1. Easy (1.35 stars, 93 notes)
2. Hard (2.65 stars, 211 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.06 stars, 274 notes)
4. Normal (1.69 stars, 136 notes)
5. Oni (2.54 stars, 382 notes)

Modders (Thanks >_<)

rezoons
Leader
Angelic Force
Lucy_Heartfilia
AlpacaCokelat
Cobra
LilyWhite
Xivaxi
On_WanWan
-Bakari-
mintong89
Oyatsu
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CDFA
<span style='color:#FF0000'>HelloSCV</span>
Unfamiliar
10crystalmask01
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Atema
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_AI
Puncia
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Natsu
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Come[Back]Home
Alarido
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tellertheworld
DenoisoGoiso
RatedNC17
CoroQuetz
Winek
Loli -[Koinuri]
happy623
No Dap
[Twinkle]
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Endemic
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rEdo
Lust
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<span style='color:#FF0000'>Irreversible</span>
Hula
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Tari
Dainesl
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konoshin69
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Chirony
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Swiftheart
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<span style='color:#FF0000'>DakeDekaane</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>mingmichael</span>

gokugohan12468 wrote:

can i make diff?

gokugohan12468 wrote:

well,i make normal diff (may)????

sheela901 wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

well,i make normal diff (may)????

You can do it but you need put the circles, sliders and spinners at the right time. Do your best and I'll try to see if some changes is neef to be edit.
Don't do it too fast. Take your time on editing a beatmap or doing a beatmap. Take it slowly...

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Here Normal Diff

I lazying for Mapping

1. Tu as beaucoup trop de kiai time, c'est unrankable. Sur les trois, le premier me semble complètement inutile. Je te conseille de l'enlever et tout sera bon.

1. 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4) - Mauvais distance snapping, il doit être constant en Easy.
2. 00:11:084 (1,2,3) - Mal alignés.
3. 00:13:084 (4) - NC.
4. 00:14:084 (6,1) - Mauvais distance snapping.
5. 00:17:084 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:19:584 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:21:584 (3,4,5) - ^ etc.... Je vais pas tous les pointer mais tu as énormément d'erreurs comme celle-là. Je te conseille de tout vérifier et corriger tout ceux qui ne vont pas.
8. 00:23:084 (4) - NC.
9. 00:27:584 (2) - x=400 y=120 pour un parallélogramme parfait.
10. 01:20:084 (4) - NC.
11. 01:35:084 (1,1,1,1) - Ce genre de NC n'est accepté que dans de rare ca. Et là ce n'est pas le cas. Enlève-les.

1. Toujours les mêmes problèmes de distance snapping qui doit être constant en Normal.
2. 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Mal alignés
3. 00:11:334 (2) - x=176 y=148 rends mieux.
4. 00:57:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Presque symétrique mais ça ne l'est pas.

1. Il y a beaucoup de streams qui n'ont pas l'air de suivre la chanson. On a parfois l'impression que les notes sont mises aléatoirement. Je te conseille de rechecker un peu tout ça.

1. Kiai is not the same in all diffs
2. Hard has different tags

1. 00:09:084 (5,6,7) - They touch the slider before, it makes that very bad to see and to play, move it to another place?
2. 00:30:584 (4,5) - Same thing
3. 00:53:084 (1,2) - ^ Change sliders' shape
4. 00:20:084 (2) - A symmetrical slider will be better
5. 00:21:584 (3) - Also, making this the opposite will make a nice pattern. Try that:
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:39:084 (5,6) - There's a good pattern in here, but these two beats ruin that, try something like this:
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:42:084 (2) - Copy (1) and rearrange that, so they will be similar!
8. 00:46:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right
9. 00:57:084 (1) - Hidden by the slider, not good to see in an Easy
10. 01:07:084 - Kiai should end here
11. 01:40:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right (remember to fix spacing)
12. 01:45:084 - I'd end kiai here and then add another little kiai time just for that note

1. 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Make them vertically linear
2. 00:18:584 (6) - Fix spacing
3. 00:19:084 (7) - NC here instead of 00:19:584 (1) -
4. 00:20:084 (2) - Fix spacing
5. 00:23:084 (5,6,7) - Not well spaced :\
6. 00:45:084 (1,2,4,5,) - Not really appropriate for a Normal
7. 00:47:584 (6) - ^
8. 01:02:084 (4) - Little spacing issue
9. 01:13:084 (5) - ^
10. 01:25:584 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue that could be much confusing for noob players

• 
  What rezoons said, I found it overmapped, too many streams. Even if it's a "Hard" diff, it doesn't mean it has to be really hard! Song is quite slow so make it calm and enjoyable but quite challenging at the same time, better recheck it.

1. Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80%

Angelic Force wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue!

Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.

General

1. Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80% OK

Normal

SPOILER

1. 00:22:334 (6) - Not perfectly straight. Fixed.
2. 00:55:084 (5) - This loop is not symmetrical, looks slightly weird. Change it to a weird shape.
3. 01:21:584 (8) - This is slightly slanted, not straight compared to 01:21:084 (7) Fixed
4. 00:52:334 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 a beat later, so it starts from here 00:52:584, because it's hard to hear the background instruments at that part. Fixed

Hard

SPOILER

1. 00:08:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stack these notes exactly on each other, maybe space them out to make a little part of the next circle barely visible. Fixed
2. Try to change the circle size to 4. Most hard maps use circle size 4. Only some difficult insane maps use 5. Circle size 5 makes playing with Hard Rock mod very annoying.
3. If you feel that changing the circle size to 4 makes the song too easy, you can change the AR to 7 to compensate for the difference. OK

Hope it helped, good luck with the map!

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:

Sorry for late mod and Because of poor English,when I mod other country person's map I can't do my best to describe all what I want to say-,-

General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difsFixed

Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difsOk
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finishOk
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084Ok
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it betterChange it to a weird slider but ok
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584 Ok
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic playerOk
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finishOk

Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balanceOk
00:53:834 (3) - distinceOk
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other lineOk
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlapOk

Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard difI'll check it.
00:08:834 (4) - distinceOk
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlapOk
00:39:084 (7) - not overlapOk
01:37:084 (2) - distinceOk


Good Luck

• 1.Your bg should be 1024x768, the current one is unrankable
  
  2. There's a slight typo in Tags, lol it should be 'human' not 'humain'
  
  3. AiMod says your Hard diff has different Tags. Tags in Hard diff has some words with capital letter, and easy diff and normal diff don't. you should check it and make it consistent.
  
  4. since you have no storyboard, uncheck Letterbox during Breaks
  
  5. the current hitsound is too loud, imo, maybe you can lower it to 70%-80%?
  
  6. it's only suggestion, but how about muting the normal sliderslide?

• AR4 for a song with BPM 120 is too fast, i suggest AR3
  OD-1? Since there are short spinners
  
  00:03:084 (1,2) - i'm not really good at this, butif you're going to make a shape like Finn's head, but you could try like this
  
  SPOILER

  
  sorry i don't know how to put codes ;_;
  00:07:084 (3) - new combo
  00:12:084 (3) - add clap for consistency with 00:14:084 (6) -
  00:14:084 (6) - remove finish and add it at 00:13:584 (5) - for consistency with 00:11:584 (2) -
  00:17:084 (3) - remove finish and claps, but add claps only at slider's reverse arrow for consistency with 00:15:084 (1) -
  00:19:084 (5) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:19:584 (1) -
  00:23:084 (4) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) -
  00:30:584 (4,5) - they are kinda hidden behind previous slider. i suggest to change their position
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:41:084 (1) - distance error with previous circle
  00:38:584 (4) - add clap?
  00:39:084 (5) - move down one grid so it'll stack better with 00:37:584 (2) -
  00:43:584 (4) - i suggest to move it somewhere else, since it's hidden by 00:42:084 (2) -
  00:59:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  01:13:584 (4) - add clap for consistency with 01:11:084 (1) -
  01:17:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  01:23:084 (1) - distance error with previous slider
  01:30:584 (5,1) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  
  kinda weird when the prologue has more hitsounds than the kiai times

• OD-1?
  HP-1?
  
  00:13:084 (6) - nc
  00:15:084 (1) - distance error
  00:17:084 (5) - i suggest to remove finish at slider's tail and reverse arrow
  00:23:084 (7) - nc, then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) - , add nc 00:25:084 (3) -
  00:31:584 (1) - add finish
  00:52:584 (1,2) - stack them properly
  01:05:084 (1) - add finish
  01:38:084 (1) - remove nc, add nc at 01:39:084 (2) - (long white tick)
  00:52:584 (1,2) - why not add flash kiai like easy diff?
  
  you still need to improve the flow, but that'll came through experience

• it's kinda weird when Hard and Normal have the same slider velocity, imo
  
  i suggest to add some notes between 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for better rhythm flow
  i suggest to add some notes between 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:11:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for better rhythm flow
  aaand there are still more gaps between two patterns that i suggest you to fill with notes
  00:13:084 (7,8,9) - stack them properly
  00:19:084 (1) - well you can make them symmetry like the picture in easy diff
  00:38:834 (6,7,8) - i suggest you to change their position since the current one is really confusing
  00:53:209 - lol kiai should start 00:53:084 -
  01:07:084 (1) - add finish
  
  imo, i suggest you to make a consistent pattern (rhythm and hitsound) since most of them are irregular. you mostly add sliders and circles to accompany the vocal, much like 2010's style. you can check other people's mapping style

