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Spice Girls - Wannabe

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The-Gabe
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The-Gabe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 7, 2014 at 3:45:37 PM

Artist: Spice Girls
Title: Wannabe
Tags: chicken little when tails get bored vahn 10 aldwych melanie brown scary melanie chisholm sporty emma bunton baby geri halliwell ginger victoria beckham née adams posh
BPM: 110.05
Filesize: 2937kb
Play Time: 02:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aldwych's Insane (4.9 stars, 340 notes)
  2. Easy (1.32 stars, 125 notes)
  3. Hard (4.3 stars, 256 notes)
  4. Insane (4.66 stars, 274 notes)
  5. Normal (2.03 stars, 136 notes)
  6. vahn10's Relaxing (4.45 stars, 202 notes)
Download: Spice Girls - Wannabe
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1 - 7 - 2014

Very sorry for not being on osu! for a long while. Busy with school (and especially homework, yikes! :( ).
Thank you Thank you Thank you to all of the modders:
Gabe
Madlollipop
CloudSplash16
AlpacaCokelat
pife1
ignobeatmapskin
Rumir
Aldwych
Cah-m
Aldwych
YGOKid8
vahn10
Lanturn
AlexaBM
RatedNC17
Dariano
And Thank you Aldwych and vahn10 for your cooperation in making guest difficulties. :)
I highly appreciate it.
I give credit to peppy for making this awesome game
and
I thank The Spice Girls for this cool song. :)
If you wanna make a GD please give me the link to your downloadable GD.
Last edited by The-Gabe , edited 14 times in total.
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Please, change your background, the current one is too small which makes it very blurry while playing.
Here's two suggestions:

1
2


The first one is in Widescreen, the other is in 1024x768
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
How was the map?
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele

YOURS wrote:

How was the map?
You have to work, hard.

First, the timing seems very odd to me. You should ask a good timer for it.
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Is it the correct timing (as in BPM)?
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
What is the correct BPM?
CeilingPanda
148 posts
Joined June 2012
CeilingPanda
I would increase the bpm just slightly, using 110.05 is much better as your timing starts to sack after after a while(at the end)
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Madlollipop wrote:

I would increase the bpm just slightly, using 110.05 is much better as your timing starts to sack after after a while(at the end)
What Madlollipop says about your timing is true. If you set it at 110.00, it falls behind a lot near the end, 110.05 seems to work as the timing. (Weird)
Offset -> 4599
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Thanks a ton!
I appreciate your advice!
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
wow that moving-hand is quite cool but idk if it's actually allowed or not since it kinda affect the gameplay lol


[General]

  • why don't you add kiai at 00:43:853 - and 01:29:651 -

[Easy]

  • 00:05:416 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - why the distance snap is different. i assume you're aiming for a good appearance, but it makes it kinda unreadable, even though there's the moving-hand thingy which also make it hard to read. for easy, make sure to use only one consistent distance snap
    00:14:412 (2,3) - same problem about ds
    00:17:683 - add a circle here? there's an actual beat there
    00:35:948 (2,3,2,3) - same as the first problem
    00:43:853 (1,2) - these two are hidden by previous slider. consider placing it somewhere else
    00:50:123 (4) - it should end here 00:52:031 -
    00:52:577 (1,2) - same. it is hidden by previous slider. consider placing it somewhere else
    00:54:758 (4) - it should end at 00:55:848 -
    00:56:666 (1) - start this spinner at 00:56:938 - , that's where the vocal starts. and end it at 01:03:481 - because that's where the downbeat

    01:07:842 - why the hand suddenly appear?

    01:19:564 (2,3) - same as first problem

    01:44:371 - the hand movement is kinda weird here

    01:44:917 - it's kinda empty without a circle there
    02:28:533 (2) - nc
    02:31:123 (1) - start this spinner at 02:30:987 -

[Normal]

  • 00:17:138 (2) - x:256 y:160 for better blanket with previous slider
    00:17:683 - add a circle here? there's an actual beat there
    01:23:108 (1) - it should end at 01:24:744 -
    02:17:084 (4) - end at 02:19:265 -
    02:21:582 (2) - doesn't fit the song. starting the slider at 02:21:991 - is better

[Hard]

  • 00:17:683 - same like other diffs
    01:27:334 (1) - start at 01:27:470 -
    01:42:327 (1) - start at 01:42:463 -
    02:05:907 (6,7,8) - not stacked properly. or is this intentional?
    02:21:854 - 02:22:399 - 02:22:945 - add a circle
    02:24:717 (1) - this is really long and can be tiring, although this is hard. i suggest to cut that spinner a bit and map some part
i agree with Gabe. this needs more work. well, you already know how to use distance snap and mostly your rhythm and hitsound is consistent, which is a good starter. but the thing is, you should take a look at ranked maps these day. they can help a lot

and lastly, good luck~
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
pife1
Hi:
First: Why you didn't use the time KIAI. it's very important!
If you don't know it, check out : http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kiai

