pre' de la canción. timing>set current position as preview point.
:idea: Hay algunas notas e inherits points no snappeadas
:idea: Hay algunas inconsistencias de source en Normal diff
:idea: Trata de mantener una misma duración para todos los kiai de todas las diffs, no es obligación pero sería mejor.

Sólo daré sugerencias de spacing, estética, hitsounds y New combos.

EruJazz's Insane
  1. Cambia el nombre de la diff a EruJazz' Insane, cuando una palabra en inglés termina con Z o S no se debe agregar apostrofe S ya que sonaría rebundante, simplemente agrega el ' al final de nombre.
  2. Otra sugerencia, trata de usar una distancia constante para todas las notas, pero eso no significa que no puedas hacer una variación de ella pero obviamente tiene que ser lógica y legible.
  3. AR+1 OD-1
  4. 00:01:464 (5) - New combo
  5. 00:02:387 (1) - ^
  6. 00:03:541 (4) - ^
  7. 00:03:541 (1,2) - remove whistle
  8. 00:04:003 - agrega una nota acá.
  9. 00:05:156 (1) - new combo
  10. 00:05:156 (1) - whistle
  11. 00:05:387 (2) - Suena raro para mi, sonaría mejor como circle.
  12. 00:05:849 (3,4) - remueve los whistles
  13. 00:07:003 (1) - sonaría mejor con whistle, ¿crees tú?
  14. 00:08:849 (1) - new combo
  15. 00:11:849 (1) - new combo
  16. 00:15:772 (1) - No hagas sliders con tantos ticks, la belleza de los sliders es muy importante! con pocos ticks (3 como sugerencia) podrías hacer un slider limpio. Se utiliza más que nada más de 3 ticks para hacer sliders con forma ya más distinta. te sugiero que hagas algo así:
    SPOILER
    Te recomiendo que uses este concepto para todos los sliders que hagas ahora en el futuro. o3o Ejemplos: 00:16:695 (5) - y 00:17:618 (1) -
  17. 00:17:041 (6) - arregla la distancia entre (6) y (5), la distancia de (6) debería ser igual a la de (4) y (3)
  18. 00:17:618 (1,2) - ^
  19. 00:18:772 (1) - new combo
  20. 00:20:849 (1) - ^
  21. 00:20:387 (2) - whistle
  22. 00:21:426 (2,3,4,5) - la distancia de estas notas es mucho para un stream, reducelo por favor.
  23. 00:22:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  24. 00:24:080 (1) - new combo
  25. 00:24:541 (2) - remueve new combo
  26. 00:25:233 (5) - new combo
  27. 00:25:233 (5) - no es necesario utilizar normal sampleset aquí, agrega whistles en cada círculo, es decir, en el inicio, en el reverse y en el final.
  28. 00:26:617 (1) - new combo
  29. 00:30:541 (1) - ^
  30. 00:33:541 (1) - new combo
  31. 00:33:310 - agrega una nota y si es así, agrégale new combo.
  32. 00:33:541 (2) - remueve new combo si hiciste el punto anterior.
  33. 00:34:464 (3) - arregla la distancia de esta nota.
  34. 00:38:387 (1) - NC?
  35. 00:40:695 (1) - NC
  36. 00:40:926 (1) - Remov NC
  37. 00:42:772 (1) - NC
  38. 00:41:387 (4) - embellece este slider, por favor ;w;
  39. 00:45:080 (2) - ^
  40. 00:58:233 (9) - cambia esta nota a otra posición, de ve feo que esté tocando al slider
  41. 01:14:618 (1) - new combo, ya que cambia el ritmo de la canción
  42. 01:18:080 (1) - NC
  43. 01:19:926 (1) - NC
    eso es todo por ahora.
Normal
  1. El AR promedio y muy acertado es AR5 para una normal, AR7 es muy rápido para un iniciante. OD3 y HP3
    :!: Utiliza siempre una distance snap constante, los cambios bruscos de distance suelen ser complejos de leer para un iniciante, a demás que son recomendados para diffs como hard e insanes.
Creo que con esto es suficiente por ahora, voy a seguir moddeando luego pero esta vez será un IR C mod para que podamos conversar y mejorar el mapset completo. esto va para todos los integrantes de este proyecto. Okay? pife1, ErunamoJAZZ y MuseCaliope? :3 cuando quieran me hablan por in-game pero 1 a la vez. Mucha suerte y espero a que sigas buscando mod. Si necesitas ayuda, consejos etc etc solo pm in-game =w=!
Sleepy Tori
103 posts
Joined May 2013
Sleepy Tori
[General]
Set your preview point.the preview point is the sample of what a person hear when they hover pf your song in the beatmap selection menu.
you usually set them at the beginning of a chorus.
To set one:
Go to timing on the upper part of the editor
The last option is set current position at preview point

check your sources in all of your map's including guest map's
the sources should be the same in each

[normal]
00:18:772 (5) - NC
00:24:541 (5) - ^
01:14:849 (5) - ^

[hard]
00:03:310 (4) - NC
00:04:233 (1) - remove NC
00:05:157 (2) - NC
00:06:887 (1) - remove NC
00:08:386 (3) - NC
00:10:579 (7) - ^
00:10:925 (1) - remove NC
00:15:080 (1) - this slider sounds off, extend the end of this slider so that it reaches ends 00:15:772 - .(its only a very small amount but the slider wont sound off if you do it)
00:17:272 (5) - this slider also sounds off. change the beat snap divisor to 1/6 and move the slider to the very next red notch, then change the divisor back to 1/4
00:20:849 (4) - sounds off again, this time, make it a timy bit shorter to that it ends at 00:21:080 -
00:33:772 (7) - NC
00:35:848 (1) - remove NC
00:37:233 (2) - NC
00:39:310 (7) - ^
01:03:195 (6) - ^
01:04:118 (1) - remove NC
01:05:617 (4) - NC
01:16:694 (6) - ^
01:18:079 (1) - remove nc
01:19:002 (2) - slider sounds off. extend the end by a little bit so it ends here 01:19:464 -
01:19:926 (3) - NC
01:21:772 (1) - sounds off, decrease the end so it ends here 01:22:464 -
01:22:695 - add a regular hit circle at x:240 y:268
01:24:541 (5) - NC
01:29:618 (5) - slider sounds off by a little bit, extend the end so it ends at 01:30:541 -


[erujazz's insane]
00:02:849 (1) - remove nc
00:03:310 (2) - NC
00:05:156 (7) - ^
00:08:849 (7) - ^
00:10:233 (1) - remove nc
00:10:464 (2) - nc
00:11:618 (6) - ^
00:18:772 (6) - ^
00:21:426 (4) - ^
00:24:541 (9) - ^
00:25:233 (1) - remove nc
00:26:617 (3) - nc
00:30:541 (4) - ^
00:38:849 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - ^
00:44:850 (1) - remove nc
00:46:464 (3) - nc
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (10) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:14:618 (7) - ^
01:20:156 (7) - ^
01:25:233 (5) - ^

[muse's insane]
00:22:464 (7) - nc
00:26:156 (10) - ^
00:26:618 (1) - ^
00:26:849 (3) - ^
00:33:541 (7) - ^
00:33:541 (7) - ^
00:37:233 (1) - ^
00:37:695 (4) - ^
00:40:926 (4) - ^
00:41:387 (7) - ^
00:52:926 (7) - ^
00:53:387 (10) - ^
01:04:003 (9) - ^
01:04:464 (12) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:13:003 (3) - ^
01:14:156 (5) - ^
01:14:618 (8) - ^
01:14:849 (10) - ^
01:20:156 (4) - ^
01:27:080 (3) - ^
01:27:541 (6) - ^
01:30:772 (5) - ^
01:31:233 (8) - ^






HOLY CRAPPP IM FINALLY DONEEEEEE!!! i sat here for 1 hour and 30 mins doing this mod.
MY EYES BURN FROM THE BRIGHTNESS OF MY COMPUTERZZZ!!!!
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
-Cloudchaser wrote:

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Mod solicitado en Cloud's modding queue :3/

Te voy a ayudar y dar consejos para que mejores este mapa =w=b osu! needs more spanish mappers~

General

:idea: Tienes que mappear al menos el 80% de la canción para que sea rankeable
:idea: Coloca un preview point en algún lugar como el coro para escuchar la 'pre' de la canción. timing>set current position as preview point.
:idea: Hay algunas notas e inherits points no snappeadas
:idea: Hay algunas inconsistencias de source en Normal diff
:idea: Trata de mantener una misma duración para todos los kiai de todas las diffs, no es obligación pero sería mejor.