General

SPOILER

Easy

SPOILER

Normal

1. I don't think that BG really fits here. How about this BG? It's not so bright, so players will be able to focus on hitobjects.
2. According to AiBat you have some problems with skinning, see this screenshot for details.
3. Your combo colours should be consistent in all diffs.
4. consider finding custom hitsound and/or reducing volume. Current hitsounds don't really fit. What's more your hitsounding sounds random sometimes. Please, try to find fiting custom hitsounds and try to re-hitsound it or at least remove extra claps/add missed ones!
   Note: poke me if you need any suggestions
5. Princess Bubblegum and Marceline should be in tags, too. People LOVE them and they're important characters in this cartoon. :<

1. Reduce HP Drain by one tick, this is the easiest diff, so we should take care of beginners.
2. 00:03:084 (1,2) - nazi - I don't really like the shape of these sliders. Slider changes it's direction too suddenly and it doesn't fit with the music. How about something smoother? example
3. 00:10:584 - 00:12:584 - 00:14:584 - I don't really understand what's the point of ignoring such beats. It breaaks your rhythm and you ignore strong beats/vocals, so beginners will be confused!
4. 00:17:084 (1) - try to remove NC here, I think it doesn't fit with your pattern and looks kinda weird here.
5. 00:33:084 (1) - it's too cruel for beginners, thay don't even except something like this here, remove this circle and drag start of a break here! see?
   Note: well, 01:07:584 - drag the break here. It's the same.
6. 01:16:084 (3,4) - it's the -noly- stack in this diff. It will confuse beginners, so i'drecommend you to unstack them and keep consistent spacing here.
7. 01:21:084 (5) - how about adding a repeat to this slider? I think that vocals end on 01:22:084 , therefore slider should end later!
8. 01:35:084 (2,3) - nazi - well, what's the point of using this shape here? It looks really strange. In fact, I'd try to make the whole diff a bit neater. (Softer shapes, smother flow and etc.)
   
   Diff looks messy, some random hitsounds and ignored beats should be fixed, but diff isn't that bad!

1. AR doesn't match with slider velocity/patterns of this diff. Using higher AR would solve this problen, but since this is a [Normal] diff using higer AR isn't okay :<
2. You're overusing 1/2 beats, so this diff is kinda too hard for a [Normal]. Song is relaxing, so let players relax and enjoy the music! Try to make consistent and simpler rhythm. (1/1 rhythm with some 1/2 beats would work great here, try it!)
   
   I think that this diff should be easier, try to use simple and understandable rhythm, less 1/2 beats, lower distance spacing (I'm not sure about this one, tho). And same with hitsounding, try to find fitting custom hitsounds and feel free to poke me again!

1. 00:04:959 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - overmapping. Please, try to avoid aovermap, try to follow music. So, we will not be confused by strange rhythm and will enjoy playing your map!
2. Jumps/antijumps (spacing changes) are allowed in this kind of diffs. but they should be reasonable, they should fit with music and they should be understandable. In your diff I see a lot of jumps/spacing mistaks that don't fit with music at all. :<
   Examples: 00:23:584 (2,3) - 00:27:834 (5,6,7) - 00:41:334 (2,3,4,5) -
   
   Try to work on placement, rhythm and hitsounding. Probably it will require remapping the whole song ;_; But it is really needed here, sorry. :<

1. I love song, but hard diff have a lot of tricky snaps/overlaps. Everything else is good.

1. 00:40:584 - Add note here?
2. 01:00:584 - ^
3. 01:17:084 (4) - Off the mapset - fix if you want
4. 01:47:084 (1) - I suggest you to delete this and extend slider to that point.

1. 00:05:584 (4,5,6) - Ugly overlap
2. 00:40:584 - Note here?
3. 00:47:084 (4) - Extend this slider
4. 00:53:084 (1) - NC? why?
5. 01:00:084 - Slider here?
6. 01:04:584 - Note here pls.
7. 01:14:584 (8) - Move this note to x:96 y:64
8. 01:18:584 - Note here pls.
9. 01:34:584 (7) - Move this not to x:232 y:284
10. 01:46:584 (2) - Move this slider to 01:46:334

1. 00:02:084 - Start a small stream here. Why not?
2. 00:17:584 (1,2,3) - Useless overlap
3. 00:37:834 (4) - Fix this slider
4. 00:52:709 - Add another note HERE in stream.
5. 01:26:209 - ^
6. 01:41:584 (1,2,3) - Why this overlap? It's ugly