In Normal:
02:23:354 (3,4) - This part is very confusing because I feel that the map lost its flow, you should move to 02:23:899 (4) towards a side or move to both 02:23:354 (3,4) toward white previous and resnap them
02:26:352 (1) - this silder isn't straight

In Hard:
01:01:300 (1) - You shoul move to at the white note previous
02:02:363 (1) - this silder isn't straight
02:04:408 (1) - In my opinion this note leftover
02:05:907 (6,7,8) - They are not aligned
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Thanks a lot guys this means a lot to mean I will get to fixing. :)

But unfortunately you won't get the update until a few weeks from now. My submission cap is full.
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe

pife1 wrote:

Hi:
First: Why you didn't use the time KIAI. it's very important!
If you don't know it, check out : http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kiai

In Normal:
02:23:354 (3,4) - This part is very confusing because I feel that the map lost its flow, you should move to 02:23:899 (4) towards a side or move to both 02:23:354 (3,4) toward white previous and resnap them
02:26:352 (1) - this silder isn't straight

In Hard:
01:01:300 (1) - You shoul move to at the white note previous
02:02:363 (1) - this silder isn't straight
02:04:408 (1) - In my opinion this note leftover
02:05:907 (6,7,8) - They are not aligned

What do you mean by leftover?
pife1
523 posts
Joined January 2012
pife1

YOURS wrote:

pife1 wrote:

Hi:
First: Why you didn't use the time KIAI. it's very important!
If you don't know it, check out : http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kiai

In Normal:
02:23:354 (3,4) - This part is very confusing because I feel that the map lost its flow, you should move to 02:23:899 (4) towards a side or move to both 02:23:354 (3,4) toward white previous and resnap them
02:26:352 (1) - this silder isn't straight

In Hard:
01:01:300 (1) - You shoul move to at the white note previous
02:02:363 (1) - this silder isn't straight
02:04:408 (1) - In my opinion this note leftover
02:05:907 (6,7,8) - They are not aligned

What do you mean by leftover?
I mean this note is surplus or this note should not be here, I am sorry for my english :o
Evolanrete
Evolanrete
I forgot how I got into this map...
nvm I'm gonna give some suggestions.
You rhythm is great, but in hard and insane, it gave me a feeling that it's flowing like a circle, continuously and continuously...
It's not wrong but the pattern is too simple.
One of the reason is that you use too few repeated sliders.
I suggest you to relocate all the notes with reference to other's map (in other word, remap, sorry :( )
afaik you cannot open two osu at the same computer, so if you have both laptop and desktop, it's great to copy the pattern.
For the easy and normal, the flow is good. It's better to slightly improve the pattern, though.

Good Luck and don't give up! :)
Rumir
10 posts
Joined May 2013
Rumir
So, here something I would prefer to do:


[General]

Use a bigger grid size. It's way better.
00:43:853 - Kiai Time?
01:29:651 - Kiai Time?

[Easy]

Nothing here I could give tips for.

[Normal]

Don't just copy/paste things. It's monotone and doesn't make fun to play it. Use your creativity and make something different like in your other diffs.

[Hard]

Nothing here too. :D

[Insane]

It's far too easy for insane. Remap it please with bigger jump, HP >= 7, CS = 5, AR = 6, OD >= 7 and other stuff usually found in other Insane maps


[All in All]

The Song is good, but try it again on the Normal and the Insane (or leave Insane out) diffs. They have to be remapped.


~Rumir
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Plop!


I love the music. But like evrybody said (especially gaby), you have to work hard for this, i could make an insane diff for you if you want.
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Okay Aldwych. I'd like to see how someone else would map this song and compare it to my style of mapping. Be sure to put your name in the diff. :)
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The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe

Rumir wrote:

So, here something I would prefer to do:


[General]

Use a bigger grid size. It's way better.
00:43:853 - Kiai Time?
01:29:651 - Kiai Time?

[Easy]

Nothing here I could give tips for.

[Normal]

Don't just copy/paste things. It's monotone and doesn't make fun to play it. Use your creativity and make something different like in your other diffs.

[Hard]

Nothing here too. :D

[Insane]

It's far too easy for insane. Remap it please with bigger jump, HP >= 7, CS = 5, AR = 6, OD >= 7 and other stuff usually found in other Insane maps


[All in All]

The Song is good, but try it again on the Normal and the Insane (or leave Insane out) diffs. They have to be remapped.