Sólo daré sugerencias de spacing, estética, hitsounds y New combos.

EruJazz's Insane
  1. Cambia el nombre de la diff a EruJazz' Insane, cuando una palabra en inglés termina con Z o S no se debe agregar apostrofe S ya que sonaría rebundante, simplemente agrega el ' al final de nombre.
  2. Otra sugerencia, trata de usar una distancia constante para todas las notas, pero eso no significa que no puedas hacer una variación de ella pero obviamente tiene que ser lógica y legible.
  3. AR+1 OD-1
  4. 00:01:464 (5) - New combo
  5. 00:02:387 (1) - ^
  6. 00:03:541 (4) - ^
  7. 00:03:541 (1,2) - remove whistle
  8. 00:04:003 - agrega una nota acá.
  9. 00:05:156 (1) - new combo
  10. 00:05:156 (1) - whistle
  11. 00:05:387 (2) - Suena raro para mi, sonaría mejor como circle.
  12. 00:05:849 (3,4) - remueve los whistles
  13. 00:07:003 (1) - sonaría mejor con whistle, ¿crees tú?
  14. 00:08:849 (1) - new combo
  15. 00:11:849 (1) - new combo
  16. 00:15:772 (1) - No hagas sliders con tantos ticks, la belleza de los sliders es muy importante! con pocos ticks (3 como sugerencia) podrías hacer un slider limpio. Se utiliza más que nada más de 3 ticks para hacer sliders con forma ya más distinta. te sugiero que hagas algo así:
    SPOILER
    Te recomiendo que uses este concepto para todos los sliders que hagas ahora en el futuro. o3o Ejemplos: 00:16:695 (5) - y 00:17:618 (1) -
  17. 00:17:041 (6) - arregla la distancia entre (6) y (5), la distancia de (6) debería ser igual a la de (4) y (3)
  18. 00:17:618 (1,2) - ^
  19. 00:18:772 (1) - new combo
  20. 00:20:849 (1) - ^
  21. 00:20:387 (2) - whistle
  22. 00:21:426 (2,3,4,5) - la distancia de estas notas es mucho para un stream, reducelo por favor.
  23. 00:22:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  24. 00:24:080 (1) - new combo
  25. 00:24:541 (2) - remueve new combo
  26. 00:25:233 (5) - new combo
  27. 00:25:233 (5) - no es necesario utilizar normal sampleset aquí, agrega whistles en cada círculo, es decir, en el inicio, en el reverse y en el final.
  28. 00:26:617 (1) - new combo
  29. 00:30:541 (1) - ^
  30. 00:33:541 (1) - new combo
  31. 00:33:310 - agrega una nota y si es así, agrégale new combo.
  32. 00:33:541 (2) - remueve new combo si hiciste el punto anterior.
  33. 00:34:464 (3) - arregla la distancia de esta nota.
  34. 00:38:387 (1) - NC?
  35. 00:40:695 (1) - NC
  36. 00:40:926 (1) - Remov NC
  37. 00:42:772 (1) - NC
  38. 00:41:387 (4) - embellece este slider, por favor ;w;
  39. 00:45:080 (2) - ^
  40. 00:58:233 (9) - cambia esta nota a otra posición, de ve feo que esté tocando al slider
  41. 01:14:618 (1) - new combo, ya que cambia el ritmo de la canción
  42. 01:18:080 (1) - NC
  43. 01:19:926 (1) - NC
    eso es todo por ahora.
Normal
  1. El AR promedio y muy acertado es AR5 para una normal, AR7 es muy rápido para un iniciante. OD3 y HP3
    :!: Utiliza siempre una distance snap constante, los cambios bruscos de distance suelen ser complejos de leer para un iniciante, a demás que son recomendados para diffs como hard e insanes.
Creo que con esto es suficiente por ahora, voy a seguir moddeando luego pero esta vez será un IR C mod para que podamos conversar y mejorar el mapset completo. esto va para todos los integrantes de este proyecto. Okay? pife1, ErunamoJAZZ y MuseCaliope? :3 cuando quieran me hablan por in-game pero 1 a la vez. Mucha suerte y espero a que sigas buscando mod. Si necesitas ayuda, consejos etc etc solo pm in-game =w=!

Gracias por los consejos le avisare a Erunamo. ¿Osu que realmente necesita mas modding que hablen español o mas canciones en español?¿o los dos?. Es que esa frase que tienes me llamo mucho la atencion :)
Last edited by pife1 , edited 1 time in total.
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
snlrocks wrote:

snlrocks wrote:

[General]
Set your preview point.the preview point is the sample of what a person hear when they hover pf your song in the beatmap selection menu.
you usually set them at the beginning of a chorus.
To set one:
Go to timing on the upper part of the editor
The last option is set current position at preview point

check your sources in all of your map's including guest map's
the sources should be the same in each

[normal]
00:18:772 (5) - NC
00:24:541 (5) - ^
01:14:849 (5) - ^

[hard]
00:03:310 (4) - NC
00:04:233 (1) - remove NC
00:05:157 (2) - NC
00:06:887 (1) - remove NC
00:08:386 (3) - NC
00:10:579 (7) - ^
00:10:925 (1) - remove NC
00:15:080 (1) - this slider sounds off, extend the end of this slider so that it reaches ends 00:15:772 - .(its only a very small amount but the slider wont sound off if you do it)
00:17:272 (5) - this slider also sounds off. change the beat snap divisor to 1/6 and move the slider to the very next red notch, then change the divisor back to 1/4
00:20:849 (4) - sounds off again, this time, make it a timy bit shorter to that it ends at 00:21:080 -
00:33:772 (7) - NC
00:35:848 (1) - remove NC
00:37:233 (2) - NC
00:39:310 (7) - ^
01:03:195 (6) - ^
01:04:118 (1) - remove NC
01:05:617 (4) - NC
01:16:694 (6) - ^
01:18:079 (1) - remove nc
01:19:002 (2) - slider sounds off. extend the end by a little bit so it ends here 01:19:464 -
01:19:926 (3) - NC
01:21:772 (1) - sounds off, decrease the end so it ends here 01:22:464 -
01:22:695 - add a regular hit circle at x:240 y:268
01:24:541 (5) - NC
01:29:618 (5) - slider sounds off by a little bit, extend the end so it ends at 01:30:541 -


[erujazz's insane]
00:02:849 (1) - remove nc
00:03:310 (2) - NC
00:05:156 (7) - ^
00:08:849 (7) - ^
00:10:233 (1) - remove nc
00:10:464 (2) - nc
00:11:618 (6) - ^
00:18:772 (6) - ^
00:21:426 (4) - ^
00:24:541 (9) - ^
00:25:233 (1) - remove nc
00:26:617 (3) - nc
00:30:541 (4) - ^
00:38:849 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - ^
00:44:850 (1) - remove nc
00:46:464 (3) - nc
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (10) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:14:618 (7) - ^
01:20:156 (7) - ^
01:25:233 (5) - ^

[muse's insane]
00:22:464 (7) - nc
00:26:156 (10) - ^
00:26:618 (1) - ^
00:26:849 (3) - ^
00:33:541 (7) - ^
00:33:541 (7) - ^
00:37:233 (1) - ^
00:37:695 (4) - ^
00:40:926 (4) - ^
00:41:387 (7) - ^
00:52:926 (7) - ^
00:53:387 (10) - ^
01:04:003 (9) - ^
01:04:464 (12) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:13:003 (3) - ^
01:14:156 (5) - ^
01:14:618 (8) - ^
01:14:849 (10) - ^
01:20:156 (4) - ^
01:27:080 (3) - ^
01:27:541 (6) - ^
01:30:772 (5) - ^
01:31:233 (8) - ^






HOLY CRAPPP IM FINALLY DONEEEEEE!!! i sat here for 1 hour and 30 mins doing this mod.
MY EYES BURN FROM THE BRIGHTNESS OF MY COMPUTERZZZ!!!!

Thank you so much for the mod We will fix them
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,726 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Mod solicitado en Cloud's modding queue :3/

Te voy a ayudar y dar consejos para que mejores este mapa =w=b osu! needs more spanish mappers~ yey!