~Rumir

I am kind of a noob to osu! That is way my maps tend to be easy. :)
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Okay it will take few days. But don't give kudosu for what i said or because i'm making a map.
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz
Hi~ M4M req from my queue
Sorry for late, some accidents were happened IRL :o

I think finish should be used in important points
[Easy]
  1. 00:56:938 (1) - The boundary is 01:01:300 - , so shorten this spinner to 01:01:300 - is better imo. Additionaly, start break time from 01:03:481 - may be suitable.
  2. 01:34:012 (1) - add finish at 01:36:193 -
  3. 01:42:736 (2) - remove finish at 01:44:371 -
  4. 01:44:917 - Add a circle is better. As you do this, we can feel where's the bourdary of this song.
  5. 02:02:363 (1) - add finish
  6. 02:11:086 (1) - ^
  7. 02:21:991 (1) - remove finish at 02:23:626 - . There's no strong sound.
  8. 02:28:533 (5) - add finish on the head.
  9. 02:28:533 (5) - NC
  10. 02:28:533 (5) - shorten this to 02:30:169 - because actually the vocal is end at here. I know there's a voice of "Ha!" but it's not a vocal, just an accompaniment.
  11. 02:30:987 (1) - start this spinner from 02:30:714 -
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:125 (3) - like this? just a suggestion.
    image
  2. 01:30:742 (3) - ^
  3. 02:05:634 (3) - ^
  4. 00:47:125 (3) - remove finish at 00:47:125 - and add finish at 00:48:215 - instead.
  5. 01:30:742 (3) - ^
  6. 02:05:634 (3) - ^
  7. 00:52:577 (1) - add finish at 00:52:577 -
  8. 00:56:938 (1) - same as Easy.
  9. 01:26:925 (2) - remove finish on the head and add finish on the tale instead.
  10. 01:29:651 (1) - add finish on the head.
  11. 01:36:193 (1) - add finish.
  12. 01:44:371 (2) - remove finish
  13. 01:44:917 - add a circle is better, same as Easy.
  14. 02:02:363 (1) - add finish.
  15. 02:11:086 (1) - add finish.
  16. 02:19:264 (2) - remove finish.
  17. 02:19:810 (1) - add finish.
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:138 (3) - add finish on the tale.
  2. 00:43:308 (3) - This shape looks like randomly. try this.
    image/code

    348,78,43308,2,8,P|272:55|193:77,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:43:308 (3) - add finish on the tale.
  4. 00:52:577 (1) - add finish.
  5. 01:00:210 (5) - add finish at 01:01:300 -
  6. 01:36:193 (1) - add finish.
  7. 01:40:555 (1) - lengthen to 01:44:917 - . The boundary is here.
  8. 02:02:363 (1) - add finish at 02:02:363 -
  9. 02:11:086 (1) - add finish.
  10. 02:19:810 (1) - add finish at 02:19:810 -
  11. 02:30:987 (1) - start from 02:30:714 - ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:049 (1,2) - make a regular triangle is better I think.
    image
  2. 00:17:138 (9) - add finish on the tale.
  3. 00:43:308 (9) - ^
  4. 00:52:577 (1) - add finish.
  5. 01:40:555 (1) - lengthen to 01:44:917 - . Same as Hard.
  6. 02:02:363 (1) - add finish at 02:02:363 -
  7. 02:11:086 (1) - add finish
  8. 02:19:810 (1) - add finish at 02:19:810 -
  9. 02:30:987 (1) - start from 02:30:714 - ?
That's all I can say.
Good luck ;)
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Hi, insane GD here => http://www.mediafire.com/?4m4u716pi8lhi2v

By the way my mod :

I'll split in different part per each diff.

[General]

You should use the same kiai time that i put on my diff i think it's better. In the two cases, kiai times must be the same on all diff so if another guy say what kiai time are the best we should follow it.

I like the background but not the combo colours, but i don't have any idea to choose good so we cannot care about that.

Break times you put are too much long, try to reduce it by at least two / breaks. People could be easily bored about that.

[Eazy]

General :


- Imo, the rythm seems good but there's too too too much copy/paste on patterns, then the patterns itself are too much hortizontaly or verticaly, of course it's an easy diff but not a boring diff.

- Also, don't abuse reverses in somes sliders, 1 or 2 as suffisant for long sliders.

Hitsounds :


- 00:04:599 : No finish.
- 00:06:234 : Add clap.
- 00:06:779 : No finish.
- 00:08:415 : Add clap.
etc etc etc to 00:12:777.
- 00:13:322 : No finish on these 4 circles
- 00:13:867 : Add clap
- 00:14:957 : ^ (same)
- 00:17:132 : Begin => No finish / Add clap; End => No clap.

Etc etc etc... for the others parts which are copy paste of it.

- 00:45:489 : Clap.
- 00:46:034 : Claps only at 00:46:579 and 00:47:670.
- 00:49:851 : Clap.
- 00:50:396 : Same as before about the slider.
- 00:54:212 : Clap
- 00:54:758 : No clap.
- 00:56:393 : Clap.

I won't say else about the hitsound here, elsewhere it'skind of copy/paste and i think that you can correct all, just keep in mind that clap are 1 / 2 white bars.

Patterns :


About the patterns i won't tell lot of things, all is said on general's easy.

- 00:56:938 : FInish this spinner earlier, like 01:01:300 for example.

[Normal]

General :


It's kind of better than easy. But there's some problem i'll said on patterns part.
Try to increase the difficult of normal diff. It's too easy by the rating star.

Song Setup -> Difficulty Settings :

HP + 1
AR + 1
OD + 2

Hitsounds :


Same as easy.

Patterns :


00:04:599 : Too much circles on this part. Try to replace some of them by sliders. And try not to make so rectangular paterns.

Because it's kind of copy paste, it's same as easy i won't say same things for what is after and what you know i'm talking about.

00:56:938 : Same thing as easy about this spinner.

[Hard]

General :


Did you love copy/paste?
Anyway, this is kind to be more intresting here, but it's not really hard for an hard diff, the slider velocity here is the same as normal diff, try to increase it a little more (be conscient that the maphas to be change a too with this), and in an hard diff try to make some spacing by using the distance spacing option and start some stream (1/4 timings) with circles and/or sliders like i did on my insane diff, just try to see the middle way by not using too much.

Song setup -> Diff settings :

HP + 1
AR + 2
OD + 2

Hitsounds :


Same as before.

Patterns :


- 00:15:503 : Too much reverse on this slider. Decrease it and add some slidesr/circles.
- 00:40:855 : Be carefull about the position of the objects. For example, this circle and the next one haven't the same Y position.
- 00:41:673 : Again too much reverse arrows.
- 00:52:304 : Here is a nice example of positions mistake about the Y positions too.
- 01:03:481 : Break should start here.
- 01:20:927 : Be carefull about not stacktoo much circle on the same place (2 - 3 are correct).
- 02:11:086 : Marathon of circles Oo, replace some of them by sliders please.
- 02:28:260 : About this circles, try to put it at the same position as the circle n°3 before, again, be really crefull about the positions.

[Insayne]

General :


As like as hard diff, same slider velocity, in an insane diff here it must be at least 2.00.
An insane diff has to be mapped like an "artwork" you have to use spacing and stream if the music can, you have to make the player enjoying the insane because it's where the best players need to have challenges. So take pleasure to map it and no to have something like the hard diff.

Song setup -> Diff settings :

HP + 1
AR + 2
OD + 2

Hitsounds :


Again same.

Patterns :


- 00:51:759 : Too much circles here. Try to put a slidder on the middle.
- 01:03:345 : Start break here.
- 01:18:201 : I don't really like 1 note combo colour.
- 02:11:086 : Same marathon but longer. xD


That's all i'll say. ;)
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Thanks! I will get to to editing soon. :D
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
How do you add a guest difficulty from another user to your own osu! game?

Please show me. :D
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Before you'll do what i'm saying make sure to have a copy of the folder if you're doing something wrong.

Just DL what i gave you, put it on the folder "SPICE GIRL wannabe" on the osu! folder (Program files/osu!/music/XXXXX spice girl wannabe), change my file on .txt and replace the BeatmapSetID:99778 on my file. Rename in .osu and update it like you did on your all maps.
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Thanks . Now that I added you difficulty to my beatmap set, I can compare your style with mine.Your difficulty is actually pretty good. When I update the map, I am going to add your diff along with the other updated diffs. :D
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
can I do a difficulty too?
If you want?
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
Red : Unrankable
Blue : Had better fix
Black : Opinion
[General]
Offest is quicker than the music. Try 4631.
I advise you to make more changes in volume.That will make maps more interesting :P
[Aldwych]
Change the name into "Aldwych's Insane"
"Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane"
00:05:825 (5) - ctrl+g looks better.
00:09:778 (2,3,4) - they are overlaid each other.Try to change their distance.
00:10:596 (5) - 0.01 difference prev.
00:22:318 (1,2) - what about overlaying with 00:22:590 (3)?
00:38:947 (9,1) - change distance suddenly will make player uncomfortably
01:10:296 (2,3) - flow looks bad.Try ctrl+g 01:10:296 (2)
01:17:111 (8) - put it on x401y26
01:34:149 (2) - most player will think wrong about this distance. 00:31:041 (2,3) Try to imitate here.
01:51:459 (1,2,3) - they looks really excellent!!
01:55:275 (5) - ctrl+g
02:06:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - draw them more carefully :?
02:21:445 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think each of the 4 circles staying overlaping is the best way.
02:30:169 - 02:32:895 In kiai,you'd better keep it full.
02:33:440 (3) - 0.01 difference prev.
02:34:530 (3) - 0.02 difference prev.
[Insane]
AR-1 or AR-2

There are too many breaks...

00:39:492 (1,2,3,4) - I advise you too keep them the same..
01:03:481 - 01:18:201 Break seems unreasonable
01:42:599 (1) - spinner should start at 01:42:463
02:21:854 02:22:399 02:22:945 02:23:490 add a circle in these places.
[Hard]
AR+1

There are too many breaks...