EruJazz's Insane
  1. Cambia el nombre de la diff a EruJazz' Insane, cuando una palabra en inglés termina con Z o S no se debe agregar apostrofe S ya que sonaría rebundante, simplemente agrega el ' al final de nombre. Con respecto a esto, le pregunté a unos amigos, y me dejaron esto: http://forum.wordreference.com/showthre ... &langid=24 , así que, hay que dejarlo como está ^^U
  2. Otra sugerencia, trata de usar una distancia constante para todas las notas, pero eso no significa que no puedas hacer una variación de ella pero obviamente tiene que ser lógica y legible. Claro, aunque, como ves, la canción es bastante lenta y los espacios no se sienten muy forzados que digamos :D
  3. AR+1 OD-1 fix
  4. 00:01:464 (5) - New combo
  5. 00:02:387 (1) - ^
  6. 00:03:541 (4) - ^
  7. 00:03:541 (1,2) - remove whistle
  8. 00:04:003 - agrega una nota acá. mm.., no me gustó como queda con la nota ahí, mejor no.
  9. 00:05:156 (1) - new combo
  10. 00:05:156 (1) - whistle
  11. 00:05:387 (2) - Suena raro para mi, sonaría mejor como circle. <- está bien como está ;)
  12. 00:05:849 (3,4) - remueve los whistles
  13. 00:07:003 (1) - sonaría mejor con whistle, ¿crees tú? sep, suena mejor.
  14. 00:08:849 (1) - new combo
  15. 00:11:849 (1) - new combo
  16. 00:15:772 (1) - No hagas sliders con tantos ticks, la belleza de los sliders es muy importante! con pocos ticks (3 como sugerencia) podrías hacer un slider limpio. Se utiliza más que nada más de 3 ticks para hacer sliders con forma ya más distinta. te sugiero que hagas algo así:
    SPOILER
    Te recomiendo que uses este concepto para todos los sliders que hagas ahora en el futuro. o3o Ejemplos: 00:16:695 (5) - y 00:17:618 (1) -
    Hice los sliders así solo con la idea de mantener mejor control del flow, pero, tienes razón, hay que evitar los nodos inecesarios ^^
  17. 00:17:041 (6) - arregla la distancia entre (6) y (5), la distancia de (6) debería ser igual a la de (4) y (3) fix 5 y 6.
  18. 00:17:618 (1,2) - ^ En este cambié el distance spacing a 0.4x (3,4 y 5 están con ese spasing), por lo que está bien.
  19. 00:18:772 (1) - new combo
  20. 00:20:849 (1) - ^
  21. 00:20:387 (2) - whistle
  22. 00:21:426 (2,3,4,5) - la distancia de estas notas es mucho para un stream, reducelo por favor. fix
  23. 00:22:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fix
  24. 00:24:080 (1) - new combo
  25. 00:24:541 (2) - remueve new combo
  26. 00:25:233 (5) - new combo
  27. 00:25:233 (5) - no es necesario utilizar normal sampleset aquí, agrega whistles en cada círculo, es decir, en el inicio, en el reverse y en el final. jeje, ok
  28. 00:26:617 (1) - new combo
  29. 00:30:541 (1) - ^
  30. 00:33:541 (1) - new combo
  31. 00:33:310 - agrega una nota y si es así, agrégale new combo. <- prefiero dejarlo sin la nota ;)
  32. 00:33:541 (2) - remueve new combo si hiciste el punto anterior.
  33. 00:34:464 (3) - arregla la distancia de esta nota.
  34. 00:38:387 (1) - NC?
  35. 00:40:695 (1) - NC
  36. 00:40:926 (1) - Remov NC
  37. 00:42:772 (1) - NC
  38. 00:41:387 (4) - embellece este slider, por favor ;w; xD, este lo dejo así, no está tan feo :v
  39. 00:45:080 (2) - ^Aunque este sí lo mejoro :3
  40. 00:58:233 (9) - cambia esta nota a otra posición, de ve feo que esté tocando al slider <- el problema sería que no hay para donde correrlo sin dañar la simetría, mejor lo dejo como está.
  41. 01:14:618 (1) - new combo, ya que cambia el ritmo de la canción
  42. 01:18:080 (1) - NC
  43. 01:19:926 (1) - NC
    eso es todo por ahora.
SPOILER

snlrocks wrote:

[erujazz's insane]
00:02:849 (1) - remove nc
00:03:310 (2) - NC
00:05:156 (7) - ^
00:08:849 (7) - ^
00:10:233 (1) - remove nc
00:10:464 (2) - nc
00:11:618 (6) - ^
00:18:772 (6) - ^
00:21:426 (4) - ^
00:24:541 (9) - ^
00:25:233 (1) - remove nc
00:26:617 (3) - nc
00:30:541 (4) - ^
00:38:849 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - ^
00:44:850 (1) - remove nc
00:46:464 (3) - nc
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (10) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:14:618 (7) - ^
01:20:156 (7) - ^
01:25:233 (5) - ^

HOLY CRAPPP IM FINALLY DONEEEEEE!!! i sat here for 1 hour and 30 mins doing this mod.
MY EYES BURN FROM THE BRIGHTNESS OF MY COMPUTERZZZ!!!!
hahaha, very thx for you time ^^

Como los dos dieron tantas sugerencias con los New Combo, traté de ordenarlos lo mejor que pude con lo de ambos.
Muchisimas gracias de verdad ^_^
MuseCaliope
11 posts
Joined February 2013
MuseCaliope

snlrocks wrote:

SPOILER
[muse's insane]
00:22:464 (7) - nc Done
00:26:156 (10) - ^ Done
00:26:618 (1) - ^ Done
00:26:849 (3) - ^ I don't think it's neccesary to make a new combo here with the previous combo created, I made a nc with the following note 00:27:541 I hope it's ok with you.
00:33:541 (7) - ^Done
00:33:541 (7) - ^ Done
00:37:233 (1) - ^ Done
00:37:695 (4) - ^Done
00:40:926 (4) - ^Done
00:41:387 (7) - ^Done
00:52:926 (7) - ^Done
00:53:387 (10) - ^Done
01:04:003 (9) - ^Done
01:04:464 (12) - ^Done
I made a NC here: 01:05:618, I hope it's ok with you.
01:12:772 (1) - ^Done
01:13:003 (3) - ^ I don't think it's neccesary to make a new combo here with the previous combo created.
01:14:156 (5) - ^Done
01:14:618 (8) - ^Done
01:14:849 (10) - ^I don't think it's neccesary to make a new combo here with the previous combo created.
01:20:156 (4) - ^Done
01:27:080 (3) - ^Done
01:27:541 (6) - ^Done
01:30:772 (5) - ^Done
01:31:233 (8) - ^Done

Additional: Following your idea about the NC's, I guess you probably missed this one 00:06:772, I added NC here, just in case.
I also added NC here: 00:34:003
00:37:695 I hope it's ok with you.

Thank you very much for your mod, I really appreciate the time you spent modding my difficulty.

SPOILER

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Mod solicitado en Cloud's modding queue :3/

General

:idea: Trata de mantener una misma duración para todos los kiai de todas las diffs, no es obligación pero sería mejor.

Ya lo arregle para mi dificultad, muchas gracias!.
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Shooted :3/
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Shooted :3/
Muchas gracias por el kudosu
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
Updated
Krah
osu! Alumni
1,023 posts
Joined March 2012
Krah
Hi random mod.

[Général]

- :!: There is a .7z in your folder.


[Normal]

- 00:04:233 (2,3,4) - I think that the jump between 1 and 2 is a little weird you can try this http://puu.sh/3RmCP/dcfe0ca8bf.jpg position of 2 : x=312,y=296
- 00:20:387 (1,2,3,4) - There is a change in your rythm here and no change in your distance snapping. This can be a little strange for a beginner. You can try to bring closer (2,3,4) like this http://puu.sh/3Rn7S/540a2c2d44.jpg
- 00:43:003 (4) - Try to keep your snapping :s
- 00:56:849 (5,6,7) - Same as 00:20:837
- 01:19:464 (4) - Ctrl+g
- 01:22:695 (5) - Just a detail but this one isn't perfectly straight


[Hard]

- 01:09:079 (2,4) - Not perfectly aligned in y (1pixel '-')
- 01:12:540 (6) - Stack this one with 01:11:386 (2) for pattern logic ?
- 01:13:925 (5) - Change the position of this one for make a blanket with 01:13:002 (3) ?
- 01:21:772 (1) - Ctrl+g ?
- 01:29:156 (4,5) - Make a blanket ?
- 01:36:772 (4,5) - Try this for the look of your pattern : (4) x=232,y=120 and (5) x=272,y=160
- 01:43:926 (4,5,6) - (5) isn't center between (4) and (6)



Sorry I can't mod insane with a cs5 :s
Good luck for rank =)
pife1
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Topic Starter
pife1
I couldn't understand this
- 01:13:925 (5) - Change the position of this one for make a blanket with 01:13:002 (3) ?

thank you so much fo the mod and thank you for the file 7z
pife1
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Krah
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Krah
No kd for this.



pife1 wrote:

I couldn't understand this
- 01:13:925 (5) - Change the position of this one for make a blanket with 01:13:002 (3) ?