You almost open distance snap all the diff.
Hard shouldn't do with this way.

00:44:671 (3) - blanket with 00:44:399 (2)
01:03:481 - 01:18:201 problem as insane.
[Normal]
01:03:481 - 01:18:201 problem as insane.
[Easy]
01:03:481 - 01:18:201 problem as insane.
Good Luck
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
[Aldwych's Insane]
  1. AR9 makes no sense at all. The map lacks intensity required for AR9 to work well, not to mention song is only 110BPM. AR8 please.
  2. Well to be frank, this difficulty is a bit disappointing. Way, waaaaaaay too easy. There's little to no challenge at all.
  3. Reason is: As well as not having the best choice of rhythm, you also only mapped to vocals, which doesn't really... do much, most of the time. Adding some rhythm mapping would really boost fun as well as make the difficulty more challenging.
  4. Also, I suggest mapping up to the very end of the song. Easily done, and I think it'll fit more.
00:11:141 (1,3) - This is an Insane, it definitely would not it hurt to map out the vocals here
00:15:503 (1) - Map vocals until 00:16:593, then start spinner.
00:17:956 (1) - Same thing as before, this is something I expect in a Hard diff.
00:28:588 (1,2) - And again as before, this is something I would expect in a Normal diff.

Well in short, many things are too easy. The only thing challenging about the map is AR9, which is no. HP Drain is weirdly low too, having it at 7 is usually good. But again, map is too easy. Too easy. Easy peasy, lemon squeasy.
[Insane]
  1. Well at the very least, it's nice to find Insanes which are too easy rather than too hard. Still, this diff. here is a legit Hard diff.
  2. And please, no AR9, it doesn't fit. Also no OD5, it is ridiculously low.
  3. I also suggest mapping to very end of song.
00:17:683 - Break is 2x too long, start mapping again at 00:26:407.
01:10:023 - Start mapping here.
01:53:640 - And start mapping here. God, there's a lot of breaks >.>
[Hard]
  1. Two legit Hard diffs... how troubling... Well if you make this easier by a considerable amount, you'd have a pretty good Normal diff?
  2. Also same thing with the breaks.
[Normal]
  1. Legit Easy diff. Rename to Easy and you are done. Same thing about breaks... won't mention it again.
[Easy]
  1. Another legit Easy diff... how troubling indeed.
So you've got a mapset with effective 2 Easies, 2 Hards and 1 (very easy) Insane...
Yeah, sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but this map is gonna need a loooot of work, and a loooot of remapping.

My suggestion is to look at a map with a very solid difficulty spread and to get ideas from that on how to make your map better. Feel free to message me in-game if you need assistance, as long as you're willing to put in the effort, I'd be more than willing to help.
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Hi!

Awaken wrote:

[Aldwych]
Change the name into "Aldwych's Insane"
"Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane" I don't know if it's my fault or yours's.
00:05:825 (5) - ctrl+g looks better.
00:09:778 (2,3,4) - they are overlaid each other.Try to change their distance. Tried to 1.1
00:10:596 (5) - 0.01 difference prev. huéhuéhué
00:22:318 (1,2) - what about overlaying with 00:22:590 (3)? No But i increase the DS to 1.2 because the next one is
00:38:947 (9,1) - change di stance suddenly will make player uncomfortably Oké
01:10:296 (2,3) - flow looks bad.Try ctrl+g 01:10:296 (2) Why not
01:17:111 (8) - put it on x401y26 DS is incorect i made something different
01:34:149 (2) - most player will think wrong about this distance. 00:31:041 (2,3) Try to imitate here. You've made a mistake, on the first part SV mult = 0.8, on kiai time it's 1.2 so that's normal
01:51:459 (1,2,3) - they looks really excellent!! It's just a normal pattern, if you said on the previous pattern i'll say yes, but thanks! ^^
01:55:275 (5) - ctrl+g No i dunno prefer
02:06:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - draw them more carefully :?
02:21:445 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think each of the 4 circles staying overlaping is the best way. I don't like long overlap streams, moreover when it's the hardest part, i know lot of people won't like this part but i won't really change it! :/
02:30:169 - 02:32:895 In kiai,you'd better keep it full. Too boring part to map it.
02:33:440 (3) - 0.01 difference prev.
02:34:530 (3) - 0.02 difference prev. Ja Hitler, Ja!

Good Luck
http://www.mediafire.com/?wqak7dycne2m33e

Thanks! ;)

YGOkid8 wrote:

[Aldwych's Insane]
  1. AR9 makes no sense at all. The map lacks intensity required for AR9 to work well, not to mention song is only 110BPM. AR8 please. Done
  2. Well to be frank, this difficulty is a bit disappointing. Way, waaaaaaay too easy. There's little to no challenge at all. Said later
  3. Reason is: As well as not having the best choice of rhythm, you also only mapped to vocals, which doesn't really... do much, most of the time. Adding some rhythm mapping would really boost fun as well as make the difficulty more challenging. This is pop music, srsly the music it a bit too shy, i cannot really follow the rythm, it's not an intrumental music
  4. Also, I suggest mapping up to the very end of the song. Easily done, and I think it'll fit more. How boring is this part, that will be sooooo eazzzy!
00:11:141 (1,3) - This is an Insane, it definitely would not it hurt to map out the vocals hereGive me an example of what you really (really) want. Because ther's no "really" sound during this part, oh yes 1/4 earlier of the last slider.
00:15:503 (1) - Map vocals until 00:16:593, then start spinner. Yes 2 options here => have a big slider for rythm that won't fit the last part, or lot of short slider or again a stream and let me follow moar the vocal, choose.
00:17:956 (1) - Same thing as before, this is something I expect in a Hard diff. For the friendly player i'm, i won't start with a circle, i don't want a full combo with 90% circle
00:28:588 (1,2) - And again as before, this is something I would expect in a Normal diff. More example of what you really want, but i changed it

Well in short, many things are too easy. The only thing challenging about the map is AR9, which is no. HP Drain is weirdly low too, having it at 7 is usually good. But again, map is too easy. Too easy. Easy peasy, lemon squeasy. Done (for the HP or course).

I will answer this with man San Franciso.
Srsly, there's no need to have a crazy difft to be ranked, i'm mapping for fun first, second i won't map for having the hardest GD of osu! and the music don't need too, but of course if you need more challenge, feel free to playing some Quick Brown Fox.

Cordially,
Thanks for the mod.

Sorry YOURS for the edit and second link take it => http://www.mediafire.com/?wqak7dycne2m33e
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe

vahn10 wrote:

can I do a difficulty too?
If you want?
Sure you can, vahn10.

Make sure you put your name on it.

I now know how to add GDs. :)
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Aldwych, i'm not telling you to make the hardest map, i'm saying that as it is now, even casual Insane players will have trouble enjoying the map. the whole purpose of having a wide range of difficulties in a mapset is so that it can be enjoyed by many players of different skill. if there's going to be a mapset with 5 difficulties (or 6, as there looks like there might be), it's even more important for those difficulties to be varied.
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych

YGOkid8 wrote:

Aldwych, i'm not telling you to make the hardest map, i'm saying that as it is now, even casual Insane players will have trouble enjoying the map. the whole purpose of having a wide range of difficulties in a mapset is so that it can be enjoyed by many players of different skill. if there's going to be a mapset with 5 difficulties (or 6, as there looks like there might be), it's even more important for those difficulties to be varied.
Well, we can talk about it with YOURS and vahn10 about, the diffs, if vahn10 made an hardest diff than mine, i can transform it into an hard(+) because, mine is a bit too hard for an hard diff, then we can offer YOURS to stop his insane + hard and keep focusing on the easy and normal diff.

In this case, i can make a big refont of my diff.

Thanks for replying!
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
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252,236,103826,2,0,B|252:172|212:136|160:132|104:180|104:180|56:144,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,28,104917,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,120182,12,8,121818,3:0:0:0:
504,92,122363,6,0,B|460:154|395:79|395:79|333:154|285:92,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,64,123181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,188,123454,2,0,P|156:212|220:188,1,134.399995898438
280,68,123999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,124271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,196,124544,6,0,L|392:264,2,134.399995898438,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,296,125362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,160,125634,2,0,P|300:112|364:220,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,308,126725,6,0,B|116:232|116:232|148:212|248:208|268:244|252:316,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,127543,2,0,L|256:296,2,134.399995898438
320,184,128360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,92,128633,6,2,P|312:48|200:132,1,268.799991796875,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,80,129451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,204,129723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,129996,2,0,B|164:274|164:274|196:296|222:272|222:272|252:294|284:266|284:266|254:220|278:170,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,130814,2,0,L|320:220,1,67.1999979492188
328,148,131086,6,0,P|288:216|408:200,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,216,131904,2,0,P|272:168|268:216,3,134.399995898438,0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,136,133267,6,2,P|32:248|176:280,1,268.799991796875,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,148,134085,2,0,P|116:208|80:152,2,134.399995898438
236,28,134903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,28,135176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,164,135448,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,172,135721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,304,135993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,300,136266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,304,136539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,136811,2,0,B|302:168|302:168|270:70|232:172,1,134.399995898438,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,137356,6,0,P|168:256|248:304,1,268.799991796875
376,276,138174,2,0,P|308:276|248:304,1,134.399995898438,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,300,138719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,232,138856,2,0,L|92:212,2,33.5999989746094,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,139128,2,0,P|232:192|284:200,1,67.1999979492188,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,28,139810,6,0,P|464:112|448:168,1,134.399995898438
344,80,140355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,168,140628,2,0,B|237:226|213:237|213:298,2,134.399995898438
240,32,141445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,68,141582,6,0,L|124:100,2,67.1999979492188,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,142127,2,0,L|184:156,2,67.1999979492188,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,264,142672,2,0,L|176:296,2,67.1999979492188,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,304,143217,2,0,P|432:264|440:220,1,67.1999979492188,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,236,143490,2,0,L|344:184,4,33.5999989746094
332,184,143899,2,0,P|288:200|240:228,1,67.1999979492188,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,276,144171,6,0,P|192:308|104:308,2,134.399995898438,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,144989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,220,145262,2,0,P|128:132|276:112,1,268.799991796875,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,272,146352,6,0,P|100:320|76:392,1,134.399995898438
128,252,146897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,304,147306,2,0,P|352:224|320:72,1,201.599993847656
256,216,147988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,80,148533,6,0,P|104:44|200:40,2,168.000006408692,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,244,149351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,244,149487,2,0,P|160:316|236:236,1,252.000009613037
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452,380,150987,5,4,0:0:0:0:
436,44,151532,5,4,0:0:0:0:
100,32,152077,5,4,0:0:0:0:
24,360,152622,5,4,0:0:0:0:
24,360,152895,6,0,P|76:232|256:192,1,336.000012817383,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,152,154530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,220,155076,6,0,L|208:296,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,155893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,216,156166,2,0,L|336:192,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,28,157256,1,4,0:0:0:0:
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
vahn10, if you can, would you please make you GD downloadable and also provide the link similar to how Aldwych did? :D