Oops sorry for the misconfusion.
I just suggest you to move 01:13:925 (5) like that



And also I just see this but 01:13:694 (4) and 01:14:156 (6) aren't stack properly.
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Randomly stumbled around this map.

The spacing between all objects in a Normal (and easier) diff must be the same; else the diff's gonna be unrankable. And yes, even if the 00:04:233 (2,3,4) pattern in Normal does fit the song, it's not allowed here. It's okay in a Hard (or harder) diff, but not in a Normal (or easier) diff, and even then, it will be really confusing to players. I recommend to use 1.0x distance spacing here.

Also, it seems like pife tends to place New Combos randomly. Place them consistently every one or two stanzas at the beginning of one.

Please avoid overlaps like 00:56:849 (5,6,7), as it looks really messy and can be confusing to players.

Ah, and the correct (or probably better, anyway) kiai times are 00:47:157 - 00:54:080, 00:54:541 - 01:00:080, 01:09:310 - 01:12:541, 01:13:003 - 01:16:695, and 01:33:310 - 01:47:618. You're supposed to start and end them exactly at spots where the music begins to go stronger compared to the rest of the song.

Oh, in Hard, 00:28:695 (6) is supposed to be snapped at 1/3, from 00:28:695 - 00:30:387 (look at EruJazz's diff). Same case with 00:13:926 (3). And again, avoid overlaps like 00:33:080 (6,2) and 00:57:771 (5,6,7); they look really bad.

Plus, why 01:23:617 (4,1) in Hard looks really weird... Just end 01:23:617 (4) exactly at 01:24:080 and 01:24:541 (1) at 01:25:003. You should map 00:32:849 too, since the instrument here really "demands" to be mapped.

Nah, and the overall design here in Hard feels really messed up too. It feels like all the circles and sliders are randomly placed...

More stuff to say: You seem to overuse claps at times. For example, you used lots of claps at 01:08:848 (1,2,3,4,5) (in Hard again). Remove all the claps and add whistles to (2), (4), and (5)?

In EruJazz's diff, you (Eru) badly overmapped at 00:10:464 (1) and 00:10:810, so avoid mapping these spots... And just saying, 00:34:233 | 00:34:695 and 00:35:157 are supposed to be mapped because the instruments are loud enough that they can make the players feel awkward while playing the diff if the sounds are unmapped. Oh, and 00:35:618 should be mapped by placing a circle or the repeat of a slider there; a slider tick just won't cut it...

One minor thing (still in Eru's diff until I say otherwise): Add a clap at 00:40:926 (2) to follow the instrument.

01:07:003 (2,3,4) - This kind of pattern should be avoided even in an Insane diff, as this just serves as a badly-done trap that is generally disliked by players.

At 01:45:541 (4,5,6), nothing can be heard from the song on the blue ticks, so you should only add circles or sliders at 01:45:541, 01:45:772, and 01:46:003...

Sometimes overmapping is okay, but only when it doesn't make the player feel awkward while going through it. Just saying.

And for 01:37:695 (2)... it's not recommended for a slider to be made this curved, as it looks weird. Make it less curved ofc.

Looking at Muse's Insane... Why this diff doesn't show any background? It should have one, you know.

Most of the notes look randomly placed and touch each other, which makes the overall map looks aesthetically bad.

The combo pattern is really, really inconsistent. You should really only place an NC every one or two stanzas, at the beginning of one (like what I've said for pife's Normal diff).

Also, you seem to only place NCs at the beginning of a new pattern, which is completely wrong; you can only use NCs at the beginning of patterns sparingly, otherwise the usage should always follow how the stanza goes.

One more: You used too much straight sliders. Try using more curved sliders. And patterns like 01:02:156 (3,4) are really unfitting with the song, so please avoid this.

Overall, for the entire map: The design is still really messy, hitsound is still somewhat random, rhythm is kinda weird at places, the combo pattern is really inconsistent...

Okay, I'll assume that all of you are newcomers to the world of mapping, so I'll tolerate all these things; you guys actually seem to have some talent in this, you just need to learn more about what should and should not be done while making a map.

I really recommend to remap the entire map from scratch, and keep in mind of what have I said. Try to look at other well-made maps too (those that look good in terms of design, rhythm, and hitsound placement); they'll really help you in deciding what are you supposed to do.

Also, for the Insane mappers, 1.4-1.5 SV at this BPM is really slow... I recommend 1.8-2.0 SV. Anything might work for an Insane diff, but try to use any value in the range of 1.8-2.0 for the slider velocity.

Okay, that's it. Sorry if I sounded harsh; never meant to lol :P

And sorry if the entire content of this post looks really unorganized; I thought I'm just going to say a few general advices, but it turns out I have to say a lot more than that.

That's my words; good luck on the way (:
ErunamoJAZZ
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Hinsvar wrote:

Randomly stumbled around this map.
....

In EruJazz's diff, you (Eru) badly overmapped at 00:10:464 (1) and 00:10:810, so avoid mapping these spots... And just saying, 00:34:233 | 00:34:695 and 00:35:157 are supposed to be mapped because the instruments are loud enough that they can make the players feel awkward while playing the diff if the sounds are unmapped. ...well ... I really do not change. My reason: well as is, be more fun and not feel bad.

Oh, and 00:35:618 should be mapped by placing a circle or the repeat of a slider there; a slider tick just won't cut it... I really do not understand what would be wrong there :/

One minor thing (still in Eru's diff until I say otherwise): Add a clap at 00:40:926 (2) to follow the instrument. added claps :P

01:07:003 (2,3,4) - This kind of pattern should be avoided even in an Insane diff, as this just serves as a badly-done trap that is generally disliked by players. I know, however, this song is slow so do not think that this pattern surprise the players.

At 01:45:541 (4,5,6), nothing can be heard from the song on the blue ticks, so you should only add circles or sliders at 01:45:541, 01:45:772, and 01:46:003... You're right. I did something about it.

Sometimes overmapping is okay, but only when it doesn't make the player feel awkward while going through it. Just saying. yep ^_^

And for 01:37:695 (2)... it's not recommended for a slider to be made this curved, as it looks weird. Make it less curved ofc.hehe, Okay.


------

Looking at Muse's Insane... Why this diff doesn't show any background? It should have one, you know. <--LOL, good question, idk xD
.....

Okay, that's it. Sorry if I sounded harsh; never meant to lol :P

That's my words; good luck on the way (:

Very thx for the advices ^^
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1

Hinsvar wrote:

Randomly stumbled around this map.

The spacing between all objects in a Normal (and easier) diff must be the same; else the diff's gonna be unrankable. And yes, even if the 00:04:233 (2,3,4) pattern in Normal does fit the song, it's not allowed here. It's okay in a Hard (or harder) diff, but not in a Normal (or easier) diff, and even then, it will be really confusing to players. I recommend to use 1.0x distance spacing here.

Also, it seems like pife tends to place New Combos randomly. Place them consistently every one or two stanzas at the beginning of one.

Please avoid overlaps like 00:56:849 (5,6,7), as it looks really messy and can be confusing to players.

Ah, and the correct (or probably better, anyway) kiai times are 00:47:157 - 00:54:080, 00:54:541 - 01:00:080, 01:09:310 - 01:12:541, 01:13:003 - 01:16:695, and 01:33:310 - 01:47:618. You're supposed to start and end them exactly at spots where the music begins to go stronger compared to the rest of the song.

Oh, in Hard, 00:28:695 (6) is supposed to be snapped at 1/3, from 00:28:695 - 00:30:387 (look at EruJazz's diff). Same case with 00:13:926 (3). And again, avoid overlaps like 00:33:080 (6,2) and 00:57:771 (5,6,7); they look really bad.

Plus, why 01:23:617 (4,1) in Hard looks really weird... Just end 01:23:617 (4) exactly at 01:24:080 and 01:24:541 (1) at 01:25:003. You should map 00:32:849 too, since the instrument here really "demands" to be mapped.