AND

Awaken, What do you mean by, "You almost open distance snap all the diff.
Hard shouldn't do with this way."? :?
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
Sorry for not replying for almost 1 month :cry: but here is the dl link
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
also do not kd me because of having a guest diff
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Hey YOURS. Unfortunately I don't plan on doing a full mod because of your mod. I explained in the thread. However, I will help you out with basic general stuff as it seems like there is a lot to fix.

[General]
Unused Files:
hand2.png | Do you have plans for this? If not, you should delete it (If its already deleted, then I probably have it from when you first made this map XD)
Spice Girls - Yo Ill Tell You What I Want, What I Really (YOURS).osb | You can delete this unless you plan on adding a SB sometime in the future.

Tags:
You shouldn't put lyrics in the tags. You can keep Chicken Little since it was in the movie (I think it was) but you should remove everything else

Remove: song I'll Tell You what I want what I really really want! from your tags.

You MUST add the following:
vahn10 Aldwych

You can add any of the following:
These first ones are the names of all the spice girls as well as their nicknames. It would probably be best to have their real names at least. Also be sure not to duplicate words like "spice"
Melanie Brown ("Scary Spice"), Melanie Chisholm ("Sporty Spice"), Emma Bunton ("Baby Spice"), Geri Halliwell ("Ginger Spice"), and Victoria Beckham, née Adams ("Posh Spice")

Since the album is called "Spice" and spice is already in the artist, you don't need add it as a tag or anything like that.

Kiai Time:
How about using the same Kiai time as the guest difficulties?
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:43:853 - ends on 01:01:300 -
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:29:651 - ends on 01:44:917 -
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:02:363 - ends on 02:37:256 -
^ these fit the song much better than just having one kiai time at the end.

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Countdown: Either swap Aldwych and Vahn's on or take yours off. It's better to be consistent even on the GDs for the countdown.
- [Aldwych's Insane] : 0
- [Easy] : 1
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [vahn10's Relaxing] : 0
Background:
Dang! 1.2mb file size for a 1024x768 picture.. I converted this for you and reduced it by over 1000kb! | http://puu.sh/5sp5q.jpg | Highly recommended that you use this new one.


Difficulty Settings:
Easy: Fine
Normal: Reduce OD by 1 | OD 5 on a 2 star song is a bit much
Hard: Fine
Insane: Up the OD by 2 (hard should not be higher than insane)
Vahn: Fine
Aldwych: Fine

Widescreen Support:
This is if you have a storyboard, which you don't.
Turn it off on both Guest Difficulties to match your own.



I was skimming through the diffs, one major unrankable issue was in Vahn's difficulty

00:14:412 (3,4) - you cannot hide reverse arrows on sliders. This needs to be changed.