Nah, and the overall design here in Hard feels really messed up too. It feels like all the circles and sliders are randomly placed...

More stuff to say: You seem to overuse claps at times. For example, you used lots of claps at 01:08:848 (1,2,3,4,5) (in Hard again). Remove all the claps and add whistles to (2), (4), and (5)?

In EruJazz's diff, you (Eru) badly overmapped at 00:10:464 (1) and 00:10:810, so avoid mapping these spots... And just saying, 00:34:233 | 00:34:695 and 00:35:157 are supposed to be mapped because the instruments are loud enough that they can make the players feel awkward while playing the diff if the sounds are unmapped. Oh, and 00:35:618 should be mapped by placing a circle or the repeat of a slider there; a slider tick just won't cut it...

One minor thing (still in Eru's diff until I say otherwise): Add a clap at 00:40:926 (2) to follow the instrument.

01:07:003 (2,3,4) - This kind of pattern should be avoided even in an Insane diff, as this just serves as a badly-done trap that is generally disliked by players.

At 01:45:541 (4,5,6), nothing can be heard from the song on the blue ticks, so you should only add circles or sliders at 01:45:541, 01:45:772, and 01:46:003...

Sometimes overmapping is okay, but only when it doesn't make the player feel awkward while going through it. Just saying.

And for 01:37:695 (2)... it's not recommended for a slider to be made this curved, as it looks weird. Make it less curved ofc.

Looking at Muse's Insane... Why this diff doesn't show any background? It should have one, you know.

Most of the notes look randomly placed and touch each other, which makes the overall map looks aesthetically bad.

The combo pattern is really, really inconsistent. You should really only place an NC every one or two stanzas, at the beginning of one (like what I've said for pife's Normal diff).

Also, you seem to only place NCs at the beginning of a new pattern, which is completely wrong; you can only use NCs at the beginning of patterns sparingly, otherwise the usage should always follow how the stanza goes.

One more: You used too much straight sliders. Try using more curved sliders. And patterns like 01:02:156 (3,4) are really unfitting with the song, so please avoid this.

Overall, for the entire map: The design is still really messy, hitsound is still somewhat random, rhythm is kinda weird at places, the combo pattern is really inconsistent...

Okay, I'll assume that all of you are newcomers to the world of mapping, so I'll tolerate all these things; you guys actually seem to have some talent in this, you just need to learn more about what should and should not be done while making a map.

I really recommend to remap the entire map from scratch, and keep in mind of what have I said. Try to look at other well-made maps too (those that look good in terms of design, rhythm, and hitsound placement); they'll really help you in deciding what are you supposed to do.

Also, for the Insane mappers, 1.4-1.5 SV at this BPM is really slow... I recommend 1.8-2.0 SV. Anything might work for an Insane diff, but try to use any value in the range of 1.8-2.0 for the slider velocity.

Okay, that's it. Sorry if I sounded harsh; never meant to lol :P

And sorry if the entire content of this post looks really unorganized; I thought I'm just going to say a few general advices, but it turns out I have to say a lot more than that.

That's my words; good luck on the way (:

thank you for the mod, but you should be more prudent
pife1
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10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
ello! :D Le random mod!

Hmm, I'll try to keep my suggestions general-wise

[General]
  1. Kai time at 01:01:464? Hmm, I think it would look more appealing if it started at 01:01:926
  2. Kai time at 01:44:387 looks better starting at 01:48:080.
  3. Remove Kai time at 01:09:310, 01:13:003, 01:33:310 now your just over-using it at the wrong times :(
[Easy]
00:04:695 (5) - New combo
00:07:926 (1) - I believe it should start at 00:08:387 instead, if your going to use that finish hit sound on the head. But before moving this, I suggest shifting 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4,5) all together.
00:13:003 (6) - Remove this, and try placing a try hit circle at 00:13:926 with a finish.
How it should look:
-Ignore the green hit circle on the left, I messed up on the screenshot a bit :S
00:15:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Shift all these notes one white tick to the right, so that the first slider starts at 00:15:772 now. notes would usually start on the tall white tickmark after a pause, to indicate a new rhythm.
00:19:926 (5) - NC
00:26:849 (6) - ^
00:31:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Shift these to the right, so that first green slider starts at 00:30:541.
(you may have to re-position it as well, so its in a respectable distance with the previous slider)
00:37:926 (3) - NC
00:50:849 (5) - ^
00:56:849 (4) - ^
01:04:233 (4) - ^
01:01:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move these to the right, first object starting at 01:01:926.
01:11:619 (5) - NC
01:20:387 (5) - ^
01:24:541 (8) - ^
01:30:541 (4) - ^
01:36:541 (4) - ^
01:42:541 (4) - ^
01:45:772 - 01:48:080 Spinner would fit here, but that's just imo.

Overall, I'd say this diff does look good! :) It's flow is really well made, and your objects look great!
However, you may need to re-check on several of your objects timing in this diff. As I've noted above, many objects are being placed either too early or a bit late from the actual beats.
And combos are jsut a bit too long :S

[Normal]
00:05:157 (5) - NC
00:10:695 (5) - ^
00:26:387 (6) - ^
00:33:310 (5) - ^
00:39:310 (5) - ^
00:47:156 (2) - ^ First object at kai must always be a New Combo
00:49:464 (6) - ^
00:57:310 (5) - ^
01:11:156 (5) - ^
01:12:541 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:003 (4) - NC
01:36:541 (6) - ^
01:44:387 (4) - ^
01:49:926 (5) - ^

This one looks nice! Just that same small combo errors :P

[Hard]
00:17:041 (5) - NC
00:20:849 (6) - ^
00:28:695 (6) - ^
00:34:233 (6) - ^
00:39:310 (5) - ^
00:47:848 (6) - ^
00:57:771 (5) - ^

Another pretty well-made dif! :D Not much to suggest about here!

[EruJazz's insane]
  1. Same velocity as Hard? Why not kick it up a notch to 1.80? The Bpm's pretty low, so it doesn't really make this diff look well...Insane at all! o.o
  2. The distance between the objects are also another reason why this diff doesn't look Insane as well
00:21:426 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:156 (1) - ^
00:30:080 (1) - ^
00:42:772 (5) - NC
00:45:080 (2) - Just keep this slider as a simple curve, like this:

00:49:464 (5) - NC
00:50:618 (8) - Bad overlap
00:52:926 (5) - NC
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (6) - ^
01:03:195 (5) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:29:387 (4) - ^
01:49:926 (4,5,6) - Weird overlap

I've just listed some common issues but really I think this diff needs a lot of work :( The objects appearing on this map seems really scattered, there's no real path made, flow or anything.

[Muse's Insane]
  1. Same suggestions as the previous Insane. Slider velocity and distance increase, would make this map look more fitting for Insane.
00:06:541 (5) - NC
00:18:310 (6) - ^
00:19:233 (10) - Remove clap.
00:24:541 (6) - NC
00:37:464 (5) - Add clap
00:43:695 (5) - NC
00:57:310 (5,6) - Bad overlap
01:03:310 (6) - NC
01:22:003 (5) - ^
01:25:695 (7) - ^
01:33:310 (7) - ^
01:36:080 - ^
01:43:003 (8) - ^

Though this map also needs some improvement, imo this diff looks more suitable for Insane :)

Also I've just taken note of something about your map for the last 2 diffs: The sound pattern.

Does you map actually have a sound pattern, or are hitsounds just randomly placed wherever feels right?
DUN DUN DUN~!

Well, until then, I hope this helps~! :)
pife1
523 posts
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Topic Starter
pife1

10crystalmask01 wrote:

ello! :D Le random mod!

Hmm, I'll try to keep my suggestions general-wise

[General]
  1. Kai time at 01:01:464? Hmm, I think it would look more appealing if it started at 01:01:926
  2. Kai time at 01:44:387 looks better starting at 01:48:080.
  3. Remove Kai time at 01:09:310, 01:13:003, 01:33:310 now your just over-using it at the wrong times :(
[Easy]
00:04:695 (5) - New combo
00:07:926 (1) - I believe it should start at 00:08:387 instead, if your going to use that finish hit sound on the head. But before moving this, I suggest shifting 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4,5) all together.
00:13:003 (6) - Remove this, and try placing a try hit circle at 00:13:926 with a finish.
How it should look:
-Ignore the green hit circle on the left, I messed up on the screenshot a bit :S
00:15:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Shift all these notes one white tick to the right, so that the first slider starts at 00:15:772 now. notes would usually start on the tall white tickmark after a pause, to indicate a new rhythm.
00:19:926 (5) - NC
00:26:849 (6) - ^
00:31:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Shift these to the right, so that first green slider starts at 00:30:541.
(you may have to re-position it as well, so its in a respectable distance with the previous slider)
00:37:926 (3) - NC
00:50:849 (5) - ^
00:56:849 (4) - ^
01:04:233 (4) - ^
01:01:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move these to the right, first object starting at 01:01:926.
01:11:619 (5) - NC
01:20:387 (5) - ^
01:24:541 (8) - ^
01:30:541 (4) - ^
01:36:541 (4) - ^
01:42:541 (4) - ^
01:45:772 - 01:48:080 Spinner would fit here, but that's just imo.

Overall, I'd say this diff does look good! :) It's flow is really well made, and your objects look great!
However, you may need to re-check on several of your objects timing in this diff. As I've noted above, many objects are being placed either too early or a bit late from the actual beats.
And combos are jsut a bit too long :S

[Normal]
00:05:157 (5) - NC
00:10:695 (5) - ^
00:26:387 (6) - ^
00:33:310 (5) - ^
00:39:310 (5) - ^
00:47:156 (2) - ^ First object at kai must always be a New Combo
00:49:464 (6) - ^
00:57:310 (5) - ^
01:11:156 (5) - ^
01:12:541 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:003 (4) - NC
01:36:541 (6) - ^
01:44:387 (4) - ^
01:49:926 (5) - ^

This one looks nice! Just that same small combo errors :P

[Hard]
00:17:041 (5) - NC
00:20:849 (6) - ^
00:28:695 (6) - ^
00:34:233 (6) - ^
00:39:310 (5) - ^
00:47:848 (6) - ^
00:57:771 (5) - ^

Another pretty well-made dif! :D Not much to suggest about here!

[EruJazz's insane]
  1. Same velocity as Hard? Why not kick it up a notch to 1.80? The Bpm's pretty low, so it doesn't really make this diff look well...Insane at all! o.o
  2. The distance between the objects are also another reason why this diff doesn't look Insane as well
00:21:426 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:156 (1) - ^
00:30:080 (1) - ^
00:42:772 (5) - NC
00:45:080 (2) - Just keep this slider as a simple curve, like this:

00:49:464 (5) - NC
00:50:618 (8) - Bad overlap
00:52:926 (5) - NC
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (6) - ^
01:03:195 (5) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:29:387 (4) - ^
01:49:926 (4,5,6) - Weird overlap

I've just listed some common issues but really I think this diff needs a lot of work :( The objects appearing on this map seems really scattered, there's no real path made, flow or anything.

[Muse's Insane]
  1. Same suggestions as the previous Insane. Slider velocity and distance increase, would make this map look more fitting for Insane.
00:06:541 (5) - NC
00:18:310 (6) - ^
00:19:233 (10) - Remove clap.
00:24:541 (6) - NC
00:37:464 (5) - Add clap
00:43:695 (5) - NC
00:57:310 (5,6) - Bad overlap
01:03:310 (6) - NC
01:22:003 (5) - ^
01:25:695 (7) - ^
01:33:310 (7) - ^
01:36:080 - ^
01:43:003 (8) - ^

Though this map also needs some improvement, imo this diff looks more suitable for Insane :)

Also I've just taken note of something about your map for the last 2 diffs: The sound pattern.

Does you map actually have a sound pattern, or are hitsounds just randomly placed wherever feels right?
DUN DUN DUN~!

Well, until then, I hope this helps~! :)

01:45:772 - 01:48:080 Spinner would fit here, but that's just imo.
I am sorry but I don't want this spinner here

But, Thank you so much for the mod :D
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pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
Updated
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

General
Too many Insane beatmap?
Do not use kiai time less than 15ms.

DINY - Always be myself (pife1) [Easy].osu
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352,72,49003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,49464,2,0,P|168:104|72:152,1,200.000001192092,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,50849,5,0,0:0:0:0:
-->
360,72,49003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,49464,2,0,P|176:80|88:152,1,200.000001192092,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,248,50849,5,0,0:0:0:0:

line 149
389,238,71157,2,0,P|350:287|254:303,2,119.999997053146
-->
392,256,71157,2,0,P|353:305|257:321,2,119.999997053146

DINY - Always be myself (pife1) [Normal].osu
Well done.
line 210-212
376,188,88233,2,0,P|344:140|352:84,1,110.000004012584,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,88,89156,2,0,P|496:128|504:184,1,110.000004012584,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,178,90080,1,0,1:0:0:0:
-->
344,120,88233,2,0,P|312:168|320:224,1,110.000004012584,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,89156,2,0,P|464:240|472:296,1,110.000004012584,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,90080,1,0,1:0:0:0:

DINY - Always be myself (pife1) [Hard].osu

Recalculate all slider length!
00:05:618 (2,3,4) - use slider instead!

00:06:541 (5,6) - same
00:13:464 (1) - 00:13:349
00:16:695 (4,1,2) - do not suit the music. split it and use 2 sliders instead.
00:45:195 (1,1) - too close
01:13:003 (3) - the end of the slider do not suit the music.
01:14:157 (6) - 01:14:272 (6)
01:25:695 (5) - do not use red line object here.

line 151:
76,272,20849,6,0,P|108:296|152:308,1,75.000000298023
-->
76,272,20849,6,0,P|108:296|144:304,1,70.000000298023

line 171:
320,140,28695,6,0,L|400:140,9,44.9999988055228,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-->
320,140,28695,6,0,L|368:140,9,35.0000001490115,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Insane beatmap
skiped.


Resnap all Notes!
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
103638 DINY - Always be myself.zip
Please click here and copy this link in your browser:
http://ys-e.ys168.com/2.0/330992615/TKi ... myself.zip
pife1
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Topic Starter
pife1

ax_pokl wrote:

103638 DINY - Always be myself.zip
Please click here and copy this link in your browser:
http://ys-e.ys168.com/2.0/330992615/TKi ... myself.zip
Don't worry I just did, just I had to reemplace of numbers right?
Thank you so much, because I did't know that
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
Updated
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,539 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
From my queue of M4M~

[General]
NC is according to the song, not the note.
the last kiai time is strange in some diff.
and it's not beautiful and not in a good flow. You can think about remap part of the map.

[Easy]
I suggest that do not change SV in easy diff although only ×1.1 or 1.2
00:12:541 (1) - NC
00:19:464 (5) - NC
00:19:926 (1) - remove NC
00:21:310 (1) - remove NC
00:23:157 (3) - NC
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - Gird Level 4 to make it like
this
00:34:233 (4) - NC
00:35:618 (1) - remove NC
00:42:541 (5) - NC
00:44:849 (4,5) - ctrl+j and make it in distance snap
00:56:849 (4) - remove NC
00:58:695 (6) - NC
01:04:695 (4) - remove NC
01:07:464 (1) - remove NC
01:09:310 (4) - NC
01:07:926 (3,4,5) -
01:12:541 (4) - remove NC
01:13:003 (5) - NC
01:16:695 - add note?
01:20:849 (5) - NC
01:39:772 (4) - remove NC
01:40:695 (1) - NC
01:42:541 (3) - remove NC
01:44:387 (6) - NC
01:46:233 (3) - remove NC

[Normal]
Also some NC problems.
It's tired to point out them all again.
It's good to NC in that way↓

NC—————————————————————————————————————NC
Two white line, one new combo.

[Hard]
Distance Snap seems always changing...
The same NC problem. You can change it by yourself, can you? ;)
00:05:618 (1) - This follows the music.
00:16:695 (6,7,8) - seems strange.
00:28:695 (9) -
01:04:925 (5) - delete it please
01:15:771 (5) - make like this.
01:30:886 (1) - move to 01:30:772 - also end at 01:32:849 -
01:45:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - why always change distance snap?seems strange when playing!

[EruJazz's Insane]
Well, I have to say this map follows the music, but all of the parts follow the music make the map feel weird, such as 01:34:464 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:26:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and so on.
I can't give more suggestions.
So try remap it please. :(
Also you can ignore it. Try to make it in a good flow.

[Muse's Insane]
when change the SV , you'd better change the color, such as 01:39:772 (7) -
00:27:541 (5,6,7) - use 00:26:618 (1,2,3) - ctrl+j and ctrl+h
00:51:080 (1) - bad overlap. notes can not be below the sliders except the head or the end. so it may be unrankable.
01:37:003 (5,1,2,3) - ^
NC problems as before.