Good luck
AlexaBM
755 posts
Joined March 2013
AlexaBM
hi~ M4M

[Easy]
I want to start by saying that DS 1,0 is too high for this diff. Change it and replace oblects with new DS.
And I don't recommend you to map with so big grid size. Press G to make it smaller.
00:26:407 (1,2,3,4,5) - Horizontal circles and sliders are too boring. Try to vary this pattern.
00:40:582 (3,1) - Bad overlap.
00:46:034 (1) - You have some more sliders like this, it's boring too. Make some sliders or notes instead of so many reverses.
01:03:481 - Why break time start here? Start it here 01:01:436 -
01:14:385 (1) - Stop it at 01:17:656 -
01:39:464 (3,1) - Bad overlap.
01:54:730 (1,1,1) - Remove all NCs

[Normal]
00:28:588 (1,3) - Bad overlap
00:50:396 (1,1,2) - Same problem as in Easy
01:54:730 (1,1,1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
01:01:573 (1,2,3,1,2) - Remove it and start the break here

[vahn10's Relaxing]
00:05:416 (2,1) - Bad overlap
00:09:778 (3) - This slider is very strange
00:17:683 (1,3) - It's a bad idea
00:22:318 (2,4) - ^
01:01:436 (1,2,3) - Remove it and start the break here
01:42:463 (1) - Horizontal slideris too boring.
02:06:725 (1,2) - Reverse arrow is under the (1)'s tail. It's unrankable

[Insane]
Sorry, can't say anything

[Aldwych's Insane]
Nothing to say.

GL~
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
RatedNC17
Hello~ (m4m)

[Easy]
00:13:322 (1) - clap
00:14:412 (3) - ^
00:39:492 (1) - ^
00:40:582 (3) - ^
01:23:108 (1) - ^
01:24:198 (3) - ^
thats it

[Normal]
i would suggest not using such a big grid size. if you put it to level 4 you can put notes more precisely.
your circle size is sort of big for normal i would reduce -1
00:11:412 (2) - this object is not snapped
00:37:582 (2) - this is also not snapped
00:13:322 (1) - clap at slider start and 2nd bounce
00:39:492 (1) - ^
01:23:109 (1) - ^

that's all

[Hard]
the same suggestion on grid size also applies here
again your circle size is too big for hard -2
00:13:049 (1) - remove the whistle on the sliders end and replace it with a clap
00:14:140 (4) - ^
00:39:219 (1) - ^
00:40:310 (4) - ^
01:22:836 (1) - ^
01:23:927 (4) - ^
01:37:284 (4) - the sliders end is not snapped
01:37:829 (5) - ^
thats it just hitsound suggestions

[Vahn10's Relaxing]
Great use of the slider tick sounds. real nice :)

[Insane]
grid size suggestion applies here
00:13:322 (1) - clap
00:14:412 (5) - ^
00:39:492 (1) - clap at slider start
00:40:582 (3) - ^
01:23:108 (1) - ^
01:23:926 (3) - slider at slider end

[Aldwych's Insane]
nothing to say here

Sorry i couldn't be more helpful :( good luck Have a star (╯°□°）╯︵
Dariano
215 posts
Joined July 2010
Dariano
Hi, nice map!, I like the song aww the past :P. Hope this helps~

[Timing]

Offset: 237, and then resnap all notes, it won't affect the map. Remember doing this in all difficults.

[Easy]

The tags on this difficult conflicts with the others, you should delete all tags in this difficult and then copy-paste other difficult's tags.
02:27:988 (4) - Move it to x:172 y:184
02:38:074 (2,3) - These things are kind of hard for an easy, as a suggestion you can replace them with sliders.

[Normal]

00:11:412 (2) - This circle is not snapped, just grab it and move it to the red tick.
01:27:470 - Since it is "normal", perhaps you should add a break time there.
02:00:182 - Same as above

[Hard]

01:37:011 (4,5) - These slidesr are not snapped, grab them both and then move them through the ticks and back to their place. Or delete and make them again.

[vahn10's Relaxing]

Im not sure if sliders like this 02:16:811 (6) - and 02:11:904 (2) - are rankeable, I think it will be better if you change those.

[Aldwych's Insane]

01:28:832 (5) - This slider is not snapped.
00:43:853 - There are two timing points here, delete one of them. http://puu.sh/60LyE.png
Suggestions: NC= new combo
00:13:458 (1) - NC
00:14:003 (1) - NC
00:14:549 (1) - NC
00:39:628 (3) - NC
00:40:173 (5) - NC
00:40:718 (7) - NC

Good luck ranking this! :)
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Just coming to be curious

Dariano wrote:

[Aldwych's Insane]

01:28:832 (5) - This slider is not snapped. Damn.
00:43:853 - There are two timing points here, delete one of them. http://puu.sh/60LyE.png Yep
Suggestions: NC= new combo
00:13:458 (1) - NC No
00:14:003 (1) - NC Yes
00:14:549 (1) - NC No
00:39:628 (3) - NC No
00:40:173 (5) - NC Yes
00:40:718 (7) - NC No
Gotcha v :
SPOILER
http://www.mediafire.com/view/i587kmm5nnzod6o/Spice_Girls_-_Wannabe_(YOURS)_[Aldwych's_Insane].osu
RCDesigner
18 posts
Joined October 2013
RCDesigner
I think the insane diffs are good. I played only two diffs, but they were really good made. The timing is ok, sometimes I had some problems with streamers but it's only my fault. Nice work!
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
The-Gabe
Sorry for not being on osu! for SO long guys.
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