That's all~ hope you can rank it~ ;)
pife1
523 posts
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Topic Starter
pife1
Thank you for the mod
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
Updated
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, Here is my mod. From Queue's m4m.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
  1. cancel the "enable countdown" if you not need it.
  2. any breaks so cancel the " Letterbox during breaks ".
  3. chaos kiai time. Please placement the appropriate. except gustdiff.
  4. the ends place need some if its not guestdiff.
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-
  1. Try to use new combo and dont over 5 in easy diff.
  2. 00:18:541 (4,1,2) - its a little hard in easy, avoid to hide the notes or sliders.
  3. 00:21:310 (5) - NC
  4. 00:22:695 (6,7) - blanket it better, let it looks more pretty
  5. 00:30:541 - i think the rhythm is start change here
  6. 00:43:003 (2,3,4,5) - let the ds same
  7. 00:47:157 (1,2,3) - i think its not good, kiai start but its slowly
  8. 01:07:464 (6) - NC
    good hitsounds
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-
  1. 00:59:157 (3,1,2) - looks not pretty
  2. 01:51:772 (6) - NC
    not else
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 00:45:195 (1) - start 00:44:964 - here or 00:45:310 - here, and i think end 00:45:772 - here is better.
    not else
-------------------------------------------------
-EruJazz's Insane-
  1. 00:25:233 (4) - remove whistle for the end ?
  2. 00:26:849 (3) - add whistle ?
  3. 00:39:541 (5) - add clap for the end ?
  4. 00:45:080 (2) - add whistle for the front ?
  5. 01:22:003 (6) - Elusive
  6. 01:35:849 (2) - not pretty
    good job
-------------------------------------------------
-Muse's Insane-
  1. 01:45:310 - two timing point at the same time.
  2. a bit chaos
  3. 01:22:003 (1,2) - blanket it more pretty
  4. 01:43:464 (2,3,4,5,1) - stack
    good job
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
Good luck to you ! ;)
Chronotakular
64 posts
Joined March 2013
Chronotakular
Hello! Mod4Mod! (Sorry this took so long.)

General: Oh boy. OGPlanet. I played Rumble Fighter. That community was awful.

[Easy]

Okay. This map is great. Easily identifiable beat, no weird notes, no stacking and such. Nothing for me to say here. (:

[Normal]

00:00:310 (1,2) - Something is weird here. I feel like circle 2 was unexpected, perhaps not stacking it would make no-so-unexpected, I have no idea.

Other than that, this chart is great.

[Hard]

00:00:310 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps make these like a square?
00:28:695 (8) - Jeez, I hate notes like this. I never know when they end. I guess this is okay, but I would just map something else here.

[EruJazz's Insane]

01:19:926 (1,2) - This jump is kinda intense.
01:25:695 (4) - Distance snapping is weird.
01:45:541 (4,5,6) - Maybe make these circles? The sliders are kinda unnecessary here.

[Muse's Insane]

This map is good. Nothing seemed off to me. (:
[]

I hope this helped! Good luck with the map! (:
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
Hiii~

The m4m:

Muse's Insane
  1. 00:40:926 (3,4,5) - Use the same dist snap here as you used for 00:37:233 (3,4,5).
  2. 00:42:310 (2,3,4) - Hmm, not sure if the 0.6x SV is really necessary here. Leave it if you believe it fits this part of the song, but I don't think there's an evident change in tempo or anything.
  3. 00:55:926 (4) - Ctrl+G. Flows better imo.
  4. 01:04:464 (1) - You need to extend this slider so the tail is on the red tick. The red tick is where you can here the beat. Here for reference 01:05:387.
  5. 01:07:695 (1) - It would be better if you could replace this spinner with a couple of notes. It's a short spinner that doesn't really fit - there is a defined drum beat in this section.
  6. 01:16:695 (1) - Please neaten this slider up. Make the bottom of the 'W' even.
  7. 01:43:464 (2,3,4,5,1) - Overlap the ends of the sliders better (including (1) of the next combo). Use grid level 4.

EruJazz's Insane
  1. 00:17:157 - Add a note here to form a triplet with 00:16:695 (5,6).
  2. 00:18:080 - ^ It plays better as a triple because there is a blatant drum beat you're missing.
  3. 00:26:157 & 00:26:387 - Umm, map these claps that you can hear in the song?
  4. 01:00:195 - 01:01:003 - ??? Why the blank space? Well I understand if your mapping solely to the instrumental..

Hard
  1. 00:13:926 (7) - Hit sounds here would suit nicely. For the bass, maybe find a custom hit sound to fit, or use the drum sample set.
  2. 00:28:695 (8) - These notes are actually 1/6 notes, see EruJazz's Insane. But I guess you leave it to avoid complexity. Just pointing out that it's not the right timing.

Normal
  1. Nice.

Easy
  1. 00:45:310 (5) - I like this slider! :)

Overall, pretty nice map set. I must say that Hard, Normal & Easy are more enjoyable - not because they're easier than the Insane GDs, but because of hit sounds and intuitiveness regarding the beat, rather than solely to the instrumental. This is personal opinion of course. Each difficulty does have it's own merits. I would also like to see a hit sound for the bass drum, it would make this map even better :)

That's all from me, thanks again for your mod. Good luck :D
pife1
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Topic Starter
pife1
Thank you a lot Miomio Chii, Chronotakular and Unsfamiliar, guys helped me because I had some doubts.
And Unsfamiliar, I am thiking how to use the drum
ErunamoJAZZ
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2,726 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

mtbbsben wrote:

[EruJazz's Insane]
Well, I have to say this map follows the music, but all of the parts follow the music make the map feel weird, such as 01:34:464 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:26:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and so on.
I can't give more suggestions.
So try remap it please. :( o.ó, emm nope.
Also you can ignore it. Try to make it in a good flow. Ok :P

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, Here is my mod. From Queue's m4m.
-------------------------------------------------
-EruJazz's Insane-
  1. 00:25:233 (4) - remove whistle for the end ? done
  2. 00:26:849 (3) - add whistle ? done
  3. 00:39:541 (5) - add clap for the end ? nope
  4. 00:45:080 (2) - add whistle for the front ? done
  5. 01:22:003 (6) - Elusive
  6. 01:35:849 (2) - not pretty lol, done
    good job Thx! ^^
-------------------------------------------------

Chronotakular wrote:

[EruJazz's Insane]

01:19:926 (1,2) - This jump is kinda intense. So is insane.
01:25:695 (4) - Distance snapping is weird. fix
01:45:541 (4,5,6) - Maybe make these circles? The sliders are kinda unnecessary here. Nope, i love this sliders (for info, read here)

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiii~
EruJazz's Insane
  1. 00:17:157 - Add a note here to form a triplet with 00:16:695 (5,6). fix
  2. 00:18:080 - ^ It plays better as a triple because there is a blatant drum beat you're missing.fix
  3. 00:26:157 & 00:26:387 - Umm, map these claps that you can hear in the song? nope, claps are bullous too.
  4. 01:00:195 - 01:01:003 - ??? Why the blank space? Well I understand if your mapping solely to the instrumental.. hahah, ok, I did something interesting there. ;)
Very very thx all people :D
MuseCaliope
11 posts
Joined February 2013
MuseCaliope

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

-Muse's Insane-
  1. 01:45:310 - two timing point at the same time.Thanks, I didn't notice it.
  2. a bit chaos
  3. 01:22:003 (1,2) - blanket it more pretty Done
  4. 01:43:464 (2,3,4,5,1) - stack Done
    good job

Thanks for your mod! :D

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiii~

The m4m:

Muse's Insane
  1. 00:40:926 (3,4,5) - Use the same dist snap here as you used for 00:37:233 (3,4,5). Done
  2. 00:42:310 (2,3,4) - Hmm, not sure if the 0.6x SV is really necessary here. Leave it if you believe it fits this part of the song, but I don't think there's an evident change in tempo or anything.I will leave it.
  3. 00:55:926 (4) - Ctrl+G. Flows better imo.Done
  4. 01:04:464 (1) - You need to extend this slider so the tail is on the red tick. The red tick is where you can here the beat. Here for reference 01:05:387.I totally missed this, done.
  5. 01:07:695 (1) - It would be better if you could replace this spinner with a couple of notes. It's a short spinner that doesn't really fit - there is a defined drum beat in this section.Done
  6. 01:16:695 (1) - Please neaten this slider up. Make the bottom of the 'W' even.Done
  7. 01:43:464 (2,3,4,5,1) - Overlap the ends of the sliders better (including (1) of the next combo). Use grid level 4. Done



Overall, pretty nice map set. I must say that Hard, Normal & Easy are more enjoyable - not because they're easier than the Insane GDs, but because of hit sounds and intuitiveness regarding the beat, rather than solely to the instrumental. This is personal opinion of course. Each difficulty does have it's own merits. I would also like to see a hit sound for the bass drum, it would make this map even better :) Indeed they're a lot of better, I noticed it when I finished my difficulty and compared it with those diffs. This is my first time mapping and I think I picked the wrong diff to start with. Thanks a lot for your modding!.

That's all from me, thanks again for your mod. Good luck :D
Thanks for your mod!
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
pife1
Updated
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,607 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
Hey~ m4m from my queue

Add 1 second of Audio Lead-in (Song Setup>Audio) so that the first note comes in two seconds after the time starts, which is what's required for rank

[Easy]
Keep slider velocity all the same! It helps immensely with patterning, and the difference at this low of an SV will not be noticed at all. Not to mention it's unrankable
I would recommend using tiny grid snap, so that you can perfect your patterning.

00:21:310 (1,3) - These two notes aren't perfectly symmetrical around (2). The best way to fix this is to copy (1), rotate it 180 (ctrl + . twice) and then ctrl + g. This way, the two sliders will be exactly the same.
00:25:003 (5,6,1) - The increased spacing here is a big no-no. Keep it all at 1.0
00:26:849 (1,3) - Overlapping is very highly discouraged in Easy difficulties. I would fix the spacing pointed out here^ and then remake this long slider so that it fits within the boundaries and spacing without overlap
00:31:003 (2,3,4) - These should be arranged like something similar to this so that they are much more symmetrical and keep good spacing
SPOILER
00:37:003 (3,1) - minor spacing issue
00:44:849 (4) - x:208 y:260 for spacing
00:49:464 (4,1) - minor spacing issue
01:07:926 (7,1,2) - The placement here could definitely improve, with a messy overlap and poor spacing.

From this point on, the varying slider speeds are a pretty large issue in my opinion. Please change these all to 1.0 and adjust the sliders and spacing accordingly, and then continue to find mods to improve patterning. (although, you can do a lot of what I suggested on your own with simply a critical look at your own map)

[Normal]
Again, changing slider speeds are stunting this map's improvement. Please keep them consistent

00:02:849 (5) - Rotate this clockwise 21 degrees (select and hit shift+ctrl+r) and then move to x:436 y:52, for clean spacing
00:04:233 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Ok, I moved a lot of things around in this section. Here's the code for it, I think this is much cleaner.
SPOILER
340,292,4233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,4695,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,124,5157,6,0,P|332:78|314:32,2,100.000000596046
220,96,6541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,152,7003,2,0,P|124:208|156:256,1,100.000000596046,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,7926,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,8387,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,292,8849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,9310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
00:31:003 (1,3) - try to avoid this overlap, moving (1) upwards would fix this easily
00:33:310 (1,3) - wouldn't recommend overlap, however if this stays then stack these two exactly, so that it looks better
From 00:47:157 - to 00:54:541 - it would be easiest on you to find one slider that looks really good ( I would recommend 00:52:695 (2) - ), copy it, and use that same slider for all of these, since they're the same general shape. Some are going in different directions, which is easily fixed with ctrl + . and ctrl + g
01:02:387 (3,4,5) - Tidy this up a bit, I would use the (5) slider for (4) (removing the repeat, of course), plus the spacing gets odd.
01:09:310 (2,1) - Nazi overlap :P easy fix with grid snap
01:35:157 (4,5) - minor spacing issue
01:36:541 (1,2) - same as^

[Hard]
Replay
The flow feels fine for the most part. Some spacings could use some work though.

00:02:157 (2,3,4,5) - It wouldn't be a stretch to turn these into a perfect square.
00:04:926 (5,6,7) - spacing
00:04:003 (3,4,1) - Move all three of these to x:256, y:88 so that they stack
00:07:926 (6) - x:484 y:180 for good, clear spacing
00:08:387 (1,5) - stack these
00:13:926 (7) - This repeating slider should be in 1/3 time, not 1/4
00:28:695 (8) - same as ^
00:36:080 (4,1,2) - The blanket pattern here could use some touching up. I would use the (2) slider for both, since it looks nicer
00:44:964 (1) - VERY much against this spinner, it comes in far too fast and doesn't last long enough. I would just use a longer slider to get the same effect
00:47:387 (4,5,2,3) - While these jumps do make sense with the music, the idea is continued on for the rest of the musical phrase. Keep the idea consistent, either lower these jumps or add jumps at places like 00:49:233 (1,2) - and 00:54:771 (2,3) -
01:02:848 (5,1,2,3) - I would recommend this rhythm, so that the notes on blue ticks are at the ends of sliders
SPOILER
01:06:540 (3) - x:204 y:152 for a perfect triangle
01:09:310 (3,4,5) - I like the pattern here, however move (3) to x:256 y:140, (4) to x:324 y:72, and (5) to x:372 y:148 for perfect symmetry
01:10:463 (7,1,2,3) - Not a fan of the clap spam here, remove a couple
01:41:387 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - With the way that this circles back in on itself, it looks very confusing and doesn't play well. I can't think of a good solution other than redoing these with that in mind.

My brain is fried D: I'm sorry, don't have it in me to do the last two. Here's the replays I made for both of them though
Working on the last two now! just needed a break

[EruJazz's Insane]
Replay
There's a lot of awkward breaks in the mapping that I feel disrupt the flow quite a bit. Some hard to distinguish spacing and odd beats make it unintuitive to read at points

00:05:156 (1,2) - I don't think this jump is placed well, it might be best to not have one here at all
00:11:156 (4) - This note is very hidden by (1,2) before it, I would suggest moving it farther away
00:13:695 - I would put one more 1/2 slider here and start the spinner at 00:14:041 - instead
00:19:349 (4) - (nazi) grid space left
00:26:157 - I hear two claps here that I think should be mapped
00:27:195 (4) - End this on the red tick and then add another note where it ended before, to fit the rhythm better
00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Woah! This 1/3 stream comes out of nowhere, especially since the spacing isn't drastic enough to warn the player. Increase this much more, I'd say 1.2 perhaps?
00:39:541 (5) - I'm not a fan of repeats with a higher number, since they usually feel very odd unless they're in a 1/4 stream. I think you should reduce this by one and then add a note in place of that last repeat
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - Bit of a messy overlap, I think moving (7,8) down and to the left would work well
01:00:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is 1/3, and yet you mapped over it with 1/4 D:
01:02:849 (4,1) - I would turn this into one slider, so (1) isn't on a blue tick
01:07:464 - Map this part as well! it feels very empty with those notes ignored
01:15:541 (5) - Again, repeating sliders with a rhythm this slow just feel odd to me. I think you could even just do 5 circles here, to go with the intensifying bass notes
01:38:272 (1,2) - I know this goes with the guitar, but man does it feel strange. Perhaps this could work?
SPOILER
01:50:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - again, the 1/3 here just isn't apparent enough, so some higher spacing is in order

[Muse's Insane]
Replay
Actually pretty nice, the symmetrical patterning works for this kind of song, and most of the spacing is pretty apparent. I'm not a fan of the huge sv slowdown near the beginnning, but other than that good job

I could sit here and nazi your patterns all day, but it wouldn't provide you with anything constructive. That's something you can easily do on your own with grid snap and using the coordinates in the top right corner to help figure out (calculator!) where each note should be to keep it symmetrical. If you would like some help on how I approach symmetry like this feel free to ask me in game, and I'll point out a few things if I'm not busy. Remember, the slightly bolded white lines in the grid are the center axes. Those are what you work off of

00:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't recommend these notes being hidden underneath the slider before them, I would try and find another pattern here to avoid that
00:14:157 (1) - This spinner is unrankable. It's too short. Please remove it
00:30:541 - As I stated earlier, I don't like how slow this part gets, especially since you keep using higher spacing. I understand that it would be a lot of work at this point to increase it, however I think that would be for the best. It can still be slow, say 0.8, it's just too low to be comfortable right now.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4) - Make sure that the slider you copy paste from is level before you do!
01:07:580 (6) - These notes here are 1/3, not 1/4. Adjust your repeating slider accordingly, you can get to 1/3 with the Beat Snap Divisor bar in the upper right.

Keep working at it! It's a pretty cute song. :D Good luck!